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I have never done this before and am somewhat unsure of how to go about it.  I
have written a story in seven parts, and I am submitting parts one and two
together to see if there is any interest.  Please advice me if I am
incorrectly submitting or with anything I could do differently in the future..
I am retaining all legal rights to this work and do not want my real email
address above to be included with the work.  Thank you..        Debbie


This is the first attempt I have made at writing anything I want to share.
I am still somewhat nervous about this entire process, but have decided to
take a leap and offer it for your entertainment.  I enjoy writing and sex,
so it just seemed natural to combine the two.  This story happens to be
about a male dom and a female sub.  While not being my only interest, I
find the subject interesting.  I intended to only write the first two parts
submitted below, but I grew to like the characters involved, so this story
grew and soon had seven parts.  I may submit them also if there is some
interest.  I hope you find in readable and maybe a little exciting.  I am
retaining ownership of this work.



   THE COUPLE



   PART ONE: MMMMMM

   She waited patiently.  She knew he would want her to be dressed just as
she was- simple black dress, black lace bra, black garters, black stockings
and black heels, and of course, no panties.  She sat on the couch getting
more nervous with each passing moment.  Waiting for him was torture.  She
heard a car pass...  then stop...  She jumped up.  Ran to the door.  She
opened it before he got there, welcoming him in.  He did not speak to her
as he entered the room.  She did not dare look into his eyes.  He glanced
around the room, making sure that everything was as requested.  Wine
chilling, candles lit, lights dimmed and romantic music.  When he was
satisfied that everything was as he wished, he looked at her.  She kept her
eyes lowered.  He looked at her beautiful body clearly visible in the
outfit he'd asked her to wear for this occasion.  He walked toward her,
reached a hand under her dress to check to see if she had followed his last
instruction.  Under the dress she was bare, completely; she had shaven and
worn no panties.  He smiled for the first time.  He rubbed the smooth skin,
so soft.  He could feel that she was already getting damp to the touch. 
Oh, she was such a good little slut.  "Go get them!" he ordered.  She ran
to the drawer and returned with the handcuffs.  He took them from her and
she immediately held her arms out in front of herself for her master..  He
shook his head.  She pouted and moved her arms behind her.  He circled her
and cuffed her wrists together behind her back.  She was not fond of this
because it was much more difficult to maintain her balance during some of
the things her master requested..  "Knees" he demanded.  She dropped to her
knees in front of him.  He placed his hands on his hips and looked down at
her.  "Unzip me darling", he requested.  She leaned into his crotch and
used her teeth to gently pull his zipper down.  She could see how hard his
cock was through his underwear.  She kept her face close to his crotch
feeling the warmth.  He moved her head away.  Not so rough as to make her
loose balance, but rough enough to let her know he would not put up with
any silliness tonight.  He was all business.  He wanted her beautiful lips
around his cock fast.  He lowered his pants and underwear to midthigh.  His
cock sprung out in front of her face.  She smiled.  She looked up at him
waiting for permission; she knew better than to start without his okay.  He
enjoyed this moment.  Looking down at her hungry little face.  "Suck it
Slut", he said.  She lowered her mouth to the head of his cock and slowly
swallowed the head.  Swirled her tongue all over her master?s prick head.
"Mmmmm", she murmured.  He put his hands on her head and forced her head
down the full length of his cock.  "Ungggggg", he moaned; "I don't want to
be teased tonight.  Gag on it bitch." He held her head on his cock, letting
her adjust to its size filling her little mouth.  She was trying to relax
her gag reflex and accept the cock she was forced to semi swallow.  He
looked down at her.  "Now, start sucking that baby and do it fast and hard
like I want.  Go the whole length each time and I want to feel those lips
circling the base too," he demanded.  She looked into his eyes and nodded
with his cock filling her mouth.  "Ok, now," he said as he released her
head.  "If you have some problems doing as I have requested, I will help
you.  You know what that means don't you dear?" Her big blue eyes widened
as she realized what he meant.  She began sucking her master with earnest.
He put his hands back on his hips and let his eyes close and head fall
back...  She bobbed her head as fast as she could up and down on the full
length of his cock.  She was pleased to hear his moans.  She could feel her
lips circling the base and knew the tip of his cock had to be down her
throat.  He was growing larger and larger with each thrust.  Suddenly, he
pulled away from her lips.  ?Ahhhh, dear we will not finish so quickly this
evening...?  He circled her and uncuffed her wrists.  "Finish undressing me
slut," he demanded...  She crawled to him and pulled his pants and
underwear down and off.  He took off his shirt.  "Are you ready dear?" She
looked up at him with curious eyes not knowing what would come next...To be
continued



