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Thank you for your consideration. -------------------------------------------------------- Readers Theater (MF, rp) by Holly Rennick (jlrennick@yahoo.com) *** An FFfm drama for spoken voices. Are we getting a bit literary? Perhaps yes for erotic literature, but not at all for theater. Thespians like novelty. For a school play, however, stick with Charlie's Aunt. *** AUTHOR'S NOTES: Just for the fun of it, I rewrote a portion of my "Writer's Notebook" for Readers Theater. We'll just call it "RT" to dodge arguments about an apostrophe. If you're not familiar with the RT genre, think of an old-fashioned radio drama with the performers gathered around a big clunky microphone. It's not theatrical in the stage sense because it's all in the reading. Unlike Broadway, you can sip your Co-op Fair Trade coffee before you as Eponine follow your heart toward the Parisian barricades. Your lover's impassioned "Vive le revolution" soliloquy remains, of course, total theater. Better put down your beverage. Your living room is likely your stage. If, as is often the case, the readers are their own listeners, do pretend that an audience is there; you'll have more fun performing. RT is in fact also performed on the actual stage where the readers face the audience. If you get to that level, good for you. I myself choose fun over fame, though if offered a suitable role with an off- Broadway troupe... You aren't just your disembodied vocal chords. Let attire and props invisible to the audience enhance your spoken delivery. In this script, a simple hairbrush keeps popping up. Find one. Let's suppose your role in this script is the boy Zak. Perhaps you see him as one of those teenagers we see wearing baseball hats backwards. (It's an anti-establishment manifestation, along with the $100 sneakers, I believe). Wear a backwards Farm Aid bill cap yourself. If the other readers can't keep a straight face, what do you care? You're a teenaged kid, not a middle aged CPA. Unless you're tethered to a microphone, let mobility assist your expression. If, say, your role were that of an axe murderer, help your dalliance sound dastardly by getting out of your comfortable chair. This script lacks an axe murder, I must confess, but perhaps you'll have one in some later reading. RT script doesn't always tell you when to sound alarmed, when to speak through tears, etc. You thus become a creator, not just a performer. They say that what's left out of the musical score gives a Broadway tune its brilliance. Verbal pauses speak their own parts as well, leaving the listeners believing the actions were more than implied. Perhaps they were. What sounds might define such moments? While you shouldn't swing an actual axe to create the cacophony of a murder, some activities lend themselves to the overlap of performance and reality. Certainly a real kiss does. No? Try a scene where RT lovers simply kiss their own hands for the noise. Dead in the water! Improvisation can elevate the intensity of a scene far beyond the bounds of the author's skeleton dialog. Be careful, however. The author wrote the story and may not want an axe murder inserted. She may, however, enjoy more passion than her sterile call, "[Kissing]". Working off another's script is a common way for new authors to test the waters. If you have a fundamentally changed the plot, though, change the title. If the axe thing just has to happen, this one could be re- subtitled "A spoken drama for one male and three female voices and a large hatchet". If you haven't read "Writer's Notebook", don't go there yet. You'd see that the RT version takes a different tack. First see where the RT version leads, reading the script several times. You'll better envision the characters with each pass. The picture that voices paint may be more engaging than the paragraphed story. For this performance, you'll need four voices: Two female schoolteachers in their 20's: Cindi [C] and Holly [H], and Two teenagers: Zak [Z] and his sister [S]. Sister's lack of given name isn't important by intent, but script eccentricities provide reviewers something to mine for subliminal significance. Was the author herself robbed of her identity? Could it be that...? Pondering makes reviewers feel meritorious. The script suggests occasional sound effects. Add your own, too. Those that distract from the spoken lines, however, might be better left to the imagination. If anybody's willing to try this as performance, do let me know how it goes. Tell me for real. Proofing's always appreciated, for sure. Each scene's characters and settings are as follows. Act 1 Scene 1. Z, S; Family room. Scene 2. Z, S; Bedroom. Scene 3. H, C; Lunchroom. Act 2 Scene 1. Z, S; Family room. Scene 2. H, C; Lunchroom. Act 3 Scene 1. Z, S; S's bedroom. Scene 2. H, C; Lunchroom. Act 4 Scene 1. Z, S, H, C; Z's bedroom. Scene 2. Z, H; Woods. Scene 3. H, C; Lunchroom. If you're a little overweight and have a few gray hairs, who cares? Think back to how you thought, how you talked when you were your character's age. Sex, of course is really important, but not as important as it seemed back then. So let's go back there for a little bit. ACT 1 Scene 1. Setting: Family room, a few years in the past. Background TV sound. RT setup: Z and S should read from a sofa. H and C, having no lines in Scenes 1 and 2, should be offstage to avoid inhibiting Z and S's spontaneity. S: Hey Zak, this show's boring. Let's do something. Z: OK. Like what? S: I don't know. Chinese checkers? I'll make some goofs. OK? Z: Not Chinese checkers. S: How 'bout Alien Investigators? Z: Is that a game? S: Sorta. Roberta told me how. Z: How? S: Well, one of you is the Alien Investigator and the other is the Earthling. Z: So what do you do? S: Investigate. Z: OK, I guess. S: Let's play upstairs. Come on! Z: Do we fight enemy aliens or anything? [TV clicks off. Stairsteps. Door opening] Scene 2. Setting: Bedroom. RT setup: As in Scene 1. S: Who gets to be the Alien Investigator? Z: I don't even know how to play. S: 'Cause you're just in fourth grade. I'm the Alien and you're the Earthling. I'm from Zenafu. Let me get my stuff. [Footsteps leaving and returning. Door locking. Small items dumped onto dresser] S: OK, Earthling. This is a mind control zapper. If I zap you, you have to do what I say. Z: It's your hairbrush, but we're pretending, right? S: Right. Zap. Double Zap. Z: Oh, oooh. I'm dead! S: No, idiot, you're just stunned. I have to investigate you. Z: OK. S: First I need to read your mind with my Space X-Ray. Z: Space X-Ray? S: Use your imagination. Your name is Zak and you live on South Jefferson and you have one sister. Z: You knew that. S: No I didn't because I just beamed you up to this spaceship. Z: OK. S: Now I have to look inside your body, Earthling. Let me aim... I hear your computer. That's your Earthling heart... I see that you breathe air... It appears that you eat Skittles... Z: Don't poke so hard. S: OK. Now take off your shirt for body testing... Good... As we suspected, your body lacks armor against Martian guns. I'll now test your temperature by total measurement. Lie on the spaceship table for Test 234. Z: On top of the covers? S: Shoes off. [Two thumps. Mattress creak. Z may lay back on the sofa with S seated at his side.] Z: Hey, you