Message-ID: <15151eli$9809110050@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15151.txt> From: Lee Vine <santiago@cuba.crosswinds.net> Subject: Rogue Reviews Digest No. 14 - August 31, 1998 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Reply-To: santiago@switchboardmail.com Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <35EB1856.B3535DCB@cuba.crosswinds.net> X-Is-Review: yes Rogue Reviews Digest No. 14 - August 31, 1998 NOTICE If you are easily offended or under the age of eighteen then please do not read what follows. CONTENTS About Links Mailing List Information Ratings Reviews No. 161 ["Barley Legal Teens" by Bronwen] No. 162 ["April Showers" by Hawkeye] No. 163 ["A Roll of the Dice" by Bernadette] No. 164 ["The Reality of Virtual Possession" by Tigger] No. 165 ["Sexretary" by Sue D. Nyym] No. 166 ["You Always Sleep With Your Hairdresser - Don't You?" by Sven the Elder] No. 167 ["Jenn's Bi Experience" by Jenntill] No. 168 ["Builders" by Nick] No. 169 ["Sharing" by E. Z. Riter] No. 170 ["Awakenings" by Ann Douglas] No. 171 ["Cloth Doll" by Mat Twassel] No. 172 ["Persuasion" by Vickie Morgan] No. 173 ["Sex In His Tent" by Glossy] ***** ABOUT LINKS Starting with this issue of Rogue Reviews Digest I will be including links to Deja News. This is in addition to the links to the ASSM Archive, which I have been providing. ***** MAILING LIST INFORMATION I send my reviews individually, when I finish them, to the Sex Stories Discussion List. If you are interested in joining there is a form for doing so on my home page. * Home Page - http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Cafe/3112/ * E-Mail - santiago@switchboardmail.com ***** RATINGS In order from best to worst I rate stories as follows: Outstanding Excellent Very Good Good Grudgingly Good Not Good The "Outstanding", "Excellent", "Very Good", and "Good" ratings indicate, to varying degrees, that I like the story. The "Grudgingly Good" rating indicates that I think the story is well written, but that I find some of the elements in the story so disturbing that if I were to review the story based solely on my personal tastes I would give it a "Not Good" rating. The "Not Good" rating indicates that I do not like the story. ***** REVIEWS ----- No. 161 - August 24, 1998 Barley Legal Teens by Bronwen F/M, Teen Length: 2,400 words NOTE [Added August 31, 1998] The title of this story is *Barley* Legal Teens and not *Barely* Legal Teens. I read this story, wrote the review, and posted it to my home page without realizing the mistake I made. The next day I got an e-mail from someone who noticed the misspelling. Ooops? Reading the title correctly adds a little something to the story. SUMMARY Laura fondly remembers the summer she was eighteen, Joe, and a field of barley. COMMENTARY The story is well paced. It is both arousing and romantic. I like the way the author transitions from the present to the past, and then back again. JUDGMENT This is an excellent story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524658 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14461.txt ----- No. 162 - August 24, 1998 April Showers by Hawkeye M/F Length: 2,200 words NOTE This is part four of a seven part series called "Seasons". Part 1 - Hazy Shade of Winter [No. 73] Part 2 - Summertime Blues [No. 125] Part 3 - Season of the Witch [No. 144] Part 4 - April Showers [No. 162] Part 5 - The Cruelest Month Part 6 - The Real World Part 7 - A Time to Cast Away Stones SUMMARY Sam hopes to sneak a peak at Julie, while she is in the shower, and ends up getting more than he bargained for. COMMENTARY This story took me by surprise. It did not exactly go in the direction that I thought it would. I like that. The fact that Sam had conflicting emotions made this story not just enjoyable, but also somewhat plausible. I enjoyed watching Sam try to resist Julie's advances. JUDGMENT This is an excellent story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=373022559 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13183.txt ----- No. 163 - August 24, 1998 A Roll of the Dice by Bernadette F/F Length: 4,500 words SUMMARY Lee travels to Las Vegas to meet Margaret, a woman she met on the internet. COMMENTARY This story is very well put together. I like all the little details that the author includes. It is about more than just sex. Lee is a woman who is trapped between taking a step forward and living in the past; living her life as someone else wants her to. At times, it was hard to follow where the story was leading. I think this is because the narrator seems torn between living her life as she sees fit and living it for someone else, whether that be Margaret or her mother. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=380905014 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14218.txt ----- No. 164 - August 25, 1998 The Reality of Virtual Possession by Tigger M/F, FemDom Length: 6,300 words SUMMARY Ronald has built a virtual reality chamber. He makes sure to test it himself. COMMENTARY There is more to this story than meets the eye. There is a bit of a twist at the end. The sex is all consensual, but if you do not care for bondage and discipline then you may want to skip this story. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=380904979 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14213.txt ----- No. 165 - August 25, 1998 Sexretary by Sue D. Nyym F/F Length: 8,500 words SUMMARY Kathy hires Angela in the hopes of seducing her. COMMENTARY I liked the way this story started, but once the sex began the plot went out the window. I thought there was an appropriate amount of build-up to the sex, but I thought the sex took up a disproportionate amount of the story. JUDGMENT This is a good story, but it is a stroke story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=378068103 [1/3] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=378068107 [2/3] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=378068115 [3/3] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13701.txt [1/3] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13702.txt [2/3] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13704.txt [3/3] ----- No. 166 - August 26, 1998 You Always Sleep With Your Hairdresser - Don't You? by Sven the Elder M/F Length: 2,200 words SUMMARY A joke becomes a reality. COMMENTARY This is an amusing story. It is well written. It is a stroke story with some humor thrown in for good measure. If I had anything negative to say about this story, it would be that it is a bit too short. I would have liked to see some of the non-sex scenes drawn out just a bit longer. