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This is my first attempt at posting a story. I would appreciate any
comments criticisms, assistance! (So would Lisa!)

This story is fiction, and contains scenes of sexual activities
between consenting adults. If you are under 18 yrs of age, or are
offended by this kind of thing, what the heck are you doing in this
newsgroup? 

****************************

LISA SUBMITS

by Master J

CHAPTER ONE

He glanced quickly at his watch, sparing a brief second from his
concentration on the road. Although this was his first trip to this
city, Jack was pretty confident that he would be there on time. 'At
this moment,' he thought, 'she will be in the shower, preparing for
our first meeting. I do hope she will follow my instructions
carefully, although it may be more fun if she did slip up somewhere!'
His amused grin at that thought betrayed his excitement at the coming
encounter with his sub.

After all this time on line, after hour upon hour of telephone
conversations, after writing all those letters and stories for her,
they were finally going to meet. And both of their fantasies would be
fulfilled! It would not be necessary for her to forget any part of the
instructions, however. She had quite a sufficient amount of punishment
coming to her, anyway. She tried her best, he knew, to obey him to the
letter, but she really did like to cum! And, of course, he enjoyed
making her cum, even as he withheld his permission for it! He chuckled
quietly to himself as he recalled the latest, when he had written a
very hot, erotic scenario for her, pushing his writing skills to the
limit, detailing all of the wonderful, lascivious, painful things they
would do together when this meeting finally took place. Even as he
wrote it, he knew that she would be unable to resist sliding her hand
between the folds of her robe and stroking her hardening clit. 

She had paid for it the next day, on the phone, when she was forced to
admit that she had cum five times! That translated into 50 spanks with
the brush, on her clit, which she had to administer to herself, while
he listened! As usual, his cock had immediately started to harden when
he heard that first 'smack' of the brush, and her soft moan, followed
by "One, thank you, Master!" This time was different than normal,
however. Usually, she was permitted to reach orgasms after every ten
spanks, depending on how many rewards she had earned since her last
session. But this time, since the sessions were so close together, she
had only earned one reward, so he withheld permission for her to cum,
and they went right through to the full 50 spanks. He timed her
strokes himself, delaying each one, allowing the sting from each
strike of the brush to develop fully before telling her to take the
next one.

And she had been marvelous, following his instructions very carefully.
And with each "Thank you, Master" she had groaned out, a thrill of
love and joy went through him. When the last stroke of the brush was
completed, he could hear the tremor in her voice that told him she had
tears in her eyes, but she bravely called out, "Fifty, thank you,
Master!"

"You were wonderful, my love," he had responded. "You may use the
large dildo to give yourself an orgasm now." And she had, moaning
wondrously, crying out in her passion, until she shrieked quietly into
the phone, and came explosively.

When she had settled down, he had told her his surprise. He was going
to be in the city for the weekend! They would have two nights and two
days together, and she would finally be his in truth!

She had been thrilled and excited, as he knew she would be, but she
also,  finally, admitted that she was afraid, as well. "What if you
don't like me?" she had asked. That old fear, again!

"Lisa," he had answered, "I have known you for months, I have talked
with you on the phone several times every week, and I have seen your
pictures. There is nothing that will change the way I feel about you!
And I will prove it to you tomorrow night!"

He then informed her that she was not permitted to have any orgasms
until they met, and that she would receive an email from him when she
returned home from work on Friday afternoon, with detailed
instructions on her preparations for that evening. In the meantime,
she was instructed to wear her short skirt, which only came to about
midway between her crotch and her knees, with no panties. But she had
to wear the knotted crotch strap, all day. In addition, she was
required to drink a large glass of water every 30 minutes, but was not
permitted to use the restroom more than once every 2 hours. This, he
knew, would have her squirming in her seat most of the day, as the
pressure on her bladder overcame her attempts to keep still and
minimize the stimulation from the strap.

He glanced at his watch again, noting that by now she would be
starting to dress. He had been explicit in those instructions, as
well, telling her just what she should wear. He could almost see her
eyes widening as she read those instructions, her emotions trembling
between fear and excitement. He knew she would be disturbed by the
lack of a bra, and the tight, white sweater would undoubtedly show
every detail of her erect nipples. The large dildo inserted into her
pussy, and held in place by the thong panties, would make certain that
her nipples remained erect almost constantly, as well as causing her
pussy to lubricate itself continuously. The black leather mini-skirt
would provide a barely adequate protection, as long as she maintained
her composure and did not move too strenuously. Combined with a garter
belt and stockings, and the high heels, her outfit would undoubtedly
attract a few stares from everyone she passed. Which would both thrill
and embarrass her. Topped by the leather dog collar she had been
instructed to purchase, adorned with the simple gold medallion he had
sent her, she would be ready to meet her Master. The careful observer
would have no difficulty noticing that the medallion was simply a
golden ring about one-half inch in diameter, with an exquisitely
carved nude female form spread-eagled in the middle. 

As he pulled into the parking lot at the Hilton, he noted with
satisfaction that he had more than 30 minutes left before he was to
meet her in the hotel bar. Plenty of time to shower and make a few
preliminary preparations. If all went well, by 9 o'clock that evening,
she would finally, totally be his, and they would spend the next two
days and nights exploring the joys and pleasures of her submission!

************

Let me know  what you think. I'll be posting Chapter 2 in a few days.




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