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      Title:             Big Sister - Big Surprise!
      Author:            Megan Luce
      IV BBS Filename:   MEGAN2.Zip
      Last revision:     January 23, 1993





                          Big Sister - Big Surprise!
                                 by Megan Luce


       I had been on my own at college for two months, when one day, out
      of the  blue, I found  a letter from my  older sister Julie  in my
      mailbox. It was startling since I hadn't seen  Julie since she had
      left   home  five  years  ago,  an  hour  after  her  high  school
      graduation. She left because  she planned to be a  model, a career
      which  my parents  absolutely  forbade as  "immoral."  I had  only
      spoken to  her a few times  in those years, because  my father had
      declared  her 'persona non grata' in our household. But I received
      occasional  surreptitious messages  through  a cousin,  and I  had
      hoped that some day we could get together.

            Her career was going  very well, she said, and she wanted me
      to come visit for a weekend, to catch up  on the missing years and
      to get to know one another again. She enclosed a check for airfare
      and  incidentals. I  was thrilled  and called  her that  night; we
      arranged the visit for the following weekend. She said that if she
      were on a job when I arrived, her roommate Kelly would be there to
      let me in and keep me amused until Julie got home.

            But  when I got to the very luxurious apartment building, no
      one was home. It was my fault, since I was so excited I changed at
      the last minute to an earlier flight, hoping to lengthen our visit
      by a few hours. But it was not a real problem; I just settled down
      in the gorgeous lobby and finished the studying I needed to do for
      the next  week. Just as I  finished, a lovely girl  not much older
      than I came  over and introduced  herself as Kelly.  She fell  all
      over herself apologizing for  not being there when I  arrived - as
      if a  few  hours in  a  plush lobby  was  a hardship.  She  seemed
      genuinely upset about it, despite my  protests, but eventually she
      guided me to the elevator and to their palatial home.

            Kelly  was so lovely  that I felt  beside her I  looked like
      someone who lived in a  dumpster and ate at bus stations - or vice
      versa.  Her shoulder length blonde hair seemed to glow with health
      and  her deep  blue  eyes  sparkled with  a  need  to please.  Her
      perfectly made  up lips  had that  ripe  fullness French  starlets
      strive for but seldom attain.

            Kelly  was  no  taller  than  I,  just  5'2"  of  indecently
      voluptuous carnality.  Her  breasts were  magnificently  full  and
      rounded,  jutting  proudly with  no  trace of  sag  or flattening,
      despite  the  red  silk blouse  so  tight  and  clinging that  the
      puckering of her aureolae lent texture to the filmy material.



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            From her  mouthwatering  36C  bosom,  Kelly's  body  tapered
      sharply to a waist even smaller  than the 23" which hours of agony
      at the  health club gave me,  then flared almost lewdly  to 34" or
      35."  Her thighs, pressing against  her tight, short skirt, looked
      strong but not muscular, and did not quite meet when she stood. As
      I  followed  her to  the living  room,  the two  perfectly matched
      globes of her lovely ass jiggled so temptingly that I blushed when
      I realized my hand was moving toward them.

            I  hardly had  time to  shower and  change before  Julie was
      home.  She looked absolutely stunning  - like a  model, I thought,
      then felt foolish. She took a  quick shower and changed into jeans
      and  T-shirt, then in five minutes we were as comfortable together
      as we had  always been  before, and chatted  non-stop until  Kelly
      announced dinner.

            It was a fantastic meal, the  best I'd ever had in a private
      home,  and Julie  and  I continued  to  chatter throughout.  Kelly
      seemed quiet and a little nervous, but I thought it  was just that
      she felt a  little left out of our  reminiscences. I resolved that
      later I would make an  effort to include her more. All I  knew was
      that  she  was  also a  model,  at  the same  agency  Julie worked
      through, and I was especially  curious about her parents' reaction
      to that.

            After  dinner Julie and I sat in the living room while Kelly
      cleaned  up, looking  out over  the city  and chatting  more. It's
      amazing how  much there is to  tell after a five  year separation.
      Finally Kelly  joined us, first  refilling our wine  glasses, then
      standing  nervously before Julie with her head bowed and her hands
      clasped behind her.

