Appears an angel, beauty's chaste delight,
A naked nymph who trips along moonbeams.
She floats on air, a dancing swirling sprite--
My lover comes to me out of my dreams.
She smiles as I inhale her sweet perfume;
The air is filled with love's pure wondrous smell.
In moonglow's essence, incense fills the room,
Her nectar causing man's desires to swell.
She breathes so deeply, love song now begun,
To throb of quaking hearts with beats amiss.
Wet lips are pressed against an anxious tongue,
Her beauty's taste explored by true love's kiss.
And then with joy she opens under me,
An angel off'ring sweet virginity.
| Nickname | Date | Feedback |
|---|---|---|
| angler | In your dreams! (and mine). Damn it. | |
| That same Anon from last week | 10/11/2015 | Lovely poem. It does however appear to be missing from your
chronological listing section, that's why I've missed this one till now. Also, yes, I did like 'Before Him Stands His Love' sonnet as well. The link for which still needs to be fixed in the alphabetical listing section. Same for 'On the eve before christmas'. :P |
| 10/12/2015 | It is with great heartfelt thanks that I have fixed all the broken links you have pointed out, Anon. I feel like I owe you a salary now for all the quality testing you have done! Again you choose a poem to comment on that has been much in my thoughts of late. You seem to be a fan of erotic poetry... Do you write any yourself? --Chris |
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