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Piper's favorite stories list - reviews 1/3 (A-C)
January, 1998
Here's my reviews, or to be more accurate, my short summaries of the
stories. I won't bother rating them, since I like all of them (nach!).
Story codes included, if the copy I have has them.
.... Piper
A Friend in Need - Phil Phantom (35k)
Down the end of a cul-de-sac, in a quiet suburb, there lives a certain
group of neighbors. They have all been living there for years, and
they are all friends, more or less. One day, one of the men dies,
leaving his wife to fend for herself. As it turns out, while he wasn't
bad at earning money and paying the bills, he wasn't so good at looking
out for the future. There's no insurance, and a whole heap of gambling
debts left to be paid.
Like good friends and neighbors, Red and Cheryl take Diane in. After
all, they're financially set, and they have room in their house. All
goes well for about a week. That's when Cheryl finally can't stand
having that beautiful young woman in the house any longer without also
having her, if you know what I mean. Cheryl has had every woman in
the neighborhood, except Diane. Same as her husband. She decides that
she wants a combination domestic and sextoy. And, what Cheryl wants,
Cheryl gets. As usual in a Phil Phantom story, Diane secretly wants
anything and everything Cheryl can dish out, getting wetter and hotter
with each spanking and every step along the road to total toyhood. All
the neighbors eventually get involved, as you could easily guess if
you've read any of Phil's other stories.
The author himself says, "The following story is an uncensored sexual
fantasy involving practices that are illegal, immoral, socially
unacceptable, and messy. Only mature adults with a firm grasp on
reality should venture further. This story promotes nothing, and
nothing in this story should be taken seriously..."
I agree totally, but would also add that "this story is a gas!"
A Joyful Experience - Eros (14k)
16 year old Jason has been going at it hot and heavy with his 14 year
old sister Joy for a week, ever since he saw her naked. The only
thing they haven't done, yet, is complete the nasty deed. They try to
be as quiet as possible so as not to disturb their parents, but Joy
just can't help moaning because it feels so good.
That's when Momma knocks on the door.
A Slave's Gift - Steven S. Davis (6k)
If you've read any of SD's stories, you know that he generally writes
very intense, very squicky material. This isn't one of those kinds of
stories. Instead, it's a brief view into the mind of a woman who is
a willing slave. She has chosen to submit her will to a master.
Personally, I don't have the mindset for being on either side of that
particular fence. The reality of d/s makes my skin crawl. But,
the fantasy, the thought of what it might be like, I find extremely
intriguing. Here is a story that purifies the ideal of willingly
submitting oneself to an ordeal, simply to please another. The fact
that the task set is impossible is immaterial. Failure will be
punished, but that is also immaterial. It's the attempt that matters.
Nothing else exists but the effort required to comply.
A very strange, very compelling story.
The Addams Family - Shelby Bush (54k)
CR 130 10,9.5,9.5
This episode is titled "Eddie Comes to Visit" or "A Wolf in the Fold".
Eddie Munster (of The Munsters TV show) has come for a visit with
Pugsley Addams (of The Addams Family TV show). Neither of their
families could be considered even remotely normal, although "loving"
and "secure" might be applicable terms.
Wednesday Addams, Morticia Addams, Gomez Addams, Uncle Fester, Lurch,
Thing, and Itt, all make appearances, although not everyone gets in on
the action. For the first time, we get to "see" what happens behind
Gomez' and Morticia's locked bedroom door, what Uncle Fester does
while he's alone in the secret passages, and what the two kids do for
fun. We also find out one of Eddie's hidden talents.
If you've ever watched either of the shows, you know that they're full
of sight gags, bad jokes, and ridiculous situations. This story
fulfulls all of those expectations. Also, just about any perversion you
can name seems normal in their house -- including attempted fratricide
and patricide -- all in the name of good, wholesome fun, of course.
But, what's Wednesday doing with that puppy? And what's all that
green, glowing goo on the inside wall of the secret passage, right
under the spy hole?
Now I know why cousin Itt is called cousin Itt.
The Adventures of a Supergirl - Sharon Best (740k)
Once upon a time, the Supergirl mythos was strictly within the purview
of the writers and artists at DC comics. With the advent of fanzines,
cons, computer networks, bulletin boards, and now the internet, those
days are long since history. Fans of differing backgrounds, interests,
and varying ability, have claimed her for their own.
In this incarnation, one that takes place in Sharon's own version of
Earth, Supergirl is just that - a Super Girl. She's a lady of steel,
everywhere. Normal men just don't do it for her, if you know what I
mean. They can't, since the men from Krypton, when aroused, have a
closer resemblance to porn stars than normal people. Also, since she
has a vagina of steel, with muscles that can deform iron, she has to
be very, very careful if the person she's with doesn't happen to have
a Super Dong. What happens if she's not careful? Think of a vice, a
very powerful vice, squeezing without mercy ...
Don't feel too sorry for the lady, because in this particular universe,
she is not alone. You see, Kryptonians are only one member race of a
loosely related variety of similar species spread throughout the galaxy,
and through similar universes separated from ours by only the thinnest
of veils. And besides which, there's some fun things that can be done
with a room full of body builders and their associated equipment.
In order to keep things interesting, several of the similar species
are not exactly benevolent. Humans, even as weak and intellectually
stunted as we are, would make adequate slaves. Lucky for us, a few of
those allied species also feel a sense of duty to protect immature
races from exploitation. We have both friends and enemies, although the
dividing line between the one and the other is rather thin, and moves
around a lot.
All of Sharon's stories are written in a plain, straightforward manner,
using imaginative setting and even more imaginative plots. They delve
deep into the psyches of her various characters. This allows us, as
readers, to easily slip into the roles of any of the protagonists at
will. I found this story to be particularly interesting and
engrossing.
