Message-ID: <4033eli$9709112318@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Archived-At: <URL:http://www.netusa.net/~eli/erotica/assm/Year97/4033.txt> From: rass_senip@usa.net (Rass Senip) X-Good-Line-Length: yes Subject: _The Book_'s Universe: ===>Bartlett 1 - "Donut Holes"<=== by Bartlett (mc, nc, mf, ff, pedo) Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d Path: qz!not-for-mail Organization: The Committee To Thwart Spam Approved: <usenet-approval@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Moderator-Contact: Eli the Bearded <story-admin@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Story-Submission: <story-submit@qz.little-neck.ny.us> X-Original-Message-ID: <3439436a.17621726@mail.netaddress.com> [Unchanged from the original posting] *Article: 27579 of alt.sex.stories *Message-ID: <063351Z29061994@anon.penet.fi> *Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories *From: an58704@anon.penet.fi (Bartlett) *X-Anonymously-To: alt.sex.stories *Organization: Anonymous contact service *Reply-To: an58704@anon.penet.fi *Date: Wed, 29 Jun 1994 06:31:34 UTC *Subject: NEW SERIES: Bartlett 1 - Donut Holes (mc, nc, mf, ff, pedo) *Lines: 353 This is the first installation of a new series. It is set in the same "universe" as the Book series, and assumes a familiarity with other mind control erotica. It will be a continuing series if it is liked, with episodes 2 and 3 already written! Also, there will be "post-bartlett" stories of the people he has affected. Please do email if you enjoy this story! If I don't get any response, I won't post any more installments! Well, here goes! Donut Holes (Bartlett 1) by Bartlett (mc, nc, ff, mf, pedo, series) It was a typical business morning. Ten cars waited at the drive thru, so I decided to head inside and wait in line. Maybe it would be quicker. On the other hand, maybe it would be some fun... Inside was the same story. Two lines, each with 5 or 6 people in them. Mostly businessmen with gray hair and suits. Two, though, had little daughters with them. The girls were cute. Dressed in little, homemade, one-piece dresses and clinging to daddy's hands, neither was more than 5. Though the little ones were interesting, I really wasn't in the mood for anything. The girls behind the counter were, in a word, portly. Not at all my style, even just for fun. So I got my coffee and sat down. It was then that I noticed the two real women in the place. One was a businesslike one with two girls sitting with her. She had short blonde hair and wore a business suit with a short skirt. She was thin, with small breasts and a firm-looking ass. The daughters were a treat, too. One looked to be 6 or so and was as cute as the two in line. The other looked to be 10 or 12 and was starting to mature. Tiny tits poked out behind her sheer shirt, and she sat with that self-conscious air of a girl who was just beginning to notice her sexuality. She was a near-perfect copy of her mother. Just coming in the door was another woman. She was oriental, probably Chinese from her facial features. About 25, she was just my age, more of a girl than a woman. She was thin, with round, medium-sized tits bulging out from her knit top. As she moved forward in line, I noticed her bottom half. She wore a pair of tight-fitting legging pants and the outline of her underwear showed around her small ass. She looked really nice. I was beginning to take interest. I looked to the girls behind the counter. They were thinking of their jobs, with boring coffee and donut and cash symbols bouncing around inside. I reached out mentally and rearranged their thoughts to serve all the dull old men first and quickly, leaving the men with the little girls and the oriental woman waiting. I then erected a mental gate of sorts to instruct everyone driving in to use the drive thru. Reaching out behind the counter once more, I instructed the serving girls to all focus on the drive thru and not notice the dining room anymore. That should do it, I thought, now for the fun. Looking around, I tried to decide what to do first. The two men and the Chinese girl were beginning to get upset about being ignored by the help, so I figured I'd have to take care of them first. I instructed the Chinese girl to wait patiently as long as necessary in a chair. She sat down and stared outside. Good. Next, I replaced the mens' anger with a desire to play with their daughters. Each sat down on the dirty floor and began to tickle their girls and do all those nice things fathers know to keep their little girls laughing. Just for fun, I instructed the girls to switch fathers and the fathers to not notice. I then turned my attention to the woman at the table. She was looking around at the men on the floor with some confusion, wondering what they were doing there. I reached out and instructed her not to be concerned at all with them. Then the fun was to begin. First, I instructed the younger of her daughters to undress. She was to wear just her little panties and to leave her dress on the next table. She quickly began to undress and soon was sitting nearly naked. Her little nipples were pink and erect, probably from the cool air. She still smiled and ate her donut. Next, I told the older daughter to remove any