Message-ID: <17956eli$9812110443@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/17956.txt> From: mikaal@hotmail.com (HotScribe) Subject: HOTSCRIBE: "Unfinished Series" Models (Mffff, no sex (yet), wrestling) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Reply-To: mikaal@hotmail.com Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <3670af7f.2035959@mail.cadvision.com> The "Unfinished Series" include stories which, for one reason or another, I never finished writing. Your assignment, should you decide to accept it, is to write an ending, or the next segment, or a sequel to what has already been written. If you do manage to complete the story, I'd very much like to read what you've written. Good luck! MODELS by HotScribe It is a hot summer's day on the sunny, white sand beach. But in my seaside villa, the air conditioner blows refreshing, cool air. I patiently await the arrival of my photographic subjects for the day and busy myself with arranging various lights and props on the set that I've created---a small gypsy campsite, complete with the fake exterior of a caravan. I don't usually spend a lot of time with pre-photographic production since a lot of my shots come from on-the-spot decisions, but I do like to make sure I know what's available and ready to use. The doorbell rings. I answer it to find Stacey, an eighteen year old model smiling at me. She has long golden hair and the brightest of blue eyes. "Hi! Am I on time?" "Oh, sure," I reply. "Come on in." Stacey follows me to the studio portion of my villa, where the gypsy set has been created, and I show her to the dressing-room. The doorbell rings again. "Back in a minute," I say. She nods, smiles at me, and I return to the front door. Waiting for me are Paige, a black-haired and violet-eyed sixteen year old; Gwendolyn, a ravishing nineteen year old redhead with green eyes; and Nikki, seventeen, a hazel-eyed brunette. "Hi, girls! Nice to see you again." I lead then through to the dressing- room where they greet Stacey. All of them have worked together as a group before, so the present shoot shouldn't prove to be a problem. "You've got about fifteen minutes to get ready, so hop to it." They giggle and joke as only teenaged girls can as the door closed and I returned to the set to put some finishing touches on the caravan. I always marvel at the way they can switch from being almost childish in their antics to maturity when on the set. About fifteen minutes later, the four girls appear from the dressing- room, all of them wearing gypsy-style clothes---colourful flounced skirts, white blouses with puffy sleeves, short vests, and various pieces of jewellery. Earrings, broaches, dangling bracelets, rings and anklets. They look extremely attractive with their makeup on, their long hair entwined with little flowers. I'm pretty confident I'll be able to get some beautiful shots---not only fortheir portfolios, but as samples for my own as well. Laughing and whispering lightly amongst themselves, they glide on bare feet to the set and situate themselves in the positions I indicate to them to start with. I check the setup through the viewfinder of my camera. It looks good-- -a group shot of four teenaged girls. After several shots like this, I'll start breaking them up into singles and groups of twos and threes. I take several shots from this particular angle, then begin to move to another one. "Change positions, please, girls--it's looking great!" I encourage them. The four girls switch automatically to new poses quite smoothly because they've been doing this for a year or so already. Just then, during one of the moves, Nikki accidentally steps on Paige's toes. The younger model lets out a screech which sounds probably more for effect than actual pain. "Hey! Watch it, clumsy!" Then Nikki does something which, from my past knowledge of her, is totally out of character. Normally even-tempered and tolerant of such things, she suddenly shoves Paige backwards and yells, "Shut up, bitch, and get out of my way!" "Girls, girls--" I begin, putting my camera down, but now it is too late. The next thing I know, Paige has jumped on Nikki and both of them fall to the floor. Stacey and Gwendoline shriek with surprise and step backwards and their two model friends begin to toussle on the floor, each of them pulling the other's hair and grabbing at clothes to try and get a good grip. Suddenly there is a loud ripping noise as Nikki grabs the front of Paige's blouse and pulls at it. The buttons pop off, the whole front of the blouse tears away to reveal Paige's small, but taut breasts... -- +----------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `--------------+ | <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> | | Archive site +----------------------+--------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | <http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/>----<http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/faq.html>