The Adventures of Me and Martha Jane - Santo J Romeo (1130k)
CR 78 10,10,10
Often, when people hear that a story involves children and sex, they
either start slavering at the mouth, or foaming at the mouth. There
doesn't appear to be much in the way of a middle ground. Well, maybe
this story is it.
A young Steven is befrended by his next door neighbor, Martha Jane.
When the story starts, they are 6 and 15, respectively. No, Martha
doesn't have a "thing" for young kids. Rather, she has a respect for
a young, bright, inquisitive child. For years, their friendship
grows. As Steven gets older, their relationship changes. He wants
to know about everything, like where babies come from, how they are
made, how the radio works, what's it like to talk on the telephone -
everything. Martha, rather than plying him with the old platitudes
and standbys, like his mother and relatives do, tells him the truth.
Once he has that, then his interest changes to other things.
That's how it starts, Steven's infatuation with the older woman. It
carries on for years. Physicality is crept up upon, slowly, as a
natural consequence of their prior actions. Nothing terribly sordid
or horrible happens. That is, until Martha moves away to the big
city.
Santo's writing style is quite good. There are many details and
aspects of Steven's life that are explored that aren't directly linked
to Martha, even though she permeates his entire life. This allows for
more than one aspect of his personality to come out.
In summary, the story is soft and sweet, bitter and harsh, all in
appropriate measure. Enjoyable, yet with enough meat to make you think.
Recommended.
Alphabet H: Hotel - Mark Bastable (11k)
CR 123 10,10,10
The hotel is "The Black Dragon", somewhere in Germany. Our principals
are the narrator, who is an Englishman, Greta, who is a full-sized
Teutonic woman, and Beatta, who is a 17 year old slip of a girl.
The narrator has been flirting with Beatta, and striking up a
friendship with Greta, for several months. His only problem is that
he's usually deep into his cups before Beatta starts making overtures.
That time of night, he's unwilling to start anything. After all, he's
got performance standards to maintain.
One day, he and Greta start a real conversation, and he finds that
she's really into kinky sex - s&m, spankings, bondage, other ladies,
and from both sides of the fence, too. That's a lot more than he's
ever been exposed to. Greta tells him that she'd love to get her
hands on that delectable little dish Beatta -- she'd teach the girl
all about lots of stuff, and the girl would love it. Greta would keep
licking her sweet little snatch until she did. Greta wouldn't mind
him, either, but as a 'Papa' figure. You know, suit and tie, with a
naughty little girl that needs ...
Well, sooner rather than later, opportunity knocks. He must work late,
and arrives at the hotel late, just in time for a shift change. Plans
come to fruition. Things happen. Not everyone gets what they want,
however. That's the fun part.
And Three Were Foolish - The Englishman (620k)
Three young ladies in school - Lucy, Trish, and Allie - undergo a
number of adventures during a particularly busy year. Each is required
to stretch, to expand themselves, and allow aspects of reality they
never would have imagined applying to them become part of their
lives.
Of course, what The Englishman wrote is long, detailed, and engrossing.
The characters are real, and the events true to life. I found it
difficult to stop reading once I started. The style was also nice,
as it made the story flow smoothly from one section to the next,
bringing me along with nary a thought about the seams.
Be careful about reading this story. There are parts that many people
won't like, such as when one of the girls is raped by a teacher, or
when one is molested by an older boy. These things happen in the
real world, of course, but many people don't like to read about events
like this. Still, despite all their trials, the girls manage to grow up
anyway, forming a new, tighter bond of friendship between them.
ANDY GRIFFITH: Opie and the Pie - Uncle Mike (17k)
CR 199 10,10,10
Does anybody out there remember the Andy Griffith show? Oops, sorry.
I guess what with all the reruns and whatever, a better question would
be "Does anybody not know about the Andy Griffith show?" It was around
a long time ago, in several incarnations. There was "The Andy Griffith
Show", "Andy of Mayberry", and "Mayberry, RFD", if memory serves. The
differences between the shows were in who was around the sherrif.
In this pastiche, Opie (an 11 year old kid, son of the sherrif) is
taking a pie his Aunt Bea baked (everyone called her Aunt Bea, including
sherrif Andy - I never did figure out exactly who she was related to)
over to Helen Crump (his dad's sort-of girlfriend). When he gets there,
he hears some strange noises. Being the not-quite-completely-nice boy
he is, he investigates. The sight of a naked Miz Crump pretty much
takes his breath away. I guess that happens 'cause all the blood is
rushin' from his upper 'natomy to his lower 'natomy.
She's in her bedroom, and Opie is looking in through her window. At
first, all he looks at is her breasts ("only he don't know to call 'em
that"). When he gets around to it, he also notices that Thelma Lou
("his Paw's deputy Barney's gal") is lying face down in between Miz
Crump's legs.
That's enough setup. What do you think Opie will do with this newfound
knowledge? After all, he is his father's son, and Paw is a pretty smart
cookie. Both of them realize instinctively that knowledge is power,
and power can be exercised.
Written in the style of a southerner talking, the language isn't all
that difficult to follow, and it does add to the atmosphere of the
piece. Light and playful, if you like the show, you'll probably like
this rather sexy little story.
Angela - Friar Dave (66k)
CR 151 10,10,10
If you want to hear about an old man's wet dream come true, Friar Dave
has written the benchmark against which all other tales will be
measured against for years to come.
According to Dave, Angie is "an over-sexed, barely pubescent preteen."
She's 4'6" tall and weighs in at an exhorbitant 71 pounds. She is
also intelligent, a schemer, a conniver, and a girl who knows where her
first time will be, how it will happen, and who it will be with. The
narrator is the weak-willed person who can't help himself in the face of
her aggressive seduction.
