Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer I X-Moderator-Review: 6: elements of nonconsensuality, but very promising Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf mild dom nc Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Fri, 2 Apr 1993 02:32:26 GMT Archive-name: controljen1 Story follows: This is nonconsensual in nature, no violence. You may respond according to your tastes. NOTE: This story, Controlling Jennifer I, is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, please make sure that you include this header. (so they know who wrote it.) Controlling Jennifer Jennifer was a frosh at Jefferson College, and so far she liked it a lot. As she walked down toward the gym, she smiled to herself at the California weather. It was nothing like the weather in Alaska. Here it was, the middle of february, and she could walk around in shorts without worrying about freezing to death. Others complained that it was cold and told her she was a nut for wearing shorts. Obviously they didn't come from Alaska like she did. To her, the crisp chill in the air was more refreshing than it was chilling, and she knew that after running around the track a few times, she would actually be hot. Jennifer liked to run; it was a good way to keep in shape, and it was a good way to daydream while still being productive. She was a good student and very responsible, and this was her way to escape the constant academic pressures she put upon herself. She could jog around the track a few times, letting her body do the work while her mind wandered onto other things. Others wouldn't believe her, but running relaxed her. (Her roommate thought she was crazy, but then again, Jenny's roommate was a plump girl who looked like she had never exercised a day in her life.) Jenny was wearing a tank top and a loose fitting pair of shorts. Underneath the shorts, she wore a pair of those tight-fitting bike pants, made of the stretchy black material. This was mostly to keep her warm, and to keep her decent. Plus, whenever she ran in panties, they got all drenched in her sweat and basically became too disgusting to wear. Similarly, under her tanktop, Jenny wore a tightfitting elastic top over her breasts. The reason for this was that she hated the feeling of running in the discomfort of a bra, and if she wore nothing, she bounced, and that became painful after awhile. Jenny was happy with her body, unlike most women, and this happiness gave her a very visible confidence. This confidence almost did more to make her attractive than her actual physical appearance. Jenny had dark hair and tan skin, and a nice smile. When she had first arrived on campus, men had swarmed around her, mostly frat guys checking out the new women, but Jenny had made it through without acquiring any boyfriends. She was not one that had to have a boyfriend; on the whole, she preferred not to, as they took up a lot of time and never seemed to be much worth it. She didn't need the time-drain. Yes, Jenny would only settle for a boyfriend that she actually loved, and the frat guys soon gave up on her, disgusted, and moved to other prey. As Jenny bounded down the steps toward the gym, taking them two at a time, she enjoyed the beauty of Jefferson College campus. It seemed like a park more than a campus, and she walked under the trees towards the gym. Squirrels chirped at her from their trees, and she let her eyes wander to them, watching them hop from tree limb to tree limb. "Hi, Jenny." a voice said, startling her out of her reverie. She looked to see a man standing beside her. He looked to be in his twenties, possibly a senior, with short dark hair and dark eyes. Jenny thought he looked italian. She couldn't remember his name offhand, and decided he was probably some guy from a fraternity that she had met and forgotten. Still, he was fairly attractive, so Jenny flashed her most charming smile. After all, she might as well keep her options open. "Hi!" she said. "Have we met before? We must have, but I'm afraid I don't remember...." She shrugged and grinned. "No, we haven't really been formally introduced. You can call me Mark." "Hi, Mark. Nice to meet you." "Yes....yes. Nice to meet you, too, Jenny." Mark's eyes shifted, and he smiled slowly. "I've been wanting to talk to you, Jenny...like I said, we haven't been introduced, but I've seen you from afar, and well, let's say I'd like to get to know you better." Jenny's eyebrow lifted. He was very forward, and she felt a faint discomfort. She discarded this quickly, telling herself she was just being paranoid. She had dealt with forward guys before; this one was no different. "I was just on my way to the track to run a few laps...want to walk with me? We can talk on the way." Mark's eyes shifted. "Actually, I was hoping we could sit down. Please? It'll only take a second, and then you can be on your way. Huh?" Jenny squinted at him. "You sound like you have something very specific to tell me." she accused. Mark grinned, and Jenny thought his grin was very cute...kind of a Tom Cruise smirk. "Actually, I do." he admitted. "Wanna sit down?" "Okay." she said. "I suppose I can take a few minutes." Mark grinned again, and walked over to a picnic table. He sat down, and she plopped down opposite from him. "Ok." she said, propping herself on her elbows and looking him straight in the eye. "What do you want to tell me?" Again the grin. It's almost like he's embarassed to say it, Jenny thought. "I've been watching you, Jenny...from afar. I suppose you could say I was admiring you. You're very pretty, Jenny." She smiled, but the compliment disturbed her. She didn't particularly like being 'watched from afar' by someone she didn't know, and she was wondering where all this was leading. "I think you're just what I'm looking for." Jenny leaned back, her eyes narrowing. "You're very forward." she remarked, somewhat coldly. "I can afford to be." Mark was not the least bit fazed by her coldness. "You see, Jenny...let me explain something to you. I'm new here too, and I've been looking for a woman. Not a girlfriend; I don't care about that just now. I've been looking for a woman who'll do whatever I say." He grinned, and this time his grin seemed somewhat frightening...it was the confidence behind it. "I suppose you could say I've been looking for a slave." That was all Jenny needed to hear. "Fuck off." she intoned, and started to get up. "Stop." said Mark. And suddenly, Jenny was frozen. She couldn't move. "Sit back down." And Jenny did. Mark looked regretful. "I didn't want to have to do it this way." he sighed. Jenny could only sit there, motionless. Her mind raced. Why can't I move? What did he do? Her face would have shown her fear, but her face too was frozen. "You see, Jenny...I have the power to control you, whether you like it or not. I guess after years of wishing I had the power, I wished so hard that I actually got it. But it's funner if I don't use it. It's better." He folded his hands and looked like a lawyer making a contract. "Here's the deal, Jenny. You do what I say, without me using my power, and it will be easier for you. You refuse, and I'll be forced to use my power, and it will be harder on you. I won't do anything all that bad, truly; I won't hurt you or anything. I don't get off on that. I get off on the controlling. But it will be better for us both if you do it without the power." He watched her as she struggled against his control. "Tell you what. I'll let you free from my control, and you tell me what you want to do. Okay?" He concentrated. "You're free." he said. Jenny suddenly regained control of her muscles, and she bolted. She was maybe ten feet away when he shouted "Stop!" And she froze. Unable to stop her momentum, she tripped and laid frozen on the ground. As she laid there, completely immobile, she heard his footsteps crunching the leaves, walking towards her. "I can see how it's going to be today." she heard him say sadly. "I hope you will learn in time. As for now, here is your punishment. In twenty seconds, you will be able to move again. From that time until you get back to your room, you will feel very sexually attracted to every third guy you see. Once you have helped them reach orgasm, you will once again regain complete control, and then you will know what you have done." He paused. "I'm sorry it had to be this way, Jenny." he said sadly, and then she heard him walk off. Jenny laid in the grass for that twenty seconds. All she could do was breath and blink her eyes and wonder what the hell was happening to her. After the twenty seconds was up, exactly as he had said, she regained movement. "Oh, god." she said. "What in the world is happening? Is this really happening to me?" Jenny tried to deny what she had just experienced, but she could not. It was a cold, sterile memory; it was all real. She couldn't afford to disregard the power he weilded over her. "I need to get to my room." Jenny thought, and then she could think no more, for she lifted her head. She saw a guy throwing a frisbee to his dog. She saw an old man hobbling along the path. And then she saw a guy, sitting on a bench under a tree, writing in a notebook. "Oh, god." she said. He was small, smaller than her. He had thick glasses, and his hair was in a disarray that she found very erotic. "Oh, wow." she said, and she felt the wetness spreading between her legs. He had something about him; maybe it was his size, maybe the way he slowly scribbled in the notebook. Maybe the way he lightly nibbled on his bottom lip. All Jenny knew was that he was the most gorgeous thing she had ever laid eyes on. And she had to have him. Her body felt empty; she had to have him inside her or she wouldn't be able to survive. She was cold without him. It was a quick walk over to him, and the boy didn't notice her until she stood right over him, blocking his light. He squinted up at her through his glasses. "Yeah?" he asked. "Hi." she said, and she slid next to him, pushing her body delightfully close to his side. With every touch of him, she felt a rush go through her stomach and settle between her legs. "Can I help you?" he inquired. Jenny wanted to scream: fuck me! fuck me! She fought for control over her desires. "What are you doing?" she gasped. "Writing." he said. "Why?" "Oh, wow." she said, and all control left her. She thrust her body into his side, running her tongue into his ear, running her hand onto the growing lump at his crotch. She cursed herself for wearing the lycra top under her blouse; she wanted to feel her breasts touching his shirt. With one hand she peeled up her top, with the other she frantically tried to undo his pants. She pressed her lips to the boys, and plunged her tongue into his hot mouth. He resisted for a moment, but that quickly faded as her hand slipped into his pants and touched his hard penis. She moved over, so that she was sitting over his legs; her breasts were free, and she mashed them against his body. And then she felt it. The boy moaned, tensed, and his penis started pumping hot jism onto her hand. She froze. "Oh, god, what the hell am I doing!" She pushed back, and fell backwards off the boys lap into the dirt. Her eyes were wide with shock, and the boy stared at her with confusion shrouded in ecstacy. Jenny quickly scrambled to her feet and sprinted away as fast as she could go, her face hot and tears of shame dripping from her eyes. She ran until she was out of the sight of the boy, and then she paused to catch her breath. Tears ran down her face. How could I do that? she thought to herself. What came over me? She felt dirty, disgusting. Slutty. When she looked up and around, she noticed the guy with the frisbee had stopped tossing it to his dog and was staring at her. She wondered why for a moment, and then remembered she hadn't pulled down her blouse again, and her breasts were visible. She quickly pulled her blouse and the lycra down (too quickly, as she pinched her nipple between the two fabrics) and turned away from the frisbee guy, her cheeks burning again. She started a purposeful walk. Then she froze. "Oh, geez...that's one male I just saw. He said it would be the third. I gotta stop looking at people...I gotta get to my room." She was hardly aware she was talking to herself, and she clapped her hands over her eyes. "How can I get back if I can't see?" she thought. It would be nearly impossible to get back blind, and even worse, it would be embarassing. "Stare at the ground, Jenny. Look where you're stepping..that's all you can do. Don't look up no matter what." Jenny started to walk, staring down at the ground and striding ahead purposefully. She focused completely on the ground, and wished that she had remembered the curse Mark had laid upon her before she had looked at the guy with the frisbee. She could make one mistake. It was the second one that would start her off again. Jenny walked. She came to concrete, and carefully studied the cracks as she walked. She fought down her natural desire to stare at everyone she passed, studiously avoiding even looking at their feet. She concentrated so hard that her head hurt. "Hi, Jenny!" said a male voice, and Jenny quickly stopped herself before she looked up. Who was it? James? Rob? Whoever it was, she was fairly sure she didn't want to sleep with him. "Hi." she mumbled, and steadfastly marched past the owner of the voice. "Thank god I'm getting near the dorm." Jenny muttered to herself after awhile. It had seemed like it was taking forever, and Jenny had been in constant fear that she would forget herself and look up. She sighed in relief as the realization that she would probably make it sifted into her consciousness. And then she ran into someone. As they collided, Jenny let her eyes wander up to see the face of a fat middle-aged man. He had been reading a book, and hadn't been watching where he was going. "Oh! I'm sorry!" he exclaimed in a nasal voice. Jenny's eyes filled with distress, and she quickly dropped her gaze and rushed past the man. "Damn!" she swore, her only consolation being that she was almost to her dorm. Finally, she reached the door. Breathing heavily, Jennifer dug into her pocket and fished out her key. It was difficult to insert the key without looking, but she managed it. "God, they must think I'm weird." she thought, thinking how she must look to the people in the lobby as she walked through the door with her gaze fixed on the ground. Jenny was going up the steps to the third floor, when a realization hit her. The dorm was coed, and she was going to have to walk down the men's hall in order to get to her room. "Oh, god..." she moaned under her breath. She hesitated by the door, and then entered the hall. Take it fast, she thought. That's the key. She rushed down the hall. And found herself looking into Jacob's eyes. He was lying on the floor in the hall. "Hi, Jenny!" he said, looking up from his book and waving. "Sorry, am I in your way?" "Oh, wow." said Jenny. She had never realized before how sexy Jacob was. He was on the wrestling team, and his muscles seemed to bulge through his tank top. Jacob had briefly expressed an interest in her the first week, but he had accepted her disinterest, and they had become "just" friends. How could I have rejected him? Jenny screamed to herself. He's GORGEOUS! "You all right, Jen?" asked Jacob. Jenny realized she had been staring at him. She didn't care. "Ooh, Jacob...ooh..." she sat down on him, straddling him with her legs, his firm stomach muscles supporting her behind. She was heavily juicing up, she could feel it. She wanted Jacob inside her. Jake's expression was one of shock, and he dropped his book just before Jenny mashed her lips against his face. "Woah!" he blurted, as Jenny dotted his face with kisses. She slid backwards, and could feel his hard penis against her butt. She moved, back and forth, kneading it, pressing it against her wet cunt. "Jacob...Jacob, I want you inside me...now..." "Holy shit!" said Jacob, looking nervously up and down the hall. "Let's move into my room, ok? Let's not do this out in the hallway." Jenny heard him, but didn't care. What did it matter WHERE they did it? All that mattered was that he make love to her. She started fumbling with her clothes, raining kisses on his face and neck. Jacob picked her up in his arms, and carried her into his room. His roommate Kurt was there. Kurt looked up from his computer, surprised. "Out, man! I need some privacy!" Jacob said. Jennifer felt herself dropped on the bed, and she writhed in agonizing lust against the cool sheets. She slipped her fingers under her lycra top and in one motion ripped it over her head. Her breasts popped free and bounced lightly on her chest, jiggling like jello. Jacob stared at her dark nipples for a moment, then twisted his head to glare at Kurt, who also happened to be staring in amazement at Jennifer's breasts. "Out, damn you! Can't you see I need some privacy?" said Jake. Kurt rushed from the room, stealing a backwards glance at Jennifers nude upper torso. Jacob quickly closed the door, and came over to Jennifer. She threw her arms around her, tearing at his shorts. "Please, Jacob....I want your cock...oh, I want it so bad..." Jacob stripped off his shorts, and let his penis bounce free. It hadn't bounced twice when Jennifer took it in her hands, running her fingers over it, feeling the silk spider web feel of it against her palm. "ooh!" she moaned, and Jacob helped her take off her shorts. His eyes widened as he saw there was no need for foreplay...Jennifer was dripping wet, and the crotch of her lycra shorts was soaked. Jennifer got on her knees, and Jacob saw she was guiding her vagina towards his hardened penis. "This is too good to be true..." he whispered. Then he spoke louder. "Wait...Jenny...we don't want any kids...let me get a condom..." Ignoring Jenny's very determined protests, Jacob dug a condom out of his desk and slipped it on. Then he tried to ease slowly into Jenny, but she was having none of that. With a heave, she impaled herself onto Jake's cock, and he found himself thrusting deep within her. Jenny was almost hyperactive with sexual lust, and Jacob, who normally prided himself on his sexual endurance, found himself about to come very quickly. He tried to hold it back, but Jennifer pounded against him and finally it came spurting forth, shooting through him, a tremendous orgasm. He gasped, and rode her for all he was worth. And Jenny came back to herself. "Oh, wow!" she thought. She was back in her right mind, but she was also very close to her own orgasm. She couldn't stop. Just as Jacob was finishing up his orgasm, hers started, and she gasped with its intensity. Her body was wracked with pleasure, and when Jacob pulled out, her body continued to buckle with the strength of her pleasure. It faded slowly, and she savored every piece of it. "Wow." she said as she laid back on the bed. "You used a condom, right, Jake?" She looked at him with apprehension. "Uh-huh." he said, and she watched him peel it off. "Wow, Jen...I don't know what came over you just then...you were a wild woman! You wanted sex like a starving man wants food! What's up?" "Oh, Jake." she said, turning away. "I think I've been...hypnotized." "Hypnotized?" he stared at her. "Yeah. Hypnotized so that I go sex crazy over every third guy I see. I was trying so hard not to see anyone, and you were there..." she sighed. "You were the third guy. At least you were a friend. It could have been worse." Jake sat on the side of the bed, looking at her with concern. "Oh, man...I'm sorry, Jenn...I didn't know..." "I know." she said, and smiled at him. "Don't worry about it, Jake. You didn't take advantage of me; I wanted to have sex with you so bad, I wouldn't have taken no for an answer. You really didn't have a choice. And I enjoyed it, all of it, even after I came out of the hypnosis." Her eyes became sad. "I'm just glad it was you. It could've been a stranger. God, it could've been a two year old. What would I have done?" "Hey, are you all right, Jenn? Hey, who hypnotized you, anyhow?" Jennifer thought of telling him about Mark, she really wanted to, but she couldn't. It wasn't his problem. "I'm fine. Look, Jake, I know this sounds weird, but could you put a blanket on my head and lead me back to my room?" "Okay, that sounds like a good idea." said Jacob. He still looked skeptical, however, and Jenny didn't thing she had fooled him. He knew she was hiding something. "Just remember, if you need someone..ya know, to talk to? I'm always here." "Thanks, Jake." said Jennifer, and offered him another smile, this one forced, and Jake seemed to know it. They put their clothes back on in silence, and afterwards, Jake put a blanket over Jenny's head and lead her back to her room. Jennifer's roommate wasn't home, and Jennifer thanked Jacob and said bye to him. She closed and locked the door, then collapsed on the bed and watched the wall as the sun faded away and the grayness of night took over. What am I going to do? she thought, but could find no answer. END of chapter 1 All comments, critiques, pointing out of mistakes to dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu. This story was written, directed and produced by Daniel Reinker. Please note that all similarities to real life situations are completely coincedental. Also note that Occidental college does not directly support this story, but supports my freedom to write and post it. -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer II X-Moderator-Review: 8: excellent psychological drama Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf heavy dom nc series Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Fri, 2 Apr 1993 17:13:04 GMT Archive-name: controljen2 Story follows: Warning! This story contains sexual activity of the nonconsensual sort, so if you don't like it, press 'n'! Also, this story contains little violence, so if you want to read s&m, press 'n'! Hello folks! This is the second chapter in the Controlling Jennifer series. