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From: sundance69@hotmail.com (Sundance Tales)
Subject: {Sundance Tales} REVISED! "The Fan Man" ** README **
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This is a revised repost of a story I submitted sometime back. When I
originally wrote this story I had 3 goals in mind.  The first was to
make it 'short'.  My first post, "Amy Visits for the Summer" was a
longer tale and I was forcing myself to write a shorter story.

My second goal was to make it an "easy read".  Nothing too heavy.  The
third was to leave the reader 'wanting more'.

Well, based on feedback, I think I realized those objectives, except
that it seems the last goal blew up on me.  That is, I received
consistent feedback that the story was 'too short' and just left the
reader 'unsatisfied'.

So I made a stab at continuing the story where I originally ended it.
If you've already read this story, you'll know what I mean..:)
Whether you've read it or not, my two cents would be to start at the
top and read the tale in its entirety.  I'm thinking just skipping to
the 'new stuff' will lose some of the story momentum.

Either way -- whether you've read it or not before, I would LOVE to
hear from you regarding if the ending I've added was better, worse, or
the same.  As always, reader feedback is what keeps me motivated and
helps me to improve.

Enjoy!

Sundance


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