underclothing and to come stand in front of me. She stood up and reached under her skirt, removing a pair of small, white cotton panties. Then she pulled her arms inside her dress and pulled off the straps of her bra. It matched the panties, small and white. She laid them on the table, so I instructed her little sister to put on the bra. It was too big for her, but she looked cute in it. The girl then walked over to me and stood before me, looking as if nothing unusual was happening. I had her turn around in front of me. She was a dream. She now looked about 12, just the right age. Her small breasts were perky and still lifted her shirt, peaked by two tiny, hard nipples. I had her bend over with her back to me so I could see up her skirt. Her little pussy was just visible between her thighs. It was hairless, but almost mature. I could see her little breasts hanging down under her shirt now, too. They were creamy white like the rest of her skin. Perfect. Not wanting the mother to be unhappy with this show, I instructed her to take off her panties and hike up her skirt at the table. She did this, showing off her hairy snatch. It was a dead ringer for her daughter's bare one. I inserted some pleasure symbols into her mind. She reached for her breasts and began to massage them. I then looked though her mind, hunting for an idea. Her sexual experiences were surprisingly varied, indicating even that she was having an affair at the time! But the wonderful thing was that this affair was with a woman at her office! Fantastic! I could have shouted out loud! I grabbed some of her lesbian experiences and inserted them into her young daughter, still sitting pretty next to her. She immediately looked on her mother in a different light and crawled between her legs. She stuck her little tongue into her mother's crotch and began to lick expertly. Her mother was going crazy with lust, rubbing her breasts with one hand and pressing her daughter's head harder against her cunt with the other. That was good for now, I decided. I the looked into her older daughter's mind for sexual experiences. She had fooled around a bit with a neighborhood boy, but nothing worthwhile. Deep in her subconscious, though, I noticed another experience. Her older cousin had once convinced her to suck him off, and this had continued for a few years. Excellent. I grabbed her experiences and looked through them a bit. She had enjoyed her play with her cousin, I was surprised to learn, and had only stopped because he had gotten married and moved away. I inserted the cocksucking knowledge into the two little girls, playing with the wrong fathers. Each quickly changed their attitudes and began to rub against their non-fathers' legs, running their tiny hands around their now bulging crotches. Before the fathers could react with alarm, I inserted a feeling of excitement and acceptance, and the men smiled and stroked the little girls' hair. Each little girl then unzipped the mens' flys and pulled out their now hard cocks. They stroked the mens' flesh and tickled it with their little hands, occasionally licking here or there. I wanted to see the little girls, too, so I instructed them to take off their little panties and to stroke their tiny slits with one hand. Each began to furiously rub her crack, rolling her little hips >from side to side. The fathers had closed their eyes and were moaning with pleasure. I glanced over at the woman and her daughter, still locked in a lesbian embrace. The little cuntlicker had moved around to also show me her crotch, now bare, as she frigged herself. I guess my instructions had affected all three of them, not just the cocksuckers! Her slit was bare and underdeveloped, but she was pleasing herself nonetheless. Her mother, too, was coasting from climax to climax, having now opened her dress shirt and bra, exposing her B-cup breasts. She was kneading her nipples, now hard and tall as little thumbs. This was getting me excited, so I turned back to my pre-teen exhibitionist, still displaying her assets for me. I instructed her to think of me as her lover and she immediately rose and sat on my lap. Covering my face with little kisses, she began to unbutton my shirt. I reached out and did the same, wanting a piece of her developing breasts. Her tits were small, and just as firm as I had hoped. They stood out from her chest as if supported by an invisible bra, and her nipples were hard and warm. She moaned as I cupped my hands around them, massaging their sides. She moaned again and pressed her chest into mine, rubbing up and down and pressing her crotch into mine. By now, my cock was straining to be released, warm between her 12-year old thighs. She felt it pressing against her and moved back to release it. She knelt on the floor and unzipped my shorts, pulling them and my briefs off with one motion. my cock sprang up into her face and she lovingly gripped it and began to stroke it. She moved and acted just as the little girls had with their fathers' cocks, licking and stroking it and rubbing it against her face. I looked up to see the men pulling their little girls' heads down on their cocks, no longer able to hold back. They each exploded into the girls' mouths and the girls each sucked and swallowed the older