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Hi everybody...

When I posted my last story (My SuperBowl Party), I commented that I would
"retire and leave it to the professionals". However, I really hadn't counted on
so many people enjoying it so much. I really appreciate everyone emailing me
with their thoughts about it and so I thought I would post something that is
part of a mainstream book I currently have in the works.

The sex isn't heavy in this story, and for that I apologize. However if you
feel it can be added tastefully, by all means, your suggestions are very
welcome!  And, I will be working on some new erotic fiction as well.  Thanks
again for all your support and encouragement!

Singnfool..

Now....Murder in the Mountains (excerpt from):


   When Gloria was 22, she took off for California--looking for the bright
lights of Hollywood. She found them, but unfortunately for her, they weren't as
she had imagined. She found immediate modeling jobs, but they required her to
pose in next to nothing or nothing at all. She rejected the offers at first,
but the jobs paid very well, she had to eat, and her phone wasn't exactly
ringing off the hook. Reluctantly, she accepted an offer to pose for a magazine
pictorial.

   She was told to meet a photographer named Brian at a hotel room in a seedy
part of town. Knowing that almost anything could happen to her, she was very
apprehensive about this meeting and its location. When she arrived, some fears
were alleviated. One of those fears was that there might be a room full of
people standing around watching everything. Instead it was just Brian and his
assistant, Jill.

Brian immediately made Gloria feel at ease. Both he and Jill sat and talked
with Gloria over a cup of coffee about what was to take place. Jill explained
that her job was to help her relax. Basically, it was up to her to do anything
she had to do in order to make the shoot go smoothly.

   "If you need anything to help you feel more at ease, let me know," said
Jill.

   Gloria nodded. She was beginning to become impressed with the operation.
This may be easier than she thought.

"So, if you are ready, we can get started," said Brian.

A chill came over Gloria. Suddenly, it wasn't so easy.

"How do we start?" asked Gloria.

"Just pick out two or three of the outfits there in the back and change in to
one. Jill can help you. We'll go from there," explained Brian.

Jill led Gloria over to the rack of clothing in the back of the room. Never
before had Gloria seen such a display of exotic lingerie. There were several
feather boas, lace teddies, and satiny gowns, as well as dozens of bra & panty
sets.

"This one is my favorite," said a grinning Jill as she pointed to a blue,
see-through teddy. Gloria accepted Jill's recommendation with a smile and took
the teddy off the rack along with a pink boa, a tiger-striped bra & panty set,
and a black leather corset with black fishnet stockings.

"What's life without a little variety?" reasoned Gloria.

"Gloria, if you look half as hot as I think you will in those outfits, our
magazine sales will go through the roof," said Jill.

Gloria stepped into the bathroom to change into her first selection. She came
out wearing the black leather with fishnet stockings.

"I thought," started Jill.

"Relax," said Gloria. "I'll get to it."

"You've done this before, haven't you?" asked Jill.

"No, never," said Gloria, as she walked over to the bed. "I'm ready, Brian."

Brian stared in amazement.

"Wow," he said as he gazed at her body. "You are breath-taking. These pictures
will never do you justice, don't you think so, Jill?"

"Absolutely, Brian," answered the assistant. "Just beautiful."

Gloria blushed over all the praise that was being given.

"I've got a feeling," said Jill, "that we haven't seen anything yet."

Brian motioned Gloria onto the bed and asked her to kneel on her hands and
knees. She did as he asked and a tingle came over her as he snapped the first
picture.

"That's it," he said as he continued to place her in various seductive poses.
"Beautiful," he continued.

Gloria kept smiling as the photos were taken, moving as she was told. She was
getting the hang of things quite well until Brian stopped taking pictures and
asked Gloria to remove the corset.

She froze.

"C'mon babe, you can do this. You're gorgeous, you have nothing to be ashamed
of. You have a great body. Let us see more," said Brian.

"Its okay, Glo," said Jill. "I understand. Just look at me and undo the
straps. Pretend its just you and me."

Gloria looked at Jill, standing just behind Brian.

"I'll strip too if it will make you feel better," said Jill. "Whatever I take
off, you take off, okay?"

Gloria smiled and nodded at her new friend.

