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Piper's favorite stories list - reviews 3/3 (M-Z)
January, 1998

Here's my reviews, or to be more accurate, my short summaries of the 
stories.  I won't bother rating them, since I like all of them (nach!).  

Story codes included, if the copy I have has them.

... Piper




Marnie's Day on the Sandbar - Caesar (21k) (Mf)
  
  Caesar and Marnie have a picnic on a tiny, sandy island well away from 
  any prying eyes.  Especially the prying eyes of his friends, who are 
  enjoying Caesar's hospitality while staying on his boat.  That's why 
  they went to the island.  You see, they hadn't had any private time to 
  themselves, so they hadn't had any time to play their little games.

  Now, Marnie is a slave, and her chosen master is Caesar.  When they are 
  alone, they do normal master/slave type stuff.  Like go for a swim.  
  Collect up seaweed, firewood, and clams.  Have a picnic.  What, don't 
  you think this is normal master/slave stuff?  Sure it is, as long as 
  you realize the swimming is nude, there's a blowjob on the way to the 
  sandbar, another one after the swim, and some heavy duty fucking an 
  appropriate time after their light lunch.

  No, Caesar isn't into heavy bondage, humiliation, or pain.  Neither is 
  Marnie.  She loves the freedom of being told to be sexy and generous 
  with her charms, at least with him.  He loves the control, and having a 
  pretty young woman around who is always horny and willing to follow his 
  every (almost) command.  

  Sexy, fun-loving, warm, and light.  Those words pretty much describe 
  what this story is all about.


Mind Snatchers - Simon Bar Sinister (150k) (mc mf ff)
  CR 174 10,10,10
  
  In a scifi story, anything can happen.  After all, aliens, with their 
  super-advanced technology and mental powers, can do things that look 
  like magic to us simple humans.  Enter two aliens, Dave and, uh, Dave.  
  They are visiting the earth to collect women, plain and simple.  Using a 
  fancy ray gun, they turn women into slaves that want nothing more than 
  to serve their masters.  Their master is the first male to touch them, 
  as long as it's within a certain time limit.  Otherwise, the ray wears 
  off.

  Of course, this is a story with a twist.  A few twists, actually.  One 
  of them is the aliens endowment, or lack thereof.  And did you know that 
  almost all aliens speak English with a British accent?  Just like on 
  an early British scifi show.  Also, almost all aliens are bipedal 
  humanoids who are sexually compatable, just like on an early American 
  scifi show.

  There's plot.  The woman they kidnap has a boyfriend, and he swears to 
  get her back regardless of what he has to do.  There's another alien, 
  a woman, who's entire planet (all women, no men) was taken over.  She's 
  tracking down the first aliens.  He ends up with his own slave, despite 
  not wanting one.  There are space chases and foot races.  There are 
  really bad actors and sight gags.  And, of course, many beautiful alien 
  women slaves.

  If you want to read a scifi/mc/space alien story with a tongue in cheek 
  attitude, try this one.


Month - Deirdre (36k) (mf)
  CR 135 10,10,10
  
  Deirdre writes stories about unusual situations, unusual people, or 
  unusual activities.  This one is about all of the above, plus a giant, 
  invisible, very rich association of hedonists.

  Here's the deal.  A beautiful, successful international model is offered 
  ten million dollars for a month's work.  No questions are to be asked, 
  no harm will be done to her, and her reputation will not be smirched.  
  Initially, she thinks it's a joke, so she counters with a demand for 
  fifty million.  The unnamed party agrees.

  Fifty million, for a month's work.  Two hundred million if there is 
  any harm done to her or her reputation.  A reputable firm represents 
  them.  It must be a joke, right?  No sane person would take up an offer 
  like that, right?  

  Well, she does.  Why?  Not even she really knows why.  You'll have to 
  read the story to find out why she gives back the money.


My Friends the Allens - Mark Aster (many stories)
  Many CR's 10,10,10, Annex 10/12/97 A
  
  I'll preface this review with the author's preface of his stories.

  <<Note: this story takes place in a fantasy world where vaccines 
  against AIDS and pregnancy are safe and common, and casual sex with 
  strangers is not suicidally stupid.  The real world, sadly, is not 
  like this: so don't try this at home, folks.>>

  MyFrThAl is a series of tales about Pat, Julie, an unnamed male narrator, 
  and a bunch of their friends and relatives.  Pat and Julie are sisters, 
  with Pat being the older one.  She and the narrator meet and fall in 
  love.  Eventually, they get married, and have twins.  Simple.  Sweet.  

  Oh, right.  In the MyFrThAl world, hedonism is the rule, not the 
  exception.  Pat, Julie, and the narrator enjoy a lot of things together, 
  including sharing the same bed at times.  Or, for variety, any 
  combination of two of the three.  Or, for even more variety, they join 
  in various combinations with friends, other relatives, acquaintances, 
  and sometimes even total strangers.  Kinda neat stuff.

  Before you start thinking that this is just a simple fuckfest, all of 
  the stories are sensitive, character-revealing, and emotionally 
  uplifting.  They both enrich the soul and warm the libido.  They also 
  fire the imagination.

  My favorite MyFrThAl  friend?  Her name is Mike.  She wears a t-shirt 
  with the words "DYKE CROSSING" scrawled on it.  That's also the name 
  of the episode.

  I believe the author now has more than 70 stories in this series.


