THE VOODOO DUDE

Chapter 7

By Earl DeVere

(Fm, Mg, Mgg, MF, oral, exhib, inter)

Rick does Evie while Frank eats out Electra, Rick's little girl. The Rev Butt Trick dumps on his congregation when skinny dipping with Frank and the girls...

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Thursday June 17


I ordered room service breakfast.

Eddie arrived 35 minutes later. "That asshole wanted me to be his slave, and wear a fucking dog collar and leash. I ain't no body's fucking slave. I don't care how much money they've got."

"Good morning, Eddie," Charlotte said cheerfully. "Jason and I had a great time yesterday."

"Yeah. He's in love. I'm telling him that you're not 'The One & Only' type. I'm telling him that you fuck for the fun of fucking, and that he should do the same thing and not get hung up on you."

"Excellent advice," I said. "You're wise beyond your years."

"We saw two teenagers fucking in a clearing in The Jungle yesterday," Evie said.

"Yeah," Eddie laughed. "I heard about it. It scared the girl so bad, she peed on herself when she saw Chief Diamond. They thought they were in really big trouble because Ellie and Evie saw them."

"She doesn't want to be called Ellie anymore," Evie said. "She's now Electra."

"Electra?! Is that her real name?"

"Yeah."

"That is just too cool."

"Do you have time for a quickie, Eddie?" Charlotte asked. "I've become such a slut since I came here!"

"Hell, yes!"

"Do me doggy style. I love it. Your cock gets in the deepest that way."

Evie and I ate our strawberry crepes and watched Eddie pound Charlotte's cunt hard and fast.

After he finished, he wiped his genitalia with a damp washcloth, and rubbed some of my Old Spice stick deodorant into his pubes, while I licked his cum out of  my wife's hot quivering pussy.

After Eddie left, I called Rick and asked about the ATV and trailer. "The only thing we want to change is the beds. Our king and Evie's queen."

"That won't leave a lot of room in the bedrooms."

"I know. But my girls are addicted to a lot of room in bed, not in the bedroom."

"Ask him if Electra can come with us," Evie said.

"She's at the daycare center," Rick said. "I'm busy right now. I'll call and tell them to let you pick her up."

"I wanna go too," Evie said, putting her head against mine so she could hear the phone conversation.

"The ATV and trailer will be waiting for you at the storage facility," Rick said. "And Ellie. I mean Electra, will be waiting for you. She'll be thrilled. Evie is her idol. 'The coolest girl I've ever met,' she says."

"Electra's the smartest 8-year-old I ever knew. I feel like she's my little sister."

"That's funny," Rick said. "She said that she wished you were her sister."

The maintenance and storage facilities were on the southern border of the resort, just east of the employee parking lot. The Daycare center was on the east side of the storage area.

"Evie!" Electra squealed as we entered the building.

I introduced myself to the plump 50-ish woman sitting at a desk with a bank of CCTV monitors.

"You'll have to speak up," the woman said loudly. "I'm a little hard of hearing."

"I'm Frank Harris. I'm here to pick up Electra Diamond."

"Sign here," she said, pointing to a space beside Electra's name.

Electra introduced Ellie to her friends. "They don't believe that we saw the two teenagers fucking in the clearing, or that Jason fucked your mother while Daddy and me were showing you and your Daddy around the Jungle, and I told them that it's okay with your Daddy if your mother wants other guys to fuck her."

Evie gave a warning look at the woman at the desk.

"Don't worry about her," Electra giggled. "She's almost deaf. You have to nearly yell in her ear for her to hear."

I thought I caught a flicker of a grin on the woman's face as she noted the time on the check-out sheet. I suspected she wasn't as deaf as she pretended to be.

Evie walked up to the desk, extended her hand, and said, "Hi. I'm Evie. I like you."

"You'll have to speak up," the woman instructed.

Evie giggled naughtily and said in a loud voice, "I'm Evie, Electra's friend. I like you."

"I'm Frances Cavender. I own this joint. And I like you too."