can't do that! S: Yes I can because I applied mind control already. Your stomach can't feel anything. Z: Well not so low. Don't. S: Quitter! Z: I'm not! S: So let me do the Alien test on your legs. Z: Not so high. S: It's 753. Normal. You've got a bump. Z: A what? S: A bump, right there in the middle. Z: That's not fair. S: It part of the Alien Examination, if you have any bumps. Z: Well, leave it alone! S: I have to test it. It won't hurt. I have to make sure you didn't sneak a secret laser weapon onto my ship. I'll just check it with my Xerob defractor. Z: It's not a laser weapon. You know what it is! S: It won't take long, just a few slides with my defractor. Z: No fair, that's your hand! S: Same difference. It grew! Z: Because you're tickling it. S: It's an expandable secret ray gun. You're an enemy spy. I have to torture you. Z: Let's not play this game. S: Lay back down. I need to finish my Alien Investigation to do my report to the Space General. Should I rub harder, Earthling? [Fabric stroked.] Z: What if Mom comes in? S: She won't. Now lift up your butt. Z: No way! S: Lift, before she hears us! Z: OK. OK. [Zipper and sliding fabric] Z: Don't pull them all the way off, though. S: How interesting. Earthlings wear clothes inside of clothes. Lift again. Mom won't know, I promise. Z: You promise? [More sliding fabric. Murmurs] Z: I said not all the way! S: Have to. See? It wouldn't be like that if you didn't like to get investigated. If you keep trying to wiggle away, I'll stop... That's better. [Giggles] Z: You're making it do that. S: You have a really good space weapon, Earthling. How does it work? Z: You know, to pee. S: You have to show me, Earthling. Your Alien Examination score is 39, which means that you can be a Rocket Ranger! Z: You don't have to stop testing if you don't want to. S: Kinda like this? [Rhythmic sounds.] Z: Yeah. S: You gotta say please. Z: Please. S: Please Space Princess. Z: Please Space Princess. [Rustling sounds. While S may have resorted to enactment to assist the dialog, it is crucial that Z not contain his response.] Scene 3. Setting. Lunch hour in a mid school faculty lounge. Background sounds may include muffled conversations, chairs pushed back, silverware, class bells. RT setup: C and H face each other. C: I'm not telling who she is, but I'll tell you who he is. Did you ever have Zak Gaston? H: Zak in ninth grade? Seemed pretty average in seventh-grade English. What's the attraction? C: Well, he isn't perfectly average, if you catch my drift. Sitting where he sits in Science of Life, I pay attention. H: Like how? C: Like how often he's thinking of human biology, shall we say? H: You can tell? C: He moves little bit, you know, but the bulge stays. H: Well he's just a kid. C: I guess, but he tries to cover his lap if I lean over his desk and show him a little topside. H: The "little" part is accurate, girl. C: Rub it in will you, Holly. H: If your dates would give me a turn. C: You're so cruel. Were you Cinderella's stepmother? H: Her stepsister, actually. C: Well anyway, the girls in ninth know about Zak. H: How so? C: Well, the rumor going around was that he was a virgin because he was too big for any ninth-grader. Truth be told, it was just one girl and they chickened out. Lots of ninth-graders have had sex, you know. H: Life's not fair. C: Hang in there, Holly. We're not buying you a device yet. So anyway, three girls felt Zak at his sister's slumber party. First they wanted him to play strip poker, but he wouldn't. He knew they'd rig it. H: It'd be easy. C: The thing is, you should cheat fair so everybody gets naked together. Like who wants to see a naked guy if you're still dressed? H: I'd volunteer. C: Holly, the voyeur! So three of them snuck into Zak's room in the middle of the night and held the cover over his head so he couldn't tell who. They sat on him and teased till he got hard. He couldn't help it. They had a ruler, so there must have been a bet or something. They pulled his PJ's all the way down so they could measure his balls even. After he got his erection, they were nicer. One girl had him squeeze her tits while they did their thing; he liked that part. The last one rubbed herself across his cock, but he didn't shoot, when they were there, anyway. H: Good. If they got the goods on him, they'd start bagging him everywhere, like in the band room. C: He knows it was three because they took turns. At the last, they just covered his eyes and each kissed him. They left three pairs of panties on his pillow. So high school girlish, right? Except for their giggles, the whole thing was perfectly silent, them and him. H: Poor kid. C: Poor us, the way I see it. He's pretty sure who two were, the way they blushed next morning. His sister could be the other, he suspects, because she's started getting these videos when their folks are out. Did you ever see "Undercover Agent Uncovered"? You should. H: Ever see "Les Mis‚rables"? C: OK, OK. I'll spend the big bucks and go with you. Dressing up will be fun, but you have to translate. H: I told you already, it's in English. C: Anyway, where were we? Zak's sister just wears her summer nightie, even though it's winter, and scoots right next to him on the couch. H: Bra? C: Sometimes when they start watching, but she'll go to the bathroom and ditch it. H: And she'd let other girls grope her little brother? She's a weirdo. C: It's not weird at all; it's just not talked about. She'll just hop into his lap in the middle of the movie and get him to wrap his arms under her boobs. During a seduction scene, she'll snuggle deeper so his erection fits against her crack. He has one constantly. H: Wonder why? C: You promise I'll like that "Les Miser..."? You know what I mean. H: It's really romantic, as opposed to "Uncovered Agent", I expect. C: There are different kinds of romance. H: I'll buy you a decaf at intermission. It's like $2.25. So what about Zak? C: She'll even say things about the movie like, "I'll bet she never tells," or, "That one would be a way to start." H: Why not just say, "Let's do it too, dear brother of mine?'" C: Good point. To get more comfy, she'll move his arms up until he cups one through her nightie if he doesn't act intentional. He can bump her nip, but shouldn't squeeze, if you get the difference. Or she'll tug her neckline out enough for him look right over her shoulder. She looks too. H: Tease the guy to death! C: Well, he does sort of like the cuddling. He's just a guy. H: With his sister? C: It wasn't your fault you were an only child. If Zak puts a pillow over his lap, she tries to wrestle it away. "Pervboy peaked and got a biggie! We can't help how we get sometimes, can we?" That kind of stuff. H: Poor guy probably wants to slide under the sofa. I say look, don't discuss. C: She'll crawl right on top of him in the battle. If a button comes loose and a boob pops out, she claims it doesn't matter because they used to take baths together anyway. They still could. He has to button her back in because she says he undid her on purpose. H: Would they take their rubber ducky? C: And when her gown rides up, seeing her panties doesn't matter either, she says, because there's nobody else around. H: Like you wrestle in your little panties and he doesn't see everything? C: He sees enough. When he touches her tit in