This doesn't quite qualify as a pedo story, but it's close. Angie's
body has just crossed that narrow line between childhood and
pubescence. Only as a fantasy could I enjoy this, since in any sort of
real situation, I would be backpeddling so fast, I'd end up outside
before I realized I had hit the rear door.
Still, this is a fantasy for many horny old men (like I will be some
day), and Friar Dave is an expert on bringing this kind of fantasy to
life in his writing.
Angeles City - Jim Fix (72k)
CR 154 9,10,10
Angeles City - a misnomer if I ever heard one - is a small Phillipine
town just a short jeepney ride away from Clark Airforce Base. Like
you'd expect from watching those bad Korean war movies, a small, yet
thriving industry dedicated to relieving a whole lot of U.S. servicemen
of their twice-monthly paychecks has grown and prospered in that town.
If you keep your wits about you, you can find just about any jaded
pleasure your heart desires. If you can't be pleasant, or lose your
temper, well, the local methods of dealing with stupidity is swift and
sometimes rather terminal.
Our hero, a career sergeant and man in the process of getting divorced,
is introduced to the better side of this place. He's an old hand in
these matters, having spent the better part of his 16 year career
stationed in the far corners of the earth. After a period of
adjustment, he settles down in a local hotel with one of the local
ladies as a live-in bedwarmer. Only, he hadn't figured on becoming
rather attached to the young lady. He also hadn't figured on her
having a past, one that intrudes rudely into his pleasant little
setup.
This isn't a story for the masses, or for someone who wants a sweet,
innocent little tale of lust and love. It is actually somewhat
disturbing. Some could consider it a love story, but with a
hard-assed edge to it. Still, the quality of writing is quite good.
I definitely enjoyed reading this one.
Appleseed - Wollstonecraft (90k)
CR 60 10
According to American legend, Johnny Appleseed was a man who wandered
all over the west, planting apple seeds everywhere he went.
In this modern version of the legend, it isn't apple seeds that the guy
is planting. It's his own seed, and he's planting plenty of it in the
bellies of many young women. He prefers them in their upper teens,
still in high school, and going to church, although he's done his thing
with pretty much every style and look of teenager in LA.
The ones he liked the most, in this reminiscing tale, is a pair of
twins - Judy and Julie. They were identical in everything except
personality. How he comes to inseminate both of them within a few
weeks of first meeting them makes up the bulk of this rather disturbing
yet intriguing story.
Yet, like in all the best morality tales, all good things must come to
an end. Or do they?
Barbara Toys With Boys - Unknown Author (230k)
There comes a time in a woman's life when she needs to let go, to
unpin her hair, and to cut loose. Barbara's time has come. She is
without a husband, and has all these needs, these deep-seated,
desperately demanding needs. She has also had exactly one truly
satisfying sexual encounter in her life.
What follows is a long, detailed account of Barbara's descent into
depravity. There are twosomes, threesomes, delivery boys, and grocery
store box boys. There is a brief brush with drugs. There's a shower
scene in a tiny, almost decrepit little beach hut, with a toke-head
and his friend both waiting for her to come out and play. There is her
son to consider. Sperm flies everywhere, and she simply can't get
enough of it. Not even when her son catches her with his best friend
from school.
Slick, hot, wet, and downright depraved describes this story to a tee.
Reminds me a bit of some of TheEditor's best offerings.
Batgirl and Catwoman - Mr. X (157k)
When The Joker, The Riddler, and The Penguin form an unholy alliance,
that means there's trouble brewing. Trouble for Batman and Robin.
Trouble for Commissioner Gordon. And, in this case, big trouble for
both Catwoman and Batgirl. You see, Batman is a useless, scene-
stealing, credit-grabbing schmuck, and pretty much everyone in the
commissioner's office are chauvenistic ditzes who actually think that
Batman is responsible for all those busted crimes and captured
criminals. Batgirl, who knows better, thinks that what they do is
criminal, actually.
Catwoman is the person framed by those three costumed criminals for a
string of crimes they committed. They figured that with everyone
chasing after the busty babe of badness, they could pretty much do
whatever they want without any interference, and when all the dire deeds
are done, they can eliminate the lithe lass and keep all that luscious
loot themselves. A good plan. If it works.
The fly in the ointment in this broadly slapsticked tale of bondage
and buffoonery, is Batgirl. There isn't any kind of fiendish sexual
device that can keep her down for long. There isn't a rape robot built
that can outperform the lusty lass. Yet, they keep trying.
If you haven't noticed yet, I enjoy this kind of farcical humor. Yes,
there is a plot, and it is as good as most of those used in the old
Batman TV show. I'd even bet on the characters being more, uh,
fleshed-out than in the original shows. Whatever you do, don't get
your hopes up for seeing a serious dramatic piece. This isn't. It's
pure bubble gum and icing. No meat and potatoes to be seen anywhere.
Escapism at its least serious. Fun and fluff. Got the idea yet?
Batgirl vs The Crime School for Girls - S. Sneakly (110k)
CR 223 6,9,9, Annex 10/31/97 A+
Everyone knows who Batgirl is, right? She's the daughter of
Commissioner Gordon, who is the head police officer of Gotham City.
That's the place where Batman and Robin hang out at. Only, things
aren't quite peachy-keen like they were back in the TV serial, in the
comic books, or even in the movies.
Batman is a wuss. Robin is now called "the ball-less wonder", for
literal reasons. All the guys in charge are male chauvenist pigs.
And, Wayne Enterprises has gone bankrupt. Whoah! This ain't a
standard little tale, is it? Batman trying to charge licensing fees
for her use of the bat-logo? Batgirl rich? Wowza!
Anyway, The Crime School for Girls is run by Lady Penelope Peasoup.
