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Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 1/9
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Date: 14 Apr 1997 19:09:44 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 1 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

This story was originally titled "Brenda's Conquest", and was retitled
after revision by the author.

In this chapter - History, first meeting, babysitting, 
                  starting her conquest

**********************************************************************

< Well, I think I know what heaven is like.  It can't be any better 
than what I have right here, right now.  Yes, being 25, I was supposed 
to know better, and if anyone had found out, I'd be in jail, or worse, 
but there's no way I could have prevented it.  I was in love with her, 
she said she was in love with me, and, knowing me better than I knew 
myself, she took me.  That's the only way to describe it.  Not that 
I'm complaining, you understand, it's just that I had very little say 
in the matter.

To understand what happened, I guess I'll have to start at the 
beginning.  My name is Richard Tyler and I come from a smallish town 
in the midwest.  I have two younger sisters and a pair of rather 
staid, very middle-class parents.  Looking back, I can see that my 
life was boringly typical and, other than a few incidents, uneventful 
until I got to college.

I graduated from high school as normal, got good enough marks to be 
accepted into the local U., and went there to study business for a 
year.  That's when the itch started.  I had a steady stream of 
girlfriends since I was sixteen, so I thought I knew everything there 
was to know.  That is, until I met a student from Melbourne here to 
study local husbandry and ranching practices.  This is not the girl I 
fell in love with, but she taught me an awful lot about the world, 
especially the world of sex, life, and adventure.

To give you an example, when we first met, I used my best line on her,
one guaranteed to work on most ladies.  (I'm 6'2" of long, lean 
muscle, and 'a good lookin hunk' according to the friends of both my 
sisters).  Her response?  "Hey, a hayseed.  A real one.  I've never 
met one before.  You're not too bad looking either."  What can I come 
back with after a shot like that?  With that accent of hers, it didn't 
even sound like an insult.  I just smiled and said "Ya got me pegged 
right first shot, little lady."   I learned more from her in that 
first two weeks than I had from all my previous girlfriends put 
together.

Besides great, and I mean *great* sex (hey, I was a hayseed from a 
small mid-west town - missionary was almost all I knew) she dragged me
to plays, operas, musicals, jazz festivals, restaurants, taught me to 
like seafood and real chinese, made me read some of her favourite 
fantasy books (first I'd ever heard of some writer named McCaffrey) 
and really opened my eyes about the world outside of my home.  We both 
still managed to get decent grades.  It was the second-best time of my 
life (the best before now).

She went back home after six months, leaving me to my humdrum world, 
one I had to get out of.  It was with a lot of effort, work, pleading, 
and downright stubbornness that I finally got my way.  The deal was, 
if I finished two years of college here, with a 3.75 gpa or better, I 
could take a year off and go anywhere I wanted, then go to the college 
of my choice.  Let me tell you, I almost gave up on dating and the 
local girls, just going out enough to satisfy my basic urges, and 
concentrated on the books and my workouts (have to maintain my 
physique).

Well, I did it, barely, and spent that year working my way through New 
Zealand, Australia, the Philippines, and most of the far east.  By the 
time I got back, all the hayseeds were out of my teeth, believe me.  
That, my friends, was an education.  I came back with most of my 
middle-class attitudes and prejudices, well, 'adjusted', you could 
call it.  That probably contributed in no small way to my current 
situation.

Now it was back to work, or rather school, and a part-time job.  I
chose San Diego because it reminded me most of the best parts of 
Australia, which I'd fallen in love with.  I had a job waiting for me 
too, through one of my old Prof's, working with some computer jockeys 
who needed help putting together business packages.  It was decent 
pay, the job wasn't too tough, and the hours were very flexible.  
College was tougher, since I switched from business to graphic arts,
and had to start over again.  My folks just rolled their eyes at me 
and said to go for it, as long as I would damned well finish this 
time.

Well, now knowing what I liked, I spent a long time finding just the
right place to stay.  With my job and a little help from home, I found
it - a beach house I could afford.  A two story two bedroom shack 
overlooking a rocky shoreline with a sand beach not more than fifteen 
minutes walk away, in a quiet suburbia type of place.  So what if it 
was old.  Everybody back home was jealous.  It was also the most 
important choice I ever made in my life, even though I didn't know it 
then.

Between college and work, I didn't have a lot of free time, and, being
new, didn't know anybody to start off with.  I did date occasionally,
but only out of necessity.  There was too much to do right here and 
now to find a bunch of new friends.  So, I basically got adopted by my
neighbors.

They were a youngish couple, Mary was 28 and Will was 35, just 
building up a new computer publishing business, and were starting to 
become financially comfortable (middle class).  She had some money 
from an aunt someplace and they used it to buy and build their home on 
the beach.  It was far nicer than the glorified shack I lived in.  Oh 
yeah, the most important bit, they had two kids, Brenda and Vicky, 
aged 9 and 7 respectively.

Mary was a plumping middle-aged mom who looked like she was great a 
few years ago, but had let herself go a bit after the kids came 
along.  Red hair, green eyes, nice features, generous curves, but a 
bit too heavy for my tastes.  I found out later she'd put on the 
weight after having to take some hormone pills for a while.  It was 
to my delight and constant frustration to see her slim back down over 
the next two years, regaining her wonderful figure.

Will was seven years older than Mary, and they'd gotten married 
shortly after she graduated from high school.  He's a fit and trim 
5'11" with sandy hair and hazel eyes and also looks good.

Their kids were wonderful - precocious, energetic, playful and smart.
They took after their parents.  Just more so, as I found out later.

Enough introduction.  Let me tell you about the first step on this
road I find myself on ... >

**********************************************************************

It was three days after moving into the beachhouse, late afternoon,
and I was sitting on the back porch soaking up some sun, enjoying a
nice cool glass of lemonade (the beer was still warm and I was
thirsty).  Lying back on the lounger, eyes mostly closed, half asleep,
zonked from moving, work, and school, I was rather startled to hear a 
voice coming from not far in front of me.

"Can I have some lemonade too, please?"

I opened my eyes to see this skinny little nine year old girl in a 
bikini sitting on the railing of my balcony.  Being the suave, 
debonair world traveller that I am, I immediately grasped the 
situation and came out with some witty comments.  Yeah, right.  I was 
brain-fogged.

I looked at her and said  "Who are you?"

"I'm Brenda."

"Oh."

After looking at each other for a few seconds, hoping my mind would
start working, she spoke again.

"You're new here.  I'm your next door neighbour.  Hi.  I'm thirsty.
Could I have some lemonade please?"

It started to percolate through that this wasn't some sort of weird
dream.  I was awake, and there was a little kid in front of me.  Like
I said, brain-fogged.

"Uh, you live next door?  Where's your folks?"

"Dad's working, and my mom and sister are at the beach.  They won't be
back for a while yet.  I can't get in the house 'cause mom has the
keys, and I'm thirsty."

"Oh.  Right.  Lemonade.  Okay."

Well, like I said, I wasn't thinking too clearly, so I got up and went
into the kitchen to get her a glass.  It was more of a surprise when I
turned around and found that she's followed me into the house.  I
gave her the glass and ushered her back outside.

"You know, your folks wouldn't like it if they knew you were walking 
into strange people's houses."

She looked at me real hard for a second.  I felt like a bug under a
microscope.

"Why?"

I was finally waking up.  I still couldn't come up with any kind of a
reply to this.

"'Cause you might take advantage of me?"

"Uh, well ..."  More great conversation.  This 9 year old had me 
flummoxed.

"You wouldn't.  You aren't the kinda guy who'd hurt kids like me.  Mom
said so."

"Really?  And how does your mom know that?"

She just sipped her drink and smiled at me a bit.  She didn't answer
my question, just asked me another one of hers.  This was getting 
strange.

"Well, would you ever hurt me?"

Thinking carefully for a moment, I chose my words for a change.

"No, I guess your Mom is right.  I don't hurt people, especially
children."

"Good.  Mom said I could invite you for lunch tomorrow.  What's your
name?"

"Richard.  Lunch?"

"Rich or Richard?"

"Richard."  

"Lunch tomorrow.  If you're not busy."

Tomorrow was Saturday - no work, no school.  I'd planned on either
unpacking everything or vegging out on the porch all day.  Guess which
it would have been.  She was eyeing me, waiting for an answer.

"Uh, I think I'd better hear that from your Mom before I say yes."

"Good!  You'll come.  Can I use your bathroom?  I need to go pee."

"I guess.  It's right beside the kitchen."  She was off into the house
before I stood up.  By the time I got to the door, she was in the 
bathroom and had closed the door.  Shaking my head, I sat back down to 
wait.  Ten minutes later I was getting a little worried, and was just 
about to get up and check on my 'guest' when someone called for my 
attention.  A lady in her late twenties and a little girl were walking 
up the path to my place.

"Hello.  Have you seen Brenda?  She said she'd be here."

Oh shit.  "You must be her Mom."

"Yes.  So she has been here."

"Hi Mom!"  Brenda came out onto the porch, re-tying her bikini bottom.
It was an embarrassing scene.  I knew nothing had happened, but the 
implication that something might have been going on was there.  I was
blushing.

"Hi dear."

Now for the really embarrassing part.  She came up behind me and gave 
me a big hug around the neck and a kiss on the cheek.

"Look what I found!  Can I keep him?"

"Of course you may, if he doesn't object.  But you'd better let go for 
now, you're embarrassing the poor gentleman.  Besides, you need to 
introduce us."

"Okay.  Mom, this is Richard.  Richard, this is Mary, my Mom, and 
Vicky, my sister."

Hello's were exchanged.  Mine were a bit strangled because she hadn't
let go of my neck.

"So, is he coming for lunch tomorrow?"  Mary was speaking to Brenda, 
over my head, as though I weren't there.

"I think so.  I think he's a bit shy though.  He says he needs your 
okay first."

"Tell him I said it's fine.  Make sure he dresses properly, Grandma 
will be there.  See you in a while.  Bye Richard."

She and the younger one, the seven year old, walked on up the path to
their place, leaving Brenda alone with me.  Now, as far as I know, 
this isn't normally what you'd expect from a mother or her daughter.  
It certainly wasn't where I grew up, and I doubted it was normal even 
here in California.

"Erg, could you let go, please?  It's a little hard to breathe."

She let go and sat back up on the porch railing.

"So it's okay now.  You're coming for lunch tomorrow.  Mom says you
hafta dress nice, so wear long pants, good shoes, and a nice shirt.  
No jeans.  Come over at eleven.  See ya!"

She jumped and ran, not waiting for any kind of answer.  Not that I 
had one, or could thing of any questions or objections either.  This 
is what the term 'railroaded' was invented to describe.  They'd hit 
me when I wasn't ready, kept me off balance, and had me where they 
wanted me before I knew what was happening.  This I figured out 
later.  At the time, I was just too stunned.

Guess where I ended up for lunch the next day.

**********************************************************************

< That was the start of it.  I don't remember much about that lunch,
except for two things.  Brenda treated me like her date, leading me by
the hand for introductions and a tour of the place, sitting beside me
during lunch, and walking me home afterwards.  Somehow they also 
talked me into having dinner there the following Saturday. >

< For the next few years, things went a little smoother.  I guess 
Brenda and her mom had a talk or something, or maybe she realized how 
much she was embarrassing me, because she was rarely as forward as she 
was those first two days.  I was a frequent visitor over at their 
place, either for lunch, dinner, cards, or just to socialize, 
sometimes a half-dozen times a month. >

< Both kids were frequent visitors at my place as well, popping over 
whenever they saw my back door open.  I learned to close it whenever I
was going in for a shower or was changing, because they'd walk right
in without knocking.  It scared the hell out of me the first time I
walked out of the bathroom wearing nothing but a small towel and saw 
two faces grinning and staring at me over the back of the couch. >

< When I talked to Mary about it, nervous as hell and blushing, of 
course, her answer was, to say the least, not what I expected. >

< "Richard, it's your house, so you make the rules.  You can kick
them out if you like, or tell them not to come over, but I will not
tell them how to behave over there.  That's up to you.  As long as you 
never hurt them, I'll be okay with whatever happens.  They both like 
you a lot and they both trust you, as do we." >

< Talk about ambiguous and open-ended. >

< Sometimes, when they couldn't get a sitter, Mary and Will would 
leave the girls in my care overnight.  This happened regularly, 
usually once or twice a month, starting that fall.  I'll tell you 
about the first couple of times.  It'll show you how they were slowly 
wearing down my resistance, or scruples, or morals, or something.  
Anyway ... >

**********************************************************************

The first time I babysat for the two girls was about three months
after I moved into the beachhouse.  It was November, the weather was 
unusually chilly with lots of wind, and my place was full of cold 
drafts.  Like I said before, the place is an old shack.

I guess it's about time I described these two 'little' girls for you,
before I carry on.  It'll help you understand a bit better.  Both 
girls were young, still kids, showing no female development 
whatsoever.  They were skinny, with long legs, long arms, long necks, 
nice tans, and both showed the potential for true beauty later in 
life.  Their eyes were a deep green, just like their mothers'.

Vicky (Victoria) is the younger of the pair by almost exactly two 
years.  Her birthday is at the end of March, her sister's is at the 
beginning.  She was then seven years old, about 4'8" tall (really tall
for her age, probably end up around 6').  Her hair was long, halfway 
down her back, naturally wavy, and a rich, deep brown color.  This was 
the lady of the pair, usually prim and proper, dressed nicely, rarely 
dirty or dishevelled.  Behind the outer shell, though, was a daring 
and mischievous mind, always looking for something new or interesting.

Brenda was the same height as her sister, despite the two years head
start, and would soon be passed.  She was nine, and had the most 
gorgeous head of strawberry blonde hair I've ever seen.  It was cut
short, barely shoulder length, and was just as wavy as her sister's.
This one was the tomboy.  Almost nothing stopped her from doing 
whatever she wanted whenever she wanted to.  The main difference 
between her and her sister was that she didn't hide any of her daring 
or impish curiosity behind a mask.  It was all in the open.  She had 
both a temper and an extreme stubborn streak.  Get her mad at you for 
something and she'd stay mad for a week.

Did I mention before that they were both highly intelligent, 
precocious, daring, fearless, and had a set of morals that were mostly 
alien to mine?  More on that later - for now, back to babysitting.

I wasn't too nervous about this because they were at my place a lot
anyway.  Since that first day, I had always treated both of them like
small adults, talking with them rather than at them, never ignoring
them, and always listening and being fair.  It showed, because they
also treated me fairly, as an adult and an equal.  They were still
kids, though, and respected my knowledge and authority.  Usually.

Mary dropped them off at three, giving me some emergency numbers and
last minute instructions on bedtimes.  Being Saturday, these were
flexible.  They expected to be back the following afternoon.  The 
girls had their backpacks, nighties, a change of clothes each, and 
some toys, games, and books to keep them amused.  Oh, if you're 
wondering, this wasn't a paid thing.  It was a favour for friends.

We watched a little TV, played a little, Brenda wrestled with me on
the couch (I lost), then had dinner.  Corn on the cob, 'burgers, and
salad made a good meal, I thought.  Jello for the girls for dessert.
Later in the evening, after some TV, they wanted me to read them some 
more out of their latest book.  It was something they'd started me on 
early.  About once a week, we'd sit together on the couch and I would 
read them a chapter or two.  They thought it was great, and I didn't 
mind.  It was fun having them around for company.  And besides, it was 
expanding my mind and my vocabulary.

Now, if I haven't mentioned it before (yeah, right, a dozen times 
already), these girls were intelligent and precocious.  Books, to 
them, meant one thing - great stories and tales of adventure, magic, 
and mayhem.  You're thinking sleeping beauty, little red riding hood, 
beauty and the beast.  Not for these two.  Lord of the Rings, Beowulf, 
The Iliad, Drangonriders, The Malloreon, Discworld, this was the kids' 
reading material.  Their favorite authors were (and still are) 
Aspirin, Hawke, and Pratchett.  At that age, I hadn't even started 
reading Enid Blyton.

I let them stay up a little later than their normal, then sent them
to bed.  They were supposed to sleep in my spare bedroom.  That lasted
until five minutes after I got to bed.

"It's cold."  "I'm scared!"  "I'm lonely."  "I miss Mom and Dad."
"Can we sleep with you?"  "Mom and Dad let us."  "This house makes
funny noises."  "Why is it so dark in here?"

You get the idea.  I didn't think their parents would really 
appreciate me sleeping with the two girls.  Call it a bit of 
prudishness on my part, but even if nothing happened, and nothing 
would, just the thought of sleeping with them made me nervous.  I sent 
them back to their own bed.  About a half-hour later I was awake 
again, a thump in the hall bringing me to full alert status.  
Burglars?  Nah, had to be the girls.  I pulled on my sweats and went 
to find out.

Vicky was sitting in the hall, a blanket wrapped around her, leaning 
against the wall.  "I'm scared."

"Where's your sister?"

"Downstairs"

"All right you, back to bed."

"I can't sleep in there.  It's too scary."

I left her there and went to find her sister.  She was downstairs,
sitting in a chair, wrapped in a blanket, staring at the TV.  The
sound was turned off so I wouldn't hear it.

"Well?  Why aren't you in bed?"

"It's too cold and lonely.  Vicky won't stay in there, so I came down
here."

I knew what was happening, of course, and so did the girls.

"Brenda, what would your mother say if she found out you ended up in 
my bed?"

"Nothing.  She would be mad if she knew you made us sleep by ourselves 
when we're cold, lonely and scared, though."

Sighing, exasperated, knowing I'd already lost this one, I gave in.
She was probably right about her mother, too.  "All right, I give up.
You win."  She was running up the stairs before I finished talking.
I ended up with one girl curled up in either arm, covers pulled up to
our chins.  I'm really glad their mother makes them wear full nighties
to bed.  I left my sweat pants on.

Waking up with the two girls in my bed was an adventure in 
embarrassment.  They were still in my arms, Vicky facing me with her 
head on my chest, one hand on my stomach, with my arm around her waist 
and my hand resting on her hip.  Brenda was facing away from me, butt 
pushed into my thigh, with my other arm wrapped around her and that 
hand being held by her on her chest.  I could feel one of her nipples 
pressing into my palm.

They were both still asleep, so I tried to slither out of there.  All
this did was make things worse.  When I tried to move my hand off 
Brenda's chest, she grabbed it tighter, with both hands, and pulled me 
back.  I moved my hand off Vicky's hip and onto her waist.  This made 
her wiggle around, and she ended up with one leg over top of mine and 
her crotch pressing into my hip.  All I could do was lie back and try 
to sleep.  These warm bodies did feel nice, though, even being kids.

I did doze off again, and woke up when the girls started squirming.
"Just getting comfy" was the only muttered response I got when I asked
if they were awake.  Yeah, getting comfy with my legs, arms, chest and
stomach.  Hands and legs everywhere before they settled down to sleep
again.  I was quickly getting used to this, though, and again nodded
off.

When the two of them finally woke up for real, I received a peck on 
the cheek from each, a thank you, and a good morning.  The rest of the 
day was more normal.

A few days later, when I talked to Mary about what happened, her 
response was again a surprise.  Not as big as the last one, because I 
was starting to know her, but still a surprise.

"Yes, I know.  Did anything happen?  Did you hurt either of them?  
Were they unhappy?  No?  Then what's the problem?  Like I said before, 
it's your place.  You control what happens over there.  If you let 
them sleep with you, fine.  It was their choice too, remember."

Needless to say, next time I babysat, the two of them didn't even make
a pretense of going into the spare room.  They waltzed up the stairs 
and dropped their packs in my room, cool as anything.

**********************************************************************

< Somehow the years did slip by.  For birthdays and Christmas I'd give 
them things that would be special for them, rather than the usual
t-shirts or CD's or stuff like that.  I gave Vicky a signed copy of
Neuromancer for her tenth birthday.  She showed it off to everybody
for months.  For Brenda's eleventh, I gave her a framed print of
Michael Whelan's White Dragon.  It's been hanging in her room ever 
since.  Hey, I'd never heard of this stuff before, but it made the 
girls very happy. >

< I didn't neglect things on the home front, either.  I made regular
visits or calls home to talk with and gossip about family and friends.
The folks were fine, and my sisters were doing okay.  I tried hard to
keep in touch with Caitlin, my baby sis, because I was always the one
she'd turn to for help or comfort when I was home.  I did miss her. >

< By the time I was ready to graduate, my neighbours seemed more like
family to me than my own folks.  Once I had my degree, and finished 
some post-grad courses I wanted to take, it would be time to move on 
in my life - start a career, get a social life again, find a good 
woman, etcetera etcetera.  Maybe it was my vague ramblings on doing 
these things that made her strike earlier than she'd planned, suddenly 
realizing that I wouldn't be there forever.  She hasn't told me the 
full truth yet, and may never tell me. >

< She started in on me just after finals were finished ... >

**********************************************************************

I got back from work early on a Friday, putting in extra time now that
my school workload was slowing down.  It was now late April, so
the weather was turning nice, and this had turned into a gorgeous 
sunny day.  I changed into shorts and a t-shirt, grabbed a soda, and 
went to the back porch to stretch out and relax a bit.

Brenda was already there, sitting in a lounger, knees tucked under her
chin, arms wrapped around her calves.  She was staring out over the
ocean.  I could tell she'd been crying.

"What's the matter?"  

"Nothin'"

"Riiiiiight.  I'll be sitting here when you're ready to talk."  I'd 
seen this too often to try and push her.  Let her come to me if and 
when she was ready to unburden herself.  If she didn't want to talk to 
me, she wouldn't be here.  It did take a while.  I was working on my 
second cola before she spoke up.

"Richard, when you're finished school, you're gonna move away, aren't 
you?"

All right, what gives?  It's not the usual school/sister/boyfriend
problem that I'm used to.  At least, not the kind I was used to when
dealing with my sister.

"Probably.  I'll be starting a new job somewhere, maybe in another 
city.  Don't worry, I won't forget you.  You're like family to me."

She sat there for a while longer, staring at the sea.

"No, I didn't think you'd understand."

Before I could respond, she got up, walked over, and kissed me - a 
full French kiss right on the lips.  Now THAT got my attention.  She 
kissed good for a kid.  Hell, that was a good kiss from anyone.  
Without another word, she walked off the porch and over to her place.

I watched her go, staring at her, too surprised to say anything.

I guess I should describe her again, both for your sake and mine.  
That kiss was a sort-of revelation for me, making me take a good 
look.  She was no longer a little girl at thirteen years of age.  Now 
she was a young lady, with many of her womanly charms developing.  
There was a definite figure there now, with nice breasts, slim waist, 
noticeable hips, nicely rounded ass, tapering thighs, and legs that 
went on into next week.  Her hair was still that rich strawberry 
blonde, a little darker now at the start of spring, and her eyes were 
the same luminous green, large and expressive.  The rest had developed 
from little-girl to young-woman, including a wide, full-lipped, 
expressive mouth.  I now knew from first-hand experience how soft and 
tender those lips were, too.

She wasn't a kid anymore.  She was a beautiful young lady.  I hadn't 
paid attention to the changes, even when babysitting.  I'd gotten so 
used to having them sleep with me when they were over, I never noticed 
the extra padding on the chest, the graceful curves, the rounding of 
her bottom.  Not even when my hand was holding her breast, as I then 
remembered from the previous week.  They still slept the same way when 
with me, Vicky in one arm, facing me, with my arm wrapped around her 
and my hand on her hip, and Brenda facing away from me, holding my 
hand to her chest.

Am I a prime idiot, or what.  Is there any other male out there who
wouldn't have noticed holding on to a beautifully shaped breast on a
very pretty thirteen year old?  

Thinking about it, Vicky wasn't a little kid either.  She was two 
years behind Brenda in age, but not nearly that far behind in 
development.  A bikini now had something to hide, or show off if you
will.  Her breasts were thickening pads behind her nipples, waist 
becoming defined, baby fat disappearing, hips widening, bottom 
starting to round out.  She was now about 5'3", while her sister was 
5'2".

I wasn't going to be sleeping with them while babysitting anymore, I
decided.   That decision turned out to be academic anyway.



She was back again the next morning, around ten.  No hello, no knock,
just suddenly there on the porch, staring out over the ocean.  Now, I 
know I'm not the greatest conversationalist in the world, but usually
when you say 'hello' you get some sort of response.  Not that day.  
Time to wait it out again.  I carried on, doing a little housework, 
some light reading, and writing up notes for work.

I made lunch for two, and we ate it in silence on the porch.

In the afternoon, Vicky came over for a while.  She was her usual
cheerful self despite Brenda's mood.  I took her into the kitchen and
asked what was wrong with her sister.  Her answer?  "You, silly!"
When I pressed her on this, wanting to get some real answers, she just
shut up or played dumb.

Vicky went home for dinner, but Brenda stayed on the porch.  I made
dinner for two, and we ate that in silence as well.

Time to ask her mom for help.  I found Mary in her kitchen, cleaning
up after their dinner.  Giving a hand, I asked what was wrong with her 
daughter.

"Brenda?  Nothing is wrong with her at all.  It's her boyfriend that 
has the problem."

"Boyfriend?"  That was news to me.  I didn't know she had a boyfriend.
Neither the girls nor their parents had mentioned anything about a 
boyfriend.

"Yes.  She's been seeing him for a while, but he seems totally 
uninterested.  It's very frustrating for her.  She's got something up 
her sleeve, though, so I'd be careful around her for a while."

She had a boyfriend.  Brenda had a boyfriend.  One that I didn't know
about.  Someone stupid enough not to be interested in her.  Why did
that news get me so, well, mad and jealous?

There was no sign of her at my place.  I imagined her going to see her
boyfriend.  It took me a long time to get to sleep that night,
wondering about Brenda and her boyfriend, and what they did together.


Sunday morning she was there again, sitting in the back.  This time
Brenda was wearing a Bikini and sunning herself.  I thought it was
better than her just being wrapped up in a ball like the last couple
of days.  Communication lines were still down, even when I asked if 
she wanted to talk about her boyfriend.  It was starting to worry me.
Believe it or not, I did care a lot about this young lady.  It hurt me
seeing her like that, especially since it seemed she was taking out 
her social problems on me.

Being ignored was starting to get to me too, even though I tried not 
to show it.

I carried on with my chores and work, occasionally going out to sit
with her for a few minutes.  After my revelations the other day about
her growing up, it was impossible to ignore her in that bikini, 
especially when she was on her stomach with that ass of hers exposed 
to view (guess what my favorite bit of female anatomy is).  Each time 
I came back in, I had to adjust my cock into a more comfortable 
position.  It's bloody awful when someone you've basically regarded as 
asexual (I don't fancy kids as sexual, personally) suddenly turns into 
a cock-hardening piece of jailbait without you noticing.  She IS 
supposed to be like a sister or a cousin or something, right?

Lunch for two was again silent.

Later in the afternoon, it started clouding over and getting chilly.
She showed no sign of moving, and it was obvious that she was getting
cold.  Well, I'm the one that's supposed to know better, so I brought
her inside, wrapped her in a quilt, sat her on the couch, and made her
some cocoa.  No verbal response, but I did get a smile.  That was
something I hadn't seen for days and it made me feel a lot better.

Vicky came over after supper (I cooked for two again, if you hadn't 
guessed) hoping for a reading session.  Sure, why not.

I fetched drinks - soda's for the girls and beer for me - picked up 
their book, and relaxed into my recliner.  Readings generally lasted a 
half hour to an hour, depending on moods and the storyline.  Two 
minutes into things, Brenda got off the couch and crawled up into my 
lap, quilt and all.  The only two words I got from her for three days 
were "I'm cold".

Well, I wasn't very successful at not getting erect with that girl's
bottom in my lap and her breasts resting on my chest.  There's no way
she could miss it, since it was running along her ass-crack, but she
didn't move, say anything, or even blink.  I could feel her nipples 
through her bikini and my shirt.  She certainly didn't feel cold.  Her 
head was resting, quite comfortably I might add, on my left shoulder 
just below my jaw line.  Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy the feel of 
her body, it was just my scruples getting in the way.  This was still 
a thirteen year old woman-child in my lap, despite what my body and my 
lewd imagination were saying.  Somehow my emotions were also 
conspiring against me.  Her little sigh of contentment left me flushed 
with a warm all-over glow.

After the reading was over, the two of them headed home.  One thing 
she left me with, something which really confused me, was a big, warm, 
wet, kiss, just as she was getting up to go.  Speechless, I watched 
that bikini-clad bottom of hers walk out the door and down the path.  
Emotions and feelings I didn't know I had came out.  Sadness at seeing 
her leave, loneliness when she disappeared, and some jealousy and 
anger over her boyfriend.  I thought that if I ever met that jackass, 
I'd straighten him out.  Damned idiot, ignoring a girl - no, a woman, 
like Brenda.  Dipstick didn't know a good thing when he saw it.

The other thing she left me with was a raging hard-on, the one that
she'd been sitting on for the last hour.  I wonder if she had any idea 
how bad off she left me.


Monday I had no classes and no work, so I did shopping, laundry, 
housework, yard maintenance, studying, and some design work.  She
showed up at four, curling up on the couch under the quilt, staring
out the window.  It was a change - she was in the house.  It was still 
chilly out there.  Dinner for two and an evening of TV.  She went home 
at eight.

Tuesday I had classes and an afternoon of work, returning home after
seven.  She was on the porch, shivering.  I asked if she'd eaten, and
she shook her head no.  I carried her inside, wrapped her up, gave her
some cocoa, cooked her dinner (I'd already eaten), then asked what the
hell she was doing.  No answer.  What a surprise.  I sent her home.

Wednesday I had work in the morning and early afternoon.  This time
I made sure I was home before four.  She showed up right on time 
again.  Same spot on the couch, dinner for two, some TV, and back home 
at eight.

Thursday she was there at four, once again punctual.  I went over to 
talk to Mary about her daughter, leaving Brenda alone.

"She's spent an entire week over at my place.  Haven't you noticed?"

"Of course we have.  It's just that she can work out her boyfriend 
problem a lot easier away from us, and your place is like her second 
home."

"How can she work it out?  She doesn't say anything!  All she does is
stare at the ocean or the sky or the TV!  I haven't had more than two
words out of her all week!  There must be something seriously wrong 
here."

"Richard, my daughter is hurting really bad right now.  She is trying
very hard to work out what is to her an extremely difficult situation.
I can do nothing to help her, nor can her father or her sister.  For 
the first time in her life she has a problem that only she can deal 
with."

"Surely to god there's something somebody can do?  Maybe go out and 
have an, er, friendly chat with this boyfriend?"

"No, that wouldn't work either.  We've talked things over here, and 
doing that would only make the situation worse.  I really wish there 
was something we could do."

"So you're just going to let her live at my place until she's solved 
her problem?"

"That's your choice.  It's your place, you make the rules.  If you 
don't think she should be there, you can always tell her to leave."

Talk about unsatisfactory.  No answers, no solution, no clues as to 
how to get into Brenda's head.  Frustrated and uneasy I went back 
home.

Dinner for two again.  If this went on, I'd need more provisions, and
I thought about getting a better variety of food.  Cooking for one 
leads to a rather uninteresting, almost monotonous set of staples.  
After some work and some TV, I sent her home at eight.

Friday, four o'clock, no Brenda.  Five o'clock, no Brenda.  Six 
o'clock, ditto.  I dropped in at their place to socialize for a 
while.  No Brenda.  I went home again, watched some TV, and went to 
bed.  I was lonely.

Saturday was a gorgeous, warm, sunny spring day.  For some reason, it 
was even more perfect when I noticed Brenda sunning herself out in the 
back again, in her bikini.  I called out a good morning, just to let 
her know I noticed.  After cooking lunch for two, I went out shopping, 
leaving the back door open for her, returning just before suppertime 
to find she'd come inside, curled up under the quilt and fallen 
asleep.  She looked so innocent, so vulnerable, and yes, so beautiful, 
it was hard to keep from picking her up just to hold her in my arms.  
I swore that if I ever met that jerk of a boyfriend, he would regret 
every moment of pain he caused this woman-child.

She woke up while I was cooking dinner.  After eating, as we sat to 
watch TV, she snuggled up to my side, still under the quilt.  I put my 
arm around her, feeling quite protective that evening.  She felt good, 
even though I was *very* careful about where my hand was.  That bikini 
left a lot of bare skin.  When I went to bed, I was still muttering 
half-formed threats against that boyfriend of hers.

Sunday, same routine, except that after dinner Vicky came over for a
reading session.  I then realized I hadn't seen her all week.  I guess
Brenda was just too depressing to be around.  Funny that I seemed to 
be happier with her there, even with her not saying anything.  Yes, 
she curled up in my lap again, gave me a big sloppy kiss, and left me 
with another aching boner.  I was still happy.  Horny as hell, but 
happy.

She was over again Monday.

Tuesday I worked late, returning home at seven.  Once again, she was
out on the porch, shivering.  I called her a bloomin' idiot and a
numbskull and several other G-rated versions of the same thing, 
carried her inside, warmed her up, fed her, and told her that no 
stupid jackass of a boyfriend was worth going through this shit for.

Wednesday I told her I had a date Thursday and wouldn't be home until
late.  She just looked at me for a few seconds, then looked away.  It
was impossible for me to miss that brief stab of pain in her eyes.
Later, lying in bed, I tried to figure out why it hurt her to know I
was going out on a date, and why I felt so bad about it.

Thursday.  My date was okay, she was a nice lady I'd met in school, 
and we'd dated several times before.  She knew me fairly well, and 
commented that I seemed distracted all night.  I told her it was a 
problem at work that kept popping up in my mind, and I apologized for 
being such a drag.  There's no way I could tell her that I was worried 
about Brenda.

Friday.  No Brenda.  I went over to socialize for a while, and found 
out she was on a date with some guy from her school.  Not her 
boyfriend.  Okay, I can handle that, can't I?  Maybe she's trying to 
make her boyfriend jealous.

Saturday.  No Brenda.

Sunday.  No Brenda.  I asked Mary if she was getting over her 
boyfriend problem.

"I don't think so.  This is the third day in a row she's had a date, 
and each time she's been with a different guy.  I don't know what her 
boyfriend did, but she's apparently trying to make him jealous or get 
even with him for something.  I have tried to talk to her about it, 
but with no success."

"What the hell does she think she's doing?  Is this boyfriend of hers
worth it?"

"She thinks so.  I'm not so sure.  He's a nice enough guy, but in some
ways he is such an idiot.  I just hope he realizes what's happening 
before Brenda really gets hurt."

Vicky came over for a while later that afternoon, just to talk and get
away from home.  I asked her about her sister.

"She's mad at her boyfriend.  No, she didn't say why.  Her boyfriend?
I kinda like the guy.  Her dates?  Jerks, all of them.  Why?  I think
she's lookin' for trouble.  Mom thinks so too.  Dad's stayin' out of 
it, 'cause mom knows lots more about my sister's problem."

I don't know about Brenda's boyfriend, but she was certainly getting 
me upset.  And jealous.  And worried.

Monday she was there.  After dinner I tried to talk to her, to get her
to say something to me.  I talked, begged, pleaded, yelled, and 
shouted.  I wasted my breath.  Exasperated and drained, I sat on the 
couch with her to watch some TV.  She snuggled up to my side again and 
I put my arm around her.  The world was a good place again.

"Brenda, I'm working late again tomorrow night.  Please try not to be
a blithering idiot again by waiting here for me because I don't know
what time I'll be home."  No response.  We just watched the tube for a
while.

"Do you have a girlfriend?"

Huh?  What?  I was watching a show when she said something and totally
missed it.  "I'm sorry, I wasn't paying attention.  What did you say?"

"Do you have a girlfriend?"

Do I?  My mind ran through all the ladies I'd dated for the last year,
whether they ended up as bedmates or not.

"No, I don't have a girlfriend.  I have some ladyfriends that I go out
on dates with, but no steady.  Why do you ask?"

No answer.  I did get a kiss before she went home that night, though.
It left me stiff as a board, but what the hell.  It felt good.  Her
question left me wondering what the hell she was up to.

Tuesday I got home at eleven.  No sign that Brenda had been there.  
Good.

Wednesday, no Brenda.  I did get a call from home, one that meant some
changes were approaching.  My baby sister was coming out early to stay 
with me.  We had planned on her coming out in late August, but now she 
was going to be here in early may.  Less than two weeks.  Somehow 
she'd managed to finish high school early, and wanted to spend the 
summer here rather than at home.  So she'd be here a few months 
earlier than planned.  That would give her some time to get used to 
the city before going to college, since she'd already been accepted 
into the same U. I was attending.  Now, I know there's something more 
to this because of the way my sister was trying to sound so easy going 
and convincing.  It was simpler to shelve my suspicions for later than 
to worm it out of her over the 'phone.  I looked forward to seeing her 
again, even if it was because of some unvoiced problems.

Thursday.  No Brenda

Friday I went over to talk to Mary before school was out.

"Yes, she's been out on dates for the last two days.  Two more new 
boys.  I don't like either one of them."

"Vicky says that her dates have all been jerks."

"That could be.  I've only met a few of them, so couldn't comment on
them all, but those few I don't like very much."

"Why do you let her go out then?  She's going to get into trouble with
one of them eventually."

"Brenda is trying to sort out her problems with that boyfriend.  I 
think she's waiting for him to make her stop.  I don't know if that's 
going to work though, because she's playing dangerously.  If it keeps 
going like this, there will be trouble sooner rather than later."

"That's what I mean!  One of those kids won't take no for an answer.
I'm sure of it.  Doesn't that bother you?"

"Of course it does!  She'll be losing her virginity to some creep 
rather than to someone she loves!  Do you think I'm that stupid that I 
can't see what kind of dynamite she's playing with?  If that boyfriend 
of hers doesn't smarten up soon, I'll get Will to use a baseball bat 
on him!  Maybe then he'll understand what he's doing to my daughter!"

"That's something I've been thinking of doing myself for a week 
already.  I just wish I knew who he was."

"That would only make things worse, and you know it.  She is the only
one who can really solve this problem."

"When she gets home, please send her over.  I'm going to try and talk
some sense into that thick skull of hers, even if she won't say a 
damned word to me."

She showed up at four.  We had dinner, then we cuddled in front of the
TV.  After a few caresses, I tried to talk to her.

"Why are you going out with all these jerks?"  No answer.  "All you
are going to do is get yourself into trouble.  Nobody is worth the
problems you could cause yourself."  No response.  "Please, Brenda,
don't do this to yourself.  Think of your family."  Nothing.  
"Please.  You're hurting your mother, your father, your sister."  She 
just sat there with her eyes on the tube.  "All right.  For my sake 
then.  I just couldn't stand the thought of you being hurt by one of 
those guys."

After talking a bit longer, still being totally ignored, I wound down.
It took a while but she did say something.

"All right."

Huh?  An answer?  A positive one yet?

"You mean you won't go out with those creeps anymore?"

"I won't go out on any more dates with those guys."

"What made you change your mind?"

No answer.  No more answers for the rest of the evening.  As she left,
I kissed her for a change.  She smiled.  I still couldn't figure out
what I said to change her mind about those creeps she was going out 
with.  It was something to puzzle over.

Saturday it rained.  She and Vicky were both over for most of the 
day.  They both sat on the couch, reading, watching some TV, and 
staring out the window.  At least Vicky would still talk to me, so we 
jawed about her school, the kids she knew, my work and school, her 
parents, and my family.  I cooked them lunch, then supper.  We had 
cocoa and popcorn in front of the TV later, and Brenda sat in my lap 
until they went home.  One thing about having her over regularly, my 
beer consumption was way down.

Sunday was similar to Saturday, except they both went home for
dinner.  It was lonely, cooking for myself again.

**********************************************************************

< So far, so normal.  Things were getting odd, but nothing truly
bizarre or weird was happening.  Brenda was having a lot of trouble
dealing with her boyfriend problem, and was dealing with it in a way I 
didn't understand, but I could handle it.  I thought I could handle 
it. >

**********************************************************************


<<End of chapter 1>>

Next chapter - End of her conquest, a decision, their first evening

(Well, do you think Richard will ever wise up?  You and I both
know that he's as dense as a fencepost.  Maybe he'll realize it too,
before it's too late.  Not much sex so far - well, none actually - but 
this is a rather long story.  There's more than enough later, and some 
plot twists you wouldn't expect.)

Author's note:

Enid Blyton is a well-known author of many dozen mystery books for
pre-teen and early teen children.  The other authors and books 
mentioned are real.


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 2/9
From: S THOMAS BUSH <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 14 Apr 1997 19:13:15 GMT
--------

Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 2 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - End of her conquest, a decision, our first evening

**********************************************************************

< Here's where the results of their machinations finally showed up.
Something I never would have believed myself capable of years ago.  
Something I still have trouble believing happened to me.  Something 
that I actively participated in.  I still don't know what was going on 
in my head at that time.  Not that it really matters much, now. >

**********************************************************************

Monday she was back again.  After dinner, when we were snuggling in 
front of the TV, I asked her a question that had been bothering me for 
a while.  I wasn't sure I wanted to know the answer.

"Brenda, why are you here at my place all the time?  Your mother says 
it's because you're working out a problem with your boyfriend.  
Shouldn't you be with him instead?"

She turned and looked at me with those big beautiful green eyes of 
hers.  After a minute of staring, she kissed me, then turned back to 
the TV.

