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"Lucky people have friends for the tough times. But how many are so fortunate that they have fans?" - a fan

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Over the years I've gotten some beautiful feedback from readers who took time to express to me how my writing has touched them. This section is dedicated to them. I'll post some of my favourite quotes from emails I've received from readers.

Feel free to email me with your comments and questions. I try to answer every email I get that has an actual point to it. To those who simply write "Great story!" or "Awesome!" or some such thing, I'll say "Thanks!" right here. I appreciated the compliment, but I don't normally answer the shorter blurbs.

Keep the messages coming. I deeply appreciate it.

Emails for Charlotte's Movie:

  • “This was an absolutely amazing tale. Congratulations on writing a true masterpiece of erotica. Thank you so much for sharing your vision and talent.”

  • “Stunning! abso-fucking-lutely stunning! I don’t often give out 10's, but you've got one here.”

  • “This story still amazes me when I think about it.  You have taken a plot and story details that don’t really excite me and turned them into one of my favorite all time stories. Your ability to write realistic characters and to portray their passion and love has made this a great read.  Not to mention you can really tell a good story...”

  • “Thank you for such a wonderful story...Gives me new hope for this kind of love...and new understanding.”

  • “As I type this, I am actually crying (not particularly manly I know).  It has been such a great story to read, and one of my main inspirations to start trying to write myself. One of the greatest, most emotionally capturing pieces of fiction I have ever read in my life. Your story, your sense of tension are the bar that I have set for my own work. It will be quite some time to get anywhere near there, but Charlotte's Movie is the standard for me.”

  • “This story you've written is beautiful, heart-breakingly so. Your story is human. It doesn't seek to explain, but to simply show. Even when it wants to break my heart, it is beautiful. Your characters aren't simple words. They've come alive and are the human beings that everyone wishes to know. I haven't read such a beautiful novel ever before, and I doubt I will read one of this quality ever again. Thank you so much.”

  • “I just don't know what to say. I don’t think I have ever read a story online that has touched my heart like that. If this doesn't win an award they shouldn’t have them!”

  • “Wow! You just fuckin' NAILED this one. Bravo.”

  • “The absolute finest work I have ever read on this website, or any other - Congratulations!!”

  • “Incredible story. I am sad to see it end. Thank you very much.”

  • “Wow! Brilliant, absolutely brilliant...”

  • “OMG”

  • “Great tale with a perfect ending. Thanks for all your time and effort, well worth it.”

  • “I have come to a conclusion. This was the best internet novel I've ever read, the best erotic piece I've ever read, and would certainly be in my top five of any piece that I've read. Thanks and congratulations.”

  • “Dude. I liked this story more then any other I’ve read so far. Good writing, man.”

  • “WOW!!!”

  • “Beautiful story. Made me laugh, made me cry, made me mad, made me happy, but most of all made me appreciate an author with a mega talent.”

  • “I've been reading adult material on the internet for over ten years. This is beyond a doubt, the best written story I've ever read. An absolute masterpiece. What an accomplishment. Thank you.”

  • “Reading this story is pure laughter and pleasure.”

  • “Wonderful, Wonderful.  A classic that brought tears to my eyes.”

  • “This story is one of the best I’ve ever read without qualification.  It draws you into it and you actually feel what the characters feel, the highs and lows. It is simply OUTSTANDING!”

  • “Where can I find Sheila? I want to just hold her and tell her that I love her, she's such a wonderful character.”

  • “Each chapter gets more intense. No filler chapters here. I keep thinking it’s peaked, then we go higher.”

  • “I want to know who you are. Your story makes me just want to jump on you and ride the night away. Keep it up, sexy. You're in my dreams.”

  • “You'll have to forgive me for being forward but I must let you know that I believe you're probably one of the best, if not the best authors I've ever read. Your scenes of the actual intercourse are amazing, worthy of finest stroke stories, but that's not what sets you apart. Your character development and plots do. The reason I'm sending you this is because I'm about 3/4 of the way through Charlotte's Movie. I'd already known it was the best piece of erotic literature I'd read, but I'm convinced it's one of my top five overall now. You make the reader FEEL for the characters. You can almost touch the agony that Anthony is feeling.”

  • “Thanks for being such a great author and for writing what will become one of the all-time great romantic novels.”

  • “I want to give this story an 11 and I can't.”

  • “I'm lost in admiration of this story. Awesomely written! I love the way you so superbly describe the emotions of the characters.”

  • “WOW. Oh wow. Charlotte's Movie has GOT to be one of the best stories I've ever read. Man. You've nailed it so much.... Altogether, just wanted you to know that I am in awe! THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

  • “Without a doubt, Charlotte's Movie has joined Frank Downey's ‘Dance of a Lifetime’ and Al Steiner's ‘A Perfect World’ as my all-time favourite online stories! There are only four online stories that have reduced me to tears - Charlotte's Movie being the last of them. Words fail me. Bravo. Spectacular. Brilliant. I cannot *wait* for more!”

  • “Oh boy, oh boy, what fun this story is!!! Thanks so much for sharing your talents.”

  • “Your story is a stunning accomplishment that stands out above most everything else I've read on this site. It is inspirational and powerfully moving. I fancy myself a writer - if I ever write something this good, I will consider myself complete.”

  • “FUCK! That was incredible.”

  • "Love your work, including the completed magnum opus. Keep your spirits up. Lucky people have friends for the tough times. But how many are so fortunate that they have fans?"

  • “OH MY GOD! Your story was great. You nailed Love. I was so enthralled with your story I lost all track of time and space.

    There is one thing that you need to know about me. I am legally blind. So reading your story was really listening to it read to me through a text reader. Although my computer sounds like a monotone bitch drolling on about quantum physics, your story rang through to me and touched me in places that only a few writers have ever touched me. My first love of fiction came with the book Star Wars. While the plot predictable, it fired my imagination for reading, so I started picking up every Sci-Fi book that I could get my hands on. Robert Hinline, HG Wells, Spider Robinson, Keith Williams, David Weber, and many others inspired me to try to create at least one book in my life. And now you sir have been added to this list of writers.


    Thank you for the Hope and Love that you created in your book. And thanks for the inspiration to write and write well.”

Note: The above quotes are not attributed as they were sent through an anonymous feedback system on Storiesonline.net and I wish to respect the senders’ privacy. These are all real emails I've gotten. You all know who you are. I’m deeply grateful for your kind words.