   PART TWO: CONTINUED



   He moved to her and pulled her to her feet.  He reached down to grasp
the hem of her dress and swiftly pulled it over her head.  He tossed her
discarded dress to the floor.  He looked over her beautiful body.  His
first view of her shaven pussy.  He walked around her in a large circle so
he could view her body from every angle.  He was very pleased.  Her large
breasts were heaving.  He could see the peaks all hard and firm through her
bra.  He walked to the bed and lay back on it.  He put his hands behind his
head.  His cock was standing straight up.  "Come here," he requested.  She
walked to the bed and stood touching the edge.  "Come and ride me," he
ordered.  She climbed on the bed and straddled his body.  She looked at him
with a question, "Where sir?" He pulled his arm from behind his head and
inserted his finger inside her wet pussy.  She gasped with the harshness of
it.  He pulled it out just as quickly and folded his hands behind his head
again.  She positioned herself and lowered her pussy on his cock.  The
sensation was different with her freshly shaven pussy.  She was sensitive
to each touch.  She looked up into his eyes and saw growing impatience. 
She began bouncing on him.  Riding him hard like she knew he loved.  Her
large tits were bouncing.  He made no attempt to touch her.  His arms
remained behind his head and he continued to look at her.  Her moans filled
the room.  "Stop!" he requested.  She stopped.  He unlocked his hands and
placed them on her lovely hips.  He lifted her body and repositioned her so
that her lovely ass was open to him.  He teased her hole with the tip of
his cock.  She gasped and moaned in pleasure.  "Please go slow this time
sir," she begged.  He grinned a nasty smile.  He began to enter her slowly.
He pulled her body on his cock.  She groaned in sheer ecstasy.  Then he
slammed her hips down full force on his cock!  She screamed in surprise,
pain and pleasure.  When she finally opened her eyes, he could see tears in
the corner.  "They will do you no good with me," he warned.  He slowly
started to move her again up and down on his cock.  Oh she was so warm and
tight.  It was the best sensation he knew.  She was starting to loosen up
and relax her little hole.  He kept pumping her up and down until he had
worked up a good speed.  Almost where he liked it.  He released his hand
from her hips and reached for the clasp in the front of her bra.  He opened
it and watched her boobs fall out.  He grasped her large firm tits.  "Fuck
it," he told her.  She continued to ride him while he stroked her tits. 
"You know how I like it." She built up speed.  She could feel the wetness
between her legs dripping from her pussy.  She knew he used her pussy to
cream up his dick before sticking it into her ass.  He started to pinch her
tender nipples.  Pull on them.  He was pulling very hard.  She was not
allowed to complain about the pain.  She knew that.  She could tell he was
close.  He was panting.  Sweat was running between her breasts and down the
middle of her back, but she dared not stop for fear of punishment.  She
worked harder to please him.  He pulled her body close.  Took one whole
breast in his mouth and started to suck.  She groaned loudly.  She could
feel his tongue all over it at once.  In this position, her clit was
rubbing against his body and she could feel her own orgasm starting.  He
continued with her breast in his mouth and she looked into his eyes and
begged for permission.  "Ask," he told her knowing how hard it was for her
to talk when she was so close to Cummins.  She winced in pain as attempted
to hold off her orgasm.  "Please master, may I cum for you?" she begged. 
It took everything she had to ask him.  He had finally taught her some
control.  He slowly nodded after pausing to make sure she was obedient. 
She screamed as she came for him.  She knew he loved to hear her cum.  He
continued to suckle her through her orgasm.  Then he regrasped her hips and
pounded up into her.  He wanted to fill her sweet ass with his cum.  It
didn?t take long.  He came in her ass and then pulled her body down to rest
on his.  They lay together until they were both on the brink of sleep.  He
knew there would be many other amazing nights together.  He watched her
fall asleep, his cock still in her ass and a smile on her sweet face...

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