the wrestling, she kind of pauses and raises her arm before trying to escape. If he touches her butt, she giggles that he better not spank her. He's spread her when he was pinning her, but not long enough to do anything. His touches aren't all accidental, you know. H: Don't blame him for this, Cindi. C: She tries to touch him too with her leg. Or maybe the side of her arm will get there. Like with her tits, it's supposed to seem accidental. H: This is going somewhere it shouldn't. C: Not really. They end up with her thigh on his cock, his hip against her mound, more-or-less even for a makeout, anyway. Nothing really gets anywhere. She's probably watching his breathing, seeing what's working. H: Just a matter of time. C: And then Zak found her Valentine's panties in his dresser, bikini ones with little red hearts. H: Like their mom can't sort their laundry? Right! C: When he threw them in her room, she asked if she should wear them next time, even if they don't stay up very well. Talk about bold. She was the third girl, alright. H: And Zak slept with a teacher? C: This teacher heard a version of the slumber-party story, and decided to help with his virgin problem. He's tried to see this teacher's tits in class, so he's not gay or anything. She can tell which boys are ready. H: He's nowhere near eighteen. C: So this teacher got Zak to help in her book closet and let him steady her on the stool. Then she put his hand on her sweater, her Kashmir. She'd teach him how to make love if he'd kiss her, she said. Pretty straightforward, don't you think? H: Pretty. C: He was nervous, but he kissed her. She tried to work her leg between his to check him out, but he was too scared to let her. They made a plan for Saturday. They're still getting together. She lets him brush her hair afterwards. H: As I said, life's not fair. C: After this teacher seduced him on Saturday, he told her how his sister was messing with him. I guess having sex helps teacher trust. Her boys often tell her things. Is "seduced" the right word if he agreed? H: Close enough. Her boys? There are others? C: It's not like a bunch or anything. Kids need to talk to someone. H: I see where you're going - sleep with our students to build trust. C: No way! If you fucked the class, it wouldn't be special and you'd be back to square one. H: OK, so the teacher found out about Zak-boy's home life? C: This teacher has an interest in sibling relationships. H: Well she's going to get her ass fired. C: You know, Holly, at least three faculty are having affairs with students here, two men and one woman. H: I can see how for the men. We always see their panties. And their training bras are so loose. C: So you agree? H: Those girls learn it from the movies. R means rentable. Look how they adjust their blouses after they get off the bus. Their little push-up bras and all. They're after the boys and get a man, I suppose. C: So why the double standard? H: It just seems weird, a female teacher. C: Sex is often a bit complicated, right? H: You know, it's good we agree on at least one thing or we couldn't be friends. C: We also agree that brushing you hair keeps it thick. Loan me your brush for a minute, while we're sitting here. H: I think this is how I get lice. C: Very funny. Thanks. Anyway, Zak really likes his sister. He's spied on her, pretty well actually, but it just makes him hornier. She knows, too. Would you leave your door open a crack at bedtime, turn away right when you get naked, hop under the sheet and play with yourself, him still peaking in? The girl's cruel! Well, maybe she's smart. He should slip in and finish her off. H: They'll have a six-fingered baby. C: That inbreeding thing's exaggerated, but I totally agree don't get pregnant. H: That's three agreements. C: That's why we're best friends. [Quick kiss and giggle] H: Not that kind of friends. C: I know, Holly, but it's fun to push your buttons. Speaking of playing with your buttons, want me to, you know...? H: Why sure, darling Cindi! I could just lean back right here and you could bend over and... C: OK, you win, but I did make you blush, right? H: Molested in the lunchroom! I'll sue the District and you get a quarter. C: Half. How'd we get on this? Zak two problems: One, even after that Saturday with the teacher, he wasn't that good. Two, he doesn't know if his sister'll go along. The first one's where this teacher's helping out, right? Zak needs regular lessons from a certified graduate. H: For educational use, as we say in the profession. C: So how to get his sister to agree? Here's my plan. It's porn video night. They're already on the sofa, nobody else around. H: We'll make this the RT Act 2. C: Start writing this down. By Cindi Barton, playwright. ACT 2 Scene 1. Setting: Family room. S and Z sitting. RT setup: S may sit in Z's lap for better delivery. Z might brush S's hair to set an atmosphere of sibling familiarity. Z may unfasten several of S's buttons as the script progresses. As in Act 1, Scenes 1 and 2, H and C should be offstage to encourage Z and S's creative interpretation. S: Jeeze. That was some video. Z: Do you think it was, you know, real? S: It would be hard for the guy not show his, you know, if it weren't, you know. Z: I don't think it lasts that long for real, usually. S: It probably helps to really know the other person. Z: Maybe that's the problem with Lara. S: You guys do it? Z: Shoot, no. We're just in ninth. S: So what's the problem? Z: She's kinda frustrating is all. S: So she won't make out? Z: You're a girl. She just pecks. S: Well what are you doing for her? Z: Whataya think? S: So show me. Z: Here's the way I know... [Muffled kiss] S: Not bad. Z: Here's another one... S: Well you deserve more than a peck back, then, maybe like this... [Caresses] Z: Actually, I'd rather not even bother with Lara. Come here. [Rustling and breathing] S: We're just fooling around, right? Did your Lara fall for that one? Like your hand's just accidentally on me? Z: Like you nipple's not hard? S: I forgot we were just fooling around, maybe. I guess you can undo a few buttons if you kiss good. Z: We'll just pull it open a little bit. S: You shouldn't do that because you're not my boyfriend. Z: Oh. S: But we could pretend. Z: Let's just slip it off. S: It's not like you haven't seen my bra before. Z: That too. S: We've got time, you know. Z: Let me do it. [Garments falling] Z: Jeeze. Yours are really beautiful. My own sister's! They want a kiss? S: Nope. Z: Sure they do. S: OK, if you're careful. You gotta take your shirt off too... Naughty little brother. Just lightly. Z: Let me get where I can do it better. S: And Lara just lets you get between her legs? Z: We're just in ninth. S: Well you're my brother, so I'll let you. Z: Your jeans first. S: The folks might come home. Z: We've got time. Raise your butt so I can get them. S: Let me think. Z: You think and I'll pull. S: We really shouldn't. Z: There we go. S: Well, don't mess with my panties, then. Z: They're your Valentine's ones. S: So? Z: You warned me that they didn't stay up very well. S: Oh, Zak, you're such a perv. [Kissing] Z: Butt up! S: I'll be naked. Z: Just a little more. S: Don't look. Z: Don't worry. S: You can look if you really want to. Z: It was a long time ago that we took baths together. S: Don't pop out your eyes. Z: Can