Jamie Kensington and his neighbor Taniqua were sitting in his basement playing Portal 2 on his Xbox.

"Nice move, Nika!" he shouted.

The girl grinned, but didn't look away from the TV. She's all concentration.

A few minutes later she put the controller down. "Oh man," she said, rubbing her eyes, "that's intense!"

"Yeah!"

"I should probably get home," she said, "Mom'll be home soon and I have homework."

"OK," Jamie said, "here, let me pay you for mowing the lawn." He took out his wallet and handed her a twenty.

Twenty bucks was a lot of money to give a twelve year old girl for mowing the Kensingtons' postage-stamp sized yard, but ever since Taniqua and her mother moved into the duplex next door, Jamie and his wife have been trying to help the two of them out. Nika's mom works her tail off, two jobs and sometimes three, just to pay the rent and keep her kid in clothes. Any extra cash Nika can get for doing things like mowing the neighbors' lawn is all the spending money she's going to have.

"Thanks!" Nika said with a big smile. She stuffed the bill in her pocket. "Only a hundred and thirty dollars to go until I have enough money to buy a new iTouch!"

"Hundred and thirty?" Jamie looked a little surprised; he knew that was a fortune for her and her mom.

"Yeah. It'll take a while, but I'll get there sometime."

He looked the girl over for a moment. Taniqua was the cutest little thing, she always had been adorably cute from the day they moved in next door four years ago. She had a full head of curly brown hair, soft and tangled, usually kept in a ponytail in the back. Her little round face had a smooth, milk-chocolate complexion and almost always seemed to be lit up with a sweet smile. Her dark brown eyes twinkled brightly and had a way of disarming you with piercing insightfulness. Her nose was small and slightly pointed, and her lips were full and shiny, which made her smile all the more special.

All these things, she had from the day he met her. But he also knew that she had changed in some ways as well. She was growing now, both physically and emotionally. She was no longer the little girl that moved in next door four years ago. Her thin, childish body was beginning to fill out, particularly on her chest, where her little bra seemed to him to be bulging, overflowing with awakening womanhood. He couldn't help it, every time he looked at her lately he felt a little longing in his loins.

And she knew it. He could tell that she knew what her little body did to him.

"Well, thanks again, Mr. Kensington," she said with a demure little look; her milk chocolate cheeks had a little blush to them and Jamie knew that she'd noticed him looking at her like a man looks at a woman.

Feeling embarrassed by his over-active sexuality, he dropped his eyes; they landed on her midriff, about an inch of which was exposed below her small tee-shirt, showing her thin, muscular, brown stomach.

His heart skipped as he looked back up at her beautiful face. "I'd like to help you out," he said. "Help you get that iTouch."

She smiled, so sweetly. "You need me to do some more chores?"

"I could just give you some money."

"I can't just take your money, my mom would freak!"

He put his hand on her shoulder. "Just let me give you some money, so you can get yourself an iTouch a little sooner, OK?"

She was looking up at him, her big dark eyes wide. She had her feet crossed, toes stepping on toes. "I really want an iTouch... Maybe we could figure out some way..."

He had both hands on her shoulders now, and he pulled her in to him. He felt her warm, shallow breath, and then their lips met in a brief kiss.

"What about your wife?" she said quietly, her breath on his lips.

"Judy's a wonderful woman, you know she is," he said, his mouth almost touching hers as he spoke. "But she's very cold. I am a man, you know, and I need... She's very cold. A man needs more than that."

The girl's lips parted slightly, inviting him to kiss her again. He slipped his tongue in her mouth as he kissed her. She tasted so wonderful, his heart was pounding like a little school boy. Almost without thinking, he slid his hands down onto her breasts.

"Oh man..." she said, her voice cracking with nervousness.

He stepped back, took out his wallet and handed a twenty dollar bill in her direction. "Will you take your shirt off for me, Nika?"

"My shirt?"

"I want to see your breasts."

She put her hands on the bottom hem of her shirt. "You don't have to give me any money," she said quietly. Then she lifted her shirt and pulled it off, and was standing there in just her bra, a little pink bra that looked to him like it was at least a couple sizes to small for her--creamy brown flesh was mounding out above the top of the cups. Her face was red as she reached around her back and unhooked her bra.

She pulled the bra off and her sweet, chubby preadolescent breasts were bare.

They were so beautiful, still quite small but beginning to fill out, her beautiful creamy brown milk chocolate skin holding in two little bags of fat topped with dark, thick nipples. Pinkish indentations ran along the line where the top of her bra had been digging into her flesh.

He stepped towards her, reaching out with the twenty dollar bill. "I want you to take this," he said, his voice strong with authority. Holding the bill, he rubbed his knuckles up and down over one of her stiff nipples.

"OK," she said quietly, and reached up and took the money.