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while you can go ahead and distribute it, please keep this header on it so everyone knows I wrote it. Thanks! Enjoy. CONTROLLING JENNIFER II: LESSONS IN OBEDIENCE The phone rang, and Jennifer jumped. Darlene, her roommate, gave her an annoyed look and picked up the phone. "Hello? Yeah, this is Darlene. Huh? Oh, sure...I have it right here." Flashing Jennifer another annoyed look, she picked up her math assignment sheet and started to read an assignment from it. Jenny hugged her pillow close to her, listening to the phone conversation and trying to take refuge in its relative normalcy. It wasn't him. Thank god it wasn't him. She pressed her cheek into the soft fabric of the pillow, and held it tightly. Her eyes stared to the side, her mind fighting once again to deny what had happened to her before. It seemed like a dream now, but Jennifer knew it had not been a dream. She could not wake up from this nightmare. She heard the click as Darlene hung up, and heard her roommate stand. She didn't look, but she knew the expression that was on Darlene's face; it was Darlene's exasperation look, with her eyebrows jagged and her lips pursed together tightly. Jennifer had been seeing Darlene's exasperation look quite a bit lately. "You want to tell me what the hell is going on, Jennifer?" Darlene snapped. "I can see being startled by the phone, once, maybe twice, but EVERY FUCKING TIME? What's gotten into you? You're so jumpy lately... and you won't tell me why! What's wrong, Jennifer?" Jennifer was silent for a moment. Once again, she was tempted to just blurt out the whole story, about Mark, about his powers, what he had done to her. And once again, she stopped herself. For one, she didn't want to draw anyone into this beside herself. And for another...who would believe her? Jenny barely believed it herself. "Nothing's wrong." she mumbled. "What?!? The hell, nothing's wrong! You've completely weirded out on me, Jen! You stay in the room all day, moping around, staring into space. You won't answer the phone anymore, and it seems to scare you to death whenever it rings...you won't talk to anyone, you don't go out anymore...you can't tell me nothings wrong. Give me some credit, Jennifer!" Jennifer spoke, squeezing the pillow even tighter. "You couldn't help anyway." Darlene's voice softened, and she spoke with concern now. "Won't you let me try, Jenny? I'm worried about you! I know somethings wrong...but you won't tell me. C'mon...talk to me. Maybe I'll surprise you." Darlene's voice hesitated, waiting, but Jennifer stayed silent. Finally, she heard Darlene sigh and move back to her desk. The scraping of Darlene's pencil resumed. Jennifer dropped her pillow and slipped on her slippers to walk to the bathroom. She seemed to do this a lot now, telling herself that she was leaving to give Darlene a break from her constant moping. But it was more to give herself a place to think. She would close herself in one of the stalls, and sit on the seat, hugging her legs to herself and thinking of what had happened to her. She stared at the gray of the stall door. She had been mind-raped. This term had come to her that first day, and it had stuck in her head. Mind-rape. It wasn't like real rape, for it offered no chance of resistance. It made her degrade herself willingly, only letting her loose to regret her actions after the fact. It seemed worse than actual rape, because in actual rape you were obviously the victim. In what Mark had done to her, her role was blurred, even to herself. She kept telling herself over and over that she could have prevented his control. She could have fought it harder than she had, and maybe opposed it. It was as much her fault for not resisting enough, and this was the worst part of it. After That Day, she had been scared to even go to class, for fear she might see him again. She hadn't been able to talk to Jacob since, or even his roommate Kurt, fearing what she had become in their mind's eye. A wanton slut. That's probably what they saw her as. Most of all, she feared when it would end. Would she ever have her own life? Or would Mark make her his slave forever? Would she ever be free? This is what scared her most of all. That her role was set...as Mark's slave, for all eternity. Jenny's butt hurt, and she realized she had been sitting in the stall for quite awhile. She stood, letting the blood circulate back into her rear end, and flushed the toilet, to make it seem like she had actually been using the bathroom. Amy, the girl from down the hall, was brushing her teeth. "Hi, Jenny!" she grinned at the mirror, her teeth covered with suds. Jenny forced a weak smile in response, and padded back to her room. As she walked in, Darlene was on the phone. "It's for you, Jennifer." Darlene said, offering the phone. Jennifer stared at the phone. It seemed suddenly malevolent, and she pulled back from it. "Tell him I'm not home." she whispered. "I already said you were home." insisted Darlene. "Come on, Jennifer. Stop acting like an idiot and take the phone." Jennifer reluctantly touched the phone, then hesitated, watching Darlene's face contort in exasperation. Slowly, summoning her nerve, Jennifer let her hand wind around the handle, and lifted it to her ear. "Hello?" she whispered weakly. "Hello, Jennifer." Mark's voice said back. His voice was bright and cheery, and Jennifer almost dropped the phone in shock. But she could not. Her hand was frozen onto it. "You..." was all she could say. "Yes. Mark, remember? I hope you enjoyed your last lesson in obedience, Jennifer. And I hope you've learned from it. I don't want to have to teach you again." "What do you want?" Jennifer rasped, her voice catching. Darlene looked up in concern. "First of all, I want you to calm down. We wouldn't want your roommate to find out about our special arrangement, now would it? After all, the deal was only for you, remember, Jenny? We never said anything about your roommate, and I would rather not have to take control of her, too. Neither of us wants me to have to do that, am I right?" Jennifer forced her voice to be more firm. "Yes. You're right." With great effort and more self-control than she knew she possessed, Jennifer flashed Darlene a smile. "Chill, Darlene...everything's fine, it's a friend of mine from class." Darlene smiled back, relaxed, and continued working on her math. Mark laughed. "Very good, Jenny! I think we'll have a good time, you and I. I suppose you're wondering why I called. Well, I wanted to request your presence at dinner tomorrow. I'm going out to La Rochelles....its a snooty french restaurant...and I want you to accompany me. Shall we say, oh...sevenish?" He actually paused, and Jennifer was swept away in the whole surrealness of the situation. He sounded like he was actually asking her on a date! Over the week since she had first seen Mark, his image had grown in her mind, until it seemed like he was the devil himself. The way he asked her out, as if she actually had a choice, took her completely aback. It was so at odds with her image of him. "Jennifer?" he asked. "You ask me like I actually have a choice." she murmured, quietly enough that Darlene couldn't hear her. Mark's response was cheery. "Well, you do have a choice. You can come of your own free will, or I can make you come. Not much of a choice, I admit..." he let his voice drift away. "Well, then, I guess seven it is." she said, her voice dripping sarcasm. She was surprised at how easy it was to talk with Mark. At how easy it was to let her anger at him overshadow her fear of him. He was a human, just like her...just with the power to control. It didn't make him perfect; it didn't make him any better than her. Jenny's intimidation started to fade. "I'll pick you up in front of your dorm at seven then, ok? And naturally you will dress to please me. You are a beautiful young lady, Miss Cailly. Impress me." And before she could answer, the phone clicked, and she was left hearing the steady hum of the dial tone. "Goodbye." she said, to keep up appearances, and passed the phone to Darlene. Darlene looked at her with open curiousity, which Jenny studiously pretended not to notice. Finally, Darlene had to speak. "Well? Who was that?" "A guy in one of my classes." Jenny said vaguely. Darlene's face split into a grin. "Really? Is he after you?" Jennifer suppressed her urge to shudder. Nevertheless, a shiver went down her spine. "You could say so." she said. "Wow! Are you after him?" A long empty pause as Jenny tried to decide how to answer, trying to figure out how to put Darlene off without making her even more curious. Finally, the silence, seemed to answer Darlene. She held up her hand. "Oh, sorry, I know, I'm being nosy. Just don't get a boyfriend without telling me, ok, Jen?" Jen nodded, and Darlene contentedly returned to her math. For the rest of the evening, Jenny found she couldn't concentrate. She kept wondering to herself what would happen the next day. What would she be forced to do? Her mind jumped from one erotic image to the next, each one more degrading than the next. Maybe he would make her strip down right there, in front of the restaurant. It was a possibility. Maybe he would make her have sex with all the men in the restaurant, one at a time, until she lay naked, sprawled on the floor as they stood around her, a toy for their amusement. The worst part of it was that she realized some of it fascinated her. She would catch herself playing with an image in her head, over and over, replaying it and replaying it, until her vagina started to get wet. Usually then she caught herself, while her mind screamed at her to stop, to stop thinking about such things, lest it weaken her resolve against his control. Finally, worried and confused, she fell asleep. The next day was even worse. She tried to plunge herself into her studies, but she couldn't concentrate on anything. Her attention span was gone and she didn't get much of anything out of her classes. By then, her mind had moved on from imagining what he would do to her to trying to figure out a way out of his control. She spent almost two and a half hours trying to decide what to wear. If she disappointed him too much, he would get mad and make her do worse things. On the other hand, if she looked too good, he might get too turned on and again make her do worse things. All the while, she was mad that she was doting so much on him; it was far more than he deserved. Her final compromise was to wear a modest pretty green dress with a lot of underwear. She emptied out her underwear drawer, putting on anything that could go on without looking too strange. If he was going to make her disrobe, she wasn't going to make it easy on him. Seven o'clock started to approach, and she felt sick. Jennifer's reflection in the mirror was beautiful, and Darlene said over and over again how gorgeous she was. Jennifer had combed her hair back and tied it with a green ribbon to match her face. On the whole, she thought she looked too good; far better than he deserved. It made her sick, that she was dressing up only to satisfy his taste for the perverse, and not just morally sick but physically sick. Unfortunately, the paleness of her skin contrasted well with the rich green of the dress and only made her look more attractive. Finally, it came to be seven, and Jennifer composed herself and walked down to the lobby. Her fingernails were bitten down; it was a habit she had when she was nervous, and she was very nervous. Until she came downstairs and saw him waiting for her. It had been a week, and Jennifer had almost forgotten what he looked like. Almost. As soon as she entered the lobby she saw his dark italian features and his smug grin. He was waiting near the payphones, dressed in a dark suit and tie. Jennifer would have thought he was handsome under normal circumstances, but this time she could only see him as a repulsive monster. "Hi, Jennifer." She froze. He walked over and took her hand. She felt faint; he radiated smug confidence, along with the subtle scent of some cologne, and when he took her hand, she did not resist. He pressed a kiss to the back of her hand, his eyes looking deep into hers, a smirk hovering on his lips. "You look gorgeous, my lovely slave Jennifer. I am very pleased. I was afraid I would have to teach you another lesson." She still couldn't speak. She hadn't really been prepared to see him again, and she was too shaken to do anything. He took her hand and led her outside to where a limo waited. The limo driver opened the door for her, and she dropped onto the seat. Mark slid in next to her, and the driver closed the door. "You see?" smiled Mark. "Only the best for us." The chauffer settled in the front seat and started the engine. "To La Rochelles, Mr. Wells." Mark commanded, and the driver pulled away from the curb. Jennifer finally found her voice. "Is he...he's controlled, too?" "Yes, he's under my power at the moment." said Mark. "I thought we could drive there in style." She felt him plant a soft kiss on her cheek. She breathed in slightly, but otherwise didn't react, kept her eyes staring forward. "Only the best for you, my slave." He leaned forward and started making a drink from the bar. Jennifer watched him mix the different liquors together into what looked like a martini. The seat was very soft and luxurious, but she was too tense to enjoy it. Mark took a sip, and seemed to notice this. "Hey, relax, Jennifer. You're too tense. I don't like to see you tense." His words seemed to come from a distance. "Is that an order?" she murmured. "No, just a suggestion. You'll have a better time if you just relax. Want something to drink?" he indicated the bar. "I don't drink." Mark smiled. "Good!" he emptied his glass, and set it on the bar. "So, how was your day?" Jenny looked at him to see if he was serious. Once again, the whole situation was becoming surreally normal. Too much like a real date. She was almost too stunned to answer. Outside, the streetlights were slipping one by one past the car. Distantly, she heard the chauffer put on the signal, and the limo made a left turn. She gradually focused on Mark's face. It was in shadows, but she could make out his grin. "How can you ask that?" she finally answered. "All day, all I could think of was this." Her voice was frighteningly neutral to her ears. She sounded dead. He slipped his hand back behind her head and pulled her forward. She was too numb to resist, and he brushed his lips against hers. "Good. As well it should be, slave." She could smell the alcohol on his breath. The car stopped, and Jennifer realized that they had already reached the restaurant. The chauffer had pulled in front, and got out of the car to open their doors. Mark was on the right side, so he got out first. He took Jenny's hand to lead her out, and she once again felt too lost to resist. They entered the restaurant, leaving the chauffer to take care of himself for awhile. The head waiter immediately came forward, a small well-dressed gentleman. "Mr. Antonio!" he said in an obsequious french accent. "How good it is to see you again! I have saved you your usual table." The waiter led the way to a small elegant table on the side of the restaurant. Mark pulled Jennifer along, and she wondered to herself whether he was trying to impress her with all this fanciness and glitz. It was like dating a movie star, she supposed, only she knew that like her, all these others were just under Mark's control. It was his power that made this all possible. Still, she had to admit she was a little swept away with it all. It was certainly the most impressive first date she had been on. And thus far, he had been relatively nice and polite, despite his habit of calling her 'slave.' He certainly did not seem like the monster she had thought him. Of course, Jenny admitted to herself, she had not resisted yet. Still, her apprehension at being with Mark faded, and she started to relax. She realized that the head waiter had pulled out her chair, and she sat down across from Mark. The head waiter walked off, and Jennifer heard him telling someone to 'take good care of Mr. Antonio.' The restaurant was very elegant, one of those romantic places with low lights and candles in the middle of the table. A place for lovers. Mark looked at her over the table, his eyes glinting. "So, Miss Cailly, what do you think so far?" "You seem to have gone to a lot of trouble to impress me." she said hesitantly, not sure what his reaction would be. He only nodded slightly to her, his eyes dancing in the candlelight. "And are you impressed?" "Well, yes." she admitted reluctantly, meeting his eyes. "That is, I'm impressed with your power." "Good." he said. "You should be." He waved his hand at the restaurant. "You see, Jennifer, to be my slave is not such a bad thing. I ask very little from you, and look how much you can receive! Is this life so bad?" As soon as he mentioned what he asked of her, her mind flashed back to when she had been in the park. The man on the bench, his eyes flashing confusion, shock, and above all, ecstacy. Her fingers slick with sperm, his sperm. Her breasts bared for everyone's appraisal. This was very little? He stole her freedom, he made her an object for some boy's pleasure. "How can you say that?" she burst, louder than she had intended. "How can you possibly expect me to exchange my freedom for this? Can you honestly believe I accept what you ask of me?" Mark's dark eyebrows narrowed. "I would ask you to keep your voice down, Jenny. I don't want a slave of mine to disrupt the dinners of others. It reflects poorly on me." "What?" asked Jennifer. "How..." "In fact...." interrupted Mark, and his voice was now very stern. "I think that if you raise your voice again, you will remove an article of clothing. Starting now." "What?" asked Jennifer, and then she remembered his power. He had just used it on her. She quickly became quiet. "That's better." said Mark. "I'm sorry, Jennifer, but you must remember who you are yelling at. I am your master. Whether you like it or not. Please apologize." "I'm sorry." Jennifer said quietly. She inwardly cursed herself for making him mad. "That's better." He reached under the table and pulled out a bag. "Now, Jennifer, I said before that you were very beautiful, and you are, and I am happy with how you dressed to please me. However, I am displeased with what you wore. You are over-dressed for this situation. Fortunately, I brought you an outfit to wear." He indicated the bag. Oh, god, thought Jennifer to herself. He's going to make me change, out here, in public. She realized this with cold certainty. Almost as if he read her mind, Mark said "Oh, don't worry. You can go to the bathroom to change." Jennifer was so relieved she actually smiled. She took the bag from him and got up to head to the bathroom. "Oh." his voice followed her. "Of course, I meant the MEN's bathroom." She turned, shocked. He was casually examining the tablecloth. "And naturally you won't displease me by changing in the stall." He lifted his eyes, and they flashed malevolently at her. Jennifer opened her mouth to argue, but knew by the look in his eyes that it would do no good. Finally, she turned, and walked to the bathroom. At first she hovered by the door to the woman's bathroom, acting like she was preparing to go in, but actually looking at the door to the men's bathroom. She held the bag he had given her tightly in her arms, and her stomach rose and fell like a roller coaster. What if a guy was already in there? How long should she wait, before she went in? How long did guys take to pee, anyhow? Then she realized that the longer she waited, the greater the chance that some other man would enter while she was changing. Finally, she gritted her teeth and pushed through the door. The bathroom was empty, and she exhaled. At least she didn't have to worry about that. She checked the door on the off-chance that it had a lock. No such luck. She hesitated only a second, realizing that the longer she took, the greater the chance of being interrupted. Cautiously, she pushed open the door and took a peek outside, to see if anyone was making a beeline to the bathroom. No one. She was safe for awhile. She stood in front of the mirror, and quickly pulled down the zipper to her dress. As she stepped out of it, she remembered how much underwear she wore underneath it. Another quick peek out the door; no one. "Come on, Jenny, get on with it before you get caught." she muttered. She kept her shoes on; they wouldn't get in the way too much. She reached into the bag and looked at what she had been provided with. Her heart sank. The black leather skirt was very short, the panties very slim, and she couldn't find a bra. The silk blouse was fairly sheer; her nipples would be very visible through them. "What a sleaze." she said, but at least it was better than nothing. She started to pull of her various undergarments, pulling the slips over her head. She slipped off the panties (she had worn four pairs), pantyhose and the silk underskirts all at the same time, and felt really vulnerable, seeing her black pubic triangle reflected in the mirror. Was that someone at the door? Seconds passed, no one entered. Just her imagination. Jenny cursed herself for letting time slip by and pulled on the tiny panties he had provided her with. They barely covered her rear end, and in the front she had pubic hair protruding from the top of the waistband. Still it had to do. She pulled on the skirt frantically, almost losing her balance, and experienced some temporary relief at being more decent. The skirt was fairly tight, and clung to her rear end. But at least it covered her. Next she pulled off the various silk tops, and finally unsnapped her bra. She tore at it, trying to get it off, almost getting tangled in it, but finally, it fell to the floor. Her breasts were free, and she once again felt exposed. And then she heard the door opening. The man who entered looked at least as shocked as she was. His eyes stared at her chest, and she realized what kind of show she was giving him. She quickly reached down to snag the blouse, only to fumble it away in her scrambling. The man was quicked to recover. "I think one of us is in the wrong bathroom." he said, in a cultured english accent. He leaned on the counter, and made no move to avert his eyes from Jenny's naked breasts. "Yes, I'm sorry." mumbled Jenny. "Let me finish changing, and I'll leave." She was acutely aware at how her breasts jounced around as she bent down to pick up the blouse, and acutely aware of how his brown eyes were locked onto her brown nipples. "Oh, take your time. It's not often that I see such a beautiful naked woman as yourself." Was that meant as a compliment? Jennifer would have taken it more so if the man's lecherous eyes weren't so frozen on her nipples. At least he could see what her face looked like. "You have such lovely breasts. May I....touch them?" Jenny's eyes widened in shock, and she focused on the man again. He was running his hand over the bathroom counter, slowly, fondling it. His breathing was a little too quick, and his eyes a little too intense. "No!" she shouted, and then, for some reason, she was compelled to remove her shoe. The man had started to drift closer to her, and now he rubbed his hands together in front of him. She frantically pulled the blouse over her head, and over her torso. Looking down, she realized it did little good. The fabric was sheer enough that her breasts were still very visible, and she didn't have time to do up the buttons. Still, it was apparently as decent as she was going to get. "They look so soft...so lovely..." "Go away!" Jennifer pushed aside his advancing hands, and stuffed everything she could in the bag, including her two shoes. She grabbed the bag and pushed through the man toward the door. As she passed him, she felt one of his hands brush over her left breast. His palm stroked across her nipple in what felt like a burst of electricity that coarsed through her body. Then she was out the door and making her way toward Mark, buttoning the blouse as she went. Mark apparently had ordered for her. A plate of steaming Escargot waited for her as she sat down, and Mark was a third of the way finished with some chicken dish. He looked up as she approached, and let his eyes wander over her body. "Very nice!" he smiled. She dropped into her seat. "Damn you!" she growled, careful to keep her voice down... after all, she couldn't afford to lose anymore clothes. "I almost got raped in there, you know!" He shook his head. "You wouldn't have gotten raped." He stuck a forkful of chicken into his mouth. "He was there, damn it! He wanted to touch my breasts! He would have raped me if I hadn't gotten away!" She said this before she realized it, louder than she intended, and immediately her fingers were working at the buttons of the blouse, even as she struggled to control them, and soon the blouse was unbuttoned. Her hands pulled apart the two sides, and she felt the air against her breasts. Her hands dropped. "Can you blame him?" asked Mark, admiring her. "You have such lovely breasts, my slave." And he sipped a glass of wine as Jennifer lay open to his, and the restaurants, view. She could feel her face hot with shame. Finally, Mark spoke. "Button your blouse, Jenny." She felt her hands released from whatever power held them, and she quickly covered herself again. Frantically, she looked around, and was relieved to see no one appeared to have noticed her when she was exposed. She turned back to Mark, to see him staring deep into her eyes. She was caught, held, by those eyes. "There are two lessons you need to learn as my slave, Jennifer. The first is obedience. You are learning this; you performed my bathroom instructions very well, and without complaint. I am pleased. The second thing is that you need to learn to have faith in me. I am your master, Jennifer, and that means that not only do you serve me, but I am responsible for you. That means I don't let you get hurt. I don't let men rape you. I don't let you catch diseases or get pregnant. I control, Jenny, situations as well as people." He dropped his eyes, and she felt as if he had released her from some spell. "That man would never have raped you, not with me around." muttered Mark. He said no more, only worked on eating his chicken. Jennifer watched him eat, and then starting poking at her escargot. It tasted really good, in a rich butter sauce, and she started to eat. After awhile, she even stopped caring that her breasts were visible through the sheer blouse. When the waiter came, he seemed to pay very close attention to Jennifer's chest, and was very nervous around her. Nothing Jenny could do about it, so she let him have his view. Mark informed the waiter that they were done. "Very good, sir. And naturally, that will be on the house." "Naturally." said Mark. "You have given us very good service. I would like to give you an especially good tip." The waiter bowed his head modestly. Mark continued. "You seem to admire the breasts of my slave there, do you not?" Jennifer's eyes widened. The waiter looked at her chest and nodded. "Well," said Mark. "Would you like to feel them? That will be your tip." The waiter looked a bit taken aback with this offer, but he looked at Jennifer's breasts and smiled. "Oh, yes, sir. Thank you." Mark looked at Jennifer. "Jenny, would you...?" Jenny opened her mouth to protest, then thought better of it, looking at the waiter. Why not let him have his fun? If he's gentle, then I might even enjoy it. She drew in her breath, reached down, unbuttoned her blouse, and opened it. The man pressed his hands onto her chest, his palms aligned with her nipples. His hands were cold, and Jennifer gasped a little to feel their touch. Then he started to stroke her, moving his hands in circles over the tips of her nipples, and the electricity she had felt before was repeated a hundred fold. If I enjoy this, I may never be able to resist Mark's control again, Jennifer thought, but she couldn't help herself. The waiter stroked her, working her breasts like a sculptor, and she arched her back, pressing them against his hands. She closed her eyes, letting herself drift into the sensation of the hands teasing and playing with her. Finally, she felt them reluctantly from her, and she opened her eyes, coming back to the real world. She realized her panties were very wet. "You must be a sculptor." she told the waiter, touching his hand. "Thank you." He bowed his head. "It is easy to sculpt what is already beautiful, madam." And he walked off. Mark was looking at her, intrigued. "You enjoyed that." he said. Jennifer blushed and looked down, quickly rebuttoning her blouse. When she peeked up again, Mark was grinning. "Good. Good." he said. Then he took her by the hand and led her outside to where the limo awaited. They drove back in silence, and Mark released her back to her dorm, once again brushing her lips with his and sending her on her way. Jennifer had already walked through most of the dorm before she realized she was still wearing the sheer blouse. She hadn't noticed if anyone else had been staring at her; she thought probably they had been. It was late, but not very late, and Darlene was probably still up, so Jennifer went instead to the bathroom, where she closed the door, sat on the seat, and tried to come to grips with her confusing emotions and desires. To be continued written and produced by Daniel Reinker comments to dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu Occidental college neither supports nor discourages this story -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Repost: Controlling Jennifer III X-Moderator-Review: 9: bothersome theme, but undeniably excellent writing Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf heavy dom nc Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Fri, 2 Apr 1993 17:23:50 GMT Archive-name: controljen3 Story follows: This is the third part of the Controlling Jennifer series. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Controlling Jennifer III: Power Play The library was a frightening place. It didn't seem like it had been built all at once, with one plan and one idea; instead it seemed like every extra room attached onto the main floor had been tacked on as an afterthought, and the result was a jumble of rooms with no rhyme or reason to their layout. When Jennifer had gone through orientation upon arriving at Jefferson college, they had been given a small tour of the library, a tour of the more important rooms. The librarian had laughed and remarked that she had worked at the library for five years, and thought she knew everything about it, until a couple days earlier when she had discovered another stairwell she hadn't known about. "You see?" said the librarian. "You're always discovering things in the library!" Jennifer, who at the time already found the library intimidating, hadn't found that comment particularly reassuring. Even worse, the confusion of the library's layout bred small isolated pockets of gloomy emptiness, and these gave Jennifer the creeps. She hated wandering through the older shelves, looking for obscure books. The shelves were always looming monoliths, and the atmosphere reminded her of a hedge maze. As a result, she hardly ever went down into the stacks unless she had to, and she rarely even came to the library at all. Unfortunately, this time she had to be there. It was tuesday, and the physics midterm was thursday and Jennifer had never felt more unprepared for a test in her entire life. She was usually a very good student, but now she had a hard time concentrating on anything. Studying in her room, with Darlene humming Janet Jackson tunes and the phone looming next to her had proved impossible. Finally, she had packed her bags, cursed the requirement that made her take such a boring class as physics, and gone to the library. Once there, she settled in a somewhat isolated row of desks on the third floor. It offered her quiet, plus the security of knowing that the periodicals section was very close and while she had quiet she was never quite alone. Jennifer opened her books to study, but her eyes drifted over to the graffiti on the desk. "What do you do with your hormones?" one scrawled remark read. The answer, written below it, read: "If your whore moans, put your dick in her mouth!" Next to this witty statement was a pencil depiction of a set of obscenely enlarged male gentalia, and below that "I want to fuck Lori W." Jenny's eyes lingered on this last statement. Who was Lori? Did she know that some library vandal wanted to sleep with her? Or was she oblivious? Watched from afar, perhaps, him waiting for the right moment to spring on her. Jennifer shook her head and pushed a paper over the offending graffiti. Back to physics. No more distractions. Soon, however, her mind was wandering again. To Jacob, and what had happened between them on saturday night. She had finally given in to his appeals to talk. He had been pressuring her since that first day, the first day she had met Mark, to talk about what had occured between them. Finally, she made herself face him, and they had talked. He had tried to get her to tell him what was going on, but she wouldn't. He had tried to get her to become more serious with him, to become his "girlfriend", but she refused to do this too. She didn't need the complications of having a boyfriend along with everything else. Finally, he had seduced her. Well, not really seduced; she had been a fairly willing participant. Why had she given in to his pressuring? Well, it had seemed like a good idea at the time, but after the fact she couldn't think of why she had given in. It had been a mistake, she reflected in hindsight; it had given him the exact message she was trying not to give him, the message that there might be something between them. The night had ended up disappointing for both; Jacob had apparently been expecting another wild sexual encounter like their previous time. But Jennifer wasn't really like that; it had been Mark's power that had made her act that way before. She liked to go slow and take her time with the whole thing. The end result was that Jacob became impatient, and Jennifer became impatient with his impatience, and the whole thing hadn't been satisfying for either of them. And now Jacob was doting on her, as if she was a possession of his. Just what she didn't need. "After all..." she whispered. "I belong to Mark!" and she smiled grimly at the irony of the whole thing. She didn't want to be a possession, but unfortunately she was forced into it. "Why even bother studying physics?" she muttered. "I'm just a toy for Mark anyhow." Mark, thankfully, hadn't called her since their 'date' at La Rochelles, almost a week before. Jennifer was still troubled with what had happened at that restaurant, particularly with what she had done at the end of the night. Mark had offered her breasts to the waiter as a 'tip', and Jennifer had submitted herself to letting the waiter fondle her in the middle of the restaurant. True, she hadn't really had a choice, and Mark could have forced her to do it anyhow with his power. But that hadn't really been her reason for submitting to it. The idea had appealed to her, and she had enjoyed the waiters hands. This was what bothered her. Everytime she didn't resist, she fell deeper and deeper into his control. And this scared her. Jennifer realized she was becoming distracted from her physics again. "Argh!!!" she muttered to herself. "Jenny, study, darn it! Remember, you have a test!" She forced her eyes to start reading the page in front of her. "Well, well, well!" A voice said above her. "Jennifer Cailly! Fancy meeting you here." Jennifer recognized the voice with horror, and looking up confirmed her suspicions. Leaning on the top of the little wall that separated her desk from the others was Mark. He was smiling down at her. Instead of inspiring horror, however, the sight of his face only served to exasperate her. "Mark!" she said. "Argh!!! Not right now! I don't need this right now!" Mark's eyes widened, and he pulled back slightly. Jenny realized what she was saying and caught herself. "Look, Mark..." her voice rushed forward. "Look, I'm sorry, but whatever you want, I can't...I just can't! I have to study for a major physics test. Please leave me alone? Please? Can't you control me later? Just leave me alone now." She fixed her eyes on his, trying to convey her desperation in her gaze. Mark gaped at her for a moment, then his eyes narrowed. "Who said I wanted to control you?" his voice was a cold monotone, and Jennifer's spirits sank. "Maybe I was just checking to see how my slave was. Next time I come over and greet you, you will say 'Hello, master. What can I do for you today?' Say it now." Jennifer's spirits plummeted. There was no winning. Her appeal to him had only succeeded in making him angry, and now he was going to make her pay for it. Oddly enough, her greatest regret was that she would not be able to get any studying done after all. "Hello, master. What can I do for you today?'" she recited. She pushed aside her books. Looked like studying would have to wait. "That's better." said Mark, smiling thinly. "I think you need to be taught a lesson, my slave. You need to be taught to be more respectful to your master. Listen: YOU do not decide when I can exercise my control over you. I will do so whenever I desire. If this is clear, say 'I will do whatever my master wills WHENever my master wills.' Say it!" "I will do whatever my master wills whenever my master wills." she repeated. It's not as if I have any choice in the matter, she thought to herself. "Very good. I'm sure you will learn in time." Mark smiled again, and then he paused, his smile slowly fading as the pause stretched out. He's trying to figure out what to do, Jennifer realized. He doesn't have anything planned. She looked down and noticed with interest that he was carrying an economics book. Was he an econ major? Or a business major? Jennifer's mind was immediately completely taken with this revelation. He was a student here, too! It made sense, but it really didn't fit with her image of him. After all, she was a student. If he was a student, too, that put him on equal terms with her. A very strange concept, to think of Mark the controller maybe being in the same class as her. And it also meant he was probably here to study, too. Maybe he really DIDN'T come to control me, Jennifer mused. Could it be just coincidence that he happened to see me here studying? It certainly seemed that way. Next time, Jenny told herself bitterly, keep your mouth shut. She looked back up at Mark. Mark was moving around her, until he sat at the desk beside her. His eyes were on her skirt, and they had lighted up. Uh, oh, thought Jennifer. He's got something. "I wish to inspect you, slave Jennifer. To make sure you meet with my approval. Please lift up your skirt so that I can see under it." Jennifer took a quick look around to see if anyone else was watching. No one else was even around. She turned back to Mark, and lifted up her skirt so that he could see under. She had worn plain white panties, so she wasn't really showing him anything. Nevertheless, the act disgusted her. "I need to make my stand." she thought to herself. "This time...I need to fight his power with all my concentration, see if I can face it down. If I can, I'm free." Mark looked at her panties, and then back up to her. His eyes were disapproving, and he shook his head. "I'm afraid I am displeased, my slave. Your panties are blocking my view of your lovely pussy. Please walk over to that rubbish can, remove them, and throw them away. You do not need them." Jenny's heart pounded. Was this the time to resist? She looked around and couldn't see anyone. Maybe not now, she thought. It would be better to resist if it was something REALLY bad that he wanted her to do. If she was really against the act, she would be able to fight against his power all the better. "And I really only get one chance..." she thought. "If I fail, then I may never have the will to resist again." For now, she would comply. Jennifer stood up and walked over to the garbage can. She looked around once more to make sure no one was watching. Fortunately, she stood in the midst of a line of bookshelves, and she was relatively hidden. She slipped her fingers under her skirt and hooked them onto the waistband of her panties. Fully aware that Mark was probably watching her intently from behind, she quickly slipped her panties over her thighs and down her legs, being careful not to lift her skirt anymore than she had to. She stepped out of the underwear and dropped it into the garbage. It felt very strange to wear a skirt without underwear, something Jenny had never done before, and it was a strange sensation to feel the air against her bare flesh under the skirt. It felt weird when she walked back to her desk. An odd feeling of freedom. She looked at Mark and he nodded in approval. "Here." he said. "Sit down." She did. Be ready, she told herself. "Now lift her skirt again." Mark commanded. "I wish to inspect you again." Jennifer mentally dug in, ready to resist whatever compulsions he gave her. "I will not." she said slowly, emphasizing each word. "What?" Mark stared at her, seemingly taken aback. "I said I won't! I'm not going to bare myself to you right smack in the middle of the library. No. I won't." She stared at him defiantly. He seemed more shocked than angry at her resistance. For a second he could only stare at her. "What are you doing, Jenny?" he asked, and he asked it like an actual question, like he seriously couldn't believe what she was doing. "Why are you acting like this?" "What do you mean, what am I doing? I'm saying no!" She glared at him. He was dumbfounded. "But why? I mean, I can just use my power, you know that..." Jennifer was getting irritated. She wished he'd use his power already. She was ready to resist it. "So then use your power! Either use your power to make me do what you want, or go away and let me study my damn physics!" She was getting angry now. That was good. Anger would help her resist. "Ok." said Mark, his eyes down, and the reluctance in his voice surprised her. "I'll use my power." He raised his eyes. "I'm going to go down to the lounge and get a soda. While I'm gone, here's what will happen. I'm going to leave my watch here. For the first thirty seconds of every minute, your body will build up to orgasm. But it will never reach orgasm, and at the end of the thirty seconds, you will come down again. Until the beginning of the next minute, when you will start to build up again. This will keep happening, until you prop your feet on this chair, spread your legs, and lift your skirt so your pussy is visible. Once I have seen that you have done this, I will return, and you will stop building up to orgasm." Mark took off his watch, and stood up. Jennifer watched as he left. "Okay, Jennifer." Jenny spoke out loud to herself. "This is it. Time to break his power. You just have to be confident. Have to be ready. Have to be.. ur!" She looked at the watch, and it had started the minute. And indeed, pleasure was building up within her. "No, it isn't, damn it!" she gritted her teeth. It's all an illusion. "I don't feel anything at all." She pulled out her physics book and made herself concentrate on the page. "The word equilibrium implies that the body is either at rest..." she recited. The pleasure was still building, making her pause, but she forced it down. "or that it's center of mass is moving at constant velocity." The pleasure started to ease through her again, but then abruptly it started to ebb. "Did I beat it? Urg...no, the thirty seconds just ended." Jennifer pushed the watch out of her line of sight and forced physics into her brain. When the pleasure began again, it was more powerful, and she gasped despite herself. "Oh, god." she whispered. "Remember, Jen...be angry!" She thought of what Mark wanted her to do, and that generated enough anger to push back the pleasure. However, it was a constant battle; if she released her concentration even a little bit, the pleasure started to race through her body. Finally, it again started to ebb, and she felt a little disappointed. Then she caught herself. "No! That's what he wants! Come on, Jen.... remember that this ISN'T good pleasure. Resist it! You don't want to feel it!" The next time, the pleasure didn't just build up, it burst within her, and she arched her back against her will, gasping. "Oh! Oh god! Please...give me strength!" She again pushed it back, fighting it every step of the way. She didn't make much headway, but at least she kept it from gaining on her, and finally it started to ebb again. This time when it ebbed, it left her feeling empty, and despite herself, she looked forward to it building up again. As it ebbed, she became aware at how slick she was getting between her legs. "Darn." she said. "I don't want to stain my skirt." She started to get up to retrieve her panties when the fourth wave coursed through her body. Jennifer crumpled to her seat. This was the most intense yet, and Jennifer only kept it back reminding herself over and over what Mark wanted him to do. "Mark is an asshole! He's a sleaze! A mind-raper!" she told herself. "Damn it, girl, resist him!" These last two words came out more as high-pitched moans than as words, but they helped. The fourth wave finally began to ebb. And Jennifer started to crave release. As she gasped in the interim, she quickly pulled out her keys and pushed them deep into her palm, hoping the pain would counteract the pleasure. When the next wave hit, she dropped her keys, and could only clutch at the table as her body was wracked with the escalating physical pleasure that splashed over her body. All resistance disappeared with this wave. Her body was left trembling as it finally ebbed, trembling and frustrated. Her hand fell between her legs, stroking herself, but she could get no pleasure from this. It continued to ebb. Then it hit again. "Oh! Oh!" Jenny yelped, thrashing on her chair. Her hand was still touching herself through her skirt, but now every little bit of pressure caused warm electricity to launch through her body. "Oh! Oh, God! I'm gonna come!" But before she could, it slipped away from her. Her eyes dripped tears of frustration. Not only was she not able to resist, but she was even denied the orgasm that would have made it worth it. Again the pleasure hit, and Jennifer had had enough. She pressed her feet against Mark's chair, spread her legs, and lifted her skirt so that her slit was visible. She trembled to be so exposed, with her legs spread so lewdly, but then the pleasure slammed into her again, and she could think no more. She rode the wave of pleasure, and when it started to back down, she looked at her exposed slit, dripping with juice, and wished and wished that Mark would return, so she could cover herself and not have to endure this frustration and embarassment. And then the next wave hit. When this went down, she looked up, and Mark was there. He was smiling, looking at her trembling before him, her face flushed and a driplet of sweat running down her cheek. His eyes fell between her legs, and he reached his finger forward to run a finger from her clitoris down to the bottom of her lips. She could only tremble at his touch, all resistance gone. All she wanted now was to come. To find release. "I told you resistance was a useless waste of effort, Jenny. I'll have my way no matter what you do, so you might as well let me have my way from the beginning. Have you learned, Jenny?" "Yes." she said. "Yes, I've learned." "Good." he said. "Now I want to watch you get yourself off." He pushed Jennifer's feet off his chair and sat down facing her. "Go ahead...you know. Finger yourself." He watched her intently. Jennifer didn't care that he watched. She dropped her finger onto her clit and started to massage it, building herself up for the release she so needed. The pleasure came again, and she was almost scared that it would disappear, but it didn't ebb, but grew and grew. Finally, it exploded through her, and she spasmed in her chair, experiencing the biggest orgasm of her life. Her whole body seemed to be feeling pleasure simultaneously, from her fingers to her toes, and she almost passed out from sensory overload. She couldn't say how long it lasted, but when it finished she was very satisfied. She lay back gasping. "Wow." was all she could say. She noticed that he was watching her face intently, which she found curious, as she would have expected him to still be staring at her exposed vagina. "You look like you enjoyed that." he said. It was phrased more like a question that a statement. Jennifer pulled down her skirt. "Wow. That was the fiercest orgasm I've ever had." she whispered. "Really?" Mark seemed pleased. Jennifer didn't answer, but looked around to see if she was being watched. And she discovered with shock that she was. A tall man was peering at her from one of the book shelves. Looking down, she saw that he had his cock out. It was hard, and he was stroking it, his eyes boring into her. As Jennifer met his eyes, he smiled; a slow, sleazy smile of contempt, and as he did so he rubbed his dick and spurted white jism towards her. The white syrup dribbled to the floor. Jennifer almost vomited. I'm just a pussy to him, she realized. A pervert's wet dream. She felt very sick. Mark noticed. "What's wrong, Jen?" he asked. Then he noticed the strange man. "You stupid FUCK!" he exploded, standing up. The man gaped at Mark, and started to put away his cock, backing slowly. Jennifer looked up at Mark and was surprised to see the fury in his eyes. She spun back to watch the strange man. She heard Mark's voice behind her, cold and deathly. "Worms are eating into your brain." he intoned. And the man screamed. He clutched his head, falling to the ground. Spasming, shrieking, scraping at his face as if to claw away the worms. Jennifer looked at Mark with complete and utter horror. He turned to look deep into her eyes, and his eyes were jumping and frantic as he read what was there. "Oh, Jenny, I'm sorry..." he started, and then he grabbed his book. "Stop!" he yelled at the man, and the man stopped his tormented writhing and lay still. Mark looked back at Jenny, and before she could react, pressed a hard kiss against her lips. She gasped. He looked at her once more, and then was gone, racing from the room with his book and his watch clutched in his hand. Jennifer sat for a moment, then scrambled to gather her own things and leave. The man lay still. She raced out, and it wasn't until she got back to her room that she remembered she had left her panties back in the garbage can. End This story was written and produced by Daniel Reinker All similarities between this story and actual people and events is purely coincidental. Occidental does not directly support this story but supports my right to write and post it. All comments, complaints, spelling corrections to: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer IV X-Moderator-Review: 7: still well-written, but worse character development Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf heavy dom nc series mild sm Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Fri, 2 Apr 1993 23:54:51 GMT Archive-name: controljen4 Story follows: This story contains nonconsensual sexual situations and a little bondage. Press 'n' if you need to. aThis is the fourth part of the Controlling Jennifer series. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Controlling Jennifer IV: Learning to Have Faith The sun was setting. Jennifer's physics lab had run late; it had been one of those wonderfully stupid labs where they had spent 3 and 1/2 hours hitting clay blobs with ball bearings. The whole thing had been extremely dull, and Jennifer's distraction hadn't helped; it had only made the lab even longer and more exasperating. She had been very glad when they had finally been able to get out of there; she definitely needed time to think. The problem was clutched in her hand as she walked back to the dorm. It was her physics test. She had received an 'A.' 100 out of 100. A perfect score, and on a test she hadn't felt prepared for. She ought to have felt proud. Except she had run out of time, and hadn't even made it to the last page. And yet the teacher had given her a perfect score on that empty page, just like he had on all the other pages. One problem she hadn't had time to finish, she just scribbled down an equation, just so she might get some sort of partial credit. Nope, not partial credit. Full credit. And scrawled under the problem, in the teacher's handwriting: "Close enough." Jennifer clutched the test close to her. She had been careful not to let anyone see the test, or the grade she had received on it. She told everyone she had received a 'C', which was probably fairly close to the truth, since that's what she probably should have received. Had powers not worked in her favor. Mark's powers. Jennifer walked towards her dorm through the grassy quad in the middle of campus. The sky was painted orange by the setting sun, and the quad was fairly empty, as it usually was at dusk. The occasional student walked from a late class, but overall most people were inside already. The air was starting to get chilly, and Jennifer told herself she needed to get back and put on warmer clothes. The cool air slipped over her bare legs as she strolled along. Ordinarily, she would have enjoyed the walk back to the dorm as the sun set, but she was too preoccupied. Since the last time she had seen Mark, her perception of him had changed considerably. Or rather, she now allowed herself to HAVE a perception of him. Maybe it was the revelation that he too was a student at the college; maybe his strange behavior just before he had left her in the library. Whatever it was, he was on her mind a lot. She hadn't dared to let herself consider what he was like before, taking it for granted that he was a monster, pure and simple. A mind-raper. But now she found herself wondering about him. About what kind of person he was when he wasn't controlling her. She really knew nothing about him, Nothing at all. When she had last seen Mark, she had exposed herself before him, and she remembered he had touched her clit, then run his finger down the length of her slit. At the time she had been too consumed with sexual frustration to consider the implications of it. It wasn't until afterwards that she had made a realization: that was really the first time he had touched her. Well, that wasn't entirely true. He had kissed her a number of times, and he had taken her hand to lead her around. But he hadn't really touched her sexually until then, and afterwards, she started to wonder why. Why hadn't he ever had sex with her? He certainly hadn't lacked for opportunities. Yet he barely even touched her. Why? Jennifer was thinking about this, and about her physics test, and wasn't paying any attention to her surroundings, just enough to know she was on the route back to her dorm. She was walking on the sidewalk, along the road that led through the middle of the campus, and didn't notice the car until it pulled up beside her. Jennifer stopped, surprised, almost dropping her books. It was a white car, very shiny, very sleek. Brand new. The driver stopped the motor, and Jennifer looked through the window to see who it was. She wasn't very surprised to see Mark smiling at her, having figured that he would show up to at least explain her test. Jennifer stopped, pressing her legs together against the cold, and waited for him to get out. Her heart had started to speed up, and she shivered, though whether it was because of the cold or in anticipation of Mark's orders, she did not know. She let her eyes follow him as he opened the door and stepped from the car. "Hello, Jennifer." he smiled at her and nodded politely. His voice was very formal. He likes to be formal, Jennifer thought to herself. Like he's being a gentleman. "Hi, Mark." she said uncertainly, trying to decide whether she should address the subject of her test or wait until he did. "How do you like my new car?" he indicated the sleek white beast he had arrived in. Jennifer slid her eyes over its curves. It looked expensive. Probably obtained by his power. That seemed to be how Mark obtained everything. Including me, Jenny thought. "It's nice." she said quietly. "I'm glad you like it." he grinned, patting its hood as if it was a pet dog. "It's brand new. Drives like a dream. Want to go for a ride?" "All right." she said simply, and stepped over to the passenger side. As she turned around, her fingers caught in the door handle, she saw he was following her over. She watched him as he approached, wondering what he had in mind. He must have seen the confusion in her eyes, for he smiled. "The seat covers are sheepskin. Very soft and plush." Jennifer looked in the car, and noted the white fur on the seats. She looked back at Mark, waiting for him to explain further. "I think you would appreciate the feeling of it against your bare skin." He was watching her face, but as he spoke this line, he quickly ran his eyes down her body, then returned back to her face. She knew what he wanted before he even asked. "Take off all of your clothes, Jennifer. Put them in the back seat, then get in the front." He waited. Jennifer took a quick look around to see if anyone was watching. The quad was fairly deserted, and those few who were there were not paying attention to her. Her fingers traced the top button of her blouse, considering, and then she slipped it out of its hole. I'm getting bolder, she thought. This doesn't bother me as much. As she moved her hands down her blouse, button by button, she spoke. "I got an A on my test." "Really? Congratulations!" Jennifer glanced up to see him grinning, his usual smug grin, the grin that was born from the confidence of his power. She dropped her eyes again. "It was you, wasn't it." A murmur as she pulled the edges of her blouse out from the top of her skirt. She slipped it off, feeling the cold air against her now bare skin. Her nipples pressed against the soft inner layer of her bra, hardening as the cold seeped in. Mark moved around her and opened the back door for her; she dropped the blouse in and watched it fall in a heap of silk. "I told you to have faith in me, Jennifer." Mark said. Jennifer could feel his eyes on her breasts as she akwardly reached back and undid the clasp of her bra. It made her uncomfortable. She let the straps slide down her arms and was aware her breasts were now in view, the nipples pert in the cold. Mark continued, his voice lower. "You didn't need to worry about that physics test. I told you I would take care of you." Jennifer dropped the bra beside her blouse, feeling the air wash over her naked top. She stopped to gaze at Mark. "You used your power. On the teacher. I didn't deserve an A. But you made him give me one anyway." she stated. Mark nodded. "Yes, Jenny. That's what I did." He gestured at her skirt. "Come on, the rest." Jennifer unzipped the back of the skirt, and slipped it to the ground, watching it pool in a dark circle at her feet. "Mark..." she said. "I want to ask you for something." "What?" She wouldn't meet his eyes. "I want you to stop doing that. Don't make the teachers give me A's." She dropped the skirt in the car. "Huh? Why not?" Jennifer had been slow removing her other clothes, but when she came to her panties, she suddenly decided to pull them off quickly, hoping that the sight of her body, completely naked before him, would distract Mark enough that he would agree. She tossed the tiny pink garment onto the back seat, and stood facing him, her tan flesh reflecting the street lights. "Because." she said. "Because if I get an A, I want it to be because of me, not because you used your power. I appreciate it, I really do, Mark. But I'd rather do it myself, ok?" Mark stared at her for a moment, considering. A cold breeze blew over Jennifer's flesh, and she suppressed the shiver that threatened to course through her. Be impassive, she thought. Act like you don't care that you're naked out in front of everyone. Be patient. She waited for his answer. Finally, he shrugged. "Very well, slave Jennifer. I did it for you, but if you would rather I did not, well, hey, it saves me the effort." He shut the back door and moved over to the other side. Jennifer, very aware of her nakedness, waited for him to unlock her door. She looked around to see if she had gone unnoticed, and she had not. A guy was staring at her as he walked down the sidewalk, his mouth slightly opened and his eyes on her body. Jennifer's heart beat faster, but she found she didn't care that much that he stared. She was naked, and there was nothing she could do about it. If he found her nakedness so entrancing, then so be it. Mark finally unlocked her door, and she gratefully stepped in and closed the door behind her. As Mark started the car, Jennifer pressed into the seat for warmth. He had been right; the seat cover really did feel nice against her bare skin. She rubbed her back against it, enjoying its softness. Mark pulled away from the curb. They were driving along now, through the campus. Fortunately it was dark enough that no one could really see her in the car very well. Nevertheless, she crunched herself down until they left the campus. As they pulled out into the surrounding suburban area, she allowed herself to stretch out and relax more. They stopped at a stoplight, and Mark looked over at her while they waited. "You have a lovely body, Jennifer." he said, his eyes running appreciatively over Jennifer's bare flesh. She blushed slightly. "Thanks." she murmured. Having found her voice, she asked "Where are we going?" "Oh, nowhere in particular." He answered. The light turned green, and they started off again. "I mean, I didn't really have any place in mind. I thought we would just drive." He paused. "What do you think of the car? Pretty nice, huh?" "How did you get it?" Mark glanced at her as he drove. His voice was gruffer when he answered. "What do you mean? I used my power, of course." Jennifer was noticing that he drove awfully fast. She clutched the armrest. "Yeah...." Jennifer said. "That's what I thought." She watched the surroundings pass by outside. "So what do you think of it?" "It's nice." she said. Her voice was very neutral. A Mcdonalds flashed by her window. A man on a bicycle. Jennifer tried to let her mind float with the passing scenery. Then they roared up a ramp onto the freeway. She heard Mark speak again. "How did you think I would have gotten this car?" he asked. "Oh, I don't know." she answered. She found it hard to focus; her eyes were hypnotized by the scenery flashing by outside. "Maybe you're rich or something? I suppose it doesn't matter. It's all kind of the same anyway." "What do you mean?" Jenny really didn't know what she meant, but she tried to explain anyhow. "You know. You can do things the rest of us can't. Get cars without even thinking about it. You have that power." Jennifer noticed they were passing the other cars on the road now, roaring by them. She nervously glanced at the speedometer. They were going close to 85. Her fingers pressed into the arm rest, and then she remembered to fasten her seatbelt. The strap scraped against her nipple as she crossed it over her body. When she looked at Mark, he was grinning. "Nervous, Jennifer?" he chuckled. "Like I said, you need to learn to have faith in me. I'm not going to crash us. I'm a good driver...I just like to drive fast." Mark reached over and ran his hand affectionately over Jenny's cheek to her hair, then returned to driving. Was that supposed to comfort me? Jenny asked herself. It didn't help very much. Jenny saw the flashing lights flickering on the dashboard seconds before they heard the siren. "Uh, oh." said Mark. He started to pull over to the side. Jennifer whirled backwards to see a police car behind them. "The police!" she said. She stared at Mark, panic dancing in her eyes. "Oh, god, Mark, now you've done it, the police are pulling us over, and I'm completely naked...I knew you should have slowed down! What are they going to do?" Jennifer had never been pulled over in her life. She started to turn around to get her clothes out of the back seat. Then she felt Mark's hand grab her shoulder and whirl her back around. "No." he said. His eyes were flashing at her, and his voice was hard. "Did I tell you that you could put your clothes back on? Huh? Answer, slave Jennifer." Jennifer crumpled, pressing back against the seat as if she was trying to sink into it. "No, master." she whispered. "No, I didn't. So just sit back and let me handle things." They were on the side of the road now, and the police car was settling in behind them. When Mark spoke again, his voice was softer. "I told you to trust me, Jennifer. I can handle the police, you don't have to worry about that." Behind them, the door of the police car slammed shut, and they heard the clicking of the cop's heels against the pavement. Mark rolled down the window. The policeman had a thin, hardened face, and he wore reflective sunglasses. Jennifer saw Mark's smile reflected in them. "What can I do for you, officer?" he asked. The officer did not return the smile. "You were driving pretty fast there, mister." he grunted. Mark only grinned. "No, I wasn't." He answered. "No, you weren't." repeated the officer. He sounded confused. "Yeah, I guess you weren't. Sorry, mister." He started to walk off, and then Jenny saw her naked body reflected in his sunglasses. He stared at her, and Jenny felt the urge to shrink into the seat. The cop turned back to Mark. "What's with the girl?" the officer asked. "Oh, her?" Mark answered nonchalantly. "Don't worry about her, officer. She's my girlfriend. She likes to go nude all the time; it turns her on." The officer considered Mark's answer, then looked back at Jennifer. Jenny cringed under his appraisel. Then the man spoke again, this time to her. "Is that right, miss? Are you doing this by choice, or is he forcing you into it?" He waited. Jennifer opened her mouth to answer, then closed it again. Mark was watching her, his eyes intense. She started to speak again, to say yes, it was by her own choice, but she couldn't. She closed her mouth again, and glanced nervously at Mark. That was all the answer the cop needed. He started to tug on his gun. "Ok, mister. Why don't you get out of the car." Mark turned to glare at Jenny, then looked back at the cop. "You trust me." he said. His voice was cold. The officer went rigid; his hand fell away from his gun. "I trust you." the policeman repeated. "I've done nothing wrong. You have no need for me to get out of my car." The policeman shook his head. "Yes. Yes, you're right. I'm sorry to bother you, mister." The policeman started to walk back to his car. "Wait." said Mark. The cop froze. Mark turned to direct a cold stare at Jennifer, then he turned back to the policeman. "You trust me, but you don't trust the girl. She looks suspicious. She is undoubtedly carrying concealed weapons in all the clothes she is wearing." Jennifer gaped at Mark, then looked at the policeman, who had fixed his eyes on her. The cop spoke; his voice was low and dangerous. "Would you please step out of the car, miss. And for your sake, keep your hands behind your head." Jennifer stared at Mark helplessly; he only watched her, amusement dancing behind his eyes. The policeman had started to unsnap his gun, and Jennifer numbly unlocked her door and opened it. The cold air rushed in over her nakedness. She stepped outside, and was careful to keep her hands behind her head. The policeman came over to her, and she saw that Mark, too, got out of the car and walked over to stand beside her. "Up against the car, please." commanded the cop. "What?" asked Jennifer, staring at him. The man walked over to her and pushed her roughly toward the car. "I said up against the car! Put your hands against the side!" Jennifer let herself be pushed up against the car, her mind racing. She felt exposed, her hands pressed against the top of the car, her bare ass jutting out behind her. The tips of her nipples brushed the side of the car. It was cold, very cold. She heard Mark speak. "Take your time." he told the cop. "And be gentle." Jennifer stared over the car into the street, watching other cars drive by oblivious to her plight. Then she felt leather clad fingers slipping between her legs, touching her on the inner thigh. "Spread your legs." commanded the officer. Jennifer gasped. Her face hot, she yielded to his pressure, scissoring her legs open. Now she felt very exposed. Open to his exploration. The officer started on her upper arms, patting them with his hands. She felt the black leather of his gloves against her bare skin; it was a strange, cool feeling. Then he slipped his hands under her arms and started to pat his way down her front. His hands lingered at her breasts, pressing them against her body, and her breathing became heavier as a wave of -something - pleasure? - went through her. It was a strange feeling. His thumbs slipped over her nipples, casually, and then he was moving down the flesh on her belly, patting her gently, looking for concealed weapons in her bare flesh. His fingers brushed against the edge of her pubic triangle on either side, and then started down her long legs. The black leather slipped down the front of her legs, and then started up the back. Finally, he reached her ass, and he paused. She tensed in anticipation, and her breathing was very ragged. She could feel herself getting slick between her legs, even as she told herself that she shouldn't be enjoying the experience. Somehow that only made it more erotic. Finally, she felt the leather press against her buttocks, and his patting motion had become more of a sliding. One leather finger slipped, almost against its will, tracing the line of her ass up to the small of her back. She gasped; the police weren't supposed to search people like this, were they? The finger started down her her again, slipping between her buttocks, sliding gently over her asshole, moving slowly, closer and closer to her wet pussy. Then the leather finger perched against her swollen lips, stopping, almost considering. Jennifer waited, breathing heavily, her whole body anticipating. Waiting. Then the finger slipped inside her. She gasped again, the leather slick with her juices, feeling herself penetrated, his finger moving inside her like some tiny leather penis. Abruptly, he pulled his finger out, and quickly, roughly, patted his way up her back. He turned away, and Jennifer almost collapsed against the car. Her legs trembled. The policeman turned to Mark. "She's clean." she heard him say. Then his heels were clicking, going back to the police car. Jennifer felt her flesh press against the cold car; she was aware that she had been sweating, even amidst the cold. A hand patted her on the shoulder; Mark's hand. "Come on, Jennifer. Get back inside the car." he said gently. She allowed him to open the door for her, and then collapsed inside against the seat covers. The space between her legs was sticky with her fluids; she wished she had something to wipe it off with, to keep herself from getting it on the seat covers. The police car drove off. Mark got in beside her, and started the car. Jennifer leaned back as they pulled away from the side. Once again, she had been allowed to feel pleasure without reaching any sort of climax, and it left her restless. As they drove along, her eyes drifted to Mark's crotch. Was he hard or not? She couldn't tell through his pants. She wondered if he would decide to have sex with her. More importantly...did she want him to? Jennifer thought about this as they drove along, her restlessness (horniness?) fighting with her pride. Finally, she decided she did not. It wasn't worth it, after all, wasn't sex more than just a means of obtaining satisfaction? It should be more, anyhow, it should be a love- thing, Jenny told herself. And she certainly did not love Mark. Nevertheless, Jennifer desired some sort of climax, so she started to move her finger up and down on the tip of her clitoris, massaging her way to an orgasm. She had her hand slipped under the strap of the seatbelt, so that Mark couldn't tell she was doing it, and she used all of her self-control to keep from gasping out. Finally, she felt it shudder through her. It was a small orgasm, but her body still tensed and buckled, and she let a gasp escape her mouth, despite all her efforts to keep it in. Mark whirled, staring at her. "What are you doing?!?" he blurted, then his eyes went from her hand at her clit to her flushed face, and he knew. "What did you do? You just made yourself have an orgasm?" He gaped at her. "I didn't tell you to do that!" Jennifer shook her head, breathing heavily. "No." she said. "But I needed to. After that policeman, I just had to feel myself come." Mark looked back at the road. "I didn't say you could do that." he said. "You weren't supposed to do that." "Oh?" asked Jennifer, curious. "What was I supposed to do?" "Nothing!" he thundered. "Nothing until I tell you to do something! You've been a bad slave, Jennifer." He shook his head. "Would it please you to know that I enjoyed it, master?" Jenny ventured, tacking the 'master' at the end in hopes of calming him down. "Enjoyed it? Of course you enjoyed it! It was an orgasm! No, you'll have to be punished, my slave. You'll have to learn that you don't get off until I let you. You don't come until I finally decide you can come. Until then, you'll have to wait. Yes, you'll have to be punished." They had left the freeway, and Mark was looking around, driving aimlessly, as if looking for something in particular. Finally, he seemed to find it. He parked at the side of the street. "Here is your punishment, Jennifer." he stated. "You will get out, and walk over to that stop sign way over there." She could see the sign he pointed at; it was about fifty feet away. "Wait there and I'll pick you up." Jennifer looked at the street he wanted her to walk down. It was a fairly wide street in a seedy neighborhood, with two lanes going both directions. Not a particularly busy street, but busy enough that at least someone would see her. Even worse, she could see a bum sitting at a bus stop, and a bunch of little kids playing outside an apartment. She would have to walk right past them, completely naked. Jennifer turned to Mark, to beg for something, anything else to do besides this. But he wasn't putting up with it. "Get out." he said, and Jennifer felt herself compelled to leave the car. The compulsion didn't leave until she found herself standing on the sidewalk, watching Mark drive off. Watching him leave her. She looked down the street. This was the worst he had ever done. For all she knew, he was gone for good. He had left her in the bad part of town, completely naked. "No." she thought. "Learn to have faith. Mark wouldn't do that. He wouldn't!" She whispered this vehemently. It was either believe it or go mad. A car honked as it drove by; a man in the passengers seat howled out the window at her. It scared her. She retreated into the shadows. Again she looked down the street. This won't be over until you do it, she told herself, and she forced her legs to start walking. She passed the bum first. He stared at her legs the entire time, and for a moment she was scared that he would reach out and try to touch them. But apparently he was too drunk to do anything more than gape. Other cars drove by. One man started to pull over, then apparently decided against it, and drove off again. This really shook her. Another lady stuck her head out the window, and screamed at her in some language that seemed to be mostly l's and g's. The kids watched her from a distance, and she heard them talking, heard the words "tittys" "boobs." Finally they all ran into the apartment, long before she could get near them. As she passed by, she saw them staring out the windows at her. Then she passed an alleyway. And looking down the alley, she saw a hungry pack of teenagers. They were sitting, talking amongst themselves, but as she passed, one saw her and pointed her out. "Hey, check the naked chick!" he called. The others immediately focused at Jenny. Oh, shit, she thought. Oh, god. She started to walk faster. Where the hell was Mark? "Hey, whereya going, whore?" One yelled, and they all stood and started walking towards her. Walking towards her purposefully. Jenny freaked out. She started to run. "Hey, she's running!" "Get her!" Shoes slammed the pavement behind her. Jenny was a runner; she liked to run. Most of the guys couldn't catch up with her. She left them all behind, all but one. One that caught up to her and grabbed her arm, almost wrenching it out of its socket. He caught her, and she rebounded as he pulled her back. Back into the pack. He wrapped his arms around her waist and held her tightly. The others approached; they smelled of cheap liquor. They held out their hands, twisted into claws, moving them to her body to pinch and grab. She struggled, but could not do any more than make them all laugh at her fear. "Let's screw the bitch." one said. Rape, thought Jennifer. She felt cold. Helpless. And then Mark was there. "Let her go!" he screamed. Jennifer felt the arms around her grow limp and fall. Mark ran over. He turned to one. "You're crippled." he told the guy. The guy fell to the ground screaming, his legs crumpling under him. Mark turned to another. "You're a dog." The man fell to all fours and scampered off. One of the other members pulled a knife and moved as if to strike at Mark. "Eat it." commanded Mark. Jennifer tried to turn away, but she couldn't. She stood spellbound as the teenager stuck the knife into his mouth and tried to push it down his throat. Blood started to drip from his mouth, but the man couldn't stop. He got the blade about halfway down before he collapsed unconscious. The other teenagers were running away from Mark and his frightening power. Mark suspended the man who had caught Jennifer by telling him to stop. Then he screamed at all the others. "You all eat shit!" Jennifer didn't want to think about what that would mean for the teenagers. Mark turned to the last guy, who was frozen helplessly. "You." Mark said. His voice was full of rage, burning with hostility. "You tried to hurt my Jennifer." The man trembled before Mark's wraith. Then Mark turned to Jennifer. "Jenny, what do you want me to do with him? I give his fate to you to decide." "Oh, Mark." said Jennifer. She really didn't know what to say. "Tell him to turn himself in, ok? That's all I want." Mark smiled, and before Jennifer knew it, he was kissing her. He pulled away. "You're too nice." he told her. Then he turned to the guy. "You heard that? You'll turn yourself in. You'll confess to every crime you've ever done, including this attempted rape, and then you'll turn over a new life. You'll try to be an outstanding citizen. Ok? Do you understand?" The guy nodded mutely, tears running down his face. "Now, get hard." The man's eyes opened in surprise as a bulge appeared at his crotch. "You are about to have the biggest orgasm of your life. Can you feel it? Your balls are just fit to burst with jism. How does it feel? Good?" The man moaned. "Good." And Mark slammed his foot into the man's balls. The man screamed and collapsed to the ground, clutching his crotch and screaming. He continued to scream as Mark led Jennifer back to the car. He told her to get dressed. "I'm sorry about that, Jennifer." he said as she put on her clothes. "It wasn't supposed to have gone that way. I tried to control it, I did, but I couldn't. I didn't know about that alley." "You can never control everything." Jennifer murmured as she slipped her blouse on. "No, no, I suppose you can't." He watched as she finished putting on her clothes. "Jennifer." Jenny felt his power washing over her. "I want you to never, ever have any nightmares about what almost happened here. Ok?" "Ok." she said. They got back into the car, and Mark drove her back to her dorm. They drove in silence. Finally, they arrived at the dorm parking lot. Mark stopped the car, without a word, and waited. Jennifer grabbed her physics books and her test, and opened the door. She was just about to step out, when on a strange impulse, she turned around and pressed a kiss against Mark's cheek. He turned to stare at her in surprise. "What...?" he started. "I'm learning to have faith." she said simply, and before he could respond, she had stepped out of the car and was running back to the door of her dorm. To be continued... This story has been brought to you by Danny Reinker. Also by the number '3' and the letters 'J' and 'U'. All comments, etc. to dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu. Occidental college does not directly support this story, but it does support my right to write and post it. Thank you for your support. Laters! -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer V X-Moderator-Review: 9: needs editing but developed impeccably Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf mild dom nc series Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Sat, 3 Apr 1993 19:25:54 GMT Archive-name: controljen5 Story follows: Disclaimer: Kinda nonconsensual. This is the fifth part of the Controlling Jennifer series. It was actually twice as long, but for space reasons, I had to cut it in half. This is the first half. The next half appears as part 6. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Controlling Jennifer V: Splices of Life Part I "Your boyfriend called." Jennifer glanced at Darlene as she walked in. Darlene was smiling at her; a taunting kind of smile, the kind Darlene gave Jennifer when she thought she knew something. Jennifer put down her bookbag and sat down on her bed. Amy, the blonde girl from down the hall, was sitting on Darlene's bed reading a Newsweek. She looked up from her magazine to smile at Jennifer, a smile that echoed Darlenes. Between the two of them, Jennifer felt very much like she was on display. She glanced between the two of them, trying to decide who Darlene was referring to. She finally ventured a guess. "You mean Mark?" she asked. The expressions of dismay rapidly transforming to intense interest on both Darlene's and Amy's faces told Jennifer she had guessed wrong. She sighed. "No, actually I meant Jacob. Who's Mark?" asked Darlene, her glittering eyes fixed on Jennifer. Jennifer looked down. "Jennifer, hon... you met a guy and you didn't tell me?" Jennifer pretended to shuffle through her notebook. "I swear, you two." she murmured. "You act like a couple of interrogators." "Of course!" chirped Amy. "We're girls! We're supposed to gossip!" She bounded over and sat next to Jennifer. Amy was always full of energy, and acted kind of ditzy; almost the stereotypical blond, except her frame was somewhat squat and she was more of an athlete than a socialite. "Come on, Jen! You're supposed to tell us everything. Whose Mark?" Amy leaned forward in anticipation. Jennifer retreated over to Darlene's bed. "Close the door, will you, Amy?" she said. Amy's eyes lit up, and she jumped up to slide the door silently closed. "Wow! Big secrets, Jen?" Amy plopped onto Jennifer's bed, sitting cross-legged. "No, no big secrets." said Jennifer. If only they knew, she thought to herself, then went on. "I just don't want Jacob to burst in on me. I kinda don't want to see him right now." "He gave me a message for you." reported Darlene. "He wants to know if you want to go to the frat party with him tomorrow." She regarded Jennifer in silence for a moment, then spoke. "Rumor has it Jacob and you are a couple." she remarked ominously. "Jacob complained to me that you are ignoring him. He sounded kind of angry..." "What's up, Jen?" burst Amy. "You can tell us!" Amy leaned forward in barely controlled anticipation. Jenny just shook her head. She felt like crying. "I don't need this right now, I really don't." she mumbled. She looked up at Darlene and Amy's expectant faces. "Jacob's been mad at me. I slept with him twice, and he thinks that makes me his girlfriend." "You slept with him TWICE?!?" burst in Amy. Jennifer stared at her, and Amy put her hand over her mouth. "Oop. Sorry. Go on, go on!" "I don't WANT a boyfriend!" declared Jennifer. "I keep telling him that, but he refuses to accept it. He's being a real asshole about it. I mean, guys can sleep with girls, and it means nothing, right? But I sleep with Jacob and suddenly I'm his." She hit the bed with a fist and frowned. "It makes me mad." "Maybe you shouldn't have slept with him the second time..." ventured Darlene. Jennifer sighed. "No kidding. But I didn't know he would get this way. Besides...well...the first time was really good. For both of us. The second time was bad though. Anyhow, I think the first time has him a little obsessed with me. He said it was the best sex has ever been for him." "Wow!" said Amy. "Jennifer, you slut!" Amy grinned, and Jennifer could tell she was only teasing, but the word came uncomfortably close to how Jennifer had felt about herself with Jacob. "Men are assholes." declared Darlene. "So who's Mark?" Jennifer sighed. What a question. Mark was a mind rapist, he was a manipulator, a controller. He was a dangerous being with far too much power. He was also a romantic, in his own twisted way, and he seemed to genuinely care for Jennifer. "Mark's another asshole." she said bitterly. "Is it Mark Haflin?" asked Darlene. "Red-brown hair?" Jennifer shook her head. "No, different guy. I don't think you know him." "Where'd you meet him?" asked Amy. "Ah...in the park one day, while I was walking to the track to run." "You don't run anymore, do you, Jen?" Darlene interrupted. "Ah, no. I haven't for a while at least." Darlene nodded. "Yeah. I'd noticed you had stopped. Sorry to interrupt, go on." "Mark." Jennifer said. "You ever have one of those guys who seems to really care about you, and does all these things for you, but he also acts like a complete arrogant bastard? That's Mark." "Have you slept with him?" asked Amy. "Amy!" snapped Darlene. "What a question!" "No." said Jennifer, and that too brought up a chaotic jumble of thoughts, arguments she had gone over again and again. It all came to the same question; why not? "No, I haven't slept with him." "That's good." Darlene approved with a decisive nod. That was Darlene; when it came to other peoples relationships, she took on the crisp mannerisms of an army general. "Makes things less complicated." Jenny sighed. "You don't know how complicated things are." she said. "Jacob is bothering me, but at least I can understand him. I don't understand Mark at all. He's the strangest person I've ever met. Every time I think I've got him placed, he does something completely different. It's so... confusing." "Well, I'll help you with Jacob." announced Darlene. "I'll talk to him and tell him that you aren't interested in being his girlfriend, and to leave you alone. Mark, on the other hand, you'll have to handle on your own." "No, Darlene, don't do that. I can deal with Jacob. Just let me take care of him, okay? It'll sound bad if you tell him. I need to do it." Darlene shrugged. "You sure?" "Yeah, I'm sure." said Jennifer. Darlene waved her hands at Jennifer, her way of indicating she was cleaning her hands of the situation. "Fine. He's all yours." "Hey, Jen! You want to go to a dance tomorrow night up at Borris?" asked Amy. Borris hall was a dorm to the north of the campus, known for its high freshman population. "A bunch of us were going to go, and you should, too. It'll get your mind off of things. Have some fun, maybe meet some new guys." "Yeah." agreed Darlene. "Plus, you won't have to worry about Jacob seeing you, because he's going to the frat party." Jennifer considered it. She hadn't gone to any parties since she had met Mark, and the idea appealed to her. She liked to dance. "Yeah, that sounds like fun. I'll go." "Good." nodded Darlene. "We were going to hit Pizza Hut for dinner, then go to the dance around 8:30 or so. That should be late enough for things to have started up there. Dress to kill." Amy giggled, and her bright eyes danced over Jennifer. Jennifer smiled. At least she had friends. "The lasagna isn't bad, but the chicken...urgh!" Jennifer's eyes went wide, and she could feel herself unconsciously shrinking down in her seat. It was the next day, and Jennifer was eating lunch with a girl in her Chinese Culture class named Ann Pajaro. Ann was a math major, an intense young lady with cold dark eyes and a mind like a computer. They traditionally ate lunch together after Chinese Culture, a class they both took to fulfill requirements and a class they both disliked intensely. Ann, with her usual lack of subtlety, twisted around and looked to see what was distressing Jennifer. "What?" she demanded. "Don't look! It's Jacob. I don't want to talk to him. Quick, pretend you don't see him." Jennifer covered her hand with her face, hoping he wouldn't see them. "Too late." said Ann. "He's coming this way." "Darn." muttered Jennifer. They watched as Jacob and some other guy wandered their way back to where the two girls were sitting. "Hey, Jennifer." said Jacob, and he took the seat next to her. The other guy, a dark-haired man with thick muscles, took the seat next to Ann. Probably another wrestler, or a football guy. Or both. Jennifer forced cheer into her voice. "Hey, Jacob." she said. "How are you?" "We need to talk." he said. Jennifer fought off the urge to sigh. Talk, yeah, right. The same talk they had had before. It never solved anything. "About what?" "You know about what! Jen, can we go somewhere private?" "I can't do that. I'm eating with Ann. Can we talk later?" The dark-haired man spoke. "I'm Greg, by the way." Jacob ignored him. "Damn it, Jen! You always want to talk later! I'm not going to be put off this time!" "Hi, I'm Ann." said Ann to Greg. "What are we going to talk about, Jake? What is there new to talk about? We've had this talk before. There's nothing more to discuss!" "Yes, there is." Jacob said, his voice hard. "Jennifer, I don't see why you have to be so stubborn!" He looked at Ann and Greg, then back at Jennifer. "Look, let's go to another table, all right?" "No, Jacob! Don't you understand? No! I don't want a boyfriend right now. You're nice, but right now, I need you to please leave me alone! Okay? Please, Jacob." She pleaded. "I need you as a friend right now. Stop trying to complicate things." "Oh, a friend." spat Jacob. "And do you screw all your friends, then?" "Jacob! Stop it!" Jennifer recoiled with shock at the low blow and the hostility in Jacob's voice. "No, Jenny, I'm not going to stop." he snarled. "I'm not going to watch you go around and act like there's nothing between us." "Jacob, there IS nothing between us." Jennifer interrupted. The whole argument was making her sick. She wished Jacob would stop. "The hell there isn't! Those two times don't mean anything? You just using me to get off? Fuck that, Jennifer! I'm not going to let you just set me aside like some toy." His voice was rising now. Jennifer looked at Ann and Greg, who were watching the conversation like spectators at a boxing match. Finally she stood. "I'm leaving." She said, her voice tight. She lifted her tray and walked away. "Wait, I'm coming too!" called Ann behind her, and soon Ann was walking beside her. Behind them both, they heard Greg telling Jacob to cool down. "Wow. Some argument." said Ann. "I didn't even know you two were even dating." "We aren't." said Jennifer. "I'm sorry you had to see that, Ann." Ann just shrugged. Afterwards, Jennifer went back to her room and stared at the ceiling. Why do I have so much problems? She asked herself. Why me? Jennifer put on her sad music, her recording of the Pachelbel Canon, and for the first time in a long while, Jennifer let herself cry. And when she couldn't cry anymore, she thought about Mark. Later that day, Jennifer went with Darlene, Amy, and four other girls to Pizza Hut. Jennifer had been contemplating skipping the whole thing, but at the last minute, Darlene had firmly ordered her to go. "It'll cheer you up, Jen. I don't want you lying around the room all night feeling sorry for yourself. You might start getting suicidal or something." Jennifer felt left out at the restaurant. Everyone else seemed to be in such good moods, talking, laughing, carrying on. Jennifer tried to make an effort to enjoy herself, and to be good company, but she had a feeling she was doing a bad job of it. They were done with dinner at 7, and all went to Amy's room, where Amy brought out some bottles of alcohol, and started passing out cups. Darlene tried to get Jennifer to drink. "C'mon, Jenny, it'll loosen you up, make you have more fun." But Jennifer was not a drinker; it was not that she had something morally against it, she just really didn't like the taste. Besides, wasn't alcohol a depressant or something? She couldn't afford to get even more depressed. She refused their offers of liquor, and felt really left out as the rest of them rapidly got plastered and started laughing at silly things. "Darlene, I think I'm going to go back to the room, ok? I really don't think I'm going to be good company." Darlene threw her arm around Jenny. "Nooooo! No, Jennifer! You can't leave me here. Ohhh, Jen, I feel so drunk. You'll have to take care of me, I need you, don't leave...." So Jennifer stayed. Around 9, they all decided to stagger along to the dance. "Jen's our guide!" they declared with glee. "She's the only one sober. Lead us there, Jenny!" So Jennifer put herself in control of the group of giggling, silly girls, all who were a great deal happier than they had any right to be, and she led them up to the lobby of Borris hall. The party was going at full force, and the dance floor was packed. The music was loud and blaring, music that didn't need to be much more than a beat, and usually wasn't. Lights flashed across the ceiling, and people swirled on the dance floor. The group of girls formed a circle on the outskirts of the dance floor, and started to dance. At first, Jenny had a hard time getting into it, but after awhile, her body started to follow along to the rhythm, and she let her mind loosen as she looked around at all the happy people on the dance floor. That's what I like about dancing, she thought to herself. Everyone always looks so happy. Gradually, Jennifer felt herself start to loosen up, and every time she looked at Darlene and Amy, they smiled back at her, drunken, infectious smiles. Soon Jennifer started to smile back. She let her eyes wander around the floor, occasionally seeing people she knew as they swirled and gyrated to the crushing beat that swept through them all. The group of girls started moving more toward the center as people left the middle of the floor and others appeared on the ouskirts. Pretty soon, everyone around Jennifer was in motion. She felt adrenalized, and it was a good feeling. She let the music move her body, in motion almost without conscious thought. It was then she saw Mark. He was sitting on the side of the dance floor, in one of the seats by himself. For once, it appeared as if she had seen him before he had seen her. He was watching the people dance on the floor. Jennifer faltered in keeping the beat. What do I do? She asked herself. Should I talk to him? Jennifer looked at Darlene and the others, swaying happily. What if Mark saw her when she was with all her friends? What would happen? Jennifer decided she would rather not have Mark meet her friends, or vice versa. She poked Darlene. "I'm going to the bathroom." she shouted over the loud music. "I'll be back." Darlene smiled and nodded, and Jennifer made her way through the swirl of bodies towards where Mark sat. Mark saw her approaching, and he smiled at her. A different sort of smile, a less confident, more peaceful smile than his usual. Jennifer walked over and sat next to him. "Hi, Mark." she said. "Hey, Jennifer." He leaned towards her to be heard. "Wow, I didn't know you were here." She nodded. "I figured you would see me eventually." She paused; so far the encounter had been very ordinary, and she wanted to keep it that way. "Are you here to dance, Mark?" He shook his head. "I don't dance much." he told her. "No, I just like to come to these things to watch other people dance. It's so...chaotic." He let his eyes roam around the floor, and then he focused on her again. "This is where I first saw you, you know." "It is?" Jennifer leaned forward to hear him better. Mark looked out onto the dance floor again. "Well, not here, but at a dance. Remember that Halloween party? That's when I first saw you, dancing out there, in the crowd." Jennifer watched his profile as he spoke, watched the lights flashing over his face. His eyes had an unfocused, blurred look to them. Then he was looking at her again. "I like the way you dance, Jennifer. There's...something about it, I can't say what it is. That's what attracted me to you. You seemed to go into it with such abandon. Like it was your last night to be alive, and all you wanted to do was to dance until you dropped. And, I don't know, it was sexual, but not openly sexual. More subtley sexual, I guess, like you were acting sexy but didn't know it, and that only made it more erotic. I really liked watching you dance, Jennifer." "I'm not a very good dancer." she murmured, a little embarassed by his words. Her face was hot, and she tried to keep the blush from showing. It was the intensity with which he spoke; she found it hard to believe she could bring forth such intensity in anyone. Of course, Mark wasn't just anyone. "Yes, you are. You're one of those that you can tell likes to dance, just be watching." He said. He stared at her; his eyes were like two glowing embers in a fire. "Jenny, want to play another game of controlling Jennifer? I have an idea." "Game?" she raised an eyebrow. "Is it all a game to you?" "Well...no, not really. I'm sorry, Jenny, that's what I've been calling our little sessions. Games of controlling Jennifer. I'm sorry, it's just for lack of a better term. Do you want to? I mean, of your own free will. I'm not going to use my power or anything." Jennifer looked into his eyes, and was intrigued by the eager sincerity she saw there. And she also had to admit that she was curious as to what Mark had in mind for her. "You promise? No power?" "I promise. All of your own free will." he said, and she believed him. For all he had done to her, he had never lied to her. "Okay. And if I don't want to do what you say, I won't and you won't make me, okay? I'm just doing this because I'm curious as to what you want me to do. That's all." Mark grinned and nodded. "Uh huh. Don't worry, Jennifer. If you don't want to do what I say, you don't have to. It's up to you." Jennifer waited for him to continue, but he didn't. "So what is it?" she pressed him. "Are you wearing a bra?" Jennifer looked down at the white blouse she was wearing. You could faintly make out the white lace of her bra under it. She also wore a pair of tight black jeans; perfect for dancing. "You know I am. Stop teasing me." she said. "Go and take it off." he said. "And then what?" she asked. "First the bra." he ordered. Jennifer watched him intently, but he would say no more. Finally, she walked over to the bathroom. It was crowded with girls putting on makeup and stank with the smell of beer and cigarettes. Jennifer waited for a stall, and once inside, slipped off her bra and shoved it into her purse. She examined herself; her nipples were slightly visible, but only if you looked for them. The blouse was pretty loose anyhow, so it was not overly apparent that she wore nothing beneath it. Satisfied that she was not too exposed, she walked out of the bathroom. At first she couldn't see Mark. He wasn't where she had left him. She searched the room with her eyes, and finally saw him in a new seat on the opposite wall. Jennifer started to make her way over to him, and then realized she would have to squeeze her way through the mass of dancers to reach him. As she pushed through, her breasts brushed against backs, against fronts, against arms. Once a hand, moving in some dancing motion, ran into her chest. Jennifer pushed past quickly before the owner of the hand could realize what he had bumped into. All in all, no one else really seemed aware that she wasn't wearing a bra, but by the time Jennifer reached the place where Mark was, she herself was very aware of how free she was under the blouse, and her nipples were hard and sensitive. She dropped next to Mark, feeling her breasts sway with the motion, and her nipples scrape against her blouse. "You did that on purpose." she accused. "Did what?" he remarked innocently. "I had to move over here to show you what I want you to do." "Ok, what is it." Mark just pointed. Jennifer followed the direction of his finger to see a guy sitting against the wall. He was small, hunched over in his chair, staring forlornly at everyone dancing around him. Jennifer knew his type. They wanted to dance, but were too scared. Too self-conscious. "See him?" asked Mark. "Yeah. What do you want me to do?" "I want you to pick him up. Ask him to dance. Hold him tight and turn him on. You know." Jennifer regarded the guy. "He's gonna think I'm a slut." she said. "No, no, Jennifer. More likely he's going to think its the best day of his life. I'm asking you to make him happy, Jennifer. Let him have a fun night for once." He offered her his hand. "Come on, Jenny. Are you game?" Jennifer shook her head. "I can't believe you're making me do this." Mark only shrugged, and kept his hand toward her. Finally, she took his hand, and they walked over to where the guy was sitting. The guy looked up at them expectantly. Mark leaned close. "You can't see me or hear me." He told the boy, and released Jennifer's hand. The boy suddenly was staring right through Mark; he shuddered, then turned to Jennifer, staring at her with wide eyes. She noticed with distaste that he was one of those boys who looked at her chest almost as much as he did her face. "Hi!" she said. "Do you want to dance?" She asked him. The boy looked down and shook his head. "Uh...no thanks, I'm not really a dancer." Jennifer looked at Mark; he was urging her on with his eyes. She sighed and sat down. "Hi!" she said. "I'm...uh...Marcie." It occurred to her at the last minute that she may not want him to know her real name. "What's your name?" "Oh, I'm Derrick." he smiled quickly at her, then looked away. Jennifer again looked at Mark. "Put your arm around him." Mark said. "Press yourself against him. Get him hot and hard." Before Jennifer knew it, her arm was draped over Derrick's shoulder, and her breasts were pushing into his side. She could feel Derrick's quivering hesitation under her, his temptation. She glared at Mark. "You said you wouldn't use your power." she hissed. He only smiled. "I didn't." he said. And with a start, Jennifer realized he hadn't. She was doing this all on her own. Aw, what the hell, she thought. She leaned in close to John's ear. "Come on." she said. "I want to see you dance with me. I promise I'm a good dancer. Don't turn me down." Derrick's body was hot against hers. "O...okay." he stammered. Jennifer brushed a slight kiss against his cheek. That oughta blow his mind, she thought to herself. I wonder what Mark thinks. She looked over at him. Mark was staring at them, and the strange expression on his face caught her completely by surprise. She thought he would be pleased at her willing compliance, but instead he looked sad. She stared at him a moment. He always does this to me, she thought. Whenever I think I've got him figured out. What's he thinking? He caught her looking, and beckoned them out onto the dance floor. Jennifer watched him a moment longer, trying to decipher his thoughts, but couldn't. Finally, she turned back to Derrick, and led him out onto the dance floor. To be continued written and directed by Danny Reinker Comments, critiques, the occasional compliment to dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu Costumes by Mr. Guy. All of the persons, places, things in this story are fictional, and all similarities are purely fictional. (Except Borris hall is obviously based on Norris hall here at Oxy.) Occidental does not directly support this story, but supports my freedom to write and post it. Hmm. I'm pretty sure that's everything. -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer VI X-Moderator-Review: 9: continually interesting Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf mild dom nc series Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Sat, 3 Apr 1993 19:37:12 GMT Archive-name: controljen6 story follows: Note: this story is a little nonconsensual. Press 'n' if you want. This is the sixth part of the Controlling Jennifer series. This story is (c)1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Controlling Jennifer VI: Splices of Life part II Jennifer drifted them to the outskirts of the dance floor. She noticed Derrick was glancing around nervously, like he was going to take off all his clothes or something, and wanted to be sure no one was watching. Jennifer sighed, confident that the music would mask her sigh. She had never understood those who were embarassed to dance. What was the big deal? Why was it so frightening to dance when you were in a room full of people, all of them dancing? She leaned in towards Derrick. "Come on, let's