"Okay, Gloria," said Jill, pulling her shirt over her head. "Undo the straps
and let the corset fall to the floor."

Gloria watched Jill toss her shirt to the side as she again began doing what
she asked. Jill unhooked her bra as well and suddenly Gloria felt much more at
ease. Before she realized it, the corset was tossed aside. Jill smiled at her.

"Just lovely," said Jill as Brian snapped away. Before long, Jill had Gloria
completely nude. Of course, Jill had also become naked in the process. But it
was a ploy that worked. It usually does with first-timers, she would explain
later to Gloria. Gloria didn't seem to mind so much anymore, as the time flew
by. Before long, she had finished posing in the tiger-striped bikinis and was
ready to change into the teddy. When she re-entered the room, there was
silence.

Jill slowly let out a gasp.

"Like it?" asked Gloria. "Have a seat and enjoy the show. I think I'm loose
enough now to handle this. Can we have some music for this last set?

"Sure," said Brian. "What do you like?"

"Something soft and country," said Gloria, glancing over towards Jill.

"Jill, you heard the lady," said Brian. "Turn on some country music."

Jill put in a tape and sat back in her chair to watch Gloria's shoot. 

She watched in a trance as Gloria began getting into this particular set more
than she thought she would. She moved with style, grace, and beauty, all of her
motions coming so natural. Slowly, the teddy came off, but the feather boa kept
everything slightly hidden. Gloria had her steps timed perfectly and revealed
herself at her pace. All the while, Brian kept commenting on how well she was
doing with her poses. Gloria would shut her eyes and listen to the music as she
removed her clothing and tossed the boa aside. At one point, she even forgot
about the camera. Only at the end of the set did Gloria realize the full effect
she had on everyone. Gloria saw that Brian had a tremendous bulge in his jeans,
but he paid no attention to it. He caught her looking at it and commented.

"Happens all the time," he said. "Especially with the great ones. And you are
a great one."

"All the time?" asked Gloria.

"Usually," answered Brian. "But not that," he added motioning towards Jill.

Gloria gasped as she looked over at Jill, who had her eyes closed, oblivious
to everyone else. Gloria sat down and watched in amazement as Jill masturbated
furiously, trying desperately to reach an orgasm. 

"Yes, yes, YES!" Jill cried out, throwing her head back and arching her body
forward as she climaxed. Both Brian and Gloria applauded the performance.

"What can I say?" asked Jill, looking right at Gloria. "You really got to me."

Gloria blushed as she began to gather up her clothes.

"You know, Gloria," began Brian, "if you are interested, I can line you up
with other jobs like this one today. Now, some of them may want you to pose
with other people and some will be solo shots."

"I'd be happy to work with you on some of those shoots, Gloria, if you'd
like," added Jill.

"Well, the money is good and this really wasn't as bad as I thought it would
be," rationalized Gloria. "Sure, what the hell. Just tell me when and where."

"Great," said Brian. "Tell you what, I'll tell my editor and have his
secretary give you a call. It's really been great working with you, Gloria."

Brian packed up his gear and left, leaving Jill and Gloria alone to talk and
get dressed.

"I told you that teddy was my favorite," said Jill.

"Yes, you did. I kind of liked it, too. I'll have to pick some up," said
Gloria.

"Tell you what," said Jill. "Keep this one. I won't tell."

"Thanks," said Gloria, now a little unsure of where things were going.

Jill sat back on the bed as Gloria began looking for her clothes.

"You know, this room is paid up through tomorrow. If you don't have to be
somewhere, I could show you a real good time," said Jill.

Gloria stopped in her tracks.

"You mean, you and me?" said Gloria. "Together? I don't know."

"Come on, Glo," urged Jill. "You are so sexy, I'd love to make love to you and
make you feel the same feelings I felt just a few minutes ago in that chair."

"I don't know," hesitated Gloria. "I've never been with another woman before.
It's just not me. No offense, I don't have anything against it, I-I'm just not
ready for that type of relationship."

"Okay, I won't pressure you. But someday, when you are ready, I hope you'll
let me be the one to show you how beautiful it can be," said Jill. "Need a ride
home?"

"Please," said Gloria. "It's getting a little dark out and I hate to take a
bus at night."

