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****Warning....This is NOT unsolicited if you dont
want it just delete it NOW.  Also if you are under
the age of 18 close this and go to a safe play
place....hence your room or somewhere like that.  If
you are under 18 and you are still going to read this
(I know your out there) Remember it is not my
responsibility if this  corrupts your mind and
perverts all your thoughts.   (credit goes to
someone else for writing this.  You  know who you
are, I don't!  thanks.)

Also, I am interested in FEEDBACK.  I'd be
interested  in topics to write on along this or
simular lines...

"The Hot Tub" (F solo, lite mdom, voy/exhib)
  by: Mr. J!
  written for:  Sevin
  mr_j@my-dejanews.com
  (c) 1998

   We are at a party with a bunch of company people
at someone's house.  Most everyone is either eating,
talking, or playing volleyball.  They have a hot tub
off to the side, but in clear view of everyone at the
party, above the surface that is.  I'm in the hot tub
alone, and you say to the hostess, that looks nice.
She doesn't realize the double meaning in what
you've just said, and offers you as suit so you can
go in.  After a bit of coxing your false protests, you
give in, and join me...  The hostess actually asks me
if it is ok, and I act like I'm out of it, relaxing, and
say "I don't care."

  You get in, but it must be on the other side of the
tub.  You wish you could sit next to me, but that
wouldn't be right, not in front of all of these
people!  Your back is to everyone, and me being on
the other side can see everyone.  You whisper to me
that you are getting very hot, and that you were
wet before you even touched the water.  I tell you I
wish I could come over there and fuck you!  Have
you sit onto my hard cock, and let it slip inside of
you, but I have to keep my distance.  The Tub is
large enough so I couldn't even reach out my foot to
touch you!!

  You decide to tease me, and since all anyone can
see is the back of your head, you show me your
breasts, one at a time, pinching the nipples for me,
so I can see them harden.  You giggle, and cover
them back up...  Then you tease me a little more by
pushing the front of your bottoms down so I can see
the top of your pussy.  You are inspired by the look
on my face and the erection you can see forming
through the ultra clear water.  In an effort to get
me more worked up, you pull the bottoms aside,
revealing your  lips.  I can't believe you are doing
this, and wish I could do something about it.  But
there are 30+ people not more then 25 feet away.

  You think you are running things, in charge of this
little tease-fest you are putting on!  You spread
your lips, and reveal your clit at the top... but in the
process, you brush your finger over it & can't
believe how good it feels.  You try to hide the fact
that you've just stimulated your own clit right
before my eyes, but I can see it wash over your
face.  I tell you to do that again.  You play dumb and
say "what?"  I say, "You know perfectly well!  Brush
your finger over your clit again."  You protest that
someone might see, but I assure you, they can't see
you, and I can see all of them, so you will have
plenty of warning.  You give in, and run your finger
up between your lips to your clit, and let it drag
across.  You try to make me think you just did it
softly, but I can see the pressure you are putting on
that stimulated little nub.  You wish I would ask
you to do it again, make you do it over and over, but
you would never offer, you could never do that in
front of me.  Not since you are in charge here
anyway.  Not since I am the one getting teased here,
being excited in front of all of these people!

  I stare you right in the eyes, and say "again" in a
very firm, yet quiet voice.  You cannot resist my
command.  You can not believe I just ordered you to
finger your clit again.  But you also can't disobey
that order and you run your finger back down over
your, by now very engorged and sensitive, clit.  I
tell you to keep going, but you plead with your eyes,
not to make you reveal something so private.  After
a moment, you can see the determination in my
eyes, and with a sigh, you give in.  You start slowly
rubbing your fingers over your clit, applying just
the right amount of pressure.  Trying not to show
how much you are actually enjoying this.  Looking
at me to see if you should stop, but secretly, hoping
you get the signal to continue.  You can't believe
you are being made to masturbate in front of all of
all of these people.  To fuck your bared clit in front
of all of these people.  The fact that they can't see
you doesn't even enter into your mind.

  You are starting to breath hard, and I see your
body flinch a little bit with every stroke.  I tell you
not to stop, and that I want you to press a finger
from your other hand into yourself.  You look
sternly at me, stop stroking yourself, and mouth to
me a firm "NO."  I ignore it completely, and tell you
"don't stop!"  Again you sigh, and continue the
treatment on your clit.  Deep inside you are happy
to continue.  You never could have started again,
once you stopped, without my commanding it.
Again, I tell you to push a finger into yourself.
This time all I get is a meek "I can't."   I get more
explicit, "run your finger over your hot slit, and
shove it deep into that warm wet cunt of yours."
You don't even give it a second thought, and press
your index finger slowly into your, by this time,
very wet cunt.  Once it is in, I tell you to fuck
yourself with your finger.  You slowly pull your
finger out, then slid it deep inside.  You hope I can't
see how much effort you are using to get your
finger all of the way into yourself.  I see it, and
tell you to keep fucking yourself, but use two
fingers.  You can't believe I would have the nerve to
order you to do all of these things in such a public
place, but you comply.  Slowing moving our index
and middle fingers in and out, with the pace of the
pressure running over your clit.