He took her nipple between his thumb and forefinger, pinching it lightly. "There's lots more where that came from," he said, his mouth so close to hers that they could feel each other's hot breath.

She nodded, understanding what he meant.

He pulled on her nipple, then let go and kissed her one more time. "I think you better be getting home now," he said. She nodded again and pulled her shirt back on.

After he saw her out the door, he returned to the basement and picked up her bra that she'd left lying on the ground. He unzipped his pants and took his cock out, then wrapped one of the bra cups around his shaft and began masturbating, rubbing his aching cock with the soft cotton of her bra and thinking about her beautiful little creamy-brown breasts. He wrapped the other cup over his head as he came, soaking the bra with semen.

He hid her bra in his workroom; he jacked off into that bra several more times before he had a chance to give it back to her.

----

He didn't see her again for almost a week, when she came over to mow again. As he was unlocking the shed for her, he said, "I think you left something over here."

"Yeah," she said, giving him a little smile, "my bra."

"Judy's home right now. Come back tomorrow when she's not here and you can pick it up."

"OK."

"But for now, when you're done, come in and I'll get you your money for mowing and we can drink some lemonade and play Xbox."

"OK."

The next day Taniqua stopped by his house after school. They went down to the basement together and he grabbed her bra from his workroom and handed it to her.

"Thanks," she said as she stuffed it in her pants' pocket.

He took a twenty out of his pocket. "Do you want to..." He reached the money out to her.

She took the money from him. "You want me to take my shirt off again?" she asked as she stuffed the twenty into her pocket next to her bra.

"I want you to touch me today," he said.

"Touch you?"

He unbuttoned his pants and pulled them open, then slipped his erect cock out of the fly of his boxers. "Touch my cock, Nika," he said, taking hold of her hand and pulling it down.

Her fingers were small and cool as she gently explored his manhood. She was breathing heavy.

"My balls, too, Nika," he whispered. "Touch my balls."

She reached her cool little fingers down and softly caressed his scrotum.

"Now wrap your fingers around my cock," he said. Then he reached down and wrapped his hand around hers and showed her how to stoke him.

"Oh, Nika, that feels so good," he whispered in her ear, taking his hand away from hers. "It feels so wonderful!"

He could see her smiling, although she was staring down at his cock.

As she continued gently stroking him, he put his hand on her belly, then moved it down, into her pants. He slipped it under the waistband of her panties, then felt her pubic hair. He pushed deeper, down to her pussy. He smiled when he found it: the girl was soaking wet.

He rubbed his finger over her clitoris for a moment, her breath sharp and quick, then he pulled his hand out. She took her hands away from his cock as well.

"I should probably go home now," she said, "before Mrs. Kensington comes home."

"Yeah." They kissed for a moment, then he walked her to the door.

After she left he went immediately to the bathroom. He held his fingers up to his nose and smelled the young girl's pussy as he masturbated himself to a wonderful orgasm.

----

He handed her another twenty. "I want to see your pussy today."

"Oh, man," she said, her cream-brown face turning red. She took his money and stuffed it in her pocket. "What do you want me to do? Just pull my shorts down?"

"Off," he said. "Take them off."

"Oh, man," she said again. But she pulled her shorts and panties down and let them fall to the ground. He could see a little tuft of dark hair just gracing her sweet little pubic mound.

"Lay down on the couch," he told her, "and spread your legs open, so I can see her."

"Oh, man," she said a third time. But she lay down and spread her legs. She wrapped an arm over her eyes so that she couldn't see him staring at her sex.

Her pussy looked tiny to him. The little tangled tuft of dark hair on her pubic mound led down to chubby reddish outer labia, dusted with only a few little curls of hair. He could just see her tiny baby clitoris, shrouded in a creamy chocolate hood, barely sticking up from between her lips.

He unzipped his pants and took his cock out and began masturbating. "She's beautiful," he said reverentially.

"Oh man," she said quietly.

He climbed onto the couch and knelt, leaning down so that his head was in her crotch, and looked at her girlish sex more closely. He could smell her excitement, that same smell that he had masturbated to before, and his heart was pounding. He could see the little goosebumbs of hair follicles on her swollen reddish lips, and he was overcome with a desire to kiss that beautiful childish pussy.

He leaned in and kissed her sex. "Oh, man," she said another time, this time almost a moan. He pushed his tongue into her and tasted her, salt and sex and girlhood mixed together. As he began licking her clitoris, playing with it with the tip of his tongue, he started masturbating again.

She was breathing hard as she started moving her hips in rhythm with his tongue. A minute later he lifted his head away to look at her pussy again; it was dripping with wetness, the bluish bulb of her clitoris standing up smartly, pushing out of its chocolate shroud, erect and begging to be sucked.

"Your pussy is so beautiful," he said, looking up at her.

She removed the arm from across her eyes and looked down at him, a glassy expression, her face bright red.

