Part 21
(Mgg, gg, oral, fondle, exhib, voy)
Brian is delighted to meet Rachel, another of Nina's school friends...
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When I got home, I uploaded the SD cards, but didn't want to watch them quite yet. I saved the part with Jason and Nina, as well as the one with Wendy and I on a separate drive to watch with Tatia that evening. I felt my dick stir at the thought of sharing it with her and couldn't wait to see it with her first hand.
I quickly skimmed through the photoshoot with Wendy. It was very exciting. I felt my dick stand up to watch with me, but was too sore to make it happy. I was so tired that I didn't last long that night. I didn't even deal with emails, just crashed as soon as I had everything secured and ready to go again.
I spent the next morning working on the pics from this set and the other sets. I got a text from Jason asking for a rain-check as he was tied up. I sighed, but was also relieved. I was still pretty sore from the day before and a little time off wouldn't hurt me. When Nina arrived, she was accompanied by a cute girl that I remembered vaguely from her school.
"Hi, I remember you, you were at the show and tell."
She smiled and nodded. "I'm Rachel."
I smiled back and invited the girls to take a seat. I turned on the cameras casually and went to grab them some juice to drink. When I returned Rachel smiled as she handed me a card. When I opened it, I saw it was from Ellen, Rachel's mother. She said that they remembered the wonderful pics I had taken and wondered if I would be available to photograph their upcoming wedding. Rachel told me she was going to be the flower girl.
She was oh so cute. Very long dark blonde hair, innocent smile, she couldn't be any older than 8. It would be a lot of fun to take pictures of this little gem.
I winked at Nina and she grinned at me and asked. "Brian, would you take some pictures of us?"
I acted like I wasn't sure. "I don't know, Nina, Rachel's mom may not want me to take pictures of her without them being here."
Rachel looked at Nina with a pleading face. Nina knew how I liked to play the game and she was my little pimp.
"I don't think Ellen would mind too much, and Ricky likes to take lots of pictures of Rachel."
Rachel looked at me and nodded with a hopeful look.
I acted like I was thinking about it.
"Ricky likes to take pictures?"
Rachel blushed and nodded, sly smile on her face. Oh?
"Well, maybe just a few."
The girls giggled and hugged happily. I took several pictures of both of them. Every time I acted like I was going to stop Nina asked me if I would take a few more if she posed. I did.
It wasn't long before both girls were posing and having fun. Nina had her typical skirt on and Rachel was wearing tight, stretchy pants that looked like they belonged on a yoga mat. Before long Nina had both of them wiggling their bottoms at the camera and giggling each time. I let them talk me in to shot after shot, commenting on how cute they looked or acting like I was going to faint from their beauty.
Rachel ate it up and I could tell that someone had taken some risqué shots of her in the past by how she posed. She wasn't embarrassed like some girls were when photographed for the first time.
Then Nina lifted her skirt in the back and flashed her panties. I took the picture and Rachel giggled; her eyes full of mischief. Nina encouraged her and she pushed her bottom towards me and wiggled it slowly for me while looking over her shoulder. Nina giggled and spanked her bottom. Rachel stood straight up in surprise, then both girls were laughing and leaning on each other.
I gasped, "You better not wiggle your bottom at me anymore, I might have a heart attack!" Nina turned around and lifted her skirt, wiggling for me. After a few seconds Rachel did the same.
"My heart!"
I played it up, making the girls laugh.
I took lots of shots while saying, "If you two don't stop, I am going to get in trouble!"
Nina escalated it by flashing her bare butt at me for a second before pulling her panties up and acting like she was embarrassed, then she begged Rachel to do the same so she wasn't alone.
Rachel grinned naughtily and flashed her panties at me, bending over at the waist and sticking her bottom in my face.
"Too much!"
I eventually called a stop. "That was a lot of fun, but I think we should take a break."
Nina whined that she wanted more and Rachel nodded with her, the same pleading look in her eyes.
"I probably shouldn't, I don't want your mom to get upset."
Rachel took up her own case. "You won't get in trouble; Ricky takes lots of pictures of me."
"Yeah, but he probably doesn't take pictures of your bottom."