My Sister Jean - BillyG (345k) (m/f,cons,inc)
  CR 202 9,10,10
  
  I'm sure there are lots of perve..., uh, people out there who saw the word 
  "incest" in the story description and downloaded it strictly in the hope 
  of finding a couple (or more) of family members doing the nasty.  You know, 
  like in Frank McCoy's stories.  Or Tiffany's.  Or even Michael K. Smith's.  
  Not here, I'm not sorry to say.  At least, not in the first 19 chapters.  

  (Insert - 
  picture of some overgrown pimply-faced no-longer-adolescent guy 
  sitting down, hunched over, with his nose six inches from the monitor 
  and drool running down from his open mouth and dripping off his chin 
  into his keyboard).

  The author sent Celeste a copy of chapter 19, asking her to review it, 
  even though he "knows" (and explains in his letter) it's not really her 
  thing.  Incest, that is.  Nor is reviewing incomplete stories (one chapter 
  out of many, with maybe one, maybe several, left to come).  However, since 
  Celeste is usually quite acommodating, but is currently rather overburdened 
  with getting the new school year off to a flying start, she passed the 
  baton to me <grin>.  Hey Billy.  You ready for this?  He-he-he.  

  Unknown to Celeste (obviously), I've already read all 19 chapters (I guess 
  she knows now!).  It's going to be difficult writing about _only_ the 
  latest one.  So, what the heck.  I'll write about the latest chapter 
  _and_ about the whole thing.  

  Hey, this is actually a good story - let me emphasize *story* - about two 
  relatively normal kids growing up.  One is a typical over-hormoned teenage 
  guy with a lust for anything vaguely feminine.  The other one is his 
  equally libidinous but much more controlled fox of a sister.  The guy has 
  a panty fetish, by the way.  That's how his sister first caught him; he 
  was sniffing around in the clothes hamper.

  Over the course of time, they develop a code of honor, and start some low-
  grade experimentation with each other.  Like exposure.  Touching.  Things 
  like that.  They don't _do the nasty_ right away.  All the previous 
  chapters explore different situations, how they deal with each other's wants
  and desires, and dig into how they feel about each other, the rest of the 
  family, and the world at large.  This is fun stuff!  Richly detailed, 
  imaginative, and engrossing.  The author even manages to pull off using 
  "natural" language in his conversations without getting stilted or slangy.  

  Chapter 19 takes place on Little Caymen (Island).  There's lots of 
  innuendo, sexy talk, some emotional bits, gameplay, and a bit of mental 
  manipulation.  And some scuba diving.  And a very pretty (slightly older) 
  dive master.  This isn't the kind of stuff to get you off.  However, it is 
  the kind of stuff that will make you go look for your spouse (or whomever) 
  to help you get off.  Titillation.  That's the word I'm looking for.  The 
  almost-done deed.  But, despite the author's claim that this chapter stands 
  up well on its own, it doesn't.  Not really.  This chapter is a 
  continuation of the previous chapter and a setup for the next one(s).  
  Also, if I had read this chapter without knowing any of the previous 
  history of these characters, it would have been impossible to understand 
  the reasoning behind some of their conversations and actions.  Like who 
  Ian and Jan are.  And the "sex agreement" the two siblings have.  It 
  isn't explained in this segment.  Of course, the easy fix is to read all 
  of the chapters in order.  

  One thing I will suggest to BillyG is that, unless he's purposefully 
  trying to leave in those amateurish little mistakes, that he either go 
  over the story carefully a second (or third) time, or get himself hooked 
  up with a proofreader.  Spell-checking alone just doesn't cut it.  In 
  several spots, missing or misused words really derailed the story flow.  
  (Yeah, I know, we're getting pickier and pickier around here about them 
  dang homonyms and missing bits of sentence structure.  Life's a beach.  
  And then you diet.  Or is it the other way around?)


Paying For It - J Boswell (42k)
  CR 202 9.5,9,10
  
  If you're at all familiar with Boswell's other works, you know that he 
  mainly writes hot-wife/slut-wife stories, where the wife suddenly 
  discovers a deeply buried craving to have numerous large cocks deeply 
  buried in her various orifices.  This is a rather good variant on the 
  usual theme.

  First off, Tim and Jessie (the narrator) are a happily married two-income 
  yuppie couple with 2 cars, a townhouse in the 'burbs, and no kids.  
  They've been together for years, and she has never cheated on him.  One 
  day, Jessie is in a rush to go see some old friends, and she's short of 
  cash.  Rather than taking time out to find a bank machine, she asks her 
  hubby for some money.  "How badly do you need this cash?" the horny hunk 
  asks as a joke.  He gets his answer when she whips out his cock and sucks 
  him dry on the spot.  That gets her all hot and bothered too, but she 
  heads off to see her friends anyway, with her newly-earned cash in hand.

  That's the start of a developing play theme for the two of them, with her 
  acting as his personal hooker.  Any money she gets, whether for herself or 
  for the house, she has to earn.  On the flip side, if he wants any, he has 
  to pay.  They both like the fantasy, in and out of the house, and it leads 
  to some really hot times in various exotic locales, like the front seat of 
  his car in the mall parking lot, and a local hooker hangout.