That ne'er-do-well had recently escaped from Slutmore Prison in
Londinium, evaded the best of Ireland Yard, and crossed the Atlantic
aboard the Queer Elizabeth. She has a thing for badgirl bondage.
That's what happens to Batgirl at just about every turn. She gets
tied, chained, hog-tied, and secured in almost every fashion
imaginable. She also gets clit-clamped, nipple-nipped, twat-teased,
and royally rodded by her nemesis. Naturally, that other bat flop,
Batman, is of no use whatsoever. Poor Batgirl has to escape all those
fiendishly inventive and devilishly terminal situations all on her
little lonesome -- mostly while in the throes of a string of powerful
climaxes.
Delightfully sinful. Lots of leather, rubber, and rope. Plenty of
devilish dildos. An entire factory devoted to creating the ultimate
in sexual aids. Many, many by-the-skin-of-her-clit escapes.
This is an excellent parody of all of the Bat-whatever shows, and is
just as good as the previous story.
Becky - Unknown Author (30k)
When a young person gets out of high school, they're supposed to have
some idea of what they will be doing with their lives. This isn't the
case for Becky. Her former plans, of getting married to Rich, are
dead, and she doesn't know what she is going to do. High school had
been less than wonderful, and the rest of her life looks to be even
worse. The last person she wants to see is Christy.
Christy is miss rich bitch, the former monarch of the school, the
homecoming queen. Only, what Becky doesn't realize is that Christy is
in just as much a funk as to what will be happening with her life as
Becky. You see, Christy, unknown to everyone, has a secret. She
doesn't want to get married either. She is a closet lesbian, and Becky
is the first person she shares that secret with, mostly because she's
had a crush on the girl for years.
This is a nice, romantic type story, with more than a hint of happily-
ever-after in it, but with a wonderfus scene of lovemaking between two
young women who know what they are, and are coming to a realization of
what they want for the rest of their lives. That future doesn't
include husbands, or whatever else either of their families have in
the works, but it does involve lots of bodily contact. Really.
Bewitchery - Sean MacDonald (47k)
Sean and Jessica. Two nice, ordinary people. They are. Really.
One day, not too long before Halloween, Sean finds himself looking for
a costume. He doesn't have any plans for halloween, but he's looking
for something anyway. You know, just in case. Really?
Jessica is the pretty young saleswoman who helps him find a costume.
Supergirl. Yep, superGIRL. She says that Sean is blond enough and
slim enough to pull it off. When she finds that he doesn't have any
firm plans for the big fun night, she invites him to go out with her.
Really. And, when he's still a little hesitant, she offers to buy the
costume for him. Yes, really.
The big day dawns. Sean has to get ready, but he's not entirely sure
what's involved, so Jessica helps out. He shaves, everywhere, then
gets stuffed into his costume and gets made up -- breast forms,
panties, booties, plucked eyebrows, lipstick, earrings and all. He
looks good. Really.
Now for the rather strange part. They to go a club holding a best
costume/talent contest. Jessica, dressed up as a witch, wins second
place. Some other bozo in a Predator costume wins first prize. Then a
real witch shows up, and she's peeved. Really. She casts a spell over
the whole audience, changing them into whatever they're dressed as. Now,
Sean, instead of being a guy dressed as supergirl, IS supergirl, super
powers and all. Really!
All the rest of the story deals with him, or rather, her, and Jessica
trying to get the damage undone. Jessica, now a real, spell-casting
witch herself, has an innate (due to the spell) knowledge of how magic
works. Sean, as Supergirl, has the speed, power, x-ray vision, and
everything else necessary to overpower any obstacle. Only, Supergirl
is still vulnerable to magic, especially the mind-control variety.
Really.
As a TG story, this is quite different. As a sci-fantasy story, it's
also quite different. As a guy looking out from inside the body of
a young, blonde beauty, Supergirl's slant on things is also quite
different. Lots of fun stuff. Really.
Bikini Brigade - Andrew Roller (320k)
CR 243 9.5,10,10
Oh, dear. Katie and Bambi are in trouble. Big trouble. You see, one of
them stole a bag of gummi bears, did something bad, and failed to do
something good, all on the same day.
Katie was running away from home because she didn't want to go with the
woman from Child Protective Services. Bambi went along for the ride.
Actually, it's the other way around. 13 year old Bambi was doing the
driving in her brand new candy-apple-red 4x4, while 12 year old Katie was
navigating. So there they were. Lost. In the dark. On a purple road
paved with Wild Berry Pop Rocks. Around them, candy apples grow from
candy apple trees, while gold-foil-covered chocolate leaves fall from the
maple trees. They find a sign made of peanut brittle. On it, written in
licorice, is a message - "Welcome to Candyland". Under that, in smaller
letters, is written "Citadel - 307ks".
Out from the woods steps Boswell the Berry Bear, who explains where they
are, how they got there (see above things that Katie did), why they
arrived there, and how they might get back home. Then he tells them the
bad news - Licorice Lad is looking for some young human girls to...to...,
uh, well, to do indecent things with, involving parts of their bodies they
normally keep clothed, and Katie and Bambi are the only young human girls
currently in Candyland. Bambi calls it as she sees it - Licorice Lad
wants to fuck them.
With characters like Licorice Lad (the bad guy who usurped the Sultan's
throne), Fruitcake Freddie (who _really_ likes Licorice Lad), Tommy the
Terrible Troll, and Gumdrop Guy, and places like Licorice Loch, the Soda
Sea, the Marshmellow (sic) Marsh, and the Peppermint Forest (where Candy
Canes grow), I wasn't sure what movie I was reading. "The Wizard of Oz?"
"Alice in Wonderland?" Something starring Shirley Temple?
