Message-ID: <53566asstr$1145135405@assm.asstr.org> X-Original-To: story-submit@asstr.org Delivered-To: story-submit@asstr.org X-Original-Path: d55ef990!not-for-mail From: edwinamboy@yahoo.com X-Original-Message-ID: <7sb0429l9ts4papiof6aiqq1c6smejqr62@4ax.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit NNTP-Posting-Date: Fri, 14 Apr 2006 19:26:44 EDT X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Fri, 14 Apr 2006 23:26:44 GMT Subject: {ASSM} The Novels of Edwin Amboy - Sample scene 1 Lines: 211 Date: Sat, 15 Apr 2006 17:10:05 -0400 Path: assm.asstr.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr.org/Year2006/53566> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-admin@asstr.org> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@asstr.org> X-Moderator-ID: emigabe, newsman The Stories of Edwin Amboy Love - Sex - Punishment - Lust - Depravity - Brutality 'Get excited! Stimulate your imagination.' www.edwinamboy.com Each of Edwin Amboy's novels contain numerous inter-relating characters, plots, and sub-plots. These characters, as well as new ones, will re-appear in subsequent books in the series. Scenes of love, violence, raw sex, punishments, and some brutality are plentiful. Following is a brief scene from early in the novel, 'Adele: Book One'. It occurs in the morning, before the late afternoon events with Becky Jorgensen that are described on the back cover. There is little eroticism in this confrontation. John is focused on 'settling the score', and Becky on coping with her submission and humiliation. With no hotel in the little town of, 'Adele', John Wells has taken a room at Jorgensen's Lodge. It's off-season and he's the only guest. Becky Jorgensen has been rude, discourteous, even disdainful, from their first meeting. The night before, John was present during a violent Jorgensen family confrontation which he had instigated, watching while Becky was visciously slapped around and essentially raped. This morning at breakfast Becky has a cut, swollen, lip. She completely ignores John and leaves the kitchen before he's finished eating. While not pleased that Becky had been brutalized, John is still in a 'get even' mood. SCENE John found Mrs. Jorgensen again when he was returning to his room after breakfast. As he reached the top of the stairs she was coming down the hallway towards him. "Mrs. Jorgensen," he said as she approached, "I'm glad to run into you again. I wanted to know if you're okay," he explained, trying to show some concern over her well-being. Becky glanced at him with venom in her eyes, about to pass him. John moved to the side to block her passage. "You're not very polite, are you?" Becky was standing still, staring straight ahead at his chest. "Get the fuck out of my way," she growled menacingly. "I've been accumulating some laundry. Would you do it for me?" Becky stepped to the other side of the hallway to get past him, but John was almost twice her size and weight and easily prevented that. "You know," he said, shaking his head sadly, "The service in this lodge is atrocious." Becky sighed in angry frustration then, in a mini-fit of temper, tried to force her way between John and the wall. She might as well have been trying to move the wall itself. She quickly gave up the effort. "I really think you should do my laundry," John advised her. "Go fuck yourself," Becky snarled. "No, but I may want to fuck 'you'." Becky snorted derisively. The nerve of this guy. "In your dreams. Get out of my fuckin' way before I kick you in the balls." John shrugged. "Okay, suit yourself," he said as he moved out of her way, "But I'll bet you a buck you're on your knees sucking on Theodore's little weenie before the week's out. Betcha that's really going to stink." Becky looked at him, wondering where this was coming from. "Didn't you wonder how I came to be with your men last night?" Becky had. "I met Leif in town. We put down a few. I sort of clued him in on how much his son was suffering from lack of -- marital attentiveness." Becky's lips curled. "You fuckin' bastard." Her fists balled, but she quelled the urge to punch him in the face. "You know, Leif has a problem. He cares for you. When he's sober he wants you all for himself. I could see he wasn't happy when Theodore was fucking you. But he does love his son, and it doesn't take much booze to make him feel guilty. I'd bet he'd be open to the suggestion that Jorgensen family life might be much better if he kept your pussy to himself and Theodore just used your mouth, and maybe even your ass, on a regular basis." Becky had briefly focused on Wells' comment about Leif's feelings for her, but now her stomach was in a knot. The picture he was painting could easily become very real. "So, I don't think you really want me as an enemy. And all that takes is doing my laundry and giving me a blow job." Becky's mouth dropped open. The