  All right.  No problem so far.  Just a 'normal' couple with a rather well-
  developed fantasy life.  So where's the "Boswellian" part of the story?  
  That comes when hubby heads off on a business tour and leaves wifey high 
  and dry, without relief and without fantasy play, for six whole weeks.  
  Jessie can't take that!  No woman starring in a Boswell story could!  
  "Just one time," I imagine her muttering to herself.  "Nobody will ever 
  know.  I'll dress up a little classy, head down to the sleaze bar, and 
  hang out a bit.  Nothing will happen.  I can control myself.  Really!  
  Just one little drink, and then back home again."  

  Yeah, right.  Those words fit right in with "Just one more smoke and then 
  I'll quit," or "Don't worry, baby, I'll pull out," or "You can't get 
  pregnant the first time."  So what happens when hubby finally gets home 
  from his business trip?  If you know the genre, you know the answer.

  I like this story.  It's hot, it's fairly imaginative, and it has a good 
  build-up to an inevitable (at least, for Boswell) conclusion.  It's also a 
  revamped version of the original, with most of the writing errors 
  eliminated and the dialog and plot smoothed out.  While there are still a 
  few minor gaffs, they can be ignored.  You don't have to be a fan of 
  slut-wife tales to enjoy this story.


Peer Pressure - Wollstonecraft (15k) (m/f)
  CR 93 10,10,10
  
  In this story, Terri is on her first date in six months.  Back then, 
  she was a new arrival in school, and when her date tried to fondle her 
  breasts, she screamed bloody murder.  That's what all the girls did in 
  her old school.  However, according to her girlfriend, that's not what 
  girls do in this school.  Here, the girls let the boys take control, 
  and do whatever they want.  Since doing it her own way left her in a 
  six month dateless drought, she decides to follow her girlfriend's 
  advice.

  Bobby is the surprised and delighted young man who benefits from Terri's 
  new attitude.  During their date, she puts up no resistance to his 
  advances.  Being a horny young teen with raging hormones, he takes 
  full advantage of her acquiescence.  This story is about the dichotomy 
  between her thoughts, and her words and actions.  It also tells of her 
  new popularity, and the not unexpected results of such irresponsible 
  behavior.  Yes, she was irresponsible, the same as he was.  Neither 
  gave any thought to the consequences beforehand, or took any kind of 
  precautions.  In this day and age, that is very much irresponsible.  

  For most teenagers, especially teenage girls, the drive to be popular 
  and accepted by their peers is a very powerful thing.  Such a drive can 
  sometimes lead to people doing things against their better judgement. 
  In fact, sometimes they will do things that go against their moral 
  fiber.  Such actions do, occasionally, produce unwanted results.
  The author combines a moral message and some hot sex into a coherent, 
  enjoyable, whole.


The Photograph - Jym (5k)
  CR 207 10,10,10
  
  I'm not sure that this can be called a sex story, since there isn't 
  any sex in it.  Instead, this is a frighteningly sad story about a 
  woman who meets a sixteen year old mother-to-be in a park, takes her 
  home, and proceeds to shoot some beautiful nude pictures of the young 
  girl.  The girl leaves, and they never meet again.

  What's so sad?  The poignancy comes from reasons, and dreams, and 
  desires, and might-have-beens.  I can't say much more without ruining 
  the story.  Definitely a tear-jerker.


The Photographer's Daughters - Observer (68k) (M/F)
  CR 93 9.5,9,9
  
  Bob is the photographer.  He lives next door to Our Hero (the narrator).  
  His two daughters are named Julie and Wendy.  First, Julie has to move 
  in with Daddy after leaving her mother.  It's only for a while.  In the 
  words of Our Hero, "..staying with her father until she can get her round 
  heels back on the ground."  Since Bob and his ex wife both guarded their 
  daughter jealously, she's had no opportunities to relieve her aching 
  libido for months, ever since her baby was born.  What's a girl to do?

  Why, have a more than friendly chat with you-know-who, and arrange a 
  late-night tryst.  The tryst goes well, leading to frequent repeats.  
  Months later, the other daughter gets involved, but only for one night.  
  That's all it takes for Our Hero to do the nasty with the unprotected 
  sixteen year old, with not unexpected results.

  Sometimes it's hard to tell if a writer (or narrator, rather), views 
  women positively or negatively.  The sense I get, after finishing the 
  story, is that the narrator does appreciate the finer points of women, 
  even though his language, when talking about certain members of the 
  fair sex, is less than complimentary.  Anybody that can say "Her hungry 
  cunt was barking, yapping, talking to her.  And Wendy was listening." 
  with a straight face, can't be all bad.  
  
  This one's got some nice, hot, juicy sex, and some interesting story.  
  It's well written, with a heavy dose of irreverence.  Just don't expect 
  anything warm and sentimental.


Reluctant Bride - M1ke Hunt (37k)
  CR 221 10,10,10
  
  This is a M1ke Hunt story.  I can tell.  My sides hurt when I finished 
  reading it.  That's the problem with M1ke Hunt's stories.  In his own 
  paraphrased words, "They make you want to laugh and orgasm at the same 
  time, which is physiologically impossible."  Yep.  That about sums it 
  up.  And, along with everything else, he writes good, too.

  In this one, Mike is the Best Man at his friend Brian's wedding.  The 
  bride's name is Gail.  A few days before the wedding, Brian, Mike, and 
  a dozen of their friends throw a bachelor party, complete with wild and 
  wooly hookers.  Everyone, and I mean everyone, gets a few samples.

