Message-ID: <58664asstr$1236251402@assm.asstr.org> X-Original-To: story-submit@asstr.org Delivered-To: story-submit@asstr.org X-Original-Message-ID: <49AB643A.6040806@gmail.com> From: Nakardian <nakardian@gmail.com> User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Windows NT 5.1; en-US; rv:1.9.1b3pre) Gecko/20081204 Thunderbird/3.0b1 MIME-Version: 1.0 X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sun, 01 Mar 2009 22:44:42 -0600 Subject: {ASSM} Michael McCormick Ch.1 (slow mf MC) Lines: 363 Date: Thu, 05 Mar 2009 06:10:02 -0500 Path: assm.asstr.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr.org/Year2009/58664> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-admin@asstr.org> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@asstr.org> X-Moderator-ID: dennyw, RuiJorge Author's Notes, This story is a complete work of fiction. Although some of the characters are loosely based on friends of mine, none of this shit should be tried at home. If you feel the need to try or you feel this story could very likely be completely real, I want you to do this: Seek immediate psychiatric help because you are a fuckin' loon. I know that you think your not and you know best but trust me, you don't shit. Now that I have gotten the mundane out of the way, let us jump to a few real notes. Do I accept reviews? Fuckin' A, I do. They are the meat and potatoes of writing. Constructive criticism is welcome. Flames are for retards that are too stupid to find anything else to do. I am particularly looking for what you think of the character development and plot lines. Give me a shout; I am not like other authors that do not write back. Though if you do want me to write back, do not write anonymously. May your beer always bee cold and your women always hot. Regards, Nakardian Michael McCormick {The Biography of Michael McCormick} By Nakardian Chapter One "All through the shadows, they come and they go. With only one thing in common, the fire down below.... Fire Down Below"Bob Seger My life completely changed on my thirteenth birthday during the time I was walking home from school. The following book is a biography of what happened and how I came into being one of the most powerful individuals that this world has ever seen. Those are the words of one of my slaves--Kelly to be precise. I never was much for bragging, but for some reason, all thirty-seven of my slaves like to tell people about me. They were the ones that bullied me into writing this little biography. Yes, I guess I am a little soft hearted when it comes to my slaves. Well, I guess I should tell you my name first. It's a good and simple Irish name: Michael McCormick. Although, I grew up in south Oklahoma and that's quite a ways from the mother land, as my mother likes to call it. To be more specific, I grew up in Bristow, Oklahoma. It was a city that had about forty thousand people at the very most. It wasn't much, but it was home and I took pride in calling it my home. After all, a person should be proud of their roots and that is exactly what I am. The area of Bristow we lived was a suburban, middle-class area that was almost purely crime free. It was very much unlike the poorer parts of the city--a place where a person could get shot for the few dollars in his or her pocket. I grew up my entire life in the six bedroom two-story house. Good times and bad times were both had in that house. But for as long as I live, I will always hold that house in my heart with more than a little fondness. Growing up without a father was something that I never did fret about. My mother and three sisters were more than enough to keep me content. There were quite a few things to do in Bristow and there was even a community center that was only about a twenty minute bike ride away. It was in that place that I learned how to play pool and basketball. I guess I should tell you a little about my family. My mother's name was Tanya McCormick and she was a pretty awesome Mom, as far as mothers went. The lady most certainly provided for our family. She made pretty damn good money as a Jr. Partner at the only law firm in Bristow. Bringing home a couple of thousand dollars a week was more than enough to keep us going. It was her easy going personality and smile that got her cases and she won more cases than most of the lawyers in that firm. As far as looks went, my Mom had flowing blond hair and the bluest eyes that I had ever seen on anyone. Take that and her hourglass figure and a person could bet money that she got drooled at wherever she went. Be it the park or a crowded court room, the woman always stood out. It would amuse me to no end that people would stop what they were doing just to listen to her or watch her walk. Then there were my sisters. They were almost mini-copies of Mom. They had the same blue eyes and blonde hair, but they looked different in their face. I guess they got some of their looks from our father. They were all certainly beautiful however. They were 14 and 16 respectively. Yes, the ones that were 14 were identical twins. I'll