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Copyright (c) 1998 Murry Davis. ALL Rights Reserved This story may not
be reproduced in any form for profit without the written permission of
the author. This story may be freely distributed with this notice
attached. The author may be contacted at murry_davis@hotmail.com

This is my first attempt at a story. I have read and enjoyed the
stories posted here for years and always thought I should try my hand
at writing one. Now, finally, here it is. Comments are encouraged.

It seems obvious, but this story is for adults only. If you are under
the age of 18 please leave this newsgroup, you don't belong here. I
will not be held responsible if children read this story. For the rest
of you, I hope you enjoy.

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Beautiful Submission By Murry Davis

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You wonder what plans your Master made for you tonight. You know that
you will do whatever he commands you to do. Since becoming his willing
slave, you have never disobeyed him. Tonight would be no different. 

You walk into the bathroom to prepare. You know your Master will want
you clean and fresh. You slip out of your silk gown and let it fall
around your ankles. Standing before the mirror, you study your nude
body. At the age of 24, you have the body of a much younger woman.
Your legs are long and slender. Your breasts are not overly huge, but
they are enough that most men didn't seem to mind. In anticipation of
tonight, they are standing at attention. Your nipples are hard and
enlarged. You rub your hands across them and shiver with the familiar
feeling. You can feel the moisture developing deep in your cunt. You
move a hand down to feel it. Pulling your hand away, you bring it to
your nose and sniff yourself. You know you're ready. As you shower,
you remember your Master's comments from yesterday. 

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He had walked up behind you and put his arms around your shoulders,
pulling you close to him. "I have something special in mind for you
tomorrow night." he whispered in your ear. 

"Anything to please you Master." you say in return.

"You know how much I enjoy watching you with other men. Tomorrow night
I'm giving you to some men. They will do anything they want to do to
you. I will only watch."

At these words, you feel your pussy spasm. You would do anything to
please your Master, but being ravished by many men at once was
something you loved, and Master knew it. He had given you to others
many times before. You wondered how tomorrow night would be different.


As if reading your mind, Master said, "Tomorrow will be unlike
anything you have ever done for me. Your devotion will be tested as it
has never been tested before."

"Oh, Master, I will never disappoint you. I will do my best to make
you proud of me."

Master's hand brushed across your breasts, stopping long enough to
grab a nipple and playfully give it a twist. "I know you won't
disappoint me. That's what I love so much about you. I can always
depend on your devotion, but tomorrow will be hard on you and I
question whether you can stand up to it."

"If it pleases you, I will be able to stand up to it." you say with
more emphasis than you really feel.

"That's a good girl. I guess we will know tomorrow, won't we?"

"I will do my best sir. I must admit you have peaked my curiosity
about tomorrow."

"You will just have to wait. I want you to be surprised. Right now
there are other things that need to be taken care of." 

At that, Master turns you around to face him. Your face stays low, not
looking him directly in the eyes. "Suck me." he says simply.

You quickly drop to your knees before him and look at his familiar
cock. You grab it and hungrily guide it into your mouth. It's familiar
shape is comforting to you. You run your tongue across the bottom of
the head, the way you know your Master loves it. You feel him swell
slightly and you know that you are pleasing him. 

Master grabs the back of your head with his strong hands and begins
thrusting harder into your mouth. He's fucking your mouth like a cunt.
You can feel it enter the back of your throat. Breathing becomes more
difficult, but you have become a very experienced cock sucker and you
know how to regulate your breathing. Suddenly, Master pulls out of
your mouth, leaving it feeling unexpectedly vacant. "Turn around and
bend over." he commands. 

Immediately, you do as he said. You can feel his presence before you
feel him grab your ass. With both hands he pulls your ass cheeks
apart. "Guide me in" he commands. You reach behind you and grab his
cock. You know what he wants. You guide his hard cock to your asshole.
He presses it hard against your opening. Knowing that the pain will be
less, you try to relax your muscles. You are not lubricated, but that
is not unusual. Master dislikes lubrication. He prefers your ass dry. 

