Flower Petals

From the imagination of Chase Shivers

Series Launched: February 6, 2014
Latest Chapter Added: August 5, 2018

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Read what others have said about Flower Petals in the Comments. <-- SPOILERS

Series Summary:
 Primary Story Codes: MFff MFf MF Mf ped inc anal creampie mother/daughter father/daughter

Brent is a divorced father of a thirteen-year old girl. He meets a mother and her young daughter at a secluded campsite, where a pair of the girl's dirty panties sets off a process that leads Brent to a new relationship with his daughter.


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Comments on Flower Petals: (SPOILERS)

Author Date Comment Chase's Response
Michael 16 March 2019 Fantastic story, Chase! Beautifully written, great character development. A real pleasure - thanks for writing! (rating: 10) Thank you so much, Michael! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I hope to have more chapters coming up very soon. Thanks for reading!
Cormac 10 March 2019 I'm giving you the 8 for the whole series not just this one part. I have to tell you, I never thought I could stay interested in a long story with so many chapters. Yet I am really surprized that you have been able to keep my attention in this story for so long and I actually am looking forward to reading more of your series. Great job. (rating: 8) Thank you, Cormac! I really appreciate it!
Scotline 8 March 2018 I've just read Shipwrecked and Flower a petals. Both great stories and your discription of the sex is great. Almost like watching an episode. I wonder if you have other stories either yiur own or other writems that follow 2 or more young girls exporing thier sexual awakens with each other. Probably more common these days for girls to be sexual active and have more sames ex partners than males will ever have with females. It could be true to say all sexual activity is for the females benefit and enjoyment and males only get what the female allow us to have.

Good writing although I shouldn't read 20 chapters in a few days 		Apologies for the lengthy delay in responding. I don't have any stories specifically about that, but you might want to check out Tender Box, a series about two young lesbians discovering sex with each other. Also, Emmy Grows Up if you enjoy a fap-heavy coming of age story about both girls and boys, and for something more serious, maybe Diary of a Loose Girl which is a solo, first-person story told by a woman about her sexual awakening and experiences
oren 21 December 2018 It's one of the most amazing stories you've ever read !!! Write excellent and good and harman Barmu on !! Thank you very much! (rating: 10) You're welcome!
oren 21 December 2018 Great story! Write good and good .. Thank you very much! If you can update it with your new stories on the subject I would be very happy Thanks, oren. More coming soon!
Anonymous 11 December 2018 Flower Petals is the the first of your stories I have read. Impressed with Chapters 1-22. Good story line. Good dialog. Sex scenes OK too. Nice work describing the difficult "talk" between Dad and Orchid. Great chapter even though the only sex was masturbation.

I have read nearly everything Renpet and Tempest have put online. Your work seems to compare very favorably. Looking forward to finishing the rest of Petals...cannot imagine how this story can go another fifty chapters. But I will soon find out. Thanks for the read. (rating: 8) 		Many thanks, Anon! Being compared to Renpet and Tempest is always a lovely, humbling complement.
Anonymous 20 October 2018 I really enjoy this story. Was wondering when other chapters are coming? (rating: 10) After a lengthy delay, soon...?
Anonymous 14 October 2018 This is my favorite series by far...anal isn’t always my cup of tea, but I certainly work my way through it without objection; everything else is spot on! The real reason I’m writing though is in response to the anonymous comment of “...way too much sex”?!? Kidding, right? It’s perfect as far as I’m concerned. I have done a bit of writing, and the volume and quality of what you have created is staggering. Your dedication is admirable and very much appreciated!

“Way too much sex...”? Ha! I’m still shaking my head over that one!

Thanks again, for many hours of pleasure over the years! (rating: 9) 		Thanks so much, Anon! Yeah, I had to shake my head and laugh at that last comment. Can't please them all, but I never expected "way too much sex" to be the reason.
Anonymous 12 August 2018 Way too much sex!!! Okay...
Ivan 4 August 2018 (Author's note: refers to chapter 48) Another great chapter,brent is one lucky man,now having four beautiful woman in is life,looking forward to see what happen next. (rating: 10) Thanks, Ivan! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read through. I put up a new chapter or two of Flower Petals every month at this point, and added Chapter 78 earlier today.
Swan 30 July 2018 I have just started this series. So far, I am loving it and look forward to many more delightful chapters. You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work. (rating: 10) Thank you, Swan! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read more.
Anonymous 23 July 2018 I have looked for the outcome of the xwife.big let down. I really don't understand this comment, Anon. You left the message on Chapter 34, so you should realize that not a ton of time has gone by and that you are not even half way through reading what has been published. Even so, what ever gave you any sense that the story was about Brent's ex-wife? She's barely in a couple of chapters. The story is clearly about Brent, Orchid, Dahlia, and Lily to that point. If you keep reading, Malory's situation is updated in a couple of places, but she is no focus in the narrative. No idea why her status would be a "big let down".
Anonymous 22 July 2018 WOW!what a chapter, [Author's note: refers to Chapter 35] i felt like i was there,very well written,i only just start on this story,i read a couple of chapters a day,looking forward to reading rest of the story,keep up the good work Chase. (rating: 10) :D Thanks so much! I tried to really deliver an intimate, personal feel to that scene and I'm thrilled you enjoyed the effort! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as you read further.
Wankmydiddly 26 April 2018 Chapter 1 is all I've read so far. You appear to know every button to press to put me in orbit. This part gives so much, but leaves the stage set for even more. Thank you for giving us this wonderful piece of eyecandy. Thanks, Wankmydiddly! I hope you read on in the series and continue to enjoy it.
Prometheus 21 April 2018 I enjoyed reading Shipwrecked and Flower Petals. Thank you for posting. Thank you!
Rude 2 March 2018 A 10 for the most part but a bit over the top in all. Also, some of the sex scenes involving oral and anal in concert with each other were not very hygienically performed which begged for bathroom breaks between oral/anal. Those parts boarded on gross. I haven't read any of readers comments yet so maybe I am the only one who believes in soap and water. (rating: 10) Thanks, Rude! Definitely over-the-top scenes, no doubt. And while I obviously love the fantasy of anal-to-oral, the reality is more like you say. I don't find it gross at all, but I know many do.
Aussieray 2 February 2018 Hi I have just finished reading the available chapters of Flower Petals. A great read, Lily is magical, very easy to mentally appreciate her attributes. I enjoy the way you are involving the new characters, without dislocating the status of the core ensemble. Does Brent reflect your passion for the mountains, as you are very descriptive in painting a literary picture. If I thought I could find a lady like Dahlia, I would start camping again. Thanks for providing a great low key interlude in an otherwise hectic life. And please continue the journey. Thanks, Aussieray! Wouldn't it be wonderful to meet a real Dahlia? I've certainly imagined such a woman many times, though never encountered one such as her in real life.

And Brent's attraction to mountain places is something of a projection from me, for sure, though I enjoy romantic/sensual things out in nature in general, whether mountains or forests or beaches or anywhere, really. Something about being remote and outside is very arousing to me, and as a result, for many of my characters.
Mike 11 January 2018 My Rating is for this entire series. I'm sorry to have to give this story a 10 but I couldn't find the 15...

Im normally a short story reader, anything more than 3-5 chapters I usually try to stay away from, because usually after that it's the same scene over and over (boring) But I must say this one captured me, held me, and fondled me through every chapter. One of the best written and realistic stories I've read on this site. Can't wait for more. (rating: 10) 		Thank you so much, Mike! Flower Petals is a sort of sandbox for me these days where I get to tell about sexy moments happening to characters I've really grown rather attached to. I just love Orchid and Lily and Dahlia and Maria, and certainly, Brent is the luckiest man in the world, right?

I'll have much more of the series up over the coming weeks when I have time again to write and publish. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Anonymous 5 January 2018 I shouldn't let this bother me but have you ever had a broken leg? It's not that big of a deal. You can reach everywhere and do everything except put weight on that one leg. (Mine was a compound break of the tib and fib.)

Otherwise, I've made it to chapter 21. You must be doing something right. 		I certainly recognize that this was a bit of a stretched reality to make the broken leg the mechanism by which Orchid and Brent get together, but I've been around situations where broken legs can be quite difficult to deal with, especially if the break(s) need to be as immobilized as possible for several weeks.
Rhimshot415 23 December 2017 In the section where you list the characters, you have both Dalia and Maria at 15 weeks pregnant. But the story has progressed much further in time than when you first listed them as 15 weeks pregnant It doesn't spoil the story, but it offends my sense of time.

