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Primary Story Codes:
MF Mf Fm fmb Fmb MFfmb MFfmm anal creampie inc mother/daughter mother/son father/daughter brothers brother/sister
Husband and wife Gene and Tamara share an open marriage with rules,
and their sexual lives are satisfying, their relationship together strong. Their children,
fifteen-year old Lauren, fourteen-year old Finch, and twelve-year old Logan
have all the normal curiosities and urges as other teenagers. Together, the
five of them are forced to take flight when an international anarchist organization
targets Gene and Tamara, and much of the rest of the world.
Chapter List:
Chapter 0: Author's Introduction intro nosex Chase Shivers introduces the reader to the series and issues standard
cautions about the series content.
Chapter 1: It Starts So Simple Fsolo msolo fsolo bsolo ped inc mother/son brothers masturbation voy A husband and wife and their three children share a home,
but also share urges, hiding them just enough, but not denying them. Chapter 1 introduces the reader
to Gene and Tamara, and their children Lauren, Finch, and Logan in the
relatively simple times before their lives changed forever, and they were forced to run.
Chapter 2: Separate But Equal MF msolo fsolo bsolo anal ped inc condom creampie masturbation voy exhib Gene gets into Las Vegas and orders an
Asian escort for the evening, while his wife Tamara seduces a younger
Italian man for a night of pleasure. Finch and Logan separatedly engage in
masturbatory fun, and Lauren plays with herself while watching her boyfriend
Lance on cam.
Chapter 3: Holly Would MF MF condom voy exhib Gene's time in Vegas takes on a new
twist when he meets a beautiful young woman and her exceptionally rich
partners.
Chapter 4: Open Line MF Fsolo msolo bsolo ped anal masturbation voy inc A second time with Giovanni brings
Tamara to offer the tall Italian her backdoor. An earlier pocket dial
leaves her three kids listening in.
Chapter 5: Flight MF mf Msolo msolo bsolo ped anal creampie condom
masturbation mild scat inc A Monday off turns into a harrowing race to escape a threat
no one expected was on their doorstep. The chase begins.
Chapter 6: The Opposite of Smooth Fsolo fsolo bsolo ped masturbation voy exhib inc The five family members are gripped by fear
and uncertainty during the first leg of their flight.
Chapter 7: Stretched and Folded MF msolo creampie masturbation voy exhib inc The second half of the flight adds to the tension.
Gene opens up about his connection to Whitehead, and a situation with Finch has Tamara
needing release.
Chapter 8: Hammer Down msolo masturbation voy inc The family arrives in Belgium for a hectic
trip to the safe house where preparations are being made to move them once more.
Chapter 9: Boobs for a Hero MF fsolo msolo bsolo ped voy exhib inc brother/sister The safe house in Belgium is a temporary stop. Before long
the Gene and his family are rolling south, miles and challenges between
them and the next sanctuary.
Chapter 10: No Room for Shame MFf anal creampie inc Logan and Finch tour the grounds with
Victor while Gene, Tamara, and Lauren get time in the gun range.
Chapter 11: In Through the Out Door MFf fsolo msolo bsolo ped anal creampie mild scat oral
masturbation inc voy Each of the five family members begin to
recognize the unexpected arousal they feel around each other, and unexpected
scenes play out that draw them deeper into their confusion.
Chapter 12: Pinball MFf MF creampie inc viol A threat in the night leads to panic as
Gene is separated from his family as the mansion is assaulted.
Chapter 13: Distractions MFF creampie inc sisters Gene tries to piece together what is going on
during a tense day in Malta. Tamara and the children flee south and run
into challenges that force them apart
Chapter 14: The Edge of Control MF Ff fsolo creampie masturbation voy exhib Tamara finds herself in a distressing
situation, separated from her children and held in a dark room. Finch,
Logan, and Lauren find themselves in the home of a paranoid woman, while
Gene and the Marker 1 agents attempt to get out of Malta.
Chapter 15: Things Got Hot Mf Ff Fsolo msolo bsolo ped oral masturbation voy exhib Gene and the boat crew reach a decision
point when their contact remains silent. Tamara's situation takes a
dramatic turn with Hannigan. Lauren, Finch, and Logan spend a day
waiting for help before a nighttime encounter between the fifteen-year old
and their host turns sensual.
Chapter 16: Racing MF creampie Gene moves off the water and into
Northern Africa while his wife is moving further east into the Balkans.
Lauren and her brothers must flee from Panthea's home to meet with
the unknown man called Dr. Henderson.
Chapter 17: Oasis mmf inc masturbation voy brother/sister Gene and the rest of his M1 crew
race through the Sahara in search of an isolated compound. Tamara and
Hannigan work their way towards a contact in Serbia, while Lauren, Finch,
and Logan are confronted by Dr. Henderson, and by an unexpected
shared moment.
Chapter 18: Seeds in Dreams MF mf inc creampie slight nc masturbation brother/sister While the Khouri-Polanski kids
are taken to a secret safe place by Dr. Henderson, Gene's dreams began
to reveal hints of what he might know. Tamara and Hannigan arrive in
Belgrade.
Chapter 19: Waiting MF mf inc creampie squirt brother/sister Lauren, Finch, and Logan get
introduced to Henderson's children. Tamara and Hannigan begin to
run out of options in Belgrade. Gene's waiting game continues with
a few moments of pleasure with Anna.
Chapter 20: Double-Team MMF MFF mmf anal creampie dp oral swallow After discovering their sister with
Georges, Finch and Logan have an encounter of their own with Hannah.
Tamara and Hannigan meet up with Hilda. Gene meets M1 agent Jesus
for the first time.
Chapter 21: Gashes mf ff inc creampie voy masturbation twins brother/sister Gene makes a shocking discovery at the
Oasis. Lauren sees something on the farm which she didn't expect. Tamara
frets as Hilda reaches out for help.
Chapter 22: Streams MF anal ass-to-pussy creampie ws voy inc Gene and Holly race through the desert
on their way to Morocco while Tamara leaves Belgrade with Hannigan and
Hilda. Lauren, Finch, and Logan go for a horseback ride at the farm.
Chapter 23: Risks MF mf bsolo m1st inc creampie oral swallow voy
masturbation brother/sister Gene and Holly make their way to Morocco while
Tamara, Hannigan, and Hilda run the gauntlet to get to Romania. Logan
watches an exciting moment, and Lauren comes to a decision point about
Finch.
Chapter 24: Another Chance MF ff fb ped creampie oral swallow voy exhib Gene and Holly arrive in Marrakesh and
meet up with Sagal. Lauren and Hannah discuss Finch's first time before
Hannah gives Logan a special treat. Tamara, Hannigan, and Hilda
encounter a dangerous situation.