As usual, Andrew has written a tight, highly detailed, and imaginative
story. Unlike usual, this story has a real plot, development,
fantastically overblown cariactures for characters, and many twists and
turns. Like, is Fruitcake Freddie a good guy or a bad guy? Will the
Gingerman Autonomy movement figure in the big finale? Will Ms. Matilda
Brunswald, Affidavit Al, Ms. Wilma Writ, and Glenda Guilty, the folks
from Child Protective Services, actually catch the girls before they can
put the real Sultan back on the throne? And what about Tommy's
candification machine? Will the girls escape before it turns them into
candy, trapping them in Candyland forever?
Also as usual, the young girls are bared in public more than proper
decorum would allow. Unlike a regular Andrew Roller story, I didn't
notice a single instance of a bottom getting reddened by a paddling,
deserved or not. Nor did I see any _S.E.X._ (At least, not by the 3/4
point. I won't say whether there is or is not any of either in the last
quarter of the story. That would spoil the tension.) This is definitely
not a normal Andrew Roller offering. Then again, this is definitely not
a normal a.s.s. story.
I liked it. I liked it a whole lot, despite the lacks mentioned above.
This is fun stuff, what with Bambi wearing one of Katie's bikinis, one
that's two sizes too small, one she keeps falling out of. Titillation and
wild and wacky goings-on make this a good story. After all, where else
could you go paddling about with six year old Pauline Praline on the Sea
of Cream on a giant orange popsicle and pick up ice cream cones with
rainbow sprinkles on them as they go floating by?
Blackmailing the Queen / Blackmailing Ann - Unknown Author (135k)
Ann is a pretty much untouchable ice-queen beauty in high school.
Our hero (if that's the right term) is a rather average, non-descript
camera buff with a penchant for nature shots. One day, out on the
edge of the wilds, he hears something, and goes to investigate. To
his surprise, it's Ann, along with the local hood. Yes, Ann. Even
more of a surprise to him is that she's hooked on coke. After
watching her trade a blowjob for a fix, snapping photos all the while,
he fades back into the bushes.
It takes him a whole weekend to think about what he wants. Blackmail,
of course, but for what? Are you joking? He's a horny 16 year old
guy, with the kind of goods on this beautiful young ice queen that
could ruin her life. He wants sex. And, naturally, he gets it.
At first, Ann is rather shocked and surprised, to say the least. She
says no. Our hero is adamant and forceful, so she agrees. They go
at it in the apartment they have over top of her family's garage. A
coach house, she calls it.
Not surprisingly in a story like this, she ends up loving sex, and his
cock in particular. The ice queen thaws out to find that our hero is
actually a really nice guy. What else would you expect. In fact, at
the end of the story, there's a marriage, but it's not between Ann and
Our Hero. You see, somewhere along the way, they bring a third party
in on their fun. Delightful sex, with the characters being just
close enough to realistic to allow me to suspend my disbelief.
The Blue Box - Unknown Author (270k)
This is one of those scifi stories that requires a modicum of
suspension of disbelief. If you do, you'll be treated to a wild run of
imagination that is hardly surpassed anywhere.
What is the blue box? It's a complex electronic device that amplifies
and distributes the thoughts of its host. It creates a world based
on what the host is thinking of, filling in the details, adding
texture, and making everything seem very much real. Also, the box
can be hooked up to more than one person at a time, although only one
person controls what happens.
Nothing is beyond this device. If the host can imagine it, the box
can create it. Flying. Diving. Walking in the clouds. Cities. A
deserted tropical beach. Physical interaction. Oh, yes, physical
interaction. Yes, that means just what you think it means. The two
people can touch each other and do pretty much anything two people
can do in the real world, as well as much, much more. There's more to
this than just playing in a fantasy world, of course. Real life does
take its toll. So do friends and coworkers. Then again, if you can
find love and happiness, what else do you need?
Maybe that other device he invented, the one that changes ... well,
read the story to find out what I mean.
Bob and Jeanette Brennan series - Uther Pendragon (many stories)
Many CR's 10,10,10
Celeste has said far more about this series, and probably in better
words, than I ever could. Bob and Jeanette are a pair of young people
in love with each other. They don't join up in threesomes, have other
lovers on the side, join in with family members, or even have a special
relationship with the family dog. Nope.
What's special about this series of stories is that it explores the
growing and deepening relationship of these two. They have lives to
lead outside of the bedroom. Their families are vastly different from
one another, as are their backgrounds. Yet still, they are working hard
at creating a life with one another. You know, just like real people
do. Soft, fuzzy, romantic, fun, humorous, touching, thought-provoking,
and enjoyable are all terms that can be applied to this series.
Recommended heartily.
The Broken Drum - HAGAR Pappa Dux, FAO Friend (75k)
The Broken Drum is a bar. You know, a place where people go to imbibe,
meet other people, sometimes eat, and, very rarely, have a good time.
It also happens to be the favorite hangout of a detective by the name
of Eric Thornquist. No, this isn't a murder mystery or anything like
that, although Eric is in the middle of a rather grisly and disturbing
investigation. Rather, it's a short peek into his life, the life of
Candice, Guido's moll, who knocks him down as he's about to leave,
Jenine, the waitress who's been turning down his passes almost forever,
and Leon and Bodo, who work as muscle and brain collectors for said
Guido.
Candice is looking for a good time, and since fate seems to have dumped
a hard-boiled detective with a hard gun into her proverbial lap, she
decides that he's as good as anyone else, and probably better than
most. Guido has been rather inattentive lately.
Fate is rather conspiratorial. Guido has a camera, and he photographs
Eric and Candice in a compromising way before Eric loses the thug while
driving to his place. Jenine becomes more than a little jealous,
seeing the man who's been chasing her almost forever locked in an
intimate encounter with a walking wet dream. "Her skirt ended above
mid-thigh, and her trim ankles, sculptured calves, and trim tapered
thighs flashed, as the split displayed nearly their full length, in
the subdued lighting, as that tight knit bun-hugging, ass-emphasizing
skirt showcased her tight, rounded, undulating butt; that moved like
two well-oiled footballs." The rest of her is just as good.