Also, I have noticed grammatical errors, mostly in the tense of verbs you use that do not match what yu are writing, like a present tense being used for somthing that already happened, which should have a pas tense. You neede beta readers and or an editor to correct hese errors before you post.

Just out of curiosity, how many more chaptershave you already posted, and how many more will there be? This story is already longer than it needs to be, given your constant repetitions of such phrases such as "preteen's pussy" or "lover's pregnant pussy." Excessive verbiage is as bad as insufficient detail. (rating: 9) 		Re: weeks of pregnancy: Somewhere along the way I missed updating this number. I'll correct it.

Re: 'grammatical errors': Umm... I'd love some examples of this. I'm pretty careful with verb tenses (obsessive at times,) so I find it highly unlikely that this is a widespread problem in my writing. I find it offputting when reading other authors' stories and the incorrect tense is used, so this one I'm scratching my head on since I'm so aware of this issue.

Re: beta readers: Good grief... I'm fairly confident that my writing is vastly better edited than the majority of stories on ASSTR. I'm not patting myself on the back. It's just a fact. Also... the irony of being lectured about grammar in an email riddled with spelling errors is not lost on me...

Re: chapters: Well, you commented on Chapter 67, so assumedly you know by now how to find the story's index where you'll see 73 chapters online as of December 26.

Re: 'already longer than it needs to be': Uhh... says who? Not me, the author, so...

Re: 'constant repetitions': Look, I'm not sure why you have read through 67 chapters of the story if so many things bothered you. The story isn't perfect, but it does what it aims to do: provide a sandbox/playground for incest sex scenes. If that's grown stale (and I understand that it may have), stop reading it. Telling me, the author, that it is too long is a pretty odd comment, honestly. Also, you rated the story a 9. Not sure how that meshes with your complaints...
ron 18 December 2017 oh lord im loving these stories i envy brent soo much :) Brent is a very lucky man.
ron 18 December 2017 omg i love this story soo intense and erotic Thank you!
badshapeindy 7 December 2017 the only reason I didn't give it a 10 was because it is not finshed yet, get it finshed in a good way and ill give it a 10 (rating: 9) Thanks, badshapeindy! Flower Petals is an open-ended playground at this point. I will draw together some of the plot lines, of course, but I don't plan to fully end the series any time soon.
Emissary 30 November 2017 This is a great story so far, please add more soon! So far I've only read a few of your other stories, (shipwrecked, I LOVE that one) but I do find them very enjoyable! Thanks and keep up the great writing! Thanks so much! Flower Petals is the choice for reader favorite in the recent poll I conducted, so you're not alone in enjoying this series! I have a lot planned for it, so I'll have new chapters up over the coming weeks.
Jimm 20 November 2017 (Author's note: refers to Chapter 8)

Mmm. Delicious... Loved the perverseness of Lily's open masturbation to another little girl's panties, and the exciting surprise of her wiping her 9 yo girl cum on them, throwing them to Brent, and her comment to him. So lecherous... So damn hot ;). I also enjoyed their brief kiss, although I would have looked forward to it, savored it, enjoying the clumsiness of a kiss from such a young girl. While IRL I never would, the fantasy of slipping my tongue into a pretty 9 yo's little mouth, licking and sucking on her tongue and lips, and savoring her taste... it makes me very hard... Thanks for this chapter! ;) 		Thanks, Jimm! Yep, it's all about the fantasy. I wish more people were content to imagine such things rather than acting them out. Reality will rarely (if ever) match the fantasy, and the harm done in real life is ignored in this story (and all my others.) I do love writing Lily, she's a wonderful, sexy young woman!
pending author 19 November 2017 Over the course of the last week, I have read every chapter of this story. I think it is beautiful and you write very well.

I particularly enjoy the amount of love in this series. And the angst of striving for self acceptance in the adult characters.

Thank you for sharing this story. 		Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you like this story! I care about the characters and their ability to love each other is a big part of the pleasure I get in writing it. A dose of reality helps make it all that much more interesting and fulfilling, so struggles and occasional sad notes help keep it all in perspective. Thanks for reading!
Wolfe 14 November 2017 Dude I love your work. Im in the middle of rereading shipwrecked from the beginning now. Wish there was a way you could publish this n flower peddles for the public but doubt it would go over real well w vanillas lol. Keep up the good work. Yes I wish you put out more faster but I'm a realist. You got what 6 stories your working on at the same time plus life in general. I get it. I'm in the same boat. 2 jobs side gigs remodel on my house plus starting two businesses. Keep writing ill keep reading Thank you, Wolfe! I definitely love writing both Shipwrecked and Flower Petals, and, yeah, I suspect neither would play real well with most people. I'm just happy I can share the stories on ASSTR so that others can enjoy them. I love the characters and the worlds they inhabit, and I'll continue adding to them over time whenever I can.
tony 12 October 2017 just getting into the story and enjoying very much im sure others have said how well written it is love the details as well as the overall structure which cant always be said for long stories nice payoff at the end of each chapter which always comes in handy that said im off to the next chapter Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the series!
Yuri 17 May 2017 This series has been one of my favorites and I am so excited to see it continue great work and pls keep them coming. I love the way in all your story's you make it sound like having incest sex is like some kind of religious experience. I'm a big fan plz writing more. I can't wait for the next chapters... Can't wait for the next chapter of this amazing story. It'a sooo hot! And so loving! And so wonderful!

Thank you!! 		Thank you so much, Yuri! More soon to come!
Anonymous 14 March 2017 Please hurry with the next chapter Sorry, I was locked out of ASSTR for some months, but I'm able to get back in now. I'll get new chapters up soon!
geoff 24 February 2017 I NEED Ch.71...your story has captured my thoughts, interest and more. I love your characters and cannot wait for more. Thanks, geoff! I have #71 written. I'll get it edited and published soon, I hope!
Jm 17 January 2017 Please hurry Thanks I'll get new chapters up when I can. I did publish #69 and #70 a few days ago on January 11, 2017. Hope you saw those!
Anonymous 13 January 2017 okay this one is a bit too set-up lol.

The story has been pretty good.. but this one lmao..

Orchid just talks to her dad about the possibility of wanting to have sex with another man, and blah blah blah..

Suddenly in walks a boy around her age, who is sleeping his sister for her to have sex with. 		Erm... repeating yourself, I think. See response to your comment from January 11 below.
Anonymous 12 January 2017 "Incest is... complicating... isn't it?" (from Flower Petals, Chapter 69) It's a pleasure that your stories take the time to explore those complications (and relationships) in detail. Excellent stories. Thanks for writing and sharing them. I look forward to each new chapter. Thank you so much! I enjoy reading and writing stories which don't just fall together without reflection and weighing concerns first. It makes the payoff that much more worthy of everyone's time to me. One of my new series, Emmy Grows Up doesn't do any of that, and it has a wholly different feel to it. It is easier to write a story like Emmy, but not nearly as fulfilling as stories where the characters think about and deal with complications. At least it is that way for me.
Anonymous 11 January 2017 (author's note: refers to chapter 70) Really, could you have set that up any clearer..

Orchid is thinking of having sex with another male, suddenly a 15 year old walks into their house who is sexually active with his sister...

Sorry that one is just lol too set up 		Umm... I guess I could see how that seems like an obvious 'set up' here, but don't get your hopes up.

Also... if it was a set up, what's wrong with an obvious set up in a fantasy fap story? How else would extremely unlikely events happen otherwise? Not saying what you're assuming is going to happen, but if it did... so what? I mean... All of it was an obvious set up. Bringing in Lily and her mother... Orchid... Maria... All pretty obvious set ups. Sorry if this one looks too much so to you. Not sure what you would rather I do than present foreshadowing ahead of events.
Anonymous 31 December 2016 You need an editor. Combine the chapters into fewer, change the repetitions, maybe a few factual tweeks, and come up with a conclusion. Then, your might put together a novel. I'm not sure how to respond to this. Is this a compliment, that you think the story is worth the effort to turn into a novel? Or, is this a mean criticism about how poorly the story is done? I have no idea!