Still looking up at her, he stuck his tongue out and licked her clitoris. "Come for me, Nika," he said softly.

"Ohhh!" she said, high-pitched and long. She reached down and grabbed his head and her body began convulsing. She came for quite a while, her hips bucking into him as he continued licking her.

"Oh my god," she said when her orgasm finally subsided.

He sat up. "Did you like that?"

"Oh, yeah," she said, a smile growing across her dark red face.

He reached down to the floor and picked up her panties and wrapped them around his aching cock. "I'm gonna finish in your panties," he said.

She smiled and watched in fascination as he masturbated.

He grunted as he came, using her panties to catch his semen. Then he handed them to her. "There you go."

She grinned as she looked at them. "You made a big mess," she said.

"Yeah." He laughed. "Sorry!"

Then she stood up, and to his amazement, she pulled the wet panties on.

"You're gonna wear those?" he said.

"Yeah, this way I'll remember you, when I'm at home." She grinned at him. "Is that dirty?"

"Yeah!"

"I guess I'm dirty then!"

----

She took his twenty dollars and stuck it in her pocket. "So what are we going to do today?" she asked.

"I don't know, what do you want to do?"

"I get to choose?"

"Yeah."

The beautiful girl looked at him with a little smile. "I want to give you a blowjob," she said.

"Really?" The breath left him quickly, like he had the wind knocked out of him. He never imagined that little Nika would suggest such a thing.

"Yeah, I want to make you feel good, like you made me feel good the other day."

She knelt down in front of him. "So what do I do?" she asked, looking up at him.

"Take my pants down first," he said.

She unbuttoned his fly and pulled them down, pulling his underwear down at the same time, and she looked a bit surprised as his cock jumped up, big and hard, when she freed it.

"It's so big," she said.

"Kiss it, now, Nika," he said. "Give the tip a nice wet kiss."

She pushed her thick lips against the head, giving it a kiss. "How was that?" she asked, looking up at him with her dark, beautiful eyes.

"Perfect. Now lick it."

She smiled as she looked back down at his cock, then stuck her tongue out and licked the underside of his head. His breath was short; it felt spectacular.

The girl looked up at him with a sweet expression, clearly aware that she was giving him pleasure with her tongue. He lifted his shaft with a finger. "Now lick the whole thing, all the way down to my balls."

She leaned down and put her tongue on the top of his scrotum, where it met his shaft, then moved up, licking his entire shaft.

"Like that?" She looked up at him.

"Yeah! Do it again."

She leaned down and put her warm, wet tongue on the bottom of his shaft again and then licked up to the top. When she got to the top, she leaned back down and did it again, and again, and again.

"I like licking it," she said, her mouth right in front of his ballsack, her breath warm and exciting.

"Kiss me right there," he said, pointing right at the base of his shaft. "Give me a big wet kiss right there!"

She wrapped her lips around the base of his cock and gave it a wet, luscious kiss. He could feel her warm tongue against the skin of his scrotum.

"Oh, Nika," he said in a moan.

The girl sat up, making a funny face. "I can feel your hair on my tongue, it's very hairy."

"Yeah, sorry," he said.

She smiled at him. "I like how hairy it is. It's very, I don't know, masculine, I guess! I like that."

He lowered his shaft so that his head was pointing at her. "OK, sweetie, it's time for you to suck me."

She smiled up at him. "OK."

"Open wide, and take my head in your mouth," he told her.

She looked fabulous with his cock in her mouth. Her soft, beautiful face was red with excitement; she was looking up at him, her dark eyes twinkling eyes with merriment. His cock looked huge compared to her angelic, childish face.

Her mouth was wonderfully warm and he could feel her soft tongue on the underside of his glans. And he could feel her suck; she would suck, and then let up, then suck again. "Oh my god," he said out-loud. She had him on the verge of orgasm already, and he wanted so badly to jack himself, it would only take a couple of strokes, and he would explode.

But he wanted to teach her what to do, and he wanted to enjoy her virgin mouth for as long as he could. "OK," he said breathlessly, "now you remember how you jacked me the other day, with your hand? You remember what you did?"

She nodded, which looked rather comical with his big cock in her mouth. Then she reached her little hand up and started beating on his cock.

"Oh, baby, you're gonna make me come," he whispered. Her eyes twinkled as she looked up at him.

"Now start bobbing your head, let my my cock slide in and out of your mouth. Open really wide so you don't drag any teeth, and use lots of spit, everything needs to be really wet, just like your pussy."

She looked up at him with twinkling eyes and nodded, then started bobbing, his head gliding through her lips; out, then in again, then out, then in again.

"Let your spit just flow down my cock," he said quietly. "Make it soaking wet."

She nodded up at him again, and he could feel her spit dripping down his shaft.

"Now let your spit lubricate your hand, slide it up and down."

