Here are some of the comments I have received for my stories. I have gotten so many nice e-mails since I started writing. Thanks to everybody who has taken the time to send me a note. I try to reply to every single piece of mail sent to me, it just takes me a while sometimes.

Of course, some of the e-mail I recieve is really raunchy. I can't print any of those here. I wouldn't want to offend anybody with the naughty words and obscene things other people have said. (smirk)

"Hot Stories: Maria Gonzales

Sometimes there seems a great rift between great writing and sexual heat. Wordsmiths trying to make sex into a socially acceptable art form often turn it into the most boring rot imaginable.

Not so in the work of Maria Gonzales. Her prose is straightforward, honest, sexually hot and devoid of all that flowery drivel that mars much of what passes for erotica these days.

There's strength showing in the themes Maria chooses to tackle. In Every Girl Has Her Price a man manipulates a woman sexually for money. How many women could take that theme on and make it work as a hot piece of literary smut without apologies to Politically Correct Feminists?

Maria is beside herself in the aptly named Beside Myself , a story where the naive Maria meets her older, sexually wiser self.

Read the work of Maria Gonzales. Then ponder the fact that English is a second language for her.

Samuel Beckett wrote in a second language because the difficulty of it forced him to search for the very best words. It worked for him and it works for Ms. Gonzalez, and I leave this section cursing myself over my slothful language skills. "

James Martin - About.com Amateur Erotica Guide

- At Home Dares

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 328"

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- Reviewed in "Rogue Reviews 372"

- A Sexy Story

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 334"

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"It's the best story I've seen on ASS in years."

"Why? Well, Celeste said it best in her review (three 10s in case you missed it), Maria set up the story so you can skip right to the good parts: the Viper and the Yamaha bike. You don't have to wade through lots of mush to get there, either."

"Is it perfect? Hell, no! I mean... Really! Can you believe a writer writing herself into the script? She did. Honest!"

"Can you believe a writer changing the sexual orientation and physical description of her main characters *in the middle of the story*!? She does that, too."

"At base, though, it's the finest send-up -- and the best-written -- of the routine postings on ASS I've ever seen."

Morgan

- A Starlet Christmas

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 380"

- Certified

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 380"

- Every Girl Has Her Price

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 329"

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- Reviewed in "Rogue Reviews 391"

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- Reviewed in "Review-lite - What David Thinks, 18"

"Every Girl Has Her Price" (M/F,exhib) by Maria Gonzales

"Only Maria could make a story this sexy and fun start with the phrase, 'Do you want fries with that?' Kyle makes a proposition to Juana, a cashier in a burger joint. Seems he likes to see how far people will go for money, and gets her to do more and more outrageous things for cash. It starts out simple enough, remove her bra and give it to him, walking back through the restaurant with her nipple showing through her thin uniform. It builds until she's doing all sorts of wonderfully nasty things. Kyle has done this before and has the videos to prove it. Juana is hesitant at first, but he quickly finds her price. The only problem I saw with the story is that Juana is a bit more trusting than I would think someone might be in her position. Beyond that, I enjoyed it very much."

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"I love this story. I just recently discovered the wealth of great erotic material on the net, so this is the first story of yours that I have read. It was excellent. I have sampled several writers (Anne747, Janey98, M1ke Hunt, Miss Behavin', just to name a few) This is the most exciting story I have read so far."

Scott

- Everything Goes - The Game Show

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 361"

- Mall Strut

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 339"

- Only Way Out

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 346"

- Partners

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 340"

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- Reviewed in "Rogue Reviews 437"

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"I must say I was impressed. The sex was hot and the story was better. My little brother is a police officer back in New York and your characters would fit right into his world."

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"Your character of Officer Felicitas Ramirez was quite interesting, you really cared about what was happening to her and are happy for her at the end."

Ann Douglas

- The Interview

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 347"

- Telemarketing

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 368"

- The Maid

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 323"

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- Reviewed in "Rogue Reviews 348"

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- Reviewed in "Review-lite - What David Thinks, 18"

"The Maid" (M/F,exhib) by Maria Gonzales

"Maria writes fun stories. She's gotten better over her short time on these newsgroups (no jealousy intended in that statement :), but all of her stories I've read so far show sexy characters having fun with sex. In this story, the maid at a hotel decides, Isabel, to tease one particular patron, John, by dressing more and more revealing every time she makes up his room. This does not go unnoticed by John, who responds much the way Isabel wants him too. This story is a lot of fun and Maria makes it more than just a simple stroke story. She teases the reader as well as John."

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"Just a quick note to tell you how much I enjoyed 'The Maid'."

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"Great set up, terrific tease, nice slow development, good images. I give it 2 boners. Actually, to be technically accurate, I gave it 2 boners. One yesterday, one today. ;)"

M1ke Hunt

- Witches

- Reviewed in "Celestial Reviews 373"