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Hello,
Please forgive the mixup. This is the correct version of the story,
Reversal of Fortune. Again ,sorry for the mixup.Please post this
story and archive when you have time.Thanks!!
James Green
Story: "Reversal of Fortune",FD,MC (c) 1997
Author: James Green
"Reversal of Fortune"
Success has it`s price.John`s successful law practice and Pat`s
successful publishing business had given them both little time for
children or anything else that would pull their attention away from
the accumulation of the symbols of success.The affluent neighborhood,
the jag, the benz, stocks,bonds and a large savings acct. had been
all they ever wanted.Now they were going for the next "symbol" of
success, a maid. Everyone knows successful people don`t clean their
own homes, or in their case, the condo.They decided and placed their
ad. It wasn`t long before they had many applicants.Then the tedious
job of the interviews followed. It was after a week of this that they
settled on Maria.She was in her early 30`s, good looking, well
mannered, poised and when she spoke,even though Hispanic, not a lick
of accent was detected.Her references were checked and she passed
with flying colors.She got the job.Everything went on great for 5
months and then Maria asked to speak to my wife and I.We immediately
thought she
would hit us up for a raise or maybe she was going to quit.We agreed
to a sit-down talk in the living room right after dinner.
'Mr. and Mrs.Larsen I asked for this talk to find out how you liked
my work so far.Is it satisfactory?'
'Yes, Maria.My wife and I are very happy with your work around here.
We thought maybe you were going to quit or something.A good maid is
very hard to find these days. I know we`re not around much but maybe
this is a good time to find out how you like it here.How do you like
working for us,Maria? Any problems we should know of?'
'Working here has been quite an eyeopener for me. I see first hand
how successful people live. You two have it all.'
'Well, Maria, we worked very hard for all this.Maybe one day, if you
work hard and save your money, you`ll be able to afford some nice
things also.'
'I think working hard for what you want is o`kay but I`ve decided
that this is the kind of life I want and I don`t think I`m going to
have to work as hard as you two did to get it.'
'Well..we don`t know much about that but we do know that nice things
cost money.' While I was talking, Maria pulled a golden locket on a
fine gold chain out from inside her blouse.
'Well, as you know I don`t have a lot of money and fine things like
you have but I do have this. It was given to me a long time ago and
it`s priceless to me.I never go anywhere without.It`s just so
beautiful to look at and it feels so cool against my skin. I don`t
think I`ve ever shown it to you before.Here, take a look at it.Isn`t
it beautiful?' Maria moved the locket on the chain into the light so
that we could get a better look at it.
'It`s very lovely, Maria.Don`t you think so, Pat?'
'Yes..yes.It`s lovely,Maria'
'You haven`t seen anything yet. It has a very interesting design on
the back. Can you see it? You have to really look closely to make it
out.' Maria began slowly swinging the locket back and forth, from Pat
to me, so that we both might see the design.It was hard to make it
out clearly with the light reflecting off the golden surface but we
kept looking anyway to please Maria. I don`t know how long we had
been watching the locket.It seemed like time had stopped.I can`t
explain it but it seemed that my eyes just naturally wanted to follow
the movement of the locket now.
'I see you both are having trouble seeing the design because of the
light reflecting into your eyes.Any discomfort will soon pass I`m
sure and the design will become clear. Just look closely...closely....
.' My eyes began to feel out of focus and heavy. I wanted to look
away from the locket but for some reason I continued to watch.
'You can both see the design now,can`t you? Tell me.' I found myself
anwering,"yes," without thinking. I heard my wife speaking too but it
sounded far away, even though she was sitting right next to me.
'Very good.You will be able to see even more of this beautiful
design if you just relax and keep your eyes on the locket. That`s
right,relax and watch the locket and you will see even more of the
design. You both want to see it now.Nothing else matters except
looking at the locket and the design.Nothing matters...nothing
matters...nothing...nothing.. nothing but the locket and my voice....
nothing but the locket and my voice now. Watch and listen....watch
and listen...and notice how soothing my voice sounds to you....how
ssooothing and rreeelaaxing my voice sounds to you as you watch the
locket...moving back and forth...back and forth....back and forth on
it`s slow journey....back and forth....." I seemed to be frozen in
time and space. I couldn`t move nor stop watching the locket`s back
and forth movements.I felt compelled to watch it`s movement. I don`t
know why but I found Maria`s voice just as fascinating as the locket.