Finally you feel him enter you. He pushes it in as far as he can and
just leaves it there for a few seconds. Master loves to just enjoy the
warmth and tightness that you ass always provides for him. You feel as
full as you always feel when Master fucks your ass. You never seem to
get used to the feeling. 

Master begins to slowly pull out of your ass. Just when you think he's
going to pull completely out, he stops and begins to re-enter you.
Gradually, he begins to fuck you harder. He grabs your waist and pulls
you back to meet his forward thrusts. With each thrust you grunt and
moan like the slut you know you are. You love being used like this. 

You can feel yourself beginning to cum. Master's thrusts begin to get
even harder than before and you know that he is close to cumming. You
give yourself over to the experience as you cum hard. The juices flow
from your pussy and begin to drip on the floor. Suddenly, you feel
your Masters cum flow deep in your bowels. He thrust deeply one final
time, holding for several seconds, before finally pulling his cock out
of your ass with an audible pop. His cum flows from your asshole and
drips down your crack, mixing with your own juices. 

Slapping you hard on the ass, he says, "Clean me off." You turn to
face him and take his cock in your hands and guide it into your mouth.
You carefully lick him off. You can taste your ass on his cock, but
you don't let it bother you. You've done this many times in the past,
and have learned to tolerate the taste. He pulls out of your mouth and
tells you to stand up. You get to your feet and stand before him with
your eyes facing the ground. 

"Turn around, spread your legs and bend over the table. I want to
watch my cum leak out your ass." he commands.

You do as he demands. "Reach around and pull your ass apart." he says.
Using both hands, you pull your asscheeks apart. You feel very exposed
in this position, but you don't dare complain. You can feel the juices
drip down your legs. "Stay that way until I tell you to move." he
says.

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As you remember last night, you feel yourself cumming again. Master
left you in that position for over an hour. He fucked you twice more
before he allowed you to get cleaned up. The warm shower flows across
your body, as you cum. The water washing away your juices. 

You finish cleaning yourself, inside and out, and step out of the
shower. Reaching for the towel, you're suddenly aware that Master is
watching you from the doorway. "You look especially beautiful
tonight." he says quietly. 

"Thank you Master. I only hope I don't let you down." you reply.

"We shall see." he says simply. "Your outfit for tonight is on the
bed. Be ready to leave in 10 minutes." he says as he turns and walks
away, leaving you alone again.

You finish drying yourself and walk into the bedroom. Laying on the
bed is your normal leather collar and a new white garment that you had
never seen before. You place the thick leather collar around your neck
and fasten the buckle. Picking up the white garment, you slide it over
your head. It hangs to your knees and is split up both sides to the
middle of your back. You know that it is meant to be easily moved
aside to provide quick access to your cunt and ass. Your feel the soft
fabric slide across your erect nipples as you move and you shudder in
anticipation of what is to come. 

Stealing yourself, you exit the bedroom and walk into the living room,
where your Master waits.

"It's time." he says as he opens the door. "Follow me." and with that
he walks to the black Limo waiting at the street. 

You follow, very aware of how naked you feel. The night air feels cool
under the skimpy fabric. Entering the Limo, you sit in your accustomed
spot. With your eyes lowered you wait for his next command. As the
Limo driver begins to pull away from the curb, your Master reaches
across to you and attaches a silver chain to your collar. 

"Let me see how excited you are." he demands.

You spread your legs apart and pull the fabric out of his way as he
roughly shoves a finger up your pussy. While wriggling it around, he
whispers, "My, you are wet, just like the slut I know you are." You
moan quietly as he pulls away from your pussy and holds his wet finger
to your nose, commanding you to sniff yourself. You deeply inhale your
own musky odor. "Clean it off." he says as he places the finger
against your lips. You part them and take the finger into your mouth,
tasting your own juices. 