  The next evening, Brian is partying at a closed-door stag thrown by 
  his frat buddies.  In the mean time, Gail is having a few pre-nup 
  jitters.  Who does she call for comfort?  Why, Mike, of course.  Poor 
  Gail.  Brian is the only guy she's ever been with, and, well, she's 
  not really sure if she's getting everything she deserves from him.  You 
  know, like orgasms during sex.  Something that hasn't yet happened.  
  She's also a trifle worried about what's happened and happening to him 
  at his stags.  All those rumors and stories, you know.  (Maybe she 
  reads a.s.s. on the side?)

  Does the nearly inevitable happen?  If it does, will it happen again?  
  And, if it does, will they get found out?  And by who?  And what about 
  afterwards, during the honeymoon, and beyond?  So many nasty questions, 
  all answered in M1ke's inimitable style.


Sacrificial Lamb - Tiffany (47k)
  
  This story starts with Gwen and her husband experiencing financial 
  difficulties.  No, worse than that, they have watched their life savings, 
  and everything they possess, get flushed down the toilet of his crazy 
  business venture, in dribs and drabs, over the course of many moons.  
  Finally, they have almost literally nothing left except the clothes on 
  their backs.  No home, no car, no furniture, nothing.  The husband jets 
  off overseas where a job awaits, but money won't be forthcoming for 
  several months.  Maybe just in time to move back home and get their foxy 
  daughter Ginger back into her old high school for the start of the next 
  school year.

  Without a home, Gwen and Ginger are forced to beg for aid from Gwen's 
  sister Gloria and brother-in-law Hank.  Well, forced may be too strong a 
  word for it.  Gwen has somehow managed to alienate or distance herself 
  from anyone else who might have offered assistance.  Her filthy little 
  imagination has been hard at work, and has been surreptitiously guiding 
  her actions.  You see, Gwen has a history with her sister, and not a 
  pretty one.  Subjucated, sexually used and abused, and forced into virtual 
  servitude is the type of history most people would try to forget, and they 
  would try to avoid the perpetrator like the plague.  Not Gwen.  Especially 
  since she knew Hank had raped one of their nieces.

  You see, she doesn't see herself in the role of abuse victim any more.  
  Not with her sister or with Hank.  No, she was a teenager when most of 
  that happened.  Instead, she sees her daughter in the role - raped by her 
  brother-in-law, abused, misused, and probably (hopefully!) even made 
  pregnant with Hank's bastard.  Those images are in her mind the whole 
  time, getting more vivid and insistent with each passing hour.  But what 
  about Ginger, the obedient, understanding, virginal, and very desirable 
  young lady who just turned sixteen?

  On the long bus ride down from Cloverdale (somewhere in Canada) to 
  backwoods Arkansas, Gwen explains to her daughter that things will 
  probably be quite difficult.  There will be strange events occurring.  
  It's a different place, and she will have to develop some sort of fantasy, 
  or story, or something, to help her cope with what Gwen knows will be 
  happening.  This might happen to her, and that will probably happen to 
  her, and the other thing will definitely happen to her.  Imagine the 
  worst, she says.

  Well, the worst does happen, but definitely not in the way Gwen pictured 
  in her perverted little mind.  What happens to Gwen probably shouldn't 
  happen to a dog.  Well, maybe it should only happen to a dog.  Or to a 
  woman who offered up her daughter as a ... (read the title).

  I like this story.  It's well-written, it's coherent, and it's one that 
  made me want to read right to the end.  Even through the disgusting bits.  
  The few flaws I found were minor and in no way interfered with the story.  
  Be warned - this is no warm, fuzzy romance.  It's not a love story.  No 
  heroic prince comes to the rescue.  The sex is difficult and mostly 
  non-consensual, although it's not contested.  Well, mostly not.  That last 
  bit out back of the trailer was very much vocally protested, even though 
  Gwen couldn't fight back physically.  And it was definitely disgusting.  
  Oh, and I forgot to mention that Gloria has kids - four boys, hellions, 
  aged 14, 12, 11, and 10.  They don't figure in Gwen's imaginings.  
  However ...

  As somebody-or-other once said, the best laid plans of something-or-other 
  often go wrong (my modern English version - the original, I think, is gang 
  aft agley).  Be ready for a story that will haunt your dreams and 
  fantasies.


Sailing We Will Go - Caesar (78k) (ff mf)
  CR 8 6
  
  Two couples, May and Dan and John and Susan, all go for a wonderfully 
  pleasant week of sailing.  They all have a great time, respect each 
  other's privacy, and go home happy.

  What?  This doesn't sound much like a Caesar story?  Really?

  You're right.  What really happens is somewhat different.  Yes, the 
  two couples do go on vacation.  They are all, uh, friends, for lack of 
  a more accurate word.  Dan and Susan have been carrying on an affair for 
  years.  May knows about it, but John doesn't.  John has a vicious, nasty 
  temper, and he's the jealous type.  Dan is manipulative, controlling, 
  and thinks of May as property.  Susan is sweet, submissive, and not 
  too bright, but she knows if John found out about the affair, he'd do 
  something about it, possibly something terminal.  May is conniving, 
  manipulative, and is sick and tired of her husband's affairs, and has 
  an inkling of a glimmering of an idea of what she can do about it.  

  These folks interract in realistic ways, if you follow the newspaper 
  and tabloid headlines.  Not everybody makes it through the big storm.
  This is not a feel-good story.  The sex is mostly done for reasons 
  other than pleasure.  The ending is only sarcastically happy.  If you 
  are highly empathic, or dislike violence, skip this one.