I admit that I can be pretty dense.  Sometimes things that are
obvious to others just pass me by.  Hints may have to be less than
subtle.  I do, however, notice it when someone hits me with a baseball
bat.  That's what it felt like.  A nice 32 ouncer right across the
back of my skull.  I was the jerk, the bastard, that horse's behind.

Just to confirm my idiocy, I had to ask.

"I'm the boyfriend everyone's been talking about, aren't I?"

"Yes"

A simple answer, said so calmly and so easily she could have been
saying yes to having a soda.  Like the class A-1 jerk I am, I opened 
my mouth before thinking things through.

"Brenda, I can't be your boyfriend.  I'm far too old for you!"

Here I am, cuddled up with her under a quilt, alone with her in my 
place for the umpteenth time, watching TV, my arm around her, touching 
and occasionally kissing, suddenly realizing what was going on.  Like 
I said.  Dense.  She had an answer for that.  Or rather, she had a 
question.

"Do you love me?"

I opened my mouth, ready with another quick answer, then shut it 
before I made things worse.  Besides, the more I thought it through, 
the less sure I was of my answer.  I did love her, but in what way?  
I had no reply to give, so this time I kept silent.  The thing that 
surprised me was that we stayed snuggled together until it was time 
for her to go home.  She never moved away from me, and I never moved 
my arm or myself away from her.  We kissed again as she left.

Sleep only came to me early in the morning.  It was haunted by 
unremembered dreams.



Tuesday I re-arranged my work schedule so I could talk with Mary in 
the afternoon before Brenda got home from school.  It was a memorable
conversation.

"Mary, Brenda asked me a question yesterday and I don't know what kind
of an answer I can give her."

"Let me guess.  First, you figured out who her boyfriend is, right?"

"I - Uh, yes."

"Then she asked you the big question.  We talked about it last night."

"What am I supposed to say to her?"

"The truth, when you figure that out."

"Come off it.  She's almost young enough to be my daughter.  I can't 
be her boyfriend.  There's no way it could ever work out."

She *was* almost young enough to be my daughter.  If I'd been really 
unlucky my first time, I could have had a kid about twelve years old 
at that point.

"Let's try something different before you say something you'll regret.
I'll ask you a few questions, and for each honest answer I'll give you
something in return.  These will be difficult, so think before you
reply.  Nothing you say will be repeated to anyone, either."

It wasn't what I expected.  Then again, I had no idea how she'd react
in the first place.  But this?

"How old were you when you first had sex?"

Instant panic.  Then the automatic reflexes kicked in.  "Sixteen."

"Richard, I said honest answers.  That means the truth.  Otherwise 
leave."

Honest answers.  This was important.  Was I that transparent?

"You have to promise first that *nothing* I say here will ever be 
repeated."

"You have my solemn word."

"I was twelve.  Don't ask who with, because I'll never tell anyone 
that."  

(And before you dirty-minded pervs out there get any ideas, no it 
wasn't with either of my sisters or my mother or my aunt.)

"The first time is supposed to be a wonderful experience.  Did you
enjoy it?"

"No.  Neither one of us had the slightest idea of what to do, so it
was messy, painful for her, upsetting to me, and downright scary 
seeing all that blood.  We never ever tried that again, at least with 
each other."

"Yours was a little worse than average, but not by all that much.  My 
first time was when I was eleven.  He was eighteen, and we both loved 
every second of the event, even the brief pain when I lost my cherry."

"What sick bastard would fuck an eleven year old?"

She grabbed a beer from the fridge and put it in front of me.

"Here.  You'll need that to wash the taste of foot from your mouth.
It was Will, my husband."

I shut my mouth, then had a quick couple of slugs.  This was a shock.
It was difficult to picture Will as a pedophile.

"You see, I chose him to be my first because I wanted it to be 
special.  He was smart, good-looking, charming, and a really nice 
person.  It took a lot of convincing on my part to get him to 'take 
advantage' of me.  I don't thing he realized back then how things 
would turn out.  My mother never suspected a thing until I was 
seventeen and I picked him to be my date at the junior prom."

"So you're saying that you approve of anything that happens between 
us.  Is that it?"

"I'll answer that with another question.  How many of Brenda's 
classmates do you think are still virgins?"

"What's that got to do with anything!?"

"Answer the question."

"I have no idea.  All?  Most of them?"

"Just over half.  The others have already started in on their sex 
lives, whether as a one-time thing or on a regular basis.  By this 
time next year, you'd be lucky to find half a dozen virgins in that 
class.  What I'm saying is that Brenda has made it clear that she will 
be active soon, with or without you.  She chose you years ago, but 
you've been so thick-headed that you've never noticed.  Then you drop 
hints about moving away.  What do you think that's doing to her?"

Now I'm trying to picture it from her point of view, and I realize 
that I can't.  She's probably spent more time at my place than 
anywhere outside of home or school.  We've done things together that 
require a great deal of trust and faith in each other.  Hell, she's 
been occasionally sharing my bed.  I thought I knew her.  Trust, yes.  
Faith, yes.  Love?

"Mary, what is it she's looking for from me?  I need to know."

"You have to ask her that.  Once you start asking the right questions,
she'll start talking to you again."

"How long have you been in on this conspiracy?"

"For half a year.  That's when she became serious about you.  Before
that, it was just an infatuation, and we ignored it.  Since then, 
Brenda, Will, and I have had quite a few arguments, but she has her 
mind made up.  If we say no, she's made it clear that her second 
choice is either the football team or the baseball team.  I *thought* 
she was joking, but she didn't smile or laugh when she said that.  
Brenda gave us a choice, and we would rather she have her chance with 
you than do something stupid in retaliation."

It took a few seconds for me to absorb that shock.

"Is there anything else I should know?"

"Only this.  I love my daughter, and I do not want to see her get 
hurt.  Make certain that you can live with your choices, whatever 
they are."


She was over at four, as usual.  I was getting good at this cooking
for two business, since I was getting so much practice.  The quality
of the food and the cooking had gone up considerably over the 
course of those two weeks.

After dinner, we cuddled again, adding in some more caressing and 
kissing, this time watching the sunset.

It was time for some honest answers, I hoped.

"Why did you choose me?"

She looked at me, looked back at the sunset, and sighed.

"You are a really nice guy.  You are handsome, intelligent, willing to
learn, and you can think.  For me, you've always been a person, not 
just another adult.  You treated me nice, paid attention to me, bought 
me things that were special just for me, and you said you'd never hurt 
me.  You never have.  Lots of times you could have taken advantage of 
me, teased me, sent me home for teasing you, or tattled when Vicky and 
I fought, but you never did.  I fell in love with you.  That's why I 
chose you."

All right, what was I supposed to say.  She just bared her soul, and 
I didn't know if it was within me to give her what she wanted.

"What are you looking for from me?"

"Love.  The real kind.  I think you love me, but I don't know for 
sure.  I guess it's 'cause you don't know either.  I'm waiting for you 
to figure that out."

I guess I asked the right question.  Could I handle the answer?  It
definitely needed a lot of thought.  One thing I did notice - over the 
past two weeks it had changed from her showing up and sometimes 
snuggling up to me to *us* cuddling, caressing, and kissing.  There 
had never been a full-time lady in my life (except the Aussie, but we 
both knew that would end) and sitting there, sharing time with Brenda, 
did feel awfully nice.  But did I love her like she was the love of my 
life?  Once again, I had no answer to give.



Wednesday, when we were cuddling, I asked one more question.

"Brenda, if I did leave, what would you do?"

I could feel the tension and shock roll through her body.

"Richard, if you left me, I would be heartbroken for a long time.
Eventually I would get over it, of course, and try to find someone
else.  It would never be the same as with you, but I would probably
find a man I could care for.  He wouldn't be as good for me as you 
are, but if that's what you decide, then I have no choice."

"I haven't decided yet.  I wanted to hear from you what might happen.
It helps to know you wouldn't do something really foolish."

Later that night, I tried to picture someone else sitting beside me
on the couch, someone besides Brenda.  Anyone else.  I went through
my batch of possible dates, the ladies in college, the ones I met 
overseas, even the girls from high school.  It wasn't difficult to 
picture sitting and cuddling with most of them, but it was impossible 
to imagine sitting there and getting the same feelings of togetherness 
and belonging.  Only one came close, and that was Nadine, the woman 
from Australia.  Of course, that may have been leftover lust.  She was 
still the best bedmate I'd ever had.

That didn't do much good.


Thursday at lunchtime I got some help making up my mind.  It was a 
question I asked of one of our customers.  We were treating them to 
lunch, and things had already moved from pleasantries through business 
and into general talk.  Jerry, the customer's head guy, was going 
through his fourth divorce.  I asked him if he'd ever found the 
perfect woman.  

"Once, a very long time ago, I did.  She was beautiful, intelligent,
cuddlesome, and a lot of fun to be with.  I was young and foolish, too 
full of myself.  There were lots of chicks around.  I took her for 
granted, took too long to pop the question, so she found someone 
else.  It was only after she left that I realized how much I loved 
her.  I've been looking for someone like her for the last thirty 
years.  If you have a chance like that, don't pass it up."

"How did you finally figure out that you loved her?"

"That's an easy question for me now.  The answer simply came too late
to help.  Just picture that special person in your mind, in a time and
place where you both were happy together.  Now imagine spending the
entire rest of your life without her.  If you can do that with a
steady heart, you're not in love.  If the thought makes you ill, then
you may be in love.  The worse you feel, the more likely you love the
lady.  I've never been in love since, but I keep looking, obviously 
without any luck."


Later that evening, when Brenda and I were cuddling, I tried out his
suggestion.  It was easy to imagine us sitting here watching the 
sunset, because that's what we were doing.  Pushing forward ten years, 
then twenty, I removed her from the picture.  I took out her form, 
her smile, her eyes and hair, her unique smell, that fantastic ass,
her voice and laugh, the arguments and teasing, her temper, all the
books and readings, our kisses and cuddles, watching her in the 
sunshine, seeing her sleeping, having her run all over the place, the 
way we slept together, her face when she unwrapped a special present, 
how she made me feel when we were together like that, everything.  
Just imagining it left such a big hole in my heart I started to cry.

Brenda waited for my to finish, not saying a word.  It was a quick
recovery, since I could still hold and cuddle her.  We kissed.

"Brenda, I love you.  For now and for always.  As long as you want me,
I'm yours."

"It's about damned time you figured that out!  I've been waiting a 
year already!  Now let's kiss for real!"

So much for my idyllic romantic scene.  I needed to adjust my imagined 
'love moments', modifying them to match the spirit and temperament, 
never mind the impatience, of a thirteen year old girl.

There is something to be said for enthusiasm.  Her kissing technique 
needed a little work, but she was good and would get better.  It was 
definitely a lot of fun, especially when she was squirming on my lap.  
I hoped I would never regret that choice.  She went home at eight, 
promising that the next day, being Friday, we'd start getting 
serious.  Talk about a suggestive statement!

**********************************************************************

<  Well?  How would you have fared against this lady?  Any better than
me?  Or am I the only weak-willed person on the planet, the only one 
who could have been captivated by this young vixen? >

< Something I always wondered about is what would have happened if she 
had been less adamant about capturing me, or if one of those other 
dates had gotten to her first.  Where would we each be now?  Would I 
have found someone to love like I love her?  Somehow I doubt it. >

< First, I'll tell you about the great time we had on Friday.  I'll
save Saturday and all the surprises for later. >

**********************************************************************

Friday was very ... memorable.

After my morning class and some early afternoon work, I dropped in to 
speak with Mary again.  That was before Brenda got off school.

"So, did she tell you?"

"She didn't have to.  She was lit up like a beacon and bouncing off 
the walls.  The only thing she needed to say was "he's finally mine!".  
You could be in for some rather, ah, interesting times."

"No kidding.  That's what I'm here to talk about.  You realize, of
course, now that I've said yes, what she's going to want?"

"Do we need to go through that again?  I already understand what you 
are going through, and how my daughter is feeling.  This is her 
choice.  Just be good to her.  It's all I ask."

Mary invited me to dinner Saturday, as a sort of celebration.



I decided to dress up for our first night.  Shiny black shoes, black
socks, pressed black dress pants, and a white dress shirt with cuffs 
and collar.  I ignored the cologne, since most of my previous dates 
preferred a natural smell if we were intending to become intimate.

Dinner was sort-of catered.  I went out of my way to get some really
good Chinese take-out.  It would reheat nicely in the oven or the
microwave.  There was already wine and beer in the 'fridge, so that
wasn't a problem, though I doubted she had done much, if any, drinking
before.  That was in addition to the usual assortment of sodas.

It took forever for four o'clock to show up.  Brenda didn't show until
five.  The wait was worth it.

She and her mom must have worked for hours to get her looking like 
that.  Her red-blonde hair was pulled back into a pair of braids, one 
falling behind either shoulder.  There were hints of makeup on her 
face, just enough to accent her eyes, cheeks and lips.  She didn't 
need any more.  On top she wore a beautiful soft white blouse with 
full sleeves and lacy neck and wrists.  You could just see hints of 
the lace bra underneath, through the fabric.  Below that was a navy 
blue miniskirt, just barely long enough to cover the tops of her 
stocking in front and back, and showing them off on the slit sides.  
Yes, she wore pale blue elastic-topped stockings.  Her shoes were the 
same navy blue as the dress.

This woman-child was a magnificent sight.  Her outfit showed off all 
her assets, including her long luscious legs, nice waist, petite 
breasts, and, my favorite, that tight, round backside.  If Brenda had 
dressed like that on any of her dates in the last couple of weeks, 
there's no way those guys would have left her alone.  When she came 
in, she did a slow turn, letting me get a good look at all sides of 
that beautiful creature.  

In spite of all the physical beauty, it was her eyes that drew me to
her.  They glowed, revealing an inner fire I couldn't resist.  For a 
time, little existed other than her, all else fading into nothingness.  
Her look of love, tinged with lust, re-ignited my passions, sweeping 
aside all doubts and questions.  The woman I loved was standing there, 
waiting for me, wanting me.

"...  like it?"  She had been speaking, but I hadn't heard any of it.

"You are so beautiful ..."  In two steps I was there, lifting her in 
an embrace so we could kiss.  I think I may have frightened her a 
little, since it took some time before her arms finally wove 
themselves around my neck.  It was the single most wonderful kiss I 
have ever experienced.  The magic of the moment was simply too 
powerful to ever be repeated in my lifetime.

That intense period of rapture slowly passed, leaving behind a legacy 
of happiness, caring, and love.  I came back to myself, regaining 
awareness of my surroundings.  She was returning my kiss with a hunger 
I have rarely seen, pulling herself into me with arms and legs, almost 
painfully crushing her lips to mine, our tongues dancing in and out in 
an unchoreographed web of desire.

Did I teach her to kiss like that?

I pulled back from her for a moment.  I needed to breathe.  It was 
either that or pass out.  Once again I could see into her eyes and 
was struck by the raw passion there, something I'd never seen in her 
before, something I hoped would be there forever.

"Wow!  Do you kiss all the girls like that?"

I chuckled.  "Only one."

"Yeah?  Who?"

"You."  I leaned in for another kiss, one less forceful, but with all 
the same love and desire I felt for this woman-child.  Her lips tasted 
of strawberries, I noticed.  

That was something new for both of us, and it was a bit scary.  I had 
no idea how much this person could affect me until then, and the 
result was frightening in it's intensity.  No person in my life had 
stirred up those emotions, whether lovers or family.  For her, 
everything was new, untasted and unknown.  I had to bring down the 
heat a little, or I really would have scared her.  It was tough 
reigning in my hormones.


We did eventually have dinner, curled up on the couch, watching the
sunset again.  Despite my romanticism, the wine was left in the 
fridge.  Beer did go nicely with chinese, though.  We shared two.

After dinner, she dragged me upstairs.  "I want to see this thing I've
been sitting on for all these months."  

She was serious.  As soon as we were in the room, she sat on the bed
and told me to strip.

"I've seen everything but what's in your shorts, and I wanna see that 
thing now too.  Come on, get moving."

"Impatient, aren't we."  I was just as impatient as she was, but was
also quite a bit more experienced.  A little anticipation goes a long
way, and can be quite a turn-on.  It only took me about two minutes
to undress to my boxers, but probably seemed more like twenty to 
Brenda.

"Here.  I'll let you unwrap your new toy."

My cock was already hard, tenting out the front of my shorts.  She 
came over, looking a little tentative, reaching out with one of her
small hands to touch the front of the bulge.  That first contact sent
shivers through me.  She traced the outline through the fabric, moving
it this way and that, getting an idea of the size and shape of it.
Hooking her fingers under the elastic on either hip, she pulled my
shorts down to my ankles in one motion.  My cock sprang free and 
bounced off her chin on her way down.

It was intriguing, watching her examine me, eyes wide and glittering 
with excitement.

"Is this the first cock you've ever seen?"

"No, but it's the first one I've seen up close."

Interesting answer.  I made a mental note to talk with Mary about 
that.

It was my turn next.  I sat on the edge of the bed and drew her in
to me, pulling her head down for a kiss.  It was another 
pulse-pounding event, with her holding my cock with both hands.

Removing my lips from hers, I began to explore the rest of her with 
them, moving along her chin then down her throat.  It was easy to undo 
her blouse and slip it over her shoulders.  She released my shaft and 
dropped the blouse to the floor.  Grabbing each other, we dove into
another kiss, assaulting each other with lips and tongues.

She pulled back, breaking our kiss and embrace, leaving us both 
gasping for air.  She giggled, the first time I ever heard that sound 
from her.

"I think I need to be naked now, don't you?"

I sat there and watched as she removed her bra, dropping it on a 
chair.  She moved her blouse from the floor to that same chair.  It 
was soon followed by her shoes, skirt, stockings, and panties.

Now she was nude, standing there in front of me, blushing, but making
no move to cover up.  In fact, she began to show off a little, turning
and letting me get a good close look at every part of her.  As much as
I had seen with her in a bikini, this was much better.  Her breasts
were small but perfectly shaped, topped by quarter-sized dark pink
aureole and little-girl nipples that were now hard and pointed.  
Something I immediately noticed was that there were no tan lines.

Looking lower, in front and behind, I saw no tan lines anywhere - and
no hair.  She must have seen the surprise on my face.

"We've got a very private backyard.  Mom lets us skinny-dip in the 
pool and get an all-over tan when nobody else is around.  It's fun, 
and a bit exciting.  We do it all the time."

"No hair, either."  I was stating the obvious.

"Well, I don't have much anyway, and it's easier to shave it all than
try and keep it trimmed for gymnastics.  Besides, it makes me feel -
*nasty*."

"I like it.  May I?"

I reached out my hands for her breasts, and she moved into them, 
allowing me to touch, hold, fondle, and caress those tight little 
tanned half-orbs.  Stepping in closer, she pulled my head down towards 
her chest, keeping her hands on my shoulders for support.  How could I 
resist such an invitation?  At first, I simply let my head rest 
between her mounds, getting used to the feel of being so close to her, 
still using my hands to gently massage those fleshy pillows, gently 
teasing and rubbing her nipples with my fingers.  It was with care and 
tenderness, using lips and tongue, that I began to nibble and lick my 
way around the outsides of her breasts.  They were warm, oh-so-soft 
and silky, tasting slightly salty from sweat.

My hands moved behind her, one caressing her shoulders, neck, and 
upper back, the other moving lower to touch and caress the backs of 
her legs and that wonderfully tight, round, firm ass.  It felt even 
better than it looked.

Those gentle ministrations were having an effect on her.  I could feel 
her body's tension and hear her occasional slight, almost whining, 
sigh of pleasure.  Using both hands, I began a gentle caress of her 
entire lower body, starting from her lower back, over her ass and down 
the back of her legs, then up her thighs, over her hips to her waist, 
across the front of her stomach, then down over her mound and the 
fronts of her legs.  When one hand touched her inner thigh, she 
spread her legs to allow me access to her crotch.  That, I denied 
myself, for the moment.  It was simply too much fun exploring the rest 
of her beautiful body.

My mouth was not idle during that time.  I licked and nibbled each
orb in turn, slowly inching closer to her nipples, until my tongue was
circling just out of reach of her buds.  When I opened my mouth and
sucked half her tit into my mouth, she shuddered and groaned, pressing 
herself closer to me, spreading her knees, and starting a slow rocking 
motion with her hips.  She was getting wound up in a hurry.

I continued to lick and suck on her nipples, pulling them into my 
mouth and flicking them with the tip of my tongue, nibbling at them
with my lips, sometimes grazing them lightly with my teeth.  My hands
continuously caressed her body, coming close to but never quite 
touching her pussy.  Her breathing was becoming faster and heavier, 
those squeaking sighs more frequent.  There was now a damp heat 
radiating from her crotch, something I could feel whenever one of my 
hands wandered near.  The rocking of her hips was also getting faster 
and more insistent, almost beginning to demand attention.

It was difficult to maintain a slow pace, but it was for her 
pleasure, so I did.  If I pushed too fast or too hard, I might have 
scared her or hurt her, and that would have been unforgivable.  My own 
needs would have to wait, possibly for another day.  With the promise 
of a long future, it was a very small sacrifice.

Now she was completely lost within her own pre-orgasmic world.  All
thoughts and inhibitions had disappeared.  I was in control of her
body and her sensations, and I wanted to draw out her pleasure for
a while.  It would have been easy (and I was tempted) to jam my hand
into her crotch and drive her into an almost immediate orgasm, but 
that would be short-changing her after that long, delicious build-up.
No, taking my time and doing it right, despite the pounding of my
heart and the fire in my belly, was the best thing right then.

Moving both hands, I used one to hold, fondle, and squeeze those tight
ass muscles of hers, and the other I used to cup her pussy, all of it,
from her mound to her ass crack.  She immediately spread her legs 
wider and attempted to drive herself to orgasm by grinding her crotch 
into my palm.  I let my hand be moved along with her hips, denying her 
that release.  Her high-pitched sigh/whines were now interspersed with 
the odd whimper and moan of frustration.  She wanted to cum bad, and I 
wasn't letting her.

It was easy to let my hand ride with her motions, leaving just enough
resistance to stimulate her, but not nearly enough to get her off.
Slowly she gave up on thrusting, settling in to a slight rocking of
her hips.  Her whimpers and moans changed to sighs of pleasure when I
increased the pressure of both hands, one pushing from behind on her
ass, the other pushing up from below and in front against her pussy.
She was completely soaked between her legs, pumping out an amazing
amount of liquid for such a young girl.  It was easy to lubricate one 
finger and let it settle in between her lower lips, sinking it deep to 
lie full-length against her inner recesses.  Her rocking motion 
increased in intensity, becoming harder and faster, but only moved 
a few inches back and forth.

I let her get herself off, rocking and swiveling her hips, changing 
position and angle to press her most sensitive spots against me.  I 
helped by grinding my palm into her mound to stimulate her clit, and 
by crooking my finger and driving the tip into her hole.

She came with a gasp and a shudder, her entire body tensing and 
stopping all motion.  I responded by attacking her with hands and 
mouth.  I had never stopped licking and nibbling her nipples, but 
I went back to a hard sucking, tonguing, and nipping of them.  My 
hands were driving fast, replacing her now absent motion with their 
own, pushing her, rubbing her clit, her slot, and the first inch of 
her vagina.  With that strong, flexible, well-conditioned gymnast's 
body of hers, she could handle a long, drawn-out climax, and I gave it 
to her.  I kept her there for a good minute or so, only slowing and 
stopping when she ran out of air.  I'm not sure how many peaks she 
had, but each one was punctuated by another loud gasp and a firmer 
pull on my head with her arms.

To prevent her from collapsing on the floor, I stood and picked her 
up.  Laying her out on the bed, I crawled on beside her, pulling her 
to me in a tight embrace.  Shudders were still running through her 
from that long, intense set of orgasms.  I pulled a blanket over us 
both, then kissed her, lightly, before settling down for some rest.  
She needed it.


I guess I drifted off for a bit there, because I woke up to a 
wonderful sensation on my cock.  When I looked, Brenda was curled up 
between my legs, one hand slowly stroking my shaft, while she licked 
the underside with her tongue.  Her eyes flickered up to meet mine for
a second, acknowledging the fact that I was awake.

"I think I like my new toy.  In sex ed they always call it a penis.
What do you call it?"

"Well, when I think about it, I call it my cock."

"Sometimes the other girls call it funny names, ones I don't 
recognize.  Can you tell me all of them?"

"<chuckle>  Brenda, even I don't know all the euphemisms people have 
for a cock.  There's hundreds of them.  The one's you'll usually hear 
are cock, prick, dick, penis, shaft, rod, dirk, dagger, love tool, 
willie, baby-maker, spunk-jet, rocket - ah hell, I can't remember any 
more right now."

"Do you like what I'm doing to you?"

She was giving me a nice, leisurely hand job with a lot of tongue
action thrown in.  It was a fairly skillful effort too.  Somehow I
didn't think this was her first time - she was doing too good a job.

"Yes, this feels really nice.  How many other boys have you done this
to?"

"None.  This is my first time.  I've never touched 
a ... cock ... before."

"How come you're so good at it, then?"

"Well, if you promise not to tell anyone, I'll let you know."

I promised.

"I've been watchin' mom and dad for years.  They do all kindsa stuff.
This is one of dad's favorites.  Of course, mom usually does this, 
too."

She moved forward a bit and ... engulfed ... my cock.  That's the only
way I can describe it.  The feeling was incredible as her mouth closed
over onto two-thirds of my shaft.  I guess she wanted to get used to
the taste or the feel or something, because all she did for the next
few minutes was do a bit of sucking and lick around on different
parts of the shaft and head.  She pulled off and let go with an almost
audible pop, and resumed her slow stroking.

"That doesn't taste too bad.  Not like some of the girls said.  It's
kinda musky and salty, but not gross.  What's that stuff?"

I opened my eyes again.  She was staring at a drop of pre-cum sitting
on the head of my cock.

"That's a bit of pre-cum.  Didn't they teach you about that in your
sex ed class?"

"N-no.  It's not pee, is it?"

"No, it's not.  I can't pee when I'm excited like this.  The plumbing
inside gets turned off.  They don't teach you much, do they."

"All they teach is about penises and vaginas and wombs and testicles
and ovaries and eggs and sperm and periods and making babies - and
lots and lots about funny diseases people can get.  They don't say 
anything about fucking or kissing or climaxing or any of the good 
stuff.  We gotta figure that out on our own."

"True.  But that's all part of the fun of growing up.  The older you
get, the more you know, the more fun you have."

"Yeah, but I wanna have fun now, not wait until I'm old.  Heck, mom
started a long time before me, and Vicky ..."

"Vicky?"

"Nah.  She hasn't done anything with guys yet.  She's still a virgin
too."

So there's secrets for Vicky too.  Something else to ask Mary about.

"It's time to play with my new toy.  Now, how does mom do this ..."

She got up on her knees and leaned over my cock.  Using her tongue, 
she lapped up the few drops of pre-cum, rolling them around in her 
mouth before swallowing.  With one motion she was again taking over 
half my cock in her mouth.  This time, she started a slow bobbing 
motion, sliding up and down my shaft.  The conversation had distracted 
me from what was happening, but suddenly I could feel myself edging a 
little closer to that ultimate peak.

I could tell she was practicing, getting used to the feel of my cock
in her mouth, as well as its taste and smell.  Her tongue explored 
every part it could reach, including trying to insinuate itself into 
the hole in the tip of my cock.  I've had better blow jobs, but not 
for several years.  The girl was incredible, instinctively doing all 
the right things.  I guess watching a live show every once in a while 
helps further an education more than I would have thought.  I knew if 
she kept it up, she'd find out first-hand what semen tasted like.

Brenda started trying something new.  She pulled back a bit, tipped up 
her head, and slowly sank down into my groin.  I could feel the back 
of her mouth, then some spasms as her choke reflex kicked in.  Moving
back a bit, then forward again, she sank a little farther in, pushing
my cock deeper into her mouth.  She pulled back a bit again, catching
her breath, then tilted her head a bit farther and pushed down again.
That time I could feel the head of my cock pass through into her 
throat.  I could see the concentration in her face - her eyes were 
closed tight and her brow was drawn down.  After pulling back for some 
more air, she pushed in again, sinking down until her nose was buried 
in my curly hairs.  She'd done it.  I could feel my cock being 
massaged and compressed every time she swallowed, and could see the 
lump in her throat where the head of my cock sat.  She finally pulled 
right off, breathing hard, with a look of real satisfaction on her 
face.

All through it I could only lie there and stare at what she was 
doing, with my jaw hanging open and my eyes bugging out.  The last 
time I'd been swallowed like that was in Puson, and that girl was an 
expert.  I've had plenty of blow jobs since Puson, but never had 
anyone go right down on me.  Guys, if you've ever had this done to 
you, you know exactly how I felt.  It's impossible to describe, trying 
to combine the intense physical pleasure of a tight throat and warm 
mouth with the mental stimulation of knowing that your cock is sitting 
in the gullet of the woman in front of you, and she's doing it 
willingly.  

By the time she was done, I was gasping and shuddering, on the verge
of climax.  But, she was done, and left me hanging there, unaware of
how close I was to blowing my load.  She slithered up beside me and
gave me a big, warm, smack on the lips.

"Do you think you could be happy with me?  I mean, I am rather young,
and underdeveloped, and I don't know much, and ... and ..."

"Shhh, Brenda, It's okay.  C'mere."

I gave her a big hug and a kiss.

"Now listen.  I love you.  I love you for what you are, not what you
aren't.  You are beautiful, inside and out, with personality, charm,
wit, intelligence, and a killer bod.  Yes, you are young and 
inexperienced, but everyone is at one point.  I want to be with you
while you learn about life and love.  As you grow older, your beauty
will change from one form to another, but you will still be beautiful.
I'll be happy just to be with you, as long as you want me.  And I hope
that will be for a long, long time."

"Richard, I love you."

That next kiss lasted for some time.  It's amazing how much passion
can be expressed by two people holding each other tight in a lip-lock
that just won't quit.  It helps having a lot of skin contact, and 
having a partner who can't seem to lie still.  

We lay there for a while, sneaking little kisses from each other,
whispering about nothing in particular, holding and touching, just 
getting used to being intimate.  I watched the lust building up in
her eyes, until ...

"Richard, would you ..."

"Would I what?"

"Well, would you, like, do me?"

"Do what?"

"Well, like, sorta like I did you, sorta?"

"You mean, lick your pussy?"  I was guessing.

"Well, yeah.  I see dad do it to mom all the time and she looks like
she loves it but the girls at school say guys don't like it and they
won't do it 'cause it's gross but they like it too and say it's
wonderful but I don't know what it's like and I want to try it!  
Please?"

How she got all that out in one breath I'll never know.

"Well, let's see.  If you think about it, it is a little gross.  I 
mean, girls pee there, they have periods with all that blood and 
stuff, they get nasty infections, and they get really sweaty and wet 
in there."

"Oh."

"Of course, that's never bothered me.  Eating out a girl is probably
my third-favorite thing to do."

"Oh!"

I moved in for another kiss.  If she learned to kiss like this from
me, then she's a much better student than I am a teacher.  Of course,
I could be better than I give myself credit for, but I doubt it.


It took a while for me to work my way down to her pussy.  I lingered
on her neck for a bit, then paid more than lip service (Ha! I couldn't
resist!) to her breasts and nipples.  By the time I arrived, she was
breathing heavily and letting out the occasional sigh.  Shifting us
around, I moved in between her legs and lifted her calves over my
shoulders - my favorite position for a long, lingering session.

She was beautiful here too.  No tan lines - even her pussy lips were
tanned.  No hair or stubble anywhere.  Even as worked up as she was
with her legs spread like that, her lips stayed tightly closed.

Using both hands, I opened her up to view her hidden treasures.  That
let loose several trickles of her juice, which I immediately lapped 
up.  If her wiggling and groaning was any indication, she was 
definitely heated up and ready for more.

With the tip of my tongue I traced the junction of her inner thigh and
crotch, from bottom to top, up over her bare mound, then down the 
other side.  After a short pause to lap up some more dribbles, I 
circled back the other way, caught a few more drops, then went back 
again.  When I gave her one broad stroke from hole to hole to pick up 
a little stream, I had to hold her down so she wouldn't throw me off 
the bed with her hips.  She liked it.

I began to lick at and in her hole to clean up all those delicious
fluids collected there.  Inside, she was creamier than outside, and
her taste was a bit thicker and stronger.  It was hard to keep up with
her flow, especially since I couldn't sink my tongue in all the way.
Her hymen blocked off access about an inch deep.

So I settled into a rhythm for a while, waiting to see if she'd cum.
Lick deep inside several times to pick up her thick cream.  Run my 
tongue along the outside edge of her hole for a few seconds.  Trace a 
line along the edges of both outer and inner lips.  Dip down to tickle
her anus.  Return with two or three broad strokes from hole to hole.
Back inside for more juice and cream.

Sometimes it was hard to keep the sequence going, especially when
Brenda tried to buck me off the bed.  She hadn't cum yet, but her 
moans and unintelligible cries and shouts let me know she enjoyed my 
attentions.  I was pumping my tongue in and out of her hole when
there was a sudden arching and stiffening of her entire body, combined
with a gasp of indrawn breath.  I held her down tightly so she 
couldn't throw me off, and kept licking up her cream.  It changed from 
a trickle to a stream, letting me enjoy a real mouthful of her 
delicious juices.

She relaxed for an instant, exhaled in a big puff, then gasped and
arched her back again, seizing up in another peak.  Then a third.
Breathing hard and fast, she rolled and jerked her hips at me, wanting 
more.  So I began a slow tongue-tip massage of the skin around and on 
top of her tiny clit.  It wasn't much bigger than the end of her baby 
finger, but it was sensitive.

As soon as she felt the tip of my tongue near her sensitive little 
button she began to hump her groin, looking for that extra 
stimulation.  I lubricated two fingers in her juicy crack and slid 
them inside her, down to the first knuckle, and began a slow pump in 
and out of her vagina in time with my teasing tongue.  

It was time to speed things up a bit.  I wanted her completely
satiated before she was completely exhausted, and with all the moving
around she was doing, she'd be pooped in no time.  Pulling my fingers
away for a few seconds, I sent some broad strokes up from anus to the
top of her crack, both to collect up her spilling fluids and to 
lubricate her completely again.  Resuming my finger-fucking at a 
faster pace, I pursed my lips around her clit and began to suck hard, 
using my tongue to run all around and over top of her hood and 
sensitive tip.

That sent her over hard again, but this time I didn't let up, and she
stayed arched, occasionally gasping for air, her unseeing eyes staring 
at the ceiling, hands clutching the covers, thighs squeezing me tight,
and vagina spasming around my fingers.  Oh, this girl was fantastic!

I finally relented when she came down, collapsing in on herself and
gasping for air.  There was no way for me to know if she'd had one
huge climax, or a rapid succession of them.  All I could be sure of 
was that she'd really gotten off big time.  

Crawling up beside her again, I cradled her in my arms, letting her
enjoy the aftermath of her release.  When I kissed her, she responded
warmly, but quickly pulled back for some more deep breaths.  I pulled
the blankets over us and let her drift off to sleep.  I'd wake her 
later to let her dress and go home.  She told me earlier that her 
mother would be waiting up for her.


**********************************************************************

< At the time, I didn't try to analyze what I was doing or why I was
doing it.  All that mattered was that I loved this beautiful young 
lady, and she loved me. >

< In case you're wondering, my 'morals' had been greatly adjusted by
my experiences in the far east.  Since I wasn't a regular tourist, it 
went without saying that there were many places I got to that weren't, 
shall we say, perfectly acceptable to western ideals.  More than a few 
times I was propositioned by girls who were, by my poor estimate, no 
more than ten or eleven.  Fifteen seemed to be about the median age in 
those areas.  The only time I indulged, though, was in the classier 
massage parlors, where the management could guarantee me that the girl 
of choice was at least sixteen.  They may have mislead me once or 
twice, but I did try to stay somewhat close to my parent's values. >

< Those were the girls I learned massage from.  Somehow they had a
difficult time believing that someone could pay full price for a girl
to do *anything*, but then, after a brief session of lovemaking, want
to learn their arts.  Strange, but true.  They certainly enjoyed my
efforts, since theirs was the only body I had available to practice 
on.  I enjoyed myself immensely.  You wouldn't believe how many 
different techniques are employed in all the cities between Djakarta 
and Sapporo.  I tried to make certain the girl was *well* satisfied 
before I left, since I usually asked for her again if I returned to 
the same place.  It made for a much more enjoyable session the second 
time around.  Of course, massage wasn't the only thing I learned from 
them. >

< Oh, right, sorry for rambling on there, but those were times I 
remember with a great deal of fondness and joy. >

< Getting back to my story, it's about time I explained what happened
the next day, Saturday.  You see, I'd forgotten that my sister was 
about to move in with me, and I never mentioned it to anyone,
so ... >

**********************************************************************

<<End of chapter 2>>

Next chapter - A sister's surprise, spies, a crisis

(No way this would be their last time together.  It was just too much 
fun, at least for Brenda.  Besides, poor Richard was left with a woody 
and blue balls.  Would anyone else be joining in later, though?  And 
what about that slip of the tongue about Vicky?  Something to watch 
for.  Later on, things heat up considerably - literally!)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 3/9
From: S THOMAS BUSH <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 14 Apr 1997 19:12:58 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 3 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - A sister's surprise, spies, a crisis

**********************************************************************

< The first thing that happened on Saturday was that my sister arrived.
This didn't go unnoticed.  I managed to get her to talk about the
real reason she'd come out so early.  It was nothing like what I'd 
imagined... >

**********************************************************************

Somehow I managed to crawl out of bed around ten.  It had been a long 
and rather sleepless night, with dreams of Brenda haunting me during 
the wee hours of the morning.  I'd gotten her up around midnight and 
sent her home, with a great deal of protesting from her, and not much 
real conviction on my part.  I wasn't used to sending my bedmates home 
to mama. 

Since the doorbell was what woke me, I wrapped up in a robe and went 
downstairs to answer it.  There was my baby sister Caitlin.  It was
right about then that I remembered she was supposed to be here today.
I hadn't seen her in three years, and she'd changed.  Boy, had she 
changed!  The last time I saw her, she was fourteen and just beginning 
to blossom, tall and gangly, knock-kneed, uncoordinated and tripping 
over everything.  I knew then that she'd be a real beauty, because 
she'd inherited the best genes from both our mother and father.

Now, at seventeen, she'd grown from a promise to her full 
inheritance.  I could still recognize her as my sister, but could also 
see her as an absolute beauty.  Let's see, from the top.  Her hair was 
dark, almost black, long and lustrous, currently pinned back into a 
ponytail.  Her complexion was fair and lightly tanned, with natural 
highlights around her cheeks.  Her lips were a light red, her eyes 
dark brown, large and liquid.  She'd inherited some of our father's 
height and build, standing 5'7" in her bare feet, with a long, lean 
frame, and some of mother's assets, with generous ('C' cup) breasts, a 
narrow waist, curvy hips, a tightly packed and wonderfully bouncy 
backside, and long, slender legs.  I learned later that she kept her 
figure with lots of swimming and aerobics.  She was wearing a silk 
halter top, tied off just below her breasts (no bra), and long, tight 
jeans.

She smiled, and did a slow pirouette.

"Finished gawking yet, Rich?  Are you going to invite me in, or stare
at me all day?"

I closed my mouth, blinked a few times, took a deep breath, and
croaked.  After clearing my throat, I invited her in.  I also dragged
in her three suitcases, her trunk, and her duffel bag.  She was 
travelling light.

After we exchanged greetings and hugs, I got us a couple of sodas
and we sat on the couch to talk.

"Well?"  I asked, staring pointedly at her.  This had always worked 
before, since she could never match my gaze if she was holding 
a secret.  Eventually she would just blurt it out.  It worked this 
time, too.

"You didn't buy that story, did you?"

I never even bothered to answer.  She was squirming around, looking
everywhere but at me.  I just waited.  She eventually sighed, and
stared at the floor.

"I guess if I can't tell you, then I can't tell anybody.  Will you
promise to keep this a secret?"

"Sis, I promise that whatever you tell me will remain a secret to 
everyone living in this house."  I had to throw that in, because 
somehow I knew Brenda would worm all my secrets from me, eventually.  
I considered her part of 'my' house now.  Something I hadn't 
considered, up until then, was how in hell I was going to explain
Brenda to my sister.  I somehow doubted I could keep her a secret.

"Okay.  You remember Gary Porter?  He lived over on Dove street."

"Yeah, sort of.  Wasn't he the tall skinny guy with the thick 
glasses?"

"That's him.  You'd never recognize him now.  He wears contacts,
and he's on the football and rugby teams.  He's filled out a lot.
We were going steady for a while, then he made a big stink about me
not giving him head on one date, and we broke up."

She said that so matter-of-factly, without even blushing, that I
blushed.  My baby sis talking about sex like this?  She had changed.
I continued my stare.  She was far from finished, I could tell.

"Do you really need to know the story, Richard?  It's really quite
personal and rather embarrassing."

More embarrassing than talking about not giving head to her 
ex-boyfriend?
Now we were getting to the heart of the matter, in more ways than 
one.  
I nodded.

She sighed, and took a drink.  "You remembered Gary.  Do you remember 
his little sister, Angelique?"

I shrugged.  It's been quite a while, and anyone much younger than my 
sister would have been ignored by me.

