Judge Not
From the imagination of Chase Shivers
Series Launched: April 15, 2018
Latest Chapter Added: May 2, 2019
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Series Summary:
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Judge Not is the sequel to the very popular
Groundhog Nights. This time, fifteen-year old Tera is
our narrator, picking up after the concluding moments of the original's final act: giving her father,
Quinn, her virginity. Unknown to either, Quinn's time loop was a small piece of a bigger
drama playing out across the Universe, and neither will be safe until they figure out
what exactly is happening to them. And maybe not, even then.
Chapter List:
- Chapter 0: Author's Introduction
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Chase Shivers introduces the reader to the series and issues standard
cautions about the series content.
- Chapter 1: Mental Chaos
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Tera's night of passion with her father is her dreams becoming reality, the end of months of wishing for such a night. But, she and her father Quinn were about to find out, it was also the beginning of something more frightening and dangerous for both of them.
- Chapter 2: Bizarro Wonderland
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Tera's bizarre experiences continue while a fever rages. She begins to doubt reality as the vivid, intense experiences both scare and arouse her.
- Chapter 3: What is Real and What is Not
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Tera's world continues to morph and twist as she witnesses scenes featuring her father. The voice in her head returns, and this time, Tera might get some answers to her questions.
- Chapter 4: Acceptance
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After seeing scenes of her father with lovers, including her friend Abby, Tera realizes the truth about those visions.
- Chapter 5: Sanctuary
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Tera and Quinn stay in the garden sanctuary and try to work on unlocking more secrets with the help of Theresa.
- Chapter 6: Doppelganger
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Tera and Quinn are summoned to the sanctuary to face a troubling discovery. Tera begins to learn to control one of her abilities, and later, uses it give her father, and herself, a special, taboo treat.
- Chapter 7: Manifest
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Tera continues to expand her abilities and makes a startling discovery about her powers within the sanctuary. Tristan suggest Tera attempt to change things in the visions of her father's time loop experiences, and the implications, should she succeed, are deep and profound.
- Chapter 8: Sparks
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The revelation in the sanctuary was overwhelming for Tera, and a return home brings back a friend she'd been neglecting. Tristan's summons leads Tera and the others to undertake a test which might answer one small mystery, and the resulting events open up many new ones.
- Chapter 9: Lek, Agranquost, and Hypnos
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Tera's senses lose grounding when the blue tattoo-covered giant travels her somewhere far away. Time is running out as a plot to intercept Tera's past is about to change the fate of reality, and the fifteen-year old must act fast to save everything, and herself, before it is too late.
- Chapter 10: Chasing the Spark
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A theory about the trace of energy left in Abby sends Tera and Quinn on a quest to track down his former partners from the time loop.
- Chapter 11: Caracus
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The search for sparks continues with mixed results. Tera encounters an unknown being of power before finally being summoned to Caracus himself.
- Chapter 12: Finding the Watcher
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Tristan's research discovers something monitoring the Spirit-Binder, and he and Tera seek out the one paying attention. Tera's powers, both through the essence and that which has been manifesting innately, grow stronger as she figures out how to use them. The sparks change in the survivors in a way which Tera realizes, to her horror, means something terrible for each of them.
- Chapter 13: Surgery Through a Straw
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The sparks and the essence put an urgency in Tera's actions, driving her to push her use of her powers in new directions, causing her to find she has more control of things than she believed. The trace left in Maggie picks up a change in her situation, and Tera works quickly to try to find a way to tap the woman's much more powerful master.
- Chapter 14: Bait
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Tera faces her most difficult challenge yet when she discovers that the visions were designed to use her as bait.
- Chapter 15: Unity
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Tera's progress continues as she awakens May and works to unbind her spark. A chance encounter with a former mundane named Unity twists things in an unexpected way.
- Chapter 16: Misdirection
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Tera gains more knowledge of the sparks and their powers and comes to free the last link, that of Kacy. But when the young girl awakens, reality twists in a frightening way, leaving Tera to face a horrible decision.
- Chapter 17: The Trials of Eternity, Part 1
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Quinn and Molly make a discovery which Tera can use to deal with Unity. Soon, though, Tera faces a challenge she never expected, gaining insight into the how and why powerful gods are what they are.
- Chapter 18: The Trials of Eternity, Part 2
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The Trials continue and, this time, with her father alongside, Tera is challenged to behave like a god and take whatever she wants. Her desire to do the right thing is rapidly assaulted by temptations.
- More chapters, coming soon!
Comments on Judge Not:
I wonder how you writers organise the plots and subplots, but please keep doing it, as you have converted me.
How are you going with the extension of Run, and, and ...
Thanks for a good read, I look forward to your further posts.
Re: Plots: For me, a lot of the time I just let a story flow and only later, after a chapter has been written, do I bother to make notes about plot points and look to see if I've introduced any holes. It's just better for me to spontaneously develop the more action-oriented stories that way. I rarely, if ever, know what "comes next" in stories like Judge Not, whatever it is just flows out as I type away. I find if I plan things out, I have a much harder time writing to the target. Instead, I sort of draw the target after I've gone some way towards reaching it. It involves constantly checking for plot holes or pieces of the story that haven't been wrapped up, but it flows easier for me that way. I know other authors who detail and plan, but that's not particularly for me.
Re: Run sequel: I haven't done much with it yet, just part of a chapter and some notes about possible plot ideas. I'll probably not get to it until I've wrapped up (or nearly so) Judge Not and moved The Protege further along.
There's nothing left of what I liked basically.
I especially don't want to read about guys sucking dick or getting fucked by other guys. (rating: 1)
Plus, I said in the intro that GN and JN share a universe with another series, and I'll be doing a sequel of that one in the middle of Judge Not and it's final installment (at some point) which will further tie the two together. Not sure when Judge Not will wrap up. I expect it to be longer than Groundhog, so it will probably take months to finish, and I'm not yet sure of the other series' plot. I may start writing it before finishing JN if I want to interweave the plots a bit, but I might wait. Not sure yet.
Very interesting plot line, and again, would make a wonderful read, even without the sex. (rating: 8)