mens' jism. Lying still now, breathing heavily, the men collapsed to the floor, looking at the little girls. Each girl was splattered with come, with drops in their ponytailed hair and all over their pretty dresses. They each slowly massaged their cunts, having long since climaxed. The little girls were tired from their efforts, and I let them curl up together to sleep. The little girl sucking on her mother's cunt was tiring, too, though my instructions overrode her urge to sleep. I decided to let her stop and join the two others sleeping on the floor. The mother, though, looked distraught at losing her cuntlicker. Shw was still filled with lust, though I hadn't instructed her to be. She looked over at the men, lying with cocks in hand, and walked over to snuggle with them. She lay opposite from them, with her ass near their faces, and stroked their cocks expertly. The men began fondling her butt and stroking her pussy, exciting her and themselves more. I watched intrigued as the two men positioned themselves on either end of her, one sliding his cock into her snatch while she sucked the other's slick cock. They began to move together without my intervention, growing more and more excited by the minute. In the mean time, the woman's daughter was busy rubbing her cunt and playing with my cock. She wasn't too good at it, but she kept me up and hot, and the sight of her excited me more. She was kneeling between my bare legs, with her shirt open, exposing her small breasts which swayed in time with her licks on my cock. Noticing my renewed interest, she released my cock and sat in my lap facing me, my cock pressed between her legs at the entrance to her hole. Once again, she rubbed her chest on mine, causing her slick cunt to gyrate against my cock. I reached down and lifted her up by her ass, as she reached between our legs and placed my cockhead at her entrance. I lowered her back down to my lap, piercing her tight hole with my rod. She squealed as her hymen broke and she settled down, my cock buried inside her. She was exquisitely tight and wet, her hot walls rubbing the sides of my shaft. Slowly she began to wiggle and move up and down, fucking my cock with practically her whole body. Her tempo increased as she squealed and shrieked in excitement. My mind was almost drowning in her mental symbols of delight. She climaxed on my cock, screaming in ecstasy and throwing her body around wildly. Her outburst was loud enough for her mother and the two men to look up from their carnal dance. They smiled warmly, then resuming their fun. The girls behind the counter also looked up for an instant, then remembering their commands to ignore the dining room. Some drive-thru patron was asking about all the commotion, but the girl at the microphone answered that it was nothing interesting. Just then, the door opened. I looked up, angry that my commands had not been followed and a bit worried that perhaps another possessor of the symbols had interrupted my fun. A woman walked in and stopped in the door, shocked at the sight of the men and woman fucking on the floor, the sleeping, wet little girls in the corner, and the pre-teener still squirming on my cock. I quickly inserted an instruction to freeze into her head, just as she was about to turn and run out. She stood stock still, her mind continuing to boggle at the sight inside the donut shop. She was no symboler. I hunted through her mind, identifying her as a worker at the next store along the road, having walked over for a bottle of juice. My instructions had applied only to those driving in! Damn! I adjusted my gate to turn walkers away, thinking the place was too busy. Then I turned back to look at the interloper. She was in her mid twenties, jewish-looking, with longish, curly dark hair. She wore an unflattering sack-dress which made her look fat, though her breasts still managed to make twin lumps on her chest. I removed any thoughts of alarm at the sight inside and instructed her to come in and drop her dress. She pulled the loops of cloth off her shoulders and let the cloth drop to her feet. Contrary to the looks of her dress, she was not fat, just "solid". Her breasts were a bit bigger than the mother who now slid back and forth on the cocks of the two fathers. She wore a plain white cotton bra and matching panties. Why don't women dress excitingly anymore? Angry, I inserted a subconscious desire in her mind to dress more sensually in the future, from her panties to her dresses. I then instructed her to lose the boring white pieces. She now stood before me naked, her breasts sagging a bit and her hairy cunt starting to moisten from the sight of the goings-on in the dining room. Not wanting her for myself, I turned her attention to the two men and woman on the floor. She went to them to join in their game, and they accepted her happily. She sucked on the pussy-fucker's cock as the other woman continued with the other man. I allowed the young girl in my lap, tired from her sexual exertions, to climb off and join the Chinese girl, still sitting patiently at her table. Ah, yes, I thought, my other prospect! I now took a better look at the Chinese girl. She was thinner than all in the room except my pre-teen lover, but her breasts weren't as