Chapter 25: The Long Haul MF mf inc creampie masturbation oral swallow brother/sister Tamara finds herself in the company of
Chaster Haul in Romania. Gene and Holly leave Morocco and head south along
the edge of the Sahara Desert. Lauren and Finch share a morning after
their first time together.
Chapter 26: Unwashed MFF MF creampie Days on the run has Gene and Holly
becoming sticky and aware of their own odors. Likewise, Tamara and Hannigan
are wishing for showers as they have to take a different route to Turkey.
Lauren has a frank conversation with Juliana as well as with Finch.
Chapter 27: Being Watched mmff Fsolo bsolo inc creampie masturbation brother/sister voy Tamara and Hannigan arrive in Istanbul
while Gene and Holly wait for access to the Cambridge in Dakar. Lauren and
Finch join the twins for a foursome.
Chapter 28: Rules bsolo mf Fm m1st ped creampie masturbation Lauren, Finch, and the twins have a
difficult conversation with Juliana. Gene and Holly head out into the Atlantic
to reach the Cambridge. Tamara and Hannigan get caught up in the war in
Istanbul. Logan has a surprise for Juliana during a horseback ride, and
later, Finch and Hannah take it slow for the first time.
Chapter 29: Same Shit, Different Boat bf mmf ped anal dp inc creampie brother/sister twins Lauren and Logan wake up horny.
Tamara and Hannigan enlist Erol's help to get to Saray. Gene and
Holly find that things aren't what they expected on the Cambridge. Finch, Hannah,
and Georges try something new together.
Chapter 30: Spilling mf Fb ped anal oral swallow inc creampie rim brother/sister Gene and Holly attempt to escape the Cambridge. Tamara and
Hannigan set out for Saray. Lauren and Finch try something new together while Logan has an unexpected
moment of pleasure.
Chapter 31: The Dirty Things Ff MF mmfb ped inc anal creampie atm oral masturbation
rim voy brother/sister twins As Tamara heads out of Istanbul with
Hannigan and Erol, Gene and Holly work out their stress as the submersible
gets closer to Cape Verde. Lauren and Juliana grow closer while Finch,
Georges, Hannah, and Logan watch an arousing and unexpected video of
the twin's parents.
Chapter 32: Traces Fb MmF ped b1st inc anal dp creampie brother/sister Logan's first time is shared with Lauren.
Gene and Holly learn that there might be hope in finding out more about
her father's death in Armenia. Tamara opens herself to intense moments with
her companions.
Chapter 33: Tears mf inc creampie brother/sister Lauren, Finch, and Logan travel away from the
farm with the Hendersons while Tamara, Hannigan, and Erol get closer to their
goal in Saray. Gene and Holly find unsettling clues in Wolfach.
Chapter 34: Connections Old and New mfb ped inc creampie brother/sister Tamara faces the consequences of putting her
life in M1's hands in Turkey while Gene and Holly struggle in France. Lauren
her brothers spend the night together while Henderson has them stopped and waiting.
Chapter 35: Refresh and Recharge Ff Fb MFF ped anal ass-to-ass atm oral creampie swallow Lauren and Panthea share a personal reunion while Logan and Juliana
are caught in the act. Tamara faces another departure while Gene, Holly, and
Marisa get dirty
Chapter 36: Fences Fmb ffm FF ped inc creampie oral menst masturbation
voy mother/son brother/sister Logan is along when Georges confronts his mother,
and Finch and Lauren help Hannah feel better during her period. Gene and Holly get closer to
their prey near La Bresse. Tamara's new companion has her confused.
Chapter 37: Tunnels fb FF inc anal, masturbation oral exhib voy brother/sister Gene and Holly discover new tracks leading
them onward near La Bresse while Tamara arrives at Salzburg to find that her
attraction to Major Danielson is difficult to deny. Henderson finally has Logan,
Lauren, Finch, and the others on their way to their rendevous.
Chapter 38: Unexpected Returns mF mf ff masturbation oral swallow Gene finds unexpected surprises at the end
of his tram journey. Tamara has a surprise return of someone from her
recent past. Lauren, Finch, and Logan arrive in Genoa and await what comes next.
Chapter 39: Back from the Dead mf creampie Bridgewater's return is a shock to Holly,
Tamara attempts to escape the compound ahead of Victor and Haul,
and Panthea shares some advice about fear with Logan while they wait.
Chapter 40: Narrow-Gauge mfb ped inc brother/sister creampie oral swallow Tamara and Hannigan's escape leaves them isolated and looking for help. Finch, Lauren, and Logan get closer and closer to their Dad. Bridgewater has a few surprise for Gene.
Chapter 41: Don't Disturb the Monkey MF Tamara and Hannigan meet up with someone from Hannigan's past. Gene's memories gain focus and he remembers a key to the whole chase. Lauren, Finch, and Logan close in on their father.
Chapter 42: More Than Sex MF mf inc brother/sister father/daughter petting Lauren, Finch, Logan, and their father arrive in Tirano. Tamara and Hannigan attempted to make a flight in Corsica while coming to realizations about their relationship. Gene sees something he never expected before the next change of plans comes quickly.
Chapter 43: Rolling the Dice mfb ped inc brother/sister twins creampie oral swallow Tamara and Hannigan run south from Bastia, looking to escape their pursuers. Lauren, Finch, and Logan grow restless quickly and look for distractions in the bunker near Tirano. Gena heads to Corsica with Bridgewater and Holly to find his wife.
Chapter 44: Two Pops Fmfb ped inc brother/sister anal creampie oral Gene arrives in Porto-Vecchio with Holly and her father, trying to locate his wife. Finch, Logan, and Lauren argue and then join Panthea for some fun. Tamara and Hannigan try to get to Porto-Vecchio but are delayed by an unexpected reappearance.
Chapter 45: Masterpiece Ff oral masturbation Finch, Logan, and Lauren try to avoid boredom while they stress about their mom and dad. Tamara comes to in the company of a former ally. Gene's attempts to find his wife run into complications.
Chapter 46: Heroes Don't Flinch mf creampie ws Finch and Hannah find a moment alone in the bathroom. Logan gets a chance to prove his worth in the bunker. Gene grows frustrated trying to find his wife. Tamara's situation grows desperate.
Chapter 47: Chess mf oral swallow masturbation Logan's climb up continues with difficulty and a new challenge presents itself to those in the compound. Gene's frustration grows as he must again be sidetracked with a trip to Israel. Tamara's opportunity to act against Haul comes with unexpected and harrowing understanding.
