I'm
enjoying figuring out ASSTR's formatting issues. If you read this story and
there is no line wrap, or my commas (,), apostrophes (') or ellipsis (...) are
missing, this may or may not be my fault, but I truly intended them to be
there. Pretend they are. Humor me... Anyway I’m reformatting to html, maybe
that will help.
This is
a work of erotic fiction. If you may not, should not, or do not want to read
this, then please do not.
Note.
This is an outline of a story that came to me last night. Over the next few
days or weeks, I'll add to it and flesh it out and see what happens. Let me
know if you like it or not. [email protected]
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Title: Nocturnal Erethism
er·e·thism (r-thzm)
n.
Abnormal irritability or sensitivity of an organ or a body part to stimulation.
[French éréthisme, from Greek erethisma, a provocation, from erethizein, to irritate.]
ere·thismic
(-mk)
adj.
Background.
Our
protagonist is a young woman, in her mid to late 20's, living alone in an
apartment. She is heterosexual, has a boyfriend that lives in the same city,
and works as a professional (software engineer?). She is around 5'4",
weight proportionate, short blonde hair, pretty without being obnoxious - girl
next office type. She will develop this problem of orgasming whenever she wakes
up, even from a nap. At first they are mild and she accepts it, but slowly gets
worried. By the end, she is totally freaked out, has had sex with numerous
people, and might possibly be losing her ability to control her sexuality. She
will however, maintain a complete grasp and awareness of what is happening. She
won't become mindless.
...
Beth
awoke with a glorious shiver. Her arms stretched and she felt her pussy
clenching on nothing. She opened her eyes and looked around the sunny room,
thinking "What a nice way to start the day!" Her hand slipped down
and massaged her clit, slipping easily in her moist slit. She frowned slightly
in intensity, and another small orgasm washed over her.
"I've
got to start the day like this more often," Beth thought to herself as she
reluctantly got up and headed for the shower. The hot water washed away the
evidence and she soaped and rinsed herself diligently. She could recall no
dreams, which was unusual. Coffee dripped through the basket of grounds and
prepared itself to be drunk. Toast popped up as Beth answered the phone. Her
boyfriend Dan. LUNCH! That's right. "Dan, I was just thinking about you.
I, uh, had a dream... You were wonderful... Yes I did. I am NOT a naughty girl!
It was just because I missed you so much... Yes, Noon. At the cafe. Love you!
Bye..." Beth hung up with a satisfied smile...
...
We will
rejoin Beth tonight as she readies for bed. She'll think back on the day, her
lunch with Dan, how he tried to "get some" under the table at lunch.
<fade
to sleep>
Beth
snaps awake in the throes of an intense orgasm. Descriptions again of the
feelings, with an undertone of whatinhellisgoingon? With the fading orgasm,
Beth thinks about the previous morning, and how great it had been, but now
she's wondering why again? Brief description of morning routine. No additional
playing with herself. At work, Beth emails Sue, her friend and tells her twice
in a row she's awoke in orgasm, has she ever heard of such a thing? At home tonight,
Beth has gotten herself jittery like a hypochondriac. She doesn't want to go to
sleep but...
<fade
to sleep>
Unsurprisingly,
Beth snaps awake in throes of another intense orgasm. Descriptions intermingle
with fear of what is happening. Beth knows now something is going on, and knows
it isn't normal. Her morning will be spent imagining that people she encounters
know something is wrong. She spots that geeky guy in support eyeing her chest.
She is very tired from last night because she went to bed late. She decides to
have lunch at her desk and inadvertently drifts off...
<fade
to sleep>
Beth
snaps awake at her desk in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She knows she is
at work and that she drifted off, and she struggles to be quiet, but not with
100% success. One other female programmer in a nearby office caught on, and she
got some odd looks from two men later on. At home that night, Beth is panicked.
She tries to get through to her doctor, but he is away and another doctor is
covering his calls. She is too embarrassed to see a stranger, so she doesn't
make the appointment. She is now actively afraid to fall asleep and lasts until
Jay Leno's monologue...
<fade
to sleep>
Beth
snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. The orgasms have been getting
better and stronger each morning. She isn't able to resist fingering herself
this time even though she is frightened. Perhaps she uses the bedside phone to
masturbate with. (Sue or that female programmer will visit later in day(?) and
smell the vaginal juices on it).She goes to work in a daze. She can't
concentrate. The female programmer from the day before notices something is
wrong and tries to help her. Beth won't say what the problem is, but um,
Cheryl, assumes its a boy problem. They have lunch and take an early day.
Cheryl is of course, interested, and Beth has no idea. Somehow they wind up at
Beth's apartment, and sit on the sofa eating Ben & Jerry’s and talking.