"You're Frances Cavender?" I asked.

"Did I stutter?"

"I'm the new editor of the Emerald Isle Gazette."

"Gazette?"

"Beginning July first, it becomes a daily. It will cease being the Press, and become the Gazette. It sounds a lot fancier."

"And you're going to write an expose' on the O'Mafia and the resort."

"You heard?"

"News travels fast on the island. Anyone who threatens to fuck Charlie O'Donnell in the ass is a friend of mine."

"There's a Dallas Police Department mug shot of you, charged with prostitution."

She laughed heartily, "If you dig, you can probably find another one in New Orleans. I was also busted here by the Esmeralda County Sheriff's Office vice squad, but all records of that were expunged after Uncle Sean informed the sheriff that there were photos of him diddling very young black girls. No one from the sheriff's office ever sets foot on The Island in an official capacity."

"It won't bother you to have these things publicized?"

"I love it! But Fred's going to freak out. I can handle him. You do whatever it is you have to do. Fred will be embarrassed, but business will boom. Tourists will flock here to meet the infamous couple. I have an old Halloween photo of us dressed as Bonnie and Clyde, and another of us dressed as Jack Lemmon and Shirley MacLain in Irma La Douce. Shirley played a French whore. You're free to use those with your story."

"When would be a convenient time for an interview?"

"How about Saturday evening? You, your slut wife, and hot twat daughter can dine with Fred and me in the Emerald Room. Would 6 o'clock be convenient?"

"Yes, Ma'am."

"Don't call me Ma'am. It makes me feel old. I'm Fran or Frannie."

"We'll see you at six, Saturday, Frannie. Thank you."

Charlotte was behind the wheel when we got to the ATV.

"I want to drive."

"Cool. We're having dinner with the Cavenders in The Emerald Room Saturday evening."

"I'm supposed to start work at 7 o'clock Saturday. I'll be working from 7 p.m. to 7 a.m. Friday, Saturday, and Sunday."

"I'm certain your lateness will be forgiven. The boss lady specifically requested my slut wife's attendance."

"No! She didn't really say, 'Slut wife.' Did she?"

"Yes, Ma'am," Evie affirmed.

"And hot twat daughter," Electra giggled.

"The way she said it sounded more complimentary than derogatory."

"Still, I don't like being called a slut."

"But you are a slut, Mom. You said so yourself this morning when you asked Eddie to fuck you doggy style."

"Evie!" Charlotte admonished, throwing a glance at Electra.

"I already told her you want teenaged boys to fuck you to make you feel young."

I shrugged, "Frannie said that there are no secrets on The Island. She's been arrested for prostitution at least three times."

"No shit!?!"

"Not recently. When they were young and struggling to keep the place afloat."

"Dad, Electra wants to sit in your lap."

She sat, and immediately began grinding her butt against my bulge. I looked back at Evie.

She giggled, "Electra loves making men's cocks hard as much as I do."

"I don't want her father getting mad at me."

"Daddy won't get mad. He likes me doing it. I do it to my grandfathers and uncles. My grandfathers don't know that Daddy knows what I'm doing. Uncle Carl, Daddy's little brother, knows, and Daddy lets us fool around while he watches. And Uncle Carl watches me and Daddy fool around. And he knows that I do naughty stuff at the daycare in the tree house. None of the cameras can see in the tree house. There are some other places where the cameras can't see. You can rub my pussy if you want. I don't wear no panties."

"See, Mom, we're not the only sluts here."

"Rick is strict about not having sexual relations with employees. He specifically prohibits sex between supervisors and subordinates. I don't know if that would include sex acts between supervisors' family members and subordinates' family members."

"I'll ask Daddy if it's okay if me and Mr. Harris play. He already said me and Evie could have all the fun we want, as long as I tell him about everything we do."

"Electra says her Daddy has a really big cock. As big or bigger than Eddie's!"

"You've seen Eddie's cock?" Charlotte asked.

