Your eyes lower a little, because you know he's going to propose something sexual, and you just listen, saying nothing.

You're sitting on a hot, lonely beach somewhere, with a new man. You don't know him all that well, but you know you want him.

You have a basket of goodies with you, and you take out a small plastic container of strawberries, half coated with milk chocolate. You open the container, and hold it out to the man to take one. He reaches his hand out, and then withdraws it, looking into your face.

"Umm... Listen, that would be great, but could I suggest something?"

Your eyes lower a little, because you know he's going to propose something sexual, and you just listen, saying nothing.

"A swim. I'd like to swim in the sea with you. I know we have nothing to wear in the water, but I don't mind if you don't. The thing is, when we get out, and you are warm again, I'd like some caramel with my chocolate strawberries..."

You stand then, still saying nothing, look into his eyes, and slowly begin to remove your clothes. He stops you, without speaking, and then takes over, gently undoing your buttons and clips, sliding cloth against your skin, grinning in surprise to find you have no bra, smiling as you wiggle your bottom so your skirt falls to the sand. He looks for confirmation before hooking his fingertips in the sides of your panties, and pulls them down your unresisting legs.

Naked now, you start on him, but his nervousness prevents him from letting you do it alone, and you have his unwanted help with some of the items. Soon though, you have him in a similar position, his briefs stretched by a bulge, his pale face red with comfortable embarrassment. You return the favour of glancing at him for permission, and gently pull the front of his briefs over his erection. His large cock springs from its prison, and makes its presence known. Seized by an irresistible desire, you touch it, stroking your hand up and down its length as his briefs fall unnoticed to the sand.

He has the presence of mind to stop you, knowing you'll never get to the water, and you skip over the sand together, hand in hand, and not speaking at all.

The water is beautifully warm, but chilly for a moment after the hot sun, and you both shiver as the waves pour over you. Your nipples poke excitedly from your breasts, and you can tell his eyes are on them as you cavort in the waves.

Despite the beautiful surroundings, the wonderful water, and the handsome company, you don't stay in the water very long, wanting instead to find out what exactly he meant by his comment, so you take his hand, and pull him uncomplainingly back to the shore.

Walking up the sloping sand with him, hand in hand, you notice that his erection has recovered from the cold water, and his dripping body looks delicious.

Back at the spot where your clothes were unceremoniously dumped, he grabs his shirt, the only thing remotely suitable, and tries to gently dry the water from your body. He is successful only in tickling you, and you stop him, holding his hands in yours, and planting a thank-you kiss on his wet lips.

He encourages you to lie down on the sand in the sun, ostensibly to dry out, and as your skin temperature rises to match the heat you feel in your thighs, he reaches into the basket, and removes one of the strawberries. The chocolate on the fruit is already warm from the sun, and as he straddles your hot dry body with his wet, pale, hairy one, he touches the strawberry in the valley between your breasts. You can feel hot slippery chocolate melt on to your skin, and you sigh with anticipation as he slowly slides it down your body, leaving a hot, sticky trail of chocolate, with a hint of strawberry.

The fruit slowly works its way down past your ribs, and on to your stomach. The path is drawn into, and back out of, your navel, and down further, until the last of the chocolate drips off into the start of the dark thatch of hair between your thighs.

You shiver now, almost coming with the delight of it all, and he smiles at you again before presenting the now almost naked strawberry to your lips. You bite it, tearing off the stalk, which he throws carelessly aside before quickly kissing your strawberry chocolate lips.

He lowers his face then to your breasts, and you feel him begin to clean up the mess he made, his rough tongue and smooth lips touching your skin in just the right way, and you sigh again.

He takes his time then, slowly working his way down the chocolate trail, his wet hair dripping occasionally on your hot skin, making you shiver again and again. You can feel the smile in his mouth as you shake beneath him, and still you say nothing.

The journey down your chest and stomach is wonderful, though without incident, and you could almost manage to consider falling asleep in the heat with the attention that is being lavished on you. Almost, but not quite. His tongue eventually reaches your belly button, and you are suddenly wide awake. Normally, you find any attention here to be ticklish, but this time, as his mouth makes love to your navel, you feel the heat rising in you, and your hips start to thrust beneath him. He takes no notice, and continues to clean you, and you wallow in the feeling, shut out the rest of the world, and come. A shuddering, long-winded release of tension that is prolonged by the continued journey of his tongue, south, toward your most sensitive parts.

Before you have fully recovered from the orgasm, he has reached your thatch, and is cleaning the remainder of the chocolate. He keeps heading south, bypassing your aching clitoris for a moment, licking your labia, despite the complete lack of chocolate, opening you with his tongue, searching for nerves that he couldn't possibly know about, pushing every button you have, enslaving you with his caresses.