This story is open-ended. I'm not planning to draw it to a conclusion any time soon. I'm also not looking to turn it into a novel beyond what it already is.
Tampa Reader 11 December 2016 Your writing is so fresh, so erotic. Thanks for putting the time in to entertain and enthrall us. Please continue with Maria's pregnancy going into full bloom. I know you can describe sexual congress with an increasingly pregnant woman. That will be so hot. Thanks, Tampa Reader! I look forward to describing the ongoing pregnancies of Dahlia and Maria in future chapters. I hope you enjoy what comes next!
Anonymous 3 December 2016 This country and the world is so hung up about the ideas fantasize here that I have never heard of solutions. When I had improper ideas I used self control. It was all I had available. But self control did not solve my emotional problem and kept me from being the father I wanted to be. I regret that my step-daughter did not have better parents. My problem has been solved by time. Fifty-two years have left me limp but I do not feel that is a good solution for men below the age impotence. I have only read through chapter 7. I hope some solutions are found for Brent is found that does not leave him or anyone else a victim. So sorry to hear that you have have struggled with difficult and dangerous impulses, but I'm glad that you were able to control them. I always want readers to understand the difference between the fantasies in my stories and the reality of what happens to children when they are acted upon. The former is safe and gives an outlet for desires you can't stop, but the latter is damaging and harmful. I really wish adults would stop harming children and instead let fantasy be the only outlet.

I don't know what sort of solutions there might be. I think you're right that, right now, there are no good options (aside from using erotic stories as the outlet) but perhaps in the future something can be done which helps protect children from predators and abusers while also addressing the attractions of the adults. Maybe VR offers such a path.

In this story, specifically, remember this is fantasy and should never be confused with how reality would go. Brent (and Dahlia) are allowed to fulfill desires with Lily and Orchid as erotic fiction. The reality of such situations would be horrific and I hope you and other readers understand that I write these stories to provide a safe outlet which allows children to avoid the damaging, destructive reality of acting out these fantasies.
Bigbikerz 12 November 2016 I salute you......after a long wait....now, looks like a new door is going to open...a door to more fun and venture to the family.....I wish this story will last forever...congrats...good writing, easy to read and understand...keep up the work and thanks for everything......Shipwrecked next....waiting for it..... Thank you, Bigbikerz! The family in this story provides me a lot of "play room" with various ideas and I love to see them explore new themes and opportunities. Lots more to follow!
Becca Becca 31 October 2016 hi, i have been reading your flower petals stories....wow. very erotic, i love them! i think you owe me some new panties lol Thank you so much, Becca! I'd be glad to trade you a new pair of panties for the ones you soiled! :D

FYI I just published chapter 68 of FP, so I hope you enjoy it!
Anonymous 17 October 2016 Doing great keep it up! Many thanks!
Eddie 8 October 2016 I read the entire story before commenting. You have done an excellent job. I always have a large erection while reading this. I cannot wait for much more in the saga. Thanks for the wonderful story Thank you, Eddie! It is always a pleasure to know a reader finds my work arousing!
Tempest 4 October 2016 Im just getting ready to start chapter 22. I love the pacing of this story -- everything just happening as it would in reality. Great storytelling. Many thanks, Tempest! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Yuri 2 October 2016 Thanks God, you come back. We long time are waiting.... FP its amazing, and continued is better, but you deepest in SadoMazo (?), its not interesting for me. Love! And only LOVE! Please! Do not ending this story. Write more and more!!!! With Russia with L O V E!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you, Yuri! More Flower Petals coming. I've got several chapters written, I just need to edit and format them for the site. Soon!
ironic990 20 September 2016 Flower Power please! Fall arrives in two days...I'm missing the girls! Thanks for all your great writing... Sorry I missed the start of fall by a few days, but new chapters going up in October!
Anonymous 18 September 2016 Best story wver but still waiting for the next chapters. Any idea when they will be coming? Looking forward in anticipatiom!! Thank you! New Chapters starting to go up October 1.
Anonymous 16 September 2016 Over a year and no more chapters? This has been a great story! Please keep it going!!! Wow! How did a whole year go by without new Flower Petals? No idea how that happened. New chapters going up in early October.
Anonymous 1 September 2016 When When???? Dying to read more!!! Sorry about the delay, new chapters coming up!
Sean 21 August 2016 Love your work keep it up :-) Thank you so much!
Anonymousgeoff 15 June 2016 Hey??? chapter 62-3-4-5-6-7-8 etc? Back to Key West? Xmas? you have me hooked - do not cut the line I will come back to FP this summer, but first I'm trying to finish up 3 other series (Shipwrecked, Run, and Groundhog Nights).
Anonymous 13 June 2016 Mommies ...good mommies can make all the difference in the world. Delightful story. Reader wants things to accelerate and indeed they should. Perfect opportunity for Lily's mommie to revel that she is actually a pedo mom and she has endless plans for her baby daughter... Thanks for the compliments. I think you'll find that FP has conflicted, emotionally connected 'Mommies' but not the devious Bond-villain style plotter you are looking for here.
Anonymous64 27 May 2016 Love this how soon do we get more stories from you!!!????????????? Not today, but hopefully this month (June 2016.)
Anonymous 22 April 2016 Coming Soon?????? WHEN????????????? WHEN??????????????? Glad to see you eager for more. I hope very soon (June 2016.)
Anonymous 18 March 2016 Just read the first chapter of Flower Petals. It was awesome. Being someone who has had many experiences with worn panties, I can really relate and understand the intense feelings of this story. I can not wait to read about him and Orchids panties.

I am sure many men have used worn one before but do not recognize just how special it is to have such a girl's intimate thing up close.

You describe worn panties so well. Do you also have first hand experiences? 		I'm so glad you enjoyed that scene in Flower Petals, I hoped it was powerful and evoked the thrill of such acts. I've certainly had my fair share of those sorts of moments, and I'm always looking for more. There's nothing like that scent, and each woman's is unique. Nothing like it at all. I hope you have read on into the series and continue to enjoy it.
Anonymous 13 January 2016 I really have been enjoying this story. I must say, the writing itself is very well done. Hopefully you have some updates soon. Thanks so much! I will definitely be adding new content to FP as soon as I have a few days to get some writing in. Stay tuned!
Shoe 20 October 2015 I have followed this story with mixed interest. Thanks for sharing. Found this error in the second paragraph of the chapter. Maria was tired and went to be [bed] early Thanks, Shoe! I'll get that fixed, much appreciated!
Angus 30 August 2015 Thank you! Your are a marvelous and talented story teller and writer. I continue to thoroughly enjoy and appreciate your work. Best regards!! Thank you, Angus! Hope you will enjoy new chapters when I publish them!
Inky 30 August 2015 The 'Captcha' page was totally blank!

I enjoyed Flower Petals and look forward to the next chapters.

Unlike some of the arrogant commentators on Literotica, I am not going to tell you the way the story should go.

A couple of comments.
I think a 34yr old man would have a longer post orgasm recovery time and would probably be incapable of staying erect after cumming or be capable of twice in a few minutes.

However, unlike the majority of stories on ASSTR, this is well written, and contains few grammatical or spelling errors. Well done! 		Thank you, Inky!

Re: CAPTCHA: Unfortunately, this is out of my hands. ASSTR handles that aspect (I cannot control the CAPTCHA and whether/how it appears), and the CAPTCHA isn't working in several browsers for all authors on the site.

Re: multiple orgasms: While I agree that many men would indeed take longer periods of recover I have known several who were even older than Brent who did/do not and who are quite capable of maintaining erection even after ejaculation. It is a fantasy, after all, so I hope this aspect isn't marring the story for you. Thanks again for the compliments!
Anonymous 16 July 2015 Have you forgotten that you have a LOT of readers waiting for more chapters of this amazing story? It's been over TWO months for Flower Petals while it seems "Ship Wrecked" and "Ground Hog Nights" have all your attentions. I'm glad you are looking forward to more FP. I can only write in the series which are flowing. In recent weeks, that has mostly been Shipwrecked and Groundhog Nights. I will get back to Flower Petals when that series is 'talking to me' again. Until then, I won't force anything just to get new content out. As readers, you deserve my best efforts, and that doesn't happen if I try to force out new chapters.
enola reven 21 May 2015 So far, this has been a remarkable journey. After he left the camp abruptly and fell asleep in the hotel i was sure the story would end there but, you've done a remarkable job of bringing two seperate lives together into a singular experience, while keeping me on the edge of suspense and wonder. bravo! i cant wait to read more of this tastefully modest and emotional journey. Thank you enola! I've tried hard to let the story unfold in a 'natural' way without forcing the 'money shot' into the series. I am glad you are enjoying it!
TPKing 20 May 2015 This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. You are a very good writer and I look forward to reading more. Thanks, TPKing! I really appreciate the compliments!
Redfreak 11 May 2015 Awesome story, great writing I've enjoyed this so much! Became a fan of alternate societal standards from my favorite author of all time, Robert A. Heinlen. His voice was the first to tell me that societies values need not be mine.