"No. I seen the bulge, and Evie said that it was this big," she said, holding her hands about ten inches apart. "Evie says that she wants Daddy to fuck her. Is it okay with you if my Daddy fucks your daughter?"

I chuckled, "Evie's Daddy lets Evie do anything Evie wants to do. Any-fucking-thing. And Evie's Daddy knows that Evie wants to fuck.  Evie wants to fuck a lot."

Evie laughed, "And Evie's Daddy wants Evie to fuck a lot."

We worked into the late afternoon, moving furniture, books, typewriter, and kitchen implements. Charlotte got everything arranged the way she wanted it, and we were heading out the door when Freddie arrived.

"I heard y'all were moving in here. I'm staying in the bunkhouse."

"Your parents own the place, and you stay in the bunkhouse?" I said.

"Pop wants me to learn the business from the bottom up, and he makes sure my supervisors don't treat me any better than the other seasonals. I think he makes them be a little harder on me, since I can't quit."

"Welcome to our new abode, Freddie," Charlotte said.

"Could we talk, Charlotte?"

"We were just leaving, Freddie," I said. "Come on, girls, let's give them some privacy. We'll see you back at the room."

"I was thinking about spending the night here," Charlotte said. "I'll see y'all in the morning."

"Does that mean that they're gonna fuck?" Electra asked as I led them down the steps to the ATV.

"Yep," Evie giggled. "That's exactly what it means."

Rick met us at the maintenance and storage facility when we returned the ATV and trailer. "Where's Charlotte?"

"She decided to spend the night in the jungle cabin," I said.

"Fucking Freddie," Electra said. "And Evie wants you to fuck her."

I said, "We know about your policy concerning sexual relations between supervisors and subordinates. What about between supervisors and a subordinate's family members?"

"That didn't occur to me when I was writing the policy. I have only one female employee; my secretary."

"So, it's not specifically prohibited by your department's policy manual."

"No, it's not. But it's something I have to consider adding. A male subordinate could give his supervisor access to his wife for favorable treatment or promotion."

"Or his little girl," Electra giggled.

"Shall we go to our room, and discuss it over some VooDoo Dude prickly pear wine?"

He looked at Evie. "Are you really the VooDoo Dude's apprentice?"

"Uncle Sean told me that Miss Burundi told him that I was. I cured him of his importance, or something like that."

"Impotence," I corrected.

"That makes you the scariest person in Esmeralda County. You are not only the VooDoo Dude's apprentice, you're under the protection of the O'Mafia."

"I don't want to be scary. I want to be sexy!"

"Shall we go to our room to discuss it?"

We went to the room, and I filled three cups.

Electra giggled, "Cocks and cunts."

"What!?!" Rick asked.

"The cups."

We had the cups for nearly a week, and never noticed the design carved around the outside. Crudely cut in high relief were alternating head-on views of the glans penis and vulva, with obvious meatus and clitoris.

"How have we not noticed?" I asked.

"I guess we were more interested in the people we were drinking with than in the cups we were drinking from," Evie said.

"Once you see it, you can't not see it." Rick said.

We drank. Evie gave Electra a sip. Rick stiffened, and started to object, then sighed, "Fuck it."

He studied the cup and said, "I can't believe that you met the VooDoo Dude your first night here, and see him almost daily. I've been here 10 years, and met him twice. I was working homicide for the SO and he found a dead body in the marsh across the intracoastal from The Island. He said that he sensed that the man's last emotions were of deep disappointment, and betrayal. He had been murdered by his best friend." he took another sip of wine.

"If it wasn't for the Dude, it would have gone down as an accidental drowning. When I went looking for the best friend, I was told that he was on vacation on a cruise ship. I met the cruise ship when it docked in Galveston. The man carrying the best friend's passport was not the best friend. He was the best friend's brother, who knew nothing of the murder plot. The murderer told his brother that he could make the cruise, and couldn't get a refund. He gave the brother his passport and ticket. The best friend and the widow, were found guilty of premeditated murder and conspiracy to commit murder. They had planned to cash in on his life insurance, sell his business and move to Rio."