Chapter 48: Captured MF creampie Tamara's situation becomes clear and even more frightening in the sub. Chances for Logan and Finch to play hero come with consequences. Gene sets to return with Holly to his children after a brief stay in Israel.
Chapter 49: Insanity Mf Fmf MF inc father/daughter mother/son brother/sister creampie masturbation voy exhib Tamara's mental state begins to dissolve in the frightening hours before her arrival. Logan and Finch struggle in the custody of their captors. Gene arrives with Holly in Tirano, and his relationship with Lauren takes on a different form.
Chapter 50: Holes Fm inc mother/son creampie viol Tamara, Logan, and Finch are all in Malta and an explosive situation on the island changes things for all of them. Gene and Lauren head towards them from the north, and Holly shares truths with Lauren.
Chapter 51: Unconventional mf inc brother/sister creampie All but Logan are reunited on the Cambridge and the mystery of the impending disaster deepens. Logan's escape comes to an end in Malta.
Chapter 52: The Collins Box Fm creampie voy exhib viol With four of the five family members reunited, the race to discover Tamara's secrets picks up urgency. Logan, still on Malta, faces his most challenging experiencing yet.
Chapter 53: Quincy Mmf Fb ped anal dp inc father/daughter brother/sister creampie Tamara flashes back to lost memories, revealing secrets to both her life and to her role in the whole affair. Logan reflects on the battle and gains an unexpected reward when he meets up with someone from Tirano.
Chapter 54: One Last Release MFmf MFmb ped anal dp inc father/daughter mother/son mother/daughter brother/sister creampie oral The race towards the end accelarates, the last bits of understanding bringing the family on a flight back where all the running started for Gene, Tamara, Lauren, Finch, and Logan.
Chapter 55: The Final Twist nosex viol The dramatic conclusion of the series Run comes about inside the family home, a confrontation which will determine the fate of the world.
Epilogue and Author's Reflection MF oral swallow A scene from beyond the end of Run, as well as the author's thoughts about the series.
Series Complete!
Comments on Run:
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Chase's Response
Anonymous
26 July 2018
You're obviously a good writer, and I was pulled in by the "Clancy" type storyline, but I made it as far as chapter 34 before I had to call it quits. The sex is icky and disturbing (to me) and far overshadows your plot, which I regret I could not find. Not trying to be unkind. Perhaps you are attempting to attract a more deviant reader than I. Maybe someday you'll write a story with a great plot and just enough vanilla sex to satisfy SOL readers. You certainly have that ability.
Thanks for the feedback and the attempt to read the story, J. Run was definitely intended as a fap story with a plot wrapped around it. It does bog down a bit around the part where you stopped reading, but picks up soon after, IMO. The explicit sex was always the first priority when I started writing the story, and it's not to everyone's taste. And yes, it was aimed more at those interested in the sorts of sex in the story than a general audience on SOL.
If you would like to try something of my mine which is much more plot and less about the sex, I suggest Semper Fi, which is, at its core, a redemptive romance (though there is explicit sex, it is much less important to the story than the plot.) It is a tale which follows an aging Marine after a global war who rediscovers a reason to live through a teen girl he meets and befriends. There is some action, a lot of dialogue, and character-driven plot arcs, really a redemptive, moral drama with some explicit sex.
Thanks again, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts,
Anonymous
13 June 2018
Enjoyed the story, but had some difficulty at times trying to keep up with who's who. In addition I found keeping up with who is a good vs who is evil difficult to follow as they seemed to keep changing. I do feel you blew the ending by making Holly a bad guy. Also based on the description of what Tamara did to Utah he is dead. (I based this on my personal experience as a medic).
I am not one to tell you how to plot out a story or point out anomalies so please don't think I am trying to criticize. This is the first story of yours I have read so I find as I read other stories I catch on to your style.
Looking forward to reading some of your other works.
Thanks for the feedback! Utah's survival is an open mystery at this point, but I promise to reveal more about that in the sequel. Also, is Holly a bad guy? I'm not saying she's not, but given the twists and feints, you can never be sure the scene is really showing you exactly what you see :)
Rube
5 June 2018
"Run" is a good story with many plot lines to keep it flying along. However, I would have preferred a "they lived happily ever after" ending. At 280k words, it is bordering on too long and could have come to a satisfactory ending.
You are a good writer and I have enjoyed your other stories, such as "Shipwrecked".
Thanks for your feedback, Rube! I know the Epilogue will have put a damper on things a bit, but I promise it will be worth it once I get a chance to write the sequel.
Anonymous
3 June 2018
Really? A guy gets off twice the night before leaving on a road trip and immediately spends hundreds on a whore the first night away? A pick up maybe. Maybe a bit longer away from his last piece he'd resort to an escort. The wife went with a waiter at least.
I don't see the issue, honestly. And besides, these characters are sort of uber-humans, anyway. That's half the point, just like Vin Diesel in an action flick. Only, these characters are just really horny and able to perform regularly, more than us "normal" folks.
Anonymous
30 May 2018
Great story, loved it whenyou originally started posting, and so glad you took time to go back and edit so that it would be allowed here. Has been my nightly read as cheater after cheater uploaded can’t wait for book 2 - love your other stories as well.
Many thanks!
Anonymous
30 May 2018
WOW a great story can't wait to read more lots of sex love the ages and family sex
Thank you so much!
Anonymous
18 May 2018
I just started reading this story, after chapter 13, I have to say something, although others no doubt already have. The AR15 does not fire three shot bursts, if it does, the lower receiver has been modified to make it an M4, the military rifle that has selective fire capabilities. They use magazines, not clips, the much older Garand, or M1A uses stripper clips instead of magazines. Details matter.
Thanks for the feedback. I'm well aware of the differences between a clip and a magazine. However, you have to always remember, the characters in the story don't always know such things. A character without training that always thinks or says the exact-correct words is not believable. There are many places in this story (and others) that I've intentionally had characters misspeaking or using incorrect terminology. While I try to make it only a minor intrusion, I find the effect helps maintain character believability.
As to the AR15, I get it, but as you said, it can be modified. Also note, the characters in M1 use their own vernacular and show regular misunderstandings about various aspects of process, technology, and even location. Would that instructor know to call it instead an M4? Only if he'd been in the military which used M4s and we aren't shown that person's background. Never assume expertise in characters which are not experts, and be aware that cultural (organizational, territorial, etc) leaves different terms/slang/misused descriptors in the real world and it is quite extensive. Details do matter, but a "perfect narrator" or "perfect actor" ruins the story for me.