The Scandalous Stewardess - Unknown Author (245k)
  
  This story takes place on the Bahamian island of Eleutheria.  Peter 
  Knight is the owner of a resort called "French Leave".  Tall,  muscular 
  and handsome, he's been divorced these past three years.  Davie Knight 
  is his 16 year old virginal daughter.  Trish Byers is the stewardess in 
  question, a gold digger, a wanton woman, a slut in chic clothing, and a 
  lady who is trying to sink her claws into Peter and Davie, any way she 
  can.  Randy Byers is Trish's half brother.  He's also her lover and 
  co-conspirator.  

  What follows is a tale of lust, debauchery, incest, and heated passions 
  at least as wild as any Roman orgy ever held.  There's a midnight tryst 
  on the beach.  There's wild happenings in the sack.  There's double 
  crossing.  There's scheming.  There's bodily fluids everywhere.

  Yes, it's another good one.  One thing to be careful of is the scan 
  errors - words that scanned from the printed page, but didn't end up 
  being what they started out as.  Makes for some weird cracks in an 
  otherwise solid piece of erotic fiction.


Scarlett's Cove - Ann Douglas (57k)
  CR 137 10,10,10
  
  Scarlett's Cove is a hideaway vacation resort somewhere in the 
  Caribbean.  It's a place where women can go to unwind, relax, enjoy 
  themselves, and, if they're in the mood, to meet that someone special.  
  You see, Ms. Scarlett McMurphy, the owner of the retreat, was, and is, 
  a lady's lady, and her various enterprises are all geared towards 
  catering to women with a similar taste.

  Into this beautiful place come Jeanette Randolph and her friend Arlene.  
  They've been friends for many years.  This vacation is a gift from 
  Arlene to Jeanette.  While there, Jeanette meets a young lady - actually, 
  the young lady buys Jeanette at auction - who used to be one of her 
  students, years earlier.  They become more than friends.

  In the words of Celeste, "There's a lot more to this story than that."  
  Yes, there is.  There is curiosity, tenderness, hesitation, a certain 
  feeling of rose petals and fine wine, and a bit of gentle humor, all 
  mixed in to a story that will leave you misty eyed and smiling.


Seinfeld: The Blowjob - Dimitri (16k)
  CR 177 9,9,9
  
  Television pastiches can be a wonderful thing.  Then again, sometimes 
  they can fall flat on their faces.  It can be very hard to not only get 
  the characterization right, but to also have an interesting story.  In 
  this one, Dimitri has the characters down pat.  He has a story that 
  reads so much like a real episode would, it's uncanny.  Hilarious, 
  rib-splitting, and consciousness-raising, but uncanny.  The only thing 
  Dimitri lacks is technical ability.  Ouch!

  This story is all about blow jobs.  Not just women giving to men, but 
  also men giving to women, and all the different opinions people have 
  towards this form of sex.  Kramer, George, Elaine, Jerry, and two extras 
  named Marlene and Sheryl, display the complete range, from "Eeew!" to 
  "God, I feel so cheap!"

  In spite of the many technical flaws in this story, I found it to be 
  one of the best belly laughs I've had in a long time.


Siblings - Michael K. Smith (unfinished,540k)
  CR 121 10,9,10
  
  This is an amazing story.  We follow the life of the narrator Michael, 
  and his sister Alec, from their early years, through high school, 
  college, and into parenthood.  Of the 17 proposed chapters, we've 
  got 9, and still, it's one of the best, most detailed, most intimate, 
  and involving stories of any kind I've read.  The closest story to 
  this one I can remember reading, is "The Trinity Trilogy".  It has 
  the same level of detail, better exploration of personalities, but 
  not the same level of hedonism.  

  So far, we've got chapters 1-7, plus 11 and 12, of a proposed 17.  
  I can hardly wait for the next chapter to come out.



Sister Mary Joseph - BillyG (80k)
  CR 211 10,10,10
  
  What we have here is a guy and a nun on a sailboat, alone together, 
  for several days.  The nun is a looker, once she gets out of the 
  habit.  However, the guy is pragmatic, realistic, and, believe it or 
  not, sensitive.  She is on a voyage of self-discovery, in every sense, 
  trying to find herself, and figure out what she really wants in life.  
  They have some very long, revealing, and intimite conversations.  Do 
  they do the dirty?  Read the story and find out.

  I like stories that explore the human psyche, especially the female 
  psyche (I already know lots about how guys think).  There's something 
  intrinsically fascinating about them for me.  What, I don't know, but 
  it's there.  Maybe that's why I like this story so much.


Sisters I, II, III - Jan V (275k) (ff,incest,teen)
  
  The four sisters are Linda (17), Nikki (16), and the twins, Zoe and 
  Jeannie (15).  All are beautiful, of course, and their parents are 
  financially well off.  In the beginning, they're normal, smart, athletic, 
  rich kids.  Only, Linda starts really noticing these feelings she has 
  for Nikki.  Not sisterly feelings either, since her nipples get hard and 
  she keeps getting damp between her legs.

  What follows is a long, detailed story about the sisters, their 
  boyfriends, and their parents.  Its interesting to read a good sex story 
  with some story to it.  Emotions run rampant, with the shifting 
  relationships between the four taking center stage.  Jealousy, fear, 
  angst, love, tenderness, and a fair dollop of sensual gay love fill out 
  the picture.

