My Secret Girlfriend

[ Mg(9), cons, 1st, inter ]

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Published: 5-May-2013

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This is totally fictitious. None of this really happened. I am new to erotic writing, so any suggestions to help me improve would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

I am a forty year old male and I have a secret girlfriend. My wife and I have been married now for twenty years. It is no surprise that we have drifted apart, but what is surprising is that I have a nine year old girlfriend. It started out innocently. My wife and I were called upon to baby sit our neighbors daughter. She called us one evening and asked us to watch her daughter because her husband is in the hospital due to an automobile accident. We agree to watch Tomika, five minutes after my neighbor arrives she realizes that they only have one car. Mrs. Thomson asks my wife if she will take her to the hospital and bring her home. I tell my wife that I could handle watching Tomika and to go on.

Mrs. Thomson says to Tomika, "You behave and listen to Mr. Johnson."

"I will," says Tomika.

I tell her to go upstairs and take a bath and that I would be up shortly to check on her. I give her five minutes and I hear her screaming. I rush upstairs to the bathroom.

"What is wrong, honey?" I ask.

"I saw a mouse over there behind the sink." She replied.

"I will set a mouse trap." I go to the cupboards and get a trap and set it. I return to the bathroom with the trap and place it behind the sink. Little did I know that Tomika had set her own little trap.

"Is that better, sweetheart?" I ask.

"Yes, Tomika replies. "All done," says Tomika.

I tell her to stand up and I will wrap her in a towel so she can dry off. She does as I tell her. I turn around and I see the prettiest hairless pussy I have ever seen. I let out a groan and Tomika just smiles. She then says "you can touch it if you want, no one will ever know."

I tell Tomika that it is not a good idea for me to do that.

She says "my daddy said your wife ain't put out for over five years so you are bound to be horny."

She reaches down and rubs my cock through my shorts. Then she says "not only that your penis is telling on you right now." I lift her up out of the tub and carry her to my bedroom. Tomika squeals as I put her on my bed. I look at her perfect little body, soft and nubile.

I strip my clothes off and climb in bed next to Tomika. I lean over and kiss my nine year old lover passionately and she tries to match my passion. As I am kissing her, I start to rub her nipples and her pussy. She lets out a soft moan. I continue to rub her pussy and kiss her. Tomika is moaning softly as I start to finger fuck her. I am totally aroused as my white finger is going in and out of her black pussy. Tomika starts to move her hips up and down as I feel her pussy pulling my finger deep into her virgin cunt. I feel her cunt trying to milk my finger, trying to suck cum out of it. I am totally turned on by this.

I get over Tomika and I start to lick her cunt, and finger her at the same time. As I lick her slit, I occasionally go up and suck her clit into my mouth. This drives her crazy. It is not long before my lover lets out a shriek and has a mind shattering orgasm. Tomika looks at me and mouths the word WOW. I start moving my body towards her body and my aching cock is right at her virgin entrance. I look at my lover and she nods, then I slowly enter her pussy. I get the head in and I encounter her hymen. I pull out slightly and gently enter her again. I feel her hymen and then I lunge forward, taking her virginity in one quick stroke. My lover lets out a scream that would have shattered the windows (thank god the wife wasn't home) as her hymen is ripped to shreds. I lay still letting her body get used to having a cock inside her.

As I feel her relax I start to fuck my cock in and out of her pussy. She is amazingly tight. Tomika starts to moan as I push my cock into her pussy, I touch the end of her pussy her cervix and she winces a little as pain goes through her little body. I look down at the site of my big white cock pushing in and out of this beautiful black girl's pussy. I just smile at her and she smiles back. It is not long before my little lover has an orgasm, as she does it sends me over the edge and I fill her pussy and womb with my hot fertile sperm. I just stay inside her and start fucking her again. I start pounding her baby puss with reckless abandon and Tomika starts squealing as my cock goes in and out of her pussy. I fuck her through three more orgasms before I fill her again.

We are laying there in our post orgasmic bliss and the phone rings bringing us to our senses. I answer the phone slightly out of breath; it is my wife asking if everything is ok. I assure her they are. She tells me that Tomikas father is in surgery and that they were going to be there all night until it is clear that he is out of danger. My wife tells me to put Tomika in the guest room and she will be home around ten the next morning. I go upstairs and make the bed in the guest room and put an alarm clock in there as well. I set it for seven am.

Tomika comes into the guest bedroom and asks who was on the phone.

"It was my wife, sweetie" Your father is having surgery he is going to be ok. Your mom and my wife are spending the night at the hospital and will be back tomorrow morning, I said.

Tomika just smiles and then says "I have you all night long to myself."

"Yes you do sweetie, but let's make the bed in the guest room so when they come home in the morning you are found there and I am in my bed."

"You are so bad," Tomika replies; as she blows raspberries at me.

"I am not, and stop blowing raspberries at me." I reply jokingly.

"Can we do anal tonight?" Tomika asks.