            Julie  studied the younger girl for a few moments, then said
      flatly, "You weren't here when Megan arrived."

            "No,  Julie, I'm  very sorry,  I..." she  started, but  then
      stopped  when  Julie snapped  her fingers.  She was  taking short,
      shallow breaths and her voice trembled.

            "I didn't ask  for an explanation," Julie snapped. "I didn't
      ask anything. I merely stated a fact, didn't I?"




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            "Yes, Julie," Kelly said softly.

            "You failed in your duties," Julie added softly. "You were a
      bad girl today, Kelly, a very bad girl, weren't you?"

            "Y-yes... I  was a very bad  girl, and I'm very,  very, very
      sorry!" Kelly said  shrilly; she seemed on  the verge of tears.  I
      was  very confused, because not being there when I wasn't supposed
      to arrive didn't seem like any kind of failure at all to me.

            "I  suppose you  want  me to  forgive  you... again?"  Julie
      asked.

            Kelly  stood silent a moment, then tears began to run slowly
      down  her cheeks. She nodded, and said in a soft, trembling voice,
      "I'm  sorry I was bad, really! I  want to atone, so you'll forgive
      me and love me again. Please, may I?"

            Julie said nothing  for a  while, just sliding  down in  her
      chair and  stretching her  legs out in  front of  her. She  lolled
      comfortably, with her legs spread, her hands resting on her thighs
      and her head  back against  the cushion, and  watched her  weeping
      roommate intently.

            After a few minutes, she sighed and sat up. "Oh, all right,"
      she said.

            Kelly was ecstatic. "Oh,  thank you, thank you,  thank you,"
      she babbled.

            "Let's get on  with it," Julie said. "Megan  and I have lots
      more talking to do later."

            Kelly knelt  on the big hassock, then  leaned slowly forward
      until her hands were flat on the carpet. As she bent forward until
      her magnificent bottom  pointed toward the ceiling,  her short red
      skirt  rode up to reveal that her glorious ass was completely bare
      except for a  narrow ribbon of silk between her cheeks. Her bottom
      looked soft  and inviting, but  firm -  like two mounds  of French
      vanilla ice cream just at the melting point.





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            But  in   jarring  contrast   to   her  otherwise   complete
      perfection, Kelly's ass was not the uniform creaminess I expected:
      it was crisscrossed with very thin stripes ranging in color from a
      faint pink to bright red to deep purple. I puzzled  over this flaw
      a  moment, watching with interest as Julie untied and stripped off
      Kelly's damp red panties. Kelly slid her knees back to the edge of
      the hassock,  and from my position  I could see wisps  of pale fur
      framing the moist coral cleft of her pussy.

            My  sister  patted Carol's  bottom  lightly,  then her  hand
      disappeared between the blonde girl's quivering thighs. Although I
      couldn't  see exactly what  Julie was doing,  Carol's wanton gasps
      and  her almost  lewdly  wriggling ass  quickly  had my  own  twat
      pulsating wetly.

            After a minute  or so Julie withdrew  her hand, and  I could
      almost see  moist waves  of heat  rising  from Kelly's  invitingly
      spread and glistening cunt. When  I noticed Julie looking steadily
      at me and smiling knowingly, I realized with a start that my right
      hand  was under  my skirt,  firmly stroking  my soaked  panties. I
      jerked it away, blushing slightly.

            Julie  stood facing me as  she removed her  narrow belt from
      her  jeans, then  watched me  steadily as  she pushed  them slowly
      downward. She was  of course  wearing no panties  - she  abandoned
      them in high school - but I was startled to see that her  cunt was
      shaved almost bare, with only a  narrow fringe of curly red  hairs
      framing  her wetly gleaming furrow.  I couldn't tear  my gaze from
      the stiff pink clit protruding from her  swollen labia - it looked
      HUGE, and very sensitive - and when she saw my tongue running over
      my parched lips, she winked at me and imitated my action.