Anonymous
5 May 2018
The short black driver of the van had hands like white rocks on the steering wheel? Not the first break in continuity. Spoils the story. Will see how it goes.
Okay... Have you ever seen black people? They aren't monochrome. The visual was intentional. And what 'break[s] in continuity' did you find? I'd love to know so that I can clean them up.
Ron
1 May 2018
I liked "Shipwrecked" slightly more(still waiting for more) but your novels are hard to put down. The action is non-stop, edge-of-your-seat exciting. The way you write I can see the environment surrounding the characters, see the emotions in their faces...the passion, the lust. You are my favorite erotic novelist of all time and I've been reading this stuff for 50 years.
Wow! Thank you so much, Ron! That is very high praise, and I'll continue doing my best to live up to it!
Mac
11 April 2018
Hi I found this story among my unfinished stories. Went on to Stories online were I first got it from but it was not on your story list. But thanks to you I have found the rest of the story and a new site to look at. Thanks Mac
Thanks, Mac! I will eventually update the version of Run on SOL, but the problem is that I have to 'age' the younger characters due to SOL's restrictions on characters engaged in sex who are under fourteen. It's a pain in the ass, but I do want to get it finished at some point.
Clay
20 March 2018
I’ve enjoyed this story very much, thank you
My pleasure, thanks for coming along for the tale!
Anonymous
12 March 2018
With you to the end. Great family love. Great war, honor, love, human condition. (rating: 9)
Thank you so much for reading!
Anonymous
20 February 2018
Just finished run last night and wanna say wow wow wow,had me on the edge of my seat alot to think what was going to happen, then in the epilogue with holly been the behind everything one has to wonder when she said that she loves gene is it really true or just to back stab him.
But like you said in your authors thoughts many unanswered questions
I have still many things to say about this story and others you wrote but dont know how to write it out/down.
But also would just like to say thanks and congrats on another excellent story.
Thank so much!
I have a ton of ideas about the sequel, but I'll give it some time before I jump in again. I really want to do it justice when I decide it is time to write the follow up. I can't wait to use Holly as a POV character, for sure. Feel free to send me feedback/comments any time!
Aussieray
10 February 2018
Bravo, Bravo
The Holly episode at the end, indicated a return of the cast, and, as you mentioned, the unfulfilled sexual ambitions of virtually every character in the story.
I enjoyed the accention of Logan into a hero, I am not sure whether you are going to use a "Rose Cottage" scenario to handle the disfigurements, (check your old Robert Young movies), or rely on the technical brilliance of Israel's medical R&D.
I understand the loose unresolveable ends, but you are a writer of erotica and that's what idiots like me want to read. Although inserting the erotica into a substantial novel was genius.
I will try to list the outstanding missing threads
Tamara=Quicks daughter, does she have his worried genes to contend with, and her comment that she made Gene think the money was from his father, seems to indicate some knowledge culpability on her part.
Henderson=how can his family exist without involving hIm, his repeat of mild swearing in his last appearance indicates he is not as staid as would be presumed.
Bridgewater=again, what wonders can be applied to his reconstruction by the Israelis.
Charles= obviously you needed a replacement for Victor and indicated further writing was expected.
Holly=I agree with you, apart from a woman I would love to fuck, she is a great foil for a writer, and a superb character for readers. I am thinking of changing my name to Gene. How I would like to inject some of my genes into her.
You ruined or enhanced every readers (irrespective of gender) wet dream with her involvement with Charles, who out Victor's Victor and obviously Quick in his evilness.
The Kids=the five kids must at some stage be reunited, imagine, the Henderson's, Gene and his family and Holly and Marcus at the farm, and of course with so many dicks and Fannie's a baby, or babies would result.
A suggestion, all the females get pregnant, including Hannah, Those Israelis can fix anything. Last but not least,
Logan=he ended being my second favourite character, and I would suspect the only one able to combat Charles, with his mothers help and vagina.
Well that's it folks!!!!!
Not quite, I have a name for the new venture, "Walk", don't laugh, with all the injuries, especially Ari, no one would be able to run, all they could do is a gentle walk.
Chase, as you can see I did have fun reading Run, and am looking forward to 2019, if you are looking for a reviewer I would enjoy the task.
Thanks so much, Aussieray! As you pointed out, there are a lot of ways the sequel can go. I've got a lot of ideas but I'm not ready to get started writing the story yet. I do know what the first scene will be (it involves Lauren) but I want to continue to let the ideas percolate a few months before jumping back in. I hope you enjoy the result when I get to it!
Anonymous
10 February 2018
What a Run! (rating: 8)
:)
RS Jenkins
9 February 2018
I just finished the last of Run one word description of it; Infuckingcredible, that is the best I can give it. I had always felt like I was along for the ride, I could even see some of the locations at least the ones I have been to. I know when I get transported into a story as a "ghost" viewer it has to be good. Loved it and can hardly wait for the sequel. (rating: 10)
Thank you, RS! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story and the conclusion. It was a lot to keep track of and a lot of work, but work I definitely enjoyed and loved sharing. I'll let it get some distance before I start doing any serious thinking about the sequel. I have a lot of other stories to write for now, including the sequel to Groundhog Nights which I hope to get started soon.
Anonymous
8 February 2018
Wow. That was quite the story. I had no idea it even existed until the final chapters showed up yesterday in asstr's recent files list.
Still trying to sort out in my mind exactly how everything fits together. Which in my experience is a sign of a good tale.
You mention there will be a sequel at some point. I'm excited to read it when that time comes, there are quite a few unresolved pieces I want to see get closure. (rating: 10)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you found it and enjoyed the discovery. I'm also trying to sort out in my mind how everything fits together :)
Anonymous
8 February 2018
Aaahhhh!! That's not where Holly is supposed to be! After all that?? And we have to wait until "at least 2019" for the sequel?!?
Seriously, between the action and the amazing sex (at times, yes, a bit enviously easy), this was an absolutely fantastic story! I loved every moment of it. Great work! I am excited to know there will be a sequel, far into the future it may yet be. Like you as the author, I have come to really like and be invested in these characters, and will wait with barely contained anticipation for the next stage of their journeys.
Thanks so much for the comments, and I'm glad Run hooked you so much that you were not happy with the Epilogue! :) Such a fun story to write the past few years, and I definitely look forward to working on the sequel at some point in the future once I've had time to let some ideas simmer.
Aussieray
7 February 2018
I started reading Run, and realised that it is unfinished, is it on your agenda to continue or will it remain in an unfinished state. It appeals to me greatly, the action plot with all the sexual agendas makes for good reading and it would be good to have an end.
