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Notes on Stories by Will Somers Just a place to comment on these stories when so motivated.

Will Somers Index

These comments are added chronologically with the most recent appearing first. I usually post them along with, or shortly after, the stories themselves. The date in US format (month/day/year) follow most entries.

My Winter Contribution

I'm posting a large batch of new items and I'm going to comment on all of them at once. Some stories have been "almost finished" for a while; a couple had been waiting years for finishing touches. 1/3/08.

• Mandy in Kowloon - Yes, they sell unbelievably gorgeous silk there. I'll take anything wrapped in that stuff! This is an old story and it's taken years for me to accept its ending: that young girl really needed to be fucked. I'm frankly uncomfortable about penetrating young girls, but Mandy didn't seem to accept anything less.

The Real Brady Bunch: Fragments of unfinished Real Brady Bunch stories have been wasting bits on my hard drive for years. This one was almost finished, so I did the deed.

• Casting Couch - The girls seem a little older in this one, especially Cindy. As I noted in the Disclaimer, there may be text from someone else's story in there.
  As I described in The Teller, I used to entertain myself by pasting good sex scenes from other peoples' stories into my own scenarios and then I'd massage them to fit. There are things about the sex scene with Jan that suggest I "imported" bits of the scene from elsewhere. But if some cut/and/paste took place, it happened so long ago that I've completely forgotten the details. My apologies to any aggrieved authors.

The Twisted Primer: This contribution brings a whole batch of new material to the Twisted Primer. For now I'm not inspired to write my naughty 'health text' for grade school children.

• Saving the Seed - There was a kid in one of my grade school classes who often whacked off during the Pledge of Allegiance. I thought it was a mark of respect. Back then, such behavior was never acknowledged, especially by female school teachers.
• A Surprise for Alice - I got requests for a return appearance by Alice. When I thought about the poor girl visiting that bakery every day or so, and maybe having a boyfriend as well, I started feeling a little sorry for her.
• The Ghost Story - this story captures a well-worn fantasy from my grade school days: a hero motif involving one or another pretty girl in my class. The heroism is pretty lightweight, but it gets the kids into bed together.
• Making it Clean - I was really expecting these two kids to get a bit farther along in their love play, but the buzzer sounded and the story ended. Sorry!
• The Movie Date - For some reason this feels like a swan song. Again, I don't argue with the muse.

Commentary: I doubt my commentaries are interesting to many people, but I enjoy writing them. I suppose The Teller is the model of what I like to write: something with some facts and/or experience wrapped around personal interpretation, opinion, and venting.

• Happy Girls on the Tube - This is a project that's been kicking around for several months. The title is a bit archaic (who uses a "tube" any more to watch video?) but I like the sound. I don't intend this to be an official 'source of ratings' for the 'Net. It's just my own unimportant opinion.

Story Codes: I have also gone through and updated story codes on older files to include 'parody' where appropriate (i.e. on most of them). I've also gone through to ensure that 'cons' is in the right place. I've used '1st' whenever there's a first time genital contact, especially if an orgasm takes place - that seems appropriate, though it may cover more ground than other uses of the code.

The Chapel Helper

This one basically wrote itself. Mary was given the job of helping Kevin in the childrens' chapel, and everything fell right into place. The time seems to be the 1960s, based on Mary's underfashions.

I seem to have fallen into writing a sort of burlesque of the didactic childrens' story - tales intended to show children how to behave in polite society, with a twist, of course. I've been looking at some '70s writings on child sexuality and they almost inspire me to rewrite the whole series. The revised series would introduce simple sex play among younger children in the first story, and progress to increasingly intimate - and sophisticated - play by older children in subsequent stories. Each story would introduce the reader to some new activity ("to try with their friends" I guess).

For some reason I find myself most comfortable writing in a voice that involves children of the mid-20th century. I'd kind of like to write something contemporary, but that's more an intellectual urge than anything else. I'm not inspired to write something contemporary, and I only like to write when I'm inspired, so I'll probably stick to stories about the 'good old days.' 5/1/07

Invisible Changes

No, this isn't a story whose title doesn't appear on the index page. It's just that I've been fixing nits in the story files.

One of the challenges of posting a story to ASSTR is to make it as visitor-friendly as possible. I try to do that with an entertaining home page, matching text files in a comfortable format, and by making judicious use of ASSTR standard headers and story codes. The down side is that I have to look out for errors and inconsistencies. Here is what I try to do:

• Post stories in both text and HTML format (non-stories are only posted in HTML).
• Make sure there are convenient links from the HTML format to the text format.
• Make sure all the text links really lead to the correct text file (this is easy to mess up).
• Construct accurate story codes for each story.
• Provide ASSTR standard headers in both the HTML and text files.
• Be sure the standard headers actually match the file's contents (also easy to mess up).
• Be sure the standard headers are consistent between the HTML and text files (very easy to mess up).

When you run your mouse over the list of recently posted stories on the ASSTR home page, standard header contents will pop up for the story you're pointing to. As I was doing that on some recently posted stories, I noticed that the header contents didn't match my expectations. So I had to go through and check them all. Today I've posted revised files. 2/28/07.

A Warm Night at Green Gables

I've been a fan of Lucy Maud Montgomery and her 'red headed snippet' Anne Shirley for years.

In a perfect universe, a girl like Anne couldn't possibly delay erotic pleasures, or necking for that matter, until she gets married at 25. Her eternally open and cheerful outlook would have to extend to her sexuality, despite any unhappy incidents from her younger days.

If Montgomery had been writing fiction a hundred years later, her characters would be as sexed up as anyone else in a modern novel. There's often a sexual, or at least sensual, undercurrent in her work. Take a look at Kilmeny of the Orchard where music neatly substitutes for sex. I'm not sure how this would appear in her childrens' books, but it's interesting to think about.

I'm hoping that I'll be inspired to write more about Anne. Maybe something comic, building on an incident like the one with the leaky boat ("Why, it's so romantic!"). 2/12/07.

The Movie Producer, 1938

This was inspired by the kids showing Jimmy Stewart how to dance "the Big Apple" in Frank Capra's You Can't Take It with You. Talk about kicky skirts! The kids are uncredited, but said to be Patty Thomas, Gloria Browne, and Dorothy Babb, the last of which turned twelve a couple of months before the movie was released. 1/4/07.

The Lost Shoes

In general, I write stories only as the spirit moves me. Once in a while I've tried to finish a story by sheer willpower before it was really ready. The results have been pretty depressing.

Becky, the main character of The Lost Shoes, is rather too young for my taste, but this story seemed to write itself. I don't argue with the muse. 10/6/06.

The "Real Brady Bunch" Series

I had written several of stories for my own entertainment by the time I got around to actually sharing some with others. The stories After Hours and Skipping Homework were posted to alt.sex.stories some time in 1992. Back then, the only Brady Bunch sex stories I'd seen were generic orgies that just plugged in the characters' names. I thought it would be more fun to include a few elements of the (admittedly cardboard) personae from the actual series.

For those who are obsessed with continuity, I acknowledge that there are bits (in addition to the provocative clothing and sex play) that just couldn't have happened in the real series. In particular, VCRs and home video play a role in some stories, even though the technology didn't really appear until a decade after the TV series. Hey, this is fiction after all.