Within entrance yet unfledged
Blissfully my member wedged
Finding such a welcome berth
My intruding unkind girth

Sleeve protesting, clamping strength
Ripp'ling all along my length
'Gainst my chest fists no more strike
Saddle rising, meets my spike

Fear from young wide eyes has fled
Passion-lidded now instead
What began with weak protest
Sacred moisture now has blest

She's soon joined both crime and sin
Pulls me further yet within
Limbs embrace both neck and waist
Mouth seeks mine in duel unchaste

Buds emergent pressed to me
Pebbles stiffen urgently
Scrape in need against my skin
Pray for efforts deeper in

Duty mine is to comply
Pleasure, too, I won't deny
Carnal compass guides me true
Depth and speed to see her through

Virgin's mewling, siren's song
Tells me that I won't last long
Fertile youth puts out its call
Recompense for mankind's Fall?

What joy left in Eden past
Can compare with such repast?
Feast of body, vital food
Trumps a soul's beatitude

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Anonymous 10/16/2015 read this several times through and the last time, aloud. loved the language, the imagery, everything about it really. excited to check out some of your other work now :)
10/16/2015 Thank you so much this is just what an author (poet?) wants to achieve. And the imbedded advice is key for all readers: Poems either work, or they don't, upon being read aloud. Just be careful...some Stepdaddy material may be NSFW.
--Stepdaddy

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