Her dark eyes twinkled up at him as she massaged his shaft with her wet hand and sucked his head, letting it slide in and out of her mouth.

He put his hands on the back of her head. "Oh, Nika, my baby! Is it OK if I come in your mouth?"

She nodded.

"Oh baby, oh baby, I'm gonna come! Ohhhhh!" He let out a low, guttural moan, the unmistakable sound of masculine sexual release.

She pulled back with surprise as the first shot filled her mouth. He wanted to pull her back down on his head for the second shot but he didn't, instead he just held her in place as the second shot fired out of him and covered her beautiful, angelic face with semen. Instinctively she ducked down to avoid the third shot and it fired right into her hair. Then he stood above her and finished, shooting come over her and into her hair.

She looked up at him, his come dribbling out of her mouth and down her chin. She wiped her face off with the back of her hand.

"Wow!" she said.

"Yeah, you're sorta a mess."

"Yeah, I better get home and take a shower before Mom gets back!"

He helped her to her feet, then gave her a little kiss. "Nika, that was the greatest blow job I've ever gotten."

"You're sweet!" she said, a big smile on her face.

----

"I bought my iTouch today," Taniqua said to him when they were alone together again. He was laying on the couch and she was sitting next to him.

"Really? You like it?"

"Yeah, it's awesome! So this means you don't have to give me any more money."

"I like giving you money."

"I know you do," she said, grinning at him. She climbed onto him, straddling his legs.

"I just got paid," he said, "and Judy's out of town, she's in New Jersey for work. And since your mom's working the late shift tonight I thought I'd take your somewhere nice for dinner."

"OK." She leaned over and kissed him.

"So what do you want for dinner?"

"Pizza!"

"OK, but I'm taking you to the fanciest pizza joint in town."

After dinner he brought her back to his house. He took a wad of cash out of his pocket and handed it to her. "Here," he said, "so you can get some songs for your iTouch."

She counted it; five twenties. "A hundred dollars?"

"Yeah, so you can get a lot of songs."

"You don't have to give me any money."

"I like to give you money."

"You like to treat me like I'm... You know..."

"Like you're a whore?"

She punched him. "Yeah!"

"I prefer to think of it as a 'sugar daddy' and his girl."

"'Sugar daddy?'"

"Yeah, you know, like a rich guy that likes to gives his girl money."

"You're my 'sugar daddy' then," she said. "But still, this is way too much money."

"Too much for what?"

She looked up at him with her dark eyes, suddenly looking rather nervous. "Too much for..."

He took her hand. "Nika," he said, "I want to take you upstairs, to my bedroom."

She looked at him with her piercing dark eyes. "And this..." She held the money out with her other hand. "Is this because you want to... to go all the way with me?"

"It's just..." he stammered, "it's just a gift."

She looked at him with those damn eyes. Then she gave him a very little smile. "Sure it is."

"So will you come to my bedroom with me?" He asked. His heart was pounding.

"You're my 'sugar daddy,'" she said, grinning at him. "I'll do whatever you want to do." She stuffed the cash in her pocket.

In his bedroom, they lay down on the bed together. She looked around the room.

"So this is where you and Judy do it?"

"Not very often," he said.

She smiled sweetly at him. "I don't understand that. If you were my husband..." Her voice tailed off.

"Yeah?"

She was blushing.

"What? If I was your husband, what?"

She grinned at him. "I'd make you clean the house every day, that's what!"

"You!" He reached around her and started tickling her ribs.

She rolled on the bed, giggling, and he rolled with her. She started tickling him, too, and they both rolled some more.

Eventually she grabbed his arms and pulled them over his head, flipped him onto his back, and straddled him. The girl actually was surprisingly strong for such a little thing!

"I win!" she shouted.

"No you don't," he said, putting up a mock struggle.

"Yes I do. Now, husband, go clean the house!"

In one quick move, he freed his hands, grabbed her wrists, flipped her over onto her back with him on top of her, in between her legs.

"I win," he said.

She struggled to get her hands free, and he let her.

"OK," she said, "you don't have to clean the house. Not now, anyway."

"So what are we going to do now, then?"

She grabbed his wrists, and he let her flip him over.

"I don't know," she grinned, straddling him again, "what do you want to do?"

He freed his hands and grabbed her ass, one cheek for each hand, pulling her towards him.

"I want to fuck you."

"How rude!" she said, her face right in front of his.

"I want to make sweet passionate love to you," he said with mocking romance.

"That's a little better." She leaned her face down and kissed him. The she sat up on her knees, straddling his lap, and pulled her shirt off. He was mesmerized once again by the sight of her creamy milk chocolate brown breasts bulging out of her too-small bra. She reached around her back, undid her bra, pulled it off, and her little twelve-year-old breasts were free.

