Message-ID: <19041eli$9901220410@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year99/19041.txt> From: LadyCyrrh@aol.com Subject: The Annex Reviews, 1/12/99 Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-transfer-encoding: 7bit Content-type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <cf8672a8.369c2e85@aol.com> X-Is-Review: yes The 1998 Cyrrheal Awards are out! Check my website (http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh) to see the results. A few other matters have been pointed out to my attention. One is that the ASSM newsgroup seems to temporarily disabled. Permanently? I hope not. It was the best place on the net to find all sorts of porn, hundreds of stories weekly, and it is gone or good it will be a sad day indeed for writers and readers. Not to mention reviewers. So I will posting on ASS, ASSGM, and ASSD in the meantime. And to my site as well. I have also been informed that despite what I said in my Neterotica Address fanfic sites have been having as hard a time as porn sites as far as closures are concerned. Some of these sites aren't even that explicit; they are being shut down for only mentions of homosexual relationships between the characters in otherwise fairly innocent stories. Such censorship may get worse. I hope not. The stories: The Brewster Boys and Santa, by J. O. Dickerson (M/bbbb, blackmail, Christmas) Flash, by Waldo (TG, M/F, SF, spoof) Cafe Leopold (lunch with Mona), by Leo Sanderson (F mast, shave) Touching Honor, by Trisha (F mast, BDSM) Love's Eternal Circle, by Caeser (M/F, cons, rough) The Collar, by N. M. Hawthorne (F/F, BDSM) The Brewster Boys and Santa [A] Where posted: ASSGM When posted: 12/17/98 Author: Dream Spinner Address: authorsix@hotmail.com This is one of the most cheerfully perverted stories I've ever read. Santa visits the house of the Brewster boys, who've been very naughty this year: "First, there had been the lipping off to parents and teachers that applied to all four boys. Then there had been the toad left in Bobby's teacher's desk. The picture Benny had drawn on the chalk board of Mr. Carsley sucking cock and had then covered with the roll-up map had drawn a lot of laughs from his classmates." But they don't stop there. When Santa comes down the chimney, they leave drugged brownies for him to eat, then rape the old guy. I won't repeat it here, save it was very real and very detailed. If you've wondered exactly how a gang of prepubescents would sexually assault Santa Claus, this is it. Oh, and they tape it, too, to ensure they get better presents next Christmas. Is nothing sacred? At least Santa enjoyed it. Flash [A+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 12/19/98 Author: Waldo Address: MelLin6695@aol.com This was about the best TG story I've read so far and I'll go so far to say that it might even turn out as one of this year's (1999) best. Yes, I know it was posted LAST year, but my review is THIS year, and that's what counts. The story is a loving spoof of the old "Flash Gordon" movie serials with Dale Arden, Flash, Dr. Zarkov, and Ming the Merciless. The tone is the respectful one of a true fan, more of a homage and less of a spoof; you won't find any wicked satire here. The premise is this: after an adventure on the planet Mongo Dale has been left near death, so Dr. Zarkov uses a murp ray to fuse her life-force with Flash's as a means of keeping her alive. Unfortunately, this has the effective of transforming virile blonde Flash into pretty little Dale at regular 29-hour intervals. (Wisely, this has been kept from Earth publicity hacks.) But Flash never ceases pining for Dale, whose comatose body Ming still holds, and he and Zarkov return to Mongo to find the murp ray to set things right again. Along the way they pick up a horny cook from a wrecked spaceship who gives Dale/Flash no end of trouble, and machinations by Ming's men result in dire straits for the heroes as Flash, in his female form, is brainwashed by a "tractor-grazer" ray to be Ming's sex slave and renamed Ambrosia. He's to work in tandem along with another Dale clone named Moesia, as Ming the Merciless announces: Last night, one of the most beautiful women in the world..nay, in the universe, made love to me. She sucked me... she fucked me... she made me a very happy and drained man. Tonight Moesia will join Ambrosia..that's what I call my new little playmate. She's the best tasting pussy that I've ever licked. Ambrosia..pussy nectar good enough for the gods. Tonight Moesia will join Ambrosia and me in my bed. I'll see what it's like to be fucked and sucked by the two most beautiful twins in the universe. You must hurry up and restore the real Miss Arden to being normal so that I can see what it's like to make love to triplets. God, just thinking about triplets in my bed gets me hard. Moments later, Dr. Zarkov sees the transformation for himself: The door opened, allowing a very naked Dale Arden- looking woman entered the lab. Only this very natural looking woman wasn't walking timidly nor acting hesitantly as the last time that Zarkov saw the transformed and brainwashed Flash Gordon. The naked woman who walked into the room, was radiating pure sex appeal several ways. In the way that she walked, in the way that she held her naked breasts thrust out, in the way that she slinked across the floor like a world class seductress, in the sultry expression on her perfect face, and most importantly in the fathomless deepness of her sexy eyes.....She ignored everything in the room as she smiled at the object of her attention - the very beaming Emperor Ming. The woman disregarded normal protocol and didn't kneel as she approached him. Instead, she walked confidently toward him as if they were equals. Quickly crossing the room, she stepped next to Ming as she seductively spread her thighs around him and guided his hand to her breast. She tilted her head up and held her lips waiting for his kiss as if she was a woman with her man in the privacy of their honeymoon suite. After more adventures the heroes and heroines eventually escape, in various states of transformation from male to female, leaving Ming's palace in flames. There was lots of hot, literate sex, some sly humor, and some