"What about the second time?"

"I was investigating cocaine trafficking in the SO. It led to the top. The Dude appeared in my bedroom one night and told me that I would be murdered if I continued the investigation. My wife and daughter would be killed also. I resigned the next morning, and was hired here. I was promoted to chief six months later. Two years later, the DEA caught the sheriff with two tons of cocaine in a county horse trailer at the county fairgrounds. The DEA agent said that a little black man tipped him off. The chief deputy, who was with the sheriff at the time of the bust, spilled the beans on the entire operation."

Evie refilled the cups. "So, what about the policy about fucking family members?"

"There's no official written prohibition. But I have to be careful. There are going to be suspicions of favoritism when I promote Charlotte."

"Promote!?!" I asked. "She's not even officially an employee yet."

"One of my night shift supervisors is retiring in four months. Charlotte will be the only agent with prior supervisory and training experience. She's highly intelligent, efficient, organized, and is an excellent communicator. She'll be the best qualified agent for the job. She is also a very attractive, very sexy woman. Jealousy and suspicion will be rife." 

"Does Mom know?"

"No, she doesn't. And, I would appreciate it if she stays unaware until the announcement of her promotion."

"Does that mean we can't fuck?" Evie whined.

"I won't tell nobody, Daddy," Electra whispered. "It'll be our secret."

He looked at me.

Electra giggled, "Evie's Daddy lets Evie do anything Evie wants to do. Any-Fucking-Thing. And Evie's Daddy knows that Evie wants to fuck. Evie wants to fuck a lot."

He gulped down the wine, and Evie poured more wine, and said softly, "I know that you want to fuck me. I want you to fuck me. Electra wants you to fuck me. My Daddy wants you to fuck me."

"I'm pretty big."

"I know. Electra told me all about her Daddy's big black cock, and how much she loves jacking it off with both hands and making it cum all over her body. You're like my Daddy. You love having a naughty daughter who loves being naughty for Daddy. You love hearing her tell you about the boys fucking her little 8-year-old pussy in the tree house."

"Holy shit!"

"I don't want little boy cock. I want men's cocks. I want your big black cock in my cunt," she whispered, unbuckling his belt and unzipping his pants.

He got up and undressed. Electra undressed. Evie undressed. I undressed. Rick's cock was coal black with a purple head. "It's almost the same color as the wine. A little darker." Evie giggled as she wrapped both hands around the slightly downward curved shaft. "I love it, Daddy. I fucking love it. I think it's a little bit bigger than Eddie's."

"Tell me to suck it, Daddy. Tell me that you want to see me sucking this big black hard cock." An involuntary pleasure moan escaped my lips as Evie took the glistening purple head into her mouth.

"Suck it, Evie, Baby. Suck Rick's big, black, hard cock. You know how much Daddy loves watching his naughty slut daughter suck cock and fuck. And I know that you get off to having your dirty Daddy watch you with other men's hard cocks. I know you love it. You really love watching your dirty Daddy watching his naughty daughter with other men's hard cocks in her hot mouth and slutty cunt."

She sucked enthusiastically.

"Fuck her mouth, Rick. Fuck my naughty daughter's mouth. God! I love Evie being a fucking slut. I love seeing men look at her with lust in their eyes. I get off to watching men watching her, knowing that they want to fuck her. I believe she turns straight men and women into pedophiles. She exudes sex. She has 'Fuck Me' eyes. She seduced a septuagenarian Baptist preacher. She cures impotence. She could be a fucking saint. Literally, a Fucking Saint. Saint Evie, the matron saint of orgasmic endeavors!"

"Get down on your back," she said. "I want it in me."

He laid down. She straddled him, and slowly impaled herself on his cock. "It's so big, Daddy. It feels so good. It fills me up, Daddy. Oh, God, Daddy! It feels so fucking good. Fuck me, Chief Diamond! Fuck my pussy!"

"Fuck her, Rick. Fuck my daughter. Fuck my naughty daughter. My slutty daughter. Fill her up with that huge fucking cock."