Is there a lot of plot to this story? Nope, not reall much of one at
all. Instead, it's a taste of a different life. It's a short peek
into another set of lives. It's a hot date. It's a mood piece with a
happy ending. That's about it.
Burning Down the House - Sandman (70k)
Now what, do you suppose, this title could possibly have to do with
the story it's labelling? That's easy. The story takes place in a
firehall. You know, a place where a bunch of youngish, good-looking,
in-shape gentlemen hang around a lot, just waiting to go out to
perform their adrenalin-inducing duties. Only, in this firehouse,
they have a mixed crew. That's right. Eight men and one woman. That
woman is Trish. She has only one fixed and immutable rule - she
doesn't do married guys. Lucky for her, the only married guy is the
Lieutenant, and he likes to watch.
The only thing hotter than the fires they put out is the fire between
Trish's legs. The only thing Trish likes better than getting fucked
is giving a blow job. And with the crew she has around her, she gets
enough of both to fill even her enormous appetite. Even Terrell, with
his monster 11 inch black cock, gets his fill. Morale in their
firehouse is better than it has ever been, and in the three years since
Trish started, there has never been a voluntary transfer out. None of
the guys have gotten married, either, for some reason. Naturally,
Trish controls the who, where, and how, but she is generous, and doesn't
play too much at favorites.
So what happens when another woman finally joins the ranks of their
fire brigade? Will all the hanky-panky have to come to a stop? Will
Trish have to find some other outlet for her super-charged libido?
Hell no! The more the merrier in her view, since she's just as happy
with other kinds of oral manoeuvers. Hot, plentiful, gang-bang and
singleton sex in all the usual places, in a setting that gives these
folks plenty of spare time to indulge in their favorite hobby.
The Cafeteria - Delta (68k)
Everybody has a dream. Jean meets hers in a cafeteria one day, when
she is finally ready to let down the blinds and allow herself the
pleasure of emerging into the world again. Dream (that's his real
name, by the way) is passing through. He's a disreputable-looking
gentleman, and Jean hardly knows why she sat with him. After all,
there are other tables opening up, with safer places to be.
It's with a great deal of trepidation and self-doubt that she allows
him to enter her world. Along with her misgivings comes the knowledge
that she needs help to open up again, to be able to enjoy herself,
without continuing to live the life of a conservative, age-conscious,
closed woman. That life is slowly suffocating her, killing her by small
degrees every day.
Dream can see that she is finally ready to draw apart the blinds, and
that he is the key to helping her do so. The fact that he will be
having fun at the same time is immaterial. It isn't until the end of
their time together that Jean finally learns why he is travelling his
own journey, and why he cannot stay.
Camp: Ron's Journey - WhiteStar (unfinished,715k)
In this tale, there are a certain subset of people with extra-ordinary
mental abilities. These people can be anything from mind readers to
telekinetics. Some few can be many things.
Ron is such a person.
Also in this tale, there is a faction of Americans who know about these
special people -- mostly because they are them themselves. They've
set up a training and teaching facility, somewhere, for people like
him. Once he graduates, he'll be given an "allowance" to live on,
the likes of which ordinary working folks can only dream of and buy
lottery tickets towards.
But, not all things are rosy. Just like in the real world, even mind
control sex slaves can sometimes develop feelings and desires that
clash with their master and each other. There are latent users of the
power - wild cards - that can cause problems. There are evil users
of the power. And, somewhere in the world, there is an evil
organization bent on wiping out people like Ron, as well as anyone
related to him. Why? I don't know yet. The story is, as yet,
unfinished. However, there is enough different chapters, with their
own problems, disturbances, and last-minute cliffhangers, that I can
count them as separate books within the same story line.
If you like "MC Incest Young Scifi Adventure" stories, you'll get a
kick out of this one.
The Captive Family - Eros (370k)
Bobby's Mom, Cathy, has just escaped from prison, and he's waiting
nearby, in the bushes, with a car. From there they go to a motel.
These two are on very intimate terms. Very, very intimate terms.
The next thing you know, they've roped in the manager's abused
daughter. Then the cops start nosing around a little too closely.
What do they do?
Hijack a family's van, with Mom, Dad, brother and sister, who are
all heading for a remote cabin in the hills. Needless to say,
Bobby's gun 'persuades' the family to loosen up their normally
rather tight moral standards. Everybody gets it on with everybody,
in a free-for-all spermfest that's sure to drown even the most
jaded incest-lover's libido.
What happens after Dad finally wrests the gun away from Bobby? Do
they all go back to the way they were before being introduced to the
wondrous world of inter-relational sex? What do you think?
Career Opportunities - Parker (150k)
CR 205 10,10,10
If you've read one Parker story, you've read 'em all. They're all about
the same thing - controlling and degrading women. Right?
To put it bluntly, yes they are, but no they're not. While the first
line is basically true in general, in detail it's like saying all
Arthur C. Clarke ever wrote was science and science fiction, or all
Stephen King ever wrote were thrillers. If you actually start looking
at the stories, you'll find that details make all the difference in the
world.
In this story, the central character is a woman named Barbara Dahlton.
She's a corporate bigwig, one of the senior staff, and likes to throw
her weight around and step on those little people beneath her feet.
They're expendable. If they start making too much noise about being
treated badly, make them quit. If a young, smart, beautiful woman
starts with the company, do everything you can to get rid of the
competition. So what if you destroy any future she might have had
working anyplace else at the same time. She shouldn't have dared to
be so beautiful, smart, and vulnerable at the same time. Barbara is
what people commonly call an executive bitch from hell.