I wanted to listen to her voice. It seemed I had no choice.
'You both feel so relaxed watching my locket and listening to my
voice that nothing matters to you now. Just watching and listening...
watching and listening to me...to me and relaxing...just relaxing and
feeling all your cares drifting away now....drifting....drifting...
away...away...far...far...away. You are feeling so calm now....so
peaceful....so relaxed....that you feel your minds slowing down....
slowing down....till you are thinking of nothing now....no thoughts...
.no thinking....all that fills your awareness is the golden locket
and my voice....nothing else enters your awareness...nothing....
nothing.....nothing.......' I had no thoughts or cares now.I seemed
to be drifting in a void. I couldn`t snap out of it. I couldn`t find
the strenght.
'You both now are ssooo sleepy...ssooo weary...ssooo tired...that
you will allow your eyes to close but you will still see the image of
my beautiful locket and still hear my voice.Your eyes are just too
heavy to keep open now and they must close....heavy....must close...
must close...close...' I had no idea if my eyes closed now, but
somehow I knew. I knew they had.
'You both hear my voice and it soothes you so much as you listen to
it.It soooothes you so much as you listen to my voice and you just
relax....enjoying the ssooothing effect my voice has on you and you
just relax.....relax and surrrender....all efforts of resistance gone.
...no resistance....none now ...just a feeling of deep....deeep....
deeeep surrender.Letting go .....letting go and falling....falling ...
.deeper....deeeper ...down .....down ...into a deep...deeep... sleep..
...sleeep.....sleeeeeep.....' My consciousness was fading.
Disappearing into nothingness.
'You love the golden locket.You love my voice.You love this
relaxation and you love me.You love me and want to please me sssooo
much.You want to please me sssooo much now that you will do all I ask
of you.You will do all I ask of you now. You know that there is no
need to resist me.....no need to resist me because you love the way
I`m making you feel right now.That`s all that matters to you...to
continue to enjoy the feeeling of total relaxation and surrender.
Total surrender and you love this feeeling of surrendering ....
completely.....totally .....to me.Surrender to me and relax into
total and complete surrender and submission...to me.Submit to me and
my desires. My will is your will now.My will is your will now and you
love my control of you.You want me to control you completely.It
feels ssooo good.You want to obey me. You want to obey Maria.Maria.
You want to obey Maria.You know this is true....it`s true. Tell me
now who you want to obey. Tell me.'
'....Maria...Maria...'
'Good.Now you will submit further to my will and go deeper.....
deeeper.....deeeeeper ....down.....down....into deeper submission to
me.....deeeeper now......deeeeeper .....go deeeeper now.....into
further submission to my will.You are deeep now....very...very deeep.
There is something I want you both to do for me. You want to do all I
ask.You want to....so You obey me completely.Now I want you both to
go
deeeper and listen...deeeeper into relaxation and submit further to
my will. Submit and obey. Listen and obey.Obey me....obey me...obey...
...obey........'
The news of the car accident had shocked the neighborhood to it`s
very roots.The deaths of this very young and energetic couple just
didn`t seem right.It seemed such a waste of life.No one will ever
know what caused their car to accelerate and ram into a tree, killing
them on impact.The Larsens would be solely missed.
The following week news that the Larsens had left everything to
their maid caught everyone off guard.She must have been loved dearly
by the Larsens,the neighbors concluded, to leave everything to her
after only working for them for 6 months.She got the condo,the jag,
the Benz,stocks and bonds and of course, the $250,000 in savings.
Maria was accepted as "somebody" by the neighborhood, and why not.She
had all the things that successful people had,and all in just 6
months work.On visiting her and asking if she needed any help in
settling in her new surroundings,the neighbor was greeted by a very
happy woman who seemed to have settled
in alright by herself.Maria did have one request though.
'Now that you mention it,there is somethting I will need to make my
settling in complete.I will need a maid to take care of this very
large condo.Could you refer me to an agency that provides good
workers. I hear that good help is so hard to find these days.' The
image left with the neighbor as she was leaving was a woman smiling,
swinging a golden locket on a fine gold chain,back and forth...back
and forth.....
comments welcomed.
J.W.G.
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