Message-ID: <11916eli$9806061354@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/11916.txt> From: "Master J" <maybarra@my-dejanews.com> Subject: Story: Lisa Submits (10/10)(MF, BD, DS, cons) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <OHDHMNDHDFLBCAAA@my-dejanews.com> This is my first attempt at posting a story. I would appreciate any comments criticisms, assistance! (So would Lisa!) This story is fiction, and contains scenes of sexual activities between consenting adults. If you are under 18 yrs of age, or are offended by this kind of thing, what the heck are you doing in this newsgroup? **************************** LISA SUBMITS by Master J Chapter 10 Jack returned to the room quickly, not wanting to leave Lisa unattended for any length of time. She was still sleeping when he got back, so he set her suitcase on the table. He opened it to see what she had brought with her, checking to see if she had followed instructions. Aside from her personal hygiene items and a couple of changes of clothes, she had brought some rather interesting toys! First was some rope, and as he held it up Jack could see that it was the "crotch strap" which she had fashioned at his request. Simple but effective, he could see that it would work quite well. But he could also see that she would have a difficult time maintaining the proper tension. That was why she had repeatedly chafed while wearing it. He decided that they would have to do something about that! Next was a bra, but he immediately recongnized it as the "tack" bra which she had made. She had lost it for a time (he still couldn't figure out how one could "lose" a bra like this) but she must have found it again! Jack was pleased with this. It would come in handy this weekend! A quick comparison showed him that it was one size smaller than the other bra she had brought. Very good! There was also a selection of dildos, vibrators and anal probes, which he was sure he could make excellent use of this weekend. And at the bottom of the suitcase was a small jar of Tiger Balm! She had brought everything! A soft moan from the bed attracted his attention, but when he looked over he saw that Lisa was still sleeping, and the string between her foot and nipples was tight. He was amazed that she could sleep while her nipples were stretched like that. He must have really worn her out. But as he glanced at the time, he decide that it was time to awaken her and prepare her for the final act of this night's session. He walked over and carefully cut the cord which was stretched across her body, releasing the tension on her nipples. She let out an audible sigh, but did not awaken. Carefully and tenderly, trying not to awaken her, he slipped the string off of her nipples and toe, then released the spreader bar from the foot of the bed. Slowly he began raising the bar, lifting her feet into the air, until her legs were positioned at 90 degrees from her body. He attached the bar to the eye hook in the ceiling, locking her legs into position. When he looked down, he saw her watching him, and he immediately came to her, kissing her lightly. "Hello, Pet. Did you enjoy your nap?" "Yes, Master!" she responded. "Good. I hope you are well rested. We have one more activity for tonight before we go to sleep." He reached over and found some more cord and, with another light kiss, he began to wrap the cord around her right breast, starting at the base and spiralling outward until he had wrapped about half of her breast. Almost immediately he could see it begin to swell, and he quickly began wrapping the left breast as well. With both breasts wrapped and swollen, he watched as her nipples grew larger and larger. Lisa's eyes were closed, now, and she was moaning lightly from the discomfort, but she lay quietly, accepting his ministrations. Jack now brought out a miniature whip, just a single strand of leather with a handle, and flicked it against her right nipple! Lisa's eyes opened wide, and her whole body arched. The chains on her arms rattled as she moved, and her mouth opened soundlessly! And as her breasts began turning blue from their bondage, the abused nipple took on an angry red tone. As her body began to relax slightly, Jack whipped the other nipple. Once again Lisa's body arched, and a slight shriek escaped her lips, which she quickly cut off. She didn't want to be gagged again, but this pain was excrutiating! While Lisa recovered from the abuse to her nipples, Jack removed some clamps from his case and began attaching them to her labia. The discomfort from these would have been bad before, but the stinging in Lisa's breasts made this seem almost tame by comparison. With the clamps in position, Jack attached string to them and began pulling them apart, stretching the labia and exposing Lisa's clit and pussy. He tied the strings off to her thighs, and Lisa could feel a slight breeze from the air conditioning lick at her clit. Once again Jack brought the single strand of the whip down on her abused nipples, and Lisa clenched her teeth to keep from crying out loud, but at the same time she could feel herself becoming aroused! Each stroke to her nipples sent shock waves right to her clit! She could feel her juices beginning to well up in her pussy, and a brief glance at her Master told her that HE could see it, too! Exposed as she was, there was no way that she could conceal her arousal from him. And knowing this, knowing that he could see her completely exposed, was arousing her even more! Jack watched carefully, seeing her juices flowing, and he saw her clit slip out from its protective hood. He could almost see it throbbing from her desire, and he knew, finally KNEW with certainty, that she was his at last! Looking directly into her eyes, holding her with the force of his gaze, he brought the single strand of his whip down directly onto her aroused clit! And he watched as her eyes rolled! Her mouth opened, screaming silently! Her whole body shuddered and trembled! Her hips rocked back and forth! "What do you want, Pet? What do you need?" he whispered when she had begun to recover. "I want to know your deepest desire! The one thing that you want the most, yet fear the most! TELL me, Pet. What do you want?" Lisa closed her eyes, and her head moved slowly from side to side. He was asking her to open herself to him totally, she knew. Could she do it? Could she trust this man? She knew that she loved him, with all of her heart, and she wanted to trust him, totally. But what he was asking was far removed from the simple little pleasures she had told him about already. He was seeking to look into her soul, to know her completely, as no one had ever known her before. Her train of thought was broken as once again the whip licked at her nipple with it's burning kiss! And then the other nipple! She moaned, she cried out, and then she almost lost complete control when he again brought the whip down on her clit! "Answer me, Pet! Tell me what you WANT!" And she opened her eyes to look at her Master. This man who made her see herself as she had never seen herself before. This man who loved her, desired her, despite her imperfections. This man who had brought her so much pain, and so much pleasure, that she could truly not distinguish between them. His touch inflamed her; his gaze intoxicated her; his voice enthralled her. Yes, she thought, I DO trust this man, my Master! And just that quickly she made up her mind! "I want to be yours, Master! I want you to make me yours totally! My body is YOUR posession, to do with as you will. I want to scream for you, if that makes you happy! I want to suffer under your attentions, because that is what you want! I submit to you totally, my Master! I am YOURS!" With these words Lisa closed her eyes, and a single tear coursed down her cheek. She had handed him her whole life, and now she felt strangely at peace. Whatever would come, whatever would happen, she knew that he would always be there for her, always protect her, and always love her. And he would fill her to overflowing with her own lust, her own desire, her own pain. In her complete submission, she did not see the tears fill his eyes, did not see the trembling of his lips as he gazed at her. But she heard the huskiness in his voice, and she heard the whistle of the whip, as he once more brought it down harshly on her clit, and whispered to her, "CUM FOR ME, LISA!" And as her orgasm crashed over her, as her body was wracked with the pleasure/pain of his love, she knew that she had made the right decision! And again she heard those words, which she would come to fear, come to love. Punctuated with the crashing pain of the whip on her clit, he said again, "CUM FOR ME, LISA!" And again! And again! ************ Well, folks. That's the end of this story. At least for now. I have started on a sequel which takes place on the next day. I would love to hear some suggestions, comments and/or criticisms. For those of you who have responded, favorably or not, Lisa and I thank you for taking the time. I've enjoyed writing this and posting it for everyone to share, and I intend to do some more. Thanks again. --- Master J ICQ# 3712786 -----== Sent via Deja News, The Discussion Network ==----- http://www.dejanews.com/ Easy access to 50,000+ discussion forums -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | <http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/>----<http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/faq.html>