Think about her name. Think about one of the less flattering diminutives
of her first name. Then remove one syllable from her last name. Wonder
who's going to receive an unwanted makeover?
As I said, the differences are in the details, and Parker excels in
making all the details work in a tight, interesting story. The sex is
sometimes hot, and sometimes disgusting. At times, I wouldn't wish what
happens to her on my worst enemy. If this was real life, everyone
involved should either end up in jail for a long period of time, or
spend a long vacation in a padded room. Luckily, it's fantasy, and the
reader can pick and choose which of the protagonists to envision
themselves being. Or, possibly, the reader could choose to be all of
them at different times.
The main characters are very real, even if they do step beyond the bounds
of what's normal. The situations are real enough that they only require
a modicum of suspension of disbelief. The 'big bosses' are sufficiently
blind, stupid, arrogant, short-sighted, and misogynistic at the proper
times that they don't poke their noses into their subordinates' fun.
That's exactly what the 'little people' have, too. Fun. At the
expense, fortunately (unfortunately for her), of a woman they think
deserves everything they can throw at her. And in this story, like
many of Parker's others, 'everything' means a long, long fall down the
business and evolutionary ladders.
Problems and errors are hard to find. A few poorly chosen words. Some
sloppy punctuation. One or two misspellings. In a story this long,
those are forgivable. The only problem I had with the story itself was
with Barbara. It was slightly harder to suspend enough disbelief to
imagine that a woman of her obvious intelligence and mental toughness
could be steamrollered without putting up a bit more of a struggle.
But, that's a minor quibble, and I only include it because a reviewer
is supposed to find something that a writer can use to improve a story.
Parker wrote some of the classics of this genre, and this is one of his
best stories. Enjoy, if you've got a twisted enough mind.
The Case of the Tingling Clitoris - Ramapo (25k)
Oh, lordy lord - a Sherlock Holmes spoof, with style, wit, and panache,
all rolled into one. When Dr. Watson walks in on Mr. Holmes manually
manipulating a neghborhood wife to orgasmic bliss, he is a little
shocked and surprised, to say the least. This is notwithstanding the
fact that said Mr. Holmes is actually timing the event with a
stopwatch. It's all purely a matter of research, naturally, as Mr.
Holmes explains, and has nothing to do with any possible prurient
interest on his part at all. No, the great man is in the middle of
a very curious case involving a murder.
Naturally, not everything is as it seems. There are hidden parts to
the mystery that only the gread Mr. Holmes can see through to. And,
of course, his brilliant mind comes up with a plan to expose the
true events of that horrible night, when death came stalking.
I'm sure Mr. Doyle is spinning in his grave right now. Either that,
or laughing himself to pieces.
Caught Between Two Angry Women - Mary Anne Mohanraj (53k)
CR 134 10,9,9
"Oh, nasty fate. Oh, cruel, vicious fate. Why did you deliver me
into the hands and clutches of such a sublime enchantress? Why have
you led me down this path which will eventually use my weaknesses to
destroy me?"
Such could have been the words of Tommy, the central figure in this
tale of faerie. He's human, but that's no real excuse for his
philanderning ways. Women don't give their hearts lightly, and to spurn
not one, but several, after winning their deepest affections, is a vile
thing to do.
So enters the Queen of Faerie. She likes trifling men. She likes
turning them into her fawning pets. Then, when she's bored of their
petty ways, she disposes of them. For Tom, payment will come due
after seven years in the land of faerie. He will be the victim of
the hunt. And when, not if, he is caught, he will be given over to
the minions of hell for their amusement, for eternity.
There is only one hope for Tom, and that is another woman, one who
joyfully carries his babe in her belly. But, for Tom, it's a very
slender hope, since he loved and left that lass as well. Will he be
rescued, or not. Only when he reaches the standing circle of stones
will he know his fate.
As always, Mary Anne writes elegantly, with style, with imagination,
with a depth of knowledge of the human condition few people posess, and
with the kind of skill even fewer can boast of.
Celeste - Dirty Dawg (38k)
CR 124 10,10,10
Brad is working on the computer when he gets a telephone call. It's
Celeste, a girl he's hopelessly head over heels about with an unrequited
love. He moved - changed cities in fact - to get away from the cool,
manipulative bitch (both of their words). Despite that, he made the
occasional call and wrote the occasional letter, mostly in moments of
extreme weakness. What's the call about? She's coming to visit. When
she gets there, he's psyched. She's not going to twist him around her
finger again. She's not getting anything out of him. Not again. Not
any more. That lasts until he learns about what brought her to him.
This is one of the few tear-jerker stories I've read and actually
enjoyed.
Cesura's Story - Averti (31k)
The author subtitled this story "How I bound me in a closet and slurped
a vampire." Very, very appropriate.
The players are Toby, the tall, slender, part-time dominatrix with hands
the size of a pro basketball player's, and with a thing for men, women,
bondage, and strange games. Eloise, the little woman with a fixation on
the fundament - anyone's fundament - and a yen to play with the hole
there. Cesura, the tall, slender vampire with a pronounced Texas drawl.
Vampire? Well, it looks like one. It's tall, it's got white skin,
it's very pale blonde, it's got pinkish eyes, and it's got a mouthful
of *teeth*. The narrator (a guy) can be excused from making that
mistake in identity when his first sight of her is when he's bound up
tighter than a kettle drum, and her face is the first thing he sees
when his blindfold is removed.
Can you imagine what a sexually adventurous Texas albino would be like,
being led on by two very experienced and adventurous women, who have a
willing and able sex toy at their disposal?
Our hero finds out the hard way, while the women relieve him of that
same hardness in various ways. He and they also relieve them of their
various tensions in various ways. An inventive lot, I would venture to
say.