I touch? S: You've gotta stop when I say, though. Z: This way? S: Yeah. Just go slow. Z: Like this? S: Yeah. Z: You're wet. S: That's how girls get. [Brushing sound] Z: It doesn't hurt or anything? S: It's nice. Z: Here, even? S: There, even. Z: Can I, you know, push? S: Not too far, though. Z: I don't want to hurt anything. S: You're not. Z: If you want... S: Can I feel how you are? Z: With your hand? S: I don't know if I should. Z: Put it inside. Like this... [Light gasps] S: You're so big. Z: It likes what you're doing. S: Take off your pants so I can do it better. OK? [Zipper and fabric] S: Oh, God. It's so, you know, big! Z: We love each other, don't we. [Murmurs] Z: It's really ready. S: I can tell. Rub my front with it. [More murmurs] Z: Now let me rub it down there. S: Don't. Z: You're already open enough. S: You're making me that way. Z: We can just do it part way. S: Oh, Zak. Z: It's OK. We'll always love each other. We have to prove it the real way. Please let me. You'll like it. S: Just part way? Z: Till you say. S: It's because I love you too. Scene 2. Setting and RT setup: As in Act 1, Scene 3. H: So that's your vanilla seduction, for sure. Five or six steps and bingo! C: That's how it usually works. Is that one of those herbal teas? H: "Dandelion Sunshine." C: Anything's better than what's in that coffeepot. H: And to think how we pine for a real java! Are we slow learners? C: We chose education, Holly. H: So tell me some more about doing that last act before I demolish it. C: How 'bout this? Starts off, he's brushing her hair. She takes over combing while he feels her up. The RT audience hears the hairbrush drop. H: Keep going. C: He slides her fingers down his front while he talks. And he'll sit up a little so it's easier for him to push her hand lower. She'll be so docile that he'll have to squeeze her fingers around him. See how much he wants her? Then he'll work her fingers to undo his pants. She doesn't just grab, right? H: Are we talking about the plot line or the reading? C: Both, don't you think? H: So the RT performers themselves make love, you know, for the RT sound effects? C: We'll maybe not if they need to finish the play. Just almost, I guess. H: "The show must go on," as we say in the circus business. C: I thought it was about performing plays. H: It is, but first it was for when the lion ate the trainer and they didn't want the audience to panic. C: Oh. Anyway, she already felt it with her girlfriends, of course, but she'll act like this is the first time. "You're so big," like that. With her girlfriends, it was pretty much in the dark. Not now. H: She has to hold back a little. He's supposed to be making her, not her, him. C: He'll get her legs apart while she decides. She'll lift up to get his dick aimed. The "It's because I love you too" is just before he pushes in. I wanna end it sorta romantic. H: Act 2, Cindi style. C: An act about the act, get it? H: Barely. The thing is, about a million sibling stories start with teaching how to make out. The "problem with Lara" is pretty trite. C: We'll they've got to get together some way. H: So let's have an old fashioned rape. C: Too chauvinist. H: Maybe a compassionate rape. C: Like how? H: Like this. ACT 3 Scene 1. Setting: S's bedroom. RT setup: S reclined. Z begins some distance away, moving closer. Again, H and C are excused from the stage. [Door opening and closing] S: Zak, what are you doing? It's way past bedtime. Get out of my room! Z: A little visit, let's say. S: Well, beat it. And leave my rug alone. Z: Just fixing your door. [Rug being pushed] S: Put it back. Z: Don't want then to hear us, do we? That's better. S: I said get out! Z: Not too loud. [Low voices] S: Get off my bed. This is ridiculous. And you're creepy. Get your hand off me! Z: Be real quiet. So whatcha doing? S: I'm not doing anything. Beat it' Z: You were doing something down here, right? S: Quit it! I was sleeping. Get off and get out, boy child. Z: Or was it here? S: Pervert! Z: It's not that big a tit, overall, but it's nice. S: Quit it and scram. You can't do that. Z: I wouldn't have to squeeze if you'd lie still. You let me in the basement. S: Stop acting like a jerk. It's different there because it's accidental and you show a little respect. Plus I'm dressed. Z: Dressed? S: I can't help how you react when we watch that stuff. I don't mind. I do mind you being here now, though. It's my room! Z: Let's make it more natural. S: Then you go out and I'll get in my nightie. We can look at my magazines with my flashlight. Z: No nighties. Why look at pictures when we can wrestle and see each other? S: We can't wrestle here! And stop touching me! Z: Let's just chuck this sheet. It's not cold. S: No way, jerk-off spy! Z: You rub them like this? [Muffled protest] S: You treat me with respect! Anyway, I can't wrestle because of the curse. Z: Nice try. I didn't want to visit you during your little period either, so I checked the wastebasket. Nothing since Wednesday. S: You make me gag. You lick them clean, I'll bet. Leave me alone, asshole. Z: You knew I'd be in here sooner or later. S: Anyway, I know about the sock under your mattress. And so do my girlfriends. Z: Maybe the two that held me down. S: We take turns at your keyhole. You're such a pervert. Z: You're the pervert and couldn't even make me come. S: Am not! You would have, but I didn't want your icky stuff on me. Z: Well this time it will be up the stovepipe. S: Penis face! Go wonk yourself. Z: So let's take off the sheet. That's better. Nice nips. S: Like you aren't always gawking anyway. Z: It's up to you about these panties getting torn. Seems a shame. S: Just go away. I won't tell. Don't do that. Z: I know you won't. You pull them off, or me? S: Leave them alone. Z: So down they come! Oh, yes! [Fabric sliding] S: Please don't. Z: You may have flashed your tits a lot, but not this part. S: Stop. Z: Your hand isn't big enough. S: Just don't. I said don't. Z: Look what happens when you tease me. S: Ugly! Put it back. Z: Well, we'll stick in a place where you'll just feel it. S: Quit it! I'll do you with my hand! You can play with my tits while I do. Z: Too late. You never delivered on the couch. A bed's for the real thing! S: Zak, don't say that stuff to me. I never made you do anything bad on the couch. Z: So that's why I'm here. S: You can spy on a slumber party. I'll get them to play around and everything. OK? Z: I'd rather see you play around. S: OK. Z: I mean play around while we screw. S: Zak, please don't do it. Z: I'm between your legs already and I'm hardly trying. S: Get off! [Struggling] Z: Just relax, will you? S: I'm going to yell. Z: So who rented the movies? How'd you even get a card to that video store? S: Zak, please stop. You'll hurt me. Z: If you want to cry, I don't care, but keep it low. It won't hurt. Ready? S: Pig! Z: It's just a finger. S: Anus breath! I'll finger fuck your ass some day. Tie you up and make you cry. A bunch of us will take pictures for our scrapbooks. Z: I'm not tying you up, am I? I'm just doing you with just one. Why not help me out? A way we saw in a movie. S: Shithead! Z: That was just to get you stretched. S: We'll you don't know crap! Z: That better, sweet pea? S: Get off me, Zak. [Further struggling] Z: Quit jumping, will you? Too noisy. We just need to put