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Subject: "Hot Tub Reversed" (M solo, lite femdom, voy/exhib)
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****Warning....This is NOT unsolicited if you dont
want it just delete it NOW.  Also if you are under
the age of 18 close this and go to a safe play
place....hence your room or somewhere like that.  If
you are under 18 and you are still going to read this
(I know your out there) Remember it is not my
responsibility if this corrupts your mind and
perverts all your thoughts.  (credit goes to someone
else for writing this.  You know who you are, I
don't!  thanks.)

As you may remember I posted this last week.  It
was meant to push my Sevin's buttons, as I am the
DOM, and she is my SUB.   Today, AndyB was nice
enough to reverse the roles (very good job too!) and
pose it from the other angle...  As this would never
occure in Sevin and my FSUB/MDOM relationship, it
never occured to me that it could have happened any
other way, but I think Andy did a good job, and if
you are a MSUB, you may enjoy it.

Oh, Sevin, don't  you get any ideas!!! this is NOT for
you!  Try it and  I'll take your new nipple clips (and
chain) away!!!  ;-)

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HotTub Reversed

"Hot Tub Reversed" (M solo, lite femdom, voy/exhib)
by: Mr. J  (with help from AndyB)
written for:  Sevin
mr_j@my_dejanews.com

   We are at a party with a bunch of company people
at someone's house.  Most everyone is either eating,
talking, or playing volleyball.  They have a hot tub
off to the side, but in clear view of everyone at the
party, above the surface that is.  I'm in the hot tub
alone, and you say to the hostess, that looks nice.
She doesn't realize the double meaning in what
you've just said, and finds you a place to change so
you can go in.  After a bit of coxing your false
protests, you give in, and join me.  The hostess
actually asks me if it is ok, and I act like I'm out of
it, relaxing, and say "I don't care."

  You get in, but it must be on the other side of the
tub.  You wish you could sit next to me, but that
wouldn't be right, not in front of all of these
people!  Your back is to everyone, and me being on
the other side can see everyone.  You whisper to me
that you are getting very horny, and that you were
hot before you even touched the warm water.  I tell
you I wish I could come over there and fuck you!
Have you stuff your hard cock in me, and let it slip
in and out, but I have to keep my distance.  The Tub
is large enough so I couldn't even reach out my foot
to touch you!!

  You decide to tease me, and since all anyone can
see is the back of your head, you lick your lips and
stick your tongue out and wiggle it as if you, were
eating my pussy. My nipples harden and I feel that
familiar tingle between my legs.  Then you tease
me a little more by pushing the front of your suit
down so I can see the tip of your dick.  You are
inspired by the look on my face and the points you
can see pushing through the thin material of me
top.  In an effort to get me more worked up, you
push your suit down farther, revealing your entire
cock.  I can't believe you are doing this, and wish I
could do something about it.  But there are 30+
people not more then 25 feet away.

  You think you are running things, in charge of this
little tease-fest you are putting on!  You push your
suit down farther, and reveal your short pubic hair
and balls but in the process, you brush your finger
over your balls & can't believe how good it feels.
You try to hide  the fact that you've just stimulated
your own cock right before my eyes, but I can see it
wash over your face.  I tell you to do that again.
You play dumb and say "what?"  I say, "You know
perfectly well!  Run your finger over your balls
again."  You protest that someone might see, but I
assure you, they can't see you, and I can see all of
them, so you will have plenty of warning.  You give
in, and run your fingers up your thighs to your balls,
and let them drag across both sides.  You try to
make me think you just did it for me, but I can see
the pleasure your balls are getting. You wish I
would ask you to do it again, make you do it over
and over, but you would never say so, you could
never do that in front of me.  Not since you are in
charge here anyway.  Not since I am the one getting
teased here, being excited in front of all of these
people!

  I stare you right in the eyes, and say "stroke your
cock" in a very firm, yet quiet voice.  You cannot
resist my command.  You can not believe I just
ordered you to stroke yourself.  But you also can't
disobey that order and you wrap your fingers around
your  dick and slowly slip it up and back down
again.  You are  getting very turned on, and your
cock is very swollen and  sensitive.  I tell you to
keep going, but you plead with your eyes, not to
make you reveal something so private.  After a
moment, you can see the determination in my eyes,
and with a sigh, you give in.  You start slowly
sliding your hand over your cock, applying just the
right amount of pressure.  Trying not to show how
much you are actually enjoying this.  Looking at me
to see if you should stop, but secretly, hoping you
get the signal to continue.  You can't believe you are
being made to masturbate in front of all of all of
these people.  To fuck your hand in front of all of
these people.  The fact that they can't see you
doesn't even enter into your mind.

  You are starting to breath hard, and I see your
body flinch a little bit with every stroke.  I tell you
not to stop, and that I want you to use your other
hand to play with your balls.  You look sternly at
me, stop stroking yourself, and mouth to me a firm
"NO."  I ignore it completely, and tell you "don't
stop!" Again you sigh, and continue the treatment on
your  cock. Deep inside you are happy to continue.
You never could have started again, once you
stopped, without my commanding it. Again, I tell
you to play with  your balls. This time all I get is a
week "I can't."   I get more explicit, "run your
fingers over your balls. Run them around the base of
your cock, and then over and down."

  You don't even give it a second thought, and trace
your fingers slowly over your balls, that by this
time are pulled up close to your body.  Once you’ve
done this, I tell you to stroke harder and tickle your
sack. You slowly slide your hand up over the
engorged  head and then pull the skin tight as you
jerk your hand down.  You hope I can't see how much
effort you are using to get as much stimulation as
possible.  I see it, and tell you to keep stroking
yourself, and squeeze you  balls.  You can't believe I
would have the nerve to order you to do all of these
things in such a public place, but you comply.
Gently rolling your balls between your fingers of
the other hand, with the  pace of your stroking.