dance!" she told him. He just smiled sheepishly, and looked around at everyone. Jennifer shrugged, deciding she would have to set an example. She started to move her body to the beat, smiling at Derrick in encouragement, and then she remembered Mark, and abruptly she stopped. She tried to stop herself from glancing at him, but she was a second too late. Mark was watching her, she had almost forgotten. He was staring at her, an expression of melancholy etched on his face. His eyes were lost and unfocused. What's wrong with him? she wondered. For once I'm doing what he wants, on my own, without his power. Why isn't he happy? Maybe he likes to use his power, she thought, and succeeded in generating a shudder down her spine. She turned back to Derrick, and thought about dancing with him. The moment was growing long, and she could tell Derrick was getting uncomfortable. He was looking back at his seat, his eyes longing for it like a security blanket. Jennifer started to dance again, drawing his eyes to her, and when she thought about herself dancing again, she almost stopped, but kept going by will alone. The problem was, for some reason, her dancing seemed artificial. Jennifer usually danced by letting her body go, allowing the music to manipulate it while her mind floated over other things. But everytime she tried to do this, she would always think of Mark, watching her. How could she dance while he watched? It made her self-conscious. She probably felt a lot like Derrick. Derrick had not started dancing. He would start, then stop immediately after, shaking his head and laughing at his own foolishness. Jennifer's eyes narrowed. How do I get him to dance? she asked herself. How do I do it when Mark's watching me like he is? Before, Mark had always told her exactly what to do; this was the first time she was supposed to act...well, slutty...all by herself. Who cares if he dances, she decided. Just turn him on, Jennifer. Think if you were him, and you were faced with an attractive girl, what would you want her to do? Jennifer tried to imagine this, but couldn't think like a guy would. Only the obvious things occurred to her, and she certainly wasn't going to do them in a public place. No, she would have to be more subtley slutty. Now the only problem was, how? Derrick was starting to dance now, which was good. It made her feel a little less silly, although his dancing style kind of reminded her of Frankenstein walking; stiff and goofy-looking. Now how to turn him on? She thought about dancing slutty, shaking her breasts to make it obvious she wasn't wearing a bra, grinding her hips into his pelvis, basically dancing dirty. She actually gave her breasts an experimental wiggle, but it felt very false to her, and she stopped. It just wasn't a natural part of dancing for her. She continued to dance, as normally as she could with the awareness that Mark was watching her in the back of her head. The music stopped, and another song came on in its place. Jennifer danced. During this next song, she tried something else. She danced forward, coming teasingly close, and gave him what she thought was a seductive smile. She wasn't very experienced with this, and forgot to calculate in his awkward dancing style; as a result, she came a little too close to him, and he accidently pushed his arm right against her breasts. It must have been obvious that she was braless; he stared at her and then looked away, blushing furiously, before he even saw her attempt at a seductive smile. Oh, well, it had probably worked better than she intended. She tried this again, this time slower, coming closer and closer until he became uncomfortable and backed away. For some reason, she thought this was funny. If she came close to him, he would always back off. It was like he feared her. Finally, her heart beating, Jennifer moved up until her face was less than two inches from his, and, her eyes locked on his, slowly licked her lips. She smiled immediately after, feeling very silly, but Derrick was hooked. His dance faltered, and he seemed hypnotized by her. Jennifer danced back from him, and, very aware that his eyes were on her, pretended to stretch. She arched her back, trying to stretch her blouse and get it tightly pressed against her breasts. She pretended to have her eyes closed, but she was looking out through the crack in her eyelid, and she could see Derrick's eyes were fixed on her breasts. She felt a thrill spin through her stomach. And she knew Mark was watching, too. She opened her eyes, and overcome by temptation, looked down to see how much of herself she was exposing. Her nipples were dark circles under the fabric, and she gasped at how visible they were. She quickly eased out of her stretched position, fighting to control her blush, trying to appear cool and deliberate. She needn't have bothered. As she continued to dance with Derrick, his eyes stayed on her breasts more than anything else, waiting for those dark nipples to resurface. It bothered her, even though she knew she had pretty much asked for it by giving him a peek in the first place. She didn't particularly like being reduced to a pair of breasts. Determined to get him to acknowledge all of her, she slid up to him and linked her hands behind his neck. He abruptly stopped dancing, and stared open-mouthed at her. She moved up against him so there was a faint but undefined contact between their bodies; just enough to tease. "Is it just me or is it *hot* in here?" she whispered in her sexiest voice. He gaped at her. "You have to go to the bathroom." It was Mark's voice. Mark was beside them. "Uh...excuse me, I have to go to the bathroom, I'll be right back though!" Derrick pulled away from her, and raced off to the bathroom. Jennifer watched him rush off, then turned back to regard Mark. "Why'd you do that?" she asked, puzzled. Mark walked back to the seats on the side of the room, and after a moments hesitation, Jennifer followed. He sat down, and she sat beside him, waiting. "I thought you might need a break." he said finally, looking on to the dance floor. "I mean, you've been dancing for fifteen minutes already. I thought you might want to sit down or something." Jennifer shrugged. "I wasn't really tired. Anyways, I could have taken a break by myself. No one was MAKING me dance. Derrick would have let me go if I had asked." "Derrick." said Mark. "What do you think of him?" He faced her, his eyes lost in shadows. She thought for a moment. "I...don't know." she said. "He seems kind of awkward, I guess. A little socially inexperienced. But nice, otherwise he would have probably felt me up by now." Jennifer considered this, and was surprised at how casually she reacted to the thought of Derrick feeling her up. She crossed her arms over her breasts, pressing the fabric against her nipples. Mark turned away from her again. "I think you're doing too good a job." he said coldly. "You're teasing him too much. He's going to expect something." Jennifer considered this, pulling the dark strands of hair from her eyes. "That's all right, isn't it?" she remarked. "After all, if he gets too demanding, you can always do some control thing to him, right? I mean, I hate to suggest it, but its an option. Anyway, I don't think he would do that. He seems like a gentleman. Too shy to go any further than I'll let him." "And how far will you let him go?" demanded Mark. "Mmm? Oh, I don't know....actually, it's been kind of fun so far. I suppose I'll have to stop eventually." She shrugged. "Who knows? I'll decide that when I get there." She peered at him. "What's wrong? I thought you liked me making a fool of myself in front of guys." Mark didn't say anything for a while, and Jennifer finally decided he wasn't going to answer. Finally, he said "This is different. I don't like Derrick." "Why not?" she ventured. He glared at her. "I just don't." And that was all he would say. "Hi, Jen!" Jennifer heard the voice from above her. It was Darlene's voice. She looked up to see Darlene. Darlene's dark curly hair was in a disarray, probably from dancing, and she had goofy smile that undoubtedly came from being drunk. Jennifer was acutely aware of Mark sitting beside her. "Hi, Darlene." she said quickly. "Look can I talk to you later?" Darlene ignored her, dropping onto the seat beside her. "Why'd you stop dancing, Jennifer?" she asked, leaning back against the back of the seat and resting. "Oh...I just got a little tired, that's all. Where's Amy and the others?" Jennifer wished desperately that Darlene would go away. "Oh, them. They're over there, still dancing." Darlene pointed vaguely towards the dance floor. "I guess I got a lil' tired, too. Whatcha up to, Jen?" Darlene blinked at Jennifer, her eyes unfocused and dreamy. "Me? Oh, nothing, really..." Jennifer started. Then she noticed Darlene was looking past her. "Hi!" said Darlene. "Hi." said Mark. He had entered his formal mode of talking again. "I'm Mark. You must be Darlene." He offered his hand, and when she put hers forward to shake it, he instead took her hand and kissed the back of it. Darlene giggled. "Wow. What a gentleman." Darlene said. "Yes, I'm Darlene...Jen's roommate. Heh, but you probably know that already. Jen...Jennifer's told me about you." Darlene smiled and blinked. Jennifer felt like she was in some weird dream. She leaned back and numbly followed the conversation that was occurring over her, feeling powerless to do anything but listen. Mark's wore a carefully neutral smile. "Oh? Hopefully good things." His eyes shifted quickly toward Jennifer, perhaps looking for a clue as to what Jennifer had told her. "Not really anything." admitted Darlene, grinning. "Jen likes to keep her secrets. She's just mentioned your name. I didn't know you were going to be here. Jen didn't tell me." She gave Jennifer a sly poke with her elbow. Jennifer ignored it. "Oh, she didn't know. It's just coincidence that we showed up at the same place at the same time." said Mark. "Oh. Well, I guess I'll leave you two alone then. I can sense Jennifer wants me to take off." Darlene grinned at Jennifer, and was about to stand up, when she noticed Derrick hovering uncertainly near them. "Oh, hello." she said. "Hi." muttered Derrick, or at least his lips moved. Then, louder. "Marcie...you wanna dance again?" His voice was a little bolder now. He's gaining confidence, thought Jennifer. Oh, god, how am I going to explain this to Darlene? Darlene looked at her confused. "Marcie...?" she started. "I'll tell you about it later." whispered Jennifer. Darlene grinned widely. "Damn right, you will. I'll talk to you later, 'Marcie.'" She giggled, then stood and walked off. Derrick watched them uncertainly. "Marcie?" he asked toward Jennifer, his voice uncertain and nervous. Jennifer flashed him her brightest smile. "Ok, but why don't you get me a cup of punch first. Please?" He smiled back, and seemed almost grateful to go off and get her a drink. She watched him go. "I had to do that." she explained to Mark. "I just know Darlene's going to be watching me now." "I don't think so." observed Mark. He pointed over in the distance. Darlene was talking to some blonde guy, and seemed oblivious to anything but his words. "Looks like she has other things on her mind." "Oh!" said Jennifer, watching them. "I hope she'll be okay. She's drunk, you know. I told her I'd watch out for her." "Aw, she'll be all right." said Mark. "I know that guy; he's not the type that would take advantage of her. Don't worry, she's safe." Jennifer looked back at Mark, regarding him openly with her dark eyes. "For a second there, I thought you were going to introduce yourself as my master or something." she said. Mark shook his head and smiled. "No, no. Don't worry, Jennifer. I wouldn't do that to you." Then his smile faded. "Here comes Derrick." he said. Derrick was returning, clasping a cup of punch like he held the holy grail. He held it out to her with a wide grin. Jennifer smiled in thanks as she took it, and drank it down, surprised at how thirsty she was. Dancing takes a lot out of you, she supposed. The music had changed; the tempo had slowed down, and Jennifer could see that the people on the floor were dividing into couples. She saw Darlene slow-dancing with her blonde guy. Derrick followed her gaze, out to the people slow dancing. Then he turned back to her and offered his hand. "You wanna dance, Marcie?" he said, smiling sheepishly, as if expecting to be refused. "Ok." she said, and took his hand. He led her out to the dance floor, and uncertainly started to put his hands around her waist, swaying at least a foot away from her. What the heck, thought Jennifer, and she clasped her arms around him and pulled him close to her. After all, she was supposed to be turning him on, and slow dancing from a distance seemed so awkward anyhow. Their bodies pressed together. Jennifer could feel a hardness below against her waist; his erection. He's hard, she thought. Wow. He seemed uncomfortably aware of this, too, and tried to pull away, but she wouldn't let him. Instead, she started to move slightly, rubbing herself slightly against his hard-on. Wow, she thought, I hope Darlene doesn't see me. She'll think I'm a real slut. Jennifer grinned, and leaned her cheek against Derrick's shoulder, swaying back and forth in time to the music. Derrick was tense against her, but gradually they fell into the rhythm of the music. At first his hands fell limply around her back, but as he became more confident, he started to hold her tighter. They swayed together. "Wow." he whispered in her ear. "You're...you're really beautiful, Marcie..." Jennifer wondered whether he was really serious or if his words were just motivated by lust. In the end, she supposed it didn't really matter. "Thanks." she whispered back. She felt him sliding his hands up her back. If he needed confirmation that she wasn't wearing a bra, he received it when his hands couldn't find any straps. She hugged him, the pressure of his hard penis pressing into her. Well, she thought. I've succeeded in turning him on. The only problem was, she was a little turned on herself. She enjoyed her control over Derrick; her ability to make him hard, and to make him want her. She knew she had to stop sometime. She didn't want to go too far. But as Derrick tightened his grip on her, and she felt the slickness develop between her legs, she hoped she would have the strength to resist her own temptation. Abruptly, Derrick loosened his hold on her, and she looked up at him to see what was wrong. He was staring at her, his breath coming fast, and as he started to pull her to him again, she could feel his heart beating rapidly beneath his chest. He was slowly bringing his lips to hers. They were going to kiss. This was wrong! It wasn't the way it was supposed to happen. A slow kiss while holding each other tight and slow dancing, that was a love thing, wasn't it? It was too romantic, too personal. What if it was his first kiss? What if it meant a lot to him? Jennifer didn't want to be some strangers first kiss. She twisted her head, moving her lips from their collision course with his. She could feel his hurt, his feeling of being rejected. "I'm sorry, Marcie." he whispered. "I didn't mean to...." "Shhh." she said, and his voice drifted away. They swayed together. Jennifer felt lost. She wasn't a seductress; she took things too seriously for that. And she felt bad for rejecting him. If only it hadn't been so perfect, then she would have kissed him. "Derrick..." she said. "Yeah?" Jennifer leaned up and mashed her lips against his, pressing her body tightly against his hard-on. It wasn't a soft, romantic kiss; it was a hard, lustful kiss. A passionate kiss. How Jennifer imagined a slut would kiss. She could feel Derrick tense up like a statue against her; his lips were frozen with shock. As a final touch, as she withdrew her mouth, she let her tongue dart out and caress his lips. There, she thought with satisfaction, that should do it. "What the fuck is this?" A voice, beside them. Mark's voice? No, not Mark. Jacob's voice. Jennifer recoiled from Derrick, gasping in shock, and spun to look beside them. It was Jacob, all right. His eyes were bloodshot and bulging, his muscles were tensed, and he was holding a beer bottle, which he took a chug of as she watched. He had two others with him. Jennifer didn't know either of them, but they both were big football players, and they were both obviously drunk. "You little slut!" snarled Jacob. "You just can't keep your hands off any guy, can you?" He drank some more of the beer. "Jacob, go away! You're drunk." said Jennifer. She wished Derrick would go away; Jacob wouldn't dare do anything to her, but he might do something to the man she had been kissing. But Derrick was frozen in his tracks, like an animal frozen in the headlights of an approaching truck. "Drunk, damn right, I'm drunk, Jenny-fer. Fucking slut Cailly. I come looking for you, and how do I find you...fishing for another dick." He glared menacingly at Derrick. "Who the hell are you?" asked Derrick, his voice quavering to be firm. Jennifer wanted to scream at him to shut up. "Who am I? WHO AM I?" bellowed Jacob. People were staring now. "I'm her fucking boyfriend, is who I am! The boyfriend of the girl you were just frenching!" "You have a boyfriend?" Derrick gaped at her. "You're not my boyfriend, Jacob!" Jennifer shouted. She turned to Derrick. "Derrick, be quiet, ok? Please?" she pleaded. "You fucking prick." growled Jacob, and he gave Derrick a shove. Derrick staggered backwards. Before Jennifer could react, Jacob had latched a hand around her wrist. "Come on, Jennerfer." he said. "I said we need to talk, now we're gonna talk, whether you want to or not." He started to pull her from the floor, ignoring her struggling. Then, a shout. "What's going on here!" a voice demanded. Mark's voice. Jennifer gasped in relief. Always, always, he was there to save her. Jacob glared at Mark. "Mind your own business, mother fucker!" he growled. Mark took in the situation at a glance, and he smiled. He actually smiled. "I would prefer it if you called me 'master.'" he said casually. Jacob glared at him. "I said, fuck off,...uh....master." Jacob's face contorted with confusion. "Good." nodded Mark with a grin. "I would also like it if you would refer to yourself as 'this wretch.' I usually like things to be named as they are. Don't you?" Mark's grin was easy and confident. "Now let the girl go." Jennifer felt Jacob's hand grow limp around her wrist. She quickly pulled out of his reach, and retreated to stand by Mark. Jacob, along with his two buddies, stared at Mark in drunken astonishment. "Now, then. What seems to be the trouble? Perhaps we can work things out." "Uh." said Jacob. He looked confused. "Well, you see, thas my girlfriend beside you, an' she wuz necking with some other guy, and...uh... this wretch was just gonna take her outside and have a talk with her..." Mark whirled to face Jennifer. "You have a boyfriend?" he asked. She shook her head. "He's not my boyfriend! He just thinks he is. Tell him to go home, would you, Mark? Tell him to go home and sleep it off." Mark shook his head. He had a malevolent glint in his eye as he looked back on Jacob and his two friends. "No, I don't think so. Let's try and work things out. Where's the guy Jennifer was kissing?" Mark quickly spotted Derrick. "Derrick! You can see and hear me now. Come over here." Compelled by Mark's power, Derrick walked forward. He twitched nervously, glancing at Jacob and his friends uneasily. "This is the guy?" Mark looked at Jacob, and pointed at Derrick. Jacob nodded. "Mark, what are you doing? Please, just let this end." begged Jennifer. She had thought Mark would stop things, but it appeared that he was having too much fun manipulating the situation. "Quiet, Jennifer." And Jennifer felt his power catching hold of her. When she opened her mouth, her voice wouldn't work. She closed her mouth again and waited. "Now, then, Derrick. Let's hear your side of the story. What was happening between you and Jennifer?" "It wasn't me!" babbled Derrick. "I don't even know any Jennifer..." Mark rolled his eyes. "I meant Marcie. Marcie is her nickname, her real name is Jennifer." Mark flashed Jennifer a quick smile. "Oh." said Derrick, also glancing at Jennifer. Then he started babbling again. "I didn't know she had a boyfriend, otherwise I wouldn't have done anything, honest! I swear I didn't know." Mark shook his head critically. "What kind of a loser are you?" he said, his voice edged in contempt. "Don't be a wimp! Stand up for the woman. This is Jennifer! Don't you think she's worth fighting three guys for, even guys as big as these three?" Mark must have used his power, because Derrick's eyes became as hard as steel. He pointed a finger level at Jacob. "Hey." he said, his voice flat and dangerous. "You leave Jennifer alone." Jacob grunted and lunged for Derrick, but Mark simply said "Freeze." and Jacob froze where he was. "Let's take this outside." said Mark. "You three, Derrick, and you, too, Jennifer. Follow me." It was not a compulsion, at least not for Jennifer, but Mark must have known she would follow anyway, just to see what he would do. Jennifer strained against the bond he had put on her mind, but as hard as she tried she could not speak. She mutely followed them out into the parking lot. Mark walked them over to a secluded corner. "Now then." said Mark. "I see only one solution here. You're going to have to fight for Jennifer. It's the only way to decide things." Mark peeked at Jennifer, smiling. She was trying to scream at him, but couldn't make the noise. "This wretch against him?" asked Jacob eagerly, sizing up Derrick and apparently not finding much. "I'll gladly fight him for Jennifer." declared Derrick fearlessly, balling his hands into fists. "No, not you against him." Mark answered Jacob. He waved at Jacob's two friends. "All three of you against him." Jennifer's mouth fell open. She prayed Mark wasn't serious; they would kill Derrick. Derrick wilted slightly, then pulled himself together. "I'll gladly fight all three of them for Jennifer." he swore. "Let's go, then." said Jacob. "Wait!" said Mark. He grinned. "One more thing to make this fair." He turned to Jacob and his two friends. "You three. Every time Derrick touches you, it will feel like he is burning you. Ok?" Jacob and his two friends watched him in confusion; they did not understand. But that was all right. They would soon enough. Mark nodded. "Very good. Let the games begin!" Jennifer was tugging hard on Mark's arm. "Urg!" she managed to croak. "Don't worry, Jenny." Mark told her, grinning. "This'll be over soon enough." He stood back to watch, and Jennifer, helpless and silent, watched with him. Jacob strolled over towards Derrick. Derrick lunged in with a clumsy punch, and Jacob easily avoided it. He brought his fist up into Derrick's gut. Derrick grunted as the air was forced from his lungs. Jacob, on the other hand, screamed. He pulled his hand away, and it was bright red, blisters forming on its surface. He staggered back in shock. Jacob's two friends stared, astonished. Derrick recovered, and popped a blow toward one of the football player's cheeks. It connected, and the football player staggered back, clutching his cheek. Jennifer could see that it was also burnt, like Jacob's hand. The third guy backhanded Derrick, and Derrick fell, his lip split and bleeding. But the third guy's hand was also burnt. Derrick was apparently smart enough to figure out what was going on, because his next act wasn't to try another punch; instead he walked up to the third guy and threw his arms around the guy's body. The guy screamed, and struggled to free himself, finally breaking Derrick's grip. Instead of retaliating, he stared wide-eyed at Derrick, then turned and ran. Jacob and the second guy took in the situation, and followed their comrade in beating a hasty retreat, Jacob clutching his swollen fist. Soon all three were lost in the distance. Derrick looked proudly at Jennifer. "I've won you." he declared, his lip bleeding onto his shirt. Jennifer felt like crying, but she managed to keep it in. Why me? she asked herself. Why always for me? "No." Mark told Derrick. "Jennifer is mine. You will go back to your bedroom and go to sleep. When you wake up, you will remember all of this as a distant dream." And with that, Derrick's eyes blurred, and he turned and staggered away. And then it was just Mark and Jennifer, alone in the darkness. Mark turned to her. A tear had succeeded in making its way down her cheek, and Mark wiped it off with a finger. "Don't cry, Jennifer." he sighed. He took her in his arms; she was powerless to resist, and now the tears were spilling down her cheeks, staining his shirt, as she cried soundlessly. "It's not you, it's me." Mark whispered to her. "Sometimes I'm a twisted bastard. The power... well, it makes it easy to hurt. Far easier to hurt than to help." He hugged her. "Speak, Jennifer. I can't stand it when you're quiet." And she could speak again. She could hear herself cry, hear herself sobbing like a child. She suppressed her tears, pushing them away and reducing them to sniffles and stained cheeks. "Why'd you do it?" she whispered. "Why'd you make them fight?" "I don't know." he said back. "I don't know. Jennifer..." and pulled away from her, staring down into her eyes. "Kiss me, Jennifer." But she could only stare into his eyes, helplessly. She couldn't kiss him. "Kiss me, Jennifer." he said again, and this time his power washed over her mind. Compelled, she stretched up and pressed her lips to his. After a couple seconds of contact, she pulled back again. Staring at him wordlessly, waiting for his next order. Mark sighed. It was a deep, lonely sound, like the howl of a wolf in the distance. He pulled away from her, shaking his head. "Jennifer. Close your eyes and count to twenty." he ordered. It was his power again, and she closed her eyes, counting to twenty as ordered. And when she opened her eyes, she was all alone. To be continued Thus endeth this chapter. script by Danny Reinker Send complaints, psychopathic rantings, and compliments to: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu Occidental college does not directly support this story, but supports my freedom to write and post it. (At least thus far) All similarities between this story and real life are purely coincidental. Yes, that means Jennifer is NOT A REAL PERSON!!!!! Thank you....for your support. -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer VII X-Moderator-Review: 8: clever, proceeding interestingly Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf mild dom nc series Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Sat, 3 Apr 1993 19:44:47 GMT Archive-name: controljen7 story follows: Disclaimer: This story has very little solid wanking material. If you've been following it, you know what to expect. Well, here's part seven. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Thanks, all! Controlling Jennifer VII: Taking It Easy Part I It was the day after the dance. Jennifer hadn't really intended to go running; she hadn't even set her alarm to get up in the morning, thinking she would sleep late after the events of the previous night. However, come the next morning, she found herself wide awake at eight, and she really had nothing planned to do. So she decided to run. Jennifer hadn't gone running since the first day she had met Mark. At first it had been fear. Fear and shame. She hadn't wanted to risk bumping into Mark again, and even more, she had been afraid she would run into the student with the notebook and the disheveled hair-do, or the man with his dog, the ones she had seen that day. The ones that had seen her that first day, when Mark had her going around the park acting like a wanton slut. "Damn Mark." she muttered as she pulled on her shorts. Sometimes, she wondered how she had ever come to stop hating him. He had made her do so many things she hadn't wanted to do. He had turned her life completely upside-down. At times, he had made her life a living hell. "I think I still hate him a little bit." she said to herself. "I'm just not scared of him anymore." Jennifer felt like running. That had been her time to think, while she was running, and if she ever needed to think, it was then. The night before seemed more like a dream than anything else. When confronted with the daylight, it hardly seemed real. So much had happened. She had so much conflicting emotions to resolve. As Jennifer was lacing up her shoes, she glanced at Darlene lying comatose in the opposite bed. That was another reason to go running; eventually, Darlene would wake up, and from experience, Jennifer knew that Darlene usually had very bad hangovers. It was better to disappear and come back after she had recovered somewhat. Jennifer tightened her shoelaces, and quietly slipped out the door. It was a nice day to go running; cold, but not too cold. Despite the time, Jennifer felt very awake, and full of energy. The dorm was empty, as it usually was early in the morning, and Jennifer slipped out without seeing much of anyone. Someone was in the lobby reading the morning paper, and he glanced at her as she walked by. Jennifer didn't know him, so she just smiled and walked past. It was about a five-minute walk to the track, and she spent the time taking in her surroundings. It really was a nice day, and it made her feel a lot better over what had happened the night before. She listened to the birds chirping in the trees, and watched them fly overhead. The sun felt nice on her skin; it was still kind of cold, but that only seemed to make the sun feel warmer. She reached the path that made its way through the park area of the campus, and took a quick look around for anyone she might want to avoid. The park was fairly deserted; she saw more squirrels than people, and didn't see anyone she knew. Jennifer strolled down the path, humming a slow song she had heard the night before. She thought about the last time she had come this way, when she had first met Mark. I never actually did make it to the track, she reminded herself. Her mind idled on a squirrel jumping from branch to branch, almost following her. Deep down, Jennifer knew she was pushing back what she needed to think about, but that was all right. It could wait until she started running. For now, she would just enjoy the simple beauty of early-morning nature. Carefree, without human interference. Before she knew it, she had walked through the park and was on the track. A couple other runners were running laps, and they all looked faster and more serious than she was. "Just take it easy." she reminded herself. "You haven't run for awhile, Jennifer. Let your body get used to it." She moved over to stand behind the line that usually determined the beginning and end of her laps, and did a few token stretches. "You know, Jennifer." she said. "You sure talk to yourself a lot more now." She laughed, and started to run. Her pace was fairly slow, but she planned to make it up in distance. During the first half of the first lap, she could feel her legs readjusting themselves to the exercise. It felt good. Her body settled into a nice pace, and soon her mind was free to wander. And as she had expected, her mind drifted to the night before, and Mark. The whole thing was losing its reality now; it seemed more like a bad dream than anything else. She hoped she would never see Derrick again; the image of him with his lip bleeding and an expression of complete devotion on his face was burnt into her mind. Jennifer knew that if she ever saw him again, that image would flash before her eyes. She would undoubtedly see Jacob again, with his burnt hand, and she wasn't looking forward to that either. He was becoming so different; Jennifer remembered him earlier in the year as just a nice guy, always saying hello to her, always ready to give her a hand. He had accepted it before, when she had gently told him she wasn't looking for a boyfriend. "It's amazing what a little good sex will do." Jennifer murmured. There was no doubt Jacob was obsessed with her now. The way he had acted the night before, with a little alcohol thrown in...it was insane. HE was insane. Jennifer had never had to deal with a guy like that before. She didn't know what to do. Maybe Mark...? She had asked herself that question over and over before, but had never really considered it. Before, she had thought Jacob was something she could deal with herself. Now, she wasn't so sure. And after all, it would be child's play for Mark to use his power... Morally, she wasn't quite sure where she stood on the whole thing. Would it be wrong to have Mark use his power on Jacob? It seemed like it should be, but Jennifer couldn't see how it would be that wrong. After all, Mark had saved her from being almost raped by using his power, and she certainly didn't find anything wrong with that. How was this any different? Jacob was becoming more and more demanding of her, and he might eventually become dangerous. Jennifer was just watching out for herself, right? Anyhow, Jacob would be better off to just forget her; there was no way she would ever be for him what he wanted. Unfortunately, all this just sounded like justification to Jennifer. Could she justify using Mark to take away someone else's free will? Was it right? She couldn't decide. Mark, as usual, remained an enigma. He was always mysterious to her, his motives incomprehensible. Whenever she felt like she was getting a feel for the way he thought, he would turn around and do something completely opposite to what she thought he would do. At the dance, it seemed like he should have liked it when she started doing what he wanted without him using his power. Yet, he had turned cold, and had taken a complete and irrational dislike to Derrick. What was wrong with Mark? Jennifer wished she could understand him. Mark had said she was doing too good a job, but what did that mean? Why was that a bad thing? Shouldn't that have pleased him? Jennifer found her mind lingering over the images of dancing with Derrick, pretending to seduce him, and she found the images very tantalizing. Though she hated to admit it, even to herself, she had enjoyed herself. It was like Mark said, it wasn't like she was really truly being a slut. After all, sluts were sluts because all they wanted was sex, right? But that hadn't been Jennifer's motivation at all. She had just been giving Derrick a night to remember. "Making his dreams come true." she grinned. It was true that she had enjoyed acting the role of a seductress the night before, and she discovered she was actually looking forward to her next experience with Mark, her next 'game of controlling Jennifer', as he referred to their sessions together. This was probably the strangest thing to realize about the previous night. She had given herself to Mark's control of her own free will, and she had enjoyed it. For a moment, she actually thought of doing it all by herself. What if I just choose a guy, and try to pick him up? she asked herself. Just like Derrick? As soon as she realized she was thinking it, she disposed of the idea. It wouldn't be the same without Mark. It really WOULD be slutty. Plus, she didn't want to get into another mess like Jacob. Jennifer realized that she had lost count of how many laps she had run, and she was getting tired. Oh, well, that was probably enough anyhow. She ran to the next line on the track, and stopped, breathing hard. Sweat dribbled down into her eyes, and she pushed her hair back to keep it from dripping on her face. One more time around the track, this time walking. As she walked, she thought about Mark and his power. The one thing she worried about him was that sometime he would get mad at her, and use his power against her like he had used it against Jacob and Derrick. He seemed to genuinely care about her, but that didn't mean he wouldn't lose his temper and make her do something awful. The sun was beating down on her as she walked along the track, and she started to long for the shady trees in the park. Finally, she left the track, took a drink of cool water at the nearby water fountain, and made her way into the park, walking under the trees instead of on the path. It seemed as if Mark was expecting her. He waited, sitting on one of the benches, watching her as she approached. He said nothing, and his expression was unreadable. When she was almost to his bench, he spoke. "Hello, Jennifer." he said. "Hi, Mark." she stood uncertainly next to the bench, acutely aware of how sweaty she was, waiting for him to speak. "Can we talk, Jenny?" he asked. Jennifer nodded. "Okay." she said, and she sat next to him on the bench. A cool breeze blew through the shady group of trees, and she shivered. "How did you know I would be here?" she asked. He smiled slightly. "Oh, you always used to come through here at about the same time on saturdays, to go running. I used to come down here and watch you go by, before I first came up to you." He lapsed into silence again. Jennifer watched him for a moment, waiting to see if he would say anything more. When he didn't, she contented herself with looking at the other people in the park. Some others had arrived while she had been running: a student reading a book, a lady walking her dog, another group of students sitting on the grass talking. "Jennifer..." Mark finally spoke. "Do I scare you?" The question startled her, and she looked at him to see if he wore his confident grin, to see if he was playing another game. He didn't seem to be; his eyes blinked distantly at the grass. He seemed to be deep in thought. "Not you, really..." Jennifer finally answered. "I'm a little scared of your power, sometimes." "You know I would never hurt you, Jennifer. Not even with my power." he said quietly. "I know." she answered simply. "Not intentionally, anyway...but what if I do something to make you mad? How do I know you wouldn't use it on me then? You might..." She let her voice trail away. "Oh, Jenny. I won't get mad at you. You have to trust me." Jennifer watched a jogger go past them. "You say that, Mark, and probably you mean it, but how do I know? You have so much power...how do I know you won't lose your temper and use it on me?" He answered this question with silence, and Jennifer sighed and waited. Finally he spoke. "I wish I could get you to trust me." he whispered. Jennifer felt something within her leap. Was this the same guy she had thought a monster? She couldn't help but smile. If he was an ordinary guy, she would have thought he was being incredibly sweet. But he wasn't ordinary, and she still didn't trust him completely. She still remembered the fight from the night before, and how Mark seemed to enjoy making them fight over her. "Mark." she said. "In order for me to trust you, you'll have to show me that you trust me." Finally, she got him to look at her. "How?" he asked. "Tell me who you are." She said, her voice becoming intense. "Tell me about yourself. I know your name is Mark, but that's all. Let's just talk, okay? I want to find out about you." Mark turned away from her. "No." he said. "All you need to know is my name is Mark, and I'm your master." "Darn it, Mark!" she burst, startling both him and herself. She forced her voice down. "Mark, if you're going to be stubborn about this, then we aren't going to get anywhere. You say you want me to trust you, but you won't treat me like a human being. Please, Mark. Enough of this master/slave thing, okay? At least not today. Let's just be friends today, all right?" She waited for him to answer, but he only stared silently at the ground. Finally she sighed and stood. He looked up at her. "Come on, Mark." she said firmly, and picked up his hand. "Let's go play one of your games, okay? And while we're doing that, we can talk, all right?" She tugged at his hand, while he stared at her, looking at her as if she had gone mad. Finally, he shrugged and stood. "All right, Jennifer. Another game." As he spoke, she noticed that his confident grin was appearing on her face. That meant he had an idea. She waited, hoping it would be something she would be willing to do. "Here's what we're going to do, Jennifer." he said, starting to lead her through the park. "You want to know more about me. Okay, I'll answer your questions. But here's the deal. First you have to kiss someone here in the park." He seemed to consider this for a second, then nodded his approval. "For each person you kiss, I'll answer a question." "Anyone?" she asked. That didn't sound too bad. She looked around at the others in the park. She saw a couple guys, but didn't know any of them. "Anyone." he said. "Even girls." "Ew." she grimaced. "I'll stay with guys, thank you." He frowned. "It's your choice. I haven't finished the rules, though. You can initiate the kiss, but you can't be the one who breaks it. If he holds the kiss for an hour, you'll have to keep kissing him for an hour. And while he's kissing you, you'll let him do anything to you that he wants. He can run his hands all over you if he wants. But once he breaks the kiss, you're free again. All right?" Jennifer nodded, feeling the fear and excitement build within her. She wasn't sure she was going to be able to do it, but the idea intrigued her. "I'll try. But you have to be there to help me if anything goes wrong, okay?" "Of course, Jennifer." he said. "Shall we begin?" "All right." she said. "First question: what's your full name? The truth." He grinned, and shook his head. "I'm afraid not, Jennifer. First you have to kiss someone. Remember?" Then his eyes went wide as Jennifer put her arms around him and pressed her lips against his. He broke the kiss fast, faster than she had expected. She couldn't help but smile at his look of shock. "I'm disappointed." she murmured. "You could have done anything you wanted to me while I was kissing you. You just wasted a good opportunity." He pulled away from her. "I can do anything to you anytime I want, slave Jennifer." He snapped. She just grinned. "Your name? Come on, Mark. You can't say that didn't count." He scowled at her, and for a moment she thought he would refuse to answer. Finally, he growled. "Mark Robert Antonio." He turned away from Jennifer's triumphant grin. Mark started to walk again, and Jennifer followed him along. "Mark Robert Antonio." she said, smiling at him from behind. "So that's what it is. Mark Robert Antonio. Mark Robert Antonio." He turned around. "Yes, that's it. That's what it is. Jennifer, kneel down, take my hands and kiss each of my fingers. After each finger, bow and say your full name." He was using his power, and Jennifer felt it sweep over her and block out her will to resist. She fell to her knees, and took his left hand in hers. After she kissed each finger, she prostrated herself on the ground and said her name. "Jennifer Anne Cailly. Jennifer Anne Cailly." First the left hand, then the right. Finally she looked up at him. He was grinning. "That oughta teach you to act too triumphant. Remember, Jennifer, that no matter what information you get about me, I can always still control you." Jennifer ignored his words. She sat down on the ground, and turned away from him. "This is what I meant." she said, her voice cold. "You lost your temper, and you used your power on me. This is exactly why I can't trust you." "What?" asked Mark. He knelt down beside her. "Oh, come on, Jenny! I didn't hurt you, now did I? Come on, look at me. I really wasn't that mad." He tried to put his arm over her shoulders, but she shrugged it off. "No, you didn't hurt me, but you could have." She said, her voice still icy. She thought about whether she should pretend to start crying, but didn't think she would be able to do it convincingly. "Oh, Jennifer." he sighed. "Please...I promise...I won't use my power on you anymore today, all right? Does that make you feel better? Come on and stand up, let's play the game some more." She reluctantly allowed him to turn her head, and then allowed him to take her hand and help her up. Meanwhile, she fought to keep from smiling, fought to keep the reluctant, hurt expression on her face. I can control him, too, she thought to herself, and a small smile creeped unbidden onto her face. They started walking along again. Mark started talking, saying what a nice day it was, and how it was nice that the sun was shining. Jennifer wasn't really paying attention, her mind was swept up in thoughts of Mark, thinking of what questions she wanted to ask him, and enjoying her small triumph over him. After a while, she noticed a man sunbathing in the middle of a grassy stretch. He was fairly attractive, a tall man with dark eyes and a firm, athletic build. And best of all, he was alone. "I see someone." she murmured. "What?" asked Mark, glancing at her, then followed her eyes to the man sunbathing. "Wait here." said Jennifer, and she released Mark's hand. She explained "It'll make it harder if he sees me with another guy." She didn't wait for Mark's answer, but started to walk over to the man. Her stomach was flip-flopping, and she really had no idea what she was going to do. She wondered if she would really have the guts to go through with it. "Time to improvise." she said to herself, and then she was standing beside the guy. She shifted nervously, not sure how to start. She didn't need to. The guy looked up at her. "You're standing in my sun." he said. "Sorry." breathed Jennifer, and she sat down beside the guy. "I'm Marcie." she said. She didn't like the way the guy smiled at her, and the way his eyes wandered over her body in frank appraisal. His eyes had a predatory look about them, and he seemed to like what he saw. Jennifer couldn't help but feel like she had just jumped into his spider web. "Hi, Marcie." he said. "I'm Greg." He shifted onto his side to face her, his muscles flexing even as he performed this simple motion. "What can I do for you?" Jennifer had no idea what to say. "I just saw you here...sunning yourself..." she began, trying to come up with something. "I thought it looked relaxing." she finished lamely. Greg smiled, an easy, casual smile. Mark had his power, but this man had a power of his own. It was in his confidence. "Want to join me?" he asked. He pulled something from behind him. It was a bottle of sun-tan lotion. "I have plenty of extra sunscreen." he said. "Uh..." Jennifer tried to think of an appropriate response. "I was jogging..." "Oh, don't worry." His voice easily slid in and interrupted hers. "You're not really dressed for it, but you can tie your shirt off...that'll give you a little extra tan on your stomach. It's very relaxing, Marcie...here, let me help you." Before she knew it, she was on her stomach, and he was inching her t-shirt up her body. His touch was very methodical and gentle. "Just sit back and relax." he said, and something about his hands made her feel more relaxed. He lifted her shirt to the point where her back was exposed up to the black lycra top that bound her breasts. Then he was massaging sun- tan lotion into her lower back. "You have a beautiful body." he murmured. His voice had a gentle, hypnotic quality to it, and Jennifer felt herself relaxing under his touch. She idly wondered how many women he had seduced. What was funny was that she was supposed to be seducing him. "You don't mind me telling you how attractive I think you are, do you?" he whispered near her ear. "It's not a come-on or anything...I just think you have a very attractive body." "No..." she sighed. "I don't mind." She felt him gently prod her with his fingers, and she sensed he wanted her to turn over. She let him push her over, and he started rubbing sun-tan lotion on her stomach. "Your stomach is so firm." he said. "I can tell that you exercise." His massaging was more of a caress now, and he was slowly inching up her body, until he was rubbing sun-tan lotion just below her breasts. She waited, wondering if he would actually touch her breasts, but he didn't. She felt his hands move away, and then his hand brushed her cheek. She opened her eyes. His face was so close to her, she could smell him. There was something sexual about his scent, and Jennifer felt overpowered by his closeness. "You really are gorgeous." he said. "Can I kiss you?" She could only nod. At first she told herself, all she had to do was wait until he pulled away, and then she was done. She could go back to Mark. But Greg kissed her in a long, lingering kiss, and as he did so, his hands ran up and down her back and sides, making her feel weak. When he finally broke away, she could only sigh in pleasure, and lay back as he started to press his lips against her neck. His arm enveloped her, and pulled her to him, his hand roaming up and down her back. Finally he let her lie back in the grass, while he leaned over her and smiled. His hand creeped like a spider up her side, and slipped almost imperceptibly over her left breast. A shiver of pleasure and excitement raced through her at this forbidden touch. "Want to go to my place?" he murmured. His other hand was tracing circles on her leg, drifting up her shorts and sliding over her thigh. "Ooh." she said. Then she remembered what she was supposed to be doing. "Oh! I'm sorry, I can't..." She sat up quickly, and pushed him back. He did not seem particularly shocked, only displeased. "I'm really sorry, Greg...maybe another time, okay?" She blinked at him for a moment, trying to shake free of her desire, and rushed off before he could answer. "Suit yourself." she heard him say behind her. When she looked back, he was on his back again, eyes closed, sunning himself. Jennifer looked around for Mark. She finally saw him sitting under a nearby tree, waiting. She walked over, and he stood just before she reached him. His eyes appraised her. "You seemed to enjoy that." he said, his voice very neutral, and he took her hand. Jennifer mutely allowed him to lead her away. To be continued This story has been painstakingly penned by Daniel Reinker. Death threats, obsessive ramblings and declarations of love (female pref.) to: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu Occidental does not support this story directly, but (thus far) supports my ability to write and post it. Any similarities between this story and real life are PURELY coincidental. Jennifer is FICTIONAL!!! She is not based on anyone I know or desire. Hope you all liked the new tighter margins. -- "You can't help that. We're all mad here."