Message-ID: <798eli$9705131426@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/Year97/798> Path: qz!news.accessus.net!not-for-mail X-Path-Preload: news.accessus.net preloaded to thwart rogue canceller there Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> From: Jim Webber <webber@azreal.com> Subject: Review of Diane Series Moderator's comment ------ I am questioning the appropriateness of this one. The story referred to can be found in the February section of the a.s.s.m archive. The long delay for the review to be topical for this group is the grounds of most of my uncertainty. ------ end comment A diligent search of the adult side of the web eventually leads anyone with merit to http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/ where the moderator of this newsgroup maintains a delightful archive. Having arrived there to review the erotic stories that might be found therein for my web site, I was overwhelmed with excitement. This very rich vein of erotica is more than just steamy, it is superheated! Although company policy is very strict in this regard, it was inevitable that the archive site receive our highest accolade, two balls (as seen at http://www.azreal.com/stories.html ) to signify our total stimulation. Meanwhile, as is mandatory for each site we review in our stories category, I set about picking a few delectable treats for my reading pleasure. To my wonderment, there was an extreme torture nonconsensual story series on the first listing of stories I came to. I refer, of course, to the Diane Series by Steven S. Davis. This series begins with a provocative chapter on the capture of a young housewife, her mother, and her children. She is taken to an elaborately secured dungeon and repeatedly humiliated. The master explains that she will never be released, but her children and mother may gain their freedom if she is an obedient slave. If she is tremendously disobedient, her children, held at a separate hostage site, will be killed one at a time to encourage her compliance. As the author explains in his opening sequence, this series is not something many people will be comfortable with. It is not a bondage and discipline story, as it involves nonconsensual rape and torture. It is not a domination/submission story, as it is not about exchanges of power and submission. It is a brutally sadistic horror story. For a story about pure evil, it succeeds incredibly well. It has all the accoutrements of a classic in its genre. The evil master. The perverted priests. The total dedication to inflicting pain and humiliation. The sympathetic protagonist who is tortured in vile and almost unspeakable fashions. The second installment involves the slave's first day of training, where she is tortured with submerging, then given rectal and vaginal enemas. In spite of her best efforts at obedience, she is helpless to avoid evacuating her bowels without order. For punishment, she first has the soles of her feet whipped to a bloody pulp during which she may not cry out our one of her children will be "sanctioned." Then, after another brutal cleansing, she is made to clean up the detritus from her evacuated bowels by mouth. This scene ends with a golden shower administered by one of the master's supervisors, followed by seemingly endless brown and golden showers to the conclusion of the chapter. The third installment offers a series of seemingly sexual activities, which are simply brutalized beyond all recognition. The insertion of massive dildos in the mouth, anus, and vagina followed by the slave walking on her swollen and bruised feet is detailed in horrific fashion. The fourth installment introduces the associates who share the dungeon. They are cruel, vicious, and highly aroused by their new slave. Numerous wet sequences are described, with a clear understanding that the slave derives nothing but horror from the experience. And the series continues with more and more evil, more torture, more rape, more foul disgusting things following one on the heels of the other. As a horror story, it must be read to be experienced. As an experience, it should make your flesh crawl, it is so effective. If the _Nightmare on Elm Street_ had been rated "X" it would not have come close to the intensity of the Diane series. The author is truly a craftsman. His fertile imagination is matched only by his excellent grasp of narrative. The scenes explode off the page in their realism. Of course, if this sort of material simply leaves you sickened, there are plenty of delights to be found on the archive site. Give it a visit. Free Sex, William James Webber http://www.azreal.com/ -- +--------------' Story submission `-+-' Moderator contact `------------+ | story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us | story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us | | Archive site +--------------------+------------------+ Newsgroup FAQ | \ <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/> .../assm/faq.html> /