Her eyes twinkled. "He takes lots of pictures of my bottom."
Nina giggled.
"Yeah, but not in your panties."
She nodded, still smiling.
Nina piped up. "He even takes them when she's naked!"
Rachel blushed as she gave Nina a look.
"Nina, did Rachel tell you a secret that you weren't supposed to talk about?" I gently chided her.
Nina looked genuinely abashed as she nodded.
"You can't talk about stuff like that with other people, someone could tell on her and get them in trouble."
Rachel looked a little worried.
I smiled at her. "Don't you worry, I would never tell anyone about what you do with Ricky or anyone else if that's what you want to do."
She seemed relieved and her shoulders relaxed a little.
"I'll tell you what, since Nina told your secret I will tell you one of mine. I really liked seeing you in your panties and Nina's bare bottom. You can't tell anyone though or I'll get in real trouble."
She smiled and nodded. "I won't, I promise."
I smiled back at her and confided, "He is a lucky guy to get to take pictures of you like that."
She blushed prettily and giggled, loving the attention.
"Okay, I will take some more pictures if you girls want, but you don't have to show me your bottom if you don't want to though, Rachel."
She blushed again and looked at Nina.
Nina, no longer looking abashed, turned around and flashed her bare bottom at me. Rachel pulled her pants down and flashed her panties. More giggles, then Nina did it again, then Rachel, then both together. They spanked each other and then Nina pulled Rachel's panties down, giving me a great view of her ass. She had a strawberry birthmark on her right cheek about the size of a quarter. Rachel squawked and covered it with her hand while she pulled up her panties with the other, blushing furiously.
Nina was rolling on the couch now laughing. After a minute Rachel attacked her, pulling her panties down. I enjoyed the show as the girls worked each other's panties off until I had an unobstructed view of both girls. Rachel kept trying to cover her birthmark and I set the camera down to help her attack Nina, first giving her a hand by pulling her panties up in the back.
She shot me a grateful look before focusing on Nina. I love watching Nina's face when she gets excited. As we tickled her all over, her eyes were sparkling in pleasure. I rolled her onto her stomach and pinched her bottom while Rachel spanked her. I was turned on like crazy watching Rachel spank her. Nina giggled and moved her bottom all over. I pinched her in-between the spankings and she clenched up each time.
When Rachel pinched her bottom, I started spanking her softly. Rachel seemed very interested in what we were doing and I smiled encouragement to keep going. We alternated between tickling, spanking and pinching Nina's bottom. Nina wasn't giggling any longer, she was enjoying it now. She humped the couch with each pinch and arched her back for each swat.
I saw Rachel sneaking peeks between her legs whenever she thought I wasn't looking. Was she into girls? The thought of that made my heart thud loudly in my chest. I started to notice that whatever I did, Rachel copied. After a good ten minutes of playing around, I took a chance and tickled between Nina's thighs. She immediately spread her knee to the side to give me better access. I tickled lower and then Rachel did the same. I pinched her bottom, she copied. I took it slow, exploring Nina while Rachel copied me. I caught her peeking at me and she blushed. I winked and tickled Nina high up on her inner thigh, then nodded encouragement to Rachel. She grinned impishly as her hand slid between Nina's legs. I trailed my fingers over her cheeks, Rachel did the same.
Rachel didn't seem to have any limits, regardless of what I did, only peeking at me on occasion to get my approval, which I gave happily. Nina gasped and humped the couch when I eventually slid my finger down her slit, followed by Rachel.
"Does that feel nice, Nina?"
Nina nodded her head against the couch and when I smiled at Rachel, she smiled back. We took turns touching Nina until she was trembling all over. I finally sat down on the couch and pulled Nina across my lap, rolling her onto her back as I did so. Her mound was gorgeous as it arched over my lap. Rachel knelt down in front of me and I spread my knees apart so she could move closer to the couch.
Nina had a smile on her face and her eyes were closed. She was loving the attention!
I smiled at Rachel as I softly ran my fingers from Nina's knee up her inner thigh and over her lips. Nina gasped and spread her legs apart to give me better access. Rachel smiled back at me then did the same. We touched and explored her together for a long while before I asked her softly.