tell you about the 16 year old sister first. The name of that particular sister was Karen Danielle McCormick. Her family and friends always called her KD however, for obvious reasons. At sixteen, she was probably the most beautiful girl in her college. That was my opinion anyway--as bias as it might be. However, I really don't think I am thinking unfairly. I have heard many a boy whisper about her and the perfect body and face that she had. KD's personality was what I really loved though. Unlike most beautiful girls, KD was very much cool. She had the personality and temperament of a tomboy. She was a slow talkin', hard fightin', bad mouthed wildcat. There were many times that someone mouthed off at her in school and she would use curse words that would That girl could make a sailor blush. She loved to give scathing replies that held more than a few curse words to people that she wanted to be away from. If that didn't work, she would lead with her fists and they would soon be flat on their back with a busted lip or noise--being in martial arts since the age of four saw to that. My sister most certainly did not believe in the slapping game most girls played. She once told me that if she hit someone, she wanted them to feel it. However, more than that, KD was one of my best friends and probably the most important person in my world at the time. She was never to busy to spare some time for her 'kid brother'. Whether it was playing billiards at the community center or playing catch with a football, she was always there to have fun with me. Mom tried to do those things, but her job kept her busier than hell. KD liked to dress differently than most other girls as well. She liked to wear lose jeans and large t-shirts that hid her rather large breasts. It was like she did not want boys to ogle her and that was the plain truth of the matter. My sister wanted boys to respect her for her mind and not her body. I guess she really was like most girls in that area. KD had the most beautiful mind I had ever heard of. What a mind that it was too. That girl was a tech-geek if there ever was one. She was the one that turned me onto computer programming and computer science. I got interested in it when I saw her putting an entire computer together after ordering the parts separately. Yeah, she was damn smart in that area and taught me most of what I know of computer programming and hardware. She was the one that made me believe that it wasn't pronounced Microsoft, it was properly pronounced Microshit. I knew long before I was thirteen that she was the best friend a guy could have. Then there were the twins--the annoying twins. Don't get me wrong, I love them dearly. However, they were the exact definition for the term airhead cheerleaders when they conversed with folks. They also took great pride in cutting those down that didn't fit into the word normal. If you were a nerd, loner or metal head, they would cut you down with scathing words in public. It didn't bother them a bit to do this. Unfortunately, I fell into all three categories while I was at school. Did they cut me slack because I was family? Nope. They took delight in embarrassing me whenever they got a chance. Yet, I still loved them like sisters so I put up with it and ignored them when they did this. It is true about the saying that you can't pick your family. I did love them though. I guess I should tell you a little more about myself at this point. At the age of thirteen, I was probably the definition of the word average--when it came to looks. I was not some ravishingly handsome rogue but I wasn't ugly either. Unlike the girls, I got the brown hair and green eyes that my father had before he died in a car crash. I dressed for school in plain blue jeans and rock band t-shirts--most of which were of the band Nickelback or Linkin Park. When it came to school, however, I was a bit more than average. At the age thirteen, on my birthday, I entered my senior year of high school. Yeah, I skipped quite a few grades in my younger years. That most certainly didn't help people stop making fun of the 'little nerd' throughout school. Even though I was in martial arts since I had been four (just like KD) and was in excellent physical condition, I still took a lot of ridiculous ribbing for my intelligence. I usually just shrugged it off and ignored them though. My sensei always told me that walking away from a confrontation usually made you the bigger man. I took to that advice reluctantly. It was reluctantly because it made me look like a big puss. There had not been a confrontation that required me to use violence yet at school though. There was the time at the community center that I broke a boy's wrist that threw a punch at my face while wearing so brass knuckles. Other than the wrist, I only knocked out two of his teeth. No, I didn't feel a lick of guilt over the incident. You will find out quickly in this biography that it takes an awful damn lot to make me feel guilty about doing something to someone that isn't family. I guess you could say I have a