 "I know the feeling," said Jill, putting on her shirt. "There's all kinds of
creeps out there."

The girls got dressed and loaded up Jill's car with all of the clothing. As
they drove to Gloria's apartment they talked of how easily Gloria adapted to
the shoot. Gloria wrote it off to her wild, outgoing nature, even though she
was so timid when it came time to actually strip. Then Gloria added that even
though they had just met, she had a feeling about Jill and that they just might
become good friends.

"It's good to have a friend in this business," Jill told her. Because with
everything that happens, sometimes you just don't know who to trust." Then with
a grin, "might that 'good friend' part include what I hope it includes?"

"We'll see," said Gloria with a laugh. "You'll be the first to know."

As it worked out, Brian's editor personally called Gloria the next day and
congratulated on her the wonderful job she did at the shoot. He had the
pictures in front of him and was very impressed. He offered her another job,
which would be shot the next day, saying it would be a little different than
the one before. This time she would be working with someone in the shoot,
explaining that they would be simulating sex scenes. The pay would be double
what she got for the previous shoot. Gloria jumped at the chance.

Gloria spent several hours trying to reach Jill by telephone to give her the
good news, but was unsuccessful. Gloria kept thinking that maybe Jill would
come by that evening and she could tell her then. She did not see Jill again
until the next day.

When Gloria arrived at the location, she again met Brian who was to be the
photographer. Jill was there as well, handling the clothes, sorting everything
out, and looking through them. They both greeted Gloria as she walked into the
room.

Jill smiled at her friend as she said hello. Jill was wearing a bright yellow
turtleneck with matching slacks, a change from the previous shoot's pullover
and jeans.

"I'm sure glad you two are here today," said Gloria. "It will make this go a
lot easier for me having someone here I know."

Gloria walked back to the rack and began looking through the clothing. This
time, she picked out a powder blue teddy to go with a silk blouse and dark
slacks. Brian had already advised her to only select one outfit. Once she was
dressed, she sat at the table and sipped at a soda and started to make small
talk. Brian interrupted her.

"Sorry, Gloria, but we really need to get started, I've got another shoot
immediately after this one," he told her.

"But your editor told me this was with someone else," said Gloria. "And no one
else is here yet."

"Yes, I am," said Jill. "Didn't he tell you who it was?"

"No," quipped Gloria, "he didn't. Was this your idea? I told you I wasn't
ready for this sort of thing." Gloria looked a little upset.

"Uh, it's my fault, Gloria," said Brian. "I suggested you to my editor. When I
left the other day, I kind of thought things were happening between you two. I
apologize if we've offended you."

Gloria suddenly felt guilty for snapping at her new friend. "Jill, forgive me
for being so foolish," said Gloria. "I guess I should have known better than to
think you would be so sneaky about getting me into bed."

"It's alright," said Jill. "I understand. I didn't know they hired you either
until just now."

Brian glanced at Jill, knowing he had just caught her in a lie. Jill had this
job lined up for two weeks and practically begged him to recommend Gloria. Only
after she reminded him that she had helped "relieve" his post-shoot tension
problem a time or two in the past, he agreed.

"So Gloria," said Brian. "Do you want this shoot or not? Tell me now so we
know what we are doing."

Gloria hesitated for a few moments then smiled.

"If it were any other photographer or any other girl, I'd walk out of here in
an instant," said Gloria. But for you two, I'll go with it. Besides it's only
simulation, right?"

"That's right," said Jill, pouting. "Unfortunately for me."

"Then let's get this thing going, shall we?" pleaded Brian.

Brian began clicking away at his shutter, while Jill and Gloria played out
their love scene before him. There was a theme involved where one girl was to
be seducing an old friend who was heartbroken. Jill's performance as the
seducer was splendid, since not once did Gloria freeze up or try to pull away.
Somewhere along the way, however, Gloria experienced a change in attitude. When
the shoot was over, neither girl was ready to stop. 

"Great job, girls," said Brian as he carried his gear out the door. "See you
next time."

The girls stayed to talk after he left.

"So, is the room paid up?" asked Gloria.

======================

This is where the scene leaves off in my book...I invite everyone to submit a
tasteful continuation of the scene. If I use it in my book, you will be given
written acknowledgment for contributing to the story.

S.


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