  You have already been completely broken, and at
this point can't seem to think about anything but
the slowly approaching climax.  You can feel it, but
know you must hold it off.  You couldn't possibly
bring yourself to climax as a show to anyone.  Not
on command!  But, with coxing from me, you
continue to rub your clit with one hand, while
fucking yourself with the other.  I think I am
coxing, but you know, you would never willingly
stop at this point.  I know I've won, actually, I knew
the moment you came over I would!  And I sit and
enjoy the prefect view I have of you fucking
yourself, slightly writhing, under the warm water.

  At this point, I tell you, "Whatever happens, you
are NOT to stop.  You may slow down if you need to,
but you MUST NOT stop!!!"  I reach over, and turn the
bubbles on, losing the view of both hands, as they
have their way with your body.  Just as the view of
what is happening to your pussy is obscured, you
here someone behind you, a few someones actually,
and they are only a foot from your back.  Your eyes
widen, and you stop, one hand pressed against your
clit, and two fingers buried deep inside of your
cunt.  I sense you would do this, and give you a very
short, but stern, glare.  You very slowly start to
move your fingers again, very very slowly.  But you
can't believe this, there must be half a dozen
people not more then two feet from you, looking at
you, talking to you, and here you are fucking
yourself.  Part of you is mortified, but also part
knows if you went ANY faster you would explode
right in front of them.  You are very careful, as you
continue to stimulate yourself.  You glance down at
the water and see that you cannot see below the
surface because of the bubbles, then turn your head
slightly and say "hi" to the group.  As soon as they
are done with their hellos, while you are fucking
yourself mere feet from them, you here me say,
"Hey, why don't you join us."  You can't believe I am
saying this, your eyes widen and lock onto my eyes
for a moment.  Then you turn to look to see if they
are actually dressed for it.  To your relief, they
aren't exactly dressed, but you worry that may not
stop them.  All this while, you are still
masturbating, fucking yourself, so close to all of
these people.  In front of these people.  On display
for these people.  And a part of you is enjoying
this... maybe too much!

  At this point, as if to act like they might, two of
the group closest to you dip their hands into the
water.  First only a finger, then the whole hand.
Right next to you, on both sides of you!  You can't
believe this, and you look me straight in the eyes.
You can see me staring into your eyes, more deeply
into you then you thought possible.  Seeing you with
two people no more then 18 inches away from your
exposed pussy, the one you are fucking, the one that
is throbbing from all of this stimulation.  You  can't
even make yourself stop, and continue to slowly
stroke yourself.  You think briefly, "what if they
went any deeper, they might actually touch my
exposed pussy.  Their fingers might actually feel
my fingers run over my clit!"  It scares you, but you
know that if one of them did, you would surly
explode!  You would explode with these people
touching you.  You shudder!

  You wish they would leave, but they keep talking
to you and I.  You don't even here a word they are
saying.  Your body starts to convulse very slightly.
It is taking every ounce of control you have not to
cry out in orgasm!  One of them says "Look at you,
you look hot!  Your face is sweating, this tub is too
hot for a day like this.  You look like you are almost
done."  You hardly pay them any mind, but think,
"yes, I am almost done!  I am about to climax in
front of you, and I can't stop myself!  He won't let
me stop!  He is making me fuck myself for you to
watch!  I can't stop!  I don't want to stop!  I wish I
could climax right now!  I don't care if you watch
me writhe in orgasm right before your eyes!   I
don't care about anything but the feeling between
my legs!  And that I am doing it because you told me
to!"  and turn your head back to me.  Staring me
straight in the eyes again.  Your body continually
throbbing slightly.  You are sure you are going to
cum right this moment.

  Someone in the group says, "back to the party." and
they turn to leave.  As you look me in the eyes, I
see your body is riding the approach of your orgasm.
Moving without control, just a little, but I can see
it.  I tell you "not yet", and you look at me pleading,
sure you will cum anyway.  Knowing that you
shouldn't, not right in front of me!  Not of your own
doing, of your own desire!  When the people are 10
feet away, I turn off the bubbles, and can once
again see your fingers, still working themselves on
you.  You look down at yourself, see you are still
fucking yourself!  Pleasing yourself for my
pleasure!  Right in front of me!  Not more then a
few feet away!  And that I can see you fuck
yourself!  You look back up at me, now more
obviously convulsing.  Your eyes begging me to let
the orgasm scream through your body.  I look you
straight in the eyes, hold it for a moment, just
watching your light convulsions, and finally say
"cum for me!"  I barely get the words out when your
body starts to thrash, and you let out a small
scream.  You fingers buried in your hot pussy as
deeply as you can shove them, and your other hand
pressed firmly onto your clit.  The entire group of
six turns around at the sound of your orgasm, and
sees you thrashing in the hot tub, not at all in
control of yourself, as the climax runs through your
entire body.  It takes but a second to realize that
you are climaxing in front of these people, and you
actually screamed with the orgasm running through
you!  You have no idea what you are going to do.  You
quiet yourself, but still have your fingers buried
into your cunt, still drawing out the convulsions of
your climax.  You look at me pleadingly, thinking
"What have you done to me.  What have you made me
do!"  At this point, you notice a faint smile, and I
wave both my hands on the water, splashing, and
say loudly "DAMN BEE!" and shoo my hands away
from the tub.  The group gives a joined giggle at
your being afraid of a silly bee, and turns and
leaves, you still thrashing around, uncontrollably,
cuming and cuming and cuming!   Still climaxing
under the water, still slowly fucking yourself,
getting every throb out of the orgasm.  An orgasm
you will not soon forget!

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