bit of sociopath in me when it came to strangers. There are some things in the future parts of this biography that will both shock and appall you. I warn you of this early and can only say in my defense that the only good enemy is a dead enemy. All I can say is that I took an awful lot of goddamn pleasure eliminating the fuckers that wanted to harm my family. Don't get me wrong. At thirteen, I was not some sort of super fighter that could take on five or six guys and kick their ass. I had the belt that was below brown and I was just slightly better than average at the time when it came to martial arts. Still, it gave me an edge against those who were untrained bullies. Moreover, I never like those silly bastards who like picking on those they were fairly certain they could win against. Where was the challenge in that, I ask you? It was on September 1, the first day of my senior year of high school, when my life took on a very strange note. It was something that I still have trouble believing, even to this day. It was on that day that my life took a turn for the surreal and didn't stop for years. It happened at exactly 3:37PM... ****************************** Walking out of the Bristow High School was always a chore and the first day of school was no exception. Getting out of the building and in under a clear blue sky was refreshing though. There were no staring eyes that were directed at me. It was just me and the gentle breeze. Well, that and the 1500 kids that were walking out with me. That was what I called a chore. You figure that one out of every ten people is a prick? Well, there were fifteen hundred kids here, you do the math. I adjusted the black leather book bag on the shoulder of my black t-shirt and started my walk to my bike. No, it was not a motorcycle. The damn thing was a simple ten speed bike. At thirteen, that was about all I could hope for. The ride home took about twenty minutes but I was still glad that I had the bike because I could do with some exercise. As I walked, I kept my head down and used my peripheral vision to look out for one of the dozens of fuck-nut bullies that targeted me last year. It had been only name-calling last year, but I knew better than most that the situation could change in the blink of an eye if I let myself relax. This was part of the reason that I hated public school. Don't get me wrong, I love learning new things. I just hated doing it in public school. Walking through masses of idiotic teenagers was not my idea of a good time and it never would be. About the only teen that I could tolerate was my sister KD. She was pretty cool and smarter than hell. She was also my best friend. But she did not even go to this school. She went to community college because she graduated early when she was fourteen. That was two years ago, and I certainly missed her at the school. I did see her at home but it wasn't the same. For one thing, she always helped me watch my back at school. Now I had to do it by myself. Finally I broke away from the biggest part of the mob of students and made my way to the bike rack. It was where the blue ten speed mom bought me for my birthday was. I made damn sure that it was chained up tight with the best combination lock I could find. I kneeled down beside the tire and quickly twisted the combination through the motions, opening it in seconds. "Lookie here guys. It's nerd boy. How're you doing nerd boy? Did you have a good summer? Did you miss me you little faggot?" I heard a voice from about ten feet away say. Closing my eyes, I groaned silently. I really don't need this shit today, I thought to myself with a mental shake of the head. Looking over my shoulder, I spotted the fuck-nut that was speaking to me--or rather, insulting me. It was James Carson. He was a tenth grader and was about sixteen years of age. The fucker stood about an even six foot as well. Compared to my five foot four status, things were not looking good. Considering that he played starting linebacker for the school's football team, he had more than a few muscles. It really was just not my day. Not to mention that three of his football buddies were standing behind him smirking. I looked at the dipshit and thought about all the times he ragged on me and called me names. The thoughts in my head were about how many times the big shit did it in public. It seemed like my mind just blanked with extreme anger when I thought about it. Why do I have to put up with this? Year after year I just walk away and ignore the idiots that do this to me. Why? I asked myself silently. Slowly climbing to my feet, I thought over my options. I could walk away and have the small crowd that was now watching the scene laugh at me. Or, I could do something out of the ordinary for my style, just this once. Yeah, I made my mind up quickly. "Why don't you go suck some cock like you usually do in the locker room, numb-nuts? Or better yet, why don't you just ram your goddamn empty noggin into that oak tree over there so you save me the trouble of doing it for you'' I asked him in a taunting