General Feedback
Amber VanSteenburgh wrote this: I love your stories on nifty.com. I started reading "Scent of a Girl" and then I read "Kiss My Ashlyn." They are some of the best written stories I have read. I just wanted to thank you for writing them.
Alana wrote this: By the way, Willa's Wild World is AWESOME, and I like Cyber Meets Reality, too. Hope you are well, and even better, I hope you are getting as much tan, smooth, teen pussy as Dakota Fanning! More!!!
Logan wrote this: Long time reader; first time responder. I absolute love reading your work - vividly erotic! Please keep the stories, to use the operative word, coming.
Laura wrote this: This is a general feedback to your site!
I think you're a great job in promoting a fulfilled, happy and healthy girl's life style.
I totally believe that lesbianism is the natural mainstream sexual orientation for females but has been surpressed for long time by the patriarcalic culture.
Now it's time to liberate women and let them be happy again. Whilst of course it's never too late to go lez, teenage girls should have their initiation into lesbianism before they get under the influence of the still male dominated society. This is especially true for the most beautiful, fashion orientated and popular girls which are great role models for the more shy girls.
Fortunately things are changing fast, the growing number of openly lesbian celebrities giving a good example to young girls, mainstream TV shows with great lesbian characters being more and more popular.
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Cumming Out (plus Hawaiian Style & Dakota & Twinsanity) Feedback
A. Maske wrote this: I could almost plead with you guys to bring us new Taboo TV. It's been awhile since we've seen anything new and it's starting to worry us. For a whole month there seemed to be a new story once every three days and then it all of a sudden dried up. Come on guys, I need more of that horny little butt fuck doll Dakota. I need to read about her taking the hottest young stars up the butt with her patented strap on. Tell me we won't have to wait to much longer for more material? You know what would be great? A special Halloween themed episode where all our favorite stars dress up and then get horny. I would really love that. |
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Hey Mickie, Hey Mickie Feedback
Bill K. wrote this: Ok, here's your feedback. This is a great series! It's my favorite series on this website and I hope it never ends. My only suggestion would be to include more sex. I mean we all like cute girls having sex with each other, right? Yes we do.
Dani wrote this: I just finished chapter ten and couldn't wait to review. I love it, there's girls like girls every fricken where. It's fucking amazing, I love it! |
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Jessie and Katie (in Friends and Lovers) Feedback
Jackie wrote this: i think this is the best story on this site..i love how u start the series off with jessie and katie together then at chapter 100 the have gon in completely different paths...i kinda liked innocent corey but i figured it was a matter of time before the true corey came out...kinda interested to find out wats gunna happen between passion & joey...hope the next chapters come out soon
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Kiss My Ashlyn Feedback
Angel wrote this: I love it!!! This is the first story that i've read of f/f. and I think you did a fantastic job!!
Checkers wrote this: That is like the best story!!! *squeals* Wow...I just adored it!!! I remember reading a while ago and wondering if you were going to finish and it was SOOOOOOO worth the wait. No lie. It was awesome. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story. |
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Life as a (horny!) Teenage Lesbian Feedback
Dan wrote this: I have to say I really enjoyed your story. Part 4 was really great how you go into detail about the forming relationship with Evie. I almost felt for Evie as shawna and Jen were talking bad about her. I also enjoy the fun parts of your story. The throwing of mud at each other. Is like when I met my wife and painted her face. Thanks for the Stories Keep it coming.
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Rhythm & Blues Feedback
BubbleSponge wrote this: hey, I really love your story Rhythm and Blues. I hope you continue on with it. I check daily to see if you have updated it. it makes me really sad that you haven't since august. I hope you post a new chapter up soon!
Jeanne wrote this: I've just finished reading Rhythm & Blues and would like to say this story is magnificent all the characters are well developed they are loveable and hateable (especially huggable is Gemmy) the plots are addictive. I couldn't stop reading it till ther last episode. GOOD JOB MAN!
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Scent of a Girl Feedback
Dani wrote this: this was great. i hope for more
Jay D. wrote this: awesome story. so much drama, i love it! and all of your characters are so interesting and different. cant wait to see what happens next...waits for more
Stevie wrote this: Thank you for your response to my review.It has been brought up more than once that Chloe is a black belt.That was my referenceto kung fu fighting. It looks like she is trying to be the voice of reason but with the emotions running high like they are there might be some new lines drawn and freindships made.Somewhere down the line I think someone is going to have to have Molly's back and as wierd as it might seem to some people I think that person should be Maxie. I havw a few thoughts about that If you want to know more or if you think it might be helpful let me know.Like I told the Vertman I love a good story and I think this is a good one. With all the developing characters and drama unfolding this go down as one of the classic soaps. thanks and keep up the good words.
Katherine Wilken wrote this: Hi, haven`t really given feedback on anything before but just wanted to say the `Scent of a girl` series is brilliant. Your stories are by far the best on Nifty, so don`t stop writing them, will you!
Renee Belsky wrote this: i loved the story, and i fell in love with the characters. please make more episodes?
Michelle B. wrote this: I absoultley love it. Are you going 2 finish?
Nathan wrote this: I really like your series Scent of a Girl, I practically read them all in 1day, however, I noticed its been awhile since you added a new chapter. When do you think you will add a new one? ... Keep em comming!
Nicola wrote this: So far I love this story. I'm dying to read more. I love the pairings and with all the drama it is still realistic. I also love the character development. I think so far Maxie has the most. We see a real change in her from the beginning. I like Molly but Maxie so far is my favorite Character. Its not easy to understand someone like Maxie and I am eager to learn more about her. Now after Chapter 13 I'm finding myself very curious about Cindy
Swiss-a-doodle wrote this: Hi, Instead of chatting in pvt I thought it would be easier to tell you of my review. The story you linked me too was difficult to read. I think you said someone else wrote it. Their grammar was weak and even used the wrong word at times when making a statement. It was troublesome to follow which ultimately means it was not enjoyable...at least for me. I did not look at the other links you mentioned so I can not comment on those stories. My opinion is while the story line could be entertaining, it will probably only attract a limited number of readers. In my opinion anyone over 21 may not enjoy the story. I think it is one of those that to enjoy you need to be in that culture right now. All stories will not suit everyone, that I understand, but somehow yours could have been enticed some older readers if perhaps a female teacher would have been involved with the Mintz group. As I said before, I am not one who enjoys an "in your face" type person or group, but I would think they are some that do not mind that. Thanks for giving the opportunity to read and comment, I am flattered you asked and also a good move having someone who has no real connection to you or the other writer to comment.
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The Jamie Lynn Spears "FUCK YOU" Show Feedback
Just Plain Tricky wrote this: Speaking of bitches, a new show comes to the Taboo Network universe and it's a good one.
The Jamie Lynn "FUCK YOU" Show Episodes 1-6 gives us Britney's sister as a foul mouthed bipolar bisexual slut with frenemy Alexa Nicolas as co-host, which alone should have Voodoo (CSSA member) dancing in the aisles. Nicely satirical and very sexy. (ep 1) A, (ep 2) A, (ep 3) A-, (ep 4)A, (ep 5) B+, (ep 6) B The first episode has Jamie Lynn and Alexa Nicolas, the second has them and Jansen Panettiere, introducing a boy into the Taboo Network universe for the first time. Episode 3 has Michelle Trachtenbooty, 4 has Britney but no sex, on the other hand the drama is worth the read anyway. Unfortunately it seems to lose something as it winds down in the last two episodes. I really would like to see a "second season" though.
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