-The cheshire cat, Alice in WL I speak for no one but myself. "A mass hysteria/a megalomania/reveal Dementia/reveal"-Metallica -- Moderator, rec.arts.erotica. Submissions to erotica@unix.amherst.edu. Please, no reposts, first drafts, or requests for "subscriptions," stories, GIFs, or archive sites. Newsgroups: rec.arts.erotica From: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu (Daniel Steven Reinker) Subject: Controlling Jennifer VIII X-Moderator-Review: 10: top-of-the-line Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Keywords: mf mild dom nc series Organization: Smut Lobby Date: Sat, 3 Apr 1993 19:52:48 GMT Archive-name: controljen8 story follows: Warning!: If you've read the previous parts of the series, you know what to expect. If all you are looking for is a good wank, go to "Debbie does DECA" and save CJ for another day. This is part 8 of the Controlling Jennifer series. This story is (c) 1993 by Daniel Reinker, and while I do not mind it being distributed, I would appreciate it if you would keep this header on it so folks can know who wrote it. Controlling Jennifer VIII: Taking It Easy Part II Jennifer let Mark lead her, waiting for him to say something. They walked across the grass and finally stopped in a nearby copse of trees. Jennifer took a quick glance backwards to see if the guy was watching her with Mark, but he had settled back and was leisurely tanning himself. She felt a little disappointed. Mark pulled at her, turning her back around to face him, his hands settling around her waist. He was smiling, and the shadows of the leaves above them played across his face. "For a moment there, I thought I would need to go in and rescue you." he said. "You were supposed to be seducing him, Jennifer, not the other way around." She looked away and smiled in embarrassment. "He was very... persuasive..." she murmured. "Uh huh." Mark grinned. Her eyes flickered back to Mark's face. "I get to ask you another question." she reminded him. "All right." he said. "Let's sit down." He released her and sat down, his back against the trunk of the tree they were under. Jennifer settled down beside him, folding her knees in front of her and wrapping her arms around her legs. She squeezed them to her chest, feeling the leftover excitement from kissing Greg sparkle in her stomach. It made her feel restless. "I want to know how you got your power." she said to Mark. "I already told you, first time we met." he said. "I just got it one day. Wished for it so hard that it finally came to me." Jennifer sighed. "Yeah, but there must be more. Tell me the whole story." she pressed. "Tell me all about your power, Mark. I want to know. Tell me how you knew you had it. Tell me what you did. Tell me about the other women you've controlled." He was silent, and his smile faded rapidly. Jennifer watched him, curious at his strange reaction. Finally he spoke. "I can't tell you that, Jennifer. Not yet. Maybe someday, but not right now." If anything, this made Jennifer even more curious. "Come on, Mark." she said, leaning against him. "Tell me. I really want to know." He shrugged her away. "No." he growled. "Ask something else, Jennifer." Jennifer pulled away from him, and turned her head to silently observe his profile. He was frowning, and his eyes were dark and scowling. Jennifer decided she shouldn't push the issue any more, and quickly came up with another question, one that had also been on her mind. "Am I the only one?" she asked. Mark's eyes returned to reality, and he looked at her, surprised. "Only one what?" "The only one you're controlling right now." she said. "Your only 'slave.'" He turned to watch a lady walking in the distance. His nod was almost imperceptible, but Jennifer caught it. "Of course." he said quietly. "There's only one of you, Jennifer." "Good." she said. The silence grew between them. Jennifer watched Mark, waiting to see if he would say anything, but he seemed to be retreating into his own thoughts. Absent-mindedly, he picked up a leaf and started to shred it in his fingers, methodically picking it into tiny portions. Jennifer watched him do this until her eyes wandered away, and she found herself watching a squirrel scurry up and down a tree off in the distance. It seemed to be dancing around the trunk with no purpose. As she watched, it scurried around, and then froze. It remained suspended for a moment, then scampered up the tree. She lost it in the leaves, and then saw it again, running like mad toward the end of a branch. It took a flying leap, soared through the air, and landed evenly on a nearby branch. Jennifer gasped, waiting for it to lose its balance and fall, and then laughed when it didn't. "What?" asked Mark. "Squirrels are funny." she said. "I was just watching that one over there." "Squirrels are crazy." Mark observed, as the squirrel tore through the tree at lightning speed. "I'd like to be a squirrel." Jennifer said. "It looks like fun." Mark nodded. "Jumping from branch to branch, looking down on everyone from above, being able to run up trees." "It just looks like it would be a rush." she said. She turned to grin at Mark. "Can you make me a squirrel?" "I can make you think you're a squirrel." Jennifer shook her head, smiling. "Not the same." she told him. She looked over to find the squirrel again, and saw two little boys standing under the tree. They both looked to be about six or seven, and the bigger blond one was instructing the dark-haired one to gather a pile of rocks. "Look at those two boys." Jennifer poked Mark with her elbow to get his attention. "What're they doing?" "Gathering ammo." Mark observed. Sure enough, the blond one picked up a pebble and happily whipped it at the squirrel. He missed completely, but Jennifer was still annoyed. "Those stupid little boys." she said. "Come on, Mark, let's go talk to them." She stood and brushed the grass off her shorts. Mark stood uncertainly next to her and followed her as she walked over to the boys. "What are you planning to do?" he asked. "I don't know. Talk to them?" Jennifer glanced back at Mark as she walked. "Maybe you can use your power?" "I will if I need to." Jennifer thought about this, and decided he was probably right. She could handle a couple of little kids by herself. The blonde kid turned to look at them as they approached; his face was covered with freckles, and his smile held a happy arrogance that made Jennifer instantaneously think he was a brat. "What are you doing?" she demanded. "Foolin' around." he answered, and as if to emphasize it, he hurled a rock up at the squirrel. He turned back to them and grinned widely. "Stop that!" said Jennifer. "Stop throwing rocks at that poor squirrel!" The child only sneered. "You ain't my mother." he told her, and threw another rock. Jennifer felt the urge to smack the little brat. Mark spoke. "Why don't you throw rocks at your little friend instead? And he can throw rocks back at you!" The child's eyes flickered blankly, and then he grinned and picked up a particularly big rock. The dark-haired kid was running towards them with another load of rocks. Jennifer hit Mark. Her fist connected with his shoulder, hard enough to hurt, and Mark turned to look at her, more surprised than actually hurt. "Stop them." she told him, and although she didn't say anything else, the threat in her eyes was perfectly clear. Stop them, or I'll hate you forever. "Stop!" said Mark, and the blonde-haired kid froze in mid- throw. Both kids turned to look at Mark. "Don't throw rocks, both of you. Don't throw them at anything. Find some nicer way to have fun." The kids stared at Mark and Jennifer for a moment, then they both grinned, and started to run off. "Wait!" called Jennifer. Both kids stopped, and Jennifer walked over to the dark-haired one. She knelt down beside him. "I'm Jennifer." she said. "What's your name?" The kid only blinked at her. "He's Jeff!" the blonde one chimed. "You're very cute." Jennifer told him. "Can I kiss you?" "Ewwww!!! Gross!!!" said Jeff, squirming, and he started to turn away, but before he could, Jennifer threw her arms around him and planted a kiss on his tiny lips. He pulled away quickly and ran away from her. "Gross! Gross! Gross!" he howled. "She kissed you! She kissed you!" taunted the blonde. "Now you gotta marry her!" There was more, more childish teasing and name- calling, but Jennifer turned her back on them and looked at Mark. "How dare you." she said, glaring at him. Her voice was low and cold. "They're just children. How dare you use your power on them." He only nodded, his eyes holding hers. "Uh huh. Don't take the moral high ground with me, Miss Cailly. I could see it in your face. You wanted to wipe that smile off the kids face just as much as I did. Only difference, is that I had the power to do something about it." As Jennifer looked into his dark, unrepentant eyes, she was torn by conflicting emotions. Half of her wanted to kick him right in the balls, to see him crumple to the ground in shock and pain. The other half of her, for some reason, wanted to cry. It was all the same with Mark, every time she talked to him. It was always him with his power, and his lack of any scruples in using it. Jennifer knew she shouldn't be surprised anymore by what he said and did, but it always managed to catch her unawares. She always fell into the trap of thinking of him as a regular person, sometimes even as a friend. But he was not a regular person, and he had no regard for other human beings. Including her. Jennifer felt like something was ripping her in two inside. Mark must have seen it in her face, because his expression immediately became one of concern. "Are you all right, Jenny? What's wrong?" "You." she said simply. "You're wrong." And she turned and started to walk away. Her face felt like she was going to cry, but she felt completely empty inside. Devoid of tears. "Jennifer!" she heard him call. He ran up next to her. "Jennifer, please... listen to me, huh? Look, I'm sorry...I'm so used to having the power, I just use it without thinking. Look, Jennifer, would you stop?" "You'll never change." she said as she walked. She didn't look at Mark, and was talking more to herself than to him. "You'll always be Mark. Mark, with the power to have anything that he wants. Mark, who doesn't care about anyone." "Jennifer!" he said, and he stopped in front of her. She angled to go around him, but he put his arms around her. She felt herself caught in his embrace, and tried for a moment to resist. But it was weak resistance, and after a moment, she let herself collapse in his arms. Now's the time to cry, some distant part of her mind said. If you cry now, you'll hold him in your palm forever. Play games of controlling Mark. But it all seemed pointless at the moment, and that made her feel more torn up than before. She wondered why she felt so much comfort from being in his arms, when he was the one that had made her feel this way in the first place. Mark was speaking. "I know it seems like I don't care about anything... like I'm the worst person in the world. It's the way it's always been for me, Jennifer. I had my power, and that power put me above everyone else. Try to understand how it is for me. I've never had to play the game...all I ask for is mine. Life has always been a joke for me. I can have anything I want. It...it just makes it easy to think about only yourself. I'm trying, Jennifer, really I am. Please, just give me time." "You can't have me." she whispered, her chin resting on his shoulder. "I'll do whatever you want, with your power, but it won't be me." "I know." he said. He hugged her fiercely. "Ask me a question, Jennifer." "Huh?" "You kissed that little kid, so I'll answer one of your questions. But little kids don't count anymore, okay?" "You're changing, Mark." she said. It was only after she said it that she really came to realize it was true. He was changing. "So are you." he answered. Am I? Jennifer supposed she was. She knew she had done things with Mark she would have never considered doing before. It was all very strange. They were both changing each other, and who knew when it would stop. "Why me?" she asked. "Is that your question?" "Yeah. Why me, Mark?" "Because. I saw you dancing at one time, and I just couldn't stand not knowing who you were. I couldn't stand not owning you. Felt like it would be a capital crime to let you get away." Jennifer felt the tightness of Mark's embrace, and felt her arms around him. "Life with you is an emotional roller coaster, Mark." she sighed. "I haven't had this many ups and downs since the first time I fell in love." Mark said nothing. They held each other for a moment longer, then Mark finally loosened his hold on her. Jennifer pulled away, feeling happier, and feeling even more displaced with the realization that she was happier. My life really is an emotional roller coaster, she thought. "What do you want to do now?" she asked. "It's getting close to lunch time." Mark said. "Want to go over to Mcdonalds? It's right across the street. I'll treat." "Okay." said Jennifer. She checked her watch, and felt even more disoriented realizing how much time had passed. It was indeed almost lunchtime, and she had gone running four hours before. They went to Mcdonalds. Jennifer wasn't very surprised when the manager waved aside the cost of the food. "Free for Mr. Antonio!" the portly man trumpeted. Jennifer had a cheeseburger, small fries and a coke. They sat down in a relatively isolated booth, and talked of very ordinary things. Mark told her he was a business major, a transfer student from a small college in Texas. He was majoring in business because he figured that with his power, he could make a fortune in business and still look pretty legitimate. Jennifer in turn told him she was hoping to go to law school and become a lawyer. All in all, the conversation was very pedestrian, and they avoided any topics that concerned Mark's power. Jennifer was surprised with how free Mark was being with information; it was safe to say that she learned more about him in that conversation at Mcdonalds than from all their previous conversations. Afterwards, they walked back to the park area of the campus. "Kiss one more person, Jennifer, and I'll let you go." Mark said as they across the grass. "I don't understand you, Mark." Jennifer said. "Why do you like it so much when I do things with other guys? Why don't you ever want me to do things with you?" "That's a question." he pointed out. "I'll answer it after you kiss another guy." "That was TWO questions." she said. "Answer me at least one, okay?" "Okay." he said. "I'll answer your second question. The reason I don't have you do things with me, is because it doesn't really mean anything to me. I can have any woman I want, any time I want. I could have Hilary Clinton if I really wanted her. Sex isn't really that big a deal for me." For some reason, this bothered Jennifer. "How many woman do you have sex with, anyway? Lots?" "That's another question." he said. "You still owe me one." Jennifer scowled at him, then shrugged. "All right. Where's a guy?" She looked around, and saw a guy sitting on a bench, reading. He was in an overgrown area of the park, and Jennifer thought it was likely that no one would see her if she kissed him. Plus, he was fairly attractive, with a lean body and a friendly face. Jennifer nodded, this would be her target. "I see someone. Stay here?" Mark saw the guy, too, and nodded his assent. Jennifer started her stroll over, and once again felt the bubbling excitement in the pit of her stomach. The I-can't-believe- I'm-doing-this excitement. Finally, she reached the guy. He was intently reading a calculus textbook, and didn't notice her approach. "Hi." she said. He continued to read his book. "I'm Marcie." she continued uneasily. He still didn't notice her, and she stood awkwardly, trying to figure out what to do. Then he looked up. "Oh, hi!" he said, and reached up to his ears. He pulled out two tiny black discs attached to wires: earphones. She hadn't even noticed them. "I'm sorry, I couldn't hear you...I had my walkman blasting." "That's all right." Jennifer said. She stared at the wires trailing down into his sweatshirt. Assumedly, he had a walkman down there somewhere. "I didn't even see those earphones!" "Yeah, they're pretty small. Great for listening during class." he grinned. "I'm Francisco." "I'm Marcie." Jennifer said. "Can I sit down?" "Sure...I've never been one to deny a pretty lady." he grinned again. Jennifer liked his grin; it was very open and friendly. Not like Greg's seductive grin, but a grin without expectations. Jennifer sat next to him. "So, what's up, Marcie?" he asked. "Can I be completely frank with you?" she asked. "Sure, go for it." "I hope you don't think I'm being too forward...but I noticed you over here...and, well, I just want to kiss you. Can I?" Francisco looked surprised, but not unhappy. "You want to kiss me?" Jennifer couldn't believe what she was saying, but the excitement was still building within her. "Yes. Can I?" He shook his head, still grinning. "Ok, what is this, a joke, huh? Where's the cameras?" "No joke." said Jennifer. Rather than trying further to convince him, she decided to just go for it. She craned forward and pressed her lips against his. He was hesitant at first, but rapidly got into it, pressing back. His lips parted, and his tongue pushed into her mouth. His arms enveloped her, and she was startled by the firmness with which he held her. Finally, he released the kiss, and Jennifer gasped. "Wow!" she said. "Was it as good as you expected?" he grinned. "Yeah. It sure was." And they kissed again. This kiss lasted longer, and his hands slipped up and down her back, pushing her body tight against his. His tongue once again slipped into her mouth, and this time she reciprocated, shyly darting her tongue against his. He smelled wonderful. Finally, they parted. Jennifer gasped again. "Still good?" he asked. She nodded. "Want to do more?" "More?" she asked. In reply, he started his way down her neck, sprinkling light kisses on her neck. He pushed the neckline of her t-shirt over her shoulder, and pressed his lips against the exposed skin. Jennifer felt a shiver creep through her, and she lifted her chin to give him easier access to her neck. "Oh, wow." she said. "More?" he asked. Jennifer was about to nod, but then a thought occurred to her. Excitement spilled through her, and she could hardly control her voice when she spoke. "All right...but I have to do something first, okay? I need to borrow your walkman. Is that okay?" He became suspicious. "What for?" "Please." she said. Before she knew what she was doing, before she could think enough to stop herself, she had pulled off her t-shirt and sports bra. Francisco stared in shock at her exposed breasts. Jennifer felt deliriously exposed, even though they were in an isolated area of the campus and probably no one else could see her. Jennifer let Francisco eye her breasts for a moment, then she pulled her t-shirt back on, and dropped her sports bra in his lap. "You can keep this as hostage until I return your walkman, all right?" He gaped at her, nodded as he scrambled to pull out his walkman. Jennifer quickly had it set up. The walkman was tucked in the back of her shorts. The wires wound up under her t-shirt, then came up disguised in her hair to the earphones in her ears. Mark would see nothing. Jennifer grinned. "I'll be right back." she said, and she turned and started walking towards where she had left Mark. He wasn't there, but materialized out of the trees as she neared. "You did it." he said. "I thought you were going to do more...why did you take off your shirt?" "He wants to do more." she said. "So do I...but I couldn't, Mark. I just couldn't bring myself to! Mark...I want him to touch my body...but I can't make myself let him! I keep getting nervous. Could you...could you use your power? Tell me to do it? Please?" Mark arched an eyebrow. "You WANT me to use my power on you? Are you sure, Jennifer?" "Yes!! I'm sure. Tell me to let him touch my body. Please, Mark? I want him to so badly!" "Okay, if you want it." he said, sounding a little dazed. Then he opened his mouth, and Jennifer could see his mouth moving. But at that moment, she had snaked her hand behind her back, and pressed the play button on the walkman, and her ears were bombarded with guitar. Mark finished speaking, and stood watching her. Jennifer took an evaluation of her mind. Nothing. His power hadn't worked on her. Jennifer smiled. She had figured it out. She had beaten his power. Then she let her eyes appear to go vacant, and walked back to where Francisco waited. She managed to conceal the walkman, and turned it off before she reached him. "What was that about?" he asked her. "I was talking to that guy...he's a friend of mine." Jennifer explained as she sat beside him. "He was the one who dared me to kiss you. I just told him to get lost." "What did you need the walkman for?" asked Francisco. "Be quiet and kiss me." Jennifer said, and she leaned into his Francisco's waiting lips. They kissed fiercely, and this time, Francisco slid his hands under her t-shirt and slid them over her breasts. Jennifer felt a tingle as his fingertips brushed her hard nipples, and felt herself start to get wet down below. At first his touch was tentative, but after she offered no objections, he began to press his hands against her breasts, firmly fondling them. Jennifer slipped her hands under his shirt, and felt his bare flesh. She liked the feel of his muscles; they were tight and firm. Francisco started to push her back, and Jennifer let herself be pushed down onto her back on the bench. Francisco lifted her t-shirt and took her left nipple in his mouth, letting his tongue play along the hardened tip, making her gasp. She felt exposed again, and thought about making him stop. But the pleasure was too much, and it felt so good to just lie back and let him kiss her. She gasped again as he began to circle her nipple with his tongue; it was a wonderful, hot, tickling sensation. She lost herself in the feel of his mouth, his lips pressing against her breasts. Then he lifted his head and spoke. "How far is this going to go, Marcie?" he asked. Jennifer sighed, closing her eyes. "Not much further, I'm afraid. Not here anyway." "Want to go to my room?" he asked. Jennifer considered it. "No." she finally said. "Maybe another time, but not right now." She sat up, letting her t-shirt fall back over her breasts. "Too bad." Francisco was grinning. "You almost made all my fantasies come true." "Mmm." said Jennifer, noticing the lump in the crotch of his shorts. She touched it with her fingers, and watched the contented expression that passed over his face. She slid her fingers down the front of his shorts, encountered the head of his penis. Enraptured by the arousal on his face, Jennifer took his hard-on in her hand and squeezed it lightly. "Ooh. That feels good." he sighed. Jennifer started to run her fingers over it, exploring it. She slipped up to the head, pressing her fingertip against the tiny hole at the tip, then ran her fingers down the bottom of the shaft, circling around where it attached to the rest of his body. He was fairly thick, and wondered what it would feel like to have him inside of her. She started to stroke him, and he stifled a moan. She continued to pull him up and down, when finally he stopped her. "Quit it." he said. "I'm gonna come." "So?" "So I don't want to come all over my shorts!" "Stand up and pull down your shorts." she said. "We're all alone here, and besides, I want to see what you look like." She started to stroke harder, and he groaned. He stood, and she pulled his engorged organ out from his shorts. It stood out straight from his body, a thick purple snout, and Jennifer stared at it as her hand ran up and down its length. She hadn't seen many penises in her life, and was always amazed at how fleshy and lumpy they were. Not the perfect cylinders she always expected. He was dripping a few beads of pre-come. Finally, he moaned, and his penis started to tense and pulse. He started to spurt, and Jennifer watched amazed as the blops of sperm launched from his body and dropped onto the sidewalk. She just couldn't imagine being a guy, having an organ that you pulled and prodded and that finally granted you satisfaction by spurting white syrup out of its hole. It was just too strange to think about. Francisco was breathing hard. Jennifer sat back onto the bench, and waited for him to get recomposed. She watched his organ droop. Finally, he pulled up his shorts again, and sat beside her. "Wow." he said. "You're unreal. Can I call you sometime?" She smiled and shook her head. "I'm sorry...but maybe I'll see you another time, all right?" She handed him back her walkman, and took her sports bra. He kissed her again, and she let herself melt into this last kiss. "This has been the weirdest experience I've ever had." he said. "Thanks, Marcie." "Thank you, too, Francisco." she smiled. "You're wonderful, too. I have to go. See you later?" "I hope so." he said. "Me too. Bye!" "Bye." Jennifer stood and walked towards where she had last seen Mark. She felt the slickness between her legs, and dreamed of how Francisco had kissed her, wishing they could have done more. He had been so nice, and hadn't treated her much like a slut even though she was pretty much acting like one. He had been slow and gentle, just the way Jennifer liked. She sighed happily, and waited for Mark to materialize. She waited, and he did not appear. She looked through the park. He was nowhere to be found. Mark had disappeared. end of part 8 This story has been brought to you by Danny Reinker. Send your comments, death threats, marriage proposals to: dementia@cheshire.oxy.edu. I will send back chapters, but usually after a long delay and in one massive mailing lump. Look for a reposting of all chapters in Rec.arts.erotica soon!! (Provided Mr. Pierce deems them worthy...) Private to bclinton@whouse.wash.dc.gov: for some reason, your account is bouncing my mail. 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