"We will be there soon." he says, while you continue to suck on his
finger. Pulling away from you, he sits back in his seat and closes his
eyes. "Tonight will be hard on you, but I believe that you are strong
and will not disappoint me." he tells her.

"Master, I don't ..." you begin, but a wave of his hand silences you. 

"Do not speak now. I know you wish to please me, but tonight will be
different than our normal excursions. Unless asked a direct question,
you are to remain silent the entire evening." he told her. Throughout
the rest of the journey, he remained quiet, leaving you to your own
thoughts. 

Outside the Limo's tinted glass the familiar city scenes have been
replaced by trees and signs of entering a secluded area. Briefly you
wonder where you're going, but you know it's useless to worry about
it. The driver soon turns onto a small road winding through some thick
forest. 

Rounding a corner, you see a large house appear as if by magic. The
place is beautiful and obviously very old. You notice many cars parked
on the lawn. It appears that many people have arrived to participate
in the evenings events. A dull red glow appears to come from behind
the house. As the driver pulls up to the building, you notice for the
first time, several shapes milling about in the darkness. You feel
your pussy tingle as you think about what those shapes will soon be
doing to you. 

"We're here. Come with me." Master suddenly demanded, shaking you out
of your reverie. 

Opening the door, he pulls hard on your leash, and compels you to
follow him. He begins to walk around the building, leading you with
the leash. You can feel the anticipation hanging in the air. Several
of the dark shapes silently make way for him. It's obvious that they
have been waiting for them to arrive. As you turn the final corner,
what meets your eyes is quite extraordinary.

A large fire is burning in the center of the yard. There are many men
standing nearby, all of them nude. You think to yourself that you have
ever seen so many naked men in one place before. As your presence is
noticed, all heads turn to watch your entrance. Master slowly leads
you to the center of the men. The silence is only broken by the
crackling of the fire. You find the silence a little erie. You would
prefer some whistles or catcalls to this pervasive silence. 

Master stops and turns to face the circle of men gathered around them.
"I present to you my slave. She has been a good slave, and I love her
very dearly. I'm sure that she will please you. Enjoy her." With that,
he removed the silver leash from your collar and turned and walked
away. You watch helplessly as he disappears into the darkness
surrounding the fire.

The men begin to surround you, moving closer to you. You feel hands
grabbing your body, more hands than you can count. They begin to grab
your ass and breasts. The flimsy fabric of your clothing is doing
nothing to protect you. You feel some hands grab and twist both
nipples. A finger begins to explore the crack of your ass. You can
tell that it is looking for your opening. Your pussy is on fire as it
has never been on fire before. 

A wandering hand grabs your mound and begins rubbing your clit. You
cannot tell who's hand belongs to which man. The hands and bodies run
together as they surround you. You feel like you're smothering in a
sea of human flesh. You feel a hard cock brush against your leg and
another against your arm. Suddenly the hand at your crack finds what
it was looking for and thrusts a hard finger up your asshole. You moan
and grunt as the finger invades your guts. 

Someone grabs your white shirt and pulls it over your head, leaving
you truly naked. Now, only wearing your leather collar, you are even
more exposed to the hands that grab at your body. Fingers thrust into
your pussy, causing you to cry out. A finger enters your mouth and you
suck on it, running your tongue across it as if it was a hard cock. 

You feel yourself being lifted and carried to a nearby picnic table,
the hands never leaving your body. You are placed on your back and
your arms are pulled high above your head and tied to the table. Your
legs are stretched wide and fastened to the legs of the table. You
cannot move and that fact seems to help you relax and let the feelings
flow across your body. The whole time they were tying you down, the
grabbing hands never stopped. 

