"So did that feel good?"

"Definitely, thanks baby."

"I'm sorry my jaw got tired."

"That's OK. I want some pussy anyway!"

"Sweet! Oh oh, looks like we used up all the condoms. The drawer's empty."

"Damn! Why didn't you tell me you took the last one out? I would'a bought more."

"Sooorrr-eee. Jeez."

"I suppose we have to wait now?"

"Well, that's 'the rules.'"

"Fuck 'the rules!'"

"You know what my mama says: 'No sex without a condom!'"

"Your mom's a bitch."

"Yeah. I really wish I could have your cock in me right now."

"I really wish I could get some pussy."

"Maybe we could do it, like, for a little while?"

"Really?"

"Yeah, I mean, you can pull out, right? You can pull out before you come?"

"Definitely!"

"You really think you can do it? You can pull out in time?"

"Of course I can, I've done it a million times with other girls."

"Mama would be really mad if she knew I let you do it."

"Fuck your mama."

"Hey, you shouldn't be so nasty."

"I know. I just really want to have sex right now!"

"You're so horny!"

"No, I'm just totally in love with you, Cali."

"I love you too John."

"Show me how much you love me!"

"OK. Look at how much I love you!"

"Oh, Cali!"

"Come on now, gimme that big cock. It's your turn to show me how much you love me!"

"Oh, Cali!"

"Oh, John!"

"Baby, you're so fucking hot!"

"And you're so... hard... and so big... and strong..."

"Baby, it feels so good, you're so wet!"

"Fuck me... John! ...Fuck me!"

"Oh, Cali, I better stop. I better pull out."

"Don't stop... now! ...Just a little... longer!"

"If I go any longer... I won't be able to stop..."

"Just... a little bit... longer... It'll be... OK... right?"

"Cali! I'm gonna come!"

"You better... stop now... John!"

"I can't stop now, Cali!"

"John, you gotta... get off me!"

"Just a sec, Cali, I'll be done in a sec!"

"John!"

"Fuck! Oh, fuucckkkk!"



"You fucker! I knew you wouldn't be able to pull out."

"I'm sorry, Cali, I just couldn't help myself."

"You're just such a horny fucker!"

"It's all your fault."

"Bullshit! OK, now you never get to have sex with me again!"

"I'm just teasing, it's all my fault."

"OK, maybe you can have sex with me again, but you have to promise to use condom every time from now on."

"I promise!"





Author's note: For the additional Cali stories, see:

Comments

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CH Kitten Another lovely story, more implied than told. I get the sense she's almost going through a ritual now... like she knows she isn't supposed to want him to do that but she still relishes the hot sticky spurt of his cream deep inside, the sight of his face reddening and tensing to a total focus on her as he drives deep into her...

More?
You appear to be a good erotic writer, CH Kitten. Are you published?

I think you are right about Cali. I think she really likes the thick rushing feeling she gets when he comes inside her. Maybe one more story, where she just says, "Screw the stupid condom, come inside me!" :)

--Chris
Ch Kitten Not just yet, although a good friend of mine has been encouraging me to give it a try. What do you think?

Mostly I just find it really really hard to get started properly without characters I'm already invested in. How do you get your ideas, if you don't mind 'fessing up your secret? A very creative, active imagination? :)
I definitely think your friend is right.

I have always had an active imagination. My parents used to tease me when I was little because I would tell myself stories all the time. I think as far as erotica goes, I like to think of fantasies in my mind and then write them down. Most of what I write starts with a sexual fantasy and then I write the characters around that.

One thing about the process of writing is that stories build on each other. For example, my story Lip Gloss started out as one minor scene in a completely unrelated (and unpublished) story. In the middle of that story the hero takes the neighbor girl to the mall and she buys lip gloss and offers him a taste. And then I'm like, "Bingo! There's a story!" So, one piece of advice is, just keep writing, because story ideas always come to you when you write. Like, for example, if you have someone that you write naughty emails to, you might want to write him or her more often, and then story ideas might come from that. Just a thought.

--Chris
Anonymous I like the conversation story, but I like the flowers story! Much better!
I assume you are referring to my Loliwood Studios story, The Flower? Glad you liked it! It's always been one of my favorites.

--Chris
Mandy candy Love this story hope to hear more from it.
Thanks, Mandy. I'd love to do another Cali story--any ideas about what should happen in the next one?

--Chris
JJ Be honest. You're just transcribing a real conversation that takes place thousands of times each day :) Seriously, love your work. You're quite talented.
Thanks JJ!

--Chris
threecats See Dick Run.
See Jane run.
See Spot run.
One fist, two fish
Red fish, blue fish

No, seriously, I don't understand your post, threecats! Are you offended by this story's minnimalist approach?

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