"Fuck her, Daddy!" Electra squealed. "Fuck Evie with your big cock. Fuck her good."

Rick grasped Evie's hips, and guided her up and down, like he was using a living fuck toy.

"I'm going to cum!" Rick groaned.

"Cum in me! Fill me up!"

Rick bucked and grunted,  "Oh God! I'm cummmming! Fuucck!!!"

"Roll her over onto her back, Rick."

As soon as she was on her back, I spread her legs, and buried my face in her sopping cunt.

"Leave me some," Electra begged. "I wanna taste my Daddy's cum in Evie's pussy."

"That was incredible!" Rick said. "It was downright amazing that she could take it all."

"I couldn't take it all in my mouth. Grandma can deep throat, she could take all of it, like a sword swallower."

He shook his head, "You took a lot more than I thought was possible for you. I'm in love!"

"I want to go skinny dipping in the pool, Dad," Evie said.

"Take advantage of it while you can," Rick said. "This is your last night as guests. Employees and their families aren't permitted to use the facilities. The lifeguards go off duty at 10 o'clock. I'll give this section's agent the night off. I do that from time to time. Take over an agent's shift and give him a paid night off. I'll turn the pool lights off at 11."

"Can I go skinny dipping with them?" Electra begged.

"No." He answered immediately, then said, "Why the fuck not?"

Evie said, "My Daddy loves eating pussy. He especially loves eating little girl's pussies, especially little black girls." She told him all about the orgy in the jungle. "He gave orgasms to a lot of little girls, one right after the other.

Electra giggled, "I want him to give me an orgasm too, Daddy. I want Evie's Daddy to eat my black pussy and give me orgasms."

"I've never seen Electra with another grown man."

"You want to, don't you?" Evie said. "You want to see my Dad eat your daughter's pussy, and watch her suck his cock."

"Yes."

"Goody! Eat me Mr. Harris. Eat my pussy while my Daddy watches us."

The little black and pink pussy had an exceptionally long clit. I began my sucking it. She grabbed my head and humped my face. I sucked, and licked and nibbled and tongue fucked her pussy until she squealed. "Again! Do it again! Give me another cum!"

I gave Electra two more intense orgasms.

"I like the way Mr. Harris eats my pussy, Daddy. I like it a lot. I love it.!"

I set the alarm clock for 11, and took a much needed nap.

*****

"The pool lights are out, and there's a heavy overcast," Rick said. "I'll keep an eye out for strangers."

We had been frolicking for about a half hour when Rick came to the pool and said, "My agent needs backup at the beach bar. I shouldn't be gone long."

Within minutes of his departure, a group of senior citizens came to the pool. The half moon broke through the overcast. I was standing in waist-deep water. Evie and Electra were underwater, taking turns sucking my cock. Since the underwater lights were off, the reflection of the moon on the surface prevented the seniors couldn't see what was transpiring underwater. I tapped the girls heads, and they surfaced.

The old folks got into the water. A prune faced blue haired woman said, "This little girl is naked!"

The grating sound of the woman's voice deflated my erection.

"We're skinny dipping!" Evie said.

"This man's naked too!" another woman complained.

"You should be ashamed of yourself, mister. Corrupting these little girls."

"Blow it out your ass, lady!" Evie said.

Brother George cracked up.  "This isn't funny, Brother George. Do something about it."

A plump 60-ish woman, snapped, "What the fuck is wrong with you, Bernice!?! These people are having fun. They're enjoying life, you dried up old hag."

"Bethany!?! What's wrong with you!?!"

"Nothings wrong with me! Not now. I just woke up. What the fuck am I doing with you people? How did I get this way? I used to be a party girl," She exclaimed, stripping off her modest swimsuit. "I got life left in me, and I'm going to fucking live it."

"I'm with you, Bethany!" a scrawny old man announced. "God damnit, I'm a surfer. They used to call me Wild Man! I'm going to be Wild Man again." The crowd gasped as  he stripped out of his baggy trunks.

