Message-ID: <13320eli$9807231517@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/13320.txt> From: Diana Svensson <diana_svensson@yahoo.com> Subject: The Sad Lad Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <19980723171317.14010.rocketmail@send1c.yahoomail.com> Note: This is my first (very short) story ever, and the first time I ever posted anything to a newsgroup. I hope I did everything right and didn't make an ass of myself. To fulfill this need of mine to apologize even before I make the mistakes: English is my second language, so please bare... eh... beer... argh! Please bear with me. Any feedback would be appreciated, good or bad, even spelling and grammar corrections (how else would I learn?) Here goes... The Sad Lad She shivered. Cool, salty tears on her warm, trembling breast. He was crying. Oh how she wanted to comfort him, making his smile light up her darkened bedroom. Tears kept flowing, sending electric shocks through her body as they fell on her sensitive nipples. Slowly trickling down unto her breast, the tears mixed with her own fresh sweat. Her body was weeping forth tears of it's own, but of a different kind. Her tears where hot and slick, making her insides moist and slippery. Those tears were there to comfort her - to comfort him - as he entered her. She reached her arms around him, embracing his body - it felt so cold. Pressing him tight against her, wanting to share her warmth with him. Her hands tenderly caressed his back, his shoulders, and his neck. Her breath grew heavy with excitement from his welcome intrusion into her. He was moving slowly between her legs now, setting fire to her passion, making her gasp and moan softly. His lips touched hers. She was on the edge now, on the edge of that cliff they were scaling together, in front of that familiar and wonderful fall. Hot breath on her ear, a low whisper "I love you." Thoughts exploding through her head, almost too fast to comprehend. "Mean that? How? Just met! Even know her?" Confusion, still her heart swelled with warmth, happiness, pride and... love. And all thoughts went away as she leapt of the cliff, screaming out quietly as she started to fall. Contracting wildly around him, she could feel him releasing his boiling stream inside of her, as he too leapt of the edge, following her into the depths. Her body shaking with ecstasy, her mind going blank, yet so full of sensation she was overwhelmed. There was nothing urgent about the sharp pain in her chest. It didn't matter now. Cool, sharp steel through her warm, trembling breast. She was dying. She heard his anguished voice "I'm so sorry," then it all faded away. _________________________________________________________ DO YOU YAHOO!? Get your free @yahoo.com address at http://mail.yahoo.com -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | <http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/>----<http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/faq.html>