"Well, she's fourteen now, and she's the reason I'm out here now.  
You see, while I was dating Gary, I also got to know his family, 
including his sister Angie.  She was ... well, I uh ... somehow 
we ...  Oh hell, I don't even know how to say it right.  I kept going 
out with Gary only because it let me get close to her.  I don't know 
how it happened, it just did.  It's never happened to me before!"

Talking about sex with a boy wasn't embarrassing.  Talking about 
something between her and a girl was.  This had to be something 
special.

"You mean, you, and Angelique, a fourteen year old girl, got sort of
intimate?"  

"Richard, we didn't get sort of intimate."  She sighed a bit, staring
at the floor, then continued.  "We were full-blown lovers.  For three 
months."  She turned and stared at me, finally blushing.  "There.  
It's out.  You know."

"So, how come you're here?"

"After Gary and I broke up, it was a lot harder for Angie and I to 
find the time and privacy we needed.  One night her father caught us,
bare-ass naked in bed and making out.  He went ballistic.  He 
threatened to call in the police, our parents, the church, the school,
social workers, everybody.  He wanted me put away for life for
'ruining' his daughter.  I guess his wife was a little more tolerant,
or maybe a little more afraid of the stink it would cause.  She and 
Angie talked him into keeping things quiet, for their sakes, not mine, 
as long as I left town.  That's why I'm here early."

It was some shock, finding out that my sister had fallen for another
girl.  And a younger one, at that.  I thought about it for a while.

"Well?  Aren't you going to yell at me too?  Don't you think I'm
a wicked and sinful girl, just like them?  Say something!"

"Sis, if you want to fall for another girl, who am I to say you're
wrong.  It's your choice to make, not mine.  I'm certainly not going
to yell or scream or anything like that.  Besides, regardless of who
you share your bed with, you'll always be my baby sis."

She stared at me for a second, with her mouth hanging open, then
jumped into my lap and gave me a big hug and a rather un-sisterly
kiss on the lips.  I hugged back, and my cock began to stir.  Sister
or not, this was a beautiful and well-built lady squirming around
on top of me, and that kiss was rather suggestive.  I hoped it was
just an accident.  The last thing I needed right now was more
complications in my life.

"Really?"

"Yes, really.  What, did you think I'd disown you or something?
You know me better than that."

"Thanks Rich.  I needed to hear that.  You're such a wonderful 
brother!  I'm glad you don't think I'm really weird and perverted.  
It's been hard enough on me as it is."

"Sis, you're here with me now.  You know I've always been there for
you, and I always will be.  Who else knows?"

"You, me, Angie, and her mother and father."

"Our folks don't know?  Gary?"

"Nope.  Nobody else.  I guess that's why it's been so hard.  I 
couldn't even talk to mother.  It's been ... a strain."

She was on the edge of tears, I could hear it in her voice and see it
in the tension on her face.  That was something we both wanted to
avoid right now.  Let her cry later, when she was more comfortable.

"Yeah," I chuckled.  "My poor poor overstressed sis.  So many 
troubles, so much heartache, nobody loves you.  Nobody in the world 
hurts like you do, nobody else ever ..."

"Stop that!  You're teasing!  Don't!"

"At least you still have a sense of humor!  Come on, I'll show you
around the place and let you get settled in.  You even get your own
bedroom, with no sharing!"

I knew that would get to her.  Caitlin and Suzanna shared a bedroom
up until I moved out permanently, five years ago.

"A room all my own!  Why, how generous!  I was expecting to have to 
share a room with you when I got here.  Thank you."

Well, turnabout is fair play.  She REALLY got me with that comment.
I was hard as a rock, and knew she could feel it underneath her.  
After all, she was straddling my lap.  She kissed me again, on the 
lips.  I resolutely kept my mouth shut.  Gorgeous babe or not, this 
was my sister, and I was now spoken for.  

Spoken for.  That was going to take some getting used to.

"C'mon, let's go have a look at this place.  First, I want to see *my*
room.  Besides, I think you're getting a little too excited."  She
wiggled her bottom a bit, getting me even more excited.

Standing and grabbing my hand, she dragged me up the stairs.  It 
wasn't until later I found out that there were two pairs of eyes 
watching us, through the french doors, ever since my sister arrived.

I gave Caitlin the royal tour.  She liked her room, especially the
queen sized bed and walk-in closet, but hated the curtains.  Besides
being ugly, they closed off that huge, deep-set window seat.  It was,
according to her, just right for curling up in and reading.  Not
my style, but okay.  She also loved my back porch with it's unimpeded
view out over the pacific ocean, and the fact that there was a real
beach only a few minutes walk away.

Afterwards, I told her to make herself at home because I needed to
have a shower and shave and stuff.  I'd cook lunch later.


**********************************************************************

< In order to give you the full story, I'm going to have to shift
perspectives a bit.  It's the only way I can think of to let you know 
what happened over at Brenda's that day.  Especially about Vicky. 
Since a lot of the important stuff happened to other people, I'll
act like a fly on the wall, filling you in on the important bits. >

< I think I'll keep my nose out of her from now on.  You should
just be reading the story, not my idiot interjections.  Sooo... >

**********************************************************************

"Mom, what am I going to wear!" yelled Brenda from upstairs in her 
bedroom.  

Mary, her mother, walking over to the bottom of the stairs, answered 
back "Why not wear your red blouse and skirt?  You know, the one we 
got for you last fall?  As far as I know it should still fit you, 
after all you're not developing THAT fast!"

"Aw, not that one, it makes me look like a ten year-old!"  Coming from
someone who's only just turned 13, that sounded a little silly.

"All right dear, I give up." said her mother. "You've gone through 
everything else in your wardrobe.  You can wear the blue blouse and 
skirt.  I don't know what all the fuss is about though, after all, 
Richard's been over for dinner lots of times, and you've never made a 
fuss like this before.  You'd think it was a special occasion or 
something."  She laughed a bit under her breath.

"Thanks Mom!  When's Richard gonna be here?"

"I haven't checked with him yet - I've been too busy helping you and 
getting everything else ready.  Besides, you kept me up 'til 2 AM with 
all your chatter last night!  I thought I deserved a chance to sleep 
in.  I guess I better go ask him now."


Vicky, Brenda's kid sister, stuck her head out of the kitchen door and 
whispered at her mother.  "Hey, wanna know a secret?  I think 
Richard's got a girlfriend."

Mary whispered back "No, he said he doesn't have a girlfriend.  What 
makes you think he does?"

"Yeah?  Well, look out the window.  There's a girl there that looks 
like she's moving in!  She's real pretty too!"

Mary just had to look.  Yes, there she was, standing beside a cab, and 
the driver was lugging some big trunk down to Richard's place.

"Come on, Vicky, let's go see what's going on.  Now!"

The two of them made it down to Richard's back porch just as Richard 
and Caitlin were settling down on the couch.  They hid themselves, but 
continued to watch.

They saw the two talking for a while, and it looked to be personal,
because Richard blushed, then Caitlin blushed.  They watched Caitlin
jump into Richard's lap and give him a kiss on the mouth, then talk
for a while longer.  Mary could hardly contain herself when she saw
that girl kiss Richard again, squirming around on his lap.  Then,
when she dragged Richard upstairs, him obviously aroused and wearing 
not much more than his robe, she became angry.

She cautioned Vicky to keep this a secret for now, because she wanted
to talk to Brenda and Richard before deciding what to do.

**********************************************************************

< Mary had the sense to know that things weren't always what they
seemed, and wanted to wait until she had a chance to talk to me before
deciding that I was a low-life scumbag.  That's when June came over
and talked to Caitlin and found out that yes, she was indeed moving
in with me.  At least she still wanted to hear it from me before 
siccing Will onto me with a baseball bat. >

< Yes, I know.  I promise this will be the last time.  I'll keep
my two bits to myself. >

**********************************************************************

When Richard got out of the shower, Caitlin looked at him a bit 
strangely.  She said there had been a visitor.

"She was an older lady, and said her name was Mary.  She saw my
suitcases and stuff and asked if I was moving in.  It was strange.  I 
said yes, and she got a rather hard look in her eyes.  She told me to 
make sure you brought me over for dinner tonight, and to be there at 
five."

"Oh, shit."  He sat down and put his head in his hands.  It finally
dawned on him how this would look to Mary and Brenda."

"Shit, shit, shit."  That didn't make him feel any better.

"All right, Richard, what the hell is going on here?  Since I'm gonna 
be living here, you'd better let me in on your dirty little secrets.  
Are you into older ladies or something?"  She said that last bit with 
a smile and a twinkle in her eyes.

"Caitlin, remember how I promised to keep your secret within this
house?"

"Yes."  She said this quite guardedly, losing that laughing mood she'd
had a few seconds ago.

"I need you to promise the same thing.  This is very important to 
me."

"Richard, I trusted you with my big secret.  I hope I can be trusted
with yours.  I promise not to tell anyone.  Whatever it is, it must be 
pretty wicked."

He told her.  It was one of the hardest things he'd ever done.

**********************************************************************

< I guess I should let you hear my sister's little blow-up.  It's 
something I'd much rather forget.  I really don't like it when my
sister is mad at me.  And boy was she mad. >

< All right, all right!  Quit throwing things!  I'm outta here! >

**********************************************************************

"YOU WHAT!!!"  Caitlin was pacing up and down in Richard's living 
room, glaring at him every once in a while to make certain he stayed 
properly abject.

"God almighty!  I can just see it now, people asking me about my 
brother -'oh, you mean the child molester'.  Sorry, you're right, it's 
statutory rape.  They'll still put you away for ten or twenty years 
for god sake!"

She continued her pacing, and her tirade started again.

"And what about the girl, this thirteen year old 'woman' that you've 
taken to bed with you.  Have you thought about what it's going to do 
to her for the rest of her life?  God Richard, I thought you at least 
had a few brain cells active when you're horny!"

After a few more minutes of this, she finally burned off enough steam 
to sit down again.

"Sis, please, listen.  I didn't seduce her, drag her off by the hair 
or hypnotize her or anything like that.  This girl knew exactly what 
she was doing.  At times, I felt like I was the virgin little boy 
being seduced by her!  In fact, that was probably her intention from 
the beginning."

"Look, I know what I did.  If it had been any other young girl, she 
would have been sent home right away with a swat on the backside.  I 
don't have a taste for children, regardless of how this looks.  Brenda 
is not an ordinary girl.  She is more mature than many of the college 
girls I've met.  As far as the consequences go, I have thought of 
them, both for me and for her."

"I'm not asking you to forgive me, or even to understand what we did.  
Please, just give me a little slack until you meet her.  That's all 
I'm asking.  Can you do that for your 'poor brain-dead brother'?"

Richard said that last line with such a sad, woebegone expression,
Caitlin couldn't suppress a small grin.  "All right, I won't turn you 
in to the cops right away.  But you better be on your best behaviour 
from now on.  No more funny stuff!  I'll be watching you like a hawk.  
Do you understand me, Richard?"

"I believe so.  But I'm not going to make any promises that I won't 
keep."

"God, you're totally incorrigible.  I don't know what I'm gonna do 
with you."  She gave out a long sigh.  "I guess it's time to get ready 
for this dinner.  You look terrible.  You need another shower and a 
proper shave, and you look like you need a nap, too.

"True, I didn't sleep well last night.  I kept dreaming about this
perfect little lady I'd met, one who dragged me off to school with her 
so she could display me to the class in show and tell."

Caitlin let out a small laugh as she pictured the scene.  "Okay 
Richard, I think I'll let you live, at least for now.  You really 
caught me by surprise with that one.  I thought I was the only one 
carrying around deep dark secrets.  Now for the important question - 
how should I dress for this dinner.  Formal?  Casual?  Beach?  
Slutty?  Or maybe you'd prefer Little Girl?"

"None of the above.  How about as 'My Grown-up Little Sister'?"

"I'm not sure I've got an outfit for that, but I'll try.  Now you go 
jump back in the shower before you make us both late!  I've still got 
to get some of these clothes sorted out."

**********************************************************************

< Mary was now unnecessarily setting the stage for some serious 
waterworks. >

< Ouch, that hurt!  I can tell, you're peeved.  I know when I'm
not wanted any more.  You'll miss me when I'm gone. >

**********************************************************************

When Mary walked back into her house, she tried to bring back some of 
the bright and cheerful mood she'd had only a few minutes ago.  It 
didn't do much good.  'I'm just going to have to give Brenda some 
warning, that's all.' Mary thought to herself.  'But not yet.  Let her 
have a few more hours of bliss first.  I just hope I'll be able to 
keep up a facade that long.'

Will noticed the change as soon as she walked into the kitchen.  
Walking up to her, he wrapped both his arms around her and pulled her 
into his chest.  "What's wrong, honey?"

"I'm not really sure."  There was a slight quaver in her voice that 
told him she was deep-down upset.  She was not telling him the full 
truth, that was obvious.  

It definitely had something to do with her short trip to Richard's, 
and very likely involved Brenda as well.  An ugly picture started to 
form in the back of his mind, and wouldn't go away.

"Come on dear, give me a hand please.  I'd like to get an early start 
on dinner."  She slid out of his arms and started puttering around the 
kitchen.  "I think this should be an interesting evening.  Oh, and 
before I forget, we'll need an extra place setting.  Richard will be 
bringing someone else with him."


Around 4:30, Mary knew she couldn't put off talking with Brenda any 
longer.  Her daughter had been breezing around the entire house, 
apparently floating around on her own little cloud.  Even the taunts 
of her younger sister, which normally would earn some smart comebacks, 
were ignored.  Asking Will to watch things in the kitchen, she went 
upstairs to her daughter's bedroom.

"Brenda?  Brenda darling, could I talk to you for a minute please?"

"Sure mom.  How do I look?"

This was the first time today Mary actually looked at Brenda wearing 
her blue outfit.  When her dad bought it for her, just after her 
last birthday, he said it was for her next 'special occasion'.   He 
was thinking she would wear it out to a party or some other function 
that young girls attached so much importance to.  When Brenda modeled 
the outfit for her parents and her sister that night, it certainly 
didn't look much like it did today.

The blouse and skirt were both blue, a muted, medium shade rather than 
something really dark or really flashy, but the fabric itself seemed 
to have a lustre coming from deep inside, as though there was a bright 
light shining through it from behind.  The blouse was made from a 
lighter material than the skirt, but both had the same color and 
sheen.  Neither had any visible print or pattern to them.

The blouse buttoned down the front, and was supposed to tuck into the 
skirt.  Brenda had done something to the bottom edge, though, because 
it ended right at the top of the skirt.  When she moved, little bits 
of her back, sides, and tummy peeked out between the blouse and the 
top of the skirt.  It didn't lay flat on top of her breasts.  It 
puffed over and around them, suggesting the content and shape of her 
breasts, but not fully revealing them.

A tiny red porcelain rose had been attached to the collar, just under 
the left side of her jaw.  A hint of puff was there on each of the 
short sleeves, rounding the shoulders and softening the arm line, 
making the blouse look far more feminine than it normally would have.

In addition, on the front of the blouse, the seams along the buttons 
and the button holes had somehow been 'scalloped', making sure that 
the two edges wouldn't lie flat together.  There would always be a few 
small peepholes for someone to look through.  Every once in a while, 
as she moved, you could see a tiny bit of the white lacy bra she was 
wearing underneath.

The skirt had also been subtly altered.  It was now sporting a short 
slit up the left thigh that definitely wasn't there before.  The 
bottom edge of the skirt fluttered and danced every time she moved, 
hinting that more could be revealed at any time.

On her legs Brenda was wearing pale blue stockings that disappeared up
under the skirt.  Through the new slit, though, you could occasionally 
see the top of one stocking and the tiny white bow there.  Her 
low-heel shoes were also pale blue, and her nails were done in a light 
pink.  Instead of the usual loose hair or pigtails, her hair had been 
pulled back and done up into some sort of complex french braid, 
intertwined with a bright blue ribbon.  Her ears sported tiny 
sparkling blue gemstone earrings.

"Vicky did my hair, " Brenda smiled a little mischievous grin, "in 
between her bratty spells."

Mary looked very closely at her daughter as Brenda turned and pranced 
in front of her.  This was the type of innocent beauty that women all 
over the world paid vast sums of money to try and achieve, and rarely 
succeeded.  The blue ribbon showed off her strawberry blonde hair to 
perfection, the muted blue of the blouse somehow brought out the 
colours of her pink-red lips and glowing green eyes, and the slit 
skirt and stockings formed to her legs and bottom perfectly, making 
them look far more sexy than if she were naked.

"Come on mom, how do I look!?"

"Well dear, you look absolutely devastating.  I pity any man or boy 
who sees you dressed like that.  You'd have them reduced to gibbering 
simpletons in seconds."

"D'you think Richard will like it too?"

Mary gave a bit of a sigh, and sat down on the edge of Brenda's bed.
"Please dear, come over here and sit down beside me.  That's what I 
came here to talk to you about.  You see, men don't always mean what 
they say when they're talking with a pretty girl.  Their hormones do 
strange things to their brains, sometimes making it impossible for 
them to think clearly or logically.  Yes, I know we talked about this 
last night, that you've finally gotten Richard, but he may not see 
that yet.  He may still see you as a child, rather than as a woman."

"No mom, Richard and I talked about this several times.  He does love
me."

"Dear, I'm not saying that isn't true.  All I'm trying to say is that 
you shouldn't look at him as yours quite yet.  There may be facets of 
himself or his life that he's never revealed to any of us."

Suddenly, Vicky stepped in from the doorway.  She'd been secretly 
listening in on the conversation.  "Wanna know a secret?  Richard's 
already got a girlfriend."  She tried to hide her grin behind her 
hand, really having fun with this.

Brenda suddenly became very quiet and very serious.  "Vicky, how do 
you know Richard has a girlfriend?"

Vicky, looking to her mother then back at Brenda, suddenly stopped 
grinning.  She saw that her sister and mother were very serious, not 
taking this as teasing or joking, and it no longer seemed funny.

"I saw her.  She got out of a cab with a whole lot of suitcases and 
stuff, and the driver carried the stuff down the walkway to Richard's 
house.  Then she went down there too.  Me and mom saw her and Richard 
kissing in his place."

Brenda's stomach was starting to tie itself into knots.  "Mom?"

"Yes dear, we did see them.  She is moving in over there, but no, I 
didn't find out anything about her.  I told her to make sure Richard 
brought her to dinner with him, so we should be able to find out 
what's going on real soon.  Okay?"

When she didn't get any response, Mary tried again.  "I said Okay?"

This time, she got a mumbled uh-huh and a little bit of head
nodding.  That would have to do.

"All right, it's getting close to dinner time.  You two wash up, then 
meet me in the living room to greet our guests.  Shoo!"  She ushered 
them out of the bedroom and down the hall to the bathroom.  Mary then 
turned and went downstairs to the kitchen to get a much-needed hug 
from her husband.

**********************************************************************

A while later, Richard and Caitlin were dressed and ready to go.
They both had opted for a simple look, rather than overdressing.

Richard wore a white patterned dress shirt, open at the neck, a pair 
of black dress pants, and black shoes.  This showed off his strong 
shoulders, broad chest, flat stomach and tight buns to perfection.

Caitlin had also decided to go with a simple black theme.  Black 
pumps, grey/black nylons, black panties and bra, and a 
mid-thigh-length black evening dress.  Silver earrings and a hint of 
makeup finished off the look.

Richard, taking a good long eyeful, finally realized just how grown 
up and good looking his baby sister was now.  Three extra years had 
done a lot for her.  Her breasts and hips had filled out a little, her 
stomach was a bit flatter, and her ass looked absolutely gorgeous.  
The dress was not tight, but followed all the curves nicely.  It 
showed off her firm, trim young body beautifully.  His cock also 
noticed, and he started getting hard again.

"Caitlin, you look absolutely gorgeous."

"Thanks.  You're not a bad hunk yourself, you know.  But you'd better 
watch that thing," glancing at the bulge in his crotch, "that's what's 
getting you into trouble, remember?"

Caitlin opened the door and started heading outside.  Looking at him 
over her shoulder, and giving him a little wink, she added "You know, 
if you weren't my big brother, I'd probably make a pass at you."

"Same goes for me, sis.  Now, lets go see what kind of trouble I'm 
in."

Just before they got to Mary and Will's front door, Caitlin whispered 
in Richard's ear.  "I'm getting a little scared, how about you?"

"Actually, Caitlin, I'm almost over that now.  Being scared stiff all 
day has sort of made me a little numb."

When Richard knocked on the door, Caitlin grabbed his arm and hung on 
to it for (her) moral support.

**********************************************************************

Up in her room, watching out her window, Vicky saw Richard and the 
same girl she'd seen earlier step out from his walkway and head toward 
their place.  Running down the stairs, she shouted out "Here he comes, 
and he's bringing that girl with him!"

"All right, everybody into the living room.  Lets greet our guests
properly."  Mary started ushering Will and Brenda out of the kitchen 
in the right direction.

When they heard the knock on the door, Will was right there to open 
it.  "Hello Richard.  Won't you two please come in?"

As Richard and Caitlin started to step in, Brenda couldn't help 
staring.  There was HER Richard, walking into HER house, with an 
absolutely gorgeous lady hanging onto his arm, less that 48 hours 
after promising himself to her forever.  After what her mother and 
sister told her just a few minutes ago, it was just a bit too much.  
The emotions that had been keeping her high since yesterday suddenly 
slammed her down.  With a long wail, she burst into tears and ran 
upstairs into her bedroom, slamming the door behind her.

This caught everyone by surprise.  Will started heading toward the 
stairs, but Mary's hand on his arm stopped him.

"No dear, leave her alone for a while.  Please."

Turning back to the door and giving Richard a hard look, Mary finally 
asked "Well, Richard?  Aren't you going to come in and introduce us to 
this lovely lady?"

Richard's eyes were glued to the top of the stairs where Brenda 
disappeared, and he only half-heard her question.  She noticed this, 
realizing that regardless of how things looked, he did care for her 
little girl.  

Mentally pulling himself back together, he stepped into the 
living room, Caitlin still hanging onto his arm, and closed the door.

"Caitlin, these are my neighbours, Mary Dawes, her husband Will, their 
younger daughter Vicky, and the one that disappeared upstairs is their 
older daughter Brenda.  Mary, Will, Vicky, this is my baby sister, 
Caitlin."

Everything in the room seemed to freeze for a few seconds.  Will 
simply stood there with a look of concern and confusion on his face, 
glancing back and forth between Richard, Caitlin and his wife.  Mary 
still hadn't told him what was going on.  He now had some very strong 
suspicions, but she had asked him to let her take the lead in this, so 
he didn't say anything.

Vicky's jaw hung open, and she couldn't stop staring at Caitlin.
Caitlin felt this and looked at Vicky, seeing a hint of lust in the
little girl's eyes.  She blushed, not really knowing why, and looked 
away.

Mary, when what Richard said sank in, felt a sudden release of the 
tension that had been gripping her for hours.  With a small sigh, her 
knees suddenly let go and she sat down on the couch.  'Whew' she 
thought.  'That explains a few things.  Glad I kept my mouth shut over 
there.'  Aloud, breaking the silence, "So, this is your baby sister?  
You never mentioned anything about her coming out for a visit."

"Actually," Richard replied, "it was a bit of a shock to me as well.  
I'd forgotten all about her call a couple of weeks ago, what with all 
that was going on around here, and she surprised me this morning."

"Yeah.  You should have seen the look on your face when you opened the 
door and saw me standing there.  I wish I had a picture of that!  It 
was priceless!  Actually, we'd planned on me coming out here in the 
fall to go to school, but I decided I'd rather spend the summer here 
on the beach than back home.  I think it'll be a lot more fun!"

Mary's mind was churning furiously, trying to sort out her thoughts, 
and figuring out what she should do to get things straightened out.  
She decided.

"Will, why don't you take Vicky and Caitlin into the kitchen and get 
them something to drink.  You can check on dinner while you're there.  
I'd like to chat with Richard for a few minutes."

Will looked questioningly at his wife.  "Ok, but what about ..." 
glancing up the stairs.

"I think Brenda should be left alone for a little while.  It'll be 
better this way."

With that, her husband ushered Vicky and Caitlin off toward the 
kitchen, making certain he closed the door behind him.  This gave his 
wife the privacy that she had hinted at needing for her chat.  He 
didn't know what was happening, but if Richard was in any way hurting 
his daughter, he'd rip the bastard apart with his bare hands.


Richard sat on the opposite end of the couch from Mary, and simply 
waited.  The reactions of Mary and Brenda had gotten him very 
confused.  When he'd seen the look of pain in Brenda's eyes just 
before she ran upstairs, it had surprised and deeply hurt him.

"Richard, I'd like to start by apologizing to you."

"Huh?"  Talk about a brilliant response.

"When I went over to your place to tell you when to come for dinner, 
I got hit with a rather nasty shock.  After what Brenda said happened 
yesterday, I suddenly find a beautiful young lady moving in with you.  
I jumped to the obvious conclusion that you'd lied to Brenda and had a 
girlfriend moving in.  I'm sorry."

Richard sat there for a few seconds, letting this soak in.  Mary 
didn't seem to be upset about what he and her daughter had done.  Even 
stranger, she was apologizing to him for doubting him.  It took a few 
seconds for this to register properly.

Clearing his throat before saying anything, Richard paused for a few 
more seconds to consider his words.  "I don't think there's much to 
apologize for.  Looking at it like that, I'm not sure I wouldn't have 
thought the same thing.  I didn't have any time to consider other 
people's reactions to my sister moving in, since it was such a 
surprise."

"Well anyway, Richard, that's what's wrong with Brenda.  She thinks 
you lied to her.  When we're finished our talk, I think you'd better 
go up and see her.  I think she needs you."

"One thing I do need to know is how you feel about my daughter."

"Actually, Mary, I love her."  That was it.  He'd managed to say it.

She actually smiled a bit!

"Okay, so how do you feel about what happened last night?"  She was 
not going to let him have time to think about it.  She wanted an 
honest answer, not a 'correct' one.

"I'm not sorry that it happened, if that's what you're asking.  It's 
the consequences that have been haunting my mind all day."

"Were you speaking the truth in everything you told her?"

"Every word.  I don't think I could lie to her even if I wanted to."

"Good.  No, I'm not upset about what happened.  We've discussed this
before.  As long as you don't hurt my daughter, my husband and I will
trust the two of you together."  With that, Mary gave Richard another 
little smile.  "She's really much more mature than you would believe 
for a person of her age.  Actually, I'm kind of happy with her 
choice.  She could have done much worse.  The age difference is a 
problem, but we can talk about that another time."

Richard sat there for a few more seconds, feeling a bit stunned, 
having a hard time absorbing all this.  Not only was Mary not mad at 
him, but she seemed to approve of what Brenda and he had done!  It was 
one thing for them to talk about it before the fact, but now, after 
what the two of them had done last night, it seemed very odd to hear 
Mary's acceptance.

"Mary, Brenda is only thirteen.  Don't you think that's just a little 
too young for making decisions like this?  And me, I'm almost twice 
her age!"  He could hardly believe that he was arguing against Mary 
letting Brenda and him continue on.  This had to be brought up again, 
though, for his own peace of mind.

"That's true, Richard, and it will be a problem for quite some time.  
As for Brenda choosing at thirteen, that's not all that young for our 
family.  Remember, I chose Will when I was eleven.  I haven't told you 
this yet, but my mother was married at fifteen, and my sister picked 
out her future husband when she was fourteen."

"I know exactly how Brenda feels, because all the women in my family, 
except Vicky, have been through the same thing.  I will not be the one 
to break her heart by standing in her way."

"What I do want to know now is exactly how you feel about all this, 
and whether or not you think you can handle it.  If you can't handle 
it, or you aren't willing to go through with this for the long term, 
now is the time to break it off, before things go too far.  I'll give 
you a couple of minutes to think it over."

With that, Mary got up and went into the kitchen.  Things were fairly 
quiet in there, with Will and Caitlin involved in polite conversation, 
and Vicky listening to them, watching the other girl intently.  They 
both became silent as she walked in.  Will looked at her 
questioningly, and she answered back with a slight shake of her head.

After helping herself to a glass of water, she did a quick check on 
dinner, more out of a need to do something with her hands than 
anything else.  Everything was doing fine.  Will and Caitlin resumed 
their conversation when it became apparent that Mary wasn't going to 
say anything, and wasn't really paying any attention to them.  After a 
very long couple of minutes, Mary went out to the living room and sat 
back down on the couch.

Richard waited for Mary to get comfortable before he started, speaking 
slowly and carefully.  "Mary, I said that I love Brenda.  I do.  I 
want to make her happy.  I will be hers for as long as she wants me.  
I don't know what kind of person this makes me, but I have fallen 
completely in love with your daughter."

"Good.  I'm glad you spoke from your heart, rather than trying to do 
the right thing.  You'd better go up and see her.  Right now she 
probably wishes she were dead, and maybe you too.  She needs you."

"Mary, before I go, I better warn you that I told my sister 
everything.  She's a little freaked right now, and I'm surprised that 
she actually came over."

"It sounds like your sister cares about you.  I'll talk with her as 
well."

Mary stood up and pulled Richard up after her.  Shooing him off toward 
the stairs, she told him that he'd better go upstairs and see to his 
lady.

Giving out a long sigh, really happy with the way her chat with 
Richard turned out, Mary mentally braced herself for her next talk, 
one that she knew she couldn't put off.  Stepping into the kitchen, 
receiving the same questioning glance from her husband, and giving him 
the same slight negative, she asked Caitlin to come into the living 
room for a couple of minutes.  Will gave his wife a short, very 
intense questioning look.  Mary stepped out into the living room, 
preceding Caitlin, without giving him any kind of reply.

Will turned to his youngest daughter, being the only other person left 
in the kitchen.  "Well Vicky?  Do you know anything about this, or are 
you just as much in the dark as I am?"  Vicky just sat there and 
shrugged her shoulders, afraid to tell him what she thought she knew.  
She just stared at her drink, fighting her feelings, and wondering why 
her thoughts kept returning to the memory of how Caitlin looked when 
she stood in the doorway.

Out in the living room, after sitting down on the couch, Caitlin 
looked around for her brother, and, not seeing him, asked Mary where 
he had gone.

"He's gone upstairs to talk with Brenda.  It will be quite a relief 
for her to learn that you're Richard's sister."  Caitlin looked at 
Mary, looking slightly confused.  "By the way, he also told me that 
he's talked with you about what he and Brenda did last night."

A few seconds later, Caitlin found her voice again, and asked in a 
very quiet voice "You know what happened, and you still let Richard go 
up to her?  In her bedroom?  Him, alone, with your daughter?"

"Yes.  Right now Brenda needs him.  I doubt anything would happen up
there anyway.  She prefers doing things on her own terms.  When Brenda
told me that she'd gotten Richard, I was quite surprised.  I simply 
wasn't expecting it to happen this soon.  I do know how Brenda feels 
though, I felt the same way the moment I first laid eyes on my future 
husband.  Of course, I was a lot younger - all of ten at the time.  
Will still doesn't know about all the things I did to make certain he 
would be mine."

"Are you telling me that you expect Richard and your daughter to 
continue this relationship?  I mean, they were having sex!"  
Caitlin was becoming more and more confused.

"If Brenda has anything to say about it, their relationship will 
continue and grow, with all that implies.  She's told me that she is 
completely in love with Richard, and Richard has told both her and me 
that he loves her."  She looked hard at Caitlin.  "If anything were to 
pull them apart, it would break Brenda's heart, and probably Richard's
as well.  I'm not about to let that happen.  I care too much about 
them both.  I'm not certain how you feel about Richard, but separating 
them would hurt them both terribly.  I truly hope that you can 
understand this, and at least wait for a while before doing anything 
rash."  

Caitlin took a few deep breaths to steady her nerves before replying.  
"This has been a bit of a shock to me, coming out here and finding 
that my brother is now involved with a thirteen year old girl.  I 
don't know what to think.  No, I'm not going to do anything drastic 
like calling the police.  I don't think I can approve of this the same 
way you seem to, but I won't stop it.  I just hope this doesn't end in 
disaster.  I've had enough of that already."

Mary, surprised at the strength of feeling she heard in that last 
sentence, decided not to follow up on it.  Maybe later.  "Okay, I'll 
accept that."  They both got up and headed for the kitchen.  "Now, I 
think I'd better put my husband out of his misery.  He's probably 
guessed what's going on, but he's agreed to let me handle things my 
way for now."

"You mean he doesn't know about this?  Oh my god."

"It'll be ok.  Just be quiet and let me handle things."  Her talk with 
Caitlin had gone far more smoothly and quickly than Mary had expected.  
Things were looking much better.

They both walked into the kitchen.  Vicky was sitting at the table 
sipping on her drink and Will was fiddling around with the food on the 
stove.  He turned around when they came in and looked at his wife.  
She looked a lot better now than she had a while ago - most of the 
tension was gone, and she had an almost smug look on her face.  
Apparently, things were working out according to her plans.  He just 
wished he knew what they were.

"So, is dinner ready yet, honey?"

"It's been ready for a few minutes.  Now all we need are enough people 
in the kitchen to make it worth sitting down to eat."

"Okay, thanks dear.  Vicky, do you think you could help Caitlin set 
the table and get dinner served up?  Your father and I need a few 
minutes alone.  Thanks dear, I knew you wouldn't mind.  Come on 
honey."  Mary turned and walked back into the living room without 
waiting for anybody else to say anything.  Will just looked at Vicky 
and Caitlin with a raised eyebrow and followed his wife out the door.


They sat on the couch facing each other, while Mary explained 
everything that had happened, and what she expected to happen.  Will 
sat quietly through the whole thing, not interrupting, not saying 
anything.  When she was done, she sat silently, waiting for his 
response.  It wasn't quite what she'd expected.

Will leaned over and gave her a kiss, then said "OK honey, I'll trust 
you on this.  I remember a bit of what you went through.  But if 
anything goes wrong, there'll be hell to pay."  He gave a bit of a
chuckle.  "So, she got to him already.  We seem to be a very 
passionate family, don't we?"

This last sentence was a little confusing to Mary.  It was a little
out of character for her husband.  She decided to ignore it for now.


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<< End of chapter 3>>

Next chapter - making up, torture, a two sister surprise, 
               a guilt trip, their second time

(Sounds like a good excuse for a nice, long session of making up.  But 
what's this with Vicky and Caitlin.  Is there something else 
going on we should know about?  Maybe some of that history Brenda had 
hinted at?  No sex again, but then, I write stories with real people 
in them, all for my own amusement.  If it wasn't for the story, I 
wouldn't bother, and you wouldn't get the good bits.  So there.  
Nyaaah.  There's lots of good bits coming though.)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 4/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 14:44:45 GMT
--------

Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 4 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - making up, torture, a two sister surprise, 
                  a guilt trip, their second time

**********************************************************************

Richard walked upstairs into Brenda's room and closed the door behind 
him.  He saw her lying on the bed, curled up on her side, facing the 
wall.  Her whole body was shaking with quiet sobs.

"Brenda?"  

There was no response.

Sitting on the edge of the bed, he reached over to caress her 
shoulder.  She pulled away a little the first time he touched her, but 
stayed still when he put his hand on her shoulder again.  All he heard 
was a very muffled "go away".

"Brenda, please listen to me.  If you still want me to go away when 
I'm finished, I will. I promise."

"Remember what I said the other night?  I told you that I loved you, 
and that I would be there for you as long as you wanted me.  I meant 
it then, and I mean it now.  I do love you.  I want to be with you and 
make you happy.  I never realized until then how much I do love you.  
When I saw you downstairs, the look you gave me, filled with all that 
pain, almost tore me apart.  Brenda, I am yours until you tell me you 
don't want me any more.  But it looks like it's going to take you a 
while before you really believe me."

"Your mother and I had a talk before I came up here, so I'm feeling a 
lot better about us, and so is she.  She told me what's wrong.  I'm 
sorry I hurt you, but I forgot that Caitlin was coming.  No, she isn't 
my girlfriend or lover or mistress or anything like that.  She's my 
sister.  Now, if you still want me to go away, I will."

He felt her sobbing slowly stop.  In a tiny little voice he heard her 
ask "Your sister?"

"Yes, my sister."

Brenda half-turned and looked at him, eyes cloudy with tears, face 
flushed, with streaks all down her cheeks.  That look of hurt was 
still in her eyes, but there was also a spark of hope.  "Is she really 
your sister?"

Staring deep into those big green eyes, Richard found it hard to 
speak.  He wanted to take her into his arms, to hug and cuddle her, to 
kiss away all the pain he saw.  But he knew that he had to be very 
gentle with her right now, and let her come to him.  "Yes, Tinkerbell, 
she really is.  Caitlin is my baby sister.  You are the only love I 
have."

Brenda then rolled over, climbed onto Richard's lap, wrapped her arms 
tightly around his neck, and started crying into his shoulder.  He 
knew that at that moment, she was definitely still a little girl.  
Richard just held her close, hugging her to him, whispering sweet 
soothing sounds into her ear.

A little while later, when the sobbing had stopped, he heard her quiet 
voice in his ear.  "Do you really love me?"

"Yes, Tinkerbell, I really and truly do love you with all my heart."

"Good, 'cause I love you too.  Don't you ever do this to me again."  
With that, she shifted around until she was looking into his eyes, 
then gave him the softest, most sensual kiss he'd ever had in his 
life.

A short eternity later, there was a knock at the door.  Mary stuck her 
head into the room and said that dinner was ready, so if they were 
both ok, they'd better get cleaned up and down to the kitchen.  She 
then closed the door, leaving the two of them alone again.

"Well, Tinkerbell," Richard whispered, breaking their kiss.  "Do you 
feel ok now?"

"Uh huh" was her only reply, as she gave him a short, intense kiss.

"Right," Richard said, trying to catch his breath.  "Lets go get 
cleaned up for dinner.  I think my sister wants to meet you."

Brenda got up to head for the bathroom, letting Richard have his first 
good look at her since he arrived.  "Whew.  Brenda, who did you get 
all dressed up for?"

She looked at him and smiled a bit.  "You, silly.  Do you like it?"  
She stood away from him and gave a little spin.

He couldn't help it.  He was getting hard just looking at her.  "Well, 
that's just about the hottest and sexiest outfit I've ever seen.  
I love it."

"Yeah, I see you do like it."  Brenda reached over and ran her hand 
down the front of his pants, following the outline of his hardening 
cock.  A smile teased at the corners of her mouth.  "At least, part of 
you does."

"Come on, you little tease, lets get cleaned up before things get out 
of hand.  Or in your case, before something gets into your hands."  
They both laughed a bit at that bad joke, and headed for the 
bathroom.


Downstairs in the kitchen dinner was being served up.  When Mary came 
down after checking in on Brenda and Richard, she said she wasn't sure 
how much longer they would be, so everyone might as well get started.  
She'd been right earlier, it had been an interesting evening.  There 
was no way she could have seen how much more interesting it would 
get.

A few minutes later, Richard and Brenda walked in.  Brenda's arms were
wrapped around Richard's chest, and his arm was around her shoulders.

"It looks like you're feeling a little better Brenda," Mary said, 
breaking the sudden silence.

"Yeah, mom.  I feel a lot better now.  Maybe even a little bit 
hungry."

Mary cleared her throat, then nodded toward Caitlin.

"Oh, sorry Sis.  Caitlin, this is my friend Brenda.  Brenda, this is 
my baby sister Caitlin."

"Hi Caitlin"

"Uh, hi, Brenda."  Caitlin hadn't taken her eyes off Brenda since she 
walked into the room.  She looked hot, devastatingly so, and very 
sensuous and tender.  The crying had reddened and moistened her lips, 
and given her eyes a luminous quality.  The outfit she was wearing 
enhanced her curves and bumps in all the right places.

Caitlin couldn't believe it.  Brenda was turning HER on!  She could 
feel her nipples hardening and her pussy getting moist.  She could 
finally see how her brother gotten into such a situation.  It would be 
hard to say no to anything that girl wanted.

Vicky watched Caitlin carefully, with a strange look in her eyes as 
she did.  Will was the only one who noticed, and he said nothing.  
Vicky felt someone watching her, turned, and looked straight into her 
father's eyes.  He winked, gave her a lazy smile, and turned away.  An 
almost predatory grin ran across the girl's face, quickly replaced by 
one of youthful innocence.

When dinner was finally done, Mary disappeared with Vicky for a few 
minutes to have a talk with her about Richard and Brenda.  When they 
got back, Vicky had a big grin on her face, and a very mischievous 
look in her eyes.  

After cleaning up, they spent the rest of the evening in the living 
room talking about unimportant matters.  Will brought out a big bottle 
of wine, a nice cool dry white that left a pleasant after taste, and 
everybody had some.  Even the two girls were treated to a glass.   
Almost everyone was on edge, feeling a little nervous about what was 
happening, but the wine helped them to relax a little.  Neither Brenda 
nor Vicky seemed to notice any of the tension.

Brenda spent the entire evening holding on to Richard, determined to 
'punish' him for what he'd put her through, however unintentionally.  
She was sitting in his lap, positioned so that she could rub his cock 
with her ass or thigh without anyone noticing.  Every time he shifted 
position to get some relief for his almost painful erection, Brenda 
wriggled around to 'get comfortable' and get a better position over 
his cock.  What made it worse for Richard, she was also making sneak 
attacks with her lips whenever he wasn't looking.  She seemed to be 
mainly targeting his ears and throat, but anything within reach was 
apparently fair game.  He didn't know if it was supposed to be heaven 
or hell, but he certainly wasn't going to complain!

