"Uncle John, do you wanna try some of my Christmas candy?"

"Sure!"

"What kind do you want?"

"Hmm..."

"Here are some little sticky buns. They're really sweet. You wanna try?"

"Sure. Mmmm, that's good! I love your little sticky buns!"

"You're silly. Now how 'bout this sugar cookie? It's a little dolly."

"Cute!"

"Do you want to eat her?"

"Yeah."

"I'm going to have this big thick candy cane. I like to suck on candy canes!"

"This dolly cookie has a cute Christmas dress on."

"Yeah, she does."

"You have a cute Christmas dress on, too."

"Thanks! How 'bout my socks? They're Christmas socks, see? Snowmen!"

"They're really cute."

"Thanks! I also have Christmas panties on. You wanna see?"

"Yeah!"

"Aren't they cute? Rudolph with his shiny red nose!"

"I have some Christmas boxer shorts on."

"Can I see them!!?"

"Sure!"

"Oh, candy canes! Those are big candy canes, huh?"

"Yep! You like to suck big candy canes, right?"

"Yeah!"

"I have a really special kind of candy cane that's really fun to suck."

"You do?"

"Yeah, let me show you."

"Wow it's really big! I didn't know it got so big! I don't think I can get it in my mouth."

"You just have to open really wide."

"OK."

"Oh, that feels really good, Candi!"

"It's not very sweet, for a candy cane."

"No. Sorry."

"Maybe if I suck on my candy cane and then suck on your candy cane it will taste sweeter."

"Sounds like a good idea."

"There, now it tastes really sweet!"

"Good! I also have some special Christmas balls."

"Yeah, I see them. They're really big and hairy."

"You should kiss them."

"OK. Ummm, they taste good! And I like how the hair tickles my nose!"

"Do you have a special Christmas treat that I can taste?"

"You wanna taste my little Christmas cookie?"

"Yeah, I do."

"I have to take down my panties. Rudolph with his shiny red nose is in the way."

"Lucky Rudolph! I bet he likes being so close to your Christmas cookie. Maybe that's why his nose is red."

"Sort of like your big candy cane? It's all red, too."

"Lay down now so I can taste your Christmas cookie. Oh, she tastes so nice!"

"Ohhhh! It feels really good when you kiss her!"

"Does your Christmas cookie want to taste my candy cane?"

"I don't think it will fit."

"We can try."

"I think it will hurt."

"It'll be OK."

"I might get pregnant."

"You're too young to get pregnant."

"Do you really want to?"

"Yes."

"OK."

...

"Hu! It hurts!"

"It'll be OK."

"Ah! It hurts!"

"Shhh, it'll be OK, Candi. It's time for you to give me your Christmas cherry."

"Oh! It hurts!"

"The worst part is over now, sweetie."

"OK."

"Ugh, ugh, ugh..."

"Oh! Oh! Oh!"

"Ugh," "Oh!" "Ugh," "Oh!" "Ugh," "Oh!"

"Oh Candi! Oh my sweetie! Take my come!"

"I want your come! Give it to me!"

"Ugggghhhhh!" "Ohhhhhhhhh!"

"Ahh..."

"Hu..."

...

"Candi, you have the best Christmas candy ever."

"So do you, Uncle John!"

"We'll have to have some more Christmas treats soon."

"Yeah!"

Comments

Nickname	Date	Feedback
oldsocks		That was so hot.
		So glad you liked it, Socks. I have to admit, it's a little scary to post a story like this. I'm not sure if people are really going to like it or not. I like it, I think it's hot, so I post it (the only criteria I have for posting a story is whether or not I think it's hot!). But it's a bit off the beaten path, that's for sure! --Chris
daddysweetie		I think it is so hot. And I love Christmas stories and Christmas candies too !
Anonymous		Not bad at all.
bratovichc		OHHHHHH I came twice Reading this hot story, thank you
JP		Sorry dude, but you need to think about things, what you see in your mind. Take your time. Put that image in a readers mind. It was a nice first try, I know it took a lot to do it. maybe use a real life experience?? You were to quick on the subject, it was well, not beleiveable, sorry. But we DO appreciate your trying. it WILL get better with practice. You Want the reader, to SEE what you are typing. Best wishes
		Hey, thanks, JP, glad to know you liked it! Tee hee. Seriously now, you seem to be of the impression that this was my first story. Please do look over all of my stories (link is above), I've published over 60 on asstr. Most of them strive for believability above all else, as I think people who read my stories would agree. But sometimes I go for other sensibilities, like what you find in this one, which is dialog only with no descriptive text at all. It definitely ain't for everyone, but as you can tell from the above comments, some people enjoy it plenty. Thanks anyway for the comments. --Chris
Jolly Saint Dick		Reminds me of my cousin and I one year, many years ago. I was 16, she just 9. It was a great Christmas for sure, the first of several great holidays together.
		Thanks, Jolly. And folks, we have a winner for best nickname of the year! --Chris
Gideon		Hey, that was cute, just in time for xmas.
big bear		the story sure was a great one
daddysgirl		love the story.. Imagined me and dad in the place of characters
Pederos		Holy shit, that was erotic!!! The imagery and euphemisms helped to build up to the explosive plateau!!!! Beautifully done!!!
Dorian		Enjoyed the story. Like to read short ones now and then, this was "sweet!"
Anonymous	10/26/2015	kind of reminded me of a blank page from a big coloring book - i liked that a lot. but, there was one descriptor: she wasn't old enough to get pregnant. thats not something i really subscribe to, but i keep coming back here for more. any MF stories in the works?
		Oh dang, I wish I'd left that one descriptor out! Because I was definitely going for a "blank page" effect and I'm sad that it planted something in your mind that affected your own coloring. I'd love to do an MF story to give you more incentive to keep coming back to my site. I'm a little low on ideas right now--any particulars you have in mind? Scene, plot, sexual acts? --Chris

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