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"The Pennington Case"          10,10,9   (142)
"Young Stuff"                    7,8,7   (143)
"The Price of Freedom"         9,10,10   (163)
"In a Dark Place"             10,10,10   (172)


Excerpt from Celestial Review 172
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"A Dark Place" by Jefferson James (M.Shark@ix.netcom.com).  This is not a
nice story, but it is very well written.  Some men and women are hiding from
enemy soldiers in a dark place, where they can hear the sounds of women being
raped nearby.  Suddenly one of the women finds herself being molested in the
darkness by a man who remains invisible to her.  She cannot do anything to
draw attention or to stop him, because this would mean that she and the
others would be caught by the soldiers.  This is a tension-packed,
interesting story.

Ratings for "A Dark Place"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10
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A Dark Place
by Jefferson James

Institute of Past Life Regression Therapy
Case No.: 82945274F
Subject Name: Sharon Olson
Session No. 1-07/17/96
Transcribed by: Dr. Rebecca Mead, Phd

   We are in a dark place. It's cold. An icy draft is blowing thought the
thin fabric of my dress. There are several of us. ...men, women, and
children. I don't know how many. We are hiding; being discovered would
mean death.
   Through the wall in front of me, I hear a sickening mixture of
screaming and laughter. A young girl is being raped by a group of
soldiers. I hear the thud of her being thrown down, and the ripping of her
clothing. If we are found, the same thing will happen to me and the other
women.
   Tears are trickling down my cheeks. As I sniffle in the darkness, two
strong hands squeeze my shoulders, as if to comfort me. They are rough and
calloused. A man's voice is whispering in my ear.
   "Hush," it says. "Be still."
   His hands release my shoulders. They...  Oh my!  ...my breasts! He is
squeezing my breasts! I am trying to pull his hands away, but he is too
strong.
   "Be still," he whispers, again. "Don't make a sound."
   I can't see his face; it's too dark. I have no idea who this man is. He
is fondling my breasts! His hands are cupping and molding them. Ow! My
nipples are stiff from the cold, and they are being pinched and squeezed.
Who is this man? Why is he doing this to me?
   Oh my God! His left hand is sliding down my front. He's feeling... 
He's touching me.  ...between my legs!  ...rubbing me through the front of
my dress. Oh God, I want to scream, but I don't dare. I am afraid to even
move; the soldiers might hear.
   The young girl has stopped screaming. She is crying now. I can clearly
hear her loud, broken sobs, and the grunting of the soldier raping her. I
can hear their naked bodies slapping together. 
   The man has let go of me. I am trying to move a way, but he is pressing
me against the wall. I feel a draft on the back of my knees. Oh God! He is
lifting the back of my dress. I can't believe this is happening! I have
never felt so helpless in my life.
   I'm trying to pull my dress down. He let go! He has grabbed my left
wrist. Ow! My arm is being twisted up behind my back. I am using my right
hand to cover my own mouth, muffling my whimpering. It hurts!
   Once again, I can feel a cold breeze on my knees. My dress is being
lifted, again!  Now I can feel a draft on my goose-pimpled thighs, and now
on my buttocks. As tight as I can, I clamp my legs together. I'm
shivering. Not only from the cold, but with fear. How far is he going to
go? When is this humiliating intrusion going to end?
   The young girl is letting a out a long, hoarse, wailing cry of anguish;
the soldier is climaxing. His gutteral groans of pleasure - as he
concludes is assault on her - fill the air. For a moment, it is quieter.
The only sound being that of the girl's gentle weeping. Then, the grunting
and slapping noises start again; a second soldier has taken the place of
the first.
   The man molesting me is chuckling softly in my ear. He is telling me to
relax. ...to open my legs. One of his hands is still twisting my arm, and
holding up my dress. The other, is groping my buttocks. His fingers are
pushing my undercloths aside, moving around to my front. Oh my God!
They're sliding through my pubic hair. He's stroking my labia and
clitoris. His calloused fingers feel even rougher against the tender flesh
of my vulva. One of his fingers is trying to worm its way into my vagina.
   I wish I could scream. I wish I could do anything. I would try fighting
him again, but he would only twist my arm further. He obviously doesn't
care how much he hurts me. He doesn't care anything about me. He just
wants to use me the way the soldiers are using that poor girl.
   He has given up trying to get a finger into my vagina. He's pulling my
hips back toward him. In my ear, I hear his whispering voice telling me to
spread my legs and bend over.
   I would rather die. But, I can't endanger the lives of the others. If
he twists my arm further, it'll break. Oh God, I don't know what to do!
   Behind my back, I can feel him fumbling with the front of his pants.
Now, there is no doubt in my mind as to his intentions. He intends on
raping me!
   I am thankful for the darkness; it is preserving the tiniest part of my
dignity. Even if the others could see, I doubt it would make any
difference to him. Taking advantage of me under these circumstances proves
he is no better than the soldiers.
   I feel sick to my stomach. His stiff, naked penis is pressing in
between my exposed buttocks. His fingers have pulled away my under things.
The spongy head of his penis is pushing painfully against my anus. He is
whispering to me, again.
   "Spread your legs," He says. "Spread them or I'll shove it up your bottom."
   Oh, dear, God! I have no choice. There is no way I could stand that
kind of pain without screaming. I have to comply. For the sake of the
others, I have to submit to this horrible man's wishes.
   Through the wall, I hear more voices than before. There are more
soldiers, and they have brought another girl with them. She is crying,
asking for her mother. From the sound of her voice, she is even younger
than the first girl. A soldier tells her that her mother and sister are
busy 'making babies' and he is going to show her how it is done. The
soldiers are laughing. I feel like they are laughing at me, too.
   I have opened my legs, and I am bending forward, literally offering my
attacker what he wants. I feel awful. I have never felt such dread and
self loathing. I feel like I am as despicable as he is. A better woman
would have endured the pain rather then spread her legs willingly. I hate
myself for not being stronger. All I can do is cry, feeling sorry for
myself.
   He is lowering his penis from my anus, slipping it in between my flared
labia. Its tip is wet and slippery. Although my vagina is dry, it
grudgingly eases open, accepting him. He presses into me further,
whispering in my ear, telling me what a whore I am. The shame I feel is
unbearable. My entire face is wet with my tears.
   The younger girl is now screaming. A third soldier is now raping the
older girl. We are all three experiencing our own private hell. Each of us
is having her vagina filled and refilled with the penis of some terrible,
hated man. The difference is they can see their attackers and I can not. I
don't know which is worse. But, as awful and demeaning as it is, at least
I will only have to endure one rape. Those poor girls, and any others the
soldiers have captured, will be raped repeatedly for the next few days.
Many of them will be maimed or mutilated for sport. And, many of them will
die, either at the hands of their rapists or by their own hand.
   Another soldier is climaxing. Several others are arguing over who is
next. In the distance, I can hear the sounds of yet another rape.
   My own rape is continuing at a snail's pace. The time it takes for him
to push his penis into my vagina is torturously long. And then, he
withdraws it just as slowly. Each stroke takes what seems to be an
eternity. And, with each agonizingly slow stroke, he continues to whisper
obcenities in my ear.
   His breath is hot and ragged. He is gripping my waist so tightly it
hurts. His penis has stopped moving altogether, its full length pressed
deep inside me. It's throbbing! His warm semen is flooding my vagina! I
feel so humiliated. I can't stop crying; I am filled with his sperm, and
full of self pity.
   He is moving again. ...out, in, out, in, out. He has withdrawn his
penis entirely. He's gone. He's moved away, leaving me alone and degraded
in this dark place.

The End