Message-ID: <1979eli$9707091152@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/Year97/1979.txt> From: almond423@aol.com (Almond423) Subject: "Dreamland" (m/f) (poetry? prose? what the hell is it?) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-Id: <19970709032300.XAA08544@ladder02.news.aol.com> Hello people.... this is my first attempt at writing erotica....any feedback would be greatly appreciated, mailto: Almond423@aol.com copyright DaTurnOn 1997 "Dreamland" dreamt that you were in my room last night.... I was layin' in my bed asleep... you were standin' beside the bed... watchin' me ... you gently pulled the sheet down, uncoverin' me.... in my sleep I frowned....shivered at the coolness... sittin' beside me, you touched my body, softly, barely.... my frown faded....and I stretched contentedly... the rustlin' of your clothes droppin' to the floor failed to wake me... you joined me on the bed... layin' on your side by me... I turned to you... snuggled into your body... you held me for awhile slowly... you slid my clothes from me.. untyin' my ribbons... leaving me with nothin'... you ran your palms over me... just over my skin... grazin'.. you leaned over me... watchin' my face... placed your lips on mine for a brief moment... then moved your mouth to my neck.. you lifted my arms above my head.... I slowly twisted beneath you... started to wake... my eyes opened when I felt you tie my hands together.. calmly we gazed at each other.... then I smiled... I whispered encouragement in your ear... you moved over me and straddled my body... sittin' on my thighs... still watchin' me... you touched me again... firmer..harder.. my breasts tingled... nipples hardened... I arched my back.. wanted to be close to you... leanin' down, you placed the tip of your tongue on my nipple.. it was like a shock... so good... your fingers played with one while your mouth loved the other... took turns... you changed position... movin' down the bed.. opened my legs... layin' between them.. I whispered your name.... oh lover I want you..... you kissed my stomach... licked my navel... made me giggle.. I moved restlessly... wanted you to stop teasin'... your head lowered... lips caressed lips... tongue teased my clit... oh it was heavenly.... my arms jerked against my bonds... juices flowed... body opened to you... "please..." I groaned.... you came back up... but the torture wasn't over... you moved up and knelt in front of my face.... I couldn't move away.... I closed my eyes... you held yourself and I felt you touch my cheek with your cock... playfully I turned my head.... your hand turned me back... held me in place.. my eyes widened... you moved your cock over my lips...I tasted your silky skin.. we stared at each other... I licked and caressed your cock... my mouth opened... you moved into it... I sucked... groaning.. your fingers moved through my hair as long as I pleased you... if I slowed down you pulled on it... sent shivers through me... I stared at you... you whispered my name.... and I renewed my efforts to please you... I started to beg.... wanted you inside me... smilin', you moved between my legs... bent them up and out... opened wide for you... head of your cock was right at my entrance... I got wetter with anticipation...felt you slide slowly inside... you sank to the base of your cock... stretchin' me.. my stomach quivered... withdrawing, you repeated the motion... I begged you to untie me... you smiled and shook your head.. your motions quickened... moving at angles... my breath came in gasps... my pussy tightened around you... you flicked my clit with your fingers... bringin' me right to the edge... you pulled out and my body jerked...no no don't leave me... tried to get you back inside me... you rubbed your cock over my pussy... I almost cried I wanted to come so badly... you leaned down and kissed me... pushed my legs up further... I could feel your cock right against my ass... my eyes widened.. I was about to tell you no.. but you stared me into silence... pushed against me... tryin' to get in... I bit your lip.... tasted your blood... you said nothin'... and continued invading my ass... I tried to relax.. felt you slip in further... then you were in to the base.. we lay still for a moment... you kissed my neck... your hips started movin'... two fingers on my clit...made my hips jerk... my body opened to you.... you started to pound in and out of me... you reached up and untied my hands... I wrapped my arms around you in a death grip.. sank my nails into your back... I started to come... body shakin'... moanin' and groanin'... you came in me... grippin' my ass and grindin' into me... in the aftermath we lay quietly on the bed... arm across my waist, you fell asleep with your head on my breast.. I touched your hair... smilin'... and slipped slowly back to sleep... -- +--------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `------------+ | story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us | story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us | | Archive site +--------------------+------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | \ <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/> .../assm/faq.html> /