  The story is mostly technically correct, although I did find the writing 
  itself a little iffy in places.  Better phrasing and better word choice 
  would improve things, but not by a whole lot.  It's an involving read, 
  if you're a fan of romantic lesbian incest stories.


The Stepford Wives - Rhett Dreams (450k) (Mf,ff,mc,nc,Bob Dole,not pc)
  CR 238 10,10,10
  
  Funny.  I've learned more about classical literature from reading "smut" 
  in ass than I did all through school, university, and the many years of 
  normal reading since.  That's probably because my interests lay in other 
  genres, like scifi, fantasy, comic books, and the like.  This means I have 
  absolutely no bias in (and no basis for) comparing this story with the 
  original.  Having said that, I think that Rhett's version is probably not 
  as literary as the original, but it is probably much hotter and more 
  titillating.  

  If you've never read the book or seen the movie (there is a movie, isn't 
  there?), there is something strange going on in the town of Stepford, 
  Kansas.  Something very strange.  All of the women are perfect.  Not 
  physically perfect, of course, but perfectly made up, perfectly dressed, 
  perfectly mannered, and perfectly wonderful wives and mothers.  Too 
  perfect.  Scary perfect.  There's a reason for this perfection.  He's 
  called Dr. Richard Poulson -- aka Joseph Mengele, Jr.

  He's controlling their minds, using drugs.  But if you think this might be 
  a normal run-of-the-mill mind control story, you would be wrong.  Dr. 
  Poulson has much greater ambitions than a small town like Stepford could 
  ever contain.  Who else is in on this plot?  Just about every male resident 
  of the town, of course.  When will his ambitions break loose?  Soon.  Very 
  soon.

  Into this cauldron of depravity comes a couple of strangers and their 
  little girl.  These are normal, every day people.  The doctor, in order to 
  protect his dirty secrets, must incorporate these newcomers into his web.  
  The husband must be seduced and compromised.  The wife must be processed.  
  All without their knowledge, of course.  He orders his minions to see to 
  it.  When they try, complications arise.

  I liked this story.  There are plenty of plot twists.  There are genuine 
  bad guys and good guys.  There is evil aplenty.  There is tons of sex of 
  all types and varieties and degrees of heat.  Being a MC story, naturally 
  a fair bit of it occurs without one or more of the participants' informed 
  consent.  Sometimes it occurs without their knowledge.  Sometimes it 
  involves whips and chains and crops and the like.  Definitely not for the 
  faint of heart, but definitely interesting and engrossing.

  There are a couple of things that bothered me.  One was the need for a 
  final, thorough, proofreading.  I hate getting deeply involved in a story, 
  only to be thrown out of my carefully built up mental world by a 
  wordsmithing problem.  Another was the ending.  I don't know how closely 
  this story mirrors the original, but the ending was a little hokey.  Minor 
  hokey, but hokey none the less.  Maybe that's just me and my non-literary  
  judgementalism.  I'm sure there will be lots of folks who will enjoy the 
  ending.

  Despite these minor flaws, I loved the story.  It's worth a read.  But 
  be warned -- it's long.  410k long.  I don't know how many words that 
  translates into, but it's a lot!  (I just got told it's around 75,000 
  words by one of my lady friends.  Even she liked the story!)


Strip Chess - Delta (212k) (mf)
  CR 189 10,10,10
  
  Strip chess?  Really?  Yep, with lots of extra rules and lots of  
  extraneous activities to keep the opponents distracted.  This is a 
  fairly long story, with lots and lots of detail.  

  Basically, several friends get together for a small party.  They start 
  making dares, then bets.  Two of them have been playing chess against 
  each other for a while, and they make a wager on the outcome.  What she 
  doesn't realize, is that he has been taking it easy on her during their 
  games.  What can she do?  Note above extra rules regarding distractions.  
  Sex everywhere, with believable characters, mostly believable events,
  and some hot, wet, fun.  The only thing is, payback is a bitch.  Read 
  the story to find out what that means!

  Like most of Delta's offerings, this is a delightful, funny, technically 
  sound, easy-on-the-eyes story.


Sucker - BronwenSM (72k) (M/F,teen,oral,anal,fucking,humor,love)
  CR 193 10,10,10
  
  Kim Nice-but-Dim is the narrator of this Proper English Tale of a Woman's 
  Coming Of Age.  She is the daughter of a middle-crust government minister 
  and his discreet, tactful, yet barbedly witty wife.  Kim, as a younger 
  girl, was pudgy (I'm being kind), with mousy brown hair.  All of a 
  sudden, due to an illness, she sheds umpteen pounds, gets this great 
  tan because of all the time she spends in the sunshine, gets her hair 
  made-over, and _develops_, all in one summer.  You know, the old 
  ugly-duckling-beautiful-swan thing.  Now she's the most popular girl 
  in school, and loving it.  Only, she doesn't have a clue as to what to 
  do with a guy.  Not really.  To make matters worse, she _believes_ what 
  her date tells her.  I mean, really!  This makes her wildly popular 
  with the boys, but less so with the girls.

  This is a delighful story, full of British language, British slang, 
  and British humor.  And all of it, the author tells me, comes from 
  real, every-day, British speech.  I'll believe her, since I don't 
  know no better mesself.  I'm just glad Kim's uncle finally took her 
  under his wing (I'm being tactful) and set her straight about a lot of 
  things, especially about Greek Eddie (who she thought came from Greece), 
  and about boys not dying if they can't find a girl to ... well, you've 
  all heard that one before.