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=380879842 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13864.txt ----- No. 167 - August 26, 1998 Jenn's Bi Experience by Jenntill F/F, F/F/M Length: 3,700 words SUMMARY Jenn gets picked up by Joanie and Tom at a gay bar. COMMENTARY This is an arousing story. It is also a stroke story. The author takes her time getting to the sex. Once she is there, there is little other than sex. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524662 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14462.txt ----- No. 168 - August 27, 1998 Builders by Nick Voy Length: 2,500 words SUMMARY Kevin is a construction worker. He enjoys watching attractive women walk by the site, and showing off for them, as well. COMMENTARY This is a nice little story. Unfortunately I did not find anything particularly compelling about it. Maybe it is unfair of me to expect all stories to involve some sort of a dilemma, but these are sex stories, after all. I expect to be titillated. This one did not titillate me, but it is well written and coherent. JUDGMENT This is a good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381517147 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14386.txt ----- No. 169 - August 27, 1998 Sharing by E. Z. Riter M/F Length: 3,700 words SUMMARY Monica likes to have sex twice a week. Jack, Monica's lover, likes to have sex seven nights a week. Monica comes up with a solution. COMMENTARY This story kept me on edge. I like it. I kept wondering when things were going to devolve, and as far as I can tell they never did. It is a stroke story, but it is very well written. The author did not draw things out too much. I really liked the opening dialogue between Jack and Monica. JUDGMENT This is an excellent story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381517191 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14394.txt ----- Rogue Reviews No. 170 - August 29, 1998 Awakenings by Ann Douglas F/M, F/F Length: 14,700 words SUMMARY Kathryn re-examines her life after being informed that Yolanda, one of her friends, is a lesbian. COMMENTARY This is a well written story. The characters are believable. The plot is well conceived and well executed. The sex scenes were not too long, nor too detailed. One thing that struck me about this story is how it seems to be focused on Kathryn. What I mean to say is that if she is not thinking about something or someone, or interacting with them, they do not seem to exist. It gives the story a surrealistic feel. This is not a bad thing, but I would like to have seen a little more of the world, including things that Kathryn does not see. JUDGMENT This is a very good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524630 [1/5] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524625 [2/5] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524620 [3/5] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524636 [4/5] http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=381524641 [5/5] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14453.txt [1/5] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14452.txt [2/5] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14451.txt [3/5] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14454.txt [4/5] http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14455.txt [5/5] ----- No. 171 - August 29, 1998 Cloth Doll by Mat Twassel No Sex Length: 1,600 words SUMMARY A woman, her daughter, and a cloth doll catch the attention of a man sitting in an airport. COMMENTARY This is more of a vignette than a story. It is a soft and sweet. I was not aroused, but then that was probably not the author's intent. The note after the story makes me think that the author wrote this story in hopes that someone else would write another story. JUDGMENT This is a good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=371795900 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13083.txt ----- No. 172 - August 29, 1998 Persuasion by Vickie Morgan M/F, NC? Length: 1,900 words SUMMARY Angela Martin, a school teacher, submits to the headmaster's sexual harassment. COMMENTARY I do not care for this story. What bothers me the most is the way in which the sexual relationship between the two characters develops. Unless there is more to this story that the author is not telling us, she could probably get him fired. There was too much action and not enough emotion in this story. If Angela had initiated the sexual contact, then maybe I could get some clue as to what she in thinking or how she feels. JUDGMENT This is not a good story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=372646146 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13157.txt ----- No. 173 - August 30, 1998 Sex In His Tent by Glossy F/M, Teen Length: 3,000 words SUMMARY A young woman goes camping alone after getting dumped. COMMENTARY The author takes her time. The main character is not chock full o' cock by the second paragraph. I like that. Sex is not the only turn on for the main character. She seems to get off on being horny as much as she does on getting laid. I like that. JUDGMENT This is an excellent story. LINKS http://x5.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=383104871 http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/14578.txt ----- 8/31/98 -- Lee Vine * E-Mail - santiago@switchboardmail.com * Home Page - http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Cafe/3112/ -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | <http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/>----<http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/faq.html>