Hope you write more chapters, really want to see how you resolve the extended family issues not to mention the anticipation of all those lactating tits!!! Big Fan, Redfreak 		Thank you so much, Redfreak! Heinlein is a favorite of mine as well, and I love his thoughts on challenging norms in society.

I'll definitely have more chapters for FP in the future, I really enjoy writing about the characters and the challenges they face!
Hngrymann 8 May 2015 mmm just found your story and I must say I have SO enjoyed edging to it! Your writing style and the way you develop the characters and going inside the main male character's head with thoughts and feelings is wonderful and yes places the reader in his place.

Thank you for sharing your talents and of course I so LOVE this genre of fiction! 		Thank you so much, Hngrymann! Flower Petals has been a lot of fun to work on, and I have a lot more to add to the story in the future. Hope you continue to enjoy the series!
Anonymous 8 May 2015 A turn on and great reading, my Fantasy since I can remember playing with my dick, even as a lad. Thanks for the kind words!
Donald 5 May 2015 LOVING your "Shipwrecked" and "Flower Petals", of course. I can easily understand how they are the most popular. Popular themes, very popular story lines, and I know you will disagree, but "Joe Every Man" can picture himself in place of the main chars in both. Not to mention, OF COURSE, the GREAT!!! writing. Authors can capture us with the stroke effect for a few chapters, maybe. But it's the excellent writing that keeps us glued to the monitor(s) waiting for the next chapter.

Recent updates have brought me back to "Flower Petals" from chapter 1. It's as good on my 3rd time as the first two times I read it! :)

I also enjoyed "I Never Saw Her Again". "Helen" and "The Shitting Fields" and ... heck, all of them. Now, granted, some of those ARE way out there encounters, but then again, that's what they should be in that story line. Heck, if things like that happened often or every day, one WOULD see her again. :P

Oh hell! Love all your works! Going to start "Diary Of A Loose Girl" when I'm done with "Petals" for the 3rd time. Believe it or not, haven't read that one yet (according to my browser and feeble memory).

In closing, again, THANK YOU for sharing and giving: your time, your vision, your writing. 1M words and counting! You have given us much! Thank You! 		Wow! Many, many sincere thanks, Donald. It is very gratifying to know you enjoy my writing. It can take a lot of time and energy, for sure, but I really love to do it and share it with others.

I do actually think that having "Joe Every Man" be able to see himself in the plot is key to many of the stories, certainly Flower Petals. That's why there is often a decided lack of description of the narrator's looks, including penis size and facial hair. It lets the reader see through the eyes whatever they want about the first-person giving the view.

I hope you continue to enjoy my writing!
Anonymous 1 May 2015 Some great erotica, but I have to say that I hope I never read or hear the word mewled again. Talk about overuse of a word. There are a myriad of other decriptors that could have been used, but you stuck witI what seems to be your favourite word.

Also, I feel there is a bit of a hole in your plot involving Orchid's mother and Brent's exwife. What happened to her? From your initial chapters it seems unlikely that Brent's ex would just abandon Orchid to Brent. Given her almost bipolar description, I would have thought that she would be a pernicious thorn in Brent's and Orchid's side. Is she in an insane asylum, one that doesn't allow outside contact? What's up with her? 		I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

As far as using 'mewled'... I checked the master document. The words 'mewled' and 'mewling' are in there a grand total of 21 times in over 170,000 words. Hardly seems like 'overuse'. The term isn't one that I think has a great deal of 'other descriptors' which would convey the same thing. I use that word on purpose, even knowing it can have sad connotations by common definitions. But I think it fits exactly the sound I wish conveyed, and in context, the reader hopefully understands it is an imitative sound of contentment rather than a feeble cry. Somewhere between a whimper and a purr, perhaps. Would you prefer I use 'whimper'? That conveys a very different sense to me. 'Bleat'? No way. 'Cry'? No way. I use 'purr' sometimes to convey a similar sound and context. Sorry that it is a distraction, but 21 times across 52 chapters hardly seems excessive to me.

As for Malory, her part of the story has been intentionally put aside for a while. I cannot focus on every detail in the world, and though Malory played an important role early on, the focus for the story is on Orchid and Brent. I had to let go some of the plot ideas I had around Malory in order to move things forward. There are some parallel events going on that cause Malory's absense from the tale, but I won't get into them here. I get that it feels like a 'hole.' I don't want the reader to overly concern him/herself with her part except as necessary in the early chapters. While I won't reveal the details, Malory has not been forgotten and her part in the story may again surface.
Mary 20 March 2015 Just a quick line to say how much of a turn on that story was. Many thanks, Mary! I hope to have new chapters of FP up in the coming days/weeks for you to enjoy.
Rodney 9 March 2015 I'm anxiously waiting for you to post more chapters to "Flower Petals." So sorry about the delayed response, I've been in the hospital and recovering for a few weeks. I'll get new chapters of FP going soon.
dachief 16 February 2015 Such a wicked, evil mind you have!!!!! ;-)

When will one of the little ones get pregnant? 		There's no rush towards that in the story because it attempts to draw an arbitrary line at what the characters would 'plausibly' do. I know, a stretch give Orchid and Lily's behavior, but pregnancy of a thirteen and ten-year old girl don't fit in these characters' lives.
Dan 16 February 2015 I have just read the 16 or 17 episodes of "Flower Petals" and I loved it. I particularly appreciated the slow build up, the secluded camping site, and the slow but steady development of the story.

There is tendency for some repetition during the sex between the adults Brent and Dahlia, but this did not seriously interfere with the story. The slow development between Brent and the girls is powerful stuff for some of your readers, certainly mine.

However, I certainly hope that you continue more chapters than just 17. You most certainly have room for Lily and Orchid, Brent and Orchid, and then including Brent with one then both of the younger girls, and then include Dahlia etc. etc. 		I'm glad you enjoy Flower Petals! It is a fun series to write, and I love the characters.

There are many more chapters available, so I hope in the weeks since you wrote me, you found them and enjoyed them as well. The series has 52 chapters now.
TDaddy 2015 February 9 I don't think it'd be that out of character for Orchid and Brent to decide to have a baby girl. I think, like many couples, an instinct hits. Once they've educated themselves that there is less danger of defects than if a woman 40 were to have a baby, I think it would be clear. Then Brent could have the full relationship with the new daughter like he'd wanted all along with Orchid, but with Orchid helping guide what would be best. I do appreciate the feedback, but I have to sincerely disagree with this sentiment. Remember, Brent still struggles with what happened between Lily and her father, and putting him in a situation where he and Orchid have a 'full relationship' with a young girl (younger than Lily by years) is unrealistic. It would feel forced to me, as if the point of the narrative was to push fetishes into the plot rather than letting the plot and characters dictate what happens.

The same is true with the pregnancy idea. Again, Orchid is on birth control, and we already have two pregnant women now in the cast. She's thirteen and I cannot see Brent being alright with impregnating his young teen daughter.
Anonymous 25 January 2015 Would love to see Orchid get pregnant by her daddy. Maybe. I won't reveal future plot points, but keep in mind that this story is attempting to stick to a 'realistic' feel of sorts. Yeah, it is all fantasy and certainly not 'real,' but Orchid getting pregnant at this point isn't something which would be in character for Orchid or Brent. Also, Orchid is on birth control, so they would have to willfully attempt to get pregnant, not something either character is likely to do.
DerMeister 20 January 2015 I also have to agree with Chase with regard to a "middle aged" man able to have multiple erections/orgasms in a short period. When I was stationed in Bavaria and surrounded by Beautiful Frauleins, I could accomplish that as well, but NOT every day. Brent isn't doing it every day either, so it's entirely plausible.

