Before him stands his love, his little girl,
Before her, strong, broad-shouldered: man and king;
Her skin so pale, like alabaster pearl,
His eyes so blue, with merriment they ring.
She blushes, innocent virginity;
Strong hands reach for thin arms to pull her close.
Her chastity inflames unwittingly,
The perfume of her sex, his thoughts engross.
And so, on the ground, his maid, he lays down,
For royal pleasure, princess opens legs;
In grass, in soft down, hymen yields to crown,
And her ripe womb, for kingly semen begs
She feels him spill out; white stains on her dress;
His love overflows--a beautiful mess.
| Nickname | Date | Feedback |
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| 6ULDV8 | Hi... Nice ditty but nobody will read it due to the miss-type in the refering link... Thought you should know. | |
| Thank you so much for taking the time to point this out to me. It is greatly appreciated. Damn I love my readers, have I mentioned that recently? Not often enough! Fixed, with gratitude. --Chris |
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| Anon | 10/7/2015 | Hi, just letting you know that the link for this poem is still broken, so I doubt most people can access it. "Hin" needs to be changed to "Him" in the link. |
| 10/7/2015 | Wow, thank you so much for pointing this out to me (again)! Sorry for failing to fix it the first time (not sure what happened???). I've got it fixed now, I swear! So did you like the poem, Anon? It's a special one for me and I'd love to know what you think. --Chris |
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