Good news! I just finished writing the series late Tuesday night. The story concludes with Chapter 55 and an Epilogue (up through #49 have been published so far.) I'm going to be editing/proofreading the unpublished chapters starting today, and once that's complete, I'll publish them on my site. Hopefully you enjoy the way it wraps up!
George
7 February 2018
So hot. Very exciting. I got so turned on (refers to Chapter 1; rating: 8)
Thanks, George! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! I have the last 6 chapters, including the finale, written and will be publishing them soon. I hope you like the conclusion!
Anonymous
7 February 2018
when are the next chapters coming?
Soon! The story is completely written, but the final few chapters need editing and proofreading before I publish them.
Aussieray
7 February 2018
Hi, I started reading Run, and realised that it is unfinished, is it on your agenda to continue or will it remain in an unfinished state. It appeals to me greatly, the action plot with all the sexual agendas makes for good reading and it would be good to have an end.
Hi Aussieray! Good news! I just finished writing the series late Tuesday night. The story concludes with Chapter 55 and an Epilogue (up through #49 have been published so far.) I'm going to be editing/proofreading the unpublished chapters starting today, and once that's complete, I'll publish them on my site. Hopefully you enjoy the way it wraps up!
Bill
5 February 2018
Thanks for getting back to this outstanding story. Personally, I think it is one of your very best. So, it was good to relink with the thread of the story. Hope to see this one get more chapters in the near future. (rating: 10)
Thanks, Bill! I really have enjoyed writing this series. It moves fast and I can spend more time on the action and dialogue than in my usual stories. It's been great to finally get into it again in the past few weeks, and I'm almost done writing the tale. I've got chapters 50 and 51 written, almost done with 52. The story is plotted out to conclude with chapter 55 along with an epilogue. Getting close, hoping I've caught all the plot threads I need to tie up! :)
Update! Story complete, will be publishing the final chapters soon!
Anonymous
4 February 2018
This story is superb! I can't wait for each new chapter to arrive! I love the mix of intense action and the incredibly hot and varied sex in it! (rating: 10)
Thank you so much! The story has been completed and the final six chapters will be online soon!
Rude
27 December 2017
This is great story wiring Chase. You are an expert with the use of detail. Very very professional. On to chapter 4.
Many thanks, Rude!
Anonymous
18 December 2017
Excellent work as usual. Can't wait for more!!!! You are the best! (rating: 10)
Thank you so much!
94goodtimes
1 December 2017
thank you for the additional chapters. I read them like I watch a tv show I enjoy, binge watching, but in this case, binge reading. I really think this series could be remade into an action movie with an r rating. I am looking forward to the conclusion!
Thanks! I really love writing Run and am working on the last few chapters. I just want to make sure I tie up all the loose ends, so that's what is taking time right now. I've got 3 or 4 more chapters written with a few more planned beyond that. Once I'm satisfied that those chapters are setting up the conclusion properly, I'll get those published.
Anonymous
22 November 2017
Love the story... you going to add the dozen or so chapters any time soon?
Thanks! And, yes, I'm working on finishing up the series now. I've got chapters 43-50 written but not yet edited, but I'll have them up soon while I finish the last chapters. Thanks for the patience!
On StoriesOnline, there is an age restriction for characters involved in sex acts. I primarily publish this story on ASSTR and then I have to 'age' the youngest son to be at least fourteen, adjusting the ages of the other two slightly, as well. So, the version on SOL is slightly different due to the age changes, and also behind what I've published on ASSTR. I'm working on finishing up the story, so I'm going to do that before I pick back up the 'aging' I have to do to put a version of the story on SOL.
Thanks for reading!
Anonymous
20 November 2017
Run is such an engrossing story!!! It’s plot is so strong. Please write more chapters.
Thank you! More chapters on the way very soon!
Anonymous
20 November 2017
What a great story. I am waiting with great anticipation for the next chapters.
Cheers.
Thanks, anon! I've got up through chapter 50 written (but not edited or published) and I'm starting to close out the story. I'll get new chapters up very soon. Thanks for reading!
94goodtimes
18 November 2017
I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you for the 2 latest chapters. I like the way you go from scene to scene following the various characters. I enjoy geography, so it has been fun following the characters as they travel to and fro.
Thanks, 94goodtimes! It has felt great getting the series going again and finally heading towards the conclusion.
I put up chapter #42 on Saturday in case you didn't see that one go up. I have several more chapters written but not yet edited, and I'll get those up over the coming days/weeks as I finish off the story. I will write a sequel to Run at some point, so even once this story is done, the characters should be back for another fun romp across the world in the future :)
Anonymous
17 November 2017
been so long since added chapters, i think a couple of chapters could fill out the series. it appears you have a change of interest into short stories. the novel approach of run, has worn off. so maybe a couple of chapters and put run to rest.
my interest is peaked to find out what the information is that the husband and wife have. but the length of time since chapters i've forgotten characters names. i
I'm sorry the time between chapters has spoiled the enjoyment you had for the series. It honestly couldn't be avoided for reasons I've explained elsewhere. When I'm in a similar situation, such as when it took years for the final novels of the Eye of the World series to come out, I, several times, reread all the books so that I'd be ready for the new one. I suppose that if a story catches your interest enough, that's what you would do. But if you've lost interest, then there's not much point.
As to me being more interested in short stories... huh? I've published a few which I wrote during the ASSTR downtime over the summer, but I've pumped out literally dozens of chapters in Shipwrecked, Flower Petals, Ahead of the Curve, Aunt Jamie's Purse, You Can Call Me Daddy, and, now, Run, since ASSTR came back online a couple of months ago. I much prefer writing long series where I can take the time to explore the characters and the plot. Run is such a series. I love writing it. In fact, other than possibly Shipwrecked, it is my favorite story to sink into. I love it so much that I'm going to write a follow-on sequel to Run. I just love the characters and the world enough to keep going even after this part of the story ends.
I'm also not going to just 'put run to rest.' Readers who are sticking through the gaps deserve better. The characters deserve better. And frankly, I deserve better. I want to tell the whole story, start to finish, and a couple of chapters won't do it. I'd expected somewhere around 50 to complete it a few months back. I will run beyond that as I get down to the concluding actions. I've got up through #48 written (though several are not yet edited and published,) and I'll probably need another ten chapters or so to finish things. Needless to say, if I need to add one or two or ten more to tell the full story, I won't hesitate to do so. I hope you'll reconsider and decide the story is worth digging into again, but if not, thanks for reading and giving it a shot.