Caitlin did see what Brenda was doing to her brother, and almost felt 
sorry for him.  She could just about feel the waves of 
pleasure/frustration surrounding him.  "Well," she thought, "it's his 
choice, so he'll just have to live with the consequences."  The 
problem was, watching them was getting her hotter and hotter.  Her 
panties were already soaked through, and her nipples were so hard they 
almost hurt.  Of course, a lot of that was Vicky's fault.

Vicky spent most of the evening playing around, joining in the 
conversation when it seemed interesting, and climbing onto various 
laps looking for hugs and kisses.  Her mother thought that was only 
natural, since her usual playmate, Brenda, had a new toy to play with 
and wasn't going to share with her sister.  It did seem a little funny 
though - as it got later, Vicky was climbing up into Caitlin's lap 
more and more often, and staying there for longer periods of time.  
She made a mental note to find out what that was all about later.

It took a while, but Caitlin finally figured out what was happening to 
her.  That little minx Vicky was doing to her exactly what Brenda was 
doing to Richard.  Every time Vicky climbed into Caitlin's lap, she 
would 'accidentally' slide a leg or a thigh against Caitlin's crotch, or 
her hand would touch Caitlin's nipple and caress her breast while 
seeming to just reach around for a hug.  The entire situation just 
seemed unreal to Caitlin, almost like a dream.

Mary went off to the kitchen to get herself some soda.  She'd had 
enough wine, and didn't want to get light-headed.  Will followed her, 
leaving the others alone for a few minutes.

Grabbing his wife, giving her a hug and a kiss, he whispered in her 
ear.  "Quite the pair of young lovers we've raised, aren't they?"

"Yes, they sure look like they're having f ... Huh?  Run that by me 
again?"

"Our kids are quite the pair of young lovers.  I think that's what I 
said."

"What are you talking about?  Brenda's in there with Richard, and 
unless you're referring to him as a son already, I haven't the 
slightest idea what you mean."

"I was talking about our daughters.  Brenda's going after Richard with 
a vengeance, and Vicky's got Caitlin so worked up she doesn't know if 
she's coming or going.  I thought you'd notice.  She's certainly not 
been hiding it much."

"What are you talking about?  Since when is Vicky interested in sex?
What the hell is she doing out there?"  Will's face went from happy to 
mildly puzzled, paused at a few other expressions, and finally settled 
on worried and upset.

"You mean Vicky's never told you?"

"Told me what?"  Mary was looking upset, her voice getting a little 
higher and more strident, but still trying to keep the volume down to 
a whisper.

"Better have a seat, Mary.  I think *we* will have a long talk with 
Vicky about this soon.  In the meantime, I'd better fill you in on a 
few details you've missed about our daughter's private life."

"I don't know how to put this, so I'll just be blunt.  Vicky is both 
sexually active and experienced.  At least with women."

Mary sat there and stared at her husband.  With the other surprises 
she'd had in the last two days, absorbing a bombshell like that was 
going to take some time.

"Vicky told me you knew all about what happened.  Apparently she lied
to me."

"You mean to tell me that my innocent little baby has already had 
sex?  Will, she's only eleven!  And I *know* she's still a virgin!  
How the hell could you let something like that go on and not even tell 
me about it!"

"Mary, I didn't just 'let it go on'.  I found out almost by accident,
sometime after the fact, a couple of months ago.  I found Vicky 
crying in her room, and she told me everything.  She said she'd 
already talked to you, and since Brenda walked in and heard the story 
too, she knew as well.  I thought it a bit odd that you hadn't said 
anything to me, but Vicky said she'd talked to you already.  She also 
said that she was trying to get over her lost lover, and it would be 
easier if nobody talked about it around her."

Mary took a few deep breaths to calm herself before continuing.
"Okay, so tell me now.  What happened."

"Are you going to settle down a bit first?"   He handed her a glass, 
and she sipped on it, not noticing the contents.

"Like I said.  Vicky is an experienced lover, at least when it comes
to other women.  Her first partner and teacher was a teenager, and 
Vicky was fond of her, nothing more.  The second one, though, Vicky 
loved.  And was loved in return.  The girl was a year older and more 
experienced.  She moved away a few months ago, shortly before Vicky 
talked with me, and our daughter had been heartbroken ever since."

"I haven't seen Vicky look at anyone else since she told me, male or 
female, until tonight.  I don't know why, but Vicky seems to have 
something going for Caitlin."

"I wish I'd known.  My baby, hurting, needing me, and I didn't know."

"Dear, you know now.  Sitting out there with Caitlin, she looks 
happier than I've seen her in a long time.  That's why I've been 
letting it go.  I wanted to see if Caitlin could or would respond, 
because I think Vicky needs someone, at least for a while.  When you 
didn't say anything, I believed you were thinking along the same 
lines.  I'm sorry.  I didn't realize."

"God, this is so sudden.  I don't know what to say."

"I think you should sleep on it.  You're having trouble thinking 
clearly right now, and doing the wrong thing could hurt Vicky or 
Brenda.  Caitlin is Richard's sister, and if she's anything like him, 
I don't think she'd do anything to hurt Vicky.  If they do hit it off, 
I'm willing to let it go for at least one night before we decide on 
what to do."

"It feels like I've just lost my baby.  It hurts."

"I know, I know."  He wraps her up in his arms.  "They're both too 
young to be lost to us already, but it's happening.  Fighting against 
it would only make things worse for all of us.  You know that.  You 
still remember what it was like when you took me."

"I know.  It's just so sudden."

"Look, you'll just have to trust my judgment for a change.  We'll 
talk about it some more in the morning, when we're both sober.  I just 
hope I'm as good a judge as you on this one.  I'd really hate to see 
Vicky hurt by this."

"Now, I'm going back to our guests.  You sit her for a while and 
compose yourself.  If you need to talk, just come get me."  Will 
walked back into the living room, leaving Mary to sort out her 
feelings.

She came out a short while later, smiled rather thinly at her husband,
and sat beside him.  She gradually regained her composure.  The three
girls and Richard never noticed a thing.


Eventually, the evening wore itself out.

"All right girls, it's ten thirty, time for bed," Mary said, breaking 
away from the conversation.  "It's getting late, and it looks like our 
guests need to head home and get some sleep."

Vicky's response was typical - "Aw mom, do I hafta?  It's just getting 
fun now!"

Brenda gave Richard a quick smooch and ran over to whisper in her 
mother's ear.  "Mom, can I stay over at Richard's tonight?  Please!  
I've got him so worked up, I think he's about to explode, and if I 
don't get some relief, I might explode too!  Please, please, pretty 
please!"

Whispering back into her daughters ear, Mary was almost laughing.  
"I can see what you mean!  The poor dear looks sooo uncomfortable, 
trying to hide that bulge in his pants.  If you can get your father to 
agree, then yes."

Climbing into her father's lap, Brenda gave him a quick hug, and 
whispered into his ear for a few seconds.  A look of surprise slowly 
worked it's way over his face, and he looked at his wife, one eyebrow 
raised, silently questioning her.  She nodded, giving him a little 
smile.  Will whispered back in his daughter's ear.  "Ok honey, but go 
get a bag packed quick.  We're sending Richard and Caitlin home in a 
few minutes."

"Thanks dad."  With that, Brenda almost flew up the stairs, only 
slowing long enough to sideswipe Richard's cheek with another kiss on 
the way by.

Vicky started in on her round of goodnight hugs and kisses, wondering 
what her sister was up to.  Just as she got to Caitlin, Brenda was 
back downstairs, with her bag, all set and ready to go.

Richard saw her, and nearly choked.  "Where are you heading out to, 
Brenda?"   He thought he knew the answer, but was feeling very nervous 
about that possibility.

"Mom and Dad said I could stay over at your place tonight."

"Do I get a choice in this?" he asked, still feeling a little 
stunned.

Mary answered him almost immediately.  "Of course you have a choice.
All you have to do is say no."

Richard looked at Mary, then looked at Brenda, staring deep into her 
soft green eyes.  "I don't think 'no' is a word I can use right now."

Vicky looked around at her parents, Richard, Brenda, and then looked 
into Caitlin's eyes for a second.  Caitlin, looking back, thought she 
saw something in there, just for a second, and then it disappeared.

"Mom, can I stay over at Richard's tonight too?  Please?"

"No, I don't think that would be a good idea, not tonight anyway."

"Aw, I don't think its fair.  Brenda gets to go out and have fun and I 
hafta stay home."

"Fair or not, I don't think Richard and Brenda would really enjoy 
company tonight," her mother replied.

Caitlin heard herself speak up, as if in a dream, not really in 
control of what she was doing, almost watching it from the outside.  
"It's okay if Vicky comes over.  I'll look after her.  Richard and 
Brenda wouldn't be alone in the house anyway, because I'll be there.  
Besides, I don't think they'd even notice."

Richard and Brenda at that moment were deeply involved in a kiss, and 
hadn't heard anything for a few minutes.

Mary took a good look at Caitlin, noticing the flush around the neck 
and ears, the erect nipples, and the way she was almost squirming in 
her chair.  Caitlin was obviously very much aroused.  She almost said 
no, before taking a good look at Vicky.

Vicky's eyes were almost pleading with her mother to say yes.  Her 
eyes were bright and filled with a passion her mother didn't 
recognize.  Her cheeks were somewhat flushed, as was the skin around 
the neckline of her blouse.   For the first time, Mary saw that 
Vicky's small nipples were erect, trying to poke out through her 
blouse.  Even her breathing was a little heavier and more erratic than 
it should have been.  Mary felt a little light headed, still hardly 
believing the thought that her youngest daughter wanted, almost 
needed, to hop into the sack with a nearly-grown woman.

Will broke into Mary's thoughts.  "Dear, could I see you in the 
kitchen for a minute?"  Taking her hand, he led her into the other 
room and closed the door.

"I really think we should let Vicky go.  She needs someone right now,
and Caitlin seems to be available and willing."

Looking into his eyes, seeing his love for her in there, she had to
trust him, and could only nod and agree.

Walking back out into the living room, Mary saw that Richard was 
sitting in one chair with Brenda in his lap, and Caitlin was sitting 
in another chair with Vicky in her lap.  She just caught a look and 
wink pass between Brenda and Vicky, something she would probably have 
ignored before.  It was almost like there were conspiracies going on 
around her that she knew nothing about.  "Yes," she said to herself, 
"a long talk with Will, a longer one with Vicky, and maybe even 
another chat with Brenda will be in order for tomorrow."

Behind her, she heard her husband's voice.

"Okay, Vicky, if both Caitlin and Richard agree, you can stay over at 
their place tonight too.  But it's up to them first.  Caitlin?"

Caitlin could only nod.  She didn't trust her voice.  Sitting on 
Caitlin's lap, Vicky had one leg curled up underneath her, looking 
like the sweet innocent child of eleven she was supposed to be.  The 
foot at the end of that leg was pressing heavily into Caitlin's 
crotch, and her toes were doing wonderful things down there.  Nobody 
else noticed a thing.

"Vicky's coming over to stay the night too?"  That was the first 
Richard had heard of it.  His mind had been elsewhere a short while 
ago.

"Well, only if you agree to it.  Caitlin's already said that she'd 
take care of Vicky while she's over there, we've both said okay, so 
now it's up to you."  Will looked steadily into Richard's eyes as he 
said this.

Richard looked over at where Caitlin and Vicky were sitting.  
Remembering what his sister had confessed to earlier in the day, he 
looked at the two of them very carefully.  Both were staring at him.  
They each had the same flushed skin, the same eager/hungry look in 
their eyes, and both were very much aroused.  Richard looked Caitlin 
directly in the eye and asked "Are you okay with this, Sis?"  Her eyes
told him everything he needed to know, but she nodded yes anyway.

"Well, if nobody else has any objections to it, I certainly can't say 
no."

Vicky jumped up with a squeal of delight, ran over to Richard and gave 
him a big hug and kiss.  She then ran upstairs to pack her overnight 
bag.

When Vicky jumped up, Caitlin gave out an involuntary gasp, followed 
by an almost inaudible moan.  She let her breath out slowly and tried 
to control her breathing.  Nobody had ever had that kind of effect on 
her before in her life, except maybe Angie.  She didn't know what was 
happening, or if she'd wake up from her dream soon, but to her, it 
felt wonderful.  She knew she'd probably feel as guilty as hell 
the next morning, but that was a long way away.  Looking at Brenda, 
and watching her with Richard had turned her on a little, but it was 
Vicky's touches, her hugs and not-so-chaste kisses, that had inflamed 
her passions.  The back of her dress and the seat cushion were damp, 
her panties long since soaked through.  She still felt Vicky's toes 
tickling and caressing her pussy.

Skimming back down the stairs, seemingly only gone for seconds, Vicky 
was ready to go.  Running to her mom, she gave and received a big hug 
and smooch.  Breaking that off quickly, she turned to her dad and 
jumped up into his arms, giving him a big hug around the neck.  He 
heard her whisper 'thanks, Dad'.  He just hugged her a little tighter 
in response.

After goodbyes had been said all the way around, Richard, Caitlin, 
Brenda and Vicky were all headed to Richard's place.  Brenda and Vicky 
ran ahead and waited impatiently on the porch for the older two to 
catch up.

Richard whispered into his sister's ear.  "Well Sis, what do think 
we've let ourselves in for?"

Her answer came back, voice thick with emotion.  "I don't know.  
Tonight, I'm not going to worry about it.  Tomorrow will be here soon 
enough."


Will and Mary watched them from their doorway.  After everyone had
disappeared from sight, Will collected his wife in his arms and gave 
her a long, soft, loving kiss.

When they finally pulled apart, Mary broke away a bit from his arms 
and pulled him into the house.  "Do you think we're doing the right 
thing?"

"I certainly hope so.  Although, the way things went, there wasn't 
much else we could do, was there?"

"True, true.  It's almost like the two of them had this whole thing 
planned out ahead of time.  I think we'd better have a loooong talk 
about Vicky first thing in the morning."  After a playful pinch from 
her hubby, she amended her statement.  "Well, maybe second or third 
thing in the morning."  He followed her up the stairs.


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When Richard and Caitlin finally got to the porch, they found the two 
girls, Brenda and Vicky, whispering and laughing quietly to each 
other, stopping only when the two of them were within hearing range.  
After he opened the door, he motioned for the three ladies to precede 
him.

Brenda yelled out "I get the bathroom first!"

"Not if I get there before you!" squealed Vicky.

Brenda, with a head start, made it into the downstairs bathroom before 
her sister, and closed the door.  Vicky immediately turned and ran up 
the stairs, heading for the other, smaller one.

Caitlin went upstairs to the room her brother said would be hers while 
she was living with him, and he started gathering up some pillows, 
sheets, and a blanket and comforter for her to use.  He wondered if 
he needed to worry about finding some for Vicky as well.

He had given Caitlin the spare bedroom, the one in the front of the 
house overlooking the road.  It wasn't all that large, but it had a 
nice walk-in closet and a huge bay window, big enough to curl up in.  
There was a double bed, which had been stripped to a single sheet, a 
high-boy, dressing table and chair, and a small shelving unit beside 
the headboard with a reading lamp attached to it.  Her trunk and 
suitcases occupied most of the rest of the floor space.

The walls were the standard pale eggshell, the floor a nice deep 
hardwood, and a throw-rug lay beside the bed.  She'd decided earlier 
in the day that the curtains were ugly and had to go.

Richard and her were just finishing making up the bed when Vicky came 
into the room, wearing her nightie.  She immediately dropped her bag, 
jumped onto the bed, and burrowed under the covers.  "Well, that 
answers that question," thought Richard to himself.

"Okay, Sis.  Can you think of anything else you need?  If not, I'll 
see you in the morning."

"No, I think I know pretty much where everything is now.  Good night."

"'Night, Sis.  You too, Vicky."

"Good night Richard.  Don't let my sister keep you up too late."  He 
was definitely having a hard time adjusting, because he actually 
blushed when she said that.  Of course, he didn't expect those types 
of comments from an eleven year old girl.

Richard headed off to his room, not knowing what to expect when he got 
there.


Caitlin shut the door after he left, then turned and looked at Vicky.  
The walk home and the work of getting the bed ready had helped to cool 
her down.  She was starting to think clearly again, and really didn't 
know if she wanted to go through with what had seemed almost 
inevitable.  Guilt about what she was thinking of doing made her 
remember what had happened before, the reason why she was at her 
brother's place and not at home.  Her mind ran through everything 
she'd done and thought during that awful night not too long ago, and 
then through all the blame and accusations that followed.  Guilt and 
pain started to flood back into her.  Sorting through her things to 
pick out what she would wear let her put off a decision for a little 
longer.  A voice behind her broke her out of her thoughts.

Vicky felt the change in mood, saw the pain and hesitation running 
through Caitlin's face, and knew the burning desire Caitlin had had 
for her earlier was gone.

"Please come to bed.  Even if all you want to do is cuddle, that's 
okay.  I need someone to hold on to tonight."

That was enough.  The shame and guilt she'd been suppressing came back 
in  one big rush.  She started to cry, silently sobbing to herself, as 
she undressed for bed.  Vicky saw, but didn't understand why all the 
tears.  She just waited for Caitlin to crawl into bed, then snuggled 
up to her and gave her a kiss.  All Caitlin could do was cry quietly 
and hang onto that soft, warm person beside her.  Some time later, she 
was asleep.


Richard made a stop in the bathroom before heading off to his 
bedroom.  He picked up the strange (at least in his place) scent of 
perfume and body powder.  It looked to him like he was going to have 
to get used to that smell again.  He smiled at the thought.

Walking into his bedroom, he turned on the light, and saw Brenda, 
already in bed and under the covers.  She blinked a bit at the sudden 
brightness.

"Hello, handsome.  Where have you been hiding?"

He smiled back at her.  "Business before pleasure.  I had other
houseguests to attend to first."

"Well, I certainly hope you didn't attend to them like I hope you'll 
be attending to me, handsome, or I just might get jealous."

"No, I think I would have been in the way over there."

"Good.  Now hurry up and get in here.  I'm getting lonely already."

Richard got undressed slowly, deliberately taking his time, knowing 
that Brenda was watching him very carefully.  He undid the buttons on 
his shirt, taking his time, then demurely turned his back to her while 
letting the shirt slide off his shoulders and down his arms.  He 
carefully hung it over the back of a chair, then sat down on the edge 
of the bed to remove his shoes and socks.

A hand started tickling his back, slowly running up and down along 
his spine.  A second hand snaked in under his arm and started to 
slide over his stomach and chest.  He leaned back slightly, felt 
something soft and warm, and heard a small sigh of contentment.

"I thought I was supposed to be getting undressed."

There was suddenly a tickling feeling on one side of his neck.  She 
was nibbling him with her lips.  He squirmed as the sensation ran up 
and down his spine, then swerved to run down his arms, making them 
feel tingly, and making it much harder to undo his laces.

"Yes, you're supposed to be getting undressed.  You're just taking too 
damn long.  Maybe you need help."  With that, the hand that had been 
playing with his chest slid down to the top of his pants and started 
playing with the fastener and zipper, teasing rather than trying to 
actually do anything.  The nibbling moved to the other side of his 
neck.

"This is going to take a lot longer if you keep helping me, you know."

The nibbling moved a little farther onto his shoulder, and the hand 
that had been tickling his back slid around and started tickling his 
chest.  "Maybe you'd better concentrate on what you're doing, then."  
The nibbling moved back to his neck, then up to an ear.  "Hurry up, I 
don't want to wait for you all night."

With a groan, Richard pulled himself up off the bed.  He heard a 
disappointed whine behind him as well.  Quickly shedding himself of 
shoes, socks and pants, he stood there in his boxers, the front 
tenting out, letting her have another good look.

"Come on, take those things off too so I can get a good look."  He did 
as she requested, baring his member, which was stiff and pointing 
straight out.  "Good.  Now turn up the heat and get over here before I 
change my mind."

"Turn up the heat?"

"Yeah, I got cold last night.  Turn it way, way up.  We're gonna 
cook!"

Robert obediently went over and turned up the thermostat to 90 
degrees, figuring that would be more than enough for a sauna.  When he 
finally headed for the bed, she threw back the covers to let him in.

Once again he stopped, just to stare at that beauty before him.  She 
was completely naked, showing him everything that she had to offer, 
from her small but nicely shaped breasts, to the shaved pussy, 
half-hidden between her thighs.  It was the body of a beautiful young 
lady, well on the way to maturity, and she was offering it to him.  He 
slid in beside her.

"Finally," she whispered, as she wrapped her arms around his neck and 
pressed the full length of her body against him.  Her lips found his, 
and pressed into him with the full force of her desire.  He responded, 
kissing her back with equal fervor, slipping his tongue into her 
mouth, sliding one arm under her, running his fingers along the back 
of her neck and down her shoulders, moving the other hand down her 
side to her hip, then behind her to fondle her cheeks and pull her 
closer to him.

They lay like that for several minutes, tongues twisting and sliding 
around each other, tasting each other, each sharing the other's breath 
and warmth.

Richard slowly slid his hand below her nether cheeks, down between her 
thighs, and started to gently run his fingers up and down her crack.
Eventually Brenda moaned, leaning back and breaking contact with him.

She looked down between them, reaching for his prick, and then 
giggled.  "Richard, you've been leaking."  She twirled her finger on a 
wet patch on her stomach, then on a matching spot on his stomach, 
right where the head of his cock was sitting when it was trapped 
between them.  Bringing her finger up to her mouth, she slowly licked 
it clean.  "Mmmm ... tasty.  Do you think there's any more where that 
came from?"  She reached down between them, looking for the source.

His entire body jumped when he felt her touching the head of his cock.
His breath was already a little ragged.  "I'm sure there'll be some 
left in there for you."

She pushed him over onto his back and climbed in between his legs,
curling up and making herself comfortable.  He lay back, putting a 
pillow behind his head so he could see what she was doing.  She took 
hold of his dick, holding it lightly with one hand, and started to 
slowly stroke it up and down.  Some more pre-cum collected at the tip, 
and he shuddered with pleasure when she licked it off with the tip of 
her tongue.  "Mmmmm"

Her tongue started working on him, licking around the head of his 
cock, sliding along on its sensitive underside, then heading back to 
the tip to see if any more goodies showed up.

Leaning back slightly, she began to fondle and examine his balls, not 
stopping her slow stroking of his stiff member.

"What's it like when a guy climaxes?  Is that the right name for it?  
I've heard some older girls say that it's totally gross and 
disgusting, and a few others that say they kinda like it."

It was sometimes hard for him to remember that she was a very young 
and inexperienced girl, especially after the expert tongue lashing 
she'd just given him.

"Do you remember the orgasm you had last night?"

She just melted down a little and purred.

"It's a lot like that for a guy too.  Sometimes the orgasms are 
intense, sometimes not much more than a brief glow.  The big 
difference is that guys ejaculate semen when they orgasm.  Sometimes a 
lot comes out, sometimes only a little comes out.  That's what carries 
the sperm from inside the guy to inside the woman.  It's called 
climaxing, or cumming, same as for a woman, or sometimes ejaculating.

"What does semen look like?"

"Usually it's quite thick, almost creamy, with a milky look to it.  If 
a guy's been hard-up for a while, it may have a yellowish tinge, or 
if he's been cumming a lot it may get thinner and more watery."

Her hands had been at work on his balls and his prick throughout the 
conversation, making it hard for him to concentrate on his answers.
Between her efforts the previous night and her torture of him  
earlier that evening, he knew that he wouldn't last very long, maybe 
only a few minutes.  He moaned.  "If you keep that up, you're going to 
get a close up and personal view of a guy cumming."

"Ooooo.  You mean if I keep doing this with my hands I'll get to see 
the real thing?"

"Maybe.  It feels wonderful, but it may not be enough."

"What if I put my tongue into it, would that help?"  Matching action 
to words, she started a wild assault on his cock with her whole 
tongue, licking the entire shaft from groin to top, circling around 
the head, then heading down the shaft again.  Every once in a while, 
she put his prick in her mouth and sucked, bobbing up and down for a 
few strokes, only to take it out again and run her lips up and down 
his glistening member.

"Is that better?"

"Urgh,  ahhhh,  yessss.  Keep it up, please."  His cock was rock 
hard, his balls almost aching for release.  They were jerking up and 
down in Brenda's hand as she fondled them.  He could feel the 
sensations that were coming from her hands and mouth working deeper 
and deeper into his groin.  He was close.  His head was pushed back, 
eyes half open, thighs stiffening then relaxing, hands grasping at the 
bed, looking for something better to hold onto.  "God, I'm almost 
there.  If you want it, keep going!"

Brenda picked up her pace.  Releasing his balls, she used two hands to 
stroke his swollen penis, licking and sucking on the head and shaft, 
moving so fast her hands seemed to blur.  She was amazed at how much 
thicker and heavier it got, and how much the head grew, when he was 
that close to cumming.

He could feel it building, deep inside him, the pressure growing to a 
point where he knew he couldn't stop it.

"Here it comes, I'm gonna do it now.  Just keep stroking till I'm 
finished!  Please!"

Brenda pulled her head back and just stared at the head of his cock, 
eyes wide, waiting for it.  She kept on stroking with both hands as 
fast as she could, and suddenly it happened.

Thick spurts of white cum started jetting out of the tip of his cock, 
shooting into the air and landing all over his stomach and chest.  She 
watched with awe, amazed at all the stuff that was coming out and how 
far it was flying.  One of the older girls had told her that guys 
stuff shot out and went everywhere, but she never imagined it would be 
like that.

She kept pumping until nothing else came out, not even the little oozy 
bits at the end.  Richard asked her to stop.  "Please, let me rest for 
a minute."  He was breathing hard, sweat covering his entire body.  
The heat in the room felt almost stifling to his heaving lungs.

As he recovered, he looked down to see what she was doing.  One hand 
was holding his now-deflating prick, the other was doing slow twirls 
in the small puddles of cum on his stomach.  Every once in a while, 
that hand would move to her mouth and she'd lick off the cum from her 
fingertips, then it would go back to another puddle and start swirling 
again.

"That was wonderful.  Thank you."  His orgasm, after all the tension 
of the past few days, along with all the sexual teasing he'd had to 
endure, had been intense.  He felt incredibly relaxed and mellow.

"You're welcome.  So that's what a guy does when he comes.  Is it 
always this messy?"

Richard, still breathing heavily, used one finger to play in the same 
puddle her fingers were in.  Then he lifted his finger and held it in 
front of her mouth.  She looked at it like a bird looking at a worm, 
head moving from one side to the other, staring down her nose, eyes 
crossed.  Then her mouth opened and engulfed his finger, sucking and 
licking on it until it was clean.

"No, usually it's not this messy.  When a guy comes inside a girl, all 
the semen is concentrated into a small area, in her vagina.  It 
doesn't jet out like it did here.  The same thing if he comes in her 
mouth.  Even when it's done like this, a guy might have a towel or rag 
or some tissue to squirt it onto, to keep from making a mess."

"Guys really come in girls mouths?  That sounds kinda gross."

"It's not much different than what you're doing, licking it off your 
fingers.  It's just that there would be more of it, and the taste 
would seem much stronger.  By the way, how does it taste?"

"Well, sorta salty-sour, and maybe a bit bitter.  Not that bad in 
little bits, but I'm not sure I'd want to try a mouthful."

"I don't blame you."  Swirling his finger in a puddle, he stuck it in 
his own mouth and sucked it clean.  "No, it doesn't taste too good.  
But, I guess in the passion of the moment, the taste would probably be 
ignored."

Brenda started to slide up Richard's body, lubricating her breasts and 
stomach with his semen and their combined sweat.  The heat in the room 
was intense.  She stopped when her lips were almost touching his.  
Using a finger to scrape some of the liquid from his chest, she held 
it between their mouths, hers opening first, and him following her 
lead.  She put her finger into his mouth, then sealed their mouths 
together with her lips, sliding her tongue in to lick at his lips and 
teeth, and at her finger.

His tongue followed hers, touching and teasing, licking on her finger, 
then darting into her mouth for a quick run around the inside of her 
lips.  They could both taste the salt/sour taste of his semen, along 
with the stronger salt taste of their sweat.

Breaking the kiss, Brenda nuzzled her head into his shoulder.  "No, it 
doesn't taste nearly as bad when you share it."  She started to move
around on his body, sliding her breasts back and forth and wiggling 
her hips.  Then she parted her legs, straddling his waist, and started 
a slow rocking motion.  His prick was still oozing slightly, and it 
was positioned right below her pussy.  That was quickly bringing it 
back to life.

"Better not do that, Tinkerbell.  Didn't your mommy tell you how 
babies are made?"

"Hmmm, maybe.  I think it went something like this."  She scooped up a 
big dollop of cum on her finger and proceeded to rub it into the crack 
of her pussy.  "Am I close?"  She looked at him, smiling her innocent 
little girl smile.

Richard groaned.  She'd moved too fast, and it was done before he 
realized what she was up to.  "I don't think you should have done 
that, Brenda."

"Why not? I want to have babies too, you know."

He just lay there with a pained expression on his face, eyes closed, 
picturing what was going to happen.

"I just think I'm a little too young to have them right now."

Opening one eye, he just looked at her.

"Don't worry!  Mom's had me on birth control pills since I went out on 
my first date.  She said that she trusts me, but doesn't necessarily 
trust all the boys I might go out with.  She'd rather I was protected 
in case something happened than leave me unprotected and make a 
possible bad situation much worse.  So I'm safe."

Saying that, she pushed down on his shoulders, lifted herself up, and 
started to grind her pussy down on the length of his cock.  His hands 
automatically went up and started to squeeze and caress her breasts, 
teasing her nipples with his thumbs.  That was sending small shocks 
from her breasts to her groin, intensifying the wonderful feelings she 
was getting by rubbing against his cock.  Small whimpers and moans 
started to come out of her mouth.  "Please, do me again."  Her 
breathing was getting heavier and more erratic.

"Do what?"  He looked at her blankly, only a hint of a smile betraying 
him.

"You know, do me, like yesterday!"  She was definitely getting there, 
breathing in short gasps, moans and whimpers escaping regularly.  
"I've been waiting for it all day!  Please!

Her pussy felt like it was on fire.  She'd been anticipating this 
since she woke up that morning, feeling it build up deep inside, her 
clit twitching in time with her heartbeat, even when she was beating 
off Richard.  Now she desperately craved a release, needing to cum so 
bad, and she knew that doing herself off like that, exciting as it 
felt, wasn't going to be enough.

"Come on, please!  I neeeed it now!!  EAT ME!  SUCK MY PUSSY!  Stick 
that tongue inside me NOW!   PLEEAAASE!"  She was pleading, almost 
screaming for release, and it wouldn't come without his help.

Richard grabbed her waist and rolled over onto her.  He was on top of 
her, with his newly hardened prick resting along her virgin pussy.  
Her hips were thrusting by themselves, rubbing along his cock, trying 
to get something into her pussy.

He steeled himself, and slid down until his mouth was above her 
crotch.  He didn't want to take her cherry that way, not in a moment's 
passion.  She trusted him too much for him to do that to her.  He 
wanted to do it when he was sure it was what he and she both desired, 
when they both knew what was happening.  The way things were going, 
that would be soon.

Her thrusting hips, and the hands trying to pull his head inside her, 
made him soon forget about that.  He set to work with his lips, 
tongue, and fingers, knowing she needed to get off as soon as 
possible.  She was frantic, her hips were bucking like crazy, moans, 
cries, and whimpers coming out of her mouth along with unintelligible 
shouts and words.

He stuck his tongue as deep into her pussy as he could, swirled it 
around, gathered her juices and flavors, then licked up through her 
crack, right over top of her clit.  That sent a shock through her 
body, and she arched and jumped in response.  Clamping his mouth over 
her clit, he sucked it into his mouth, running his tongue along the 
skin all around it, then flicking the its tip.  She was starting to 
shudder, her release was close.

Lubricating one finger with the juices on her belly, he slid it into 
her crack, moving it forward and back a few times.  Her whole body 
started to bounce up and down.  Then he eased it into her hole, 
sliding it in and out with a fast rhythm, occasionally pushing in far 
enough to touch her virginity.

Her vaginal walls started to spasm, grabbing and releasing his finger 
as her climax hit.  She gave out a long moan, arching her body to try 
and get more contact on her clit.  Her hips were gyrating wildly, so 
he had to work hard to keep his mouth and finger in position and 
moving.  She stopped spasming and collapsed, shudders wracking her 
body, as her climax worked its way through.  Richard slowly eased up, 
reducing the stimulation as the shockwaves died down.  Eventually, he 
and the orgasm both stopped.

Brenda just lay there, breathing heavily, eyes fluttering.  She was 
awake, but too wrung out to move or speak.  Richard got up, turned the 
heat back down, turned off the light, opened the window a crack, then 
climbed back into bed.  Pulling Brenda into him, he cradled her head 
in his arm and kissed her lightly on the lips.  Cuddling her sweat and 
semen covered body to his, he covered them both up, ready for sleep.  
The only thing he heard her say was 'wow'.


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<< End of chapter 4>>

Next chapter - wet dreams, a *great* morning, breakfast, 
               Caitlin talks to Vicky

(Well, was that better?  There's some more in the next chapter.  Be 
warned though, there's more story in it too.  You can't have 
everything.  There was a lot of teasing going on though, wasn't 
there.  I enjoyed it.  I still wonder how Vicky got the way she is.  
After all, there aren't very many eleven year old girls capable of 
seducing a seventeen year old woman.)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 5/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 14:46:50 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 5 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - wet dreams, a *great* morning, breakfast, 
                  Caitlin talks to Vicky

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Sometime during the night, Caitlin was having a wonderful dream.  She 
was back with Angie, and Angie was doing deliciously naughty things to 
her.  That mouth on her nipple, teasing and nibbling, her left hand 
caressing and fondling her breast, pinching and pulling on the other 
nipple, and Angie's right hand down between her legs, sliding a finger 
up and down inside her pussy, pulled out memories of those wonderful 
nights not too long ago from where she had carefully packed them away 
in her mind.

Her slit was quickly heating up, juices starting to flow, moistening 
her pussy lips even more.  When that hand down there started to tease 
her clit, she moaned, and started to squirm.

Pushing the mouth that was on her breast down toward her needy hole, 
she quickly twisted around until she was under the other girl's 
crotch.  Diving in, almost frantic with desire, she started to lick 
and suck like crazy.  Something seemed a little different, out of 
place for a second.  Then the other girl started lapping hungrily at 
her slit.  All thoughts forgotten, Caitlin started in again, licking 
and sucking as fast as she could, wanting, needing to get off, and 
wanting the other girl to cum with her.

Licking a finger to lubricate it, then sliding it around in the other 
girl's slit for more lubrication, she inserted it into the girl's love 
hole.  It was tighter than she remembered, but soon the girl's vaginal 
muscles relaxed and her finger stroked in and out more easily.  Then 
the other girl jammed two fingers into Caitlin's twat.

She just about hit the roof.  She started to lick and suck and pump as 
fast as she was able, and could feel the other girl doing the same 
things to her.  She felt the other girl spasm and ease up as she 
climaxed, moaning loudly, but Caitlin couldn't stop because she hadn't 
gotten what she needed yet.  The other girl all of a sudden started 
back in, licking, sucking and pumping as fast as ever, and started to 
moan and whimper into Caitlin's crotch.

That's what finally sent her over the edge, to a long-needed climax, 
arching her back, whining, almost crying in her passion.  The other 
girl never let up through the whole orgasm, pushing her to her 
limits.  Only when it was over did the other girl stop and slide 
around to kiss her on the lips.

Caitlin just hung onto that kiss, wrapping her arms and legs around 
the other girl, hugging her tight, until she fell back to sleep.

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When Caitlin woke up the next morning, she was feeling wonderfully 
sleepy and lazy.  Laying there, revelling in the luxury of a warm bed 
in the early morning, she suddenly realized she wasn't alone.  Someone 
was in bed with her, head resting on her shoulder, arms and legs 
entangled with hers.  She remembered her dream.  Guilt and pain 
started flooding back, and she couldn't stop herself from crying 
again, realizing what had happened, what she had done to Vicky.

That woke Vicky up.  Stretching her neck a little, she turned and 
kissed the crying Caitlin full on the lips, then started nibbling and 
licking her way down her neck, along one shoulder, dropping lower and 
sliding her lips along Caitlin's breast until she reached the nipple.  
She sucked it into her mouth, licking it, twirling it around with 
her tongue, teasing it with her teeth.

Caitlin's low cries to stop, don't do this please, were totally 
ignored.  Her body responded quickly to the stimulation, and she felt 
that need stirring again in her groin.  She couldn't seem to gather 
the strength to push Vicky off, not that her body would really let 
her, so she gave in to it and started to caress Vicky's shoulders and 
back, occasionally sending her hand down far enough to brush her ass 
cheeks.  That brought forth the occasional purr or moan from Vicky, 
who didn't seem like she was ever going to release that nipple.

Vicky was listening carefully to the sounds Caitlin was making, 
waiting for them to change from whimpers asking for her to stop, to 
little sighs and moans of pleasure.  When that happened, she twisted 
her body so that her breasts were facing Caitlin, and switched over to 
Caitlin's other nipple.

Almost immediately, Vicky felt hands sliding up and down her entire 
body, touching and caressing every part of it.  She let out a long 
sigh of pleasure, and started her own exploration, using her hands, 
mouth, and tongue, kissing and licking every square inch of skin she 
could reach.  Caitlin shivered with delight when Vicky nibbled on the 
backs of her knees, and moaned when she started kissing and licking 
between her toes.

Caitlin was just sliding her lips over Vicky's hip when she felt 
fingers caressing the inside of her thigh.  She spread her legs apart 
in invitation, and in she came, with little licks, kisses and nibbles, 
working her way slowly up one inner thigh, then, disappointingly, down 
the other.  Her own explorations were bringing her closer and closer 
to a delightful-looking little pussy, just past her nose.  A groan 
of delight slipped out when she felt those nibbles and kisses inching 
their way back up the inside of her leg, towards her waiting need.

They started at the same time, slowly stroking each other's nether 
lips, matching their rhythms, finding those extra-sensitive spots so 
they could return later.  Nothing existed right then except their 
mutual pleasure.

Vicky felt a tongue start to tease apart her outer lips, so she 
returned the favor by sliding her tongue into Caitlin's crack and 
licking at the entrance to her hole.  Caitlin's tongue found Vicky's 
tiny clit, and started to tease and tickle it into its full size and 
hardness.  Both girls were moaning and whimpering in pleasure.  
Vicky suddenly felt Caitlin's arms wrap around her hips and she was 
pulled up into the top half of a normal sixty-nine.  She wantonly 
spread her thighs as wide as they would go, as Caitlin did the same, 
both enjoying  the extra freedom it gave for exploring the other's 
pussy.

They both knew it was just about time for a much-needed release, so 
when Caitlin felt Vicky starting to lick and suck at a fever pitch, 
she whined and purred with pleasure, and started in, frantically using 
her fingers, tongue, lips, and anything else in the neighborhood, to 
get Vicky to cum again.

It was over in a few minutes, with both girls hitting their climaxes 
at almost the same time, bucking and straining against each other, 
each trying to prolong the other's orgasm as long as possible, not 
wanting the waves of pleasure to end.  Eventually, they both collapsed 
in exhaustion.

Once again, Vicky swung around, still laying on top of Caitlin, and 
kissed her on the mouth.  This time Caitlin knew who it was, and with 
eyes open, returned the kiss in full.

They lay there for a while, enjoying each other's warmth, the touch of 
skin on skin, slowly feeling each other come down from their highs, 
and letting strength flow back into exhausted limbs.

Vicky was the first one to stir, more out of need than desire.  
"Mmmmm.  Now this is the way every morning should start."

Caitlin, feeling too good and too tired for her guilt to come back 
right then, just sighed, lying there with a contented smile on her 
face.

Vicky would have loved to just lie there and snuggle for the rest of 
the day, but her body was telling her to get moving.  Feeling 
deliciously naughty, she padded over to the door, stark naked, and 
whispered to Caitlin "I'll be back in a minute."

"Where do you think you're going, dressed like that?" she whispered 
back.

"To the bathroom, where else."

"But what if someone sees you out there? I mean, you're naked!"

"Who's going to see me, my sister?"

"No!  My brother!"

"Well, it might be the first time he sees me naked, but I don't think 
it'll be the last."  She gave Caitlin an evil grin as she opened the 
door and peeked out.  Nobody was in sight.  She made it into the 
bathroom without incident.

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Richard woke up early with a raging hard-on that wouldn't be denied.
He didn't want to wake Brenda, so he slowly unwrapped himself from her 
arms and legs and slid over to the edge of the bed.  He then started 
to jerk himself off, trying to do it as quietly and gently as he 
could.

He was just getting into a good, steady rhythm when he heard a 
familiar voice.  "So that's how boys do it by themselves."  She was 
lying exactly as he had left her, except that her eyes were open and 
staring at his cock.  "I've never watched a guy do it before.  Doesn't 
it hurt, rubbing it so fast and so hard?"

Richard, who had kept his concentration and his rhythm, had a hard 
time answering, grunting out words as he pumped.  "No.  Doesn't hurt 
if you know how.  Takes practice."

