Annie Died The Other Day

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Published: 29-Aug-2012

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annie died the other day

never was there such a lay -
whom, among her dollies, dad
first ('don't tell your mother') had;
making annie slightly bad
but very wonderful in bed
- saints and satyrs, go your way

youths and maidens: let us pray

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Stepdaddy

well done. too few readers of poetry, I fear.

arachnophile

I agree; poetry doesn't have the appeal it once had; nice poem; thanks for writing and publishing it

englishperv

What a little gem (as was Annie, we must assume!). Elegant and frank, and somehow feels real. Powerful and deliciously shocking little snippet.

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