Charly the Yard Guy - Michael K. Smith (86k)
CR 183 10,10,10
This is a "real" story, about real, three dimensional people. There's
not a lot of sex, but what there is, is hot. You see, Charly is
actually a young girl who falls in love with this older guy (the
narrator of the story), and they eventually manage to move in together
and live happily ever after. Mostly.
There's a lot more to the story than that, of course, especially
since Charlie as some very protective, very large, older brothers, and
the narrator moves to another city, but that's pretty much the core of
the matter.
Why do I include this story in my top 10 list? It's fun, it's
touching, and it tickles several different places inside my head.
Read the story to find out what I mean.
Chosen - Tom Bombadil (39k)
CR 148 10,10,10
In this story, the author claimed to be trying to imitate the style
and subject matter that Deirdre almost managed to corner the market
on. He succeeded with this one.
There's a certain letter that Virginia receives one day, a letter
she doesn't really understand, and that she thinks is a joke. It
tells her that she has been "chosen", and that she is to report to
a certain address on a certain date at a certain time. No names, no
return address, no nothing. A joke, right? Of course.
Her boss is in on the joke. Only, he's not laughing. Her personal
assistant is in on the joke. She doesn't crack a smile. So is her
best friend, who doesn't smirk at all. So is her mother, who almost
breaks down and tells all. No laughs anywhere. It is a joke, isn't
it?
Apparently not, since a girl she picks up in a bar somewhere, when
she sees the note, just up and leaves. No laughs to be seen anywhere.
What's this "chosen" thing all about, anyway?
Belinda, Virginia's personal assistant, shows her. That takes an
entire weekend. Virginia, still filled with doubt, shows up at the
place, date, and time listed on that strange letter. The reality of
what being chosen means, is much stranger than even Virginia had been
able to guess at.
Christine Makes A Deal (SHW08) - The Warthog (32k)
Let's get this straight from the start. This is a gangbang story,
with Christine being a gangbang virgin (she's never been involved in
one before). That said, there's a whole lot of scene and setup in
going from the start, where Christine is called up by a Realtor
friend who needs someone to show some prospective clients a big,
expensive building, to the point where her husband walks in the
door and sees what's going on. Naturally, she is ignorant of the
semi-promise her friend made to the two clients - that he would
provide them with a playtoy for the evening. They simply assume,
correctly, that Christine is really interested in making her little
slice of the profit pie - about 12 grand for a completed sale.
Christine *really* enjoys providing the kind of perk that seals the
deal.
There's lots of squirting fluids and squirming bodies in this one.
Commencement - Vickie Tern (84k)
CR 86 10,10,10
Oh, do the guys make a mistake in this story. It's Superbowl Sunday,
they're on their third or fourth six-pack, and having a wonderful
time of it. Then, one of them starts making fun of his wife's little
female idiosyncrasies. This infects the other men, and they start
doing the same, harping on what they see as their wives' lacks in the
"proper little homemaker" department.
The wives hatch a plan to teach these men a lesson. Naturally, this
being a Vickie Tern story, it involves turning the men into feminized
versions of their former selves, so they can experience, first hand,
what it's like to be a woman. The women, of course, take over the
roles their husbands once occupied. With proper care, and improper
medications, the men become happy with their new lots in life.
One of the best stories in this genre, by anyone. Personally, it
scares the hell out of me, thinking that this might, just possibly,
be true somewhere in the world.
Cuntabeast - Phil Phantom (198k)
According to the author, "This story is set in the American heartland
in the early 1980's, centered on a mid-size manufacturing facility
situated outside a major city." The plant is a breeding ground -
literally - for horny old codgers and young, fecund, horny, newlywed
wives.
There's a storyline in this story, and a plot, and some twists and
turns. Faye Thomas is a young, fecund, horny ... you know. Greg
Stoner and Max McGee are two horny old farts on the knife edge of
getting the boot, but they decide to take a chance on turning Faye
into a willing, young, fecund ... you know. Bonnie Ange was originally
hired straight out of high school as a young ... you know ... but
since then, has made herself invaluable by being able to tell from one
interview whether a young ... you know ... could be turned into a
willing, young ... you know. She's almost 100% accurate.
Some women are easier to manipulate than others, but Greg and Max are
experts. The only thing is, they don't realize that Faye has a history.
She's not a dumb, young ... you know. That provides the plot and
background for this swan dive into the murky end of the sexual
swimming hole. There's family histories involving family members.
There's a nasty husband or two. There's a daughter who's doing it
regularly with the company mascot, and a mother who takes on the entire
maintenance staff. Video cameras are everywhere. The big boss man
has his fingers (and something else) dipped into almost every pie. In
addition, there's a whole lot of young wives who get preggers regularly,
and their hubbies aren't likely to be the daddies. Not for the faint
of heart, nor for the weak of heart.
When Phil writes a nasty story, he goes all out and writes a *really*
nasty story.
Custom Maid - RC (26k)
Linda, Melanie
Oh, this is a delightful little story. It's a MC story, so you have to
suspend your disbelief about how easily a person can by hypnotized, but
if you do, you'll enjoy this twisted tale of trancing.
What do you do when you're well-off, busy, hate doing domestic chores,
and have a messy house? You hire a housekeeper, of course. That's
exactly what Linda does. Sooner rather than later, Melanie shows up
on the doorstep. Well! It just so happens that little Melanie is a
lesbian's wet dream come true, and Linda gets wet in just the right
place while staring at the working Melanie.
Being an old hand at seduction, and a master of hypnotism, Linda soon
starts mixing pleasure with, well, pleasure. What helps, of course,
is the fact that Melanie has all these repressed desires, just waiting
for the right person to draw them to the surface.
What happens? Lets just say that Linda now really looks forward to
cleaning day.
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