I can feel my orgasm beginning. Deep inside me, back behind my balls, a surging, a feeling of imminent release, a fully-primed load of semen ready to explode with all the force that a sexually-charged cock can contain.
I grab her head, two large handfuls of her thick hair, and I pull back very hard, strong and authoritative. This forces her head back, down into the bed, her chin up and her throat exposed. Her eyes are closed tightly, almost a grimace, in part no doubt from pain--I am pulling her hair so tightly, and holding it down with such force, that it must hurt a great deal--but also in part, I'm sure, from sexual ecstasy, her body understanding that I am about to explode and wanting so badly to fulfill her duty, to bring me to orgasm and take my semen into her.
I rear back and slam into her. She is so open now that there is no resistance; her slutty snatch is wet and hot and fully lubricated, a gaping hole, a little fuck toy. My balls smack up against her ass as I impale her fully, to the hilt, the head of my cock now deep inside her.
I grunt, loudly, right in her ear, as my orgasm begins. "You fucking slut," I say in a gruff, breathy whisper. I have one more thrust in me before I explode and I pull out, yanking her hair even harder as I slam into her again, slapping her violently with my balls. Then I hold my cock deep in her, waiting for one short, glorious second while the first shot of semen courses down my cock.
And then I explode, every ounce of energy I possess devoted to firing my semen into her womb. She moans, knowing that I am coming, knowing that I am filling her with come. I rear back again, pull even harder on her hair, and slam into her again. She is sopping wet now, a little come-loving whore. I fire into her again, giving her another shot of what I know she wants. This is an incredible explosion; agonizing, wonderful, exhilarating, and it fills her womb completely with come until she is overflowing.
I rear back and slam in again, her slutty cunt now spent, used, violated, conquered. I hold myself inside her, still holding her down by her hair, while I finish. When I am finally done, three or four smaller shots of semen completing the act, I let go of her hair. She offers me a feeble smile as I pull out of her.
| Nickname | Feedback |
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| jj | Quick and to the point. We don't get to know what she looks like or her age and whether she is slim, fat or tall and not short. the teller of the story is incongnito as well. Is it interacial? But never-the-less a f**ing good screw. Thanks |
| Anonymous | Agonizing, not antagonizing. Different meanings. Otherwise, above average writing, much better than most of the tense shifting peckings I find on these sites. |
| Hey, thanks for the feedback Anonymous. I fixed the typo.--Chris | |
| Anonymous | Not some of your best writing. |
| Anonymous | Didn't you leave out the last line of the story? 'Thanks, Mom.' |
| Good humor, Anon! --Chris |
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| Anon | Nice and quick, and to the point! You might want to look up the definition of the word "eminent". The spelling you want starts with the letter ' i '. |
| Thanks for feedback and the typo fix Anon. --Chris |
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| Malcolm | What is the basis for this need to diminish the one who is willingly giving you pleasure? Why pull her hair until, "it must hurt a great deal?" Why call her a, "fucking slut?" Why think of her as a, "cum-loving whore?" Does some or all of this make you feel bigger? stronger? better? Why not love the one with whom you are making love? Note that loving includes none of the above. |
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