this pillow behind the headboard. S: Oh, God! Z: Wouldn't want to wake up Mom, now. That's better. S: Please don't! Z: This one goes under your butt. Know why? S: Let me go! Z: That's the trick. Ready for the big one? S: Zak, please don't. Please. Z: Come on; don't make me push so hard. S: It hurts! Z: So open up better. S: I can't, shithead. Z: That's better. Slippery even! S: Oh! Z: Sorry. We'll go slower. [Pushes] S: Zak, I don't want to. Z: You're doing good. S: Slow down! Z: That's how. S: Oh, Zak. Z: I plugged the door. Just don't get too loud. S: Well you can't make me finish. Z: Your choice, but you want to, right? S: Go to hell. I don't want to! Z: Here we go! S: God damn you! Z: Go ahead. You'll like it. S: Stop it! Oh! Z: Come on, move! S: Please! Z: All the way! S: Just let me, then. Z: You're coming, say it. S: Crap. Z: You're going to come, right? Like a big one? S: It's not my fault. Z: Do it now! [Continuous motion] S: Oh! Ah... Aah... Asshole! Ah... Aaah... Z: Good girl! S: Aah... Move! Ah... Aah... Damn it, move! Z: Just hang on for me too. S: Aaah... [Wood banging] Z: Damn headboard. S: I'll hold the pillow. Z: Got it? S: Got it. [Sudden motion] Z: Damn it, come back here! S: Fat chance. I got mine. Z: Let me put it back in. S: You kidding, fuckface? Do in on the sheet. Z: You gotta let me. S: Says who? Z: Says me? Please. S: You're pathetic. Z: You gotta. S: Well, maybe you can do it on me. Z: Not on you, where I was. S: Your pecker's too little. Z: Just once! S: Say, "I'm a pervert." Z: Jeeze. I'm a pervert. S: Well you are, not even asking. It's my room. You didn't even bring a rubber. Z: Like I have one? S: We'll ask, stupid. Z: Do you? S: Bottom drawer. Z: Oh. S: Zak? Z: What? S: I didn't want to loose. Z: Then why did you? S: Well, loose totally. Z: You did OK for a bitch. Only a lezbo would fight back so much. S: You did OK for a know-nothing. Gotta start somewhere. You shouldn't have pinched. A girl's delicate. Z: Sorry. And I'm not a beginner. S: Lara? Z: None of your business. Like I didn't make you come? S: Who was she? Z: I promised not to tell. S: Older than me? Z: Maybe. S: You brush her hair? Z: No. S: Good. That's special for sisters. Some scummy backseat? Z: In her bed. S: Really? Still fucking her? Z: I guess. S: Well you can't fuck me any more then. Z: I'll quit with her. S: Promise? Z: Promise. S: Big tits? Z: Not really. S: So let go of my mine. You hardly know how to hold them! Z: Hey, I rode you out. S: Only because you caught me naked, asshole! I was in a weakened condition. Z: Does asshole mean you'll show me how, sex expert? S: Forget it, pervboy. You get another dinky boner thinking about me, you've got your little sock. Z: You have to let me. S: And I've got my allies. We'll fuck you raw both ways, next slumber party. Just you wait! We'll give you Kotex for your bleeding butthole. And you'll probably like it because you're a fag. Come here Z: So I take it that this is a better way to hold you? S: A little bit. It's because I'm remembering the last video, not creepo you. Z: Well, the actor was older. S: In the movie, he kissed each one once. Z: OK. S: Is that pillow stuck back there still? Z: I'll fix it. Want me to get something from your drawer? S: Better. Z: OK. S: You cover your mouth yourself this time 'cause I'll be occupied. Now flat on your back, boy wonder. Z: You crash off your bed like a spaz and we're up Shit Creek! S: You just hold my tits, OK? Scene 2. Setting and RT setup: As in Act 1, Scene 3. H: Cindi, where'd they get this coffee? It's totally tasteless. C: Our NEA stands in solidarity with the worker co-ops where they grow it, they say. H: Give me multinational anytime, then. C: So I'm thinking, having been there myself a time or two. H: Guatemala? C: No, an orgasm. H: Excuse me? C: Your Zak story. H: Oh, that. I thought we finished. C: That scene's pretty good, but you really think she'd climax? H: Absolutely. I found out. C: Like you got raped? H: No, dummy, on the Internet. You search for "rape" and "orgasm". C: Pervert City, here we come! Virtual rape. Call moaning Holly at 1-900 with your MasterCard. H: No, those ones are easy to spot. Find the ones written for rape victims. There are about a hundred. C: Like, "Don't walk through the dark woods alone?" H: Sure, but what they also say is that if you climax, it's not your fault. C: Give me a break! H: No, because it's a physiological reaction that just happens. All the sites say so and some of them are from like government agencies. It doesn't matter if you have one; it's still against the law. C: Now they tell me! H: And there are these forum chat places where girls ask each other things. One asks if she did something wrong because she came and the others say she was just doing how her body reacted. Like tickling, sort of. If you keep your mind clear, though, it's not going to happen. C: Like not to you, anyway. H: I've got really good concentration. It's the way to keep yourself from going along. C: So Zak's sister really got raped in your version? H: The first time, for sure. C: You know how she likes to have him brush her hair? H: It just means that they're close. C: I read this story where these girls at summer camp rape the new girls with a hairbrush. H: That would be tough in RT. C: They're really careful and make the girl come. It's not like a bad rape. She giggles. H: It sounds bad. C: It's a girls camp. Then the new kid is a regular camper. It's called "Camp Brushmore". H: Well Zak doesn't need a hairbrush to do it. C: Well if I got to choose, I'd have her rape him. H: The Internet says that's possible too. C: You sure surf a lot. H: So how do you think Zak's sister can pull it off your way? C: Want some sadomasochism? You know, take the hairbrush and... H: Yuk! C: OK. Without. Listen up. ACT 4 Scene 1. Setting: Z's bedroom. RT setup: Z reclining. S sitting. (Act 3, Scene 1 reversal). S: Mom says that I have to come up here and visit you. So how's life in bed when you should be helping rake the leaves? Z: How about bringing me some more 7-Up. S: So you break the head of your arm bone falling out of a tree like an idiot and have to get a cast and I have to get your pop! Z: Come on. I only have one hand and I'm right handed. S: OK. I'm not helping you pee, though, Z: I can do that. S: Left-handed? You use your right every night. Z: Just get my 7-Up, OK? S: I guess, since I'm your sister, I could help out. Z: With what? S: Your right arm being immobilized and everything. Z: You're terrible. S: Just lean back. Z: No way. I'm not supposed to move around too much. S: My hand'll do the moving. We'll be very careful of your arm. Z: Very funny. S: Want me to comb your hair? I brought my hairbrush. Not your top hair, though. Z: Very funny. S: So I'll comb you a nice part to start. Z: Quit! S: Don't bother to sit up. Z: Stop it. S: I'm just helping you get comfortable. Let's not jiggle your shoulder. Z: Let me up. I'll... Stop. You have to. S: Your bathrobe belt can help you other hand stay out of our way. Am I tying it too tight? Z: Listen, you can't... S: There. Can I adjust your pillow? Z: You can untie my hand. S: Want your 7-Up first? I'll hold the straw in your mouth. Z: No. S: Zak? Z: What? S: Isn't this a little weird? Me getting ready to rape you and everything? The RT audience sees