"Well, Damn!" Brother George sighed, dropping his trunks and fondling his genitalia. "I cannot believe how fucking stupid you people are. How can you really believe the crap in the bible is the word of God!?!"

There was a stunned silence, broken by Evie's squeal, "Reverend Butt Trick!" She climbed out of the pool, ran to him, and jumped him, wrapping her arms around his neck and her legs around his ample waist. His right hand went to her bare butt.

"I knew the bible was a crock of crap when I founded this church nearly half a century ago. Your gullibility has given me a good life. Materially, I lack nothing. Whatever I need, I charge to the church. You pay for my vacations and occasional hookers. And I truly appreciate the pussy a few of you married ladies give me, while your devout cuckold husbands are doing my bidding around the church."

A distinguished man with gray temples and a deep booming voice shouted, "Let's get away from this accursed place before the lustful demons take possession of all of us!"

"Cranston, you closet queen!" Brother George laughed. "You've been wanting to take over my ministry for years. Maybe I'll let you have it."

"Wanna come to our room and have some more wine, Reverend Butt Trick?"

"Bathany? John? Would you join me in joining my new friends, and enjoying some of their delicious prickly pear wine?"

In the room, Evie filled the cock & cunt cups, and Electra served them to our guests.

"I knew I would do it someday," Brother George said. "I've come close to doing it during the Sunday morning service. I've written several versions of my final sermon." he took a sip. "But this was the perfect setting. And being rewarded by a hug from this beautiful water nymph."

"I've been numb for years," Bethany sighed. "Just going through the motions. I discovered freedom during the war... the big one; World War Two. I became a welder in a shipyard. You heard of Rosie the Riviter? I was Wanda the Welder. I volunteered at the USO dance hall. My husband came home from the war, and found a wife who had no desire to be in the kitchen, barefoot and pregnant. I wanted to live. He divorced me. I couldn't get a welding job anywhere. The wartime 'Eat, drink and be merry' wartime mentality, was replaced by the postwar morality. We wild women were put back in our place. I bucked it for a while before giving in, getting married, having kids, and pursuing the American Dream, and trying to keep up with the Joneses. Church attendance was mandatory. I forgot who I really was until I saw these naked little sweeties."

"I was a welder too, in the navy," Wild Man said. "Stationed in Pearl before the war. That's where I learned to surf. I was there on that date that will live in infamy. Didn't get a scratch. They didn't bomb the shipyard or the fuel tanks. Big fucking mistake. I got out of the Navy after the war, back to the States. I built boards and taught surfing. Then I married a Christian bitch. Her parents were afraid I'd corrupt her. She corrupted me. Made me get a factory job, raise a family. And, like you, Bethany, pursue the fucking American Dream. A house in the 'burbs. Two new cars for the two car garage. Then the fucking credit cards. I became a zombie. You woke me up, Bethany. Thank you!"

"Everybody already knows my story," Brother George said.

There was a knock at the door. I opened it a crack and looked out. The man Brother George called Cranston, and two other men stood outside.

"We need to speak to Brother George," he said.

He stepped out and closed the door. There was some unintelligible conversation, then a boisterous belly laugh. "You can all suck my cock," Brother George said. "Read the church's constitution and bylaws. My lawyer and I wrote it, and it makes me the de facto owner of the church along with its equipment and property. It takes a unanimous vote of the board of deacons to fire me. And we know that is not going to happen, because each of you, and the others, have a secret sin you wish to remain secret. You thought I appointed you in spite of your sins. I appointed you because of them, as my insurance. I'll call you with my retirement demands in the morning. Now, fuck off, assholes."

He walked back into the room to a standing ovation.

The next thing I know, Wild Man is fucking Evie; Electra is sucking Brother George's cock, and I'm fucking Wanda the Welder, who had an unbelievably snug cunt.

End of Chapter 7

In Chapter 8 Frank offers his wife as a boy's birthday present, and little girls at daycare are introduced to Frank's magic tongue...

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