"Does Ricky touch you like this?"
She hesitated and looked at me quickly before looking away. Then she nodded, looking a little ashamed or guilty.
"Do you like it?"
Again, she hesitated before nodding.
"You are both lucky to have each other. As long as you are enjoying it there is nothing wrong with having fun."
She glanced at me, looking to make sure I was being serious.
"But in school they tell us that that is bad."
We were still touching and fondling Nina, giving lie to their words.
"Do you think it is bad?"
She shook her head.
"Does Ricky make you happy?"
She smiled and nodded.
"Then it is not bad, you just can't talk to other people about it. But you are always welcome to tell me anything, I would never betray your trust."
She smiled saying, "Thank you."
I took her hand and kissed it. "Ricky is a very lucky guy. I would love to see you nake... Umm... sorry, I shouldn't have said that."
She blushed and giggled, not pulling her hand from mine. I kissed it again and then used my other hand to touch Nina. She did the same, letting me continue to hold her hand.
It was very erotic holding her hand while we both teased Nina. Nina moaned when Rachel copied me sliding my finger between her pussy lips and rubbing her clit. I asked her, "Does Ricky touch you like this?"
She shook her head.
"Would you like him to?"
Her eyes sparkled and she giggled. "Yes."
We played with Nina until she was trembling all over. I could tell she was getting close.
"I like your birthmark."
Rachel glanced at me in embarrassment. "I hate it!"
I was surprised. "Why?"
She shrugged before eventually answering. "My mom said it's ugly because it looks just like my dad's."
That angered me. "She was probably just upset at him when she said it."
She nodded, not fully believing it.
"Well, I think it is adorable and I bet Ricky does too!"
She blushed and smiled shyly, shrugging to deflect the feelings.
I had just run my fingers over Nina's clit when she gasped and whimpered, letting me know she was very close.
"Have you ever cum?"
She looked unsure and shrugged. She didn't know what that was.
"Rub Nina right there and don't stop and you will help her to cum."
She did. I watched her fingers rub small circles on that delicate piece of skin until Nina began to shudder violently and start bucking on my lap. I encouraged Rachel to keep going when she hesitated. Grinning, she did.
Nina came hard and I saw the smile on Rachel's face.
"You did awesome, Rachel! She loved that!"
She was all proud and smiled ear to ear. I looked at the camera and shook my head in amazement. Nina was still breathing heavily, her chest heaving. I ran my finger up Nina's pussy, gathering up as much of her pussy juice as I could before sucking it off my finger. Rachel watched me and only hesitated a second before doing it herself. Her eyes lit up in surprise.
"She tastes really good, doesn't she?"
She nodded and copied me as I did it again, then again.
"If I show you something, do you promise not to tell anyone?"
She nodded quickly, curious and eager to see.
I smiled and slid out from under Nina, then leaned down and kissed Nina's flower, earning a gasp. Rachel's eyes went wide and her mouth dropped open.
I nodded to her and gestured towards Nina. Rachel looked torn for a minute, but I saw two spots of color appear on her cheeks a half second before she leaned down and copied me.
I smiled when she giggled, her eyes dancing.
I did it again, then she did too, over and over. I loved hearing the soft sounds of enjoyment coming from Nina.
I took my time planting soft kisses and Rachel would watch me then copy at the same speed. Her face was definitely flushed now and she watched as I knelt down right beside her and lifted Nina's leg over to the other side of us both so that Nina was spread open in front of us now.
I used two fingers on my right hand to spread apart Nina's lips. "Isn't that beautiful?"
Rachel couldn't take her eyes off of it and nodded slowly. I brought my thumb up and gently teased Nina's clit. She gasped and humped the air.
"Touch her," I encouraged.
She did, earning a moan from Nina. She smiled as Nina humped against her touch. I leaned down and licked up Nina's open pussy.
"Mmm, she tastes so good!" I smiled at her and nodded for her to try, hoping that she would.
Rachel looked back and forth between my mouth and Nina's pussy without making a move.
"Do you want to try it?"
She wasn't sure.
"You don't have to. It just feels really good to Nina.