He was nearing the point of release when she told him to stop.  She 
grabbed his hand in both of hers and literally pulled it away from his 
cock.  Wrapping one of her small hands as far around his cock as it 
would go, she leaned over and lapped up the little drops of pre-cum 
that were there.

Turning and looking at him over her shoulder, she smiled.  "Remember 
what I said the other night?  This thing is mine!  Besides, I need 
the practice more than you do."

With that, she turned back to the task at hand (in hand?) and began to 
suck on his prick, sliding down the shaft until the head hit the back 
of her mouth, then back up again.  Her tongue swirled and licked at 
the shaft and head as they came into range, bringing moans of delight 
from Richard.

He was in heaven.  That was definitely better than beating his 
meat - in fact, it was better than a good bit of the sex he'd had in 
his life!  She had a nice rhythm going, bobbing her head up and down 
almost like a mechanical doll, sliding his prick in and out of her 
mouth with smooth, even strokes, except that once in a while she would 
dip down a little lower, and he could feel the head of his prick slide 
into her throat.  She WAS practicing, while doing that to him.  "I'm 
not sure I'll be able to take it," he thought to himself, "when she 
really gets to know what she's doing."  He could feel the sensations 
starting to churn his insides, mixing everything up, and getting ready 
for his release.

His hands were automatically looking for something to grab onto, 
moving around, gripping and releasing the sheets, blankets, pillows, 
whatever they could reach.  One of them found Brenda's leg.  Sliding 
upward, past her knee, he started to caress her inner thigh, moving up 
toward her mound, wanting to play and tickle in there.  Her thighs 
closed, locking around his hand, keeping it away from what it wanted.

Looking down at what she was doing, he could see beads and streaks of 
saliva on his shaft, all the way to the hairs.  Then she took an 
extra-deep mouthful, and he saw his entire member disappear into her 
mouth, down to his balls, and watched as her throat expanded to accept 
what she was pushing into it.  His head fell back as the sight, sound, 
and sensation of what she was doing to him drove him closer to the 
edge.  He could feel it building inside him, almost ready to burst 
through.

"I'm gonna cum!  Here it comes!"

Brenda pulled her head off his cock and began pumping it furiously 
with both hands.  She watched carefully as he shot his load, squirt 
after squirt arcing into the air to land on his chest and stomach.  
When his pumping slowed down to the last dribbles, she put her mouth 
around his cock again, licking and sucking the last few drops of cum 
into her mouth.  When it was completely drained and cleaned, she 
pulled up and turned towards his face.  

"Now, doesn't that feel better than doing it yourself?"

He could only moan, still feeling weak and drained.

Turning and looking at his cock again, she spotted a last drop of cum
oozing out of the tip.  She sucked his member into her mouth for a few
more seconds, licking up that last little taste.  Richard squirmed and
moaned a little at the extra sensation.

Pulling back a bit, looking at his now-limp cock, she asked a question
that had been running around in her mind since the first time she saw
him naked.

"Richard, when we do it for real, the first time, will it hurt a lot?"

"When we do it for real?"  His mind was still a little foggy from the
aftermath, so he didn't clue in to what she meant.

"Yes, for real, when you put this thing (grabbing his cock) inside me.  
I'm a little scared, 'cause some of the older girls said it hurt a lot 
the first time."

He was now listening very carefully, aware of the fact she was talking
about when, not if, it would happen, and sounding like it would be 
very soon.  "I'm not sure how much it will hurt, but from what I've 
heard, it usually hurts at least a little bit when a girl gets her 
hymen broken.  Any other pain is because the guy is inexperienced or 
in too much of a hurry to get the girl properly excited, and she gets 
stretched too quickly."

"You wouldn't be like that, would you?"

"Of course not.  If I was, you wouldn't be a virgin right now.  It was
real tempting last night when I was laying on top of you, but I was a
good boy."

"I'm glad.  I want our first time to be special."  She turned and 
looked at him.  "I'll tell you when I'm ready.  The way you're working 
me up, it's gonna be real soon."

She then rubbed her breasts and nipples into his 
stomach, coating them with his seed, and slowly proceeded to slide her 
body up over his chest, covering them both with a film of his semen, 
not stopping until her lips were almost touching his.

She kissed him several times while he lay there, mostly quick, sudden 
contacts of lips on lips, but the last one was a long, slow, 
deliberate, sensuous massage with her tongue.  He could taste his cum 
on her lips and in her mouth.

"Mmmm.  Such a nice way to start the morning, don't you think?  A nice, 
relaxing bath of cum."  She wriggled around on top of him, smearing 
them both a little more, then half-slid onto the bed, so only her 
chest was on top of him.  His hand caressed her shoulder, and slowly 
moved down her side and back to her thigh, where it worked its way 
around to between her legs.  She opened them a little as an 
invitation, which his hand accepted, and it moved up to stroke her 
pussy.

"You didn't want me to do this a few minutes ago."

"I was busy!  I can't practice when you're distracting me.  Besides, I 
like it better whey you're concentrating properly.  Like now."  She 
wriggled her bottom and opened her thighs a bit more.

After a few seconds, she rolled away from him, sighing.  "I need a 
shower and breakfast before you put me through anything like last 
night again."  She rolled back to give him another kiss.  "It was 
wonderful, but I don't think I could stand it that strong very 
often."

Grinning, he kissed her back.  "You won't get those really intense 
ones very often.  They usually happen only after a long buildup, or 
after a lot of emotional ups and downs.  You had both yesterday, so 
last night's could be considered a 'mind blowing experience'.  That's 
how some people describe a very intense orgasm."

"Yeah, that's about what it felt like.  I was there, but didn't really 
feel, well, attached, sorta like, oh, 'floating in a sea of ecstasy'.  
I got that from one of my mom's books."

"I like it.  Anyway, I think I'll go see about that shower and 
breakfast you were talking about."

"Awww, just lie here a bit longer, please?"

"I don't think I can.  Mother nature won't be denied.  Besides, think 
of the fun we could have in the shower."  He gave her another kiss, 
rolled out of bed, and pulled on his jockey shorts.  "Back in a few 
minutes."

He opened the door and stepped into the hallway.

"Eeek!"

Richard looked, and saw Vicky's naked backside running down the hall 
to his sister's room.  He watched her run, noticing that her body was  
definitely rounding out from little-girl skinny to a slightly curvier, 
softer, young-lady figure.  He saw that she didn't have any tan lines 
either.  As she disappeared into his sister's bedroom, she turned, 
giving him a glimpse of her pussy and just-developing breasts.  She 
stuck her tongue out at him before she shut the door.

Humming to himself, he walked into the bathroom.

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When Vicky climbed back into bed with Caitlin, they wrapped their arms 
and legs around each other and kissed for a few seconds.

"I take it my brother caught you out in the hall, little missy.  Is 
that why you were gone so long?  Waiting for him?"

"Yeah, I guess I was.  I heard him moving around in the bedroom, and I 
couldn't resist.  I hung around just outside the bathroom, and when he 
opened his door, I squealed and ran!  It wasn't as good as it could 
have been, though."

"Oh, why?"

"He was wearing his shorts, so I couldn't see anything."

"Well, little missy, are you trying to get into my brother's pants 
too?"  Caitlin was trying to keep her tone light and playful, but the 
thought that this girl might also be chasing after her brother was 
unsettling.

"Nope, not really.  If he asked, I might, but I'm not sure.  I just 
like teasing.  I don't think I want any boys yet.  Or men.  Maybe 
later.  Right now, I like girls.  Besides, he looked awful, covered in 
sweat, gooey splotches all over him, and streaks of white stuff 
dribbling down his front."  Vicky started to play with one of 
Caitlin's nipples.

"It sounds like my brother was having fun.  Mmmm.  Nice.  Better stop 
though, 'cause I don't think I can wait long enough to finish."

Still playing with that nipple, Vicky answered "Okay, go ahead, don't 
let me stop you."

"You ARE a nasty tease, aren't you."  Caitlin groaned and rolled out 
of bed.  Pulling on a housecoat, she looked at Vicky.  I don't think 
my brother is ready for the shock of his sister walking around the 
house in the nude."  She grinned. "At least, not yet, anyway.  By the 
way, I seem to recall us both wearing something to bed last night, but 
this morning we're rather naked.  Did you have anything to do with 
it?"

Vicky put on her cute little girl face, smiling and looking up at 
Caitlin with her big, soft, deep-green eyes.  "Who, sweet little 
innocent me?"

"Don't try to pull that 'sweet innocent' stuff on me."  Caitlin was 
smiling at Vicky as she said that.  "Especially after what you did to 
me yesterday.  Anyway, I'm heading downstairs for a shower."

"I think I'll join you.  I need one too, and I'd like someone to scrub 
my back for me."

"Okay, but you'd better wear something this time."

They went out together, heading downstairs to the shower.

**********************************************************************

When Richard came out of the bathroom, he saw his sister and Vicky 
heading down the stairs.  "Good morning you two.  Up already?"

"Yep.  Just heading for the shower."

"Okay.  Let me know when you're done.  I need one too."

Richard had sponged himself down in the bathroom, removing most of the 
mess from last night and this morning.  As he walked back into his 
bedroom, he heard some moaning.  Brenda was lying there, spread out on 
the bed, covers thrown back, one hand buried in her crotch, the other 
squeezing and pulling at her breasts.

"So that's how girls do it by themselves."

Her eyes opened a bit and she looked at him, but her hands never 
slowed down.  "Don't just stand there.  Help!"

Kneeling on the bed beside her, he pulled her hand away from her 
breasts.  It immediately dropped down to help with her pussy.  Using 
both hands, he massaged and fondled her mounds, pinching and pulling 
at the nipples, working them hard.  Lowering his mouth to hers, he 
started a soft kiss.

Right now, she didn't want it soft, she needed everything fast and 
hard, so she ground her mouth up into his, practically sucking his 
tongue out of his mouth, jabbing and poking with her own.  One of her 
hands had two fingers sliding up and down her slit, pausing to work on 
her clit with every upstroke.  The other hand had one finger inside 
her hole, pounding in and out as fast as she could move it.

The tension was building quickly in her groin, and she felt it would 
only be a few more seconds before her release.  Grunting, gasping, 
breathing hard through her nose, she kept the suction going to his 
mouth, unwilling to let him go when she was that close to the top.

Then it happened.  She spasmed, moaning and whimpering into his mouth, 
shockwaves moving through her body, making her rock from side to side.
Richard could feel it when her orgasm hit, her mouth opening wide, 
breaking the suction, tongue slowing down.  He kept his mouth locked 
to hers all through the spasms, sucking at her, playing with her 
tongue, letting her breathe through his mouth.  Gradually she 
subsided, her moans and whimpers dying down, her hands slowing and 
then stopping, his hands releasing her breasts.

He kept his mouth locked to hers, her breath coming only through him, 
her gasps and pants slowing down to more normal breathing.  Finally, 
she wrapped her arms around his head, pressed her mouth hard against 
his for a second, and broke contact.  She took several long, deep, 
shuddering breaths.

"That was good.  Thank you."

He pulled her up to him, her head nestling into his shoulder.  
Pulling the covers over them both, he whispered into her ear.  
"Nap or breakfast?"

"Nasty person, making me choose.  You get breakfast ready then come 
back."

"Okay."  Richard got back up.  Brenda whimpered a bit when she felt 
him move away, then wiggled a little deeper under the covers.  She 
watched him put on his robe and leave, then closed her eyes.

**********************************************************************

Walking into the kitchen, Richard heard the shower start up.  He 
wondered a bit at the length of time it took for them to actually 
start the water, then decided that whatever they were up to was none 
of his business.

Down in the kitchen, poking through the 'fridge and cupboards, he 
worked out what he had enough of to feed everybody.  Toast, some 
bacon, a few sausages, pancake mix, eggs, orange juice, and milk.  
Plenty for now.  Of course, with one (his sister), possibly two 
(thinking about upstairs), maybe three (listening to the squeals in 
the bathroom) extra mouths to feed, he'd certainly need to stock up.

As he worked on breakfast, the laughter in the shower died down, 
becoming quieter and harder to hear.  Then he started to hear the odd 
loud moan or gasp.  Those two certainly weren't being quiet or shy 
about what they were doing.  They also succeeded in bringing his 
member to full attention, which distracted him quite a bit from his 
cooking.

A little while later, as he was laying out breakfast on the table, the 
bathroom door opened.  The shower had stopped several minutes ago due 
to a lack of hot water (he'd checked), so he knew they'd be done 
shortly.  Vicky came out first, hair wrapped in a towel, with another 
one wrapped around her body, covering her from her chest to upper 
thigh, leaving a lot of leg exposed.

Vicky saw him, winked, and blew him a kiss.  Then she saw the food
on the table.  "Breakfast!  Goody!  I'm starved!"

Caitlin came out, wearing the same as Vicky, except that the towel
barely covered her, going from her nipples to just below her crotch
in front, and just barely covering her buns in the rear.  She saw him, 
then saw breakfast on the table, and blushed.  "I thought you were 
still upstairs in bed."

"No, I've been down here for a while, fixing breakfast.  I heard the 
two of you working up a healthy appetite, so I made lots.  I know I'm 
hungry, and I think Brenda is too."

She saw him glance down at the bottom of the towel and smiled a bit.  
She also saw the bulge in the front of his robe, and thought she knew 
what had caused it.  "I guess you're going to have to get used to 
girls running around here, aren't you, big brother."  With that, she 
deliberately sat down, giving him a good view of her legs, thighs, and 
hips, and glimpses of more every time she reached for something.

He sighed, heading for the stairs and Brenda.  It *was* going to 
take a lot of getting used to.  His sister had definitely *not* been 
like that when he was living at home.  Mom would have had hysterics, 
and dad would probably have killed her.  He thought he liked her 
better this way.

Seeing that Brenda was asleep, he sat softly on the bed, leaning over 
to nibble and kiss her neck and face.  One hand snaked its way under 
the covers and began massaging and fondling a breast.  She moaned, and 
slowly opened her eyes.

"Mornin' sleepyhead.  Time for breakfast.  Let's go, the food's 
getting cold already.  And if you don't hurry, there won't be any left 
for you.  Our sisters are down there right now, eating enough for all 
of us."

"Awright, okay, I'm coming.  Don't I get a shower first?  You 
promised."

"No shower until after breakfast, I'm afraid.  Those two didn't leave 
us any hot water."

"They're up?"

"I thought I said that already.  Mostly up.  Not dressed yet, but up.
It seems to be a come-as-you-are breakfast, so it doesn't much matter 
if you're dressed or not."  She looked at him a little strangely.  
"They're both fresh out of the shower, wearing nothing but a smile and 
a towel, having great fun teasing me.  You can stay up here if you 
want, but I'm hungry.  See you downstairs."

Walking back into the kitchen, Richard saw that he'd been right.  Both 
girls were definitely hungry, eating and chatting with each other.
Caitlin hadn't bothered to adjust her towel, so he was still being 
treated to a peep show.  He sat down and started to fill a plate for 
himself.  "Brenda's awake, and should be down in a few minutes.  That 
is, she will be if she woke up enough to be hungry."

A few minutes later, Brenda came down, wearing her nightie and a long 
robe.  She gave Richard a quick kiss, sat down, and started in on her 
breakfast.

**********************************************************************

Long after the eating was done and everything was cleaned up, Vicky 
and Caitlin were sitting on the porch, enjoying the view and the 
sunshine.  Brenda and Richard had gone off to pick up some groceries 
for lunch and dinner, after a short, rather unsatisfactory shower 
(due to a shortage of hot water), leaving the two of them alone.

They sat there for a while, not saying anything, just getting used to 
being with each other.  Finally, Vicky broke the silence.

"Caitlin, who's Angie?"

Caitlin didn't answer right away, sitting there, staring out at the 
beach.  After a long pause, she spoke.

"Where did you hear that name?"

"From you.  Last night.  The first time we did it.  You were crying 
her name before we started.  Is she your lover?"

Caitlin sat back, taking a few deep breaths, fighting down the 
feelings of loss and pain she knew were there.  "Okay, so now I'm 
going to have a frank emotional talk with an eleven year old girl, one 
that I just met yesterday, who has already made love to me.  I can 
handle it if I stay calm.  Stay.  Calm."

Taking a few deep breaths, she replied.

"She was my best friend, and my lover for a while."

"Did she die or something?"

"No, nothing that tragic, but sometimes it feels like it.  Her father 
found us in bed together one evening while we were making love and had 
an absolute fit.  He was going to call the police and have me arrested 
for seducing and raping his daughter."

"How old was she?"

"Fourteen, three years younger than me.  She convinced her mother that 
I hadn't raped her or anything like that, but her father was 
determined that I wasn't going to ruin his daughter for life.  His 
ultimatum was that I had to leave town and never see Angie again, or 
face charges."  After a short pause, and a glance toward Vicky, who 
was still looking out over the beach, Caitlin continued.  "The only 
people who know about this are Angie, her mother and father, Richard, 
and now you."

"It must hurt to go through something like that.  I don't think I'd 
like her dad."

"Well, until that day, he was a pretty nice person.  He just couldn't 
handle thinking of his daughter becoming a lesbian."

"A lesbian?  Is that like what we are?"

"Maybe, maybe not.  I'm not, and you probably aren't either."

"What is a lesbian then?"

"A lesbian is a woman who only loves other women, and won't or can't 
love a man.  Some choose that lifestyle, some dislike or even hate 
men, and some say they are born to it."

"I don't think I am one then, 'cause someday I want to go out with 
boys and get married and have babies.  When I'm older.  Did you have 
any other lovers?  I know you haven't done it with a guy yet."

"No, I haven't had any other lovers.  And how do you know I haven't 
done it with a guy?"

Vicky grinned and looked at Caitlin.  "'Cause you got a hymen.  I felt 
it."  Caitlin blushed and looked away.

"Okay miss smarty pants.  Now it's your turn.  How many other lovers 
have you had?  And don't try and tell me I was the first.  I haven't 
had much practice, but even I can tell you've done this a lot more 
than me."

It was Vicky's turn to blush and turn away.  After a while she 
answered, speaking softly and quietly.

"Two.  Only dad and Brenda know about them.  Dad thinks I talked to 
mom about it, but I haven't.  I think she knows now, and I'm probably 
in trouble."

"So why me and why now?  Especially in front of everybody."

Vicky spent some more time thinking, staring over the beach.

"Donna moved away a couple of months ago, her dad got transferred at 
work or something.  When she moved, I hurt.  Dad and Brenda tried to 
help, but didn't know what I needed.  After a while, it didn't hurt so 
much, but it never went away.  I don't know too many people around 
here except the kids in school, and wouldn't dare talk to any of them 
'cause they'd think I was weird."

Caitlin kept quiet, letting Vicky gather herself together, waiting
for her to continue.

"When I saw Brenda yesterday morning, I knew she got someone, 
probably Richard.  The hurt started coming back.  It got worse all 
day.  At supper, I decided.  I knew you were Richard's sister, so you 
were probably okay, you were new, you didn't seem that upset about 
Richard and Brenda (mom didn't think I knew yet), and looking at 
Brenda got you hot.  I could see it.  I needed someone bad.  I checked 
with Dad first, and he let me know it would be okay with him.  So I 
went for you.  I hope you're not mad."

Caitlin could almost hear the pleading, the need for acceptance in 
Vicky's voice.  She could picture Angie going through the same thing, 
needing someone to hold on to.  She was having a hard time holding 
back her tears, and knew she wouldn't be able to stop them for much 
longer.

"Vicky, I need a hug.  Please?"

Vicky turned and climbed into Caitlin's lap.  Both were crying, 
hanging on to each other, letting the tears wash away their pain.
They were still holding each other when Mary stepped onto the porch.


**********************************************************************

<< End of chapter 5>>

Next chapter - the babysitter, Vicky's great love,
               Vicky's punishment.


(Like I said, some of the juicy stuff, some more story.  If it wasn't 
for the story, I wouldn't be doing this, and you wouldn't get the 
juicy bits, so there.  Anyway, I think I may need a new monitor.  The 
screen got rather blurry a few times when I was writing parts of these 
last two chapters. ;-)  Ah well, maybe I should try writing for 
Harlequin instead.)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 6/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 14:54:38 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 6 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - the babysitter, Vicky's great love, 
                  Vicky's punishment.

**********************************************************************

Mary and her husband Will had had a long talk that morning about their 
daughters Vicky and Brenda, but most of it was about Vicky, what she 
had hidden from her mother, how she had lied to her father and sister, 
and about her behaviour the previous evening.

Apparently, Vicky had been involved in a couple of heated sexual 
affairs without anyone knowing about it.  Will found out about the 
second one after the other girl had moved away, and been told by 
Vicky about the first one.  He'd found her in her room in the middle 
of a crying session, and she'd told him everything.  She also said 
that she'd talked to Mom already, and told her the same as she'd told 
him, and that she'd get over it faster if nobody said anything about 
it anymore.  Somewhere in the middle of their conversation, Brenda 
walked in on them, having overheard enough to realize what was going 
on, wanting to know the whole story and if she could help.

It ended with Will and Vicky both agreeing not to talk about her  
problems with anyone outside the family, and also agreeing not to 
mention or refer to those incidents where Vicky could hear.  She said 
she'd get over it faster that way.

After listening to all that, Mary told her husband that Vicky had 
never said anything to her about it, ever, and why hadn't he talked 
to her about it.  It turned out Vicky was somewhat to blame there as 
well.  During the weeks following her confession to her father, she 
hung around the house a lot, and crawled into bed with them a few 
times.  Since nothing was said about it, Will assumed that Mary did 
know what was going on, and was following the same instructions, not 
to mention it while Vicky was around.  After that, other matters took 
on more importance, and the situation started sliding into the 
background.  Vicky spoke with her father a few times, talking at 
length about how she felt, and how she thought she was getting over 
Donna.  Vicky was her old self around the house, and wasn't having any 
more crying jags, so Will just let the matter slide.  Until the
previous night.

They both realized that Vicky had gone through a hard emotional time, 
and agreed that if Vicky and Caitlin hit it off, they wouldn't 
interfere with things too much, at least not right away.  Vicky did 
need to be disciplined for lying, and a couple of weeks being grounded 
would probably be adequate.  It would do for a punishment, and give 
Vicky and Caitlin some time to cool off.

Mary went over to Richard's place a little before lunch, to see what 
was happening, and to bring Vicky home for a long chat.  When she got 
there, things were a little different than what she'd expected.


Vicky and Caitlin were still on the porch when Mary arrived.   Caitlin 
was reclining, stretched out in the lounger, with Vicky curled up in 
her lap, head buried in Caitlin's shoulder.  Caitlin had her head 
turned into Vicky's neck and shoulder as well, so you couldn't see 
either of their faces.  It looked like they were necking, right there 
in the open.

Mary sat down in the other lounger, sitting upright, looking at the 
two girls.  Listening carefully, she heard the odd muffled sob and a 
bit of sniffling.

"Vicky, is everything all right?"  Vicky turned her head to look at 
her mother, letting her see both of their faces.  They were both 
red-eyed, with streaks running down their cheeks.  It looked like both 
had done some serious crying.

"I'm okay mom."  She slid down a little lower on Caitlin, laying her 
head down on the bigger girl's chest, hugging her tight with both 
arms, looking at her mother, blinking away the last few tears.  
Caitlin, her arms still around Vicky, gave her a small squeeze.

"You both look terrible.  What's the matter?"

When Vicky didn't answer, Caitlin did.

"We'll be okay in a little while.  We've been talking.  It seems Vicky 
and I have a few things in common.  I take it you and your husband had 
a discussion about Vicky this morning?"

"Yes, but why would you be asking about that?"

"Like I said, we've both had some similar experiences.   She told me 
a little bit about what's been happening in her life and what's going 
on right now, and I've told her a little bit about my past.  We've 
been commiserating.  So what have you decided to do about us?"

"What do you mean, 'do about us'?"

"Well, Vicky's already told me about how she lied to her Dad and 
Brenda.  She knows she's in trouble for that, and expects to be 
punished for it.  But what she's really worried about, and me as well, 
is what you're going to do about us, meaning me and Vicky."

Vicky was just lying there through all that, letting Caitlin do the 
talking, blinking back the tears, sniffling every once in a while, 
listening, and watching her mother.

"Well, Will and I had decided on something, but now I'm not too sure 
about what we'd planned.  What I think I'd like is for Vicky (looking 
her daughter in the eye) to tell me the whole story, right from the 
start.  Okay, Vicky?  Ready to come home and tell me about it?"

"I'd rather stay here, Mom.  I'd feel a lot better telling you about 
it here than at home right now."  She and Caitlin both shifted a bit, 
making themselves a little more comfortable.

"All right, but let me get comfortable first."  Mary stood and turned 
her lounger so it was partially facing the two girls.  After 
stretching out, she looked at her daughter.  "Okay then, I want to 
hear the whole story, right from the start, and don't leave anything 
out."

**********************************************************************

<<Vicky's story, edited, with many details filled in>>

It started about a year ago, when Vicky was ten.  Mom and dad were out 
for the night and weren't expected back until sometime the next 
afternoon.  Their babysitter, a sixteen year old girl both parents had 
known for a few years, put each of the kids to bed and then curled up 
in their parents bed to sleep (the standard arrangement).

You couldn't really call Robyn pretty, let alone beautiful, but she 
was somewhat cute, with an air of innocence around her.  She did make 
the best of what she had, keeping her light brown shoulder-length hair 
shiny, clean, and well done up, using only a little makeup, mostly to 
enhance her grey-blue eyes (her best feature), and making sure her 
pearly-whites were exactly that.  She was fairly short at 4'11", and a 
little chubby.  Her breasts were medium sized, about a 'B' cup, and 
fairly firm, considering her figure.

Sometime during the night a thunderstorm broke out.  The repeated 
claps of thunder and flashes of lightning woke Vicky up and frightened 
her enough that she ran from her bed and crawled in with Robyn (the 
babysitter).  Robyn tried to comfort Vicky, hugging her, petting her, 
and stroking her back.  Eventually Vicky calmed down, but Robyn didn't 
stop the cuddling and petting.  Vicky was enjoying it in a sleepy sort 
of way, so she didn't object when the touching became more intimate.  
Robyn worked on Vicky for quite some time that night, eventually 
bringing her to her first real orgasm.  She went back to sleep lying 
in Robyn's arms, still being cuddled and caressed, and feeling very 
warm and cozy.

After that night, Vicky ended up in bed with Robyn every time Robyn 
babysat, usually two or three times each month.  Robyn brought Vicky 
along slowly, never pushing, teaching her how to accept pleasure from 
another woman, and how to give it in return.  Vicky, at age ten, had 
been brought into her sexuality.

Robyn introduced Donna to Vicky about six months after Vicky's first 
sexual encounter.  

Donna was a shy, quiet girl, still quite short (4'2") but starting 
to sprout and develop.  Her hair was a dark honey-blond, kept short in 
almost a page-boy cut.  Her face was very nice and well-proportioned, 
showing some of the beauty that would be hers when she grew older.  
Her body was also starting to develop some of the charms she would 
have later, with long, slender legs, delicate, expressive hands, 
breasts that were starting to cone out, and the beginnings of a real 
figure, with a real waist, nicely developing hips, and a well-rounded 
bottom.  The boys were beginning to notice.

Vicky's parents were both required to be out of town for the night, on
rather sudden notice, and were having a hard time finding a sitter.
Finally, after some fast negotiations, they managed to get Robyn, but 
with a compromise.  Robyn was already committed to babysitting another 
couple's eleven-year-old daughter overnight, so it was agreed that 
Robyn would bring the other girl with her to sleep over, after 
everyone's parents had given their permission.  Robyn herself had 
actually made the suggestion.

When Vicky found out that Robyn was going to babysit, but that another 
girl would be coming over as well, she got into a bit of a mood.  
Those special times with Robyn had become a very important part of 
Vicky's life.  She didn't know if she'd get any time with her friend 
for their 'special' playing, because Donna would be sleeping in her 
parents' bed too.

That afternoon and evening were somewhat strained.  Donna was a shy, 
withdrawn girl, quite unlike Vicky and Brenda, and didn't join in 
much with their playing and joking.  Vicky was also feeling jealous of 
the way Donna and Robyn sometimes looked at each other.  She 
recognized that look, because it was the same one her friend 
occasionally gave her.  When putting the girls into their beds, Robyn 
whispered to Vicky "It's okay.  You're welcome to sneak in later.  We 
can still hug and cuddle.  You'd like that, wouldn't you?"  

Feeling better, Vicky whispered back "Yes, please.  I like hugs and 
cuddles."

A short while later, she was peeking into her parents' bedroom.  Robyn 
was there, lying under the covers in the middle of the bed, with Donna 
snuggled up tight to one side, arm wrapped around Robyn's waist, head 
pillowed on the older girl's shoulder.  Vicky was feeling a little 
jealous, and was very nervous about climbing into bed with the two of
them.

Vicky saw Robyn look at her and wave for her to come in.  When she saw
Donna open her eyes, she saw a shy, rather inviting smile appear on 
the girl's face.  Seeing that, she felt a little better about joining 
them for cuddles and jumped up into the bed.  Worming her way under 
the covers, she snuggled up close to Robyn, resting her head on her 
friend's other shoulder, and putting an arm around her waist.  When 
her arm touched Donna's, she felt something, almost like a small 
shock, run up her arm and down to her groin.

Vicky felt Robyn relax, and heard her give out a big sigh.

The older girl hugged both of them for a minute, then pulled them both 
up a little bit.  "Donna, this is my special friend Vicky.  Vicky, 
this is my special friend Donna."

Robyn then shocked Vicky by leaning over a bit to nuzzle and kiss with
Donna, like lovers, like they did together.  She was just as shocked
when Robyn did that to her too, and she could see the surprise on
Donna's face.  And something else.

There was a sort of deep hunger growing in the young girl's eyes as 
she looked back at Vicky, something Vicky had never seen.  It seemed 
to spark an electric shock deep inside the ten year old that ran right 
through her body.  That was something she'd never felt before, either.

For some reason, Vicky couldn't seem to look away from Donna's eyes.  
They had captured her, and wouldn't let her go.  She was a little
scared of this, but was also thrilled, feeling a tension building up
between them, running back and forth between their eyes, something 
that wasn't going to let either one of them free.

After what felt like hours, but was only a few seconds, Vicky saw
Donna's hand reach up and start to caress Robyn's breast.  With only a
little hesitation, she copied those motions.  Those eyes made it feel
like they were caressing each other's breasts.  Donna then smiled,
letting Vicky know that this was what she was hoping for, and that
Donna was now in control.

Watching carefully, she saw Donna lower her head and start kissing
Robyn's cheek and neck, never breaking eye contact.  Slowly and
carefully she followed suit.  Vicky could almost feel Donna's lips and
tongue touching and caressing her own face.

After lifting her head again, Donna's hand disappeared under the 
covers, coming out again a few seconds later, pulling up the bottom of 
Robyn's negligee.  Vicky felt her hand doing the same, almost by 
itself, hardly needing her when following Donna's lead.  With some 
cooperation from the teenager, her negligee was eventually tossed to 
the side.  This left the brunette's breasts exposed, something that 
Donna immediately took advantage of.

Vicky watched Donna licking and kissing Robyn's breast, sucking up the
nipple and teasing it with her tongue and teeth.  Hardly noticing,
she was doing the same thing with the other breast.  Her whole 
attention was focused on the hunger and desire she saw in Donna's 
eyes, and on the need being opened up within herself by those same 
eyes.

Deep inside her, she felt a fire erupt, running up to her nipples
and down to her pussy, finally stopping in and igniting her small 
clit.  This sent a wave of pleasure through her, causing her to 
shudder slightly.

As she watched, Donna's eyes narrowed for a second as that wave passed
from Vicky to her, and ignited the same fires within her.  Vicky 
smiled, knowing then that Donna was feeling exactly the same things 
she was, and they both knew it.  Donna was now kissing her way down 
Robyn's side, over her hip, and down the outside of her leg, pushing 
the covers back as she went.  Vicky was still copying her every move.

Robyn was watching this interplay between the two girls with 
fascination, tinged with some of her initial nervousness about 
bringing them together like this.  She had hoped they'd become good 
friends, and it looked like things were going to be better than she 
thought they might.  It was unsettling, though, the way the two of 
them were staring at each other, and the way Donna had taken charge, 
something she'd never done before.

When Donna got to Robyn's knee, she pulled it up and out, away from 
the other leg, leaving that teenage pussy open and inviting.  She then 
kissed and nibbled her way down to Robyn's toes.  Vicky, still staring 
into the girl's eyes, was with her all the way, unable to turn away 
from her gaze, still copying her every move.

For the first time since they started, Donna looked away from Vicky's
eyes.  They traced a line along the inside of Robyn's leg, from just
below where Vicky was down to Robyn's waiting pussy.  She looked back 
into Vicky's eyes, smiling a little, inviting, daring the girl to keep 
following her lead.  Donna then turned away, moving herself in between 
those legs, nibbling and kissing her way up from Robyn's ankle, 
heading towards that damp, overheated slit.

Vicky couldn't resist the invitation.  She quickly moved into the same
position on the other leg and started kissing her way up as well.  She 
could almost feel the satisfaction coming from Donna, as she felt 
Vicky move into position.

As they both moved closer to Robyn's center, Vicky occasionally felt a
touch from Donna's shoulder or hip or thigh, each touch sending a 
thrill running through her body, setting off tiny shudders and 
gasps.  Feeling and hearing these same things coming from Donna made 
it even more exciting, feeding back on itself, intensifying the 
reaction.  Those touches became more and more frequent, lasting longer 
and longer, until Vicky's side was pressed up against Donna's, giving 
them both an almost continuous buzz.

She felt Donna's hand slide on top of hers.  Not really knowing what 
to do, but not wanting the girl to move her hand away, Vicky curled 
her fingers up into those other fingers, intertwining with them, and 
hanging on.

Robyn was starting to feel a little frustrated by now.  It was quite 
apparent, despite the fact that they were both playing with her body, 
that they were paying far more attention to each other than to her.  
'Ah well,' she thought to herself, 'it's your own fault.  You brought 
them together, you face the consequences.  I just hope they get me off 
before they start in on each other.'

Eventually they were both almost at the point where her legs joined.
Just before their cheeks touched, Vicky watched Donna slide up and 
over Robyn's leg, reversing her direction, almost moving into a 
sixty-nine position.  Her chest was on Robyn's stomach, and she began 
to lick and nibble Robyn's mound and the upper portion of her dripping 
slot.

Vicky pushed Robyn's other leg up at the knee, wiggling her body
underneath and, lying on her side, began to lick and kiss the bottom
parts of that slit, nibbling her way up from the puckered little
anus to just above the dripping hole, pausing long enough to dip in
and lap up as much of that sweet nectar as she could.  She then licked
her way back down, tickling and tasting with the tip of her tongue.

Vicky felt a light touch on her calf.  Someone's hand, probably 
Robyn's, was caressing her, slowly moving up the inside of her leg.  
She spread herself wide, suddenly wanting someone to do something with 
her pussy.  As the hand moved higher, she moaned in anticipation, 
needing release from the tensions developing inside her.  When that 
hand finally reached her aching slit, she whimpered a bit in relief.  
Hearing Donna's long, drawn-out groan, she was certain that another 
hand had finally reached her pussy as well.

All this tongue lashing was having an effect on Robyn.  Vicky could 
feel the teen's muscles bunching and relaxing and her hips starting to 
jerk and twist.  All of a sudden Robyn started to spasm, her climax 
hitting with little warning.  Vicky licked and sucked at that juicy 
hole, lapping up all the creamy drippings, not wanting any to go to 
waste.

She left the last few drops on her tongue, pushing them high up 
Robyn's slit, wanting to share with the other girl.  When Donna's 
tongue touched hers, Vicky almost climaxed on the spot, the electric 
thrill from that contact running through her body felt soooo delicious 
and intense.  It was all too soon when Donna pulled back a bit to 
continue her assault on Robyn's clit.

That hand playing with Vicky's pussy was finally getting somewhere.  
There were ripples of pleasure running out from the finger moving in 
and out of her aching love-hole, and the sweet sensations coming from 
her clit as it was being massaged sent tingles all through her body.  
It felt wonderful, but oh-so-slow!  Right now she wanted it hard and 
fast, but no amount of wiggling or whimpering made any difference to 
the hand torturing her between her legs.

Moaning in frustration, she started tonguing and licking Robyn's hole
with a fast, hard rhythm.  She could feel her friend quickly working 
up to another climax, and then felt it hit as her tongue was grabbed 
and squeezed by Robyn's vaginal muscles.  More juice started flowing, 
thicker and creamier than before.  Vicky lapped up everything her 
tongue could reach, this time saving it in her mouth for sharing.

Sliding her tongue up higher, moving to Robyn's clit, she again felt
Donna's tongue touch hers, with the same electric tingles running out
from that contact to the rest of her body.  Using her tongue, she 
began to spread the creamy nectar she'd saved in her mouth on and 
around Robyn's clit.  Donna's tongue lapped up everything, then went 
travelling around again, on and in that pussy.

She could feel Robyn's body start to jerk and spasm as another wave of 
orgasm hit.  This time, Vicky started working on the brunette's clit, 
sliding over and around Donna's tongue, which was doing the same 
thing, and driving Robyn over the edge again, and again.  The hand 
working on her own pussy was jerking around almost randomly before 
it stopped altogether.

The two of them relentlessly attacked that defenseless little nubbin 
with their tongues, stopping only when they heard Robyn whimpering and 
moaning for them to stop, please, she couldn't take any more.

Vicky's head fell back onto the bed.  She was breathing rapidly, still 
moaning softly, still needing release.  She could hear Robyn gasping 
and panting for air, coming down from the intense orgasms she'd been 
put through.  Suddenly there was a pair of lips on hers and a tongue 
forcing its way into her mouth, startling Vicky with the onslaught.  
She could still taste Robyn's flavors on that tongue, and it was 
absolutely delicious right then.

Wrapping an arm around Donna's head, Vicky returned the kiss with all 
the fire and passion she felt inside her, sliding her tongue into
Donna's mouth, then trying to suck that other tongue into her throat.

A minute or two later, Vicky felt the hand in her gash start to move
again, picking up the pace, quickly speeding up to a hard, steady 
rhythm, one she knew would set her off.  Whimpering in anticipation, 
she could hear/feel Donna moaning through their kiss, probably 
receiving the same treatment herself.

When Vicky's first orgasm hit, it was sudden and hard.  Her hips were 
jumping and thrusting, her legs closing and opening, pussy walls 
spasming and grabbing the finger in there.  She felt none of that, 
lost in a haze of intense pleasure for those long, drawn-out seconds.  
Rolling through her like a wave, it started from her groin and washed 
into every muscle in her body, rising to a crest before allowing her 
to slide down towards normalcy.  She tried to pull Donna tighter into 
their kiss, moaning and whimpering with pleasure and release.  When it 
subsided, that need was still there, not quite as bad, but still 
almost desperately seeking release.  Thank god that hand kept up its 
actions.


Next was Donna.  Vicky could feel it.  Donna almost managed to jerk 
her head back from their kiss, but Vicky held her tight.  It was a 
hard one - she heard/felt Donna moaning, almost screaming, crying into 
her mouth, and could feel the shudders from Donna's release right 
through their kiss, setting off another orgasmic wave in her own 
body.  This one was smaller, a short surge of pleasure through her 
entire being, leaving behind a tingling sensation.

All through this, that hand in her crotch kept up its relentless 
pounding action.  Vicky craved it right now, wanting it to go faster 
and harder, she needed release again so bad it almost hurt.

This went on for a little while longer, Donna and Vicky setting each 
other off on major and minor climaxes.  Just when Vicky felt like she 
couldn't take any more, Donna gave a final moan and shudder and rolled 
away from her.  Vicky, whimpering, also rolled away, finally breaking 
contact with that relentless hand.  Her arm was touching Vicky when 
she stopped, not wanting to break contact.  That deep-seated need and 
desire inside her that Donna had brought to life was still there, but 
felt dull and distant, her body being too tired for anything more 
right now.

After a few minutes rest, she felt Robyn's hands on her body, pulling
her up higher on the bed, breaking her contact with her new lover.  
Opening her eyes, she saw Robyn pull Donna up to her other side, 
laying her down to rest.  When they were both settled, Donna touched 
her, reaching over top of Robyn.  Vicky climbed over top of both 
girls, finally settling back into bed behind Donna, fitting herself to 
the girl's body spoon-style, wanting as much contact between them as 
she could get.

She felt Donna's shivers and heard her soft moans as their bodies came
together.  With her free arm, Vicky reached over to Robyn, pulling
the three of them into a tighter embrace.  Donna's hand covered her 
own, then she her fingers with Vicky's in a tight grasp.  That's how 
they fell asleep.

Vicky was awakened very early in the morning by what felt like 
tickling on her feet.  Donna was no longer in her arms, so she opened 
one eye.  Robyn had rolled away a little during the night, over to the 
other side of the bed.  Her new lover was nowhere to be seen.  Then 
she felt the tickling on her feet again.  Rolling over, she was 
suddenly face-to-foot with the blonde.

Feeling the licks and kisses running all over her feet and toes, Vicky
began to return them, nibbling and sucking on Donna's toes.  She then
began to slide down the bed, along Donna's ankles, then her shins and
knees, throwing back the covers to get at her thighs.  Finally Vicky 
reached Donna's hairless mound.