exactly what I'm up to. Z: It's what the script says. S: You mean it's what Ms. Rennick wrote when she tried to do RT. She reads too much. Z: Well, she's a teacher. S: It's her first play, even. She's an English educator, not a writer, for Pete's sake. Ms. Barton's in on it too. I think she knows more about the sex aspect. Z: I guess. S: Did you ever figure if she really thought we'd go ahead and really get into Act 2? You know, on the sofa. Z: I didn't actually read ahead too much. She said, you know, to get the timing. S: Well it's not very well written if the performers don't even know what's for real. And why in Act 3 on my bed am I so mousy? I'm a shitload stronger than you. Z: No way! Just freestyle. I thought we did it pretty good. S: Maybe so, but why would we be such assholes? You're about the best lover a girl could ever have. I'm not going to fight back if you need me. Z: Well, as beginning actors... S: Baloney. Let's sort this out with those two teachers right now. Z: We can't. S: Ms. Rennick, Ms. Barton, you please come to the stage immediately! [Offstage muttering. Entering footsteps of H and C. Two chairs drawn up] H: What's the deal? You're supposed to be raping your brother and we get a coffee break. S: We'll I don't want to. Look at him! One arm in a pretend cast; the other tied to a pretend bedpost! I want him to hold my tits. H: But the script has... S: Your script, not mine. Are you into bondage or whatever? H: Of course not. S: So don't write about it unless we can try on some of the leather stuff. Z: She means that I don't have to have to be forced. H: But drama needs some variety. You can't just hop into bed together like on a normal date. Z: We know some different ways. S: So I'm not raping him, OK? H: OK. Maybe I can rewrite... S: And Ms. Barton. You're the one that taught Zak here, right? Z: I didn't say anything, really. C: I guess. S: Like you think us kids have our eyes closed? Shall I name some others boys? C: Really, they were all ready for it. It's not like... S: We know. You can bet your little ass that if you'd messed with boys who weren't ready, we'd have fried you. C: Oh. S: Shoot, Ms. Barton. You're one of our favorite teachers. I'm taking Chemistry 'cause of you. We're not going to wreck things. C: No? S: If you do your part, anyway. Z: Ms. Barton, I really didn't tell. S: Zak, that's why we both like you so much. You're so dependable. Plus, a good learner. Right, Ms. Barton? C: I guess. S: So, Ms. Rennick, you've not had sex with him, have you? H: Of course not. S: We'll don't. There are plenty of other guys at your school. H: Listen... S: Plenty of guys. You're not as experienced as Ms. Barton, right? H: Maybe not. S: Girls secret, OK? C: She's just like us. S: Maybe a little more discriminating. That's cool, Ms. Rennick. H: So what do we do with this scene? S: Well the rape's dead and the audience knows everything. Maybe I should make some Folgers Instant. Anybody want Creamola? Z: One of you could change your part to a cheerleader who gets lost in the woods here and I could come along. H: Too much like what's on the Internet. S: Just acting, you know, I could be a female forest ranger in a lookout tower and you two teachers could be escaped convicts from the Woman's Prison where, you know, you learned about hairbrushing other women. C: I like it. Holly, I mean Ms. Rennick here, is really a good actress. Why right in the lunchroom she offered to let me do something really special to her, but I guess she was just acting. Were you? H: Cindi, these guys are going to believe you. S: Nah, girls can tell right off. You just need to date around a little more, Ms. Rennick. H: Probably right. Z: So maybe I can be a Boy Scout who comes to the lookout tower and the three of you catch me. S: Good plot, Zak-boy, but Ms. Rennick saw that one on the Internet too. You guys mind Styrofoam cups? The real ones must be in the washer. H: I guess my RT idea wasn't so hot, once the performers start messing with the story. RT's really a good way for kids to start doing drama, though. S: So here's what you need to add, Ms. Rennick. H: What? S: A scene where Zak takes you into the woods. H: Why? S: To check on what you said in Act 3 about orgasms. H: It's just stuff I read. S: So we'll find out. What I said about you and my brother, that was in real life. What happens in RT just happens. H: You can't keep adding scenes to my play. S: Zak. Ms. Barton and me are going away for a while and you do this new scene with Ms. Rennick. Z: OK. H: We might have to change the title. S: Maybe, "A spoken drama for one male and three female voices with theatrical climax." So you two take your time figuring out how to perform it. Ms. Barton and me are taking off for a while. Scene 2. Setting: In the woods. RT setup: Z and H on the sofa. As earlier scenes excused H and C from the stage, this scene excuses S and C for like reason. This scene contains condensed web sites quotations scripted for H. (They're real. Visit the http://... for context.) Alternatively, a narrator could deliver the quotations with a few changed lead-ins. As Z has only Curtain Call remaining, physical enactment is at his discretion. H, however, has less license, as she reads again in Scene 3.] Z: Have you read this far yet? H: No. Z: Well, it looks like a bunch of web stuff. H: It's for real. Z: We're near the end, right? Where we can do more acting. H: So what's that hairbrush about? Z: It's my handgun. H: What for? Z: To intimidate you. H: Like I'm scared? Z: Let's just read and see about not being able to thread a moving needle. H: Zak, the fact is that erotic literature really overplays the rape orgasm bit. Listen to this. Quotation: "Don Smith did a content analysis of 428 "adults only" paperbacks published between 1968 and 1974. ... Over 97% of the rapes portrayed in these books resulted in orgasm for the victims. In three-quarters of these rapes, multiple orgasms." [http://www.dianarussell.com/porncontent.html] Z: And you don't believe it? H: Of course not. They're fiction. Here's what Thornhill and Palmer, Darwinian psychologists, say. Quotation: "Human rape victims rarely show much sexual arousal and almost never achieve orgasm. It is conceivable that some aspects of women's capacity for orgasm evolved in the context of reducing the fertilizing capacity of rapists' ejaculates. That is, the absence of orgasm during rape may be an evolved response to rape." [http://www.bridgew.edu/depts/artscnce/jiws/June01/Susa n.pdf] Z: That's why I brought you out here in the woods. H: Why? Z: In Science for Life, Ms. Barton said that Darwin's theory gets carried too far. H: So what do you want? Z: To see how it works for a teacher like you. Read some of this discussion. They're nonfiction. Quotation: "I learned what an orgasm was during a brutal rape that left me bleeding to death. And this attacker came back for more. Not one woman on the face of this earth would choose to be brutalized just to have an orgasm. ... My wife was raped when she was only 14-years-old, and she too had an orgasm unwillingly. ... Now, years later, she even masturbates while thinking back on the experience. ... The most intense orgasm I've ever experienced in my life is while being raped and beaten by three boys when I was 19. ... After they were done the guy behind me