"If you wish my love," is my response. "Now let's go to your house and get you some night clothes." We return to my house with two changes of panties, a night gown and her pillow pet. I tell her to go put her change of clothing in the guest bedroom and I would prepare a meal for us. Tomika comes back down in her night gown that is two sizes too small for her and no panties, her night gown coming down to just above her waist. I do a double take when I see her standing in my kitchen naked, with exception of her night gown. Tomika just giggles at my reaction.

"I am going to have to loan you one of my tee shirts so the women won't get suspicious when they come back in the morning." I say to her.

"They won't be honey," Tomika says. "Mr. Johnson can we keep having sex after tonight?"

"We will continue as long as you want to," I reply.

"Will you marry me someday?" Asks Tomika.

"What are you getting at here," is my reply.

"Well I know your wife does not love you and you have set the standard so high that I am going to compare my future boyfriends to you." "But I only want you for the rest of my life." Is Tomikas response to me.

"Tomika I love you so dearly, I am just waiting until my daughter gets married before I leave my wife, and I would consider it an honor to have you as my bride."

"Really! I can't believe it. I will spread my legs for you only and I will never turn you down, ever," is Tomikas response to me.

Tomika comes over and sits on my lap and kisses me. I respond to her kisses and kiss her back. She reaches down and starts playing with my hard cock. I tell her we need to eat something besides each other. She laughs and gets off my lap. I go and get the food and put it on the table. We have our evening meal, clean up the dishes and head to the guest bedroom. Once in the bedroom we start making out. It is not long before that skimpy night shirt is off and I am naked beside her. I start kissing her and she responds to my kisses by letting out little moans as my tongue slips into her mouth. I reach down to her crotch and it is soaking wet with anticipation and my cock is leaking copious pre-cum.

I tell her to lie on top of me and put her pussy on my mouth and to take my cock into her mouth. With her little body lying on mine I am treated to her little hairless pussy again. I start to lick her pussy from top to bottom with an occasional lick of her ass. My little lover lets out a soft moan around my cock. I continue eating her and fingering her pussy with an occasional finger into her ass. Every time my finger enters into her ass my lover lets out a little squeal. I roll us over to where she is lying on her back. I push my cock towards her entrance.

As I enter into her tight pussy again, Tomika wraps her legs around my waist and her arms around my back. I start fucking her slowly and then I increase my speed. Tomika's legs wrap tight around my waist pulling me deeper into her cunt. As I am fucking my little lover I just can't believe that this girl is in love with me. It is not long before we both have another orgasm, this time together. I am totally spent and Tomika tells me she wants to wait on the anal. I tell her that was ok. We cuddle and fall asleep; an hour later I wake up and wake up Tomika. I tell her she needs to put on an old tee shirt of mine. She complies and I tell her good night princess and kiss her. She tells me she loves me and kisses me good night.

I retire to my room, around two am I hear Tomika at my door asking to sleep with me. I pat the bed and she comes over and snuggles next to me, we drift off into sleep. We are awakened the next morning by my wife and Tomika's mother. I tell both of them that she crawled into bed with me while I slept. Tomika gets a disapproving look from her mother and I come to her defense.

"Let's be fair to Tomika, she was concerned and needed some security." "So cut her some slack, please."

"I am sorry, Tomika," say both women.

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Philip Spencer

This is a second rate story barely worth reading.

While I did not notice any technical mistakes, the language is stilted (I doubt the author knows what a contraction is, although most people use them all the time when speaking) and includes such gems as a nine-year-old virgin saying, 'Can we do anal tonight?'

I've heard of gratuitous sex (indeed, many readers come to this sight precisely because of it), but this author uses gratuitous race. The story code includes 'inter,' but I cannot discern any reason why race comes into the equation. He makes one brief note that Tomika, his heroine, has a black pussy. Such a revelation does not move the story along one bit.

I did find one line I liked: She says 'my daddy said your wife ain't put out for over five years so you are bound to be horny.'

Amazing! He even uses a contraction!

Naked General

I could give a damn about contractions, all I know is that I can find contractions in novels written and edited by professionals, so the hell with that ridiculousness. My problem with the story was; you thinking we would not want to know why this girl, at age nine, was privy to information about your marriage, and why her father, if he was not molesting her himself, would say such a word [horny], and then, at nine she would know what horny meant!? The sex build up was cool, but at nine, she is able to take dick, with no lubricant of any kind, always troubles me. I know these stories are for entertainment, but damn, a scootch of realism would have been nice, as it pertained to the sex and dialog....A child new to sexual contact, think you placing your mouth on their vagina is disgusting, and they are so usually stunned by that action, they do not even react. Had you told me you kissed her on the stomach, played with her feet, and she came to orgasm, would have been more believable then you making her cum with your penis...Her vagina at nine, is not nearly as sensitive as a mature females, who we all know are harder to get off, then a man charged with a sex crime on Law and Order SUV........I have your other stories, this one seems to be thrown together, sorry.....

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