gall of the man. She wanted to crush him with a retort, but he had put some fear into her and she was speechless. John waited patiently for a response. Becky was a very fuckable woman, but somehow he didn't go for the idea of sticking his dick into something that had so recently been filled with Theodore's scum. "Well," he concluded after a few moments of silence, "You know where my room is. Please knock first." He left her standing there and went into his room. Becky's mind was working furiously. There was no bluff here. She had no doubt that Wells could and would influence Leif, especially now that Leif was looking to fish the Caloochee, but there was no way she could bring herself to give Wells the satisfaction of going down on him. She imagined giving Theodore a blowjob. The smell of him came flooding back to her and she had to hold back from retching. She imagined Wells telling Leif to forget about using his land because his wife had refused to give him breakfast and hadn't done his room. Leif would beat the shit out of her. The image of the bottles in Leif's liquor cabinet flashed through her mind. Maybe she could kill Wells and dump his body in the lake. There was a rifle over the fireplace. She began to seethe inside. There was no way out of this. She mentally braced herself, trying to steel herself against the humiliation to come, then went to Wells' door and knocked. John hadn't been a hundred percent certain, but he would have given odds there'd be a knock. 'Let her stew a little,' he thought. Becky clenched her jaw and knocked again, knowing full well that Wells was playing with her. "Who is it?" John called out. Becky closed her eyes and took in a deep breath, "Becky." "Come on in," John called back casually. She opened the door and walked in. John was standing in the middle of the room. "What do you want?" he asked innocently. Becky never hated anyone so much in her life. He so easily crumbled her efforts to harden and numb herself. There was no camouflaging this kind of humiliation. Tears suddenly threatened. She looked away. "You knocked on my door," John explained, "Tell me what you want." Becky had no choice but to play his game. She kept her gaze in a corner of the room and took another deep breath to bring herself under control, "I want to do your laundry and give you a blow job." John was enjoying himself immensely. "That's very nice of you. Take off my pants and I'll be happy to accommodate you." Becky moved to him quickly, determined now to get this over with as fast as possible. She opened his belt, undid his buttons and pulled his pants and shorts down to his ankles. His semi-erect dick sprang out at her, surprising her a little. It was big, much bigger than Leif's. "I'll be more comfortable with everything off," John advised her. Becky got down on her knees and began untying his shoes. Eventually, John was naked from the waist down. He sat on the chair, slouching down a little so his balls hung clear as Leif had been. "You know, I saw you down on Leif the other night. You really should keep your shades down, even in the off-season. So I know how well you can do this. I want a first class job." Becky braced herself, dropped to her knees between his legs, hesitated a moment, then picked up his penis and took it in her mouth. John closed his eyes and began to float in the pleasure of her warm wet mouth massaging his dick. Becky was doing everything right, from the top of his dick to the bottom of his balls. Becky knew what pleased men. She'd been doing this since she was eleven. She licked and kissed and caressed and used her mouth like a pussy, refusing to admit that this was probably the best looking dick and balls she had ever had in her mouth, but that reality did take the edge off her anger and humiliation. It wasn't too long before John felt himself beginning to come. He opened his eyes, the pressure inside growing rapidly, then moaned involuntarily as he bucked and climaxed. Becky took the first spurt in her mouth, the rest on her face and chest. This was nothing new to her. Even Leif had her satisfy him this way on occasion. She rose to her feet, took a tissue from the dresser, wiped her face, then went for the door. John was aglow and drowsy. "Thank you," he said to Becky's retreating back, "That was very good. Don't forget my laundry. It's in the closet." Becky retrieved the armful of clothing without a word and left the room. John rested in bed a while. This also had been a superior sexual experience, more complete and satisfying than any blowjob he had ever had. He tried to imagine Becky crying and screaming and shaking her beautiful ass under the Sheriff's paddle. That was what she really needed, not cuts on her lip. The Stories of Edwin Amboy Love - Sex - Punishment - Lust - Depravity - Brutality 'Get excited! 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