He was instantly and madly in love again. Over and over he falls madly in love with his little neighbor girl. He reached his hands up and gently took hold of her breasts, squeezing them together, her stiff dark nipples standing up prominently.

"You are the most beautiful girl in the world, Nika," he said.

She blushed hard.

"I love you."

She smiled sweetly at him. "I love you too."

He pulled her down to him, then pressed his face in between her little breasts, still squeezing them together. He just held himself there, feeling the soft warm skin of her bosom against his cheeks. Then he moved his face to the side, his mouth blindly seeking a nipple, finding it, latching onto it.

He heard her let out a little sound, a high-pitched moan or breath, and he lapped hungrily at the stiff skin of her thick teat. As he suckled, he pressed his face into her soft warm flesh, letting her little breast smother him completely.

Eventually he pulled his face away from her breast and just looked at it, examining it, memorizing everything there was to know about it. Her nipple was stiff, sparkling with wetness from his sucking, her dark areola wrinkling in response to her thickened teat. Her breast itself was the most amazing beautiful pure dark cream, not a blemish on it, so soft and warm and womanly and comforting. He turned to her other breast, just as beautiful and dark and pure, a small dark mole on the pale underside; the areola on this breast was not wrinkled but instead was wide, perhaps two inches across, standing up from the milk chocolate flesh and covered with goosebumps, her teat nonetheless stiff and prominent. He raised his face to this breast and latched onto the nipple and suckled, feeling her warm, comforting flesh again.

After a minute, she sat up on her knees above him. She reached down to the bottom of his shirt and started pulling it up. He lifted his arms in response and she pulled his shirt off of him.

She leaned over him and wrapped her warm, wet lips around one of his nipples, suckling for a moment, then moved to his other nipple. Then she kissed his sternum, then moved down, climbing off of him so that she was in between his legs, her mouth now on his belly, giving him big, wet kisses. When she reached the top of his pants she unzipped them and he lifted his hips to allow her to pull them down. She continued kissing his belly, moving further down, pulling his underwear down as well. Her face was now in his pubic hair, his stiff cock against her cheek. She kissed around the base of his cock, letting his cock fall down onto him, then put her warm tongue on his scrotum, right at the base of his shaft, and licked, sliding her tongue wetly up his shaft to the underside of his glans, then moved back down and licked him again, and again, and again.

She sat up and smiled at him, a strange, wonderful, exciting smile, her chocolate face bright red, her eyes twinkling like they always do, and she pulled her pants and panties off.

On fire now with sexual aggression, she climbed back on top of him, grabbed his cock, and directed it into her vagina.

It was paradise that he felt as her pussy lips, warm, wet, luxurious, wrapped around his cockhead, giving it a sensuous soaking kiss.

She pushed her hips down; his cock burrowing further into her and pushing now against her maidenhead. Despite his stiffness--as hard as he had ever been in his entire life--his poor penis bowed against the impenetrability of her hymen. As she let up pressure, he reached down and wrapped his hand around his cock, holding it tight.

"Try again," he whispered to her. She looked at him, her eyes glassy, her face red. She nodded, and pushed her hips down again.

He felt his head pushing into the little opening of her hymen. She let up pressure, then pushed down again; this time his head went further, her tight skin expanding around it. She let up pressure and pushed down hard, one last time, and he entered her completely.

With the head of his penis now two inches inside her, she leaned over him and put her mouth against his. Their tongues touched inside his mouth, then inside hers, and they lay there, kissing, not moving.

She lifted her head. "I love you," she said.

"I love you too."

"I'm so glad you were my first."

"I'm so glad, too."

He put his hands on her hips and began to instruct her on how to move, pulling her up towards him so that his head slipped out, only her wet lips wrapped around it, then pushing her down, so that he slid back into her. She understood instinctively and began moving up and down, his head sliding deeper into her with each downward motion until he was all the way in, all the way to the hilt.

His penis was on fire, throbbing; she was hot inside her, and wet, oh so very, very wet; within two or three more downward thrusts he felt her come flowing out of her, soaking his balls.

Her face was above his, her mouth open, her dark, penetrating eyes wide open. "Oh my god," she said quietly, "I think I'm gonna come!"

She lifted her face up, towards the ceiling, her eyes now clenched shut. "Ohhhhh!" Her body started shaking, then convulsing.

Eventually she settled down, laying down on him entirely, his cock impaling her all the way inside her. "Oh my god," she said quietly again, panting. "Oh my god."

He wrapped his arms around her, giving her a strong hug. Then he flipped her over onto her back with him on top of her, his penis still deep inside her.

In charge now, he was the expert, he was the man, and he began fucking the little girl, full, deep stokes, her hot pussy gushing with each downward thrust. Her eyes were still wide, her face dark red. She started shaking again. "Ohhhhhhhhh!"

At the last possible second he pulled out of her, his semen erupting, firing over her, onto her face and her breasts and her belly.