very thoughtful speculation on how a man might act while trapped in a woman's body, or deal with the results of it afterward. Even better, the story didn't dwell on clothing, hairstyles, and female mannerisms the way TG fiction often does, elements which can get tiresome for those of us are who already female. Even if you don't like TG stories give this one a try, especially if you're a fan of SF or the old cliffhangers. Cafe Leopold (Lunch with Mona) [B] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 12/19/98 Author: Leo Sanderson Address: leonsan@rocketmail.com A woman goes to have lunch with a bunch of girlfriends in a cafe, where she orders a "Club Sandwich and an iced coffee.....and a Bare Kitty Shave." Soon the seat drops away beneath her booth and unseen attendants shave her snatch. Naturally, the wait staff is male and all the customers female, and they have orgasms between bites of lunch. This was more of a vignette than a story; it couldn't have carried a plot by itself. Still, it was mildly amusing. Touching Honor [A-] Where posted: SSBB When posted: 12/14/98 Author: Trisha Address: trishah@teleport.com Website: http://www.munchltd.com/storytyme/ At a play party a man observes a woman he knows is a sub- -she's collared--perform a slow striptease and lie on the couch. She spreads her legs and begins to masturbate as she fantasizes about her master: She moves her index finger just little...touching more directly on the hood.....the wetness creeping up from her pussy....making her slick....as her finger moves effortlessly... She cradles her breast in her other hand, her fingers finding the nipple to softly pinch as she sees herself spread on that table. She can almost feel the bite of the cold, metal clover clamps pressed against her nipples as she lays on the table in her fantasy...She sees him enter the room behind her....the paddle clear in his hand...and pinches her nipple harder as she feels the smooth, cool surface of the paddle. The smacks start out softly.....almost gently and then increase in their hardness as he continues. And then the whacks are exploding on her bottom. In the end it transpires the man is actually videotaping her performance as a Christmas present for her master, who is out of town. The "honor" in the title comes from his refusal to touch the exquisite feast that he records. This story was pretty hot and I liked it, as I like most well- written, romantic BDSM, but the play-acting of the characters annoyed me after a while. Would the woman obey her "master" if he told her to jump off a bridge? How about if he told her to get a boob job? Or turn over her credit cards? Yeah, yeah, I know it's a matter of trust between them, they're living a lifestyle, they're fulfilling deep secret parts of themselves that ordinary folks are too ignorant to be aware of, etc. etc. But what it all comes down is no better than a game of Dungeons and Dragons, with real dungeons. Love's Eternal Circle [A+] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 12/23/98 Author: Caeser Address: caesar69@my-dejanews.com Website: /~Caesars_Archive_Collection/ This story was one of the better wifeslut ones I've read, written in Caeser's rock-steady first person persona. After a year of marriage a husband discovers his modest, ladylike, upper-crust wife is not all she appears to be: she loves rough sex, being dominated, and taking it in the ass. He obliges her, and we gradually discover that the hints of it were there all along: she was a total slut who was getting her sub thrills from adulterous liaisons outside the marriage bed. Disgusted, the narrator sells her off (slave trading being alive and well in sex stories) and finds another lover. But it happens that this modest, gentle lady has a secret side as well...and the cycle continues. Not having read Caeser's work before, I found it very good, showing a writer in full command of his craft. The story didn't take sides; D/S was presented as neither good nor bad, healthy or unhealthy, it simply is, and the author used it in an ironic way to point out that if we don't change ourselves, we continue to attract the same people over and over. An excellent read. The Collar [B] Where posted: ASS, ASSM When posted: 12/23/98 Author: N.M.Hawthorne Address: mccolley@clover.net Jasmine informs Pat she has a new boyfriend who has given her a shiny metal collar to wear. Pat just has to see this for herself. She looks in through the keyhole as the two have a D/S fetish play session, where she discovers the boyfriend is really a woman. She's discovered and runs, but later receives a package containing the same sort of collar which a mysterious pheromone perfume compels her to put on. After drinking some of her Jasmine's breast milk the transformation is complete: [She] touched the mask to her face she felt a disturbance in her outfit. She dropped her hands and looked in the mirror. The mask had already began to adhere to her face, but what happened next shocked her then filled her with joy. The suit came alive. It began to ooze over her uncovered parts, as if someone had opened a can of oil and poured it over her the space between her shoulders and gloves covered in an instant. The tops of the boots began to creep up as the bottoms of the hot pants began to flow down, meeting at the middle of her thigh to form a solid mass. The suit flowed over the locks making them disappear. The boning lines of her corset were suddenly just gone. The mask came alive next flowing its way around her head, pushing her lush read hair into a tight ponytail on top of her now slick black shiny head. In the mirror Pleasure Slave_15 now saw a completely new person. As stories go, the writing in this one was slightly below average, but it read quickly enough so that it wasn't annoying. There were more than a few incredulous moments in the plot (what friend breaks into another's house to spy on her and her boyfriend?) but of course that's par for the course in porn. Still, these twists could have used more bolstering. No surprises here, with the ending--the two newly transformed sex slaves climbing into the limo that takes them to their new lives--being fairly typical too. 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