small. Even covered by her shirt they made a pair sizable lumps. I instructed her to "awaken", no longer ignoring the goings-on in the room. She surprised me by smiling at the sight of my slick, erect cock and the adult antics on the floor. I smiled back and beckoned for her to join me. Without instruction, she pulled her shirt over her head, revealing a sexy black silk bra! At last, a really sexy woman in the bunch! She pulled her leggings to the floor, too, revealing matching black silk and lace panties. Some fine, black pussy hairs escaped around the sides of the panties, and her breasts bulged above her tight bra. Her nipples already poked out under the silken cloth. She moved in a very sexy way, coming to sit on my lap, stroking my chest with her small hands and red-painted nails. I gazed at her creamy-white breasts and opened her bra's frontside clasp. Her breasts spilled out into my hands, firm and hot. I kneaded her nipples and lowered my mouth to suck and nibble. She threw her head back and ran her hands along my sides and arms, one hand eventually finding my cock. She tugged at it, expertly sliding her hands along its length and pulling it toward her crotch. I was stunned when she pressed my cock between her legs and I felt it sink into her cunt right through her panties! They were crotchless! She wrapped her legs around the back of my chair and pulled herself forward, filling her velvet-smooth, hot cunt with my shaft. She began to spasm on my lap, rubbing her clit on the bush of pubic hair above my cock. I reached down to grab her buttocks, lifting her and smashing her down against my crotch. Her breasts rubbed exquisitely on my chest as she threw her head back and squealed in excitement. At that moment, the four on the floor all exploded in a pile of heaving bodies, all rubbing on one another. Come flew everywhere. They all collapsed, petting and kissing and licking. The four young girls had awoken and were now piled in a lesbian foursome, sucking cunts and stroking bodies. The sight of the young girls, their fathers and mother, and the interloping girl all tossing about in sexual fulfillment was too much for the Chinese girl and me. We looked at each other, locked our bodies together, and began to climax. Rhythmically rolling and tugging, we built and built to fulfillment. I exploded inside her, my sperm dripping from her cunt and covering her panties. She screamed and hugged me to her breasts, which I grabbed and sucked earnestly. Collapsing on me, she nibbled and kissed my neck. My climax sent symbols flying every which way, eliciting climaxes from everyone in the room. Even some in their cars burst in sexual excitement. All the girls behind the counter groaned and tore at their polyester-uniformed crotches, collapsing at their posts. The four young girls just pulled together into a mass of young flesh, screaming in ecstasy. Recovering from my excitement, I looked around at the room. It was covered in come and female juices. I instructed the girls to lick each other clean, and turned to instruct the men and women to do the same. I left the serving girls the way they were, only inserting instructions to find nothing wrong with the present situation. Later, no doubt, they would be embarrassed by their dripping crotches, but they would never even try to think of a cause for their behavior. Now free of sexual juices, the young girls responded to my instructions to lick the Chinese girl and I clean. We were still locked together, but slowly pulled apart, completely satisfied. Everyone put their clothes back on, wiping here and there with napkins in an effort to make them appear presentable. Finally, I gathered all of my fellow customers around in a mental instruction session. The men were to bring home the wrong little girls, never to notice the switch. The girls, in turn, were programmed to "be" each other, to take on each other's lives in every way. I also inserted a few special symbols which made the girls telepathic broadcasters of a sort. No one who ever knew them would notice that they had been switched. They now were each other. I did leave the cocksucking knowledge intact, though. You never know... The mother was left pretty much as she had been. Her lesbian affair was too hot to tamper with. I did instruct her to write about it, though. Perhaps in the future her stories will appear as well... Similarly, her daughters were left as they were, though with both the lesbian and heterosexual experience intact. The pre-teen girl was to enjoy her sister without guilt as long as she desired. Her mother wouldn't interfere... The interloping woman was to forget everything except my order to be more sexy. She was lonely, and I figured I was helping her out. I also left her with a desire to write about her experiences and share them with me. Finally, I turned to the Chinese girl. She had come to (and with) me willingly, only needing a nudge to remove her inhibitions. I asked her what she wanted. She wanted me. Her former husband had left her for an American woman and she was longing for the touch of a man. I assured her problems were over and invited her to join me in my travels. Our experiences will appear here in the future... 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