Then he lay on top of her and she wrapped her arms and legs around him and they just lay there together, holding each other tightly, holding each other as close as they possibly could for an eternity.

After she had taken a shower, she helped him take the bedsheets off--there was a spot of blood on them.

"It seemed like you enjoyed that," he said to her.

She grinned at him. "Maybe a little."

"Seemed like a bit more than that!"

She punched him in the shoulder. "Now, husband," she said, "it's time for you to clean the house!"

----

He was standing behind her, his hands gripping tightly to her beautiful chocolate-colored ass cheeks, his throbbing cock sliding in and out of her soaking, slutty snatch. Her come was flowing out like it always does, his balls were wet and sticky as they swung merrily, slapping against her clit with each thrust.

Her thirteenth birthday had been a couple of days before and he'd suggested to his wife that they should throw a party for her, and Judy, being a sweet woman and a good neighbor to Taniqua and her mom, as well as completely ignorant of his relationship with the girl, had done it up in style, a big cake and a pinata and everything. All her friends from school came.

He was breathing hard, he was close to losing it, and she knew it. She reached under her and grabbed his balls, squeezing them tightly, and as she did this, she started moaning and her legs started shaking.

"Ohhhhh!" she moaned into her pillow.

He'd never known a girl that came as much during sex as Taniqua did. She was a amazing orgasmic little slut.

When her orgasm was over, he pulled out of her and she rolled over onto her back. She knew the routine well by now. A couple of quick stokes with his hand was all it took and he came, too, spewing come all over the little girl.

She sat up when he was finished and give him a big hug. "I love you, Jamie," she said.

"I love you, Nika," he said back to her.