masturbated me to orgasm. He said, 'See it wasn't rape since we all had a good time.' I felt really guilty about having an orgasm." [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/rapevictims/message] H: Well that's just stuff from discussion group the web. Z: So let's find out ourselves. H: Let go! Z: Keep reading. I'm aiming this gun at your heart. This web stuff is about you. Quotation: "I was raped but during the ordeal I had an orgasm. It was horrible because it made him even more excited. ... You are not the first person I have heard about who experienced an orgasm while being raped. ... Orgasm is at its most basic level just a physical response to stimulation -- you could almost equate it with feeling an itchy sensation after being stimulated by a mosquito bite. ... When you're raped, you're terrified and nervous and scared--and release chemicals (such as adrenaline) that have the effect of enhancing your senses and quickening your response. Thus, an orgasm can be an involuntary response to these." [http://forums.christianity.com/html/P570476] H: Zak, you can't do this. Z: Sorry about poking your heart with a gun. H: So stop it. Z: I'll just use my hand. H: I said don't touch me. Z: Lay back. H: No! And quit it. Z: You're my third girl, but I've never raped one before. Is this your first rape too? Read what it says about physical stimulation. You'll find out you agree pretty soon. Quotation: "At the end of our relationship he violently raped me in my living room. ... He knew 'the right moves,' so I had an orgasm. ... Many women who have been raped report that, they, too, experienced an orgasm against their will. Your body experienced a physiological reaction in response to the physical stimulation it received. ... Hopefully from this example of non- consensual tickling you can begin to better understand and accept the distressing orgasm you experienced during your assault. ... There is no reason to consider that your body 'betrayed' you that evening ... for having had an orgasm." [http://www.ivillage.com/relationships/experts/sexpro/q as/0,,189263_249958-1,00.html] H: Listen, you have to stop! Z: Oh, such betrayal. Right, Ms Rennick? H: It's not the same as getting tickled. Z: Just let me undo these buttons, Ms. Rennick. So where are we? H: What do you mean? Z: We're in the woods. H: Stop doing that! Z: So where are we? H: In the woods, I guess. Z: Say it again. H: In the woods. Z: So read the next site while I undo them. Se how your nipples are already showing? Quotation: "Forced genital stimulation - masturbation- and orgasm are the two great unspoken secrets of rape. ... One trial of a serial rapist in SA ignored the gravest offence he committed: he not only raped and badly beat up the women he attacked, but masturbated them, not all achieved orgasm. ... A woman who was gang raped withdrew from her husband because she believed an orgasm during rape had betrayed him. ... During rape, women are in such a state of terror that they have little or no control over bodily functions, some may laugh hysterically, others weep, some urinate or even defecate ... while increased adrenalin in their body causes some to orgasm." [http://www.speakout.org.za/legal/laws/laws_newsa.html] Z: Want to get masturbated? Teachers do it too, right? H: No. Z: Ms. Barton told us in Science that a million monkeys with a million typewriters working a million years would write "Casey at the Bat". H: So? Z: But this is just me, one guy, no gang. H: Damn it! Give me that. It's mine. Z: Not any more, this blouse isn't. H: Well don't wrinkle it. I should just crap on you like it says. Z: I'll bet you'll come instead. H: Don't take off your pants. It doesn't say to. [Zipper and fabric] Z: Like it? H: No. Z: Well you will. H: Quit doing that! It's... Z: Keep wiggling and read some more. You'll appreciate the "rubbing" part. Quotation: "An orgasm is an involuntary reflex; it is a reaction of your body over which you have no control. Male or female, if anyone rubs you in the right way in the right place, you will have an orgasm whether you want to or not. ... So your abuser rubbed you in a way that elicited an orgasm. ... Your body was functioning in one of the ways it was designed to respond." [http://enchantedwings.freeservers.com/orgasm.html] H: Don't touch me! Z: You got like four hooks! H: Let me up! Z: Nice tits! H: I'll yell! Z: We're in the woods where nobody can hear you. Ms. Barton and my sister left us alone. H: Oh. Z: Say it. H: Nobody can hear me. Z: So I won't yell. H: So I won't yell. Z: And here's something religious, even. Read. Quotation: "There is no need to be ashamed if you have an orgasm during the rape. If someone hits you it hurts because that is the way God made your body to work. Sex is the same way. It is just the way God made your body to work." [http://www.silverpalaceent.com/id34.htm] H: You can't make me. Z: Start thinking of your climax. H: Please! Z: You'll have a good one. H: What do you mean? Z: The more you struggle, the better you'll come. H: No! Z: Who's in charge? H: I guess you are. Z: Spread 'em while you read another. Quotation: "A woman who has been raped may have an orgasm during the rape. ... Her rape-induced orgasm is related to fear." [http://www.redeemedlives.org/Resources/Nws_atcl/2002/a utumn02anxiety-1.htm] Z: You don't need to be afraid. We're just testing what people say, right? What's the next one say about you? Quotation: "Some women have had orgasms in the course of rape. ... It appears that the body and mind are not always connected. ... For women who have experienced ongoing sexual violence, arousal may be, in Finkelhor and Yllo's words, 'a practical adjustment to a painful situation'." [http://pages.ivillage.com/boadicea66/aphroditewounded/ id11.html] Z: You making any practical adjustments yet? H: You jerk. Z: Does this tell you anything? H: It just happens. Z: What happens? H: You get wet. Z: So say how you're getting. H: I'm getting wet. Z: Does it tell you something? H: You've gotta stop. Z: You're getting aroused, right? H: No, I'm not! Z: Say it. H: Just a little bit, maybe. Z: You ready for it? Read the next one, teacher, while I work it in. Quotation: "The sexual response of orgasm has been known to occur in extreme circumstances that threaten life. With fear and enough physical pressure, orgasm can automatically happen." [http://www.sextx.com/rape.html] Z: So feel the pressure? I have a gun, even, so you're afraid. H: Please don't. Z: Wow! Like you are ready! Want it? Quotation: "It is still rape if you experienced sexual arousal during the act. It does not mean you 'wanted' it." [http://www.grrlsurvivors.org/body/violence/rape.htm] H: Well I don't want it, so stop. Z: OK, this isn't about wanting it. It's about liking it. Your hips aren't lying, just your mouth. H: Don't do it any more. Z: Thata girl. H: Please don't. Z: Like it yet? Out and in. Out and in. Out and in. H: No! [Rhythmic exertions] Z: Listen to it: Out and in. Out and in. In's your favorite; I can tell. H: It's not right! Z: Tell us what you're thinking. Tell us. H: I'm not thinking. Z: Tell us what you're thinking. Tell us. H: Out and in. Out and in. What else can I think? Z: Read about the stranger while you keep thinking. [Continuing rhythmic exertions] Quotation: "In the case of a stranger who breaks