"Doesn't it honey?"
Nina smiled and nodded her head lazily, eyes still closed.
Rachel hesitated a few more seconds, then pulled her hair over her shoulder as she leaned down and tentatively gave her a lick. Nina gasped and spread her legs wider.
"She liked that. Doesn't she taste good?"
Rachel pulled back enough to look at Nina's spread open pussy before nodding and doing it again without waiting for me. Nina whimpered and humped the air.
"You can help her cum again if you keep going, Rachel."
Rachel licked her softly again and then again. She seemed to be enjoying what she was doing, pausing every once in a while to look at Nina's pussy before going back to licking it. It didn't take Nina long until she shuddered once more and came.
I saw Rachel hesitate for a few seconds before she licked Nina even more. I knew that Nina was a sopping mess and could tell that Rachel was beginning to like the taste. She didn't seem inclined to stop so after another minute of her licking Nina, I softly ran my hand up her back, outside of her shirt. She hesitated for a brief moment before going back to licking. I heard her breathing a little heavier as I continued to tickle her back.
"Is this okay?" I softly asked. She nodded, not lifting her face.
As I always do, I began to push the boundaries. She gasped when I slid my fingers under her shirt and tickled up her spine. When I got to the nape of her neck, she shivered deliciously.
"Does that feel nice?"
She made a sound of assent, never taking her mouth away from Nina, who was once again starting to breath faster, moving her hips in circles. I ran my fingers down her sides and along her ribs. Trailing along the waistband of her pants. She shivered when my fingertips teased the upper half of her bottom.
"Do you like that?"
"Mmhmm."
She moaned softly when I slid my fingers down the back of her thighs and up the other cheek. She didn't react when I moved behind her. Her ass looked incredible in those tight pants while bending over to lick Nina. I began running my hands over her bottom and thighs, along her hips and waist.
I could feel her tremble and move her hips along to my touch. I was really surprised when she didn't react as I slid my fingertip under the waistband of her pants. I began to slowly work her pants off her hips, being careful not to pull her panties down. I don't know if she would have even cared at that moment, because just then Nina was cumming again for her.
I took the opportunity of the distraction to pull the pants down until they were pooled around her knees. I was beyond excited at this point and ran my fingers all over her back and panties. She moaned and made little whimpering sounds. I could feel how turned on she was herself. She gasped and lifted her mouth off of Nina when I slid my hands over the outside of her panties and down her ass until I touched her bare thighs.
She looked back at me and I smiled.
"Do you like that?"
Her face was flushed and she had a feverish look in her eyes as she nodded.
"If you will trust me, I will make you feel good like Nina does."
She watched my face as if making sure this was right to be doing. I nodded encouragement once again, then I saw as she made her decision.
"Yeah." She breathed before looking back down at the pussy she had been licking. I watched her mouth descend once again and Nina gasped. I slid my hand over her bottom a few more times, enjoying the feel of her tight little ass before I slid my finger down the outside of her panties down to her pussy. Those panties were soaked! She gasped as my finger touched her where I knew many men had wanted to, but didn't think anyone ever had. She arched her back and moaned against Nina.
I brought my fingers to my lips and tasted her.
"Mmm, Rachel you taste so good!"
She didn't respond and didn't care as I rubbed her and licked my fingers several more times. Her hips were moving non-stop now. When I slid my fingers into the waistband of her panties and got ready to pull them down, she stopped licking Nina and grabbed them to keep them up.
I let go. "I am sorry, I wasn't trying to upset you."
She was flushed and embarrassed.
"Was I bothering you?"
She shook her head.
"Is it because of the birthmark?"
She hesitated for a second then nodded, not meeting my eyes.
"I think it looked beautiful. Would you trust me enough to let me look at it? Please?"
She thought about it for a bit before I heard the vulnerability in her words. "Promise not to laugh?"
I smiled and nodded.
She sighed and closed her eyes before lowering her mouth back to Nina, who was looking up at her with desperate eyes. Who knew how much she would enjoy being pleasured by a classmate? Nina lifted her knees to her chest, giving Rachel better access.
