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Stories To Be Critiqued
If you have not already done so, please read the
Story Commenting Guidelines.
Here are the stories currently up for critique.
| 88. | Slow Cruise, by Gray Beard (MF, slow, rom) |
| 87. | Taken, by Jack C Lipton (FM rom 1st oral) |
| 86. | Laura, by Altan (exhib nosex) |
| 85. | The Deal, by Conjugate (MF, oral, light bdsm, cons) |
| 84. | Keiko, by Naive |
| 83. | Hell Hath No Fury, by Alexis Siefert and Shon Richards (Myth, MF) |
| 82. | Rumors of Glory, by elle`attend |
| 81. | Winter Nights, by Dryad (MF, Cons, Fantasy) |
| 80. | Lap Dancer, by Katie McN |
| 79. | Fire, by john (love story) |
| 78. | Chocolate Knights and Chocolate Daze, by Gary Jordan (MF, rom, cons, oral, anal, light bondage, wl) |
| 77. | Denver Gwen (part 2), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal) |
| 76. | Denver Gwen (part 1), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal) |
| | Stories From Previous Weeks |
We encourage all Fish Tank members to
review as many stories as they are comfortable with. Before commenting,
read the entire story and all the comments made so far.
Remember: focus on constructive criticism. For each piece, reviewers
should post two positive comments and two suggestions for improvements.
Please, try not to repeat!
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