into a woman's home, attacks her and begins to touch or press her genitals, in many situations her body will automatically respond. ... In times of fear and threat of bodily harm, the sympathetic nervous system becomes activated and mobilizes the 'fight, flight or freeze' responses. ... Neurochemicals ... stimulate ... blood to the large muscle groups and the pelvis. The increase in blood flow to the lower part of the body may further ... result in more lubrication." [http://www.nowldef.org/html/njep/PDFdocs/selfstudyguid e.pdf] Z: Those chemicals are pretty slippery, aren't they, Ms. Rennick? H: I can't help it. Z: That's the whole point. You get slippery and move up and down. H: Oh! Z: Come on, Ms. Rennick, it's just your body reacting. [Breathing] H: It's not.... Z: That's better. H: It's not how I thought it would be. Z: It's OK. H: You're too strong. Z: Hold me tighter. H: I think, maybe... Ah. Z: It's all about you. You! H: Keep, you know... Aah. Aaaah. Z: I'll keep going as long as I can. It's up to you now. H: Aah. Aah. Aaaaah! Z: Good girl. I'm coming too. Yes! Yes! [Noisy interlude] H: Oh! Z: Just hang onto me till your heart slows down. H: Oh! Z: You did really good for not wanting to. What's the last one? Quotation: "Women who may have just survived a life threatening crime are asked, incredibly, questions such as: Did you enjoy it? Did you have an orgasm? Why didn't anyone hear you scream? How big was his penis?" [http://www.secasa.com.au/survivors/rape_article_nw.htm l] H: Cindi will want to know all that stuff. Z: That first thing you read, about the adult books? H: Yeah. Z: About multiple orgasms? H: I forget the percentage. Z: We'll just be our own data point. Wanna try? H: Sure. Z: But you gotta say no to make it a rape. H: OK, No. Z: And you're supposed to resist. H: Like this? Z: You can't kiss the guy. H: My body made me. Scene 3. Setting and RT setup: As in Act 1, Scene 3. C: Pass the Sweet'N Low, will you? This coffee needs something. H: Maybe that started as a bean. C: It's at least organic. H: Till you added that white chemical. C: In chemistry it's an organic chemical because of the carbon. H: Remember, Cindi, what you told me a couple of months ago about Zak? C: Like I'd forget? All the endings we made up? H: Yeah. Too bad they sort of crashed in performance. C: We could have them abducted in a UFO and made to procreate Planet Zenafu. H: Lots of Broadway stuff closes after the first night. C: Did you ever see "Dr. Who" on TV? H: Porn? C: British. H: I wouldn't think you'd understand a foreign accent. C: Listen. Shakespeare. "I'm Henry the Eighth, I am. Henry the Eighth, I am, I am" H: Herman's Hermits, actually. Cockney's more, "ah- eyeth." C: Yep. Dr. Who gave me the idea about Zak and his sister and a UFO. H: I follow exactly. C: You do? H: I know you too well to even try, Cindi. C: Really? So dhaling, lay back and let me... you know? H: Give me a break. C: So, Holly, tell me this. What really happened when you and Zak read the scene in the woods? H: You know, a bunch of web addresses and stuff. C: You just read the scene? H: Like I wrote earlier, maybe he undoes a few buttons or something. C: Your panties? H: What? C: They were in his pocket afterwards.. H: Oh. C: Saying "No" to sex can mean different things in drama, but saying it to a kid has to really mean it. H: I guess. S: I know. H: So whatdya think about RT? S: It sucks. H: Well it needs proofing, but is it that bad? S: His sister gets to come on her bed and you and Zak get to come in the woods. Anybody missing? H: The teacher teaching him bit. S: But that's not in this one. H: Whatever. Is she still doing education? C: She was until his sister made him stop coming over on Saturdays. H: Oh. C: No big deal. There's more out there. H: That's what I was wondering, what she sister said towards the end. C: You? H: Maybe. There's this Josh. C: Which Josh. H: Harrison. C: Yeah? H: He's kinda cute. C: And? H: He likes to look down my dress. C: Most of 'em do, especially with ones like yours. H: No, I mean he even gets hard before he looks. He's gotta know I'm letting him. C: So? H: I think he likes me to see how he gets. C: So? H: He probably wouldn't do anything. C: Unless you help him. H: You know my history. C: Well, it's not your fault. They were jerks, not boys. H: Do you think a kid would with me? C: They look down your dress, don't they? H: How do you stop that? C: Top button. H: It's not weird or anything, I mean with a kid? C: Like we don't do it 'cause we're teachers and they don't because they're students? H: So I'm thinking about it, maybe. C: Another button lower, then. H: I mean I, you know, sorta like him. C: Help him with his homework or something. Let him think he's pulling something off. H: So whata I do? C: Maybe get him over to your place somehow. Start him off just brushing out your hair. H: I think we've brought this script to an ending. "Ah... Aah... Aaah," has limits as RT. Maybe to keep the story going, it would be better as a movie. C: "Art-house Cine," you types call it, where they sell espresso in the lobby. H: Ever held a camera? C: Sorta. H: It would change the atmosphere, for sure, having a camera going. C: Since I'm a teacher too, we'll tell him it's related to Health Ed. I can act very technical, maybe pretend I'm adjusting the focal length while you strip him. H: He'll catch on. C: Sure, but he'll want to be in a movie. H: The thing is, I wouldn't want this film to... C: They digitally diddle with the thing so you don't look like you. H: Well I don't know how else to continue the plot, other than regular prose. C: What plot? A Broadway musical, I'd say. H: A friend of such vision! I could sing "On my Own" from "Les Mis‚rables". It's so sad about Eponine. "And now I'm all alone again. Nowhere to go, no one to turn to." C: Never heard of it. Remember the oldest girl in "Sound of Music"? "I am sixteen going seventeen. I know that I'm naive." H: Move over Rodgers and Hammerstein! C: Did they write "Annie" or was that Elton John? "Tomorrow! Tomorrow! I love ya, Tomorrow! You're always a day away." H: Good grief. C: Let's see of those kids want to go to Starbuck's with us. H: Zak's maybe a little worn out with all he's put into his scenes. C: Kids are amazing. Hey, you two out there! Curtain Call. Z and S emerge from offstage looking sheepish. Z is adjusting his belt and S's blouse is in her hand. She's brushing her hair. THE END **** Holly on the Web Wherever you found this story on the web, thank you to the server. My problem is that I've no systematic way to update the various servers. As literary errors (or just poor word usages) are made know to me, I'll repair that which is salvageable on /~Holly_Rennick/. My website's not much graphically, I admit, but HTML isn't my native language. You can contact me via the site's message form, that HTML code by the smart people at ASSTR. I won't be changing the story significantly, so if you didn't like it before, that much will remain the same. But if you did like it, an update may read a bit more cleanly. Holly ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ This story was written as an adult fantasy. The author does not condone the described behavior in real life. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Kristen's collection - Directory 26