I felt Rachel clench her cheeks as I slid her panties down in the back. I groaned as her beautiful little rosebud appeared between her cheeks. I could feel the tension radiating off of her and looked at the birthmark. It was very cute on her. I leaned over and kissed it softly. She gasped and clenched up even more for a few seconds.
"It is beautiful."
She relaxed a little bit so I kissed it again and again until she began to believe it. I continued to kiss it in an ever-widening circle until I was kissing her bottom all over. She no longer seemed to care, even when I separated her cheeks enough to kiss between them. I worked my way lower until I planted a kiss directly on that sweet pucker, tasting the muskiness and sweat from a day at school. She gasped and clenched her butt cheeks before relaxing again. I planted several more kisses directly there and could hear her moaning and making whimpering sounds, much like Nina was doing.
When I licked up her crack she squealed and tensed up before thrusting back against my mouth. I licked her again and again. She was breathing hard now. I could hear the air rushing out of her nose as she continued to bring Nina closer to yet another orgasm. I kneaded her bottom with both hands while spreading and licking her.
"Do you like that?" I asked finally, lifting my mouth off of her.
"Mmhmm!" she whimpered; her mouth buried between Nina's lips.
I lifted her foot up onto the couch, exposing her pussy for the camera. I slid my finger between her lips, feeling how wet she was. After licking my fingers clean a couple times, I began to lick from her pussy to her ass. She didn't last long. She shuddered harder and harder until she froze stock still, only little tremors running through her as I licked like mad. Then it crested and she shuddered violently from head to toe, crying out loud enough that I almost worried about someone hearing. There was no mistaking the sound.
She came so hard she farted in my mouth. I don't think I had ever been turned on so much! I didn't even know why! She humped her hips back against my mouth as I kept her cumming for a good minute or two, until she reached back and pushed me away. I backed off, watching her sprawl across Nina's stomach, breathing hard and covered in spit. She was covered in red spots from my scruffy face and I liked it, wondering what Ricky would think of it if he ever found out.
I saw Nina watching me and she gave me her beautiful smile when our eyes met.
"Did you like that?"
She giggled, ear to ear smiles.
I winked at her and leaned down to kiss Rachel's birthmark once more before standing up. Nina's eyes went to my very obvious erection and smiled at me as she worked to extricate herself from under Rachel.
Rachel looked a little dazed as she pushed up until she was kneeling again, then she sat on the couch next to Nina. I took a good look at her pretty pussy as she slowly pulled her panties back up. She looked up at me and blushed shyly. A sweet smile on her face.
"I liked that," she said softly.
I smiled replying, "So, did I!"
Nina sat on the edge of the couch and reached for my shorts. I let her, seeing Rachel watch what her hands were doing. Nina tugged my shorts down until my dick sprang free. Rachel gasped, her eyes going wide as she stared at it.
Nina looked at her and said, "We have to make him feel good too."
Rachel was unsure, but didn't say anything, just watched Nina begin to stroke me with both hands. Rachel looked up into my face and blushed when I smiled at her. Despite her misgivings, curiosity got the better of her and she scooted over until she was sitting next to Nina, watching her hands slide up and down me.
After a minute or so, Nina tugged me towards her and said, "Here, you try."
Rachel didn't move, looking very unsure.
"It won't hurt you. He made you feel good, you know," she said with exasperation.
I saw her hesitate and look up at me.
"You don't have to do anything for me, Rachel. It is okay."
Nina wasn't having any of it.
"I'll do it then."
She smiled at me as she stroked like a pro, pausing every once in a while, to kiss the tip. The first time she did it, Rachel's eyes almost bugged out of her head when a strand of precum stretched from her lips to my head. Nina giggled at her reaction and told her to taste it, that it was good. At first, she looked horrified, but after a bit I saw Rachel start to relax and she leaned closer to watch as Nina would stroke me for a bit, then kiss or suck on it just a little. It was like she was trying to teach Rachel what to do!
When Nina tugged me towards her the next time and told her to try it, Rachel did. She was hesitant at first and her hands jumped back at first contact, but she eventually touched it.
"See? It is really soft," Nina encouraged.