Tape Slaves - E (290k) (mc,ff,MmFff)
  CR 98 9.5,10,10
  
  There are mind control stories, and then there are mind control stories.  
  Some, like this one, purport to be serious about the methods used to gain 
  control over the subjects, whether the method used is hypnosis, drugs, 
  fancy scientific devices, magic, or advanced mental powers.  Others are 
  less so.  Either way, one or more people gain a measure of control over 
  one or more victims.  Some stories more believable than others.  

  In this one, a modified audio tape system is used to "reprogram" the 
  listener's thought processes and beliefs.  A complex system of standing 
  orders creates people who are happy, friendly, sexy, and have the 
  sexual morals of a horny jackrabbit.  However, each person can only 
  have sex with another "taped" person, one who has been inducted into 
  their "sex circle".  Of course, intercourse with family members is 
  practically a given.  We see a lot of sex, a lot of fun, a drop in 
  crime, the practical elimination of rape and murder, and all kinds of 
  wonderful benefits.

  For the longest time, we have no idea who the originator of the tape 
  systems is, whether it's a single person, a group, an organization, or 
  a government, or much of anything, really.  Once we do find out who 
  created the "tape" system, then the story really starts.  

  This is a very interesting story, both for the massive volume of hedonism 
  included, and for its plot and characterization.  Of all the stories I've 
  read in the mc genre, "Tape Slaves" has one of the most original 
  storylines I've seen.


Teen Breeder - ucclear (26k) (FfM,nc,preg)
  CR 159 7,5,3
  
  This is a mill town.  Everyone in town either works in the mill, or
  sells to the people who work in the mill.  Dad has been working there 
  for decades, but has failed to brown-nose his way up the corporate 
  ladder.  Now, there's a new owner - the son of the previous owner.  
  He's making big changes.

  Dad and Mom have one asset that the new owner wants to exploit - their 
  18 year-old daughter.  No, he doesn't want her as his wife, or as his 
  mistress.  Read the title.  Mom is more gung-ho about the idea than 
  Dad is, but he'll go along with it, as long as he doesn't have to be 
  there.  A promised big raise and job security go a long way towards 
  easing his conscience.

  Is this a good story?  It's probably one of the best of it's kind, 
  although I'm a little put off by the way the mother so easily falls 
  head over heels into depravity, and by the utter docility of the 
  daughter.  Still, it does hit several of my hot buttons.


The Tick!!!!  Arthur Takes Charge! - Dulcinea (12k)
  
  Who is The Tick?  Who is Arthur?  They're television cartoon superheroes,
  of course.  The Tick is a six-foot-six three hundred pound gung-ho-style 
  indestructable mass of muscle with a brain not much larger than a 
  walnut.  Arthur is a meek, normally timid and mild mannered guy who 
  found a moth suit that lets him fly.  He's the sidekick.  American Maid 
  is another Superhero - black-haired, clad in a red-white-and-blue Maid's 
  outfit - who's bored, horny, and looking for a good time.

  Now, when a superhero dame is looking for some extra-curricular fun, 
  she usually knows where to find a great-looking hunk of a superhero dude 
  to have fun with.  Only, in this superhero place, the other superhero 
  dudes are folks like Sewer Urchin (phew!) and Deflater Mouse (yech!).  
  This leaves her only one unexplored possibility - the great, powerful, 
  muscular, gung-ho, Tick!!  Of course, in this story, just like there 
  probably would be in the TV show, there's a problem - a "bug", as it 
  were.  The Tick is afraid of, uh, well, not women specifically, but, uh, 
  well, kinda like that other thing that goes along with women.  And men.  
  Like, when they get together.  And do stuff.  Hoo, boy.  Needless to 
  say, American Maid isn't overly happy.  But look!  There in the sky!  
  It's -- it's -- it's a bird!  It's a plane!  No, it's a guy in a moth 
  suit!  Arthur to the rescue!

  A very well-written story that hold true to the characters, style, 
  and humor of the television show it pastiches.
  

Treach - The Cruiser (147k) (mf, teen, nc)
  
  I'll let the author introduce the title character.
  
  <<The Reverend Silas J. Treach, pastor of "The Gathering of the Holy
  Brethren Incarnate, Church of God Himself", a denomination which he
  himself had founded, was in a splendid mood this bright, July morning.
  He puttered around his rectory, singing hymns under his breath.  He
  was a happy man.  There was a wedding next week.>>

  Treach ain't a nice man.  Matter of fact, since he started ministering
  to his flock's needs, there hasn't been a single virgin bride.  Those
  prenuptual wedding talks do get rather steamy.  In this story, we 
  follow the path of one soon-to-be-married young lady as she gets swept 
  up in the hitherto unsuspected dark side of the world of Treach.  Her 
  deflowering is only the beginning, as she is dragged on a spiraling 
  course down into the depths of depravity.

  Dark, seedy, nasty, with not a ray of hope to be seen for miles - that's 
  what this story brings to the table.  If sexual domination, blackmail, 
  depravity and conspiracies are your thing, you'll love this one.