David
26 October 2017
I'm enjoying "Ahead of the Curve" and looking forward to the rest of "Run". Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! I've been writing the concluding chapters of Run lately, hopefully I can finish it up and get it published soon. Thanks for the patience!
Skipper
20 October 2017
Thinking you might need a friendly poke. As if you didn't already have too many.
"I do plan to continue and complete the story soon"
I once carried around a Chinese fortune cookie that said "soon."
Well, thirty years down the road and I am still waiting for soon to appear.
Enjoy your stuff !
Thanks, Skipper, I appreciate the poke. I've had Run simmering in my back pocket for a while.
I'm trying to finish up the rest of the story before publishing it, mostly because I want to ensure
I tie up all the loose plot lines and not have to go back and change something I've already
published if I miss one. I'm getting close, but I don't have an ETA yet. I'm looking forward to
getting it finished since there are some good long-teased payoff scenes to get out there!
Hopefully it won't be 30 years!
shaggy
12 April 2017
Hi, I have just read your story "Run". I really liked and thanks for the story. Are you planning to
continue the story or is shelved for good?
Hi shaggy! I do plan to continue and complete the story soon.
I have the chapter outlines done, but I still need to finish writing the conclusion.
I hope you enjoy it when it is published.
Anonymous
23 January 2017
Enjoying the story! Love to see how it ends!
Thanks! I have a conclusion in sight, hopefully the last few chapters won't disappoint!
Anonymous
15 October 2016
Fun story to read
Thank you!
Jay Bee
13 October 2015
Can't wait for the next chapters. Great read from all perspectives...
Great plot, great character development, great action. Keep up the
great work
Thanks, much appreciated!
Jay Bee
9 October 2015
Excellent story . Was bummed your u stopped or slowed down on
s.o.l Asstr is also good, just not as flexible
Thanks, Jay Bee. I still have a few chapters to add over on SOL, but it
takes time to age the characters up a bit to meet the site rules. I'll get
them loaded up at some point, then I'll get some new chapters going.
Anonymous
16 August 2015
I just finished everything available in the "Run" series. I'd run
into a chapter (about 15) on asstr.org main page, read several more
then somehow lost it completely. Then about three weeks ago, I
stumbled on a chapter of "Shipwrecked" at the same place, the writing
style seemed familiar so I went to the parent directory and found
what I had lost. I must say that I enjoyed the action/thriller bits
between the main material immensely, even though some of it seems
(I'm no expert) wildly unrealistic from geopolitical or technological
viewpoints. I suppose I should move on to "Shipwrecked" now and let
you keep writing so I can keep enjoying. Cheers!
Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the series! I definitely
recognize the political and technical landscape are 'made up' and not
as plausible
as they might have been. That said, it is intended as a fantasy, so I
take liberties with the world-at-large in order to construct the story
setting to fit the plot, rather than the other way around. I hope it is
'good enough' that this isn't a detriment to enjoying the narrative.
I hope you enjoy Shipwrecked!
Anonymous
16 July 2015
Plis can u upload run
Sorry for so long since new chapters on this series, I hope to have more
very soon.
Anonymous
10 June 2015
Juliana told Lauren that Hannah had an infection when she was little and
they had to take her womb. So how can she have a period ?
An excellent observation and I'm glad someone noticed. Juliana told Lauren that they took
Hannah's womb, but what Hannah had was a partial hysterectomy, meaning they left the cervix.
In those situations, there is sometimes uterine lining left which can shed and create
menstruation, which is the case with Lauren. I won't go into all the other details here (they may
come out later in the plot), but
there is a reason that Hannah seems unaware of her condition, as well as the fact that her
mother gives her birth control even though she cannot get pregnant.
Bill
12 May 2015
Great story! I'm now caught up with the chapters and looking
forward to the next one....
Thanks, Bill! Run has been a lot of fun to write, more coming soon!
karbinkopy
9 May 2015
I love your stories. I am especially enjoying the story set of Run.
There is one thing that is bothering me. I'm not sure if you know
the definition of "mewling".This is a word you use often and in
most circumstances it doesn't fit the actions surrounding it's
use. Mewling is best described as a plaintive whimper. So when you
use mewling to describe an action that someone is happily doing then
it doesn't fit. The word that would better describe a happy action
is purr. For example, since Holly initiated sucking Gene's soiled cock,
it stands to reason that she is enjoying it and thus she would be
purring. If Gene had forced the cock into Holly's mouth and she did
not enjoy it then her response would be a mewl or plaintive whimper.
Thanks for reading, and kind remarks!
I do use mewling
intentionally and know its definitions. The word is used in my stories
for its implied sound and tones of a whimper. It gives both a sense
of longing and need (like a cat mewling), as well as a higher-pitched
tone to the sound (again, like a cat or like a bird of prey).
So together, it's a higher-pitched whimper full of need. That fits
exactly what I'm aiming for both its tone and its implied values.
It isn't about happiness or lack thereof at all.
I do
use purr often for a very different sound and implied values
(throaty, full of desire, anticipation, playfulness).
name
22 March 2015
Absolute GREAT story. I love it. Hope there is more soon.
Many thanks! I just published chapters 29-35.
Anonymous
8 January 2015
Great story. I'm commenting after the first chapter. Even
though I'm not into Mother/Son, Father/daughter incest,
I love your work. You are truly a very good author. You have
talent! Beyond that, I REALLY like you posting the cast at the
beginning of the chapter. I admit that I'm terrible at remembering
names so this helps a lot - especially later when a character reappears.
Thanks again. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and more of your work.
Thank you! Hopefully you enjoy the story as it unfolds, I really enjoy writing it!
Anonymous
13 October 2014
Another great story. I didn't think I would blow through 15
Chapters so quick. Where others may not like the twists and
turns it does keep the story moving and then fakes out the readers
when trying to anticipate what's next.
As far as the comment
on North Korea? The South Koreans are a pretty hardy bunch, and the
North wouldn't believe what they got themselves into, and without their
Chinese neighbor I don't believe they would last long.
Keep the
family apart for a while (as they are) and let them move with their own
sub-plot. It makes for a better story as Dad is the one everyone is after,
and he is finally starting to get into the game. Might want to start giving
him some ideas of his own.
The sex is on par for the situations,
though I'm anxious to find when/if the boys finally get together with Lauren.
A good cliffhanger that's for sure.
Very glad you are enjoying it! Gene is starting to get more involved in chapters
16 and above, and the boys are definitely getting closer with Lauren. Thanks again!