P.S. What do we have to do Chase, to get you off that Island and back to Flower Petals? ;-) 		Thanks, DerMeister. I can guarantee that many 32-year old men, when given nothing better to do but have sex with beautiful women, would have no problem with a 4-5 cumshot day. Like you say, not every day, but not out of the realm of possibilities, either. It's all fantasy, anyway, so why not have a 'superpower' if you need to think of it like that :)

Re: new chapters, soon! I had a lot of Shipwrecked that I wanted to get written, getting to the end of that loop now, so I'll be back on other series soon.
Anonymous 18 January 2015 Good story but with one caveat, he's a middle aged man and while I could believe two maybe three orgasms, I find it unrealistic to read that he had 4 or 5 erections. Thanks for the compliments. I have to disagree that a 32-year old man is "middle aged." Far from it, in many ways. Plus, Brent is in shape and has a high sex drive, is surrounded by several beautiful females, including his daughter. While the overall story stretches the bounds of 'realism' I don't think four or five orgasms is all that unreasonable, even if sometimes overdone for effect.
Crazy Bear 16 January 2015 This is a great story, I'll admit it took a couple of chapters to feel as if I was looking over Brent's shoulders all the time. It's all believable and the story flows. Oh I love the sex, all of it and the character's are all plausible. I don't mean this to sound clinical, I'm not pulling this to bits, I love it. I am also a writer and have a novel on ASSTR and a few others in the pipeline, but I don't do the website thing yet. Please do keep this going, I'm looking forward to Maria melding into the family, opening up her feelings towards Orchid and the births of the two children. Thanks, CB! I hope you continue to enjoy the series. I'll check out your story as well.
Anonymous 15 January 2015 Love it! thanks for writing and sharing My pleasure, thanks!
DerMeister 14 January 2015 What I love about your style of writing the sexual aspect, is that you make it a "loving" relationship between Brent and which ever female he's with. None of that "suggestive" porn crap we see from other authors. There is no coercion, no hidden agenda, just a loving relationship with each female. Thanks, DerMeister! I definitely put a lot of effort into keeping the narrative full of emotional closeness. I hate forcing characters into things they wouldn't do, and to me, the most plausible pathway to get them into taboo relationships is through kindness and love.
JoeScrewloose 14 January 2015 I'm not the most eloquent of people and commenting is hardly a forte of mine but I shall endeavour to do my best. I have read all of this tale (into the early hours of the morning) and I have to say that it's a beautiful story. If I were to criticise it would only to be to say that I wish the chapters were longer and more frequent. That aside, it is well constructed, well told and wonderful to read. I offer you my most sincere thanks for writing this and sharing it. Many thanks! I really appreciate your comments. FP has been a fun series to write, and I love the characters. I'll have some more chapters up over the coming days as the inclusion of Maria plays out and the pregnancies go on. Hope you enjoy!
DerMeister 11 January 2015 FINALLY! Someone got pregnant! I hope Maria becomes part of the Family now. I would imagine ALL the females would love that too. Nice Job! :) Glad you enjoyed that, DerMeister. More to come about Maria in Chapter 45+
Anonymous 11 January 2015 (refers to Chapter 42) Wow! What a comeback!!! I knew it would not be long before you had to take a next step with this family. Really well done, and again, for an unbelievable situation, you crafted it quite believably... Amazed... Thank you so much! Even though it is farfetched and all fantasy, I always try to keep the sexual scenes organic and as believable as possible.
Anonymous 9 January 2015 great story !!!!! love it. Thank you!
Adam77 5 January 2015 loved reading all 41 chapters of flower petals can wait to read more you are an excellent writer I look forward to reading more chapters of this story merry belated xmas and happy new year Thanks, Adam77. Belated same to you and yours!
Dandy Tago 18 October 2014 You are amazing. I love how much romance and emotional connection you put into your stories. I have fallen in love with Bailey and Amy and Orchid and others of your characters because you do such an amazing job of giving them depth and volition and motivation.

I just re-read the first few chapters of Shipwrecked, and even on a second pass, it holds up so well. It really draws me in. And the realism that you insert: the grappling with the world outside of these relationships and how the relationships are impacted by the world around them -- it blows me away and inspires me.

Also, the way you balance the myriad connections between your characters, is really skillful. You keep everyone active in the story and keep the romance and sex balanced as well.

I'm in awe of your work. Not only have I enjoyed reading your stories and fapping to them, but I have learned a lot from you as a writer as well. 		Wow, thank you so much, Dandy Tago! I really appreciate the feedback!
Retcar 17 October 2014 It's been about a month now. Are you still alive over there?

Loving the story so far, and watching things develop and gradually get kinkier.

One random thing I've been thinking of, is that with the new house being built... wouldn't it cause too much isolation for the characters? Especially the girls, something about mingling with peers their own age and stuff.

On a different note: Things seem to have been going rather smoothly for our protagonist... So yeah, I'm curious to see how long that lasts. Because I've a feeling it won't.

Either way, I'm looking forward to more. Hope you're doing okay. 		Thanks, Retcar. I had a couple of deaths in my family that were difficult and took me away from writing for a few months.

Good thoughts on the isolation, definitely something I've thought about and will explore later in the series. Not sure when I'll get to the next FP chapter, but there is more on the way for sure.
Anonymous 4 September 2014 So far love the novel. Can't wait for the continuation of the story. Thks Thank you!
Anonymous 2 September 2014 Wow - best story I've read in YEARS. Touches on many of my personal fantasies. And you have a great way of writing that builds story plot and excitement - without ever getting boring.

