Message-ID: <1962eli$9707081333@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/Year97/1962.txt> From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com Subject: The Annex Reviews 7/7/97 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.d,alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <970708031359_-592731301@emout05.mail.aol.com> X-Is-Review: yes Note to Readers: One of the things I would like to do over the next few months is create a listing of the names writers use to post by and what they mean. If you'd like to make us all laugh a bit, drop a line with an explanation to Lady Cyrrh@aol.com. Ole Joe has recently reposted v.2 of his ASS subculture guide. The version is much fatter than the original and lists more authors. Go to it! On to the stories. The Boss, Parts 1-4 [B+] When posted: 6/30/97 Where posted: ASS, Author: Dr. Phil (address unknown) Reposter: rdragon@ix.netcom.com(***) God help you if you're a mean, bitchy female boss and you fall into the hands of your disgruntled employees, not to mention your ex-husband and business rivals. That's what happens to the lady CEO of this story, and it was one of the most lovingly described depictions of revenge, sexual subjugation and subsequent slavehood I've seen outside of Mr. Spraycan's work. Not everyone likes this sort of story, but for those who do, there's pussy- licking, dildoes, vibrators, shaving, photo snapping, gloating and jeering, dog collars, and a pair of humiliating buttock tattoos...plus the victim's head is shaved except for one topknot so her mistress can drag her around. Intense stuff, even though it's firmly on the side of make- believe. As I've said, not everyone likes this, but those who do, go to it. BATY BATY Where Are U? [B] When posted: 6/30/97 Where posted: ASS Author: wifewtchr7@aol.com (Wifewtchr7) This story is a valentine to one wife's insatiable sluttiness; she takes on 18 horny guys with her mouth while her husband watches. (They should send this wife to Bosnia to stop the civil war.) This was more of an anecdote than a true story, but it worked well for what it was. A quick read for those who like spraying sperm, fellatio gangbangs, and husbands who like to watch. Biking to New Highs [B+] When posted: 6/29/97 Where posted: ASS, ASSM Author: an338903@cris.com (Jackie) This was a graphic ode to one woman's joy of riding a motorcycle with crotchless panties and leather chaps on. It didn't rhyme too well, but made up for this by celebrating female masturbation in a playful style: It thrashes to the left, to the right, then quickly up and down, you'd think it's in a circus doing the acrobatics of a clown. "It" meaning her clit, of course. Note to the author: Don't be shy! At the Ranch [A] Neutral Party [A] The Traveller's Introduction [A] When posted: 6/30/97 Where posted: ASS Author: The Ferrous Juggler (FeJuggler@hotmail.com) I wonder about author's names. What causes them to name themselves what they do? In the case of this author, I'd say it's a sort of Led Zeppelin heavy-and-light effect. These stories were part of a larger selection that was posted recently. All had codes attached which seemed to be a personal system devised by the author. These three happened to be BDSM and were written in first person, the narrator being a sort of mobile, suave dom-for-hire. In the first, a disobedient sub is taken to a barn, strapped to a saddle, hit with a crop, then has her ass tattooed. (It's been a big week for tattooed asses.) In the second, he interferes with the work of a female dom who's domming a virgin who wants to stay a virgin. In the third, he straps a female sub to a bondage box as he's in a motel room watching TV. (A beautiful bound naked woman is heaving in orgasm after orgasm and he's watching TV?) These three were well written and up there with the best of them, hence the A, and should be stimulating to fans of the genre. But. When money isn't passing hands from sub to dom or the obvious desire of the subs to be subbed is clarified, the kinky events come off more like your typical kidnapping and torture story than consensual BDSM. It's the interplay of personalities and the repulsion/attraction aspect at work that differentiates the BDSM subgenre from the latter; that's what makes the work of writers like Tigger so interesting. As neither the narrator's good looks nor scintillating personality are cited, there has to be SOME reason why women scrape to be humiliated at his feet. The author went to the trouble of actually naming the characters and making up backgrounds for them, so this one fault in some otherwise excellently written stories really sticks out. But of course all this doesn't matter if you just want to read some kinky sex. I noticed the text files of these stories all began with "GETA..." As in get a life? Was this a message to readers? Lady Cyrrh@aol.com -- +--------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `------------+ | story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us | story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us | | Archive site +--------------------+------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | \ <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/> .../assm/faq.html> /