Marcus
29 August 2014
Hello, I just wanted to compliment you on the story "Run." This is by
far my favorite story on your site. I just finished reading what has
been posted so far and I have really enjoyed the plot and slow buildup
of the story in general. I also like the character development and the
reluctance of the main characters in succumbing to their desires. I hope
you continue in writing this story and wish you luck on future projects
(some of the ones coming out look very interesting to me).
Thanks, Marcus! New chapters posted this week.
Ben
29 August 2014
I'm glad that you decided to explore mother son relationships in your stories and
your story is great. It's very rare to find them both together. Thanks for the great
read. Can't wait for more
Many thanks, hope you enjoy the new chapters!
Anonymous
23 August 2014
Run is fantastic. Got any more planned for this series?
Thank you! Finally got back to the series, chapters 16-20 posted this week.
Anonymous
19 August 2014
More please
Delivered this week :)
Anonymous
15 June 2014
"as he lay prostate." Bwahahahaha!
And, no fucking way that
North Korea invades the South and the USA doesn't go to war. Never.
Might be WWIII, but we'd stomp those gooks hard. Your politics are clumsy,
the story grows more and more complicated with no clear direction yet. Yawn.
You read fap stories for the politics? O_o
Anonymous
2014 June 12
You're such a great story teller, and you manage to keep human sexuality
at the forefront without sacrificing the story. Such a rarity.
I'm caught up on all your stories now, except your other new one which
I'll start tonight. Run is my new favorite, though I've said that about
each one of yours at one time or another.
You're easily my
favorite author on this site, and I've enjoyed looking into the other
writers you recommended. You've even inspired me to write a couple
stories myself, though I haven't published them yet.
I'm amazed
how prolific you are. I hope you can keep that up and not go on hiatus
too often, because there are a lot of us who hang on your every word.
Keep challenging the limits of sexuality in your stories. It may be
off-putting to some (homosexuality, scat, etc), but as a reader I've
found it great fun to share in these taboos I would never want to actually
participate in. Kind of like shooting people in video games is fun and
stress relieving but I wouldn't feel the same about it real life.
Keep unfolding your stories for us. I can't wait to see how Lauren's
character develops.
Wow, thank you so much! I'd love to read your stories, feel free to send me
anything you'd like to share. You didn't leave a return email address so I can't
respond directly, but you can always contact me at chaseshiverstales at gmail dot com.
Thanks again for the wonderful compliments!
Tom
2014 June 12
Brilliant F/F scene! Handled so erotically...I normally am not drawn to
scenes like this, but I felt like I was right there...
--Author's note: refers to Chapter 15
Thanks, Tom! Glad you liked it!
Skipper
2014 June 11
"Gene rushed down the stairs of the interior hallway"
I think you mean ladder and passageway.
As far as I know,
boats don't have "stairs" or "interior hallways."
I may be wrong.
Enjoy the story. More so than "Shipwrecked"
Thanks for the feedback, Skipper! Boats can have both 'stairs' and
'interior hallways' though I agree it is more common to have ladders and
'passageways.' Keep in mind two things. First, this is a big boat (60' or so) so
it tends to have facilities like a yacht. Second, though the narration is 3rd
person, it is 'over the shoulder' of (in this case) Gene, and looks at things
through his eyes. He's an imperfect narrator and won't always know the
terminology.
Additionally, this is the interior I had in mind when I
described the inside of the boat (though it is a sailing ship and old, I just
liked the wood interior.) In the caption, it is described as
'interior, hallway.' Also, plenty of large
luxury boats have stairs and hallways.
Anonymous
2014 June 9
Great story. Gets better and better. Run is turning out to be my favorite.
Shipwrecked followed by Flower Petals are next.
Thank you! :)
Anonymous
2014 June 9
Damned interesting storyline, please keep up the good work!
Thank you! Chapter 11 just published.
Anonymous
2014 June 6
a good story keep it going
Thanks, will do!
Rick
2014 June 5
great story so far, Run. I also enjoyed your other stories,
very readable, erotic and well thought out. I like that you take your time.
Thanks, Rick! Much appreciated :)
Tom
2014 June 4
Another excellent start to one of your well-crafted stories!!!
Thanks, Tom!
Rich
2014 May 30
Fantastic story. Very arousing, satisfying.
Thanks, Rich! Should have new chapters up in the next few days, thanks for reading!
Comments on Run:
If you would like to try something of my mine which is much more plot and less about the sex, I suggest Semper Fi, which is, at its core, a redemptive romance (though there is explicit sex, it is much less important to the story than the plot.) It is a tale which follows an aging Marine after a global war who rediscovers a reason to live through a teen girl he meets and befriends. There is some action, a lot of dialogue, and character-driven plot arcs, really a redemptive, moral drama with some explicit sex.
Thanks again, and I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts,
Looking forward to reading some of your other works.
You are a good writer and I have enjoyed your other stories, such as "Shipwrecked".
As to the AR15, I get it, but as you said, it can be modified. Also note, the characters in M1 use their own vernacular and show regular misunderstandings about various aspects of process, technology, and even location. Would that instructor know to call it instead an M4? Only if he'd been in the military which used M4s and we aren't shown that person's background. Never assume expertise in characters which are not experts, and be aware that cultural (organizational, territorial, etc) leaves different terms/slang/misused descriptors in the real world and it is quite extensive. Details do matter, but a "perfect narrator" or "perfect actor" ruins the story for me.
But like you said in your authors thoughts many unanswered questions
I have still many things to say about this story and others you wrote but dont know how to write it out/down.
But also would just like to say thanks and congrats on another excellent story.
I have a ton of ideas about the sequel, but I'll give it some time before I jump in again. I really want to do it justice when I decide it is time to write the follow up. I can't wait to use Holly as a POV character, for sure.
Feel free to send me feedback/comments any time!
The Holly episode at the end, indicated a return of the cast, and, as you mentioned, the unfulfilled sexual ambitions of virtually every character in the story.
I enjoyed the accention of Logan into a hero, I am not sure whether you are going to use a "Rose Cottage" scenario to handle the disfigurements, (check your old Robert Young movies), or rely on the technical brilliance of Israel's medical R&D.
I understand the loose unresolveable ends, but you are a writer of erotica and that's what idiots like me want to read. Although inserting the erotica into a substantial novel was genius.
I will try to list the outstanding missing threads
Tamara=Quicks daughter, does she have his worried genes to contend with, and her comment that she made Gene think the money was from his father, seems to indicate some knowledge culpability on her part.
Henderson=how can his family exist without involving hIm, his repeat of mild swearing in his last appearance indicates he is not as staid as would be presumed.