Now more fingers enter your pussy. You feel yourself cumming for the
first time since you arrived. You cannot help but to cry out. As your
mouth opens to moan, a cock immediately fills it. In a daze you notice
that someone has climbed up on the table and straddled your chest. He
is thrusting his hard cock into your mouth as if you are only a vessel
for him to cum in. You suck him the way your Master taught you to do
it. 

Suddenly the fingers in your pussy are yanked out and a hard cock
begins to probe the entrance. Quickly it finds the opening and thrusts
to the hilt in one stroke. You grunt as the cock begins sawing in and
out of your pussy. Your nipples are being cruelly twisted and pulled
by the hands working you over. Your cheeks bulge as the cock in your
mouth begins to spray its cum deep in your throat. You struggle to
swallow and not choke. Some cum begins to drip from your nostrils.
Tears form in your eyes as you struggle to breath. The cock in your
throat is throbbing, but he keeps it thrust in as far as it can go.
Finally, he pulls out and you suck in a big gulp of air. 
 Quickly another cock finds your mouth, thrusting in as far it will
go. Hairy balls brush against your chin. He begins to fuck your mouth
with firm masterful strokes. The cock fucking your cunt begins to
spasm as it shoots off deep within you. It's quickly pulled out and
replaced with another. Suddenly you feel one of your legs being untied
and pulled up and away from the table surface. A hand quickly runs
down the crack of your ass. It is quickly replaced with a hard cock
looking for your opening. It soon finds your asshole and, with some
effort, slides in. You have always loved being fucked this way. 

The cocks in your cunt and ass begin to thrust in unison. One second
you are nearly empty and the next second you are more full than you
thought possible. You are being fucked so hard that you nearly forgot
about the cock in your mouth until it begins to pulse and squirt it's
juice down your throat. It's quickly replaced with another. The cock
in your cunt begins to cum and is soon pulled out and replaced with a
new one. The thrusting now begins to take on a new rhythm. One cock is
thrusting in while the other cock is pulling out, never leaving you
completely empty. The man fucking your ass increases his thrusting and
you know he will soon be replaced with a fresh cock. 

The man straddling your chest with his cock in your mouth pulls out
just as he begins to cum. It squirts over your face, getting in your
eyes, but by this time you are nearly delirious and are feeling no
pain. Your mouth sucks at the air knowing that it will soon find a new
hard cock to fill it. It is not disappointed. Your body and head is
turned slightly leaving your head hanging over the side of the table
surface. With your mouth at cock height, it is now much easier for the
men to enter it, and enter it they soon do. A man stands over your
head from behind and thrusts his cock into your gaping mouth. His
balls are now brushing against your nose. 

Your body feels like a pretzel. It is being banged and pounded so hard
that you wonder how you are standing it. The cocks begin to fade into
each other. You have no idea how many cocks surround you. All you know
is that they seem endless. As soon as one cock is spent, another
replaces it. It seems to go on for hours. 

At some point, you must have passed out. You awake to find yourself
tied to a post near the fire. A man is fucking your ass. He must have
started while you were unconscious. Noticing that you have regained
some consciousness, he whispers into your ear, "Damn you are one fine
slave. Even now your ass is still tight." He continues to fuck your
ass as he speaks. "I'm going to have to talk to your Master about a
little slave swapping some day." His thrusting speeds up and soon he
is adding his cum to the repository in her ass. He pulls out and slaps
her on the ass. "Damn fine slave." You blush slightly at his words. As
he walks away, you wonder if you disappointed your Master by passing
out. 

For the first time since you arrived, you holes are empty. You feel as
sore as you have ever been. Every place on your body is aching. Your
ass is burning with the cum of dozens of men. Your cunt feels like it
has had a bowling pin shoved up it. Your face and chest is sticky with
dried cum. Your hair is matted and stiff because of the cum that it
has been soaking in. Your nipples feel like they have been ripped off
and glued back on. You know that you must look horrific, but you don't
care. You feel as if you survived the test for your Master. You can't
wait to see him again. and hear from his own lips how pleased he is
with you. 

