Message-ID: <53782asstr$1146503401@assm.asstr.org> X-Original-To: story-submit@asstr.org Delivered-To: story-submit@asstr.org X-Original-Message-ID: <BAY106-F309A32C1CC065B03A098F3F8B10@phx.gbl> X-Originating-Email: [yotna_eltoub@hotmail.com] From: "Yotna El'toub" <yotna_eltoub@hotmail.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-OriginalArrivalTime: 01 May 2006 10:04:32.0564 (UTC) FILETIME=[A49D4740:01C66D06] X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Mon, 01 May 2006 10:04:30 +0000 Subject: {ASSM} The Perversion of Lady Jane Grey [Yotna El'toub] Chaper eleven (final) Lines: 224 Date: Mon, 01 May 2006 13:10:01 -0400 Path: assm.asstr.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr.org/Year2006/53782> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-admin@asstr.org> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@asstr.org> X-Moderator-ID: RuiJorge, emigabe, newsman **************************************************************** {ASSM} The Perversion of Lady Jane Grey - a first case for Detective Ned Holmes (Chapter eleven final chapter) [Yotna El'toub] (SF[Steampunk],FF,MF,MC, caution) **************************************************************** WARNING: This story will contain situations and explicit language of an adult nature and should be read only by those of a legal age to do so. If you are a minor or object to stories of an adult nature, LEAVE HERE IMMEDIATELY. Legal age local to the author is 18+ please abide to your own local laws. Please note and understand the content codes for this story. The characters portrayed in this story are just that, characters in my story. Any similarities to real people are purely coincidental and unintentional. The characters and situations portrayed are pure fantasy; the author is keen to state that in reality adult sexuality should remain only in the adult world. Please do not allow or cause this story to fall in to the hands of minors. ________________________________________________________________ Hove waited impatiently on Platform One at Oxford's steam railway station. It was no fault of the LNWR, no, their splendid service was running to time. It was Holmes who was late, unbearably late. Brighton stood beside Lady Jane alone, just as he had dined with her last night. As for the embarrassment upon leaving the hotel, that had been intense. Hove had been unable to settle the bill, and had no option other than to leave a personal guarantee with a sour- faced Mrs Machin. He very much doubted that they would be welcome in her establishment once more. These dark thoughts thundered through Hove's mind, right up to the point when Holmes finally deemed it necessary to arrive. He carried an elongated parcel wrapped in brown paper and his customary Portmanteau. "I say Holmes, just where the merry hell have you been?" Hove burst out. "Brighton, please! There are ladies present. I apologise profusely, I was unavoidably detained. The other reason for my lateness is stopping off to settle the account at the Randolph. I should apologise again for the circumstances I left you in. But you coped admirably as I knew you would. Mrs Machin was most understanding, once I explained about 'the vagaries of business'". "Is that what it truly was Ned, business matters?" "Matters that arose subsequent to business, to be more precise." Holmes smiled. "Well, I personally doubt that. It is my belief that you have been over-indulging, you are late, you appeared washed-out and tired. I detect a case of over-indulgence." Holmes's eye widened, "Ahem, over-indulgence in what Hove?" he asked, in a whisper. "That damnable pipe Ned, you imbibed and lost all track of time. Probably spent the night on some cold, hard park bench - most unsatisfactory." Holmes sighed. "Brighton your powers of deduction are a near match for your bravery." "Thank you Holmes, I am glad you finally realise it," Hove's sentiment was interrupted by the arrival of the ten-fifteen t London Paddington. --------------------------- They were greeted at the station by James. His smile of welcome extended very nearly from ear-to-ear. "Lady Jane, welcome home! I have polished the carriage and livery in your honour." "Really James, such a fuss! Anyone would think I was the prodigal son." Jane smiled. Once Jane was ensconced in the carriage, James turned to Holmes and Hove. "Gentlemen, I and the family are deeply in your debt." "Pleasure James, Hove and I are just pleased to see this matter resolved. You are at least in part responsible, and you serve her ladyship well." James said no more, he merely touched the brim of his hat and clambered up to his seat. Soon Ned and Brighton were back in the delightful company of Lady Helena, this time with her younger sister. "Words fail me gentleman, you have saved not only the honour of the Grey family name, but very likely my parent's very lives. We carry a debt, to you both, that we can never fully repay. But I trust this may compensate you for your labours." Lady Helena handed over the draft to Holmes. Hove's eyes widened at the sum. "Good lord! Are you sure, why this is a small fortune." "Which we humbly accept with good grace, your ladyship," Holmes glared steely-eyed at Hove, "our business is concluded. Farewell dear ladies and thank you." Helena watched sadly as Holmes and Hove departed. "Jane I only hope you can meet an equivalent man of suitable standing. Then my desires for you would be complete." Helena smiled at Jane, and then winced holding the back of her neck. "Helena, are you all right?" Jane asked. "Oh, it is just the stress of the past few days I expect." Helena winced once more. "Stress which I have caused and I will relieve. A soothing massage will assist." So saying, Jane rose and moved to stand behind her sister. Her elegant hands descended toward Helena's slim, pale neck. Just before they touched, the slightest of crackles caused the hairs to stand up on the back of Helena's neck. "Oh, that is most soothing Jane, almost stimulating." Helena sighed. Jane smiled and broadened the sweep of her flexing hands. As she lowered them into the folds of Helena's dress her lips found her sisters for the first time ever. The kiss welcomed Helena into the sisterhood of love. --------------------------- The two men settled back into the carriage for the journey back to Whitechapel. Holmes called out to the driver. "Home James, and don't spare the horses!" "Right you are Mr Holmes." Came the cheery reply. "Not that it will be home for much longer..." Holmes mused. "What do you mean Ned? And do tell me just what is in the package you have been carrying so dutifully?" "The answer to your first question is that as of tomorrow we start looking for a suitable venue for our new venture. Belgravia I fancy. In response to your second question, well you may unwrap the package." Holmes passed the parcel to a somewhat befuddled Hove. Impatiently he tore away the brown paper to reveal a fine brass plate. Engraved on it in stylish copperplate script were the words: 'Holmes & Hove Private Investigators'. A trace of wetness glinted in Brighton's eyes. "I say Ned this is most civil of you, most civil." "I wanted it to be clear that we are partners, true equals, as in fact we always have been. Any debt you felt you owed me from the battlefield was fully repaid, and more, in our contretemps with Burgabiter." Holmes smiled, and reached in his pocket for his other faithful companion, his churchwarden. "Holmes would you awfully mind not smoking in the carriage? Those fumes in combination with confined spaces, and yourself, make me feel most peculiar." "Of course my dear chap, in fact I have been considering taking up another hobby." "Really, which one may I ask?" "Oh, a musical one." "Musical eh, capital idea!" "Violin lessons." The glint in Holmes's eyes combined with the set of his mouth communicated much more than the simple words. Brighton released a mighty guffaw, and Ned responded in kind. The carriage was filled with great mirth for a long time. Laughter born of the truest of friendships. The end. ________________________________________________________________ Foot Notes (C) Yotna El'toub May 2006 ________________________________________________________________ I hope you have enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. As always, feedback is appreciated, since it is my only payment for my work. Please address comments to yotna_eltoub@hotmail.com This story is copyrighted by the author and as such may not be published, posted or archived on any newsgroup, website, or server, other than ASSM and ASSTR, without the EXPRESS PERMISSION of the author. Any reader may archive a copy of this story, provided the warnings and copyright information is attached in full. _________________________________________________________________ Are you using the latest version of MSN Messenger? 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