I don't normally comment but this story just moved me to action. 		My thanks, very glad you are enjoying it!
Tom 2014 August 28 Love that you have taken on some new characters hereﾅAfter the intensity of the inter-familial segment, it will be a very intriguing dynamic to see some interaction, even if it only at a philosophical level, with like-minded people. I'm sure you will handle it well,and I look forward to reading the new chapters... Thank you, Tom! Will see where things go from here. I don't want to get off the main plot priorities too far, but will be interesting for sure.
Anonymous 2014 August 28 Again...well written and very very HOT Thank you :)
Maxxx 2014 August 27 Very good story. I'll have to go back and catch up in the earlier chapters! Thanks, Maxxx, hope you enjoy the earlier chapters!
Dimmy 2014 August 23 This Story is absolutely phenomenal! Thank you so much for writing it and I look forward to reading so many more! Thank you, Dimmy!
Jim 2014 August 18 Great story! Can't help but fantasize along with the story line. Thanks again, Jim!
Jim 2014 August 13 Finally finished the chapters so far and loved every one of them. The progression is so good and everything makes sense. All the eroticism of how each one interacts with the other is amazing. Great job and I'll be reading each additional chapter. Thanks Jim, it has been a fun story to write!
Jim 2014 August 13 Sooooo HOT Thank you!
Jim 2014 August 13 Great story. I can't stop reading each chapter. The progression is excellent, erotically written and very well done. I'm definitely hooked to keep reading. Thanks, Jim! Very glad you are enjoying it, hope to have more chapters ready soon!
Anonymous 2014 August 12 Very well written and keeps me on the edge wondering how things are going to happen. Liking this series a lot. Many thanks!
Anonymous 2014 August 12 Very Hot! Thank you!
Charlie 2014 August 11 Wonderful story so far, and I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation of the story. A great job so far. Keep it up. Thanks. Thanks, Charlie! More to come.
Anonymous 64 2014 July 9 Great stories! How have you been feeling? Hope you are up to sharing some more of your top 3 stories!!????????? Doing much better, thanks! More of FP, Shipwrecked, Run, LG, and others coming soon!
Anonymous 2014 June 26 Get well, quick!! Flower Petals has left us hanging with anticipation Doing better, new FP on the way soon!
Anonymous 2014 June 11 Keep them cumming... I mean coming.. I love this series Thanks! Glad you enjoy!
Anonymous 2014 June 8 One of your best stories wish you would wright more of this and shipwrecked cant wait to see whats next Thank you!
tdaddy 2014 June 6 I'm hoping Dahlia or even Orchid have a baby girl(s) soon. Could be a lot of chapters to follow there. More to come, hope you are enjoying the series! :)
Liz 2014 June 4 I agree with the other commenter, all three of them should end up pregnant eventually. Hi Liz, Thanks for commenting. I hope you are enjoying the series! Definitely more to come for them soon, maybe even some big bellies :)
Anonymous 2014 June 3 Would love to read of Dahlia, Orchid, and Lilly's being impregnated by Brent. Hope that's where you're heading in the future with installments. We'll see :) Brent and Dahlia are certainly trying!
Chris 2014 May 29 I just would like to say, this story, this image of LOVE you have put down on paper has brought me back to the love I enjoyed many years ago. Thank you for bringing them all back to there full memory so that I can feel like I did back then to the fullest. Thanks, Chris! It has been a very pleasurable story to write (in many ways) and I'm glad it resonates with you and brings good memories back for you to recall and enjoy. Just posted chapter 36, hope you continue to enjoy the series!
Anonymous 2014 May 28 Great story so far. Thanks. Keep writing. Thank you! I will. :)
Anonymous 2014 May 28 Wish you'd give up the "dropped subject" sentence structure. Nobody talks like that. Drives others crazy. Sounds affected very quickly. Totally stands out. Makes me want to gag. Sorry if my writing style doesn't match your tastes. Many 'others' seem to be driven 'crazy' by the story and the sex rather than the syntax, based on the overly-positive feedback I've received.
Anonymous 2014 May 26 I really enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for reading!
Randi 2014 May 23 Excellent story! A exceedingly well written erotic tale involving an altogether taboo subject. Loved the flower-based names - like your idea of the happy family. Keep at it... Thank you, Randi! Very happy you like the series!
carpenter 2014 May 22 HOOOORAY , that is all,carry on . :)
Anonymous 2014 May 22 Love the story, it's nice to read something that isn't wham bam thank you mam. My pleasure! Thanks for reading!
Anonymous 2014 May 20 That is awesome ,please make dahlia pregnant & do some lactating ,it would be hot if she breastfeed her family naked and more smell fetish,more hairy armpits if that's ok Thanks for the comments! Brent's definitely working on getting Dahlia pregnant, will it work? Stay tuned! Might work in the armpits. I've never really explored that in writing, might fit in this series or others.
Bob 2014 May 13 I got notice today of the new chapter for "Flower Petals". I couldn't wait to read it! Fantastic! As usual, your writing is great. Thanks so much. Thanks, Bob! Very glad to be back.
Anonymous 2014 May 8 Enjoyed your stories but havent seen any new chapters in a while Real life needed me, unfortunately, but I've published new chapters this week.
Anonymous 2014 April 1 I love this story my question that I can't wait to find out is when Orchid is deflowered is she alone with her father or does Lilly and Her Mom join in to complete the family coming together :) That scene will be coming up soon!
lecajun 2014 March 26 I sure hope your vacation ends soon I'm DT'n for new chapters in all your story's. cum back soon Sorry for the delay, thanks for your patience!
Sandwich 2014 March 26 I'm dying here. You truly have the gift. Hours tick by as your words keep me mesmerized and entirely in the moment. I fear it won't be too long for my next fix! Many thanks! Sorry for the long time between updates, but new chapters are now up!
Anonymous 2014 March 25 Where have you gone? nothing for nearly 3 weeks, I doubt I'm the only one waiting on tender-hooks... Darn real life, always intruding when all I want to do is describe the wetness between Orchid's labia :)
SB 2014 March 24 As much as I am enjoying Petals, I feel there is a bit of a rush with Orchid since you broke through the barrier. Everything involving Lily has been done with such patience and detail. I think you are making the same mistake many people do once a relationship is taken past the point of intimacy and rush through moments that should matter as much as any other in the story. It trivializes the entire act of intimacy that you have been working so hard to achieve. Thanks for the feedback, SB. I don't agree about rushing compared to Lily. Within four chapters or so, Lily was already involved with Brent. Orchid's slow build has been going on for a much longer time, including after the first contact. Time passes without much notice in the story, so there are weeks of the first steps before the next, it just doesn't make sense to narrate every since moment, though I certainly try to give full coverage to the important and meaningful moments.
Anonymous 2014 March 22 Wow, we really need the next chapters of this awesome story. I know you're probably busy with life as well a writing stories. Thank you for you hard work. Thanks for your compliments and patience, 2 new chapters up this week!
Anonymous 2014 March 20 Love the storie keep it going Thank you!
Butch 2014 March 17 Great series . well done and I look forward to the future chapters. I hope to read more from you in the future. Very glad you are enjoying it, many thanks!
Davey 2014 March 17 Good tale which dwells on the dark side of human nature. How many father's have erotic thoughts about their daughters, most doing nothing about it but when the daughter is happily willing, then act I wonder. Not as I am suggesting child abuse, only wondering, and of course using your imagination to take a peep into my own. Thanks for an enjoyable series. Thanks, Davey. I am sure many fathers are sexually attracted to their own daughters. As long as it remains fantasy only, that's ok with me!
tdaddy 2014 March 16 Great story, really one of the best I've read in some time. Normally I get a read or two max out of a story, but I've repeatedly came back to this one many, many times. I don't have your writing talent, but definitely have some ideas for stories and/or chapters if you'd be interested. Keep up the great work. We all look forward to what you'll bring next. Great to hear from you and I appreciate your compliments! I'm always open to ideas you want to share. I can't promise to be able to put it into a story or series, but sometimes I can. Please share if you would like!
Anonymous 2014 March 14 Keep them coming... :) Thanks
Anonymous 2014 March 11 What an amazing story! You have a real talent for writing and I truly appreciate that you have shared it with this community. I have read these first 22 chapters over the past few days and am just enthralled by the emotions playing out here. I cannot wait to enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks so much for the time you have put into this. My thanks! I really love that you are enjoying it!
eddieroq 2014 March 10 Just read Flower Petals, great story,well written, really hot,can't wait for next chapter Thanks for the compliments, very glad you enjoy the series!
Kathy 2014 March 9 I've very much enjoyed your "Flower Petals" story. I've savored each chapter and each one has brought back beautiful memories triggering intense orgasms. I'm now moving on to chapter 5 and I'm wet with anticipation. I love your long descriptive build-ups to the inevitable climax and how you leave us wanting more. The thought of that young girl licking your cum from between her mother's legs sent shivers down my spine. It was a very nice touch. Thanks so much for the compliments! I hope you have continued to enjoy the series after the first few chapters.
Anonymous 2014 March 9 Without a doubt, one of the hottest stories here! It seems that each chapter opens the door for even more possibilities. For example I can see Orchid and her father returning to the park and that Redhead shows up again. This time she sees that she is being watched and invites Orchid to lick her pussy, possibly becoming a good "friend" of the family. Thanks for the compliments! You should consider writing some stories, I like the way you think :)
Anonymous 2014 March 8 A delight to read Flower Petals. Plot and scenes so hot. Big compliment for editing too. The scene with Dahlia on the bench, both clothed, had me going - love the sneaky stuff. Thanks so much for your work. :) My pleasure, thank you!
sue 2014 March 7 Just so wonderful love it so much can't wait for more to come, so sexy cant stop reading them makes me tingle inside how I would love that to have happened to me when I was younger a caring loving family like that, to have Brent Orchid and Lily together would send Brent into another world, thank you so much xxx Hi Sue, thank you so much! The series has been a lot of fun to write, so I'm really happy that you are enjoying it. Definitely more on the way.
Tom 2014 March 7 THROBBING!!! Whew, what a scene!!! I never saw it coming, but WOW that was hot!!! Beautifully crafted to the point that it was even believable! (author's note - refers to Chapter 29) Thanks Tom!
getzhard 2014 March 7 As much as I am enjoying "Shipwrecked", am really engrossed with "Flower Petals" even more! The build-up is coming along just right, and can hardly wait for the next chapter! I look two and three times a day for new chapters, and don't know how you find the time in each day to write new ones! Please keep it going, and also am looking forward to the 2nd year of "My Jewish Princess"! Thanks again, getzhard! I'm loving writing the series for sure! I am starting to get interested in writing the next Year of MJP, so there may be some new chapters coming in the next couple of weeks.
Anonymous 2014 March 7 The best erotic fiction I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I've been reading on ASSTR for 20 years alone.