Comments

Nickname	Date	Feedback
Anonymous		well written very erotic
Larry		lovely,sexy,sensual and very arousing tale. Older man and young girl that find that special place
Anonymous		My only problem with this story was that it went right to the good stuff. You should do a slower build up. But then again, some are just here for a quick wank. Otherwise, not too bad of a story.
slvrhiker		Great story... sexy, arousing... and could be very truthful... Makes me wish I had a little neighbor... darn the luck... Will look forward to your next story..
Anonymous		More please!!!!
Anonymous		be nice too see if they kept going for years
Anonymous		Not bad. I wish it took a little more to get her to agree to things sexual. Slower steps would be better -- for me at least.
		Thanks to both you and the previous Anon for this feedback on the timing. I'm sort of of two minds; my instinct as a writer of erotica is toward the "stroke story" (or "rub story" if you prefer) and I generally don't like stories that go on much before the first sex scene. That's my weakness as a writer I suppose. Will keep this advice on mind though and thanks again. --Chris
bobby		I wish I could find someone like her...Wow powerful...and I have a lot of twenties too....
Marty		good story line
Anonymous		The last paragraph could have had the surprise of the person he was making love to at that point was his wife who had just put on the party for the 13 y o and one would be left with the mystery of not knowing who was really the previous lover - a fantasy or the real thing.
		Great idea, Anonymous. Should've done it that way! --Chris
Kaff		Good story, well-written, not just a "wham kiss, thank you Miss" sort of story and lots of potential to take it further. Perhaps Nika could have a scene going with a schoolfriend and it could turn into a threesome or maybe she starts to do chores for Mrs Kensington who ALSO takes a liking for 13-year-old pussy and introduces her to lesbian love which might explain why Mr K describes her as "cold". Perhaps she likes to warm up with a young girl. Or maybe you will just leave the story there and come up with another plot. Either way you need to keep writing
AmandaP		We enjoyed reading your story. You kept the story moving without it seeming rushed. You captured the warmth between the two sufficiently to make it believable. Keep up the good work and we look forward to Chapter 2.
Allen		You should do a part 2. Do some anal maybe. Or take her to get a full body massage and watch her get the rub down by an older massage therapist. With a happy ending on her pa. Maybe a few slaps to her little bottom
Wildbill		Excellent....I used to write short pieces for LETTERS Magazine, once upon a time. There are truckers out there who still appreciate my one-handed reading material. I grew up around lots of Taniquas....'nuff said.
		Thanks, Willbill. One nice thing about the reading erotica on the internet is that you can use both hands! --Chris
Tom		I agree with Allen up there. Sounds kinky dude. Lol.
Anonymous		the racial subtext of this kind of bothered me, I suppose that is a silly complaint about a story of a man fucking a twelve year old girl but it is something I noticed
		I'm intrigued by your comments, Anon. I'd love a chance to discuss further, out of intellectual curiosity more than anything else. One interesting thing is how little commenters have mentioned Nika's race. I expected it to be mentioned by a few posters (particularly since I've read elsewhere people complaining that there's not enough loli fiction about African American girls), but so far you are the first person to mention it. I'd love to know what bothered you about it; I never explicitly mention her race, only physical characteristics, described in basically the same adoring language I use when describing my usual lily-white lolis. Her name is explicitly African-American (in fact part of the genesis of the story was a conversation in the Loliwood forum about whether you should use these sorts of names rather than the standard "Emily," "Carly" stuff you usually find in loli fiction). There's also a socio-economic thing in this story which maybe contributes to your discomfort? Again, though, not an uncommon theme in "white" loli fiction either. Anyway, I'd love to hear more about your thoughts on the subject, or other people's thoughts. --Chris
Anonymous		Loved it! As an old white dude, and a former teacher, I have often fantasized about fucking a black girl. It seems to be a common fantasy for white southern guys. Part of it may be the many myths (or are they myths?) about black sexuality. Whatever it is, I think many white southerners fantasize about fucking black girls and women. Keep up the good work.
		Thanks for your feedback, Anon, and your honesty on the issue. I have a feeling that "myths about black sexuality" are related to the concern that the earlier anon mentioned. --Chris
Mike Merkin		Just discovered your stories a couple of days ago and read them all. This is one of my favorites. I'm not normally a big fan of adult/youth stories but the quality and style of your writing is exceptional. I would love to see your take on awkward teen first romance with characters in the early stages of adolescence. "Eyeliner" by Henrik Larsen is a great example. A young 11-12 year old girl infatuated with a boy 3 or 4 years older would also be interesting. Keep up the great work.
		Mike, thanks for your comment. I read "Eyeliner" and wow that's damn good I will need to read it again! And I hope you've had a chance to read my latest story, Dancing in the Sunshine, which I wrote after your suggestion that I write an "awkward teen romance." If you get a chance to read it let me know what you think. --Chris
Mike Merkin		I did read the new story right away. Very well done! I'm looking forward to more.
Mike Merkin		I should also mention that one of the things I find appealing about your writing are the realistic physical descriptions of the characters. It's great to be able to develop a picture in your mind as you read. All too often the only descriptions that most authors provide are big tits and giant cocks. I love the image of Taniqua's developing breasts bulging out of the too small bra.
Pedroone		Very good content and grammar also good. You can expand on this story to include further participants, either from within the family group, or from outside. The world is your oyster! I will look for further developments.
JJ		I enjoyed reading this story. I am an oldtimer and like to read the occasional sex story. Especially ones between older male and young girl. I also like to read older female and young boy. Will check your other stories and make a report.
PromiscousPete		Loved this story...all aspects. The loving fatherly way it starts...the titillation (excuse the pun) he brings by admiring and describing so clearly her budding breasts...areole and nipples. The build up superb....grammar...spelling.....punctuation .....what a pleasure to read..... Would absolutely love to read a follow up...and as previous commentators have stated there are limitless possibilities of how a chapter 2 could develop. Thanks once again for a superb story very well written.Will definitely be reading a lit more of yours. Peter
Firemouth		Really a great story, one of the best i have read in a couple of years Please keep the stories comming, your style of writing is great.
Peter		I really enjoyed this story! It was so much more believable than most that I have read where the young girl seduces the older man, that may sound erotic but it is just so unrealistic. Also, I really appreciate the mutual love and respect between the two - a real love story. And I also like that the girl is dark skinned, seems like everything I read is about a blond with big tits. It's good to know that other people appreciate diversity. Great story!! How can I read other stories of yours?