            Turning then to  Kelly, she  drew back the  arm holding  her
      doubled belt,  stood poised a moment,  then with a sudden  snap of
      her  wrist,  flicked  the  limber  leather  strap  across  Kelly's
      trembling bottom. Kelly  made a sound  between a moan and  a purr,
      and  for a  moment I  saw a  vivid red  stripe where the  belt had
      bitten her tender flesh. Then Julie began whipping her, slowly and
      lightly,  but steadily, until  Kelly's whole body  writhed in time
      with  the erotic squeals and  sobbing each new  lash evoked. Every
      new stripe on Kelly's blazing ass made me wish I were wielding the
      strap, and  each crack of the  belt was like a  huge dick stabbing



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      deep into  my roiling twat; after  the first few strokes  I peeled
      off my  sodden panties  and scooted  down in my  chair so  I could
      fondle my pussy  without losing sight  of the spectacle. In  a few
      seconds  an overwhelming  orgasm struck,  and I  was  only vaguely
      aware of Julie and Kelly!

            When  I returned  more  or less  to  normal, I  heard  Julie
      saying, "Don't you ever keep Megan waiting again, you lazy bitch!"

            "Oh, Meg," I said, a little alarmed by how blistered Kelly's
      bottom looked. "It wasn't her fault, I was early."

            Julie glared at me  and said harshly, "Megan, shut  the fuck
      up or you'll  be next! Kelly was  a bad girl, and she  wants to be
      punished  and forgiven." Turning  back to Kelly,  she said, "Don't
      you, Pretty Puss?"

            I shifted my eyes  from Julie's scowling look, and  saw that
      Kelly  was braced  rigidly  on  the  hassock,  and  her  cunt  was
      overflowing with the nectar of love. Impatiently, Kelly spread her
      thighs even wider and thrust her bottom toward Julie; then I could
      see  that  her thighs  were also  sticky  with her  juices. Almost
      inaudibly, she whispered, "Oh,  please, please, please forgive me,
      Mistress! I'll be very good from now on."

            With a chuckle, Julie  reached under the hassock and  pulled
      out  a curious device of  straps and plastic.  Swiftly she stepped
      into the harness and pulled it up like a pair  of panties, fitting
      one  thick curved  cylinder  into her  cunt.  In seconds  she  had
      tightened and  adjusted  the  straps,  and  a  huge  plastic  dick
      protruded from between her wet thighs.

            I had never seen any  kind of dildo before, and all  I could
      do was watch in fascination as  Julie moved behind Kelly, held her
      by the  hips, then with  a powerful thrust  of her hips,  sank her
      "dick"  into Kelly's  obviously  eager twat.  The  sight of  Julie
      skewering Kelly with the  same hard, thick rod that  was buried in
      her own cunt, ramming it more deeply and solidly into her than any
      real prick ever could, was so erotic that I leapt to my feet for a
      better view, even as I was furiously fingering myself. I seemed to
      come a  million times, each  a little stronger  as I  moved toward
      what would be the Krakatoa of orgasms.



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            For a minute or so Julie screwed Kelly fantastically. (There
      really is  no other word for  it; I've been fucked  too many times
      not  to  recognize a  great  one.)  Then,  without warning,  Julie
      quickly  rolled Kelly  onto  her back,  expertly manipulating  the
      blonde  girl's  legs to  keep her  impaled  through the  change in
      position.  Then,  locked mouth  to  mouth,  Julie's wild  plunging
      almost immediately made them  both come loud and long.  Even after
      they were both limp  with exhaustion and satisfaction, with  Kelly
      on her  back and my sister lying atop her, their hips continued to
      move rhythmically, their fucking continued long after I had melted
      onto the carpet beside  them. Later that night,  Julie came to  my
      room and  made passionate tender  love to  me, with her  mouth and
      fingers  and soul, giving me orgasms in greater number and greater
      intensity than  I'd dreamed possible.  Even before she  spread her
      thighs and welcomed my  clumsy tongue to her sanctum  sanctorum, I
      understood  why Kelly  loved her  so. I  hoped someday  that Julie
      would care  for me enough  to correct  my misbehaviors, to  let me
      atone for my mistakes, to forgive me as she had Kelly.

            Before I returned to  school two days later, with  my bottom
      burning  and wearing a belt identical to Julie's, all those wishes
      were granted, and more besides.

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