If you don't write for a living you should. 		Wow, thank you so much! :D
neverhood 2014 March 6 please keep going I check my phone during the day to see what my night is going to be, hoping it involves a new chapter and where the characters are going. I can see a few thing I believe would be good but you beat me to or improve it. One thing I am looking forward to is orchid seeing Brent with lily together and wanting that for herself with a lot of jealousy and giving it to Brent harder to show up lily! I want to believe that lily wanted to have sex with Brent and that is what lily whispered to her mother before they left for home. Thanks for the dedication, neverhood! I won't reveal future plot points, but there are definitely some fun and arousing times in the next few chapters!
Anonymous 2014 March 5 Best story I've ever read on here. :D Thank you!
John 2014 March 5 Eating cream pies....my very favorite thing to do...if the cum came from someone else! (Author's Note - refers to Chapter 4) Whatever turns you on and hurts no one, great!
John 2014 March 5 My wife always wanted me to cum twice in a row.....made it three times once....:) (Author's Note - refers to Chapter 3) :D
John 2014 March 5 very unusual, but enjoyable! (Author's Note - refers to Chapter 2) Great!
John 2014 March 5 very enjoyable, but mysterious~~~ (Author's Note - refers to Chapter 1) Thanks!
Anonymous 2014 March 5 Amazing stuff, it does not get boring or repetitive at all, and the plot twists are very professional. Great work, keep on going! Many thanks! Definitely more planned to be published soon!
Anonymous 2014 March 4 wonderfully written and highly erotic - definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. please continue Thank you! More chapters on the way
timelessfunhuman 2014 March 4 Thank you...I have so enjoyed reading your story... I look forward to the next chapter You're welcome, chapter 24 just published!
Mike The Marine 2014 March 3 Really enjoy your stories. Could you hurry and get Orchid sexually involved with everyone. My dick is getting frustrated waiting . Thanks! Working toward it, gotta let the characters play things out in a natural way, hope you'll keep reading!
Anonymous 2014 March 3 I love this series. You can't write it fast enough :) Tell me about it! Thank you.
Anonymous 2014 March 2 I am loving the story each chapter is better then the last . but i'm also waiting for more adventures from your story Travels with Charlemagne. i hope you will bring us more of both stories soon . Thank you! Another chapter of FP just posted, I'll be getting more Charlemagne again soon, just waiting for the muse to hit me on that one.
southernman2000 2014 March 2 I keep reading........ I read faster than you write. Interesting story line........ I have enjoyed it. I am hopeful that you keep it going up to the 40 chapters and maybe a few extra chapters. I also enjoy the Ship Wrecked story. Look forward to more chapters and maybe more stories Thanks, southerman2000! Very happy to deliver stories you are enjoying!
Anonymous 2014 March 2 Alright, enough is enough! I have been following this story from the start and every few days I check for new chapters like some kind of soap opera fiend, and you keep leaving me hanging every time. I can't take it anymore. Enough suspense already! :) I'm hoping this is a bit sarcastic and you are really enjoying it.

I know everyone wants the 'payoff scene' but I hope what you like about my stories is that nothing is forced. The characters will decide when each next step happens, not me ;)
Garland 2014 March 2 It keeps getting better, Thanks for the note telling me chapter 14 was posted, i didn't expect all the other chapters but was glad they were there. Looking forward to more chapters. Thanks for a great read. You're welcome, Garland! Very happy you are enjoying the series!
mj 2014 March 2 please tell about helping her with her periods. tampons pads and douching after the period. i have never seen this in a story. thanks for your work peace There's a bit in Chapter 23 on this subject, but it's not really a focus of the chapter. Remember, Orchid's been 'mature' for a while and doesn't need a lot of help knowing what to do. Sorry, that doesn't quite fit here, but maybe I'll work that into another story somewhere.
Anonymous 2014 March 1 I've lived inside this wonderful narrative from start to this 22nd chapter and feel a sense of awe and warm tenderness as this life-like story unfolds. Every nuance in this loving texture seeks to overwhelm me as I languish fully hard in its surreal ambience. Everything is so believable, even though concocted, that I yearned to be Brent and experience what he went through, every feeling and lucious moment. Thank you so much for eliciting these powerful feelings in me even though they could never be played out in This real life, nor were they ever. Keep going - can't wait to hear more... Wonderful! I am so glad you are able to feel each moment in a special way. I love hearing that you feel like you are there. :)
Anonymous 2014 March 1 I am totally enjoying your story. Thanks for sharing your art! You're welcome, thank you!
emmett 2014 March 1 one word WOW!!! chase you could do 50 more chapters of flower petals ( which the majority of your fans hope you do) but none will be as cleverly written as chapter 22 where you had to deal with the inevitability of orchid learning of the relationship just cant wait to see how the relationship of this quartet develops :) Thanks emmett!
It was possibly the hardest chapter to write in any of my series so far.

I needed to get 'over the hump' on the single most significant plot point in the whole story, and I really wanted to get it right. I sat on it a day or so and reread it, looking to see if it still felt like the conflict and challenges were real enough.

Obviously, Orchid's reaction lays the basis for what follows, and given that I'd gone 21 chapters (now 22) without yet producing the 'payoff' scene between father and daughter, teasing out the relationship, I tried hard to keep this chapter in the same realm of plausibility as the slow build to date and move it across a really important decision point for both of them without taking shortcuts (well, no more than any romantic incest fab stories do, anyway).
tdawg 2014 March 1 really really really enjoying this series, I don't think I have returned to this site as often just waiting for the next chapter Thanks, tdawg! I get them up as quick as possible :)
Anonymous 2014 March 1 I have absolutely loved this series. Thank you so much for sharing! You're welcome! :)
Anonymous 2014 February 27 amazing story thanks You're welcome, thanks for reading!
Anonymous 2014 February 26 Really good story! Thank you!
Anonymous 2014 February 26 Please hurry with chapter 18. I'm adding chapters as fast as I can :)
Anonymous 2014 February 26 excellent writing

it keeps me wanting to read more

unusually good 		Many thanks!
Jake 2014 February 25 Love the story. I am jerking hard. Can't wait to read more. Hope he fucks the daughter too. Thank you Awesome! :) Hope you enjoy many orgasms from the story! More chapters coming soon!
Jeff 2014 February 25 Hi just finished reading up to chapter 16 of Flower Petals and wow I am so blown away with your writing! I cannot tell you how many times I have shot my load reading about this wonderful combination of Brent, Lily, Orchid and Dahlia! The story is extremely good, plausible, I am sure happens between families,the writing is brilliant, and as for the sexy well that is just mind blowingingly fantastic! I cannot wait for the next chapter. May I ask whether you have a list of people that you let know when a chapter is posted? I unfortunately miss chapters posted by people I like to read and that is so annoying! I am a totally devoted fan of yours and would love to read other stories you have written. I hope to be able to find them. Thanks so much for this story and I hope to read chapter 17 soon! Thanks, Jeff! Very happy you are enjoying the series! I don't have an email list currently for updates, but I do keep a Newest Stories page updated whenever I add a new chapter.

All my stories can be found on my Home page.
Anonymous 2014 February 24 Love the story. I can't wait to read the next chapters! Your writing makes me very hard and excited. I just found the story and read every chapter and was disappointed when I got to 17 and found it was the last one. Waiting to see how it develops with Orchid and Lily, and with her dad as well. Thank you! More chapters on the way soon. Will be some very interesting developments for Orchid!
fun4holefam 2014 February 23 Love the story. I can't wait to read more. I am so hard right now. Thanks! I'll have more chapters in the next few days, keep an eye on the New Stories page on my website.
Larry 2014 February 23 I am loving this great story. So sexy, erotic, loving and arousing. Very arousing actually. Between Shipwrecked and Flower Petals I stay hard a lot. Thanks for sharing. You're welcome! Thank you! :)
Tom 2014 February 22 This is really interesting how you've woven this chapter. From the standpoint of sexual labeling, it is actually a study on a changing dynamic in our society; almost a sociological treatiseﾅWhat turns us on? Right? Wrong? As long as no one is hurt, or appropriate physical boundaries are not crossed, your writing affords a wonderful option for mental playﾅLooking forward to the following chapters! (Author's note - refers to chapter 16) Thanks, Tom. I believe we really do have no choice in who and what we are attracted to. We do have a say in how we act on it, which can make all the difference in the world.
John 2014 February 21 Really loving this story. Good pace, really sexy characters. Can't wait to see how this story pans out. Keep up the good work. Many thanks, John! Chapter 14 just put up.
Garland 2014 February 20 Looking to chapter 14. Interesting read, very believable, conflicted emotions and honest dealing with them makes it. Thanks, Garland! I just put up Chapter 14, very glad you are enjoying the story!
Mike 2014 February 19 Hurry. This is fantastic. So much love expressed and very sexy. Thanks Thanks, Mike, more chapters on the way this week!
Anonymous 2014 February 18 Please hurry!!!!! Going as fast as I can :)
Rick 2014 February 18 Holy cow Chase, I don't know what I'm going to do while I wait for the next chapters of this highly erotic story. I really loved reading about these two people and their girls. You sir are a really good writer and probably should be working on a novel for publication. Thank you so much for all of your stories. Thanks, Rick! Glad you are enjoying it, I hope to have new chapters up this week.
Anonymous 2014 February 18 Great story and good pacing. read all chapters in one sitting. Can't wait for more! Thank you!
Mary 2014 February 18 aw read them all...was hoping for more!!! hurry and write them! Thanks again, Mary! I hope to have more chapters up this week, thanks for reading :)
Anonymous 2014 February 18 Great story and good pacing. read all chapters in one sitting. Can't wait for more! Thank you!
Mary 2014 February 18 wow...thats all i can say Thanks Mary!
Anonymous 2014 February 18 I love your story, I've read all 13 chapters without stopping. I don't really have any ideas, I just wanted you to know that I'm really, really enjoying your story. I can't wait to read how things progress with Orchid and her dad and of course with Lilly and her mom too. It would be fun to chat with you sometime if you don't mind. Keep it coming. Hi, and thank you! I do chat occasionally, though it is a rare thing. What are you interested in chatting about? Very glad you are enjoying the story!
Another Chase 2014 February 18 Mmmm, can't wait....excellent stuff, very well crafted and written, and oooh, yes, mature Dahlia's body, and little wild, capricious, precocious Lily. Can't wait indeed! Thank you! Should have more chapters coming this week!
Anonymous 2014 February 17 great story, characters, and sex. read all 13 chapters non-stop. anxious to read the rest. Many thanks!
Anonymous 2014 February 17 Hi, your a phenomenal writer, I have no idea how you can produce such a large quantity of work and I'ts still really great writing. Please keep going and I really hope I can see more of the Tender Box series soon too, I'm sorry for being a glutton for your work, but its just so good! Thank you so much! I will have more Tender Box this week! No apologies necessary :)
Anonymous 2014 February 17 great story, characters, and sex. read all 13 chapters non-stop. anxious to read the rest. Thank you!
Candi 2014 February 17 Flower Petals is one great, hot story! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!