You wonder where everyone has gone. You cannot turn your head very
far, but you hear muted voices behind you and you know they are still
close. They seem to be busy with something at the fire. Soon they
begin to gather around your strung-up body. Some of them grab or poke
you as they walk past. Suddenly, your Masters face appears before you.
You are so happy to see him that you nearly break his command to be
silent. "So far, you have pleased me, but the worse is yet to come."
he quietly tells her. Your heart sinks at his words. You thought the
night was nearly over. 

He backs up slightly from you so that you can see what he holds in his
hand. It's a long iron bar with a wooden handle. At first glance, it
looks like some kind of bizarre fireplace tool and you wonder why he
would be showing you something like that. Then you notice that one end
of the bar is glowing red hot and it suddenly dawns on you what it
really is. Your eyes widen in shock as you stare at the awful thing.
Your Master turns the burning end to you so that you can see the
design glowing before your eyes. It is a circle with a cross and an x
passing through it, the points extending beyond the circle. Each point
ends with another smaller circle. It looked like some kind of weird
atomic symbol. 

"This is my mark. I'm going to give you the great honor of receiving
it. It will forever show the world that you belong only to me." With
that, he began to walk around you. 

You could feel dozens of eyes focusing on you. Your heart is beating
like it has never beat before. You began to shake as you feel your
Master behind you. "I love you." he whispers into your ear. Then you
feel the heat getting close to your right ass cheek. Suddenly, the red
hot brand touches your body and you cannot help but scream at the pain
you feel. Your screams echo against the trees. The brand lingers
against your ass long enough to make certain a good image has been
formed and then begins to pull away. The pain lessons slightly, but it
is still more pain than you have ever felt before. You feel someone
rub something on the burn. It helps to deaden the pain even more. You
realize that you have been crying and sobbing uncontrollably. Master's
face is again in front of you. "It's over now, my dear slave, you have
done well." he whispers to you. 

Quickly you are untied and find yourself being lifted. Four men carry
you to the waiting Limo. On the way, several fingers find there way
into your cunt and ass. As they place you in the Limo, your nipples
are cruelly twisted one last time. Your Master is soon seated beside
you and the Limo begins to pull away. 

You cannot sit, you must twist your body in the seat and keep your ass
away from the hard leather. "Let me see." your Master commands you.
You turn away from him and show him your ass. He carefully raises his
hand and circles the brand with his fingers. "Very nice job, if I do
say so myself. Hold still." he says as he inserts a finger in your
asshole. "My, they did stretch you out a little bit, didn't they?" You
try not to move as he examines you. 

"Do you have any idea what this brand means? Of course you don't. It
means that I own you. I can sell you, give you away, or even kill you
if I get tired of you. Your life now belongs to me." He removes his
probing fingers from your sore ass and moves them to your cunt. He
inserts three of them, testing to see how much you have been
stretched. "Anyone seeing this mark will know what kind of a slut you
are. They will know that they can take you in any way they chose and
you can bet many men will see this mark. You were my willing slave
before, but now you are truly my property and I like to share." 

Looking toward the driver, he says, "Driver, how would like to fuck my
slave in the ass?" 

"Sure, I love a good slut as much as anyone else." the driver replied.

"Well, find a place to pull off and we'll make a sandwich out of her."
you hear your Master say.

Quickly, the driver finds a secluded spot beside the road and pulls
the Limo into it. Master re-attaches your silver leash and forcibly
pulls you from the back seat. "Hurry up slut. you've got cocks to
fuck." 

Before you know it, the driver is shoving his cock up your ass and
your Master is fucking your cunt with wild abandon. In your crazed
mind, you begin to wonder what's happened to you. Somehow things seem
very different now. 

As you feel the drivers cum shoot up your ass, you think about how
lucky you are to have such a strong Master. 

The only thing you know for sure is that you love your Master and will
do anything to please him. 

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