Triplets - Frostflower (182k) (mf fff teen inc)
  
  Three girls - Brandy, Sandy, and Mandy - are the triplets in question.  
  They're blond-haired, blue-eyed examples of teenage pulchritude all, 
  nach.  Each has a different personality.  Each has a unique style.  
  Brandy is the brain, the militant feminist, the repressed woman.  Sandy 
  is the wild, willful, wanton hedonist.  Mandy is the sensual, not too 
  bright, submissive one.  This is the story of how each of the girls get 
  into trouble, and how, with each others help, they get out again.

  While nobody is going to confuse the way these three act with real life 
  sisters, it's close enough to keep me from questioning their motives 
  too much.  It's a fantasy, after all.  And besides, I like the way 
  Sandy and Mandy kiss.  Each other, that is.  

  Also, this story isn't going to win any literature awards.  Nope.  Not 
  at all.  It will get most of you guys, and many of you girls, into the 
  mood for some partnership action.  Definitely.  It's light, easy, and 
  breezy, sort of like an episode of Three's Company, but with body parts 
  showing and bodily fluids flowing.


Unholy Passage - Phil Phantom (42k)
  
  Cynthia Roundtree is going to India to meet with her husband, a missionary 
  worker, after he's been away for a whole year.  Their church group 
  arranged cheap passage for them on a cheap cargo ship.  No problem, the 
  captain is a religious man.  Cynthia, along with her five kids, gets on 
  the wrong ship.  Oops.  Maybe that should be Big Oops.  While Cynthia is 
  a Prim and Proper mother, a devoutly religious woman, and regards sex as 
  something practiced only between married couples in the dark at night in 
  their marital bed, she, like many women in Phil's stories, has repressed 
  her Wild and Wanton nature.  Her kids, especially her daughters, don't 
  share her strict morals about sex.  Note the decided lack of panties 
  on all three young ladies.

  On the tramp steamer they board, the Captain is also Owner and Sole 
  Arbiter of Justice.  He sees a beautiful mother, a sixteen year old 
  girl, a fifteen year old boy, twin thirteen year old girls, and a baby, 
  board his ship just as he is leaving the LA docks.  Cynthia is a realist, 
  and, once she hears the Captain's "rules", decides that God Will Forgive 
  All once they reach their destination.  She then proceeds to enjoy 
  herself thoroughly.

  One more thing - six Roundtrees start the voyage, but ten finish it.  
  You figure that one out!


Wendy - Joanthan Redgrave (180k)
  
  Uncle Dan, who's the narrator of this story, ownes a nice, big, isolated 
  house, with pool, way out of in the country.  His brother, who isn't 
  doing all that well financially any more, needs a break from the city.  
  So, Dan invites his brother John, John's 2nd wife (14 years younger than 
  him), John's three kids (2 from his first marriage, 1 from his second), 
  and John's step-sister (who's several years younger than his wife) out 
  for a long weekend.

  There's only one thing on the minds of all five of the women who come 
  out to Dan's place.  Yep, you got it.  Mind you, it takes almost half 
  the story to get to that part.  In the mean time, you get to find out 
  all about the kids, the sister, the wife, laugh at brother John's 
  mechanical ineptitude, get teased by the jailbait, and generally have 
  a good time.

  This one is well-written, intelligent, and a lot of fun.



Willy Tamarack Adventures - Frederick T. (540k)
  
  Willy is a middle-aged hedonist.  He likes his drink, he likes his 
  smoke, and he likes his women, not necessarily in that order.  For 
  him, life is pleasure, interrupted by bouts of paranoia, work, and 
  other things.  This story combines all of the above into a coherent 
  whole.  
  
  Despite its episodic nature, the author manages to keep all of the 
  characters consistent from one end to the other.  He also combines 
  many real-life things in with situations and events that should only 
  happen in fantasy.  There's lots of sex, too.  Singles, pairs, 
  threesomes, foursomes, moresomes, you name it.  There's even a villain 
  or two.  It's a wild ride.


Xena: The Bed of the Beast - Reynaldo J. Antonio (98k)

  What happens when you mix Xena, a corrupt government, slavers, evil 
  warlords, a kidnapped princess, some wizards, and a fortress floating on 
  the back of a giant turtle?  You get madness, mayhem, and a story worthy 
  of becoming a movie of the week.

  This is the last, the longest, and the best of this batch of Xena 
  stories.  It's almost as long as all the others put together.  At the same 
  time, it's as good as all the others put together.

  The author states that this story is set after Hercules defeats Xena and 
  puts her on the path to goodness, and before Xena meets Gabrielle and 
  gains a travelling companion.  So, no Gabby.  Instead, Xena hooks up with 
  one of the kidnapped princess' personal guard.  He's young, tall, 
  well-built, and good looking (of course).  He's also striking out on his 
  own to try and rescue the princess.  Naturally, Xena decides to help out.
  
  Technically, this is a very tight story.  I was hard-pressed to find any 
  typos or misused words.  Even the English usage, while sometimes not 
  as sharp as it could be, is still better than the average a.s.s. posting.  
  The only thing this story lacks is a lot of sex.  What there is fits in 
  well with the plot and storyline, and in my opinion, forcing more in would 
  actually intrude.  There is lots of sexual situations and innuendo, of 
  course, and a fair dollop of NC stuff (what else would you expect from 
  slavers) to keep you titillated.  This lack, in my opinion, is not a 
  deficiency for this story.  Instead, there is detail, plot, character 
  development, angst, anticipation, and fun.  A great read for people who 
  happen to like adventure stories that actually contain story.

  I hope that Antonio makes a comeback and writes more stories of this 
  quality.


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