Jeep up the good work! 		Thank you, Candi! I should have more chapters up this week, hope you enjoy them.
Rick 2014 February 17 Good story, well written> I'll look forward to more Thanks, Rick!
RSJ 2014 February 16 Wow Chase these two chapters were intense chapter 9 really had me worked up, I just about busted without even touching myself, yep the Daddy Daughter thing really gets me. I eagerly await further chapters of this story and some of the others. Thanks, RSJ! Just posted Chapters 11 and 12, hope you like!
Tom 2014 February 16 An exceptional chapter!! Brilliant usage if the language of erotica... (refers to Chapter 9 -- Author) Thanks Tom!
darlene 2014 February 15 OMG! Loved it so far! It has made me so wet that I need to use a toy and cum! Please hurry and write more! Thanks, Darlene! Very glad you like the story. I'll have more chapters over the next few days!
Red 2014 February 13 Hi Chase, I've just read flower petals, what a wonderful story. This maybe a fantasy story to many who read it but to me so much of it is real. I have a female friend who has two young daughters and we both enjoy smelling the girls panties as we have sex. It is just great to find someone who thinks like me and writes about it so well, my friend will be delighted when I show her this story. I look forward to you completing chapter nine. In the meantime I'll read your other stories. Hi Red, thanks for contacting me and sharing your experiences. Sounds like you are a very lucky guy to have a woman who understands, I know that must be a huge turn on to share with her! Thanks for letting her know about my story and I hope she enjoys it. More chapters for FP coming in the next few days.
MickD 2014 February 11 Very nice! I can't wait to read more of this encounter!! Mother and daughter, together,hasalways been a fantasy of mine. Thank you, MickD! I love mother/daughter stories. There is something so sweet and hot about the combination, isn't there?
Anonymous 2014 February 11 Wow!! Can't wait to read the rest so erotic...Thanks!!! Thanks! New chapters will be coming this week.
Bdharp2 2014 February 11 A Joy To Read ! You left me wanting more wanting to know how it all plays out .. the internal struggle of the characters is what truly makes your story great ! thank you for writing it ! Thanks, Bdharp2! The struggle just makes the payoff scenes that much more enjoyable to me, glad you enjoy it!
Anonymous 2014 February 11 I'm hoping Brent gets dahlia pregnant, she and lily end up living with him as well as orchid, orchid after catching him with lily declares she knows he has wanted her for some time and that she wants him, and after lily turns 11 or so he gets her pregnant too. Having lily get pregnant from this first time with Brent would be great in story, but irl a 9 yr old girl getting pregnant, while possible, would have so many problems. Great story so far! I would also say that orchid could get pregnant too, and maybe it turns out that orchid isn't Brent's biologically, that maybe that's part of why Malory tried to kill herself. Thanks for the feedback! Lots of possibilities! I won't reveal what is in store for Brent and Orchid and the others, hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds!
Larry 2014 February 9 Love incest. Family love, sex is such a taboo thing for no reason. To think of it is very arousing. To have these people come together as they are is very interesting. Folks with similar needs, wants and feelings. Thanks for sharing. Thanks, Larry! Definitely enjoying writing FP, hope future chapters are good reads!
Terry 2014 February 8 HELLO, have just discovered your wonderful story here, and wonderful it IS too, so well written and totally believable too, so congratulations on that. More please too, its good that you have made known to others the attraction of your heros wants and needs too, the pull of this and the forbidden" aspects too, lots more mums should belike that mum and daughter. Thanks, Terry, very glad you are enjoying the story. I definitely don't want mothers in reality to do this with their daughters, but the fantasy of the idea is highly arousing.
Lars 2014 February 8 Great story! Best part: "...if it is loving and warm and consensual, as much as a young girl can consent, making love is a very positive thing that everyone should enjoy and understand." There are varied sexual frustrations experienced by married men that result in behavior deemed immoral and illegal by society. It takes a strong will and desire to avoid jail and/or severe censuring by family often resulting in separation and great mental anguish. Anyhow, I hope you continue writing further chapters in this tale as it is both enjoyable and your command of the English language is far superior to many of the writers on this site. Wow, thanks, Lars. And agreed. I have the utmost respect for people who experience strong urges that could be harmful or abusive and don't act on them. I wish more people could let those fantasies just play out as fantasies and stop harming children.

Reality is pretty rough on people who go through scenarios like the ones I create, and I never want anyone to be in those situations. That said, again, I agree that there are a lot of frustrations that are made worse by the failure to acknowledge urges and deal with them in a healthy way.

Thanks for the compliments, I just put up Chapter 3 if you haven't seen it yet, hope you enjoy!
Anonymous 2014 February 8 Wow, great story, please continue the camping saga with the mother and daughter. I'm expecially looking forward to finding out what happens when Lily gets involved. Thank you Chase. Glad you like it! More chapters just posted, the story moves on!
Chef 2014 February 8 Nice. Want to read more. Thanks, more chapters just posted!
Anonymous 2014 February 8 Excellent ! Thank you!
Anonymous 2014 February 8 I had dated this women a few times and we ended up back at her place for sex. The place was a pigsty but I was getting pussy so I did not care. I was on the sofa when she went down on me. Next to me was a pile of dirty clothes to be washed, including some panties. I picked one up and noticed the crouch was stained and started to sniff it while she was sucking my cock. I had leaned my head back smelling the panties while feeling my nuts fill up when she raised her head off my cock and I heard her say loudly "what the fuck you doing? Those are my 13 year old daughters panties". When I heard that I knew I should have been scared but the exact opposite happened and I started to shoot cum harder then I had in awhile. It flew in her face and hit her in her open eye and that really got her cussing at me. I quickly raised my pants and left.

Oh, well a true story. 		Wow, thanks for sharing your experience. Definitely don't mistake what happens in this story or others for reality. Your experience is much more realistic. Poor woman, though, hope you made it up to her and treated better next time!
carpenter 2014 February 7 Great new story line . I am also liking " Shipwrecked " A lot . Fine job on both . Thank you, carpenter! I hope to have another chapter or two of Flower Petals up this weekend.
getzhard 2014 February 7 Flower Petals sounds like another wonderful story just like Shipwrecked! Can hardly wait for the next chapter to be posted! Just like Renpet, you are becoming one of the better authors on this site, and it is a shame that he quit writing! Thanks, getzhard. I couldn't agree more about Renpet, definitely one of the very, very best.
Anonymous 2014 February 7 best i have read Thank you!
emmett 2014 February 7 excellent work again per usual!! Thanks, emmett!