Beth falls asleep. Cheryl pokes around, make a call from the bedroom (told yah
so) and hangs back on the sofa with Beth. Cheryl is unable to resist the
sleeping form and stroke Beth's hair, gets more adventurous and more or less
molests the sleeping Beth. While Cheryl is rubbing Beth's pussy through
clothing...Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She is
utterly unaware of her surroundings, only the burning desire in her groin. She
pushes her pussy against the intruder and just enjoys the hell out of herself.
She gradually realizes she is not in bed and not alone, and that this girl has
her hand in Beth's pants. She is still intensely aroused and when Cheryl (who
of course assumes Beth has wanted her all along) begins to make out with her
she gives in and the session turns into a wakeful lovemaking session. Later,
Beth explains, Cheryl feels guilty (but not THAT guilty) and they fall asleep
in each other's arms. Beth (well, you know) and they renew their lovemaking.
Detailed descriptions of their breakfast, showering, dressing... Beth is
convinced to see the doctor and she makes the appointment. Calls in sick, but
Cheryl leaves for work. Borrows a new blouse from Beth. Beth potters around the
house until her appointment. She arrives and sees the doc. She has difficulty
explaining, but finally gets it all out. The doc might make an inappropriate
comment about why does she want this condition fixed? Some testing is arranged,
nurse takes intimate samples (juices, etc).Beth gets some envious looks from
nurse as she leaves. At home that night...Dan comes over and wines and dines
Beth. They sit, talking, if we haven't already clued in Dan, this is the time
to tell him some of what is happening. He is concerned, but also turned on. He
stays the night and they make love.
<fade
to sleep>
Beth
snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. She finds Dan positioned
between her legs and as she climaxes, he enters her and they continue for some
time. He later tells her that she had never been so hot as this time. He can't
get enough. They breakfast, shower together (hey, she doesn't like to shower
alone?) and dress. As they leave, he takes her again and she goes to work with
his evidence soaking into her panties. She has an awkward moment in the hall
with Cheryl, Beth isn't to sure how she feels about the other day, and has a
boyfriend, after all. Cheryl wants to be with her again. They have lunch, and
Cheryl takes advantage, finding of course, an overly moist vagina. Cheryl may
consider a threesome? Perhaps after lunch they have a quickie, but that might
be out of character for Beth. Beth gets a call in the afternoon, asking her to
come to the doctors office for further testing. She does, and she is given a
sedative... Beth snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. The doctor
and nurse look on, mystified. No one knows what is happening, but the
preliminary results may be in tomorrow. At home that night...Dan is over again.
Possibly Cheryl shows up unexpectedly. Either way, well this is a sex story.
They make love and fall asleep, but Beth gets to tell Dan she felt violated this
morning when he took advantage of her. He promises to be good...
<fade
to sleep>
Beth
snaps awake... Dan was good, but in his sleep his hand had rested on her pussy.
She attacks him and masturbates furiously with his arm. She stays home today to
wait for the doctor's call. The call... She has an erethism. An abnormal
irritability or sensitivity ofan organ or a body part to stimulation. In this
cage, her clitoris. No, the doctor isn't sure why. Perhaps an allergy. Not sure
what to, but she should purchase some new clothing and change detergents, etc.
She should avoid the foods in the house, blah blah and sleep without clothes or
blankets tonight. This whole area needs to be thought out and internally
consistent, but with that unknown, why is her body reacting this way? Beth
takes the night off from sex. Well, maybe a little self help, we'll see.
<fade
to sleep, nude and hungry>
Beth
snaps awake in the throes of an incredible orgasm. Sleeping nude didn't help,
and if anything, this was the strongest yet. Cheryl arrives, concerned because
Beth had been out the previous day. Naturally, she tries to, and we'll probably
let her succeed, seduce Beth again. Beth will probably windup bisexual at
least.
<fade
to sleep>
Erie
little paragraph where a neighbor, male, is fading off to sleep, laughing and
evil laugh.
We
leave the reader wondering if Beth will find a cure, or will she simply take to
napping more often(!). Also, who was that seedy character just at the end?
Could he be the cause of Beth's troubles? Perhaps he just has unusually good
hearing. Perhaps he is a chemist and seeded Beth's underwear with an allergenic
to cause the erethism? Perhaps he will get to have Beth once or more, by being
there when she wakes up. Perhaps upon waking she develops an inability to
resist? Will that nurse pursue Beth? Or will she try to get
"infected". Perhaps Beth is contagious and infects Cheryl. My God, what
if it spreads and the whole world catches this condition? Well, probably not...