This long, slow journey, feeling Donna's caresses, licks, kisses and
nibbles the whole way, re-awakened that need in Vicky.  She could feel 
it burning in her groin, as hot and strong as ever.  When Donna's 
moist, cool tongue touched her mound, Vicky gasped and shivered, 
opening her legs up wide.  She dove into Donna's hot, wet snatch, 
sucking and licking at all the cool, sweet nectar, driving Donna into 
an almost immediate climax.

When the waves of pleasure stopped rocking her body, Donna returned 
the favor, licking and sucking on Vicky's lower and inner lips and her 
clit, quickly pushing Vicky to the edge as well.  Vicky felt it build 
quickly in her groin, growing and releasing so fast it was 
incredible.  It felt like small tremors erupting all over her body, 
echoes of the small earthquake taking place wherever Donna's tongue 
was touching her.

Vicky could feel her body tiring quickly, not yet fully recovered from 
last night.  She rested her head on Donna's thigh, wrapping her arms 
around Donna's waist to hold her close.  She felt Donna copying her, 
doing the same thing, preparing for a long session of very tired 
lovemaking.

Using only her tongue, Vicky licked up and down Donna's slot, playing 
with and teasing her clit.  It was surprising to Vicky how quickly and 
easily Donna slid up and into another orgasm.  Pulling back her tongue 
to let her recover, Vicky closed her eyes and rested.

After a minute or two, Vicky felt Donna's tongue slide into her 
dripping snatch and start to tease and tickle her.  Feeling completely 
relaxed, she just let the sensations build inside her.  She was almost 
shocked when she felt herself sliding into another mild orgasm after 
what seemed like only a minute or two.  It was so delicious, having it 
wash back and forth in her limp body, those sweet sensations tickling 
all through her without any of the intense release of those from last 
night.

When she recovered a bit, she tongued Donna into another mild orgasm,
receiving another herself a few minutes later.  This one was even
softer, simply sliding in from nowhere, running electric tingles
through her entire body, then sliding away again.  It took so little
effort, yet felt so good, she wanted to keep this up forever.  Again,
as soon as her breath was back, she started on Donna again.

It was almost like they were trading the same orgasm back and forth, 
using their tongues to pass it from one mouth into the other's 
sensitive and throbbing clit.  Everything felt so nice right now, so 
warm, so comfortable, so perfectly wonderful.  It was as though she 
and her new lover were halves of a perfect orgasmic whole, suddenly
brought together.  She completely lost herself in this wonderful new 
playtime.

After some time, and countless small climaxes, she felt hands trying 
to pull her away from Donna.  She simply hung on tight to Donna's 
waist until the hands gave up.  She wasn't ready to stop yet.


Robyn woke up very early the next morning and didn't feel either of 
the girls beside her.  Opening her eyes, she looked over to see them 
both on the other side of the bed, covers thrown back, lying on their 
sides in a sixty-nine position.  They each had their legs scissored 
apart, with their heads pillowed on each other's thigh, arms wrapped 
around each other's waists, mouths almost touching each others 
pussies.

They seemed to be asleep, but as Robyn watched, Vicky's tongue slid 
into Donna's slot to tease and play with her clit.  After a minute or 
two, Donna shuddered a bit, pulling her face into Vicky's crotch, 
moaning very quietly.  After the shudders and moaning stopped, both 
leaned back slightly, resting, seeming to sleep again.  A minute or so 
later, Donna's tongue slipped into Vicky's crack, repeating the 
performance Vicky'd just given, bringing Vicky to a small, shuddering 
orgasm.  After a minute or two of rest, Vicky started again.

This had apparently been going on for some time, as both girls were 
covered with a thin film of perspiration.  Both of their pussies were 
absolutely dripping with juices, and streaks of their cream and saliva 
ran down both sides of their thighs, leaving small wet patches on the 
bed under them.

After watching them both go through several mini-orgasms, Robyn 
thought it was about time they separated and got some more real 
sleep.  She tried to pull them apart, but all they did was grab on 
tighter, refusing to move or let go.  Neither had opened their eyes.

Sighing a bit, Robyn gave up trying to stop them.  Instead, she lay 
down behind Vicky, pulling the covers over them all, wrapping one arm 
around them both.  Every few minutes she could feel one or the other 
of the girls shudder as another climax hit.  She'd never heard of 
anyone being able to come this often, with what seemed to be very 
little stimulation.  She gave up counting their orgasms after a while 
and fell back to sleep.

Later that morning, but still fairly early, Robyn woke again.  The 
girls were in approximately the same positions, but this time they 
were definitely asleep.  Their arms were relaxed, bodies twisted 
slightly, heads tilted to the side, mouths open, breathing softly and 
steadily.  She smiled to herself, seeing them like this, knowing that 
they would be enjoying each others' company far more than their times 
with her.  Without her help, though they would never had gotten 
together.

She decided she'd better have her talk with them now, while the three 
of them had some time and some privacy together.  God only knew if a 
chance like this would come up again.  She woke them by giving them 
each a long kiss, licking the insides of their lips and playing with 
their tongues, still tasting of the juices from their pussies.  As they 
woke, they each responded to the kiss, playing with her tongue, 
sucking it deeper into their mouths.

Pulling them both up beside her, heads on pillows, she let them cuddle 
with each other and kiss quietly for a few minutes, caressing them 
both.

"Okay you two, you're going to have to break for a while.  I need to 
talk with you both."  Donna turned over, putting her back to Vicky, 
facing Robyn.  She'd pulled Vicky's hand with her, and was now holding 
it between her breasts.  Vicky pressed in tight, so she was touching 
Donna along their entire length.

"I've been hoping to get you two together for a while now, but didn't 
know how to do it, or how you two would react to each other.  This was 
a real break for me, making it a lot easier, and it looks like you two 
are getting along very well."  Both girls blushed, but Vicky gave 
Donna a kiss on the back of her neck. Donna squeezed Vicky's hand in 
reply.

"You see, this is probably the last time I'll be babysitting either of 
you."  She listened to their protests for a few seconds before 
carrying on.  "Yes, it will be the last time.  You see, I've found a 
real job now, working in an office, and I'll be starting in two 
weeks.  I've also got myself a steady boyfriend, one I think may be 
around for a long time.  This means I won't have any more time for 
babysitting."  She had a hard time continuing, looking at the tears in 
their eyes, and starting to cry a bit herself.

"This doesn't mean I don't love you both, because I do.  It's just 
that I'm getting older and need to do other things in my life.  You 
two are very special to me, and I'm going to miss you a whole lot.  
That's why I'm glad you are getting along so well.  I know what it's 
like to be without a special friend, I had to go through it before.  
You'll have each other now, so it won't seem so bad when I'm not there 
anymore."

"I Know you both go to the same school, so you'll be able to meet and 
talk with each other whenever you want.  One thing I thought you might 
do is to arrange regular sleep-overs at each others houses, something 
your parents probably wouldn't mind.  Well, what do you think?"

With that, all three girls started crying, hugging each other, telling
them how much they'd miss each other.

After the crying had died down, Robyn said that it was time to get up 
and mobile.  They did the usual things, showering, breakfast, and 
doing a lot of talking.  Brenda was surprised when Vicky told her 
about Robyn's new job and new boyfriend, wondering how come Vicky knew 
about it before she did.  They spent the rest of the day chatting and 
playing.  Donna didn't seem nearly as shy as before, joining in with 
the conversations and laughing at the jokes.  She seemed totally 
different from the shy little girl she'd been yesterday.

Donna and Vicky never did seem to become close friends at school.  
They'd decided it would be better to keep their relationship a 
secret.  They met regularly after school, and slept over at each 
other's houses as often as they thought they could get away with.  
They enjoyed each other's company a great deal, over and above the 
physical pleasure they gave each other.  Donna was one of the few 
really close friends Vicky'd ever had.

This all came to an end after only a few short months.  Robyn's dad 
was transferred to a new office across the state, getting a promotion 
and a raise as incentive.  It was a shock to Donna when her dad 
finally told her, and a bigger shock to Vicky when Donna told her 
she'd be moving away in a few weeks.  They cried in each others arms 
for a while, before deciding that it would probably be better if they 
didn't see each other for the last few weeks, knowing it would be too 
hard to hide their feelings from their friends and families.

Vicky had been hurting because of the loss of her special lover for 
more than two months before she found Caitlin.

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Mary was having a hard time fighting back the tears.

"So how come you never told anyone about this?"

"Well, before, I thought you'd both be mad at me.  Maybe you wouldn't
let me see Robyn or Donna any more.  After Donna left, I hurt a lot,
and felt real sorry for not telling you.  I knew you'd be mad when
you found out, so I just didn't say anything.  I'm sorry mom."

"It's okay, apology accepted.  Just remember in the future that you
should talk to us about these things.  We're not meanies you know,
we do understand how you feel.  We love you and want to help however 
we can."

"Okay mom.  Thanks."

"You realize of course that you're still going to be punished for 
lying to your father."

"Yes mom."

"We've already talked about it, and I think you should both hear what
it is.  Vicky, you're grounded for two weeks, starting tomorrow.  That
means the only time you step out of the house is to go to school.  No
going to friends houses, and no friends over either.  Is that clear?"

Vicky started crying softly, hanging onto Caitlin.

Mary relented slightly.  "Vicky, dear, I said you couldn't invite any
friends over.  I didn't say that your dad and I couldn't invite 
Richard or Caitlin over."

Vicky sniffled a bit, went over and climbed into her mothers lap.
"Thanks mom."  She cuddled in her mother's arms for a while.


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<< End of chapter 6>>

Next chapter - Lunch, a busy afternoon, voyeurs, a shower

(Wow.  Some history.  No wonder she got so hot this morning.  This is 
starting to get interesting.  Richard now has three young, very good 
looking virgins fooling around in his place.  He hasn't even popped 
the cherry he's been offered yet.  Wanna bet Brenda and Vicky have 
more surprises up their sleeves?)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 7/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 14:51:10 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 7 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - Lunch, a busy afternoon, voyeurs, a shower

**********************************************************************

Richard opened the door and looked around the porch.  Vicky was there,
sitting curled up in Mary's lap in one chair, while Caitlin was 
stretched out in another chair.  All three had been crying, that was 
obvious.

"Lunch is ready, if anyone's interested."

He got two nods and a subdued uh-huh for a reply.

He returned to the kitchen, where Brenda was still wearing a frown.  
Lunch, consisting of fresh deli buns, corned beef, ham, salami, swiss 
and cheddar cheeses, and various drinks, was ready.

"Come on, Brenda, quit pouting.  I'll pick some up next time I'm
shopping.  I promise!  I've never seen anyone put on such a display 
over a little thing."  Richard couldn't help chuckling.

"Don't laugh at me!  It's not funny!  I mean, how can you possibly
survive without it?  Isn't there a law somewhere that you gotta have
ketchup in the fridge?  If there isn't, I'll make one!"

"I think you're being more than a little silly.  Don't you think so 
too?"

She grinned.  "I guess.  I just can't believe there's anyone that 
doesn't have ketchup.  Whaddaya do when you eat hot dogs?"

"I use relish and onion."

"Eeew.  Onion?  I'm never gonna kiss you after you've had a hot dog."

"Why don't you head home and get some?  While you're there, invite 
your dad over for lunch.  Your mom's already here, so he's probably 
feeling abandoned."

"Okay!"  She ran off

Lunch was quiet, without much talking.  Vicky, Caitlin and Mary were 
still feeling the after-effects of their morning chat.  Richard, 
Brenda, and Will talked a bit about Richard's job, the classes he was 
still taking, Will's work, and a bit about Brenda's schoolwork.

After lunch, Richard insisted everyone was to come back for dinner.  
He'd picked up some steaks, and they'd have a nice barbecue to finish 
off the weekend.  It was agreed, barbecue at six, especially since 
they all needed to do some serious talking as well.  Mary told 
everyone about Vicky's grounding, saying that if they needed to know 
why, they could ask Vicky.

After lunch, Mary and Will went home (next door, such a long trip),
Brenda stayed and helped Richard clean up, and Vicky and Caitlin
seemingly disappeared.

When they were done, Richard asked Brenda.  "Any idea where our 
sisters have gotten to?"

Brenda laughed.  "Richard, think.  They're new lovers.  This is their, 
uh, second day together?  Last one for two weeks.  Where would you be, 
down at the supermarket?"

"Ouch!  You got me on that one.  Just remember, I'm not as young as 
you.  It'll take me some time to get used to this.  A few days ago I 
still thought you three were sweet innocent little kids.  Now I know 
better.  You're all horny little she-devils in disguise!"

"Right.  And don't you forget it!  Now then, we've got oodles of time
before supper, and I'm not gonna waste it either!  Besides, you still
owe me a nice shower.  Come on, and don't you dare make a fuss!"

When they got to the top of the stairs, they could both hear the moans
and whimpers coming from Caitlin's room, at the end of the hall.

"It looks like our sisters have a head start on us.  Wanna go peek?"

"Brenda!"

"Spoilsport."  Brenda followed Richard to his bedroom, then turned and 
ran down the hall.

Richard turned when he heard her footsteps.  "Brenda!  No!"  he said 
in a loud whisper.

She ignored him and opened the door to Caitlin's room.  "Okay you two.
Remember, it's mine and Richard's turn for a shower.  You get the
leftovers."  It was an interesting view.  Caitlin was spread-eagled
on the bed, hands grabbing at the top corners, knees bent, with thighs
wide open.  Her eyes were open, but glazed over and unfocused.  
Vicky's face was buried deep in her crotch, moving up and down very 
quickly.  Caitlin didn't notice Brenda, but Vicky looked up at her 
sister, her face wet, glistening with Bec's juices.  She smiled and 
nodded.

Turning back toward Richard, she shut the door.  The noises in the 
room, silenced for a few seconds, started up again.

"See, they hardly noticed."

"That's supposed to be something private!  No spectators.  Now promise 
me you won't do it again."

"Nope, can't promise that."  

"Brenda, please!"

"All right.  How about this then.  I promise if either of them tells 
me to get out and stay out, I will.  I won't do it again.  And you can 
tell them both about my promise.  Will that do?"

"That's not the same thing.  I don't like the idea of you just peeking
in on them whenever you feel like it.  Besides, it might give them 
ideas.  What if one of them decided to look in on us when 
we're ... uh ... doing ... whatever."

Brenda smiled, very seductively at Richard.  "That might be fun.  I've 
given you my promise, and that's as good as it gets.  It works both 
ways.  If they tell me to stay out of their room, then they have to 
stay out of our room.  Okay?"

"I guess."

"Now, you just stand there and don't move a muscle!"

Richard watched as she turned up the heat (again?) and walked back 
toward him, wiggling her hips.  She wrapped her arms around him and 
gave him a hug.  When he went to put his arms around her, she hissed 
at him "Don't you dare move until I tell you to!"  He dropped his arms 
back by his sides.

She began by slowly sliding down his front.  When her head reached his
crotch, she nuzzled him with her face, outlining his hardening
cock with her nose and her chin.  Undoing his shoes, she tugged up on
one leg.  "Lift."  He obediently lifted that leg, putting one hand on 
her head for balance.  When she'd stripped off his shoe and sock, she 
had him lift the other leg, repeating the performance.

For a few minutes, she caressed his feet, playing with each toe,
massaging his ankles, and running her hands partway up his calves.
Sliding back up his body, she paused for a moment to nuzzle his now
fully-hardened member.  Reaching up over her head, she undid his belt.

Standing up straight, she slowly pulled his shirt up and out from his 
pants.  Undoing the bottom couple of buttons, she slipped her arms 
inside his shirt and ran her hands around his lower stomach, sides, 
and back.  Pulling her arms out, she undid the next button, sliding 
her arms back inside for more caresses, only slightly higher than the 
time before.

Richard's breathing was getting heavy.  Brenda's caresses felt like
feather touches on his skin, so light and so cool, but where she 
touched, his skin burned.  He could feel that heat burning inward, 
centering on his groin, building up pressure oh so slowly.  The bulge 
in the front of his pants was getting bigger and starting to get 
uncomfortable.

She took an agonizingly long time to remove his shirt, finally sliding 
it down his arms and off his wrists.  She paused to suck every 
fingertip on each of his hands.  Reaching up, she teased and tickled 
his nipples, stopping to nibble and lick one of them.

Electric shocks were running from his nipples to his groin, each time
she licked or pinched one.  He still had his pants and shorts on, but 
he felt like he was close to climaxing.  He moaned.  "God, you're 
making me hot!  Much more, and I'll be cumming in my pants!"

"Don't you dare.  I've got something else in mind for that."

To Richard's relief, she did stop playing with his nipples.  Walking 
around behind him, she started stroking and touching his back, using 
the tips of her fingers, trying to memorize every bump, every groove, 
every muscle and bone there, seeing where he was sensitive.  He tried 
very hard to control himself, especially when she found the ticklish 
spots.

Once she was satisfied with his back, she moved around to the front.
Lowering herself down, she once again nuzzled his groin, massaging his
aching, hardened cock.  Richard groaned.  She was definitely getting 
to him.  Undoing his pants and pulling down the zipper, she slid her 
thumbs under his belt, one on either side, and reached around behind 
him, loosening his pants on the way.

Reaching as far around him as she could, she held him in a tight hug,
cheek resting against his stomach, just above his crotch.  Knees 
bending, she began to tug and pull his pants down, not releasing her 
hug, head still pressed against him.  As his pants went down, so did 
she.  Over top of his cock, past his balls, down his thighs to his 
knees, until she was sitting on the floor.  Pulling on one leg, she 
said "Up."

Still being obedient, he lifted one leg, then the other.  His pants 
joined his shirt, shoes and socks in a pile.  Seated on the floor,
Brenda looked up at Richard.  All he could see were her big, green,
lust-filled eyes looking back at him.  His cock felt huge and swollen,
ready to burst, and neither one of them were undressed yet!

He felt a tug on his shorts.  Still staring into his eyes, Brenda had
her hands fastened to the leg bands of his jockeys, one on either 
side, and was pulling them down.  They went down easily until the 
front got hung up on his cock.  It was so hard, it wouldn't pop out 
of the top.  He moved his hand to try and release his prick, but 
stopped when she whispered "Don't move."

She got up onto her knees, so her head was right at his crotch.  
Pulling out the waistband of his shorts with one hand, she reached in 
to grab his cock with the other.  As soon as her hand touched it, he 
jumped, and his whole body shivered for a second.  The room was hot 
and he was perspiring freely, but her touch still felt cool.  She 
lifted his member out of his shorts and licked the tip with a slight 
flick of her tongue.

"GOD!  Brenda, do that again and I'll be coming in your face.  I'm 
that close."

Smiling, she walked behind him again and pulled his shorts to his 
ankles.  "Step out."  He did.  Picking up his shorts in one hand, she 
slid her other hand up the inside of his leg, from the ankle, up his 
calf, past his knee, up the inner thigh, and then reached through to 
cup his balls in her palm.

He was shivering and sweating as her hand got higher and higher.  When
she touched his thigh, he jumped again.  When he realized where her 
hand was going, he tried to push himself up, getting on tiptoe to try 
and get away from her hand.  When she touched his balls, he jumped 
again, letting out a strangled gasp.

As she fondled his balls, he slowly sank back down onto his feet, 
knees spreading slightly, moaning.  "No more.  Please!  I'll explode 
if you don't stop!  Brenda, please!"

With a sigh, she released him, but her hand caressed his crotch, from 
under his balls, all the way to the top of his ass crack, before 
breaking contact.  That brought more moans.  Richard's breathing was 
erratic.  He couldn't remember the last time he was so worked up.  
His balls were hard and starting to ache, and his insides felt like 
they were on fire.  

"Okay, now it's my turn.  Step back and face the bed.  Don't move, and 
don't say anything, unless you can't help cumming."

Richard was now about six feet from the bed, with a clear view of what
Brenda was about to do.  She stood just in front of him, facing him.
Putting her hands up behind her head, she stretched, long and liquid
as a cat, arching her back, twisting one leg then the other, arms 
moving up and out, then down to her sides, and ended by hugging 
herself, squeezing in each thigh alternately.

"Remember, no talking, no touching."

Slowly, lazily, she began unbuttoning her blouse.  A single button at 
a time.  His eyes watched carefully.  His cock jerked every time one 
came undone.   After the last button was loose, she pulled her blouse 
open, at the same time turning her back to him.  He only caught a 
glimpse of her bra-covered mounds.  To Richard, it looked like she 
caressed her blouse off each shoulder.  It slid down her arms, and she 
caught it in her hands behind her back.  Using one hand, keeping her 
back to Richard, she daintily held out her arm and dropped the blouse 
on top of the growing pile of clothes.  Next came her bra.  Unclasping 
it, she shrugged it off her shoulders, catching it on her breasts.  It 
was also carefully dropped onto the pile.

Using both hands, she massaged and kneaded her breasts, playing with
the nipples with her thumbs.

"Ahhhh.  Ooooo, that feels good."  Without noticing it, her thighs 
clenched.  "I wish it were your hands and tongue doing this right 
now."  Her hands slid down from her breasts, down her stomach, and 
over her groin to her thighs.  Oooing, she let them slid around to the 
back of her legs, then up under her skirt to her panty-covered 
bottom.  He watched her hands massaging her hips and ass, showing off, 
hips rotating slowly in time to the movement of her hands.

Richard groaned and slitted his eyes, hardly able to stand it as he
watched her thumbs hook the elastic of her panties and pull them down
off her ass.  She continued her slow grind and massage, seemingly
oblivious to the moans coming from behind her.

Sighing, she stopped the massage.  She dropped her panties to her 
ankles and kicked them towards the clothes pile, followed quickly by 
her dress.  After another stretch, and some more groans from Richard, 
she leaned over, bent at the waist, to undo her shoes.

He was having trouble breathing properly.  Bent over like that, he 
could see everything clearly, her ass, her puckered little nether 
hole, her pussy, all the little beads of dew around the lips, crack 
glistening, red and moist, her breasts bobbing up and down, trying to 
hide behind her knees, and her little brown nipples, hard and 
puckered, occasionally grazing a leg.

Kicking her shoes off towards a corner, she stood up and stretched
again.  Richard let out a whimper.

Lazily, keeping her legs straight and her feet on the floor, Brenda
oozed out onto the bed.  Resting her head on her forearms, she spread
her legs, arched her back, and began a slow grind of her hips.

"So, do you like the view?"

It took all his self-control to stop himself from grabbing her hips 
and jamming his cock as far down into her cunt as it would go.  His 
balls were aching, his cock ready to explode, his insides knotted with 
lust and desire, and she was waving that delicious ass and cunt around 
in front of him in such an inviting manner he almost couldn't help 
himself.

"Yes" was all he could force out.

"You do have a lot of self control.  You've been very patient, now
it's time for your reward."  She pulled a pillow down a few feet from 
the top of the bed.  Patting it, she said "lay down here."  He did, 
with his feet hanging over the end of the bed.  He was still watching 
her.

"Let's see if I'm ready yet."  She moistened one finger by licking and
sucking on it.  Watching Richard, she moved that finger down in
front of her body until she reached her pussy.  Using the other hand
to spread her lips apart, she slid the finger in deep.

Her eyes snapped shut, her head jerked back, knees turned in, thighs
locked together, and she gasped.  Leaving her finger in place without
moving it, she took several long, shuddering breaths.  When her voice
came back, she said "Steaming hot, soaking wet, very sensitive.  I 
think I'm ready."

"Okay, spread your legs a bit.  Arms straight out to the sides.  Keep 
them there.  Remember, don't move, don't touch."  Richard complied.

Brenda climbed up on the bed, then straddled his chest, facing his
crotch.  "Remember, no touching no moving."  She leaned over until
she was resting on her knees and elbows.  Her cunt was only inches 
from Richard's face, lips engorged, glowing pink and shiny, open and 
letting him see everything.  Her tiny clit was swollen and 
red-looking, her inner lips spread slightly.  He could see inside her, 
and he watched her vaginal muscles rhythmically contract and open.  He 
couldn't help himself.  He blew on her pussy, very lightly.

Her thighs clenched and she whimpered.  "Richard, don't, or I'll
cum.  And if I cum first, I won't let you cum.  So stop it."

"Okay.  Just remember, I'm almost there.  It won't take much for me to
explode now."

Brenda licked the head of his cock, moistening it.  His entire body
jumped at the contact.  She sucked as much of his cock as would fit 
into her mouth, then began a slow pumping action, bobbing her head up 
and down.  Richard whimpered, it felt so good.  He got that familiar
feeling inside, knowing it would only be seconds before he came.

"God, I'm close."

It built quickly, with that steady suction on his cock, and the sight
and smell of her pussy in his face driving him up fast.  Suddenly, 
with little warning, he was there.

"Oh god.  I'm there.  I'm gonna cum.  God, yes!  AAAAUUGGGGGGG!!!!"  
Richard screamed, emptying his lungs.  Sucking in more air, all he 
could do was sob and gasp.

Just when he was about to squirt, when he thought she'd pull off and
watch him cum, she swallowed him, right to the balls.  He couldn't
stop it, he couldn't pull back.  He lost control.  His hips started 
jerking up and down, pumping his cock in and out of her throat, 
pushing deep for every pulse, each squirt of juice.  She kept her 
mouth and throat open, swallowing repeatedly, taking in everything, 
milking his cock of every drop.

He was still pumping deep in her throat when Brenda heard the door 
open.  Two worried-looking faces peered in, Vicky and Caitlin, both 
naked.  Brenda lifted the corners of her lips in a bit of a smile, 
pulled back a bit so she could breath again, and winked at them.  She 
kept his cock in her mouth, sucking hard, head bobbing up and down.

When they opened the door, the first thing that hit them was a wave of
damp heat.  Peering around the door, they saw Richard spread-eagled on
the bed, hips thrusting, his entire body writhing with the sensations.
Brenda was sprawled face-down on top of him with his cock buried in 
her throat, pumping in and out like crazy.  Both were dripping with 
sweat, and Brenda's stockings were soaked through in places.  It was a 
scene of utter depravity.  They backed out and shut the door, 
realizing that nobody was actually dying.  Looking at each other for a 
few seconds, they both smiled and ran for Caitlin's bedroom.

Brenda waited for Richard to recover somewhat, still nursing on his 
cock.  His hips finally slowed, then stopped, his body quit shaking, 
and his breathing became more even, changing to deep regular breaths 
rather than pants and gasps.  She knew he was back when she heard him 
moan "Oh God".

Her turn.  Sliding backwards, she jammed her twat against his face,
covering his mouth and chin.  "Do me!  Eat me!  Lick my pussy!  Don't 
stop until I say so!"  She started to grind her hips, sliding her 
pussy around on his face.  She was hot, too, and needed to get off 
badly, wanting his attentions, unable to wait for him to fully 
recover.

Richard wasn't quite back into the real world.  He heard Brenda, but 
what she said hadn't registered.  He did understand that the crotch 
being mashed into his face needed some attention.

Richard stuck out his tongue and licked, starting from her mound, and 
continuing all the way back to her puckered rear hole.  Brenda 
shivered, talking fast and high.  "Oh!  Oh!  Yessssss!   Do it!  Make 
me cum!  Pleeeeeaaaaase!"  On the third lick, her body bucked, tensing 
all over.  He could feel her muscles contracting in waves.  The next 
lick pushed her over.  She grabbed his hips, burying her face in his 
stomach, and screamed.  He kept licking her right through her orgasm, 
slowing as she came down.  Her voice was high, squeaky and faint, but 
could still be heard.  "Oh!  Oh my!  Oh!  Oh yes.  Don't you dare 
stop!"

He grinned when he heard that.  He was back in control of himself.  If 
she wanted to get off big time, he'd do his part.

Paying much more attention, he picked up the pace again.  Still 
licking in long strokes, he started making little detours, around her 
clit, up and over her pussy lips, then dipping into her hole for a 
taste of her secretions.  She was sopping wet, and he lapped up 
everything his tongue could reach.

Pausing for a second, he darted his tongue in and out of her hole
really fast, getting another gasp from her, then sucked her pussy lips
into his mouth.  Sticking his tongue out between them, he flicked at 
her clit with its tip.  When he felt her gasping for air, he moistened 
one finger and slid it into her twat to the second knuckle.  He felt 
her vagina spasm and grab his finger, then slowly relax.  She was 
breathing hard.  He began to finger fuck her, setting up a fast, hard 
pace, smacking her ass lightly with his palm each time his finger went 
in.

Letting her pussy lips slide out of his mouth, he wrapped his lips 
around her clit and sucked gently, licking at it's tip.  Still only a 
tiny nub, it didn't come out far.  He kept this up, alternating 
sucking her clit with running his tongue around it and up and down her 
slot.

When she came again, sobbing and crying into his stomach, he never 
slowed down.  He kept at it, continuing to slide his finger in and out 
even when her twat tried to grab it and pull it inside.

Richard didn't know how long she could keep that up.  Hell, he didn't 
know how long HE could keep it up.  His tongue was starting to get 
tired and his arm was a little sore.  But he wasn't about to stop.  
Despite his recent mind-numbing orgasm, he was getting hard again.

"Ooooo yes please again!  Make me come again!  Please!  Yes!  I'm 
gonna.. I'm gonna ..  I'm cumming!  Aaiiiiii!"

Richard gasped in surprise.  She'd seen his erection somehow, and 
stuffed it into her mouth.  Pushing her front up with her hands, 
leaving her pussy attached to his face, she began to bob her head up 
and down on his prick.  Sucking hard, she was determined to get every 
last squirt out of him before she collapsed, no matter how often he 
made her come.  She couldn't deep-throat him from that angle, but that 
didn't matter right then.

Feeling that, he sensed what she was trying to do.  Having just 
emptied his balls, he knew he could outlast her easily.  His pace 
slowed, bringing her to the edge but not letting her go over.  He'd 
give her a few more orgasms before he was ready, but spaced out, 
giving her some time to recover in between.

That was a learning experience for him too.  He was learning how she
reacted, where she was most sensitive, and the signals she gave off 
just before cumming and as she was cumming.  He wanted to push her 
over the edge at the same time he was ready to blow.

During that time, the door opened again, just a little.  Two sets of 
eyes peered in.  Richard never noticed.  Brenda noticed, but didn't 
care.  She came twice more before Richard felt he couldn't hold out 
any longer.  The first time, she slipped over before he realized what 
was happening.  The second time, he did it on purpose, to see how much 
it would take to drive her over.  Not much, at that point.

Feeling his insides ready to pop again, he pushed Brenda right to the
edge, his tired tongue and lips savaging her raw and swollen clit, his 
arm leaden and painful, but still pumping fast.  Her clit was sore, 
her pussy was sore, her arms hurt, her neck ached, her lips felt 
chapped, but she knew she needed one more big one, and sensed he was 
getting close too.

He felt himself letting loose, so he sucked her clit into his mouth 
and ran his tongue all over it, rubbing it hard, pushing her into a 
final mind-numbing orgasm.  It shot through her, locking up her body, 
all except for her head, which was still bobbing up and down on his 
cock.  She screamed onto his prick when her release hit, washing over 
her body, wracking her with spasms.  She stopped screaming and started 
swallowing when he filled her mouth with his cream.

She kept cumming, bobbing her head, sucking the juice out of him and 
swallowing it all.  Finally, after she had vacuumed out every drop of 
liquid, she collapsed, pulling her sore little pussy away from his 
face, still shuddering and moaning, her orgasm just ending.

Neither one heard the door shut, or the feet run down the hallway.

Vicky and Caitlin had been watching their siblings for a while, 
playing in each other's pussy's.  Both had climaxed once while 
watching the other two, and both were close to another.  When the 
show was over, Caitlin closed the door as quietly as she could, and 
both ran back to her bedroom.  Vicky left their door open a little 
(on purpose).  They climbed back onto the bed, into a sixty-nine 
position, and began to ravage one another.  Watching one's brother and 
the other's sister go at it for that long and at that intensity had 
really fired up those girls.  Dinner was only a couple of hours away.  
To them, it hardly felt like enough time to finish what they had 
started.

Brenda and Richard never moved for about half an hour, slowly
recovering, getting their breath back, letting some life flow into
tired muscles.  Both were still sweating profusely from the heat in 
the room, but neither had the strength to get up.

Finally, Brenda opened her eyes.  The first thing she saw was 
Richard's crotch, his cock limp and lifeless, with a couple of drops 
of cum on his belly.  She licked one up.  "Yech."  

Richard groaned.  "What?"

"Oh, nothin'.  It just doesn't taste the same."

After a couple of minutes.  "What doesn't taste the same?"

Another pause.  "Your semen."

A shorter pause.  "It doesn't?  From when?"

Just a deep breath.  "From when we just finished, and you came in my
mouth."

Again a deep breath.  "What's different?"

Several deep breaths.  "Almost every time I tasted it, it tasted 
pretty icky, sort-of sour and a bit bitter.  Not too good.  Just now, 
I tasted a leftover drip from your last cum and it tasted pretty bad 
too."

"But, last time you came in my mouth, when I was cumming and all 
worked up, it tasted wonderful, perfect.  It's kinda hard to explain.  
I knew you were squirting in my mouth, but I didn't care.  It was
delicious.  I couldn't get enough.  I kept sucking 'til there wasn't
any more, but I wanted more.  Weird, huh?"

"I'll believe you.  I guess when you're hot and bothered, and really 
want it, you don't notice the taste.  Anyway, I think we should get 
mobile.  I don't know about you, but just lying here sweating is 
draining me.  A nice long shower would do wonders.  You interested?"

"You go ahead.  I'll be down soon.  Leave the door unlocked and I'll 
come in."

"Okay."  Richard put on his robe and went out into the hallway.  
Noticing Caitlin's door was open, he went over and peeked in.

Caitlin and Vicky were both resting up, in between bouts, eyes closed,
breathing deeply and steadily.  Vicky was lying on her back, head on 
Caitlin's arm, arms and legs splayed.  Caitlin was on her side, lying
partly over top of Vicky, shielding her from view.  One leg was draped
over Vicky's thigh, lying between her legs.  One arm was pillowing
Vicky's head, the other was caught between them, fondling one of 
Vicky's breasts.

Richard had an excellent south/back view of his naked sister (this 
wasn't nude, this was nekkid) from just to the left of the foot of her 
bed.  She had a perfect ass and a very nice looking pussy, without 
much hair to get in the way.  His balls started twitching, even though 
he would have sworn he couldn't cum again for a week.  After taking a 
good long look, he pulled himself away from the door with an effort 
and headed downstairs for a shower.  He never noticed Brenda watching 
him through their partly open doorway.

When Richard went downstairs, Brenda got busy.  She was walking slowly
and a bit awkwardly.  Her pussy was sore, her clit was swollen, tender, 
and a bit painful, and every muscle in her body seemed tired and 
limp.  She felt wonderful.

She turned down the heat and opened the window to air out the room.
The top covers of the bed were pulled off and left in a pile on the 
floor.  They'd been soaked through with sweat and were damp.  Walking 
into the bathroom, still quite naked, she grabbed a towel and started 
wiping the sweat off her body.  From the bathroom she walked straight 
into Caitlin's room and plopped her bottom on the bed.  Both girls 
rolled over and looked at her, Caitlin too tired to be shy or bashful, 
Vicky unconcerned.  Brenda still blushed a little when Caitlin ran her 
eyes all over her body.

"Well?  Did you two enjoy the show?  You watched us long enough."

Caitlin blushed.  "God, I can't believe I let Vicky talk me into doing 
that!  It's sinful, it's immoral, it's totally wrong, hell, it's even 
impolite!"

"Did it get you hot?"

"Did it ever!  I'm getting creamy again just thinking about it!  Ahhh,
yesss!!!"

Caitlin closed her eyes, lowered her head to the bed, and raised one
leg.  Somehow, Vicky had managed to get her hand between Caitlin's 
legs and was pumping a finger in and out of her pussy.

"Ooooh, yes I know you're watching we shouldn't be doing this but
it feels so good I can't stop.  Please Vicky, no more right now.  
Please.  I need some rest first."

Vicky pulled her hand away, and Caitlin melted back down onto the 
bed.

"I know I like to watch and Vicky likes to watch.  It sure looks like 
you got hot watching too, Caitlin.  I'd take bets on Richard liking to 
watch, since he took a real long look in here a minute ago."

Caitlin's hand automatically started pulling up the sheets to try and
cover herself.  Brenda's hand stopped her.

"Relax.  He's already seen everything you've got."

"But he's not supposed to see me.  He's my brother!"

Vicky cut in.  "And she's my sister.  That didn't stop us from 
watchin', did it?  And it got you really hot."

"God, yes."

"Well, be careful.  He got a bit strange when I peeked in on you two a 
while ago."

"When was that?"  from Caitlin

"When I said it's our turn for the shower.  I guess you were kinda
busy at the time, and, well, never noticed."

"You did?"

"Yes she did.  I was here.  I heard her."

"Yep.  I did.  So be careful if you're peeking.  Richard might freak.
I gotta go, Richard's started the shower.  I'm not gonna miss out 
again!"

"Brenda, what the hell did you do to my brother, anyway.  He sounded
like he was dying!"

"Well, it's like this.  I got him really, really worked up, and then
when he was ready, I surprised him.  That's all.  I think he liked 
it."

"If you're gonna surprise him like that again, warn us first, okay?"

"Anytime I got him alone, I might surprise him.  You're warned.  I
gotta run now!  Bye!"  Brenda left the door open a crack on her way
out.  Vicky wouldn't let Caitlin up to close it, either.

**********************************************************************

Richard spent some time downstairs, puttering around, waiting for
Brenda.  He grabbed several fresh towels (need to do laundry), a fresh
bar of soap (need more too) and checked the hair supplies (would soon
need more shampoo and conditioner).

Finally, tired of waiting, he started the shower and stepped in.  The
hot water felt really good on his tired body, steaming away the sweat,
massaging his skin, warming his overworked muscles.  He was still 
standing there, leaning against the wall, letting the water wash over 
him, when Brenda slipped in.

Moving under the spray, she wet down her hair and rinsed her face and
neck.  That done, she leaned back against Richard, positioning herself
so his cock ran down the crack of her bottom.  It felt right.

Putting his arms around her, he gave her a hug, leaving his arms 
crossed on her stomach.  She pulled his hands up and placed them on 
her breasts.  They automatically started to squeeze and fondle, 
playing with her nipples.  Brenda rubbed her ass up and down his cock 
a couple of times.

"God, Brenda, don't you ever get enough?"

"I've had plenty.  This just feels soooo good.  My titties feel lonely 
'cause you didn't play with them much today.  Just keep doing it."  
Her bottom started sliding up and down the length of his cock again.  
A little while later it took notice of what was happening, and Richard 
started to get hard.

"Enough, you little minx.  We'd better finish showering or we'll be 
out of hot water again."  She moaned her displeasure at him as he 
pushed her up straight.

They did everything to each other.  Washed each other's hair (Richard
had to sit down for Vicky to reach properly), soaped each other up,
rinsed each other off, then towelled each other dry.

Vicky wrapped herself in one of the smaller towels.  It covered her 
from her nipples to just below the crotch, and barely reached all the 
way around.  She tucked it in below her left arm.  That left a 
shifting slit up her left side from her hip to her breast.

She also wrapped Richard up in a towel, saying his robe was too smelly 
and sweaty to put back on.  In the kitchen, she grabbed herself a 
glass of juice and sat down.  The towel almost fell open, of course.  
The front sat puddled in her lap, barely concealing her pubescent 
snatch, while the back of the towel fell against the chair, revealing 
a broad expanse of skin from her thigh right up to just below her 
breast.

"Y'know, you're a bigger tease than either of our sisters."

She grabbed him by the towel and pulled.  Rather than risk losing it,
he let her pull him in.

"C'mere.  Kiss me."  He did.  Half way through he jumped and yelped, 
but Brenda wouldn't let go of their kiss.  She had grabbed his balls 
and started fondling them.

Finally getting away from her clutches, he looked at her with a 
lecherous grin on his face.  "You just don't give up, do you?"

"Nope.  And the sooner you learn that, the happier we'll be.  Now go
change.  I'll be up in a while."


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<< End of chapter 7>>

Next chapter - More peeking, the pact, a quiet talk, a nightmare,
               a noisy dinner and a long talk.

(So, are Vicky and Brenda gonna corrupt Caitlin and Richard?
Is Richard ever going to pop a cherry?  Well, maybe...but whose?)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 8/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 15:00:57 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 8 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - More peeking, the pact, a quiet talk, a nightmare,
                  a noisy dinner, and a long talk.

**********************************************************************

When Richard got to the top of the stairs, it was quiet.  Caitlin's 
door was still open a bit.  Despite trying to fight against the urge, 
he ended up tiptoeing over and looking through into his sister's 
bedroom anyway.  He knew better, he knew it was wrong, but right then, 
he couldn't help himself.

The two girls were in almost the same position he saw them in before.
Caitlin had moved down on the bed a bit and was resting her head
on Vicky's shoulder.  He could see Vicky's face, and her pussy.  Both 
girls seemed to be asleep, breathing slowly and steadily.  Richard 
froze, then stepped back from the door as Caitlin shifted a bit.  Her 
right leg moved a little lower on Vicky's thigh, and her left leg 
moved farther left, exposing even more of her virgin snatch to 
Richard.  Her right hand moved down to Vicky's naked pussy, cupping 
it, hiding it from his sight - not doing anything, just looking like 
it belonged there.