		Thanks, Peter. There's a link to my story page at the top of this page, and at the top of every story I post, although people seem to be having trouble finding it so maybe I should move the link to a more obvious place? Anyway here's the link: Chris Hailey's Erotic Stories home page --Chris.
darrell		I had a friend of one of my daughters come home with them and she was all over me. If a grown man could be raped I would have been. Great story and reminded me of her. Keep up the good work. Love to hear more of her and the neighbor.
Anonymous		I really enjoyed the story. How about another chapter and maybe they can get more entangled with each other. Maybe she might even get pregnant and he might be getting a divorce. The they'd have to figure out how to stay together. Just saying.... Good story though.
Ladybug		Very good story, I really enjoyed how it grew into a loving relationship. Part 2 could include Judy coming home unexpectedly finding them, and getting turned on and getting into the act. Waiting for the next chapter.
		Interesting ideas, Ladybug. Haven't given much thought yet to a second part to this story but perhaps it is a good idea. --Chris
sweet stix		What ya tryin to say about black girls
		Nothing, of course. Lolitas in my fantasy world like to fuck like mad no matter what color their skin is! --Chris
bereaved daddy		Probably not my favorite of your stories. Now that I've had a chance to read a number of them I see that your girls progress more quickly to more advanced sexual stages than I believe is realistic. I know things need to move quickly in short stories like these, but I still feel that way. That doesn't mean that I don't enjoy what you write, but this issue makes the possible situations less believable. Just my two cents worth because the vast majority of your readers that give responses seem quite turned on by them. I need more emotional depth and psychological development of the youngsters before I could see them get as hot and heavily into their seducers as they seem to do so easily for you.
joeycock		Lick her hairy bush too! fuck her doggy...
pederos		NICE!!!! I LOVE pedo-erotic fiction which emphasizes the JOY and FUN of child-adult sex, and this story is a STERLING example of that!! You MUST have a Part Two!!!!
pussy_asia		had my pussy dripping. i wish i had a sugar daddy
		My kind of comment, pussy. And if you're taking sugar daddy resumes, send me an application! --Chris
Sarge		Enjoyed the story. You gave the characters a somewhat human quality. Like the guy wanting her to be able to get her airtouch early. He may have had ulterior motives but still he acted concerned. Little touches like that helped your story. Thanks Chris!
Esio Trot		Nice story, Chris Surprised nobody has mentioned a typo in his surname, "... twelve year old girl for mowing the Kensigtons' postage-stamp sized yard"
		Once again thanks for the typo fix, Esio! Much appreciated. --Chris
CuriousPrettyChocolate		As an African American woman who is still throbbing over this story :) I would like to say thank you and I look forward to more stories with little black girls. When I fantasize about this I don't become a little white girl, you know? Well written, I'm going nuts right now.
		Curious, What a great comment. Nothing makes me happier than to know that a story of mine helped turn on a woman reader. And I'm really glad you liked the fact that the girl is African American. I can't really think of another story I've posted here where the girl is explicitly African American, although I often have a black girl (or woman :) in mind when I am writing or fantasizing. I am an equal opportunity pervert! I definitely will write more like this. --Chris
Demetria		I'm black and I'd love a sugar daddy and am always attracted to older men. I wish I could find someone like that or something like that.
		Thanks for the comment, Demetria. If you're taking applications for a sugar daddy, I think you'll be impressed by my resume! BTW, I sent an email to the address you provided, but it bounced back as undeliverable. --Chris
Thedrummer		Fantastic story , well written
		Thanks for the kind compliment, but let's be honest, this stuff writes itself--creamy brown twelve year old titties mounding out of a too-small bra... Does it get any better than that? --Chris
naughtyleah		As a black female who grew up in an affluent white area, I always fantasized about white boys and older white men having their way with me. Im now married to a white man and have primarily dated white men. Im 36 now, and stories like this are very arousing to me and I believe they happen more than we know. I'm especially attracted to southern white males but and sexy aggressive white man could get me going really. In my experiences, white men know how to satisfy me better in the bedroom. I am submissive and prefer dominant white males. I had a few experiences I relive when I read this story. I'd love to read more stories like this of yours.
		Wow, thanks for the arousing and interesting comment, naughtyleah. I have written a few other stories about black girls, and want to write many more. See for example A Little Pink Candy Heart. Feel free to tell me more about the experiences you relive when you read this story! --Chris
James		Makes me want to go and do this in real life best story.
john		nicely done...thanks!
cary		Just had to tell you how much I enjoy reading stories like yours involving black girls.im mixed blk/wht and my first lover was a older white man..your stories kind of help me relive that experience..thank you.
		Thanks for the wonderful comment, cary. So glad to hear! --Chris
Rhys		A really great story. First of yours for me to read. From the day as a thirteen year old when I had real sex with a 12 year old girlfriend I still enjoy - many years later - fantasizing about girls like this one. In my experience they usually want it more than me!! A great story to make me want some more. Great to feel the real relationship developing as well as the great sex. Makes me think of my long-term mistress who was a schoolgirl - but legal - when we started making out. Going to read more of you now. Thanx.
AMae1671	10/26/2015	Hel-loo Mr Hailey. Loved this story! Hot...hot...hot! As a Southern black female, it was nice to see a character that was just an average black girl and not written as an over-the-top stereotype. It also brings back memories from my pre-teen years of mature, Southern gentlemen who used to leer at me and make, what I now know were, improper suggestions. (Sigh) If only I knew then... Please consider a Part 2. Please?
		Thank you so much AMea. Wonderful to hear from you. I've not thought too hard about what should be in a part 2 of this--any ideas?--Chris
Anonymous	11/03/2015	I have read several of your stories. You have a nice flow to your writting. Keep up the good work.
Anonymous	10/8/2015	Thank you for writing and sharing! I always love your work. The descriptive language is perfect. I am stroking now just imagining this beautiful dark child.
ptman	11/11/2015	Very well written. Not long and dragged out. I could almost feel the passion and lust. It definitely made me want to change places with him and experience the eroticism of this wonderful story of love and gentle seduction. Please let me know if you have any more stories.
		Lots of other stories! Like almost a hundred I think! :) At the top of the page are a couple of clickable links that should take you back to my home page, /~Chris_Hailey. --Chris

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