  You have already been completely broken, and at
this point can't seem to think about anything but
the slowly approaching climax.  You can feel it, but
know you must hold it off.  You couldn't possibly
make yourself cum as a show to anyone.  Not on
command!  But, with coxing from me, you continue
to stroke your cock with one hand, while teasing
your balls with the other.  I think I am coxing, but
you know, you would never willingly stop at this
point.  I know I've won, actually, I knew the moment
you came over I would!  And I sit and enjoy the
prefect view I have of you jerking-off slightly
writhing under the warm water.

  At this point, I tell you, "Whatever happens, you
are NOT to stop.  You may slow down if you need to,
but you MUST NOT stop!!!"  I reach over, and turn the
bubbles on, losing the view of both hands, as they
have their way with your body.  Just as the view of
what is happening to your cock is obscured, you
here someone behind you, a few someones actually,
and they are only a foot from your back.  Your eyes
widen, and you stop, one hand wrapped around your
cock, and two fingers tickling your balls.  I sensed
you would do this, and give you a very short, but
stern, glare.  You very slowly start to move your
hand again, very very slowly.  But you can't believe
this, there must be half a dozen people not more
then two feet from you, looking at you, talking to
you, and here you are jerking-off.  Part of you is
mortified, but also part knows if you went ANY
faster you would explode right in front of them.
You are very careful, as you continue to stimulate
yourself.  You glance down at the water and see
that you cannot see below the surface because of
the bubbles, then turn your head slightly and say
"hi" to the group.  As soon as they are done with
their hellos, while you are fucking your hand mere
feet from them, you here me say, "Hey, why don't
you join us."  You can't believe I am saying this,
your eyes widen and lock onto my eyes for a
moment.  Then you turn to look to see if they are
actually dressed for it.  To your relief, they aren't
exactly dressed, but you worry that may not stop
them.  All this while, you are still masturbating,
fucking yourself, so close to all of these people.  In
front of these people.  On display for these people.
And a part of you is enjoying this... maybe too much!

  At this point, as if to act like they might, two of
the women closest to you dip their hands into the
water.  First only a finger, then the whole hand.
Right next to you, on both sides of you!  You can't
believe this, and you look me straight in the eyes.
You can see me staring into your eyes, more deeply
into you then you thought possible.  Seeing you with
two people no more then 18 inches away from your
exposed cock, the one you are stroking, the one that
is throbbing from all of this stimulation.  You  can't
even make yourself stop, and continue to slowly
stroke yourself.  You think briefly, "what if they
went any deeper, they might actually touch my
exposed erection.  Their fingers might actually feel
my hand run over my cock!"  It scares you, but you
know that if one of them did, you would surely
explode!  You would explode with these people
touching you.  You shudder!

  You wish they would leave, but they keep talking
to you and I.  You don't even here a word they are
saying.  Your body starts to convulse very slightly.
It is taking every ounce of control you have not to
cry out in orgasm!  One of them says "Look at you,
you look hot!  Your face is sweating, this tub is too
hot for a day like this.  You look like you are almost
done."  You hardly pay them any mind, but think,
"yes, I am almost done!  I am about to cum in front
of you, and I can't stop myself!  She won't let me
stop!  She is making me jerk-off for you to watch!
I can't stop!  I don't want to stop!  I wish I could
cum right now!  I don't care if you watch me writhe
in orgasm right before your eyes!   I don't care
about anything but the feeling between my legs!
And that I am doing it because you told me to!"  and
turn your head back to me.  Staring me straight in
the eyes again.  Your body continually throbbing
slightly.  You are sure you are going to cum right
this moment.

  Someone in the group says, "back to the party." and
they turn to leave.  As you look me in the eyes, I
see your body is riding the approach of your orgasm.
Moving without control, just a little, but I can see
it.  I tell you "not yet", and you look at me pleading,
sure you will cum anyway.  Knowing that you
shouldn't, not right in front of me!  Not of your own
doing, of your own desire!  When the people are 10
feet away, I turn off the bubbles, and can once
again see your hands, still working themselves on
you.  You look down at yourself, see you are still
stroking yourself!  Pleasing yourself for my
pleasure!  Right in front of me!  Not more then a
few feet away!  And that I can see you stroke
yourself!  You look back up at me, now more
obviously convulsing.  Your eyes begging me to let
the orgasm scream through your body.  I look you
straight in the eyes, hold it for a moment, just
watching your light convulsions, and finally say
"cum for me!"  I barely get the words out when your
body starts to thrash, and you let out a small
scream.  You right hand stroking yuor throbing cock
and your other hand squeezing your tight balls.  The
entire group of six turns around at the sound of
your orgasm, and sees you thrashing in the hot tub,
not at all in control of yourself, as the climax runs
through your entire body and you squirt into the
warm water.  It takes but a second to realize that
you are cumming in front of these people, and you
actually moan with the orgasm running through you!
You have no idea what you are going to do.  You
quiet yourself, but continue to stroke your
sensitive cock, still drawing out the convulsions of
your orgasm.  You look at me  pleadingly, thinking
"What have you done to me.  What have you made me
do!"  At this point, you notice a faint smile, and I
wave both my hands on the water, splashing, and
say loudly "DAMN BEE!" and shoo my hands away
from the tub.  The group gives a joined laugh at
your being afraid of a silly bee, and turns and
leaves, you still thrashing around, uncontrollably,
cuming and cuming and cuming!   Still spurting
under the water, still slowly stroking yourself,
getting every throb out of the orgasm.  An orgasm
you will not soon forget!

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