I saw Rachel's face break out into a smile and she giggled, her hand beginning to touch and explore me. She was a different kind of girl. Kind of bold and shy at the same time. She had licked another girl willingly. No, that wasn't right. She had insisted on licking another girl. I watched her confidence grow and she began to stroke me hard.
"Not so hard, you will hurt him!" Nina exclaimed, making her slow down and showing her what to do.
Rachel looked up at me with an apology, then all on her own Rachel leaned over and kissed the tip then tasted her lips. She did it several times before licking the precum off the tip. I gasped, not expecting that soft tongue. Her eyes looked far off for a bit before she looked at Nina, smiled and declared, "It tastes good!"
Nina giggled and nodded with her.
Rachel licked me several more times like a lollipop, the last time while looking up at me.
"Does that feel good?"
Smiling I answered, "It feels very good!"
She smiled back at me and kept looking up at me while she licked me like she was trying to get to the center.
Nina took a hold of me and milked a big drop of precum out. Rachel leaned down and licked it off, earning a groan from me.
"Try this," Nina suggested, then took a hold of me and brought my cock to her mouth, sucking on me several times before pushing me back to Rachel. Rachel looked up at me as she did it. I groaned again; this girl had no idea what she was doing to me! They took turns sucking on me. I caressed their cheeks and smiled at them whenever they looked up at me. Nina began to play with my balls and then soon Rachel did as well.
I could feel myself getting closer and Nina saw my face.
"He's going to cum!"
Rachel was sucking on me and didn't know what that meant. She kept going and I gasped.
"Nina, you better take over!"
Nina nodded. Rachel pouted a little as Nina took my dick away from her and slid her mouth over it. Rachel watched avidly as I began to climax. Nina's mouth worked me expertly until I felt my toes begin to curl. Nina took Rachel's hand and brought it to my dick. I groaned as I felt her fingers curl around me, my shaft pulsing in her grip. Her eyes went wide at the feel of it and she looked up at me in amazement.
I saw Nina swallow once, then she let it fill her mouth once again before cupping her hand under my dick as she took her mouth off of me. Rachel watched in awe as Nina's hand filled up with my cum and dribbled over and onto her leg.
She looked at Nina as she opened her mouth, showing her the cum inside before she swallowed and opened her mouth again to show it was now empty. My little girl was incredible! Nina lifted her hand to Rachel's face. I could see that Rachel wasn't sure about it at all.
"Taste it."
Rachel shook her head.
Nina frowned. "He made you feel good. You could at least try it."
Rachel let Nina coerce her and she leaned forward until her tongue darted out and tasted it. She sat back and I saw her mouth work as if trying to decide about the taste. I could tell she wasn't overly thrilled.
Nina giggled and said, "It tastes better after you do it lots and lots."
Rachel looked at her asking, "You do it lots and lots?"
She giggled and nodded rapidly. "All the time!"
Rachel looked up at me and then back at my softening penis. Her eyes drew down in a frown. "It's getting smaller!"
Nina giggled again. "That's because we made it happy!"
"Oh."
"Taste it again!"
Rachel did. In fact, each time Nina offered it to her she licked a bit more off of her palm. She still didn't look totally convinced, even when she had cleaned Nina's palm of it all. I chuckled and caressed her cheek. "You don't have to do that anymore if you don't like it. I am happy that we got to play together though. Did you like me licking you?"
She blushed as she smiled and nodded. "It felt so good!"
I chuckled. "You and Nina can practice with each other whenever you want, just make sure you don't tell anybody else."
She nodded, serious now. "Okay."
I grabbed my shorts, but Nina leaned over and kissed the head, then looked at Rachel until she did also. They both kissed it several more times, then they each licked the tip until they were both giggling.
I chuckled as I pulled my shorts up and helped the girls get their clothes back on. I tickled and pinched them quite a bit I will admit. They both seemed very happy as they headed over to Nina's place.
I collapsed on the couch and looked at the camera in amazement, how on earth did it escalate to that? I stopped the video and went to upload it to the tablet, feeling my hands shaking. I knew that I would gladly share it with Tatia, I just hoped she would be okay with the ending.
I sighed.
I would soon find out.
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