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Subject: Celestial Reviews 159 - Feb 19
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Celestial Reviews 159 - February 19, 1997
Note: Thanks to the help of a correspondent, I have rebuilt my database
of stories and should be able to resume my regular review pattern.
Second Note: I reviewed several "leftover seasonal stories" this week -
specifically Christmas and Velentine's stories.
Third Note: Remember that the authors of these stories may like to hear a
word or two from you.
- Celeste
"Radhika and Matthew" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (cross-cultural
romance) 10, 9, 9
"Dialogue" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (hot flirtation) 10, 9, 9
"Teen Breeder" by ucclear (beating & impregnation) 7, 5, 3
"Christmas Tale" by Frank Ashby (hedonistic reunion) 9, 10, 10
"Stuck by Cupid" by Hotdog (fun-filled rape) 6, 5, 4
"Christmas Carol" by Mark E. Dassad (teen gangbang) 5, 9, 8
"Take 2" by Gregarious (blind date) 8, 9, 9
"Skinny Dipping with My Maiden Aunt" by Day Dreamer
(emerging adolescence) 9, 9.5, 9.5
"Robin" by Mark Aster (moral dilemma) 10, 10, 10
"Robin and Kestrel" by Robin Man (bb superhero sex) 9, 9, 9
"The Little Elf, A Fairy Tale" by Milford Whittemore (fairy
tale without sex) 9, 5, 5
"Change of Pace" by Mike Allegretto and Caitlin B. (sci fi TG)
8, 10, 10
"Radhika and Matthew" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (mohanraj@mills.edu). This is
a brief but well-written story about an intercultural romance. It
contains no vivid sex scenes, and I suppose the main reason for including
it in this newsgroup is because it is written by an author who has written
so many vivid sex scenes.
This is the sort of story after which I had to stop and think about what
really happened. As I neared the end, I said to myself, "This isn't
really making sense." When I read the last line, I said, "This makes NO
sense." Then I glanced back through the story and said, "Oh, yeah! I get
it. Now it makes perfect sense."
Ratings for "Radhika and Matthew"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9
"Dialogue" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (mohanraj@mills.edu). No actual sex
takes place in this very short story. The man and woman just make plans,
but they are very hot plans.
Ratings for "Dialogue"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 9
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9
"Teen Breeder" by ucclear (ucclear@inetworld.net). The girl thinks her
mom is wonderful but her father is a jerk. When the daughter walks past
the bedroom, she sees the father cruelly beating her mother with a belt,
and this gives the girl her first orgasm. The old man's job is threatened,
and Mom figures he can hang onto it by letting the new boss fuck their
daughter. Since the boss wants to have children by as many women as
possible, the mother arranges for the daughter to take fertility drugs.
They date and have sex. Before the second date Dad beats the girl and then
goes out with the guys; then Mom serves the boss a good meal; and then Mom
stands by the parental bed and occasionally beats the daughter while the
boss has sex with the kid during her most fertile period. Knowing how
fertile she is, the girl can't help but have a major orgasm. After the
boss leaves, Mom beats the girl some more, so that she'll have some more
orgasms to "soak it up" and make sure the kid gets pregnant.
I guess there are some sexy parts to this story. Mostly, however, it's
pretty silly. I really don't think there are many normal girls who would
respond this way to this kind of abuse, and there's no sensible
explanation for her abnormality.
Ratings for "Teen Breeder"
Athena (technical quality): 7
Venus (plot & character): 5
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 3
"Christmas Tale" by Frank Ashby. Frank and Gladys are hedonists. I know
this because instead of going to church on Sunday, they stay at home and
fuck; and before the third enfuckment they discuss swinging, and Gladys
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