Bridgewater=again, what wonders can be applied to his reconstruction by the Israelis.
Charles= obviously you needed a replacement for Victor and indicated further writing was expected.
Holly=I agree with you, apart from a woman I would love to fuck, she is a great foil for a writer, and a superb character for readers. I am thinking of changing my name to Gene. How I would like to inject some of my genes into her.
You ruined or enhanced every readers (irrespective of gender) wet dream with her involvement with Charles, who out Victor's Victor and obviously Quick in his evilness.
The Kids=the five kids must at some stage be reunited, imagine, the Henderson's, Gene and his family and Holly and Marcus at the farm, and of course with so many dicks and Fannie's a baby, or babies would result.
A suggestion, all the females get pregnant, including Hannah, Those Israelis can fix anything. Last but not least,
Logan=he ended being my second favourite character, and I would suspect the only one able to combat Charles, with his mothers help and vagina.
Well that's it folks!!!!!
Not quite, I have a name for the new venture, "Walk", don't laugh, with all the injuries, especially Ari, no one would be able to run, all they could do is a gentle walk.
Chase, as you can see I did have fun reading Run, and am looking forward to 2019, if you are looking for a reviewer I would enjoy the task.
Still trying to sort out in my mind exactly how everything fits together. Which in my experience is a sign of a good tale.
You mention there will be a sequel at some point. I'm excited to read it when that time comes, there are quite a few unresolved pieces I want to see get closure. (rating: 10)
Seriously, between the action and the amazing sex (at times, yes, a bit enviously easy), this was an absolutely fantastic story! I loved every moment of it. Great work! I am excited to know there will be a sequel, far into the future it may yet be. Like you as the author, I have come to really like and be invested in these characters, and will wait with barely contained anticipation for the next stage of their journeys.
Update! Story complete, will be publishing the final chapters soon!
On StoriesOnline, there is an age restriction for characters involved in sex acts. I primarily publish this story on ASSTR and then I have to 'age' the youngest son to be at least fourteen, adjusting the ages of the other two slightly, as well. So, the version on SOL is slightly different due to the age changes, and also behind what I've published on ASSTR. I'm working on finishing up the story, so I'm going to do that before I pick back up the 'aging' I have to do to put a version of the story on SOL.
Thanks for reading!
I put up chapter #42 on Saturday in case you didn't see that one go up. I have several more chapters written but not yet edited, and I'll get those up over the coming days/weeks as I finish off the story. I will write a sequel to Run at some point, so even once this story is done, the characters should be back for another fun romp across the world in the future :)
my interest is peaked to find out what the information is that the husband and wife have. but the length of time since chapters i've forgotten characters names. i
As to me being more interested in short stories... huh? I've published a few which I wrote during the ASSTR downtime over the summer, but I've pumped out literally dozens of chapters in Shipwrecked, Flower Petals, Ahead of the Curve, Aunt Jamie's Purse, You Can Call Me Daddy, and, now, Run, since ASSTR came back online a couple of months ago. I much prefer writing long series where I can take the time to explore the characters and the plot. Run is such a series. I love writing it. In fact, other than possibly Shipwrecked, it is my favorite story to sink into. I love it so much that I'm going to write a follow-on sequel to Run. I just love the characters and the world enough to keep going even after this part of the story ends.
I'm also not going to just 'put run to rest.' Readers who are sticking through the gaps deserve better. The characters deserve better. And frankly, I deserve better. I want to tell the whole story, start to finish, and a couple of chapters won't do it. I'd expected somewhere around 50 to complete it a few months back. I will run beyond that as I get down to the concluding actions. I've got up through #48 written (though several are not yet edited and published,) and I'll probably need another ten chapters or so to finish things. Needless to say, if I need to add one or two or ten more to tell the full story, I won't hesitate to do so. I hope you'll reconsider and decide the story is worth digging into again, but if not, thanks for reading and giving it a shot.
"I do plan to continue and complete the story soon"
I once carried around a Chinese fortune cookie that said "soon."
Well, thirty years down the road and I am still waiting for soon to appear.
Enjoy your stuff !
Hopefully it won't be 30 years!
I hope you enjoy Shipwrecked!
I do use mewling intentionally and know its definitions. The word is used in my stories for its implied sound and tones of a whimper. It gives both a sense of longing and need (like a cat mewling), as well as a higher-pitched tone to the sound (again, like a cat or like a bird of prey).
So together, it's a higher-pitched whimper full of need. That fits exactly what I'm aiming for both its tone and its implied values. It isn't about happiness or lack thereof at all.
I do use purr often for a very different sound and implied values (throaty, full of desire, anticipation, playfulness).
Thanks again. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and more of your work.
As far as the comment on North Korea? The South Koreans are a pretty hardy bunch, and the North wouldn't believe what they got themselves into, and without their Chinese neighbor I don't believe they would last long.
Keep the family apart for a while (as they are) and let them move with their own sub-plot. It makes for a better story as Dad is the one everyone is after, and he is finally starting to get into the game. Might want to start giving him some ideas of his own.
The sex is on par for the situations, though I'm anxious to find when/if the boys finally get together with Lauren.
A good cliffhanger that's for sure.
And, no fucking way that North Korea invades the South and the USA doesn't go to war. Never. Might be WWIII, but we'd stomp those gooks hard. Your politics are clumsy, the story grows more and more complicated with no clear direction yet. Yawn.
I'm caught up on all your stories now, except your other new one which I'll start tonight. Run is my new favorite, though I've said that about each one of yours at one time or another.
You're easily my favorite author on this site, and I've enjoyed looking into the other writers you recommended. You've even inspired me to write a couple stories myself, though I haven't published them yet.
I'm amazed how prolific you are. I hope you can keep that up and not go on hiatus too often, because there are a lot of us who hang on your every word.
Keep challenging the limits of sexuality in your stories. It may be off-putting to some (homosexuality, scat, etc), but as a reader I've found it great fun to share in these taboos I would never want to actually participate in. Kind of like shooting people in video games is fun and stress relieving but I wouldn't feel the same about it real life.
Keep unfolding your stories for us. I can't wait to see how Lauren's character develops.
I think you mean ladder and passageway.
As far as I know, boats don't have "stairs" or "interior hallways."
I may be wrong.
Enjoy the story. More so than "Shipwrecked"
Additionally, this is the interior I had in mind when I described the inside of the boat (though it is a sailing ship and old, I just liked the wood interior.) In the caption, it is described as 'interior, hallway.' Also, plenty of large luxury boats have stairs and hallways.