voice. The rage in my mind was kind of taking over at that point. I smiled viciously as the prick looked completely shocked. At first his face turned white, then red and then finally purple as his rage mounted. I was ready for his rage. I wanted him to attack me, and then I would be justified in beating the hell out of him. However, things did not go that way. This was where things became a goddamn surreal situation. After his face turned purple, something happened in my mind that felt odd. It was not painful--far from it actually. It just felt weird. It started in the area that my brain stem should be and moved inside my skull, at the back of my head. It was a tingling feeling that I have never in my life felt--and it was fucking intense. It also brought everything into sharp focus. It was like I was taking in every detail around me more than usual. Everything stood out starkly and seemed to be blindingly obvious to me. It was also like the light from the sun was more bright than usual. It was when I was feeling this that James' face went slack and pale and he nodded dumbly three times. "That's a good idea," he replied faintly. Then he took off at a dead run to the oak tree that was in the school yard, by the picnic tables. That boy ran as fast as he could and he could run fairly fast. When he had made it within ten feet, he lowered his head and... CRUNCH! James smashed his head into that tree while running at full speed. It made a sickening crunch that even made me wince. I actually saw the blood splatter from the top of his now cracked skull when he hit. The crunch I heard was what scared me the most though. I knew exactly what it was when I looked at the body of James as he laid on the soft grass. It was the extremely awkward angle of the head that clued me into what that crunch was. It was the teenager's neck of course. That ram into the tree busted the top of his skull open and it also broke his fucking neck! I really don't have the words to tell you how freaked out I was at this point. It wasn't because of remorse. Like I said, I am a little bit of a sociopath when it comes to the people that are not friends or family. It was because of the visions of me sitting in a jail cell that flitted through my mind. Remember, I had been thirteen years old and this was the first time I had ever seen someone die. Hell, this was the first time that I had ever seen a dead body period. All the time that I stood there, twenty-five yards away, I was staring at that body with sick fascination. There were all sorts of things running through my head as I stared at that body. The number one thing was how the fuck did I get him to do that. And why the fuck did he do it anyway. James never struck me as suicidal. The teenager had been on top of the world. Hell, he was dating last years prom queen. Why in the nine levels of hell would he do that? I was expecting to fight him and teach him a lesson, not kill him. How did this happen? It was then that I started thinking about that tingling sensation. It was fairly strong when I experienced it. Moreover, James' face went blank of emotion after I started feeling that sensation. Could that have been something to do with it? Could that sensation be a prelude to controlling his actions? This was such an odd and crazy thing to think about. I tried to focus on the here and now after I thought about that. When I thought about the tingling sensation, I noticed that it was still in my head. In fact, I noticed fairly quickly that it was getting stronger. Second by second passed and it seemed with each second the tingling sensation seemed to multiply by variables of four--or what felt like it anyway. All too soon, the pleasant sensation was gone. It was replaced by an enormously painful pressure filled sensation. That sensation in my head slowly turned into a spiking sensation that was both sharp and piercing. Moreover, it was directly in the back of my head. My vision blurred and I vaguely heard people screaming at the top of their lungs. Probably the air headed cheerleaders that I call my sisters, I thought with a detachment that would have been frightening if I were focused enough to realize it. Then I felt like I was floating slowly to the ground, even as the pain was getting so sharp that things were going grey. I vaguely felt myself hit the ground with enough force to rattle my teeth, but I felt no pain in my body. My entire focus was on the enormous amount of hellish pain that was radiating from my head. The grayness of my vision was suddenly replaced with a blackness that made a moonless night seem completely tame. Am I dying? was my last thought as I slipped from the conscious world. ________________________ On to chapter two... ------- ASSM Moderation System Notice-------- This post has been reformatted by the ASSM Moderation Team due to inadequate formatting. -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <story-submit@asstr.org>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-admin@asstr.org> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+