When neither girl moved again, Richard stepped forward to take another
good look.  His cock was filling out again, staring at those two 
illicit bodies, the danger and immorality of what he was doing adding 
to the thrill.  After he stared for a few more minutes, trying to 
memorize every curve, nook, and fold of Caitlin's ass and crotch, he 
turned and walked into his room to change.

"Okay, Caitlin, he's gone now," whispered Vicky.

"You sure?"

"Yep.  He got a real good look at us, too."

"God, I feel so embarrassed!  I showed off everything to my brother!"

"Yep.  I betcha you'll do it some more, too."

"Oh god, child, what are you doing to me?  I feel so depraved!"

"It's a thrill, isn't it?"

"Yes!  And you're gonna make me do it again, aren't you."

"Uh huh.  Over and over and over."

"God, I'm blushing again!  I don't know what you're doing to me, but 
I'm not the same person I was three days ago.  You're corrupting me!"

"Yeah.  Don't it feel good though?  Now shush, don't move.  I think I 
hear footsteps."

"Oh, God!"

Several minutes later, Vicky spoke in a very quiet whisper "He's 
baaaaack."



Richard was just finishing up dressing when Brenda came in.

She dropped her towel and dragged him down for a long, passionate
kiss.

"Mmmm.  You taste good after you shower.  Need help gettin' dinner 
ready?"

"Probably not.  Why?"

"I'm gonna go visit Vicky and Caitlin.  Call if you need me."

"I think they're asleep.  I haven't heard anything from them since
I came upstairs."

"That's okay.  I'll wake 'em up."

Richard went out the door, intending to go straight downstairs.  
Somehow, he just couldn't resist another peek.  The two of them were 
in the same position, giving Richard lots to look at.  He stared for a 
another minute or two, still not quite believing how beautiful his 
sister looked.  Then he went downstairs.

Brenda got dressed quickly, then waited a minute just to be safe.
She opened the door and, not spotting Richard, went straight into
Caitlin's room.  Seeing them lying on the bed, almost completely
exposed, was a small thrill in itself.  They really did look like they
were sleeping.

In a loud whisper, Brenda said "Okay you two, you can knock it off 
now.  He's downstairs making supper."

Caitlin and Vicky rolled over, Vicky behind Caitlin, slipping an arm
around her waist and kissing her on the neck.

"If he saw what I just did, he got a real eyeful.  Well, did he?"

Vicky grinned.  "Twice."

Caitlin blushed furiously.  "This is really embarrassing.  I don't 
think I can look at him now without blushing."

Vicky whispered in her ear.  "Just remember what he looked like, lying
there, sweat pouring off him, his cock buried in my sister's throat.
That'll settle you down.  You'll be too hot to be embarrassed."

"I hope so.  Though I'll probably be hot and embarrassed."


**********************************************************************

Dinner was a bit subdued.  Richard and Brenda were both tired out, as
were Caitlin and Vicky.  Most of the conversation took place between
Mary and Will.  Caitlin kept blushing at the strangest times.

Everyone enjoyed the steaks, salads, baked potatoes and rolls.  When
dinner was done, they all retired to the living room, the adults (and
Caitlin) sipping on beer, and the girls drinking sodas.

The rules they finally agreed to were simple.

  - Nobody outside of that room was to know about either relationship.
  - No making out anywhere where they could be found out.
  - Nothing was not to interfere with anyone's schoolwork or homework.
  - All three girls were to maintain a normal social life away from
    home.
  - The girls current curfews were to be strictly maintained, unless
    over at Richard's, and they were to sleep alone on school nights.
  - Proper privacy codes were to be maintained in both houses, IE no
    barging in without knocking or being invited.

If anything else came up, they would have another meeting to discuss 
it.

Everyone was tired, except Mary and Will, so they closed down early.
Vicky had a long, whispered conversation with Caitlin, during which
both blushed several times.  Finally their guests went home, leaving 
Richard and Caitlin alone.  They stayed in the living room, staring 
out the window at the moonlit beach, saying nothing for the longest 
time.

"Rich, do you think what we're doing is wrong?"

They stared out at the moonlit beach, saying nothing for a while.

"I don't think I had much choice, wrong or not.  I'm in love with 
Brenda, and she made me realize it.  I don't know if what Brenda feels 
is love or not, but she and her mother both think it is.  I'm now hers 
for as long as she wants me."

They stared out at the moonlit beach, saying nothing for a while.

"I don't know what it is between me and Vicky.  There is a spark, but 
it's not love.  Maybe we both just need someone really really bad.  I 
don't think I'm hurting her or corrupting her, because she's the one 
taking the lead.  It's been her pushing me up until now.  I feel a bit 
confused."

"You're going to have some time alone now to think this through, with
Vicky being grounded.  You'll have to decide for yourself whether or
not to continue.  I certainly can't preach to you on moral grounds."

"I know.  I'll have to make up my mind about what I want to do now.
First Angie, now this.  My life has become complicated."

They stared out at the moonlit beach, saying nothing for a while.

"Caitlin, Brenda did something that surprised me today."

She blushed a bright red, glad the room was dark and Richard was 
looking out the window.  She wondered if he was referring to the same 
'surprise' Brenda had mentioned.

"What did she do?"

"She looked into your room while you two were, uh, well, busy."

"You mean she watched us while we were having sex."

By then they were both blushing.

"Well, yes.  It was a bit shocking, and very embarrassing.  I made her
give me a promise.  I couldn't get her to promise not to look anymore,
but she did promise that if either of you told her to get out and stay
out, she would.  Now I want you to tell her that."  He was feeling 
more than a little guilty about bringing the subject up, especially 
after the thrill he'd experienced staring at them doing nothing.  He 
knew it wasn't right, and was determined to stop Brenda from spying on 
them.  And, said a small part of his mind, to stop himself as well.

They stared out at the moonlit beach, saying nothing for a while.

"Caitlin?  Well?"

"I can't promise I'll do that, Rich.  Not right now.  Not until I 
decide whether I stay with Vicky.  If we separate, I'll tell her.  If 
we stay together, well ..."

"Well, what?"

"If we stay together, it will be Vicky's choice to keep Brenda out, 
not mine."

"Caitlin, you're an adult.  Vicky is eleven years old.  What do you 
mean it will be her choice?"

"Rich, from what I gather, Brenda is still a virgin.  She's learned
a lot from watching her parents, but until now has never experienced
real sex."

"Yes.  And how did you know about her watching her parents?"

"Vicky told me.  They don't keep secrets.  Vicky's been watching too.
My point is that as far as the bedroom goes, you two are equals, but 
you, Rich, control things because you're older and more experienced.  
If Brenda is doing something she wants to, you let her, but you still 
have control."

"That about covers it.  Have you three been talking behind my back?"

"Not much, just enough to give me the clues I needed.  It's not the 
same with me and Vicky.  I'm the beginner, the freshman, needing to be 
led by the hand.  Vicky is far more experienced, and is in charge of 
what we do in the bedroom.  It's her choice.  If we carry on, she will 
have control, and that frightens me."

"Caitlin, she's eleven years old.  How much experience can she have?"

"Richard, Vicky has already lost two lovers, both girls who she cared 
for.  The last one was two months ago, and it left her with a big hole 
in her heart.  She's had most of a year of constant caring and 
attention from one or the other of them, and then nothing for two 
months.  She is only eleven years old, but how many of your college 
friends can claim to have had this much pain?"

"This ... I had no idea.  It happened right under my nose and I didn't
see anything.  I thought she was a sweet, innocent kid."

"She still is in most ways.  And don't feel guilty about not knowing.
She managed to hide it from her parents and her sister too.  Even 
though she tells me they don't keep secrets."

They stared out at the moonlit beach for a while, saying nothing.

"I guess that's part of the reason you're having such a hard time
deciding.  It still doesn't tell me why you let Vicky take control."

"Richard, I didn't *let* Vicky have control.  She took it away from 
me, right from the beginning, minutes after I walked into their 
place.  She decided she wanted me, and she took me.  I guess it's a 
personality thing.  That girl is much more certain of herself than I 
am.  She's more daring, more experienced and more knowledgeable.  It's 
scary."

"Caitlin, you make it sound like Vicky's going to take over your life,
like she could make you do anything."

"No, it's not like that.  I'm still me, and I decide what I do and 
what's right for me.  Vicky controls us, together, what we do and 
don't do.  That's part of why it's so thrilling to be with her.  I'm 
not in control."

"You'd better be careful then.  Those two little vixens are pretty 
wild.  No telling what they're capable of."

"You don't have to tell me.  I already know."

They stared out at the moonlit beach for a while, saying nothing.
Eventually one, then the other, went to bed.

**********************************************************************

It was Wednesday morning.  Richard woke up, bright and early, 
stretched, and went to the washroom.  

Brenda had been over the night before, but they'd simply sat together 
on the couch, lights out, sometimes talking, watching the sun set and 
the stars come out.  They shared two colas and, later, a glass of 
wine.  By the end of the evening, he was getting used to her body 
leaning against his, the feel of her waist and shoulders, her warmth, 
the sound of her voice, and the faint yet distinctive smell of her.  It 
had been difficult to send her home.

With his usual morning hard-on tenting out the front of his shorts,
he decided to put on his robe.  Stepping into the hall, he heard the 
toilet flush and decided to wait rather than go downstairs.

Caitlin came out a few seconds later, shocking Richard.  He could only
stand there and stare, jaw flapping but with no words coming out.  She 
was wearing a very revealing, semi-transparent negligee.  It looked 
wonderful on her gorgeous body.

Reaching up and pulling his head down, she pressed her body into his,
and gave him a kiss on the cheek, then headed off to her bedroom.

"Mornin' Rich."  She closed her door before he could react.  There 
were tingles in his chest where her nipples had pushed in.

He closed his eyes for a moment, took a deep breath, and went into the
bathroom.  'No, I don't think I'm ever gonna get used to this.'

**********************************************************************

It was late Wednesday night / early Thursday morning.

A loud knocking on his door woke Richard.  Checking to make certain
he was decent, he told Caitlin to come in.  She did, closing the
door behind her.  At least that time she was wearing a nightshirt,
he was glad to see, short and revealing though it was.  She walked 
over and sat on the bed.  He could see that she had been crying.

"I had a nightmare.  About Angie.  Then about Vicky.  It was 
horrible!"

She started crying again, quietly yet painfully.  Richard sat up and 
gathered her in his arms, just like he had many times before when he 
still lived with their parents.  It was him she came to back then, 
with her tears and nightmares, rather than their Mom and Dad, because 
he understood her fears and her pain.  Of course, she was seventeen 
now, rather than eleven.  There was a definite difference in the body 
he was holding.

"Please hold me.  Please.  I don't want to be alone."

He held her until her tears stopped, until she was almost asleep.

"Time to go back to bed now, Caitlin."

"No, please, I don't want the nightmare to come back."

What could he do.  Standing her up, he pulled back the covers, then
lay back with his head on his pillow.  He opened his arms to her, and
she crawled into them, curling up against his chest and stomach.  
Pulling the covers back over them both, he hugged her to him, making 
soothing sounds for her.  She was soon asleep.  It took him a lot 
longer, holding the body that he'd stared at with such illicit lust so 
recently.

She was still there when he woke up, still sleeping, but now turned 
with her back to him.  Mind hazy with sleep, he rolled into her and 
nuzzled the back of her neck.  Without conscious thought, his arm 
curled over his sister's waist, hugging her closer to him.  His hand 
found one of her breasts and he cupped it with his palm.  He drifted 
back into unconsciousness.

He woke again when Caitlin started to stir.  Finally properly awake, 
he realized the position he was in, spooned up behind his sister.
Becoming quite embarrassed by the intimate nature of his embrace, he
immediately rolled away.  The arm around the waist wasn't so bad.
It was the hand holding her breast, his lips almost kissing the back
of her neck, and his usual morning hard-on tenting his shorts and 
pressing into the crack of Caitlin's ass that made his face glow.

Expecting her to be upset at those intimate contacts, he was totally
unprepared for what came next.  Instead of jumping from the bed and
leaving his room, she rolled over, sliding into the crook of his arm.
Resting her head on the flat of his shoulder just beside his neck,
she stretched out full length beside him, one arm wrapped around his
torso in a loose hug.

It took him totally by surprise.  If it wasn't his sister, and if he
hadn't committed to Brenda, that would have been heaven.  He was 
feeling trapped and helpless, enjoying the feel of her body, her warm 
breath on his neck, her breasts with their hard nipples pressing into 
his chest and side, and ...  'Oh god' he thought.  Her night dress had 
ridden high while she slept and her naked lower belly and crotch were 
pressed into his thigh.  She wasn't wearing panties - he could tell, 
because her thatch of pussy hair was tickling him.

"Caaaty.  Oh, Caaaatyyyyy.  Time to get up now."

"Mmmnn ... no ... tired ... "

Sighing, he resigned himself to this fate.  Guiltily, he realized he 
liked the feel of his sister's body pressed up against him just as 
much as he enjoyed Brenda's.  It was so much illicit pleasure for 
both, one being a barely pubescent thirteen, offering herself 
completely, body and soul to him, the other being his fully-formed 
nearly-adult sister, untouchable, yet sending incestuous thoughts and 
feelings through his body.  

Very much aware of her body beside him, he could feel each breath she
took, both from the rise and fall of her bosom, and from the warmth
of her breath on his neck and chest.  It wasn't long before he sensed
she'd fallen back to sleep.  He just lay there, enjoying the touch
and intimacy, knowing he shouldn't let it happen.  After a while, 
without really thinking about it, he began to caress his sister, her
hair, shoulder, arm, waist, and naked lower back, whatever his trapped 
arm could reach.

As time passed, he became lost in his own little imaginary world.  It 
was with difficulty that he came back to reality when Caitlin began
to stir again.

"Mmmmm, feels good."

He noticed his hand was caressing her, seemingly detached from the
rest of him, but definitely sending back the feel of her body.  His
member was still hard at attention, and jerked a little when she 
kissed him lightly on the neck.  She seemed to be enjoying his 
attentions.

"Thanks, Rich.  That was the best night's sleep I've had in ages.  But
I guess it's time to get up.  I'm hungry."

With that, she threw back the covers and rolled out of bed.  He caught
glimpses of her naked pussy, hips, and ass as she rolled out of bed 
and stood up, letting her night dress fall and cover her nudity.  It 
would have been difficult for her to miss his raging hard-on pushing 
up the front of his boxers and the covers, yet she never said 
anything - she just padded out the door in her bare feet.

He listened to her footsteps head along the hall and down the stairs.
Looking at her without blushing would be difficult, he knew, 
especially with her still wearing the same flimsy garment. 

"No, I'm never gonna get used to this."

He jacked off quickly to a hard and shuddering climax, remembering
the feel of her body against his.


**********************************************************************

That evening, returning from his part-time job, he found his sister
seated on the couch staring out the window.  The TV was on, barely
audible, and was being completely ignored.  She was wearing a light 
silk blouse with no bra, and a full, loose skirt.  With her sitting 
cross-legged, he could picture exactly what was on display under her 
skirt.  There was little imagination needed to see what was under her 
blouse.

They exchanged greetings and small talk for a while before Richard 
noticed how distant her mind really was.  She was still staring out 
the window.

"Caitlin, what's wrong?"

She sighed and took a few deep breaths before answering.

"I need Vicky."

"Does this mean you've made up your mind?"

"Yes."

"Any reasons for this decision?  Anything you'd like to share with 
your big brother?  Like why?"

"No.  I just need her.  For now, for a while, that's all I know.  I'm
so lonely.  I don't know what I would have done if you weren't here 
for me, Rich."

It was always difficult for him to express his feelings for his 
sister.  He had to be careful in what he said, with her in such a 
vulnerable state.

"Caitlin, you know I've always been there for you, and I always will 
be.  You're my sister, and I love you."  There it was, carefully 
worded so she could accept it however she wanted.  He leaned over the 
back of the couch and gave her a hug from behind, also giving her a 
chaste kiss on her cheek.  He liked the feel of her body, especially 
when she reached up behind her head and wrapped her arms around his 
neck.  She apparently liked it too, because it was a while before she 
let him go.

"I think I'll go next door for a while.  Will you be okay on your 
own?"

"Yeah, I'll be fine."  She was honoring the terms of Vicky's grounding
to the letter.  Not being invited directly by Mary or Will, she was
staying away.

A few hours later he was back.  She'd made dinner, eaten hers, left
his to warm in the oven, and was back on the couch staring out the
window.  Sensing her mood, he brought his dinner and two beers out
to the living room and sat beside her on the couch to eat.  He ate and
she drank quietly.  It wasn't until he was finished and they were both
working on their third beer that he gave her the news.

"We're going out for dinner tomorrow."

"Oh.  Okay.  Thank you."

"The four of us."

"Four?"

"You, me, Brenda, and Vicky.  They'll be spending the weekend here."

She was all over him in an instant, knees straddling his thighs, 
planting a big wet kiss on his mouth, then hugging him close.  He 
hugged back, accepting her actions as normal sisterly gratitude.

"Rich, you're the best big brother in the whole world."

He held onto her until he felt an un-brotherly bulge growing in his 
pants.  She was slowly rocking back and forth while holding him.  It 
was impossible for him to ignore the feel of her hardening nipples 
and the heat from her groin on his lap.  She let go reluctantly when 
he disengaged and moved her back to the corner of the couch.


**********************************************************************

It was Friday, late afternoon, and the four of them were trying to
decide where to go for dinner.

His suggestions, one for a fine italian restaurant, and one for a cozy
little greek place famous for it's squid, were met with enthusiastic
cat-calls - "Boo!  Hiss!"  "Yech!  No way!"  "Uh Uh.  Nope"  "Maybe 
next time."

They ended up going someplace he'd only heard about and never been to.
It was a kid's pizza parlor, with games, play areas, amusements, an
animated animal band, and hordes of kids screaming and laughing and
running all over the place.  It was not the type of romantic dinner 
he'd been thinking about.  He felt more like a father treating his 
three kids to a day at the fair.  Three kids?  Yep.  Caitlin was in 
there with the best of 'em, keeping up with both Brenda and Vicky.  At 
least the pizza was above average, definitely better than he thought 
it would be.

Later that evening, they sat in his living room.  Vicky and Caitlin
were curled up together in the easy chair sharing a beer (Caitlin 
talked Richard into letting Vicky have some), and Brenda was curled 
up in Richard's lap on the couch, sharing some wine.  It wasn't long 
before the two girls went upstairs.  Richard thought he'd better tell 
his, uh, fiancee? what went on with his sister the other night, before 
she found out some other way.

He explained what happened and then, with her prodding, actually let 
her know about everything he was feeling about it too, the illicit 
desire he had, the mixed emotions, the conflict between seeing her 
beautiful body and knowing it was his sister, and knowing he was 
committed to Brenda.  She took it all in with simple nods and uh-huhs, 
never looking or acting shocked or surprised, and not condemning him 
in the least.

When all the talking was over, they sat there for a few minutes, 
wrapped in each other's arms.

"I love you, Richard."

"I love you too, Brenda"

"It's time for me to go have a serious talk with our sisters.  I'll be
back down later."

She climbed off his lap and trotted up the stairs.  He stared at her
gorgeous, tight, not-so-little-girl ass as she went.

An hour later, nervous as hell, he had to go see what was going on.
Opening Caitlin's door, he poked his head through.  What he saw made 
him blush.  All three were sitting cross-legged on the bed, in a 
circle, heads bent together.  Brenda was fully clothed and the other 
two were completely naked.  His sister blushed, but made no move to 
cover herself.  Vicky seemed oblivious to her state of dress.

"Scram.  This is girl talk."

He shut the door quickly and went back downstairs.  It was another 
half-hour and two glasses of wine later when Brenda came back down 
stairs.  She appropriated his newly-filled wineglass and sat on the 
couch, leaning against him.  His arm automatically reached around to 
hold her.

Several sips of wine later she spoke.

"Did you know Caitlin's been having nightmares?"

"She mentioned having them the night she came to my room."

"No.  She's been having nightmares every night since that scene with 
Angie's father, except when she was with you or Vicky."

"Every night?"

"Yes.  You wouldn't believe how tired she is.  Did you know that 
you're the only person she has left that she feels close to?  That 
can understand her?"

"What about our mother and father?  And our sister?"

"Do they know anything about what's been happening to her?  No.  Who's
been there for her at night all her life?  You have.  You took her in,
no questions asked when she needed you.  You didn't judge her when she
told you about Angie.  You're not upset with her now because of 
Vicky.  Is there anybody else, except maybe Angie, who could accept 
what she's done without blame or pity?"

It was difficult for him to imagine her speaking about this to anyone,
especially their parents, remembering what happened after their sister
was raped.  It had been ugly.

"No, I can't think of anyone, especially our relatives.  But what 
about Vicky?"

"Those two need each other right now, but it's not the same thing.  
They've known each other for a week.  She's known you all her life.  
You're the only really stable thing she has.  If you pushed her away, 
it would be terrible for her."

"What do you think I should do?"

"Comfort her when she comes to you.  Accept what she offers.  Don't
feel guilty, because she needs your comfort and affection.  Don't make
her feel guilty about asking for it, either.  She knows that I'm yours
and you're mine, and she can't get between us unless you let her.  I 
have enough faith in you that you won't let it happen, even though she 
is a gorgeous lady."

"Brenda, you know if something happened, it would change the way 
things are around here."

"You mean they haven't changed a lot in the last week?"  She laughed 
at that, a nice clear little-girl laugh.  It lightened the mood and 
his heart.

"Aren't you going to be jealous?"

"Of course.  I already am jealous.  But think about what it would be 
like for Vicky and Caitlin if you forced her away from here.  I 
wouldn't want that to happen.  Besides, your sister will get better 
with enough love and attention.  And Vicky plans on providing lots of 
both.  But she can't be over here all the time or most nights.  That's 
when your sister will need you."

"If that's the way you want it to be, I'll go along with it.  I do 
love my sister, but I love you too, and don't want to hurt either of 
you.  There's no way for me to stop feeling guilty, because I would 
feel like I'm cheating on you, even if it's only a warm kiss with my 
sister."

"Just as long as you don't let her know you feel guilty about it.  She
feels bad enough already, even though I told her it would be okay.  
So, like I said, comfort her when she comes to you and accept what she 
offers.  I've given her limits and she's accepted them."

"Do I get to know what they are?"

"Nope.  You'll just have to tell me all about everything that happens, 
so I know if she steps over the line."

"Hey, waitaminit.  Is that feeding into your voyeurism?"

"My what?"

"Voyeurism.  Peeking.  What you do to your mom and dad and our 
sisters."

"Could be.  I'll never tell.  Besides, they both know I'll worm every
detail out of you anyway.  So they'll both be careful."

Finishing off the wine and putting the glass on the table, she turned
and straddled his thighs, her crotch on his lap, and began hugging and
kissing him, rocking back and forth, rubbing her pantied pussy against
the erection forming in his pants.

After a few minutes of that attack on his person, he broke off for 
some air.

"Mffph.  Now what are you after?"

A couple of quick kisses later, still rocking on his now-hard cock, 
she answered.

"I do have one more teeeeensy little problem I need your help 
with."

"<groan>  Now what?"

"We-el,  it's something only you can help me with, and I think we 
should be upstairs in bed.  Here would be okay too, but it might not 
be as comfortable."

"Let me guess.  You're horny as hell and you want me to do you 
again?"  He was smiling a big shit-eating grin as he said that.

"Not quite.  You see, even after going to bed with you all those 
times, I still seem to be sort-of, well, I guess you could say, maybe, 
like, uh, a ... virgin?"

He became serious, looking into her eyes, trying to see the answers he
was looking for.

"Are you ready for this?  You know it only ever happens once, so you
have to be sure."

She became serious, and looked him back in the eye.

"Richard, you are the man for me, the man I'm gonna marry, the man I
love.  You are the only person I would ever give this gift to."
A big grin stole over her face.  "Besides, how else can we really 
start fucking?"

His mouth moved up into a half-smile.  "Brenda!  Such language for a
young lady!  I'm ... I'm shocked!"  A full smile took over.  "But I 
guess if you're really sure, we should go upstairs and, um, fuck."

"I'm sure."

"All right, let's do this properly.  Grab the rest of the wine and a 
couple of glasses, I'll get some towels and stuff and meet you in my 
bedroom."


**********************************************************************

<< End of chapter 8>>

Next chapter - Pop goes the cherry.

(Ooooh.  Wow!  Is it really gonna happen?  Stay tuned ...)


Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" 9/9
From: Shelby Bush <stbush@iglou.com>
Date: 11 Apr 1997 15:07:07 GMT
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Chapter 9 of 9

Disclaimer:  All the standard rules apply.  If you are offended 
by explicit descriptions of sex or the human body, if it is 
illegal to possess such materials at your location, if you are 
under-age by law in your location, or if somebody else thinks you 
might have too much fun reading it, stop right now and remove this 
text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

In this chapter - pop goes the cherry


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Brenda was already there when Richard arrived, stripped and under the 
covers, the wine and glasses placed on the nightstand.

"My, aren't we the eager beaver.  A body would think you were anxious
or something."

She just smiled her cute, innocent, little-girl smile at him.  "Who, 
me?"

Seeing him put a tube of something on the nightstand, she asked what 
it was.

"It's K-Y jelly.  It's a lubricant.  I think we should use some this
first time because you are a virgin and you will be very tight.  It
might mean less discomfort for you."

"Have you ever, uh, done a virgin before?"

"Once, when I was much younger.  It was messy, painful, and very 
unsatisfying for both of us.  I think I've learned a lot since then."

"Will it hurt much?"

"If we do it right, not much, and not for long.  You'll feel it, but
might not care about the pain."

"How do you know, if you've only ever done one before?"

"Virgins are a rather scarce commodity, usually disappearing between
fourteen and eighteen.  I normally prefer ladies a little older than 
that, present company excepted.  I learn by reading stories and 
journals and by listening to guys and girls talking about their first 
time.  Very few of the girls are really happy about how they had their 
cherries popped.  But don't worry.  I think this will be memorable, 
for both of us."

During their talk, he had stripped nude, poured two glasses of wine, 
and climbed into bed.  Fluffing up a pillow, he put it behind him and 
sat up against the headboard.  Pulling her up to sit on his lap with 
her back to his chest, he handed her one of the glasses of wine and 
took the other for himself.

"Sip it slowly.  Take your time.  We've got all night."

He began to gently caress her body, her thighs, the tops of her legs,
her belly, and finally her chest and breasts.  They were small, 
probably an 'A' cup, but very firm, with puffy quarter-sized aureoles 
topped with little-girl nipples, which were getting very hard.  Very 
gently he massaged her breasts, touching and toying with her nipples, 
playing with them with the tips of his fingers.  He was also nuzzling 
her hair and occasionally kissing her neck and shoulders.

She smelled wonderful, and the feel of her soft skin was like that of
fine silk, sensuous and supple.  Her naked bottom and back, pressing
against his balls and cock, were having the desired effect as well.  
He was now quite stiff.  The two glasses of wine earlier and the one 
she was drinking now were doing their job, reducing her apprehension
and nervousness.  She was still a touch scared, but knew she wanted it
and was relaxing now that she knew it would happen.  It helped knowing
Richard was willing to take his time and make it good for her.  His
touching and kissing also felt really nice.

Getting her to slide down a little and spread her legs out on either 
side of his, he began to tease her pussy.  This had more of an effect 
on her.  Gulping the rest of her wine, she went to grab at his cock.  
Letting her do this, he put both glasses back on the nightstand.  
There wasn't much she could do, holding his cock behind her back, but 
the touch of her hands was nice and cool on his overheated member.

Soon he was more serious about playing with her pussy, running his 
fingers up and down the outside of her cleft, along the edges of her 
lips, and down the furrow between pussy and thigh.  He alternated 
between toying with her nipples and massaging her breasts with his 
other hand.  Now she let go of his cock and melted back into him, 
breathing faster, rubbing her own legs and inner thighs to 
counterpoint his fingers.

Delving into her slot, he lubricated one, then two, then three fingers
with her fluids.  They began to slide up and down inside her cleft,
sometimes touching her anus, or sliding over her hole, or brushing 
against her clit.  Each of these brought a fresh gasp from her, making 
her breathe faster, almost to the point of panting.  He could feel 
little shivers and ripples running over her stomach, down her back, 
and along her legs.

Letting out a long groan of pleasure, she arched her back and twisted 
around to kiss him hard on the lips, pushing her tongue into her 
lover's mouth and letting him taste her.  Whimpering, she released his 
mouth and slid a little farther down his lap, arching up her hips and 
pulling back her knees so her legs pointed out almost sideways to his.

Now her hands were rubbing her inner thighs, just outside her pussy 
lips, occasionally sliding down to fondle her own ass, grabbing and 
releasing her cheeks.  Sweat was beginning to bead up on her lip, her 
forehead, her chest.  He let the tip of one finger slide into her 
hole, causing her to gasp and whine, speeding up her hands.

When he pulled his fingers away from her slot, she whined and 
whimpered.  He made her suck and lick every finger clean before he 
started again.  This time he wasn't going to stop until she climaxed, 
her first for the night.

Her juices were flowing freely.  He was startled by how much she 
produced, considering that she was a thirteen year old virgin.  Lubing 
up the fingers of both hands, he began a slow fuck with the tip of one 
finger.  Placing the middle finger of his other hand into her slot and 
the adjacent fingers outside on either side, he used them to rub and 
fondle her lips, clit, and other sensitive spots.  It wasn't long 
before she was gasping for air, rubbing furiously on her inner thighs 
with both hands, almost touching his hands inside her pussy.

She came then, with a long indrawn breath and a shuddering exhalation.
There was very little movement, but he could feel her muscles spasming
from her neck to her ass, and could see her thighs and calves tensing
and releasing as waves of pleasure washed through her body.  It looked
to be a long, gentle climax, extended by his continued attention to
her hole and her clit.  Her hands had stopped and grabbed her ass, 
pulling her hips up higher and giving him better access to (and a 
really good look at) her whole cunt.

After several deep breaths followed by long, whiney exhales, she 
grabbed his hands to stop his movements.  She was done, for now.

"Did you enjoy that?"

<gasp, pant> "You always do me good.  Lots better than I do me."

"I'm glad.  Just relax and feel good for a while."

Leaving his finger inside her hole, he removed his other hand and 
cupped her pussy with the first one.  She sighed and relaxed her legs 
together a little, letting her arms drop to the bed.  He kissed the 
top of her head and hugged her.

Eventually she rolled over and kissed him.

"Is it time yet?"

"Nope.  You're gonna do me now."

"But I want you to come inside me!"

"Don't worry.  Once I get inside that wonderful pussy of yours, I'll 
fill you so full it'll come out your ears.  Besides, if I tried to do
it right now, I'd probably squirt before you were half-way done.  My
balls need to be drained a bit so I don't cum too soon."

"Okay, if you say so.  But if you don't do it right tonight, I'll be 
mad!"

"<chuckle>  Yes, dear."

Brenda laughed at this, hearing him talk like an old married man, 
like her dad did sometimes when her mom was being bossy.

She did a wonderful job on him, using hands, mouth, tongue and lips, 
teasing him, tickling and playing with his balls, running up and down
his member with her tongue, nibbling with her lips, sometimes sucking 
him right down her throat, bringing him to the edge several times 
before finally letting him cum.  She pulled off at the last second and 
watched him erupt all over her tits and belly, sucking him back into 
her mouth to catch the last dribbles, draining him until he groaned in 
protest.

Lying down beside him, she used his finger to play in the little
puddles and rivulets of semen on her body, sometimes cleaning it with
her mouth, sometimes making him clean it with his tongue.  When it
got cool enough to be noticed, she wiped herself clean with one of the
towels.

"Nice?"

"Better than when I do it, that's for certain.  You sure you haven't
had any practice before me?"

"Nope.  None.  I'm just a fast learner."

"Well, you're already the best at that I've ever had, and you're still
learning?  God help me when you get to be really good."

"Won't be nobody savin' ya from me, 'cause this thing's all mine!"

She gave it a squeeze and a few strokes for good measure, and got 
a moan of protest from Richard.

"Is it time yet?"

"Aren't you impatient.  We'll get there.  First, let's get things
arranged."

Standing her up, he put some towels on the bed where she would
be lying.  Using the K-Y, he greased up his member and put a generous
amount on the far corner of one of the towels for later use.  After
explaining what he was doing to Brenda, she jumped onto the bed,
positioning herself carefully on the towels.  When Richard when to 
turn her a little, she resisted, saying it felt right, just where she 
was.  He wasn't about to argue.

Lying down beside her, they kissed, and he began playing with her
breasts and nipples again.  Excited as she was, it wasn't long before
she was hot and breathing hard.  Moving down a little he sucked and
tongued her breasts, pulling them almost entirely into his mouth and
playing with the tips of her nipples, swishing them back and forth.
Knowing what would be coming made her so hot, she almost came again
right there.  That mouth moved down her stomach, slowly licking and
nibbling its way, through her belly-button and down to her vulva.

Repositioning himself between her legs, he pressed her knees up and 
out, giving himself full access to her innermost parts.  She tasted 
good right now, her juices flowing nicely.  He used his tongue to push 
her fluids all over the inside of her slot, from her anus to the top of
her mound.  Then he used his tongue to tease and tantalize, running the
tip up and down inside her, just missing her clit and her hole.  
Suddenly he plunged it deep inside her, until the tip of his tongue 
could just touch her hymen, then wiggled it to tickle her there.  This 
made her jump and gasp.  Her hips were now thrusting upwards, trying 
to get him deeper inside

Pulling out just as quickly, he returned attention to her clit, 
licking his way there, and then all around it without giving her the 
satisfaction of touching it.  When he figured she was nearing her 
peak, he scooped up a fingerful of K-Y and touched it to her hole.  
The sudden chill brought another gasp and a deep, full-body shiver.  
Her hip-thrusting resumed when he started sliding his finger into her 
hole, lubricating it with the jelly.

When he pulled up to kneel in front of her, she looked up at him.

"Now?  You're gonna do it now?"

"Yep."

"Oh god, yes!  Do me!  Shove it inside, please!  I want it NOW!  Come 
on, bust me open!  Come ON!  FUCK MEEEEE!"

Pulling her knees up beside her chest, she was now completely open to
him.  Lowering himself to his elbows, he kissed her once, quickly, on
the lips.  Holding himself on knees and one elbow, he positioned the
head of his cock at the entrance to her vagina.  Just that faint touch
sent shivers all through him, and through her.  There was no need for
any further lubrication, with her juices flowing freely and all the
K-Y he used.

He was in heaven.  Taking deep, almost gasping breaths, he tried to
relax a little so he could take his time and do it right.  Pushing
slowly but steadily, he began to open her up.  Her eyes were open 
wide, staring sightlessly at the ceiling.  Her entire world was 
centered upon her hole, where that huge cock was trying to get in.  
She could feel it pushing, stretching her, moving things around 
inside.  His thing felt monstrous.  For a few seconds she thought it  
would tear her wide open.  But she had to have it inside her now, no 
matter what!

Grunting and panting, she wiggled her hips to try and help that thing
get inside her.  Every tiny move and push filled her up more, 
stretched her farther, until finally the head popped inside.  Both 
gasped at the same time, her from the sudden filling and stretching 
sensations, him from the unbelievable tightness and the silky 
smoothness of her vaginal walls.  It was fantastic!  He wanted to just 
pound into her, it felt that good.  Breathing deeply, he relaxed 
again.  He waited there for a while, watching her face, waiting for 
her to get used to the incredible feeling of fullness she had.

It was several minutes before she was comfortable again, before the
tightness and stretching stopped.  It felt huge in there, but didn't
hurt.  There was an ache, but it was deep inside, the ache of wanting
to be completely filled - and she wanted it now!  Wiggling her hips 
and pumping them up and down gave Richard the signal to continue.  He 
pushed in another quarter inch, causing them both to gasp again.

"Oh, oh, that feels so gooood!  You're so huge in there!  Ohhhh, yes,
put some more in, please!  Fill me up!"

He was a bit surprised at her vocal display, but not much.  He 
shrugged it off.  He certainly wasn't going to stop.  What he didn't 
know was that this was more for their audience's benefit.  There were 
two sets of eyes peering through the doorway, watching intently.  Her 
loud cries when he was just going to start were their signal that it 
was happening.  Following orders, Caitlin had oiled the hinges and 
handle, tightened all the screws, and practiced opening and closing 
his door until she could do it with no noise whatsoever.  Brenda had 
positioned herself so the doorway got a three-quarter rear view of 
their activities, giving them an excellent ring-side seat.  Both sets 
of eyes were wide open, mesmerized by the action in front of them, and 
both their jaws were open and slack.  It was a sight they never 
believed they'd ever see, the deflowering of a virgin.

A little at a time, he pushed in until he touched her hymen, that 
small flap of tissue that was so important to a young lady.  Stopping 
and letting her get adjusted every time he pushed, she was opening up 
nicely and really enjoying this.

"Oh, oh, oh, it feels sooooo gooood in there!  No wonder mom does it 
so much!  Ahhhhaiiiiiii, yesssssss!"

Still fighting his urge to just ram it home, he pulled out until the
head was just inside, then slid in until the head was touching her
hymen again, repeating this for a few minutes.  He stopped and left 
his cock resting against her hymen when it looked like she was about 
to cum, giving her time to come down a bit.  It felt so tight and so 
silky smooth inside he needed to stop and rest too, or he would blow 
his nut early, spoiling everything.  Maybe one blowjob wasn't enough 
for this.

When they both calmed down a little, he gave a sudden lunge, 
surprising her and bursting through her virginity.

"Ow!  That hurt!"

"Let me know when you feel better, I'll start moving inside you 
again. By the way, congratulations.  You're not a virgin anymore."

"Ooooo, I bet you say that to all the girls.  Come on, start moving, I
wanna fuck!"

Moving slowly and carefully, he pulled back a little then moved 
forward again, pushing a little deeper each time.  He saw the little 
winces of pain on her face, but each time he stopped, she said "No!  
Don't you dare stop!  It feels too good!  Give me more!  Fill me up!"

He kept at it until he was balls-deep inside her and was bumping up
against her cervix with each thrust.  He began to lengthen his stroke,
concentrating hard on what he was doing, because if he lost his focus,
he'd just jam his prick in her a couple of times and blow his wad deep 
inside. He really, really wanted her to cum first, but the feel of 
that tight virgin cunt on his cock was so fantastic it was very hard 
to hold back.

She was in heaven.  That was what fucking was all about, that feeling
of utter fullness, of being filled over and over again, feeling him 
open her up, feeling his cock moving back and forth in there, bringing
out sensations she never knew existed.  There was still a little pain,
but it was lost under the overwhelming tide of passion.

Closing her eyes, she just gave in to the pleasure of having him
fucking her, pushing up with her hips to meet his every downstroke.

"Yes!  Fuck me, ohh, fuck me, ohh yes, fuck me, pump me, fill me,
ohh, don't ever stop, please, keep going, never stop, ohhh, it feels
soooo gooood!"  She was panting now, saying something with every 
second breath, not caring or thinking of her audience, just about 
getting filled and cumming.  It was so close, she could taste it.

It was Richard's turn.  "Oh god, I'm gonna do it!  I'm gonna cum in 
you!  I'll fill you so full!  Gohd yes!  I'm cumming  ...  
cumming ..."  

It was exquisite, that feeling, spurting into that tiny tight little
hole just opened up for him.  Nothing mattered right then except the
feel of his cock slamming home inside that warm wet slippery fuck 
tube.  He could feel his sperm splashing in there, squishing out and 
around his cock and dribbling down his balls.

That little extra, him slamming home and squirting inside, was enough 
to send her over as well, her orgasm reaching up from deep within and
grabbing her whole body.  It was like nothing she'd ever felt before,
starting from her groin and washing through every part of her, ripping 
out to her fingers and toes then washing back to implode in her center 
again, re-igniting even stronger with every thrust and twitch of that 
thing inside her.  It was so incredibly powerful, she almost forgot to
breathe, just gasping every once in a while between jolts.

Only after Richard had completely drained himself, and stopped with 
his cock buried to the hilt, did she finally come down again.  Her 
vagina kept spasming around his member, causing him to groan and 
shudder.  It was enough to keep her just on the edge, until her body 
calmed down.

When they both were breathing almost normally again, Brenda spoke.

"Oh.  Wow."

Richard just smiled, still supporting himself just over top of her
body, leaving himself deep inside her.  The feel of that incredibly
tight pussy was keeping him hard and ready, even after it had drained
him dry.


Behind him, the door closed silently, Caitlin's practice paying off.
Two sets of feet tiptoed down the hall, into her room, and closed
the door silently behind them.

Caitlin turned to Vicky, eyes still wide, her face a mask of shock
and disbelief, whispering,  "Oh my god!  That was un-be-lievable!"
They climbed into bed together, under the covers, whispering excitedly
about what they had just witnessed.


Richard wrapped Brenda up in one arm and rolled over onto his back,
pulling her on top of him, keeping his still-hard organ buried inside
her.  He pulled a pillow over for himself, and let his lover get
comfortable on top of him, sliding her legs down beside his and 
resting her head on her arms on top of his chest.

"That was a little better than my first one."

"Richard, this was my one and only, and don't you forget it!  Thank 
you, it was wonderful.  Now I know why my mom likes fucking so much.  
If it's like this all the time, that's all I want to do for the rest 
of my life."

