Message-ID: <3821eli$9709062218@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/Year97/3821.txt> From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com Subject: The Annex Reviews 9/9/97 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <970906153811_534384903@emout18.mail.aol.com> X-Is-Review: yes In one of my last Reviews I mentioned some pointers about protecting your web site, if you have one, from minors. Here is another one. There are a number of companies that offer a screening service for parents, and by registering with them your site will be rendered accessible from those households. At least, that's how I think it works. At any rate, it might be good idea for you to check these folks out: Safe Surf: www.safsurf.com Surf Watch: www.surfwatch.com Cyber Patrol www.cyberpatrol.com On to the stories. Presentation [A+] When received: 8/31/97 Author: Solstice Address: solstice@frontiernet.net (Solstice) The author sent me this one, with a note indicating it will be posted the first week of September. NOTE: If you haven't posted it yet, please hurry. It was very good. A businessman about to make an important presentation to his client's board of directors falls under the hypnotic spell of the firm's CEO. She hypnotizes him to commit all sorts of sexual acts with her and her secretary, and he is only too eager to continue. Anticipating similar treatment from the company's board, he strips, lubes and butt-plugs himself, then walks into the conference room with head and penis high...but read for yourself what happens next. This story was a good variation on mind-control ones, with the hypnotism handled plausibly and realistically. Those of us who work for large companies where viewfoil presentations are routine will note the creative, but ineffective, use of those stiff 8 x 10 sheets of plastic towards the end of the story. It left me with a WLG (wicked little giggle) on my face. On the whole, a lark and an intelligent read. The Barber Chair [A] When posted: 8/31/97 Where posted: ASS Author: Saucy Wench Address: wenchsaucy@aol.com I've noticed that traditionally feminine settings such as spas, lingerie shops, and, in this story, a hair salon, lend themselves very well to lesbian sex fantasies. I guess it's the lingering aroma of estrogen and what is generally referred to in ASS stories as "juices." In this story by Saucy Wench (love that name) the narrator goes to a hair salon after closing for a special appointment she is apprehensive about. She has reason to be, as the stylist straps her to the chair, puts those pointy beautician's hair clips to good use on several body parts, then shaves and spritzes her pussy. Then come other delights of the dom-sub variety. The story was breezily told and ended in a cliffhanger...a nice fantasy to reflect on the next time you're getting a haircut from a female stylist. When Morning Comes [A+] When posted: 8/28/97 Where posted: ASS Author: Joe Parsons Address: Unknown Reposter: http://www.porn-king.com/ The plot of this story was fairly simple: a beautiful woman, unsatisfied with the "nice guy" nature of her current lover, dreams of someone more explorative and dangerous. She gets her wish when he pays her a visit one morning as she's still floating in out of her dreams. They have tons of sex. He tells her things like "I will make love to you now, Ellen, but you must do exactly as I say. Do you understand?" Even though people in the real world don't phrase things like this, here the Mr. Data talk is most arousing and lets us know an intricate dance of romantic submission and dominance will be played. In fact, the whole piece was very female-oriented, soft focus but fairly explicit, and I recommend it as a good introduction for women who would normally be horrified at reading any kind of porn. (Of course, any women reading the Annex probably won't need this kind of introduction.) For men, this story is a good one to give to your porn- hating girlfriend or wife. On a fresh, virginal diskette with a pink ribbon around it. The story also brings up some points I want to make about POV, or point of view. The most arousing stories, I've found, are ones where you can put yourself in the place of the characters (as a woman might do with the protagonist in this story) yet simultaneously see it in your head as if you were watching a movie (the voyeur factor.) So many writers mangle this element badly, so I recommend all writers read this story to see how it should be done. In sum, this one's a keeper. The only criticism I have is the line "Ellen did not normally care to have her pussy licked." Huh? What planet is she from? Vampire Love Story [B-] When posted: 8/1/97 Where posted: ASS, ASSM Author: Aurora Address: claudia@hom.net Anne Rice is the best-selling author of "The Vampire Chronicles" and "The Witches of Mayfair" series, which deal with the supernatural world of vampires, witches, ghosts, and other boggles. This story, obviously written by a fan, was inspired by Rice's world and depicts sex between a leather-clad vampire and the leather-corseted sweet young thing he's captured. Although I like Rice's work, there was nothing special about this story; it didn't capture the melodramatic, gothic nature of her work. The story didn't bring to mind Rice's erotic fiction, either. To be fair, though, I imagine it might be entertaining for someone who hasn't read Rice's work, and has a yen for the Dark Side. Girl Crazy [B] When posted: 9/5/97 Where posted: ASS, ASSM Author: CANDY KANE Address: GQKZ45C@prodigy.com This was one of series of stories posted by this author. The others include "Girlfriends" "Girls on Girls" "Heather and Sarah" and "Lez be Friends." Guess what they're about. As sex stories go, these were basic: minimal characterization, minimal plot, minimal description. Just fucking, and basic fucking at that. I'd guess you'd call them meat n' potatoes. There were a few misspellings: "Necture" for "nectar" but nothing major. There was one interesting line in here: "Go fish." I guess this is a common sex game for lesbians, as it was the title of an indie lesbian film released a few years ago. Comments to: ladycyrrh@aol.com Please note that previous Reviews dating from May 97 on are archived at my website: http://users.aol.com/ladycyrrh. 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