Your body is desperate now, and you wrap your legs around his handsome neck, and pull him close, willing his tongue to your need. He takes notice finally, and winds his tongue around your hard clitoris, taking the whole area into his mouth, sucking and licking you until you feel you can't stop. Your thighs are thrusting as best they can, and your whole body is concentrating on the very tip of his tongue. Just as you know you are there, he stops, just for a moment, and when his tongue again touches your clitoris, you explode beneath him, your body unable to hold back, and you come again, harder and deeper this time, a succession of almost painful contractions which only slowly subside.

You realise your legs are clamped around his neck, and you release him, your muscles aching delightfully. As he climbs off you, his hand reaches back into the strawberry container. You reach for his arm quickly, and stop him, pushing him to the sand, on his back, before jumping up and reaching into the basket yourself.

You pull a single, hot, slippery, sticky, chocolate covered strawberry from the container, and turn to him, smiling again, your caramel skin glowing in the sunlight.

"Just lie there. It's my fucking turn!"

Feb 2010
This one is so good I am sending it to my

Feb 2010
WOW! The slow descriptive detail you provided heightened the entire experience of the story. Like all good stories (and experiences for that matter) it left me wanting more.

Sep 2008
I adored this story. Very sweet (pun intended).

Sep 2008
I was wondering where he got the caramel...

May 2008
This story still makes me wet... ;)

Feb 2006
Nice. Just once, I would like for a woman to instruct me in the art of oral pleasure- tell me how women like it done!
      GBF: You've tried asking? :-)

Dec 2005
caramel huh.?, nice. Thanx
      GBF: Passed on to Gentle for comment.

Aug 2005
... ah, summer, chocolate and strawberries.. sigh.
      GBF: Agreed

Jul 2005
Very, very nice. . . . pleasant reading. . . wo I wonder what she did with her strawberry. . . There are so many, places that a strawberry can be used. . and then eaten. . . .
      GBF: Glad you liked it.

Jul 2005
alright
      GBF: alright? :-)

Jul 2005
mmmmmmmm am interested in the turn around is fair play, getting off as I do seeing the pleasure of a man.. being a woman... I want to know more of what happened NEXT!!lol.. lovely mouth exploring the texture and tastes of male flesh, reveling in sighs and
      GBF: Yeah, but if I spent more time on this, something else would have to suffer!

Jul 2005
nice gentle story but would love to read a conclusion
      GBF: Wouldn't we all. :-)

Jul 2005
What can I say except that I'm surprised. This is the first story of yours I have read in which the characters don't say a word to each other. However, I didn't miss the conversation at all in light of all the tasty descriptions. Most of all I enjoyed the
      GBF: You have any idea what that does to me? :-)

Jul 2005
Mmmmmmm....delicious....but A navel orgasm? How I wish it was so easy..... A man must use his cock and tips to achieve orgasm and the clitoris is a six inch organ running along top of the vagina wall. The clit is the counterpart to the penis tip/h
      GBF: I debated putting so much of your comment in... I'd be interested in any other opinions AFTER reading the story. No one else has ever mentioned this as a problem.

Jul 2005
This was awesome, keep up the great writing. Your my new fan.
      GBF: Huh? Maybe you mean you are mine? :-)

Jul 2005
Well-captured verbal painting of feminin sexual fantasy!
      GBF: And what about the guys?

Jul 2005
There IS something to be said for chocolate covered strawberries, isn't there??
      GBF: Yeah, in the summer at least...

Jul 2005
wow that was extremely sexy...I'd like to see it go further!
      GBF: Further? What could you mean?

Jul 2005
I was looking up information on how to dry out strawberries and was pleasantly surprised. Wow, my heart beat fast, and I tingled. I will have to check out more.
      GBF: Hell no, keep 'em damp! :-)

Jun 2005
Mmmm... sex and chocolate pudding- two of my favorite things! As usual, you redefine romance and make it real. I can't say enough good things about this story! It is at the same time silly and seductive, tender and torrid. It just goes to show you that
      GBF: You know, you give very good feedback. You should leave an address, so I can tell you!

Jun 2005
Mmmm... makes me wish the Godiva store was open all night!
      GBF: I've got chocolate!

Jun 2005
You know I love your writing, so when I read something and I know it's up to your usual outstanding writing but I somehow (personal turn offs- reading fiction in second person and food with sex) didnt get me as excited as your writing usually does, that d
      GBF: You're not alone, with regard to this... But then read some of the other comments!

Jun 2005
it was sooooo beautiful and erotic...whenever i will eat chocolate or strawberry...i will always think of this story
      GBF: Oh boy... The responsibility! :-)

Jun 2005
Wow, that was great.
      GBF: Yeah, but was it as good for you as it was for me? :-)

Jun 2005
all i have to say is holy hell, when is it my turn, lol!!
      GBF: Depends on your credentials!

Jun 2005
very.very.hot
      GBF: :-)

Jun 2005
This was a very passionate and erotic story ... i give it a ten . I loved every word of it !
      GBF: Thanks a lot.