"'Fraid I can't help you on that.  I can only do it four or five times 
a day, maybe.  And I need the odd day off."

"If that's all I get out of you, then I guess I'll just have to settle
for sex for half my life, the morning half and the evening half.  I'll
sleep and eat in the middle, somewhere."

"God, I think I've created a monster.  The creature that ate Richard
alive!  Aaaauuuggggg!"

"<snicker>  Yeah, right.  Like you wouldn't enjoy it at all, would you.
Ooooo this thing inside me feels soooo goooood."

"Well, it's there waiting for you if you want to use it."

"I'm too tired to fuck anymore tonight.  But I do want to try 
something my mom and dad do every once in a while."

"What?"

"Let's get ready to sleep first and then I'll tell you!"

"More secrets?"

"You'll find out soon enough."

They got cleaned up, Brenda trotting off to the bathroom, holding a
towel to her groin, totally unconcerned that she was still naked.
Richard, shaking his head, cleaned himself up as much as possible with
a towel, slipped on his boxers, then cleaned up the dribbles and
drops of blood on the bed.  Most of them had been caught by the 
towels, with only a few splashes of semen left to wipe up elsewhere.


About ten minutes later they were cleaned up and back in bed, this
time with the light out.

"Now, what's this big secret thing you want us to do."

"It's something my parents do once in a while, and mom looks like she
absolutely adores it, so I gotta try it too!  Richard, I want you to
fuck me to sleep.  Stick that thing of yours inside me and pump it in
and out until either you cum or fall asleep."

After Richard's initial objections, saying she'd be too sore, or he'd
crush her, or she'd fall off him, or whatever, she explained what she
wanted and how to do it.

They lay in bed, on their sides, with her back to his front, knees 
bent, with her 'sitting' in his lap.  He rubbed his cock up and down 
against her slit for a few seconds to get hard (that's all it took!) 
then greased his cock with K-Y again.  Pushing into her pussy from the 
rear, it felt even tighter than before.  She whimpered a bit at the 
first push, but then started wiggling and thrusting her hips to get 
him inside.  

Inch by inch his cock slid in.  She was still full of his semen
and a little of her blood, and she was once again producing lots of 
her own juice, so he went in fairly easily.  There was a little pain 
when his cock crossed the remnants of her hymen, but she ignored it.  
This was just too good to stop.  That wonderful stuffed feeling was 
back, and she never wanted to be empty again.  

The sensations his cock was sending to his brain were incredible.  
Each tiny thrust and wiggle of her hips pushed him deeper into that
extremely tight just-opened cunt of hers.  It was so smooth and silky 
in there, like no other pussy he'd ever been in.  She was hot and 
wet.  He could feel her juices leaking out around his cock, covering 
her ass and his balls.  Finally his penetration was halted, as deep as 
he could get, with the end of his cock pressing firmly against her 
cervix.

"Stop.  Just ... just hold it in there for now.  I like it in me like
this, filling me up.  It feels huge, but so nice.  Hold me now, hug
me close.  Please Richard.  I want to be right here in your arms when 
I wake up.  With your cock in me."

"If I can, I will.  No guarantees, but I'll try."

Sliding one arm under her head and her pillow, he wrapped the other
around her torso, placing his hand on her chest between her breasts.  
She hugged his arm to her possessively, as though she would be holding 
it for the rest of her life.  Even impaled as she was, ass in his lap, 
she was that much shorter than him that her head nicely fit under his 
chin.

"Okay, start moving.  Slower ... slower ... that's it ... now 
deeper ... a little deeper ... ouch!  Not that far back, my hymen 
still hurts!  Okay, keep going ... yeah, that feels good ... a little 
slower ... yeah, perfect.  Just like that.  Now just keep pumping 
'till you cum or fall asleep."

He was stroking about half-way out then all the way back in against 
her cervix, taking about ten seconds per stroke.  He was resisting the 
urge to just bang away again, this being brought on by the sudden 
feelings of lust overtaking him, holding her naked teen body to him, 
his cock telling him that this was the best ever and just go for it.

After a while he developed a nice, easy, relaxed pace and rhythm, 
close to what Brenda wanted, but not quite as long or as deep.  He 
simply clenched his ass to push in, then relaxed to slide out.  It 
was so effortless that way, he thought he really could do it all 
night.  There was an end in sight, though, because the constant 
stimulation of her twat on his cock was driving him higher.  He knew 
that eventually he could cum just doing that.

She was enjoying herself as well, he noticed.  With her 'sitting' in
his lap, almost the full length of her body was pressed into him.  
Every once in a while he could feel different muscles in her body 
twitch and spasm, usually accompanied by a tiny squeak from her, and 
sometimes followed by her vagina grabbing his cock.  The first few 
times that happened, he stopped and waited for her to let go, but 
after her impatient bum-wiggling told him to get back to work, he 
simply pushed through her grip.  That invariably brought a long, 
whining sigh from her.

About an hour after they started, he noticed that her muscle spasms
and vaginal contractions were getting more frequent.  All of a sudden
her entire body convulsed once, then seized up, completely rigid,
and she grabbed his arm, and his cock, in a death grip.  Pushing 
through her clasping cunt as he was used to doing by then, he simply 
kept pumping.  Her breathing was infrequent and gasping.  After about
a minute, she relaxed for a second, took a deep breath, then seized up
again, throwing her head back against his chest.  The third time she
did it, he was worried enough that he stopped.  She immediately 
wiggled her bum and squeaked out the words "don't stop", so he started
again.

Six or seven more times she did that, cumming long and deep, going
completely rigid or wriggling very stiffly.  Near the end, he was 
having to hold her tight to him, since she was jerking around enough 
to possibly pop right off his shaft. 

With several long breaths she relaxed, and whispered "don't stop" 
again.  Her breathing evened out, becoming slower and deeper, and her 
grip on his arm loosened.  He thought she was falling asleep, until he 
felt her inner muscles grab his cock.  They grabbed, then released, 
then grabbed, then released, over and over, in time with his thrusts.  
'She's milking me, for christ sake!'

After all that buildup and watching her cum over and over again, it 
didn't take long for that familiar sensation to show up.  His insides
were tightening up, getting ready to fire deep inside her.  He wanted
it now and, apparently, so did she.  He kept up that slow pace until
that first jet was on its way, then he jammed his cock as far inside 
as it would go in one brutal thrust, shooting his seed tight against 
her cervix, trying to inject it straight into her womb.  With each 
spurt he pulled half-way out then jammed home again, deep inside.

Brenda's body tensed up with his first deep thrust, then seized up 
with the second, locked into another orgasm.  Her breathing stopped 
after one deep gasp, not resuming until he finished pumping every drop 
of semen into her.

When he finally finished, she started breathing again, long, deep 
lungfulls, catching up with her body's needs.  This time when she
relaxed, she melted completely, every muscle going limp.

His cock was still insider her, but soft and shrunken.  Even her tight
pussy couldn't keep him hard forever.  When he made a move to get up,
thinking he should clean up, she clamped down on his arm with one
hand, and reached around and grabbed his hip with the other, holding
him in place, keeping his limp member inside her.  She seemed 
completely indifferent to the semen leaking out of her pussy, covering 
her crotch and ass and his thighs and balls, and dripping onto the 
bed.

She relaxed again when Richard did.  He thought he heard a muffled 
and quiet "thank you", but wasn't really sure.  She was soon asleep.  
Richard, tired out by his and her exertions, quickly followed.


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< I'm baaaaack!  Did you miss me?  Ouch, no fair, I wasn't looking! >

< I guess I'm going to have to wrap up now.  The weekend's over,
and I need to return to real work tomorrow.  Besides, Brenda's back
from her trip and needs some, ah, *personal* attention right now.
Me too.  Four days alone, writing this kind of stuff, can make a guy
pretty horny.  Three more months before she's finished high-school,
then we can come out of the closet.  She lives with me full time
now, ever since she turned seventeen.  Mary and Will figured that
if she's old enough to get married, she's old enough to shack up. 
Besides, she was spending more time and more nights over here than 
at home anyway.  We've tentatively scheduled the wedding for early 
August, a year and a half from now. >

< Oh yeah, I own this beach house now, after getting some help from
her folks.  With my new job, I'll have them paid back and the
house free and clear in seven or eight years.  It's nice joining
into a booming family business. >

< Caitlin moved out a couple of years ago, shacking up with some
dumb twit from college.  I think he's a jerk and not nearly good
enough for my sister, but she likes him so I keep my mouth shut.
She's twenty two now and an adult and old enough to make her own
decisions. >

< Vicky started dating around that time too, and now has a string of 
young studs hanging around her parents' place.  Five eleven, fifteen
years old, built and beautiful, sure of herself, mature and very much 
sexually active, she attracts them like flies to honey.  I think she's 
gone overboard. She has another semi-permanent lady friend, a 
seventeen year old rather dowdy looking girl who's moved into Brenda's 
old room.  It's hard on the ego of those jocks, but she keeps them all 
firmly in line.  She can be a real bitch when she's mad.  Trust me, I 
know. >

< Now you know why I wouldn't trade my life for anyone else's.  Not 
for any amount of cash.  I have the woman of my dreams here and now,
ready and willing, and we love each other.  So we started a little
early.  So what.  I'm hers for as long as she wants me, and she says 
that she wants me forever. >

< Brenda's calling.  Goodbye and goodnight. >


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<< End of chapter 9>>

<<FIN>>

Subject: BOMBADIL: "Brenda - A Love Story" X/9 (out-takes)
From: S THOMAS BUSH <stbush@iglou.com>
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Brenda - A Love Story  [ M/f f/f ]

by Tom Bombadil  (c) Aug 1996

Out-takes

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text from your computer.

This is purely a work of fiction, with all characters and actions 
described by me coming straight out of my imagination.  As a work of 
fiction, it does not condone or condemn any of the activities or 
actions described, nor does it relate to any type of real events in 
my life, or known to me in the lives of any of my friends or 
relatives.

You've been warned.

Note:  All the scenes for the Brenda saga, after chapter three,
were written as a disjointed series of episodes, with no particular
flow or storyline to them.  It was difficult enough to patch and
re-write those parts that fit.  The following scenes didn't.  They
were hot enough that I thought I'd throw them in anyway.


**********************************************************************

<<This is the original version of the scene where Caitlin first
shares Richard's bed.  It didn't properly fit the milder storyline
I ended up using.>>

It was late Wednesday night / early Thursday morning.

A loud knocking on his door woke Richard.  Checking to make certain
he was decent, he told Caitlin to come in.  She did, closing the
door behind her.  At least this time she was wearing a negligee,
short and revealing though it was.  She'd been crying.  She walked 
over and sat on the bed.

"I had a nightmare.  About Angie.  Then about Vicky.  It was 
horrible!"

She started crying again.  Richard sat up and gathered her in his 
arms.

"Please hold me.  Please.  I don't want to be alone right now."

He held her until her tears stopped, until she was almost asleep.

"Time to go back to bed now, Caitlin."

"Please hold me.  I don't want the nightmare to come back."

What could he do.  Standing her up, he pulled back the covers, then
lay back with his head on his pillow.  He opened his arms to her, and
she crawled into them, curling up against his chest and stomach.  
Pulling the covers back over them both, he hugged her to him, making 
soothing sounds for her.  She was soon asleep.  It took him a lot 
longer, holding the body that he'd stared at with such illicit lust so 
recently.

She was still there when he woke up, still sleeping, but now turned 
with her back to him, fitting into him spoon-style.

Slowly waking up, and realizing who was in bed with him, he blushed.
Somehow during the night, her negligee had ridden up almost to her 
chest.  He knew this because his right arm was curled over her waist, 
his hand resting on her bare stomach, just above her crotch, and his 
left arm was curled around her shoulder, supporting her head, with 
that hand cupping and holding her fabric-covered left breast.  That 
wasn't the worst.  Somehow his cock had slid through the opening in 
the front of his shorts.  It was now pushed up between her thighs, 
resting full-length along her pussy.  She wasn't wearing panties.  He 
was hard as a rock.

'How the hell did this happen?'

Slowly he tried to extricate himself.  First, he attempted to pull his 
cock out from between her legs.  He very gently started sliding his
hips back away from her.  At this slight movement, she moaned and 
clamped her thighs together.  He stopped and held his breath, 
terrified that she'd wake up.

When she relaxed and seemed completely asleep again, he tried once 
more.  This time it was worse.  She groaned, clamped her thighs 
together, and started rocking her hips back and forth, very slowly.  
Richard froze again.  Over the sound of his hammering heart, he could 
just make out what she was whispering in her dream.

"Ohhh, that feels good.  Don't stop.  Make it last forever.  Yes,
Angie, just like that."  There was more, but most of it was 
unintelligible, interspersed with tiny whimpers and sighs.

He tried once more to pull away, but stopped when Caitlin whimpered 
and clearly said "No Angie, please, don't go away! ...  Vicky, I need 
you!"  After a minute or two, her hips started rocking again, and the 
pleasant little sounds and words were back.  He was now too scared to 
pull back, thinking she'd wake up for sure and find them locked 
together like this.  He couldn't even pull his hand off her breast.  
Somewhere during one of his attempts to pull his cock out, she'd 
grabbed his hand.

Resigning himself to his fate, he put his head down on his pillow.

Whatever dreams she was having, they were definitely erotic.  His
cock could feel her growing moisture and heat, and feel her lower lips 
gently expanding and getting softer and damper.  Slowly but surely his
cock was spreading her lips and moving upward, eventually settling
against and rubbing across her inner meat.  He could feel a small nub,
probably her clit, nestled deep in the crack.  Despite the guilt, fear
and shame he was feeling, this was getting to him.  He felt those 
familiar twinges deep in his groin, and knew if his sister continued 
what she was doing, he'd spray semen all over the place.  He promised 
himself no matter what, he couldn't do that to her.

When the tempo of her hips increased, he knew he had to pull back.
Before he could move, her hand went down between her legs and caught
the head of his cock.  She was pulling it up tighter to her cunt!
Now he was well and truly trapped, with no way out.  If he pulled out,
she'd probably hurt him, and definitely wake up.  If he didn't pull
out, he was going to splatter her hand and bush with semen.  He almost
cried.  He prayed she'd stop before he came.

He could tell by the fast, panting breaths she was taking, with the
whimpers in between, she was close.  She sucked in a deep breath, 
letting it out slowly between her teeth.  Her hips started bucking.  
He was trying to hold off.

With a sudden gasp, she squeezed her thighs tightly around his cock,
suddenly pushing the head up into the top of her crack and rubbing it
furiously.  Now it was too late.  He started spurting, shooting his
sperm into the top of her pussy, all over her hand, all over the top
of her mound.  She was still rubbing fast and hard, which forced his 
semen all the way up and down her crack, lubricating it further, 
letting her slide more easily along his length.

Letting loose a series of shuddering breaths, she climaxed, stopping 
her hips, tensing up all the muscles in her body.  She pressed the 
head of his cock hard, keeping him in place.  He could feel the 
ripples of her orgasm running all up and down her body, centering on 
her groin.

It wound down quickly, her body relaxing, her breathing slowing down
and becoming more regular.  She hadn't released the pressure on the
head of his cock yet, still pushing it into her crack.  If he pulled
back now, she'd push it right into her vagina.  Hell, if he started
getting soft and shrinking, it still might happen.

Thankfully, she finally rolled over onto her stomach, still holding
his left hand on her breast, effectively trapping it there.  His
cock finally free, he used his other hand to pull it back into his
shorts.  Before he fell back to sleep, one more thought rose up, one
sure to give him nightmares.  What if she got pregnant?


In the morning, Richard was awakened by a kiss on his cheek.  It was
Caitlin.  He opened his eyes and found himself staring down the
neck of her negligee.  Both of her breasts were hanging in clear view,
showing off their dark brown nipples, each puckered and hard.  An
idiotic thought crossed his mind.  He hadn't even noticed her nipples
last night.

"Thanks Rich.  That was the best sleep I've had in ages.  I had such
wonderful dreams."

'Yeah,' thought Richard.  'And I'm gonna hafta live with my 
nightmares.'

She was out in the hall, closing the door, when she stuck her head 
back into his room.

"Just remember what I said about that thing," glancing at his crotch.
"You almost poked it inside me last night.  As it is, I need a shower
to wash off the leftovers.  Ta Ta."  The door closed behind her, and 
he could hear her walking down the stairs.  A few minutes later the 
shower started.

His mind finally clicked into gear.  What the hell had happened last
night?  And what did she know?  She certainly didn't seem upset in 
the least, not acting like a girl who'd almost been fucked by her 
brother.  He had to find out.


**********************************************************************

<<In this scene, the three girls had come up with a plan to
'open up' Richard's rather conservative morals to the possibilities
available with two other more than willing virgins.  It definitely
didn't fit the storyline.  Too bad.>>

When Richard got to the top of the stairs, he heard some quiet moans
and whimpers coming from his sister's room.  Seeing that the door was
still open a bit, he couldn't help himself.  He walked over to have a
peek at what was going on.  When he saw the two girls, he just stood 
there, mesmerized, unable to think or move.  This was his adolescent 
wet dream come to life, something he never in his wildest fantasies 
ever thought he'd see in reality.

Vicky was lying stretched out on the bed, face up, head pointed a 
little to the right of the doorway (Richard's perspective).  He could 
see the slight bumps of her just-developing breasts, the dark circles 
of her aureoles, and the hard, pointed nubbins of her nipples.  Her
bare pubes were wet and glistening, as were her thighs, legs spread 
wide to the world.  He couldn't see much of her face because Caitlin 
was in the way.

His sister was kneeling on the bed, legs apart, one on either
side of Vicky's face.  Her hips were raised slightly, and she was 
leaning back, supporting her weight by holding on to her ankles.  She 
wasn't quite facing straight at him, but her legs were spread so far 
apart he could see everything.  Sitting there, moaning, eyes closed 
tight, she couldn't see anything, oblivious to everything except the 
person under her who was eating her out like an expert.

Richard just stared, mesmerized by the scene.  Caitlin's skin was 
covered with a sheen of sweat, from her scalp to her ankles.  
Everything was moving, too, swaying in time to her gyrating hips, her 
breasts making small circles in the air - those perfect, delicious 
looking mounds, with wonderful, oh-so suckable little nipples, hard as 
rock right now.

He snapped back to reality for a second as Caitlin shifted.  Had she 
seen him?  Then he saw that Vicky'd changed tactics, using one hand 
and her tongue in Caitlin's hot little snatch.  He became enraptured 
again, watching Vicky's tongue flicker in and out, up and down, 
swirling around inside those lips, hand moving in sync with her 
tongue, sliding in and out of that tight, virginal hole.

Totally entranced, hypnotized by the scene in front of him, he barely 
felt something at his waist, and hardly noticed his towel falling 
away, paying no attention to those minor distractions.  Only when 
something warm and wet engulfed his hard cock did he finally notice, 
moaning and leaning against the door jam.  He knew he shouldn't be 
watching, it was wrong, but he was pinned in place by that mouth 
surrounding his member, pumping in and out.  He tried to move, but his 
arms and legs wouldn't listen.  Eyes closing by themselves, he lost 
himself for a moment.

Opening his eyes again, he was shocked.  Caitlin's eyes, half-closed, 
glazed over with lust, were staring right at him.  He whimpered a bit, 
because he still couldn't get his body to obey.  Caitlin looked down 
at his crotch, looked back into his eyes for a moment, then closed her 
eyes, leaned her head back, and lost herself in an orgasm.

This was too much for him.  His mind disconnected, watching her 
perfect body run through its climax, her head snapping back and forth, 
muscles tightening and loosening in waves, breath coming in great 
gasps as she shuddered, unable to move or think at that moment.  He 
felt himself letting go, unable to control himself, back spasming, 
hips thrusting forward.  The release went through him like a shock, 
spreading out from his groin to the rest of his body.  His eyes stayed 
open, mindlessly watching Caitlin, as her body started to wind down 
from its climax.

He felt himself letting loose, shooting deep into Brenda's throat time 
and time again, eyes following his sister as she slowly slid off Vicky 
and lay there, eyes open, watching him spasm, deep in the middle of 
his own orgasm.  It was painfully intense.  Somewhere inside, an 
overworked set of muscles were complaining, but still functioning.  
His cock jerked again, sending another splash of semen into his 
lover's mouth.

Finally it was over, the flow stopping, with nothing left to come out.
Brenda let go of his cock at almost the same time Caitlin closed her
eyes and lay back flat on the bed.  Released from the two things 
pinning him in place, he sank slowly to the floor and sat there, 
cross-legged, leaning back against the wall.  Brenda lay down on the 
floor, putting her head in his lap, closing her eyes and resting.  The 
only sounds left were those of heavy breathing and rapidly beating 
hearts.

Brenda and Richard just stayed there, not moving, even when Vicky got
up to go to the bathroom.  He just mindlessly watched her walk up to
them and step across, her naked, wet pussy just inches from his nose.
He turned his head and watched her tight little buns as they bounced 
down to the washroom and disappeared inside.  He was still watching 
when she came back, squatted down, draped his arm over her shoulders, 
and sat beside him.

A few minutes later Caitlin headed for the washroom.  He also just 
stared as her lightly-furred, nearly adult, damp and shining twat
passed right in front of his eyes.  He turned and watched her cute,
jiggling ass until it disappeared.  When she came back, he watched her
perfect, bouncing breasts until they disappeared up out of his field 
of vision, then refocused on her pussy.  Stopping on his other side, 
she also squatted down, wrapped his other arm around her shoulders, 
and sat down beside him.

Luckily, his hands knew what to do without needing any help from his
brain.  They started to fondle and caress the girls' breasts, stopping
to tease and play with their nipples from time to time.

Eventually, he started to come back to himself, slowly taking stock of
where he was, what he was doing, and who he was with.

"Could someone please tell me if I'm dreaming or not?  Did what I 
think just happen really happen, or was I hallucinating?"

A familiar voice came up from his lap.  "Well, right now you're 
sitting on the floor, naked.  There's three very pretty naked ladies 
surrounding you.  I just finished sucking you through a mind-blowing 
orgasm, and you watched the same thing happen to your sister.  You've 
got one arm around my little sister, playing with her baby boobs and 
nipples, and you've got your other arm wrapped around your baby 
sister, playing with her nice big boobs and nipples.  If that seems to 
fit what you think happened, then you've just about got it right."

"Oh.  Okay."  Short pause.  "Here I thought I was doing good, coping 
with having a thirteen year old sexpot for a fiancee.  Now I have to 
deal with an eleven year old sexpot future sister-in-law and a 
seventeen year old sexpot sister."  Another short pause.  "Okay.  I'll 
wake up in a while and everything will be just fine.  This is all just 
a dream, isn't it?"

>From his left  "That's funny, your hand playing with my little boobies
and nipples feels real."

>From his right  "You think maybe these breasts you're playing with 
over here aren't real?  They're mine, and your hand feels pretty good 
doing whatever you're doing."

>From his lap  "Let's see, what to do, what to do."  Richard jumped,
every nerve in his body tingling.  She'd sucked his cock into her 
mouth.  Starting with the tip, she vacuumed it in, just like a piece 
of spaghetti.  "Does that feel a little more real now?"

"I'm awake.  Definitely.  I don't feel things like that when I'm 
asleep."

"Good."  He heard three echoes of that same word.

"Okay, now what?  You three obviously set this up for a reason.  So 
far, so bad.  I know I'll feel guilty as hell later, but right now, 
I'm too burned out."

"Weeeeeeell," Brenda drawled, "It's like this.  I've watched Vicky and
Caitlin a few times, and I want to learn what they know.  They've
watched us a few times, and they both want to learn what we know.
So I made them a deal.  If they could get you to cooperate, I'd let 
them 'borrow' you to teach them about sex properly.  Vicky's just old 
enough to start learning, and Caitlin should already know lots, but 
doesn't.  The rules are that you're mine, and this (grabbing his cock) 
is mine.  They can't keep you, and they can't touch this (squeezing a 
bit) without my okay first.  Anything else is fair game.  Now that you 
know the deal, it's up to them to convince you it's okay.  This little 
scene here was to get you to loosen up and let you think of the 
possibilities.  You're on, girls.  Just remember, he's already been 
drained dry and burned to a crisp.  There's not much left right now."

**********************************************************************

<<This was written for later, after Richard and the three girls 
were more-or-less used to each other.>>


"Are you sure?" asked Richard.

Brenda shook her head and sighed in exasperation.

"Richard, I'm just as sure now as I was ten minutes ago.  My parents 
are both gone for the day!  Dad's gone golfing with some customers of 
his, and when they're done they're all going for some sort of dinner 
meeting thing, all on the other side of town.  The last few times 
he did this, he was gone until at least my bedtime."

That's when Vicky chipped in with her two cents worth.  "Yeah, and 
Mom's gone to a charity auction.  She figures it won't end until 
eight or nine, at the earliest.  That's why you're *babysitting*."  

"God," Replied Richard.  "You three don't need a babysitter, you need 
a keeper!  You're all wild animals!"

"Come on, Rich, lighten up.  It's not like we're doing something 
horribly indecent or anything.  Besides, we've seen it all before.  
What's to get upset about?"  The last few words were a little muffled, 
as Caitlin was speaking while pulling her dress over her head.  She 
wasn't wearing anything underneath.  Brenda and Vicky were already 
naked.  They had walked out of their house that way.

"But ..."  Richard's last feeble protests were silenced when Brenda 
pulled his head down for a kiss.  Then, while she had his attention 
diverted, she grabbed his shorts and boxers and pulled them down 
to his ankles.

"There!" she said, stepping back.  "And don't you dare pull them back 
up!"

Despite turning several shades of red, Richard stepped out of his 
clothes.  Brenda had finally gotten her way.  They were going to do 
some suntanning in the girls' back yard, au natural.

"I'll get the Koolaid!" yelled Vicky, as she ran back into the 
house.  Caitlin followed at a rather more relaxed pace.  Richard 
pulled several lounge chairs out into the sunshine, and Brenda put
small tables in between them.  

"Let's see if I got this right," Vicky said as she came back out of 
the house.  "Koolaid for me, Caitlin already has hers, you get the 
same, Brenda, and Richard ends up with coke.  Dad's out of beer, and 
I'm not going over to his place to get some - at least, not dressed 
like this I'm not."

"Uh uh, Richard," said Brenda, as she shook her finger at him.  "Just 
drop those shorts.  That's not an excuse for you to get dressed 
again.  You can survive without your beer.  Relax.  Enjoy the 
sunshine.  Enjoy the view.  I know I am."

There was a "me too" from Caitlin and a "me three" from Vicky.   
Richard looked up and saw three girls sitting on their loungers, all 
smiling, all watching him.  Red faced again, he sat down and stretched 
out.  Vicky and Caitlin also stretched out, while Brenda got up and 
went for her bag.

After rummaging around for a few seconds, she let out an "Aha!", and 
stood up.  "Number 25 sun screen, just what you need, dear, for that 
rather pallid skin of yours.  After all, we wouldn't want you getting 
sunburned anyplace where the sun doesn't normally shine, now would 
we?"

"Okay, okay.  Just toss it over."

"Now where would the fun be if we all just did ourselves?  Besides, 
you can't reach all the places the sun can.  Now roll over onto your 
tummy and I'll get started."

Richard did as he was told.  He only squirmed and wiggled a little 
when she was doing his ass and feet.  When Brenda told him to turn 
over, he mumbled something and stayed put.

"What was that?" she asked, as she bent down to hear him better.  He 
whispered something in her ear.

"Ooooh, really?  Hey girls, Richard says he's too embarrassed to turn 
over - he's got a hard on!"

Both girls turned to look, naturally, so he turned a brighter shade of 
red.

After a minute or so, with all three girls staring expectantly at him, 
he turned over.  By then, the embarrassment had gotten to him.  He was 
mostly limp.

"THAT'S what we were waiting to see?" exclaimed Vicky.  "It hardly 
seems worth looking at right now."

"It'll get better.  I've still got to do his front."

"No, I think I'll do my own front, if you don't mind."

"Nope.  That's not how it works today.  Nobody does themselves.  
It's a new rule we made up.  Right, sis?  Caitlin?"

Both looked at Brenda, who winked while looking away from Richard.  

"Right," said Vicky, almost immediately.  It took a few seconds longer 
for Caitlin to nod, and she blushed and stared at Vicky as she did 
so.

Richard simply groaned and closed his eyes.  Brenda took that to mean 
he was accepting his fate, and started rubbing in the lotion.  
Starting at his neck, she covered him completely, spending far more 
time than necessary when she was doing his cock and balls.  By the 
time she moved on to his thighs, he was once again hard.  That earned 
him a wolf-whistle from Vicky.  He just blushed a little more.

"Okay, all done.  Now that wasn't so bad, was it?"

"It depends on your definition of bad," replied Richard.

"Hold out your hand," said Brenda.

He did, and she squeezed a dollop of lotion onto his palm.

"That's for your face and hands."

Brenda went and retrieved another bottle from her bag.

"Okay, handsome.  Now it's my turn."  She threw the bottle to Richard, 
then went and lay face down on her lounger.

"SPF 8?"  He was reading off the front of the bottle.

"Sure.  I'm already a toasty gold.  Or hadn't you noticed?"

"I noticed.  You and Vicky are both a well-cooked brown, all over.  
And judging by the parts of my sister I don't normally get to see, 
you've had her out here tanning in the buff more than once."

"Sure.  Like I said before, when it's just us girls, Mom doesn't mind 
us being out here like this.  Lots of times she comes out with us."

"So your Mom's got an all-over tan too?"

"Sure.  She's not as brown as we are, but she sure doesn't have 
any tan lines.  Who do you think got us started?"

Richard made no reply, since the answer was obvious.  Instead, he 
concentrated on the job at hand - or rather, the job in hand."

"Richard?"

"Yes, Brenda?"

"Go nice and slow.  It feels better that way.  And make sure you do a 
thorough job."

"Yes, dear."

Spreading suntan lotion onto Brenda was not something he considered an 
onerous chore.  She was a beautiful young lady - firm, fit, toned, 
and with no spare flesh.  By his estimate, she was about halfway in 
between a little girl and a real woman, with hips just spreading out, 
legs filling in nicely, and breasts grown to small handfuls.  Despite 
the audience - and he knew both other girls were watching carefully - 
he did a proper job of it, including spending a good deal of time 
handling her lower cheeks, which were beautifully rounded, and hard 
yet soft at the same time.  Then she turned over.

"Now you get to do my front.  Can I have just a little on my hand?  I 
need to do my face too."

With a silent groan, he began.  Richard was still amazed that someone 
as young and beautiful as Brenda had chosen him for her partner.  Just 
looking at her was sometimes enough for him to go off into a partial 
daze as he remembered what it was like to touch, fondle, taste, and 
hold her.  It was hard for him to keep from getting carried away, 
especially when he was doing her breasts and thighs.  He studiously 
avoided touching her pussy and mound, not wanting to further embarrass 
her, or rather, himself.  He stood up when he figured he was done.  
By then, Brenda was lying there with her eyes closed, breathing a 
little heavily, and had a slightly flushed look around her chest and 
neck.  She opened her eyes when he stopped.

"Richard, where are you going?"

"Uh, to lie down?"

"But you're not finished yet.  Do you have the slightest idea what a 
sunburn down there feels like?  I do.  Now finish what you started."

Once again blushing, he looked to see if the other two were watching.  
They were.  Brenda wore a big smirk, while Caitlin tried for a look of 
studied nonchalance.  She failed.

With a sigh, he coated his right hand with lotion, then started to 
carefully and delicately spread it onto her nether regions.  Brenda 
was having none of that.  She grabbed his wrist with both hands, 
pulled his hand hard into her crotch, and began to move it up and 
down.

"Yes.  Keep it up.  Just.  Like. <unh>  That."

It was about then that Richard realized he'd been set up, that they 
had plans for him.  He just didn't know what they were or how far the 
girls would go.  So, he decided to enjoy himself.  While one hand was 
busy fondling and rubbing Brenda's pussy, he used the other to caress 
her breasts and nipples.  Eventually, after she spread her legs wide, 
after his fingers had dipped into her crack, after one digit slid 
deep inside, and after some well-timed nipple pulling and pinching, 
she climaxed.  

Brenda lay there, arms stretched out over her head and breathing 
hard, for several minutes.

"Now that's what I call a thorough job.  Thank you."

"You're welcome."

He had just enough time to take a pull at his drink and lie down 
before Vicky spoke up.

"Richard, could you do me too, please?"

"WHAT?"

"Could you put some lotion on me too, please."

"Just put lotion on you?  You're sure that's all you're after?"

There was no reply, as Vicky rolled over and wiggled her bottom.  
He looked to Brenda for guidance.  She was lying back, stretched out, 
eyes half closed, and smiling.  A wink was what he got.  For some 
reason, he doubted that Vicky would be satisfied with him just oiling 
her down.  Nevertheless, he did as he was asked.

It wasn't the first time he'd touched Vicky, not by a long shot, but 
it was his first time handling her while naked - either him or her.  
He was hard as a rock again before he finished with her backside.  
Then she flipped over for him to do her front.

"I want you to do a thorough job on me too, Richard."

Once again he looked at Brenda, who was lying on her side, watching, 
and grinning from ear to ear.  So was Caitlin.

Glowing a bright red, he proceeded.  Richard didn't know if he was 
more embarrassed or turned on by doing Vicky's body.  She was thin, 
tight, and hard from her athletic pursuits, yet with a soft skin, and 
with curves and padding developing in all the right places.  He liked 
the feel of her taught stomach and waist, and the softness of her 
breasts.  They were barely apparent to the eye when she was laying 
down like that, but his hands had no trouble knowing what they were 
feeling.  The same was true when he was rubbing down her thighs and 
hips.  Again, he tried to avoid her pubic area.  His eyes, though, 
were continually drawn to that delicate junction.

Bare as the day she was born, everything was smooth and tanned.  There 
was no hair, either because nothing was yet growing, or because, like 
her sister, she shaved it off regularly.  Still juvenile, it didn't 
look like much more than a tightly closed slit, even though her legs 
were spread and the lips were reddened and puffy looking.

"Don't forget, Richard, I want a thorough job, just like my sister 
got."

Having a quick look around, seeing if there was any escape or any 
mercy, he found none.  Caitlin was staring avidly, eyes fixed on what 
he was doing, a look of wide-eyed wonder on her face.  Brenda was 
still smiling, still watching through half-lidded eyes.

Exhaling loudly, he mentally gave in.  With one hand, he stroked her 
legs and thighs.  The other hand went straight for her slit.  
Delicately and carefully, he opened her up with two fingers, and 
inserted the tip of a third into her hole.  She was already quite 
wet.  He began a steady rhythm, sliding the tip of one digit in and 
out of her vagina, while gently rubbing her clit with another.  The 
smell was intoxicating, mixing the light coconutty scent of lotion 
with sweat and pre-teen arousal.

Vicky pulled up both knees, spread her legs as wide as she could, and 
stretched her arms up over her head.  Almost immediately, she began 
rolling her hips and moaning softly.  He played with her pussy lips 
by stroking and rubbing them.  He played with her clit by rolling it 
around with the tip of a finger.  He then played with her mind by 
tickling her ribs.  She jumped and squealed loudly.

"No fair!  You're not supposed to do that!"

Richard could see that Caitlan was barely holding back her laughter, 
and he heard some snorts from Brenda, who was behind him.  Vicky 
grabbed the hand he tickled her with and held it tightly to her 
chest.  She didn't want a repeat of that trick.  He kept fondling 
her pussy with his other hand, which slowly calmed her down, then 
started her moaning again.  As her breathing got heavier, his stroking 
got faster and firmer.

"Keep going.  Keep going!  Oh!  OH!"  She climaxed with a long, 
wavering moan, pinching her legs together and pushing her hips hard 
up into Richard's moving hand.  Finally, she lay still.  His hand and 
her crotch were both soaked with her lubrications.

When Richard looked up, he saw Caitlan was flushed and slowly 
wriggling about.  He walked over to his lounger, took a drink, and 
wiped himself off with a towel.

"Riiiiich.  Oh, Riiiiiich.  Could you do me a big favour?  
Pleeeease?"

He thought about it for a good couple of seconds, picturing his 
sister's bare pussy (Vicky insisted that she shave too), her 
more-than-a-handful breasts, her perfect legs, round bottom, hips, and 
narrow waist, before he said "No way!"

"Oh, but Riiiich, all I want is the number fifteen sunblock.  Is that 
such a big deal?"

Blushing again, he retrieved what she wanted from Brenda's bag and 
tossed it to her.  He didn't want to get too close, just in case.

"Thanks, Rich.  What did you think I wanted when you said no so loud?"

"I think I can guess," injected Vicky.  "His mind was in the gutter."  

"Sorry, brother dear," said Caitlin, "but Vicky's doing me.  And 
Vicky, I'm ready for you to do a thorough job."

"No problem."

Laying down, he watched over top of Brenda's shoulder as Vicky 
started oiling down his sister.  He watched her do her shoulders, her 
back, her ass, and her legs.  Then he watched her do her chest and 
breasts, her waist and sides, her hips, and her legs.  Like him, 
Vicky avoided the centre until last.

Richard listened to his sister's faint whimpers and cries as Vicky 
sucked on her nipples, opened her vaginal lips, and slid a finger 
inside.  Imagining himself in Vicky's place was a pleasant torture.  
Needing some relief himself, he began stroking his cock.  None of the 
girls noticed.  Caitlin had her eyes closed, Vicky had her face 
hovering just above Caitlin's pussy, where her hands were quite busy, 
and Brenda was watching those two, facing away from Richard.

The only sounds that could be heard were Caitlin's breathy whines and 
a bird somewhere off in the distance.  He made no sound, despite the 
fact that he was close to exploding.  Brenda was also being silent, he 
noticed, even though her elbow was moving up and down rather rapidly 
and her hand had to be somewhere in the vicinity of her crotch.

It wasn't long before his sister started gasping and arching her 
back.  When she grabbed Vicky's hands and started pumping her hips up 
and down, he exploded, sending several long streams of his essence 
out onto the grass.  Caitlin and he collapsed at almost the same 
instant, both totally spent.  Seconds later, Brenda moaned and lay 
back, her breathing fast and shallow.  Vicky kissed her lover, had her 
fingers licked clean, then went and lay down.

Summoning up a little strength, Richard raised his head and looked 
over at the girls.  All three were coated with a sheen of sweat, all 
three were breathing deeply, all three were laying back with arms and 
legs splayed wide, and all three were flushed with arousal and 
their recent activities.  He knew he probably looked no better than 
they did.  Smiling a wry smile, he shook his head and let his head 
drop.

That's when the back door opened.

Four pairs of eyes turned to look.  Three pairs of legs snapped shut.  
Mary was standing in the doorway, an unreadable expression on her 
face.  Caitlin, her eyes open wide with shock, turned and looked at 
Vicky.  Vicky turned and looked at Brenda.  Brenda turned and looked 
at Richard.  Richard simply looked back at Brenda.  All four then 
turned and looked at Mary again.

She, in her turn, looked at Brenda, then Vicky, then Caitlin, and then 
Richard, pointedly running her gaze up and down each of their naked 
bodies.  A long moment passed, one where nobody seemed to breathe, and 
all sound and motion seemed to stop.

Mary took a deep breath, exhaled, and looked off into the distance 
before speaking.

"It is a perfect day for sunbathing, isn't it.  I think I'll join 
you.  I'll be out in a few minutes."  She then turned and walked back into 
the house.

Caitlin turned and looked at Vicky, who then turned and looked at 
Brenda, who turned and looked at Richard, who just stared back.  
Nobody dared say anything.  It seemed to them like an eternity before 
Mary came back out of the house.  She was dressed in a long, pink, 
fluffy robe.  Picking the only empty lounger left, she undid her 
sash, removed her robe and lay it out over the cushions, then 
stretched out on her stomach, looking away from the others.

Richard stared.  It was the first time he'd seen Mary naked.  Even 
after two children, she was fit, trim, and good looking.  Her breasts 
were moderate sized double handfuls, maybe a little larger than 
Caitlin's, her hips were wider and her legs a little fuller, but she 
was nicely proportioned.  He thought her a beautiful lady.  Brenda 
was right, he thought.  There were no tan lines.  He also saw, before 
she lay down, that she shaved completely, just like Brenda.

"Richard," Mary said, still looking away from them, "could you do me 
a favour?  Please?"

"S-sure," he replied.  "What would you like?"

"Could you please bring over the number fifteen sunblock?"

He went and retrieved it from where Vicky had dropped the bottle and 
took it to Mary.  

"Here you go."

"Thank you, Richard.  But could I possibly persuade you to do me?"  

He blinked once or twice, strange thoughts running through his 
overheated brain, before he said "Pardon?"

"Would you do me, please?  Spread on some lotion?"

She was still facing away from them, so nobody could tell from her 
expression what she was thinking.

Without saying anything, he squirted some of the liquid into his hands 
and rubbed them together to warm it before starting to rub it into 
her shoulders.  

Nobody else moved or spoke, simply exchanging worried glances and 
wondering what Mary had seen and heard.

He was almost done with her back, his hands approaching her buttocks, 
before she spoke again.

"Oh, and Richard?" she said.

"Yes?" he asked.

"Make sure you do a thorough job."


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<<End of the outtakes>>

Hope you enjoyed reading these scenes as much as I did writing them.

<<FIN>>

-- CJ
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