May 2005
i didn't really enjoy this story at all. bad ending, nothing really specific either, didnt go for nearly long enough.
      GBF: Sorry to hear that. Maybe one of my other stories would suit better?

May 2005
That was cute
      GBF: So was this!

May 2005
EXCELLENT
      GBF: :-)

May 2005
My oh my... If only it was I, feeling this strawberry wandering in the valley between my breasts... I'm aching for the salty skin + sweet chocolate taste on my tongue! More please! Also: I have found the gentle in you, but where is the firm?
      GBF: The firm is in other stories, I think you'll find. :-)

Mar 2005
this story is sexy an it turned me on and like i say in the feedbacks i do i love gentle stories and this one i love the oral part of it
      GBF: You got an oral thing?

Mar 2005
Cute. Short enough?
      GBF: Yeah

Mar 2005
Lunchtime now, needed a quick snack...strawberries seemed to have satisfied my hunger. For now, at least. Thanks again.
      GBF: You already commented on this one!

Mar 2005
On the spot writing you say . . . well my comment is that you hit the spot all right. Well done! a ten unless a higher score is possible.
      GBF: Thanks.

Mar 2005
Love the way you draw it out! The greastest pleasure is feeling lucious thighs pressed against my ears as your lovely fingers in my hair are guiding my hot tongue into your delicious pussy!
      GBF: Did I say anything like that?

Mar 2005
Excellent. Great description and imagination.
      GBF: What, so nothing for grammar and spelling? :-)

Mar 2005
Where is this beach and how do I get there? :) Such a seductive story!
      GBF: You realise you have to take your own chocolates? Oh, and man too?

Mar 2005
An excellent start of a new story (I assume). But what about the background of these two seemenly matched couple? I enjoy reading about their powerful sex but wonder what kind of people they are to so casually meet on a beech and then engage in such stron
      GBF: Start? No, no, no. That's it. :-)

Mar 2005
My, my, but the temperature has risen.

Mar 2005
Hi Gentle......the farther I got into the story, the more I needed my wife. Alas....She's asleep, and I had to make do until I could read the story to her. Very good....10 again.
      GBF: Hey, nothing wrong with that, so long as you make it up to her tomorrow!

Mar 2005
i felt very imaginative while reading the story. i suggest more excitng story
      GBF: Well, I have 70 there to choose from. Some of them must be more exciting...

Mar 2005
Slow, sweet, smooth, but with a bit of hidden texture to it. The story tastes like the title. And like the title, you can't have just one!
      GBF: :-)

Mar 2005
O Yes!!! I could fee; the heat of the sand under me. I could almost feel his tongue inside me. It was so good. And then I came. So hard. You are wonderul!
      GBF: Oh, well it was worth it then!

Mar 2005
Short but delicious...I myself love foodplay...

Mar 2005
It makes me want to have some Chocolate Strawberries.. Great storie!!!
      GBF: Get some! :-)

Mar 2005
OOHHH, so that's how it should be done. I should have been clued in a while ago. If I get another chance, I'll be prepared. It was very loving, very hot, and very descriptive.
      GBF: Yeah,, just like that. Now all you need is a beach!

Mar 2005
A very nice quickie that brings back very fond memories of chocolate...on strawberries, firm breasts, and even firmer cocks. Now, where did I put that syrup?
      GBF: It's just there, on the shelf.

Mar 2005
Very good, but I must admit the closer I got to the end ... ... We all like those spontaneous moments. I am glad you were so descriptive in describing her feelings as he enjoyed her body to the fullest and best way possible. Keep up the good work a
      GBF: Thanks. Sorry to snip your comments, but I don't want to give anything away

Mar 2005
not bad i just posted a short story of my own should be out tomorrow or next day it s called Kim and Denise More than Neighbors anyway good luck and Keep Writing
      GBF: Good luck to you too!

Mar 2005
VERY NICE!!!
      GBF: THANKS!

Mar 2005
Wrong time for a HOT story. At my place the temperature is about 1 degree Fahrenheit (-17 degr.Celsius) and at my office was the temp. this morning around 15 degr. Celsius (? 60 Fahrenheit). I can just dream about sand and sea, but the sun is shining,
      GBF: Quite obviously the best time!

Mar 2005
Great quick insightful story line. Well written (as usual) and a lovely way to spend an afternoon. Living near such a beach here in Australia you wouldn't believe how real to life that story is *smiles and chuckles* .
      GBF: The same applies here in New Zealand!

Mar 2005
Gentle,I have to hand it to ya.Ya are very good at what you do!
      GBF: By God, that was quick. I only had the story up there about three minutes. You stalking me? :-)

Mar 2005
Oh My God!! Oh My God!! Oh My God!! Oh My God!! That is one sexy story! I love it. ....